Comments received on poems by Rocky Lagou
Nightfall
Garth Rakumakoe said:
\"Boundless waters stretched their limbs as if braced for a sacrifice\" - Your words are vivid pictures my friend. - Better yet, pictures strive to clearly depict what you say in words. - Also, there\'s so much depth of meaning about the self, praying for paradise, before reaching the edge. A picture of the inward out, painted in words. It speaks! - Well penned, gifted one!
September 9th, 2022 03:56
Garth Rakumakoe said:
\"Boundless waters stretched their limbs as if braced for a sacrifice\" - Your words are vivid pictures my friend. - Better yet, pictures strive to clearly depict what you say in words. - Also, there\'s so much depth of meaning about the self, praying for paradise, before reaching the edge. A picture of the inward out, painted in words. It speaks! - Well penned, gifted one!
September 9th, 2022 03:56
Nightfall
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow night scenery portrayed and painted in masterpiece quality rhyming word choice and imagery! Kudos for this awesome poem!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
September 8th, 2022 14:25
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow night scenery portrayed and painted in masterpiece quality rhyming word choice and imagery! Kudos for this awesome poem!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
September 8th, 2022 14:25
Nightfall
spilleronsheet said:
Nature kept me in a marvel…and your words justified that beauty..what a beautiful canvas you painted with the qwerty keypad in your hand dear Rocky…well penned dear my friend…
September 8th, 2022 12:36
spilleronsheet said:
Nature kept me in a marvel…and your words justified that beauty..what a beautiful canvas you painted with the qwerty keypad in your hand dear Rocky…well penned dear my friend…
September 8th, 2022 12:36
Nightfall
orchidee said:
Good write Rocky.
Erm, I tried to write a poem about a journey into my mind - a huge, cavernous blank! heehee.
September 8th, 2022 10:32
orchidee said:
Good write Rocky.
Erm, I tried to write a poem about a journey into my mind - a huge, cavernous blank! heehee.
September 8th, 2022 10:32
Bitter Beddy-Byes
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that those dark moments will go away and the light that is in your life will flare up again Rocky.
Andy
August 26th, 2022 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that those dark moments will go away and the light that is in your life will flare up again Rocky.
Andy
August 26th, 2022 01:10
Solstice and The Christ
dean langmuir said:
Welcome back Rocky,good little write,keep enjoying your summer and poem on
August 18th, 2022 11:49
dean langmuir said:
Welcome back Rocky,good little write,keep enjoying your summer and poem on
August 18th, 2022 11:49
Solstice and The Christ
Paul Bell said:
Summer sure was hot in Britain.
Mary riding on the donkey is pretty relevant in Britain. Our country is run by three donkeys at the moment.
Glad you had a good summer.
August 18th, 2022 11:25
Paul Bell said:
Summer sure was hot in Britain.
Mary riding on the donkey is pretty relevant in Britain. Our country is run by three donkeys at the moment.
Glad you had a good summer.
August 18th, 2022 11:25
Wild Winds - Forever Wayward
Paul Bell said:
Only the wild are truly free whilst the sun shines and the moon sings.
Have a great break, Rocky.
June 7th, 2022 11:09
Paul Bell said:
Only the wild are truly free whilst the sun shines and the moon sings.
Have a great break, Rocky.
June 7th, 2022 11:09
Wild Winds - Forever Wayward
Vamsi Sudha said:
Rocky come back soon....we all are waiting for you. Great write.
June 7th, 2022 00:53
Vamsi Sudha said:
Rocky come back soon....we all are waiting for you. Great write.
June 7th, 2022 00:53
Wild Winds - Forever Wayward
tallisman said:
Good stuff Rocky! Looking forward to your return!
June 7th, 2022 00:40
tallisman said:
Good stuff Rocky! Looking forward to your return!
June 7th, 2022 00:40
Wild Winds - Forever Wayward
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words Rocky, I am sure that you will be back with more wonderful words on your return.
Andy
June 6th, 2022 23:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words Rocky, I am sure that you will be back with more wonderful words on your return.
Andy
June 6th, 2022 23:47
Wild Winds - Forever Wayward
dean langmuir said:
Enjoy your hiatus Rocky.Poet on.
June 6th, 2022 18:09
dean langmuir said:
Enjoy your hiatus Rocky.Poet on.
June 6th, 2022 18:09
Snakeskin
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful montage of ideas, words and images. Your last line is what gives it total meaning and ties it all together. Very well done.
June 3rd, 2022 21:00
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful montage of ideas, words and images. Your last line is what gives it total meaning and ties it all together. Very well done.
