Comments received on poems by Rocky Lagou
Wild Winds - Forever Wayward
Paul Bell said:
Only the wild are truly free whilst the sun shines and the moon sings.
Have a great break, Rocky.
June 7th, 2022 11:09
Paul Bell said:
Only the wild are truly free whilst the sun shines and the moon sings.
Have a great break, Rocky.
June 7th, 2022 11:09
Wild Winds - Forever Wayward
Vamsi Sudha said:
Rocky come back soon....we all are waiting for you. Great write.
June 7th, 2022 00:53
Vamsi Sudha said:
Rocky come back soon....we all are waiting for you. Great write.
June 7th, 2022 00:53
Wild Winds - Forever Wayward
tallisman said:
Good stuff Rocky! Looking forward to your return!
June 7th, 2022 00:40
tallisman said:
Good stuff Rocky! Looking forward to your return!
June 7th, 2022 00:40
Wild Winds - Forever Wayward
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words Rocky, I am sure that you will be back with more wonderful words on your return.
Andy
June 6th, 2022 23:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words Rocky, I am sure that you will be back with more wonderful words on your return.
Andy
June 6th, 2022 23:47
Wild Winds - Forever Wayward
dean langmuir said:
Enjoy your hiatus Rocky.Poet on.
June 6th, 2022 18:09
dean langmuir said:
Enjoy your hiatus Rocky.Poet on.
June 6th, 2022 18:09
Snakeskin
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful montage of ideas, words and images. Your last line is what gives it total meaning and ties it all together. Very well done.
June 3rd, 2022 21:00
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful montage of ideas, words and images. Your last line is what gives it total meaning and ties it all together. Very well done.
June 3rd, 2022 21:00
Snakeskin
RL Randall said:
I enjoyed this poem, particularly it\'s ending. A very good Write!
June 3rd, 2022 19:36
RL Randall said:
I enjoyed this poem, particularly it\'s ending. A very good Write!
June 3rd, 2022 19:36
Snakeskin
a thousand wishes said:
Beautiful imagery and I love how you test your own limit, with every poem you write, it gets better and better, Never stop
June 3rd, 2022 14:33
a thousand wishes said:
Beautiful imagery and I love how you test your own limit, with every poem you write, it gets better and better, Never stop
June 3rd, 2022 14:33
Snakeskin
morange said:
You are so good at metaphors/similes! That last line is like a kick in the gut, but in a good way. Really beautiful and evocative.
June 3rd, 2022 13:12
morange said:
You are so good at metaphors/similes! That last line is like a kick in the gut, but in a good way. Really beautiful and evocative.
June 3rd, 2022 13:12
Lightning Amidst Clear Skies
SureshG said:
I find that what flows freely exposes the inner self. Yet you have managed to still give us food for thought
June 3rd, 2022 09:18
SureshG said:
I find that what flows freely exposes the inner self. Yet you have managed to still give us food for thought
June 3rd, 2022 09:18
Lightning Amidst Clear Skies
Neville said:
it would seem that enlightenment has occurred my friend .. each day I recite my Dokun which contains more than just a few of the points you have raised here ......... Neville
June 3rd, 2022 01:54
Neville said:
it would seem that enlightenment has occurred my friend .. each day I recite my Dokun which contains more than just a few of the points you have raised here ......... Neville
June 3rd, 2022 01:54
Lightning Amidst Clear Skies
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Rocky, the only people to trust are yourself and your true loves.
Andy
June 3rd, 2022 00:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Rocky, the only people to trust are yourself and your true loves.
Andy
June 3rd, 2022 00:47
Lightning Amidst Clear Skies
a thousand wishes said:
You are an astonishing poet. and you are completely right about how our views of the world change as we get older. But I think the best thing to do is just to realize that the world isn\'t completely rotten, not yet. It might be a bit crude but maybe just maybe we can cut around the rotten parts? To get to the untouched center, and rebuild from there
June 2nd, 2022 16:41
a thousand wishes said:
You are an astonishing poet. and you are completely right about how our views of the world change as we get older. But I think the best thing to do is just to realize that the world isn\'t completely rotten, not yet. It might be a bit crude but maybe just maybe we can cut around the rotten parts? To get to the untouched center, and rebuild from there
June 2nd, 2022 16:41
Lightning Amidst Clear Skies
dusk arising said:
Goodness, evil, indifference? It\'s all there if you look for it and then whilst looking you\'ll find a contradiction because nothing is easy.
Me,I\'m a great believer in weeds. Weeds are supposed to be undesireable yet wherever neglect is rife a weed appears. So what are weeds - good? evil? indifferent? None of those... weeds is weeds.
P.S. If i don\'t feel like writing it\'s generally because I\'ve nothing to say. I can look at the stuff I forced and see it lacking in something, even if it found healthy acclaim, it still lacks something in my own eyes.
June 2nd, 2022 16:15
dusk arising said:
Goodness, evil, indifference? It\'s all there if you look for it and then whilst looking you\'ll find a contradiction because nothing is easy.
Me,I\'m a great believer in weeds. Weeds are supposed to be undesireable yet wherever neglect is rife a weed appears. So what are weeds - good? evil? indifferent? None of those... weeds is weeds.
P.S. If i don\'t feel like writing it\'s generally because I\'ve nothing to say. I can look at the stuff I forced and see it lacking in something, even if it found healthy acclaim, it still lacks something in my own eyes.
June 2nd, 2022 16:15
Lightning Amidst Clear Skies
Paul Bell said:
Definitely, finding positivity in the real world is hard going. They\'re fighting over \'\'THE END IS NIGH placards in Britain.
June 2nd, 2022 15:56
Paul Bell said:
Definitely, finding positivity in the real world is hard going. They\'re fighting over \'\'THE END IS NIGH placards in Britain.
June 2nd, 2022 15:56
Lightning Amidst Clear Skies
tallisman said:
It’s good Rocky! Creativity is not easy!. Good write, thanks!
June 2nd, 2022 10:50
tallisman said:
It’s good Rocky! Creativity is not easy!. Good write, thanks!
June 2nd, 2022 10:50
Lightning Amidst Clear Skies
Saxon Crow said:
It happens sometimes Rocky. But clearly you persevered and created a very good and well grounded poem. Keep it up!
June 2nd, 2022 10:41
Saxon Crow said:
It happens sometimes Rocky. But clearly you persevered and created a very good and well grounded poem. Keep it up!
June 2nd, 2022 10:41
To the Blonde Boy at Church Whom I know I have no Chance with
dean langmuir said:
I can so relate to this one to,I came out 20years ago at a much older age than you,and still get the feelings you have shared here,I am so happy for your self acceptance and that you are sharing,it is brave,enjoy Pride month.and definitely poet on.
June 2nd, 2022 10:06
dean langmuir said:
I can so relate to this one to,I came out 20years ago at a much older age than you,and still get the feelings you have shared here,I am so happy for your self acceptance and that you are sharing,it is brave,enjoy Pride month.and definitely poet on.
June 2nd, 2022 10:06
To the Blonde Boy at Church Whom I know I have no Chance with
morange said:
Comparing slicked back hair to a pencil eraser is so evocative and accurate. Love this whole poem and definitely takes me back to church camp and first loves!
June 2nd, 2022 10:05
morange said:
Comparing slicked back hair to a pencil eraser is so evocative and accurate. Love this whole poem and definitely takes me back to church camp and first loves!
June 2nd, 2022 10:05
Lightning Amidst Clear Skies
dean langmuir said:
Hello Rocky,I can totally relate to this one,I have always been a ponderer and it is so easy to be cynical if we\'re not mindful that there is alot of goodness beneath or on top of our shoulders too.
June 2nd, 2022 09:40
dean langmuir said:
Hello Rocky,I can totally relate to this one,I have always been a ponderer and it is so easy to be cynical if we\'re not mindful that there is alot of goodness beneath or on top of our shoulders too.
June 2nd, 2022 09:40
Lightning Amidst Clear Skies
arqios said:
Crumpling is part of the process. Happens to the best of us. I’ve had to learn to relish crumpling with a flourish. Thanks for sharing.
June 2nd, 2022 09:26
arqios said:
Crumpling is part of the process. Happens to the best of us. I’ve had to learn to relish crumpling with a flourish. Thanks for sharing.
June 2nd, 2022 09:26
Her Hair, Her Haven, Her Heaven
tallisman said:
Hi Rocky, loved this poem, your talent shines through clearly. Brill!
June 2nd, 2022 01:13
tallisman said:
Hi Rocky, loved this poem, your talent shines through clearly. Brill!
June 2nd, 2022 01:13
Her Hair, Her Haven, Her Heaven
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Rocky, Hair is surely a symbolism of pride. No wonder great seers on the path of philosophy get their head tonsured to come out the first physical pride element. Hair on the top of the head, and first thing to get the pride out our head. Wonderful metaphor and intricately expressed. Thanks !!
June 1st, 2022 21:37
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Rocky, Hair is surely a symbolism of pride. No wonder great seers on the path of philosophy get their head tonsured to come out the first physical pride element. Hair on the top of the head, and first thing to get the pride out our head. Wonderful metaphor and intricately expressed. Thanks !!
June 1st, 2022 21:37
Her Hair, Her Haven, Her Heaven
Bella Shepard said:
Dear Rocky, the visualization in this poem is breathtaking. As I read each line I can feel those tresses wrap around me, comforting and loving. Her beauty encompasses all of us. And to those who can\'t or refuse to see it, it is sadly their loss. A beautiful tribute my friend, \"Happy Pride Month\".
June 1st, 2022 10:45
Bella Shepard said:
Dear Rocky, the visualization in this poem is breathtaking. As I read each line I can feel those tresses wrap around me, comforting and loving. Her beauty encompasses all of us. And to those who can\'t or refuse to see it, it is sadly their loss. A beautiful tribute my friend, \"Happy Pride Month\".
June 1st, 2022 10:45
Readdressing Rarities
orchidee said:
Good write Rocky.
I was gonna try all these, but number 4 happened first. Doh!
How come I am still commenting then? Must be like some churches, a \'bit dead\', whatever that means.
They dead or not? What\'s this \'bit\'?! lol.
And - cooeeee! You not gone? Was ya going somewhere, as from 30/05 (UK date), or 05/30 (US date)?
May 31st, 2022 13:02
orchidee said:
Good write Rocky.
I was gonna try all these, but number 4 happened first. Doh!
How come I am still commenting then? Must be like some churches, a \'bit dead\', whatever that means.
They dead or not? What\'s this \'bit\'?! lol.
And - cooeeee! You not gone? Was ya going somewhere, as from 30/05 (UK date), or 05/30 (US date)?
May 31st, 2022 13:02
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