Comments received on poems by Rocky Lagou
They Say if You Jump High Enough, You Can Touch the Sky – So I Tried
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
You ever wonder what one means by \"touch the sky?\" If the sky is above us then how far? How high must one get until they reach what is considered sky? Perhaps we are all in the sky right now. But jumping off of two chairs and a dining table is a decent way of reaching it in a different sense :)
May 19th, 2022 11:20
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
You ever wonder what one means by \"touch the sky?\" If the sky is above us then how far? How high must one get until they reach what is considered sky? Perhaps we are all in the sky right now. But jumping off of two chairs and a dining table is a decent way of reaching it in a different sense :)
May 19th, 2022 11:20
They Say if You Jump High Enough, You Can Touch the Sky – So I Tried
orchidee said:
Good write R.
You trying to be \'The Birdman\' as I tried to be?
I was OK until I jumped off a ccllliiiifffffff!!! Notice the good acting there? lol.
May 19th, 2022 10:35
orchidee said:
Good write R.
You trying to be \'The Birdman\' as I tried to be?
I was OK until I jumped off a ccllliiiifffffff!!! Notice the good acting there? lol.
May 19th, 2022 10:35
A Dreamer\'s Wildfire
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Rocky !! I see you are going on a Rocky time. Life is a flame test. We burn and burn to become strong. Every Metal has to go through compressions, Tensions , and flame tests to prove its worth.
When Metal is tested, similarly we are too tested to get our Mettle. No one can make you weaker, without your Consent. So leave everything, let the positive breeze , breeze through and see how your real worth is exhibited. Till then take the flame tests to get stronger in life..... Great Insightful Write
May 19th, 2022 04:16
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Rocky !! I see you are going on a Rocky time. Life is a flame test. We burn and burn to become strong. Every Metal has to go through compressions, Tensions , and flame tests to prove its worth.
When Metal is tested, similarly we are too tested to get our Mettle. No one can make you weaker, without your Consent. So leave everything, let the positive breeze , breeze through and see how your real worth is exhibited. Till then take the flame tests to get stronger in life..... Great Insightful Write
May 19th, 2022 04:16
You Do Not Do, Not Do
Goldfinch60 said:
What Knot should I not have in this wonderful lot of not knots. LOL
Andy
May 19th, 2022 01:34
Goldfinch60 said:
What Knot should I not have in this wonderful lot of not knots. LOL
Andy
May 19th, 2022 01:34
You Do Not Do, Not Do
Rozina said:
It\'s very catching! You\'ve got me singing this while I was sweeping the room. You do not do, not do.......!
May 18th, 2022 18:09
Rozina said:
It\'s very catching! You\'ve got me singing this while I was sweeping the room. You do not do, not do.......!
May 18th, 2022 18:09
You Do Not Do, Not Do
spilleronsheet said:
Muse like seasons shall strike you
Maybe like a gentle breeze shall pay you
Await its arrival
Welcome with greet
Cause when she arrives
You may not have peace
But I really liked this light hearted poetry
And the writer’s note added to my thoughts
Good one dear Rocky…
May 18th, 2022 13:43
spilleronsheet said:
Muse like seasons shall strike you
Maybe like a gentle breeze shall pay you
Await its arrival
Welcome with greet
Cause when she arrives
You may not have peace
But I really liked this light hearted poetry
And the writer’s note added to my thoughts
Good one dear Rocky…
May 18th, 2022 13:43
You Do Not Do, Not Do
Bella Shepard said:
You have phrased this refrain so cleverly, and I naturally fall into the cadence as I read it. I think the most fun you can have with words is to play with them, and you my friend do this beautifully.
May 18th, 2022 13:41
Bella Shepard said:
You have phrased this refrain so cleverly, and I naturally fall into the cadence as I read it. I think the most fun you can have with words is to play with them, and you my friend do this beautifully.
May 18th, 2022 13:41
A Dreamer\'s Wildfire
DestinysPerspectives said:
I love every line of this poem! You have a beautiful poetic soul. Never stop expressing those insightful thoughts that burn flames of passion within your heart, soul and mind.
May 18th, 2022 11:47
DestinysPerspectives said:
I love every line of this poem! You have a beautiful poetic soul. Never stop expressing those insightful thoughts that burn flames of passion within your heart, soul and mind.
May 18th, 2022 11:47
You Do Not Do, Not Do
Natalia B. Odair said:
Great poem!! I love how i had to think about the meaning of it to fully understand. Can\'t wait for more. And as for the lack of inspo... sounds weird, but if you have TikTok or Insta, browse through the stuff and find one thing unjust or sad about society today. Then write about it! I don\'t think poems have to be about anything grand, they just have to be from the heart.
May 18th, 2022 11:30
Natalia B. Odair said:
Great poem!! I love how i had to think about the meaning of it to fully understand. Can\'t wait for more. And as for the lack of inspo... sounds weird, but if you have TikTok or Insta, browse through the stuff and find one thing unjust or sad about society today. Then write about it! I don\'t think poems have to be about anything grand, they just have to be from the heart.
May 18th, 2022 11:30
You Do Not Do, Not Do
DestinysPerspectives said:
I love the rhythm and repetition. I could see this being a poem that is required reading in high school lit/ college. I really love this! I can\'t wait to see what you write when your creative mind returns from the spa. Sometimes we just need breaks and there is nothing wrong with that. Maybe go people watching or take a walk in nature to inspire you? I personally paint when I need inspiration. Maybe it will work for you too? I love your writing! It\'s very inspiring. Never stop expressing your beautiful creative mind.