June 3rd, 2022 21:00
Snakeskin
RL Randall said:
I enjoyed this poem, particularly it\'s ending. A very good Write!
June 3rd, 2022 19:36
RL Randall said:
I enjoyed this poem, particularly it\'s ending. A very good Write!
June 3rd, 2022 19:36
Snakeskin
a thousand wishes said:
Beautiful imagery and I love how you test your own limit, with every poem you write, it gets better and better, Never stop
June 3rd, 2022 14:33
a thousand wishes said:
Beautiful imagery and I love how you test your own limit, with every poem you write, it gets better and better, Never stop
June 3rd, 2022 14:33
Snakeskin
morange said:
You are so good at metaphors/similes! That last line is like a kick in the gut, but in a good way. Really beautiful and evocative.
June 3rd, 2022 13:12
morange said:
You are so good at metaphors/similes! That last line is like a kick in the gut, but in a good way. Really beautiful and evocative.
June 3rd, 2022 13:12
Lightning Amidst Clear Skies
SureshG said:
I find that what flows freely exposes the inner self. Yet you have managed to still give us food for thought
June 3rd, 2022 09:18
SureshG said:
I find that what flows freely exposes the inner self. Yet you have managed to still give us food for thought
June 3rd, 2022 09:18
Lightning Amidst Clear Skies
Neville said:
it would seem that enlightenment has occurred my friend .. each day I recite my Dokun which contains more than just a few of the points you have raised here ......... Neville
June 3rd, 2022 01:54
Neville said:
it would seem that enlightenment has occurred my friend .. each day I recite my Dokun which contains more than just a few of the points you have raised here ......... Neville
June 3rd, 2022 01:54
Lightning Amidst Clear Skies
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Rocky, the only people to trust are yourself and your true loves.
Andy
June 3rd, 2022 00:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Rocky, the only people to trust are yourself and your true loves.
Andy
June 3rd, 2022 00:47
Lightning Amidst Clear Skies
a thousand wishes said:
You are an astonishing poet. and you are completely right about how our views of the world change as we get older. But I think the best thing to do is just to realize that the world isn\'t completely rotten, not yet. It might be a bit crude but maybe just maybe we can cut around the rotten parts? To get to the untouched center, and rebuild from there
June 2nd, 2022 16:41
a thousand wishes said:
You are an astonishing poet. and you are completely right about how our views of the world change as we get older. But I think the best thing to do is just to realize that the world isn\'t completely rotten, not yet. It might be a bit crude but maybe just maybe we can cut around the rotten parts? To get to the untouched center, and rebuild from there
June 2nd, 2022 16:41
Lightning Amidst Clear Skies
dusk arising said:
Goodness, evil, indifference? It\'s all there if you look for it and then whilst looking you\'ll find a contradiction because nothing is easy.
Me,I\'m a great believer in weeds. Weeds are supposed to be undesireable yet wherever neglect is rife a weed appears. So what are weeds - good? evil? indifferent? None of those... weeds is weeds.
P.S. If i don\'t feel like writing it\'s generally because I\'ve nothing to say. I can look at the stuff I forced and see it lacking in something, even if it found healthy acclaim, it still lacks something in my own eyes.
June 2nd, 2022 16:15
dusk arising said:
Goodness, evil, indifference? It\'s all there if you look for it and then whilst looking you\'ll find a contradiction because nothing is easy.
Me,I\'m a great believer in weeds. Weeds are supposed to be undesireable yet wherever neglect is rife a weed appears. So what are weeds - good? evil? indifferent? None of those... weeds is weeds.
P.S. If i don\'t feel like writing it\'s generally because I\'ve nothing to say. I can look at the stuff I forced and see it lacking in something, even if it found healthy acclaim, it still lacks something in my own eyes.
June 2nd, 2022 16:15
Lightning Amidst Clear Skies
Paul Bell said:
Definitely, finding positivity in the real world is hard going. They\'re fighting over \'\'THE END IS NIGH placards in Britain.
June 2nd, 2022 15:56
Paul Bell said:
Definitely, finding positivity in the real world is hard going. They\'re fighting over \'\'THE END IS NIGH placards in Britain.
June 2nd, 2022 15:56
Lightning Amidst Clear Skies
tallisman said:
It’s good Rocky! Creativity is not easy!. Good write, thanks!
June 2nd, 2022 10:50
tallisman said:
It’s good Rocky! Creativity is not easy!. Good write, thanks!
June 2nd, 2022 10:50
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