Comments received on poems by Rocky Lagou



Ballad of the Wilting Daisies
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

I think my poems are more like freestyle .. I don’t follow a certain style nor do I often rhyme , much

May 10th, 2022 08:49

Ballad of the Wilting Daisies
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Feel sorry for the daisies .. they sound sad ((

May 10th, 2022 08:46

Ballad of the Wilting Daisies
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

I like your writing .. nicely expressed ))
and that you were inspired by Emily Dickenson

I once had someone on another poetry site say one of my poems was a bit like how she writes .. not sure why

May 10th, 2022 08:43

Ballad of the Wilting Daisies
orchidee said:

Good write Rocky.
As I say, my poems are not strictly in metre. I don\'t look into accents on certain syllables, etc. So I call it \'fomat\' instead of \'metre\' now.

May 10th, 2022 08:41

The Sun Exploded Today
spilleronsheet said:

This was absolutely mind boggling dear Rocky….a beautiful perspective and a lovely write….I could feel the sun speaking with insight….very intriguing and thought provoking…,really enjoyed

May 7th, 2022 03:06

Just A Little Poetic Thought
arqios said:

Mayhap you will be doing what you have been doing here, and so much more!

May 7th, 2022 02:13

Strawberrying
arqios said:

Oh my, the sudden but subtle twist: \"a corpse upon your plate...\" is quite much to contemplate!

May 7th, 2022 02:11

The Sun Exploded Today
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words Rocky, mankind will find what it wants eventually.

Andy

May 7th, 2022 01:00

The Sun Exploded Today
Rozina said:

Fantastic read! I read a novel where part of the world was in total darkness (no sun at all) and the other part was always bright (24 hours sun). Mayhem, wars.....

May 6th, 2022 22:25

The Sun Exploded Today
Distant View said:

Sombre thoughts, but we live in uncertain times. There are many things to be concerned or worried about right now, but some of those things we can do nothing about. If the sun does eventually explode we are doomed, and we can do nothing about it. All we can do is try to be kind to our planet, and kind to each other, and hope for the best! As for life after death - I hope there is, but only time will tell! A thought-provoking write... as my comment will testify to!

May 6th, 2022 11:12

The Sun Exploded Today
Christina8 said:

You said it! \"All the things mankind has been searching for, Isn\'t in this world\" Your poetry is so full of metaphors and is quite beautiful but I go back to the last line I quoted because some people worship their things and some people money.....it\'s beyond the beyond. When we are gone we will know the true meaning of life. Great one again, Rocky!!

May 6th, 2022 08:57

Wellness Way
Paul Bell said:

Belittlement must surely start in primary school, and definitely continues in senior school.
Sadly, some people get a kick out of it, and you usually find they lack self-esteem too.

May 2nd, 2022 12:22

Wellness Way
Neville said:



.. a cerebral post .. enjoyed sir by me
and very much so ..


May 2nd, 2022 09:40

Wellness Way
tallisman said:

Well done!

May 2nd, 2022 01:10

Wellness Way
LMTobin said:

The similes here are really good--the cross around the sinful neck is powerful to me (a Christian).
I can\'t speak as strongly to the others but I do get the references
Well done!

April 30th, 2022 20:50

Wellness Way
Goldfinch60 said:

That last line is so very true in many ways Rocky. Good words.


Andy

April 30th, 2022 01:10

Wellness Way
spilleronsheet said:

Truly a gem crafted….so elusive are the thoughts but so easily delivered by you…the way you captured all in one and those last lines, thought provoking and so sharp….enough to boggle the minds….well penned dear Rocky

April 29th, 2022 23:45

Wellness Way
Accidental Poet said:

A Masterful write Rocky. A complete Gem, but the two lines that really pulled on me most were the last two. Top Shelf Work Rocky. 😉

April 29th, 2022 20:08

Wellness Way
Rozina said:

Resonating loud and clear. Powerful lines to remind us that everyone of us is worthy. We are all tiny cogs together.

April 29th, 2022 17:51

Wellness Way
orchidee said:

Good write Rocky.

April 29th, 2022 14:24

Wellness Way
Chesterfield said:

I really like the last 4 lines.

April 29th, 2022 14:05

Strawberrying
M. Evermore said:

This was amazing. I loved the metaphor. Such a stark difference between such an innocent act and the dark one. I really enjoyed reading this.

April 29th, 2022 13:14

Wellness Way
Saxon Crow said:

A really first rate poem here. And a genuine favourite I shall read again.

April 29th, 2022 12:55

Wellness Way
Vamsi Sudha said:

Freedom of though, well expressed..
The last line ..is the hallmark of your poem..
For the eye beholds truth – while the tongue spits lies.
Wonderful work and arouses lots of thoughts.....Thanks Rocky..

April 29th, 2022 11:57

Wellness Way
dusk arising said:

A great celebration of strength of our innate spiritual awareness that we, each individual, are a part of the nature of things with as much right to be here as the stars and the trees. Each having the right to be as individual as we are and find our own spiritual path rather than be disappointed and abused by the narrowmindedness of the hypocritical established traditions.
Uplifting and encouraging.

April 29th, 2022 11:14

Wellness Way
Michael Edwards said:

This one really stands out - a beautiful write couched in wonderful language.

April 29th, 2022 11:12

Wellness Way
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Very good poem .. love your mention of the petals and the meadow

Nobody has the right to make us feel small and less than .. we all have the right to feel worthy and loved

Nicely expressed words

April 29th, 2022 11:05

Wellness Way
Crowns4Christ said:

Nice job, once again, dear talented Rocky, and showing that regardless of your beliefs,you are just as valuable and important as everyone else,we were all made in God\'s image, regardless of our religion or lack of,

April 29th, 2022 10:45

Strawberrying
spilleronsheet said:

I am bewildered by your witty ways dear Rocky….so clever dear friend…strawberries are my favourite but the way you linked it…I am truly amazed…..maybe now strawberries can have so many underlining meanings…the insane and killer intent….

April 29th, 2022 03:55

Strawberrying
Goldfinch60 said:

Good intriguing words Rocky.

Andy

April 29th, 2022 01:29

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