May 18th, 2022 11:27
DestinysPerspectives said:
I love the rhythm and repetition. I could see this being a poem that is required reading in high school lit/ college. I really love this! I can\'t wait to see what you write when your creative mind returns from the spa. Sometimes we just need breaks and there is nothing wrong with that. Maybe go people watching or take a walk in nature to inspire you? I personally paint when I need inspiration. Maybe it will work for you too? I love your writing! It\'s very inspiring. Never stop expressing your beautiful creative mind.
May 18th, 2022 11:27
You Do Not Do, Not Do
orchidee said:
A fine write Rocky.
A bit like \'Why does \'tomorrow\' never come? When it gets here it\'s \'today\'! Hmm, strange that.
You seen any \'tomorrows\' around?
I talk some rubbish sometimes! lol.
May 18th, 2022 11:24
orchidee said:
A fine write Rocky.
A bit like \'Why does \'tomorrow\' never come? When it gets here it\'s \'today\'! Hmm, strange that.
You seen any \'tomorrows\' around?
I talk some rubbish sometimes! lol.
May 18th, 2022 11:24
A Dreamer\'s Wildfire
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Rocky, peace should be with us all in this modern world but people just do not seem to care.
Andy
May 18th, 2022 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Rocky, peace should be with us all in this modern world but people just do not seem to care.
Andy
May 18th, 2022 00:57
A Dreamer\'s Wildfire
Rozina said:
Wonderful to read Rocky. As always you have been able to put words into lines into stanzas and out comes a poem with so much meaning and depth that you share with us. Thank you.
May 17th, 2022 18:23
Rozina said:
Wonderful to read Rocky. As always you have been able to put words into lines into stanzas and out comes a poem with so much meaning and depth that you share with us. Thank you.
May 17th, 2022 18:23
A Dreamer\'s Wildfire
M. Evermore said:
I really, truly loved this. Thank you for sharing.
May 17th, 2022 14:38
M. Evermore said:
I really, truly loved this. Thank you for sharing.
May 17th, 2022 14:38
A Dreamer\'s Wildfire
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes you need to walk away from writing to let the brain replenish.
All will be good in time, once the planets collide the volcanos erupt, and someone shoots, Putin
May 17th, 2022 11:48
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes you need to walk away from writing to let the brain replenish.
All will be good in time, once the planets collide the volcanos erupt, and someone shoots, Putin
May 17th, 2022 11:48
A Dreamer\'s Wildfire
Christina8 said:
This is a masterpiece!! So sad in the beginning but wow!! \"I am a firestorm......the heat is unashamed.\" Incredible!! I loved it throughout but those two lines really swept me away, Rocky! Awesome poem! Have a great day!
May 17th, 2022 09:49
Christina8 said:
This is a masterpiece!! So sad in the beginning but wow!! \"I am a firestorm......the heat is unashamed.\" Incredible!! I loved it throughout but those two lines really swept me away, Rocky! Awesome poem! Have a great day!
May 17th, 2022 09:49
Whole World Watching
Nile Blue said:
“History never repeats itself, but it rhymes.” - I will quote you forever on this one 👌🏿👌🏿👌🏿 Such preciously powerful writing you have there in your gifted mind and obedient hand ✍🏿
May 16th, 2022 13:05
Nile Blue said:
“History never repeats itself, but it rhymes.” - I will quote you forever on this one 👌🏿👌🏿👌🏿 Such preciously powerful writing you have there in your gifted mind and obedient hand ✍🏿
May 16th, 2022 13:05
Shoreline
Christina8 said:
A beautful poem Rocky! Really a work of art. I can see age as it progresses in the second stanza and then \"swallow me whole\" which would probably mean death. I enjoyed your depiction of the ocean shoreline, tickling your toes. I had intended on reviewing this yesterday than sh*t hit the fan. So sorry. You have a wonderful poem here and i\'m sure i missed some nuances but tried to imagine where you were coming from......all my best, Christina
May 14th, 2022 11:37
Christina8 said:
A beautful poem Rocky! Really a work of art. I can see age as it progresses in the second stanza and then \"swallow me whole\" which would probably mean death. I enjoyed your depiction of the ocean shoreline, tickling your toes. I had intended on reviewing this yesterday than sh*t hit the fan. So sorry. You have a wonderful poem here and i\'m sure i missed some nuances but tried to imagine where you were coming from......all my best, Christina
May 14th, 2022 11:37
Shoreline
Paul Bell said:
Great analogy, the waves coming towards you bring abundance, but beware, the waves going out can take that all away in a flash.
May 14th, 2022 05:47
Paul Bell said:
Great analogy, the waves coming towards you bring abundance, but beware, the waves going out can take that all away in a flash.
May 14th, 2022 05:47
Shoreline
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Rocky showing a deeper meaning in life.
Andy
May 14th, 2022 00:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Rocky showing a deeper meaning in life.
Andy
May 14th, 2022 00:56
Shoreline
Rozina said:
Yes Rocky, as a child (or an adult) walking at the edge of the waves as they move nearer and further is so real for me. I love this and also what it can mean in life.
May 13th, 2022 18:24
Rozina said:
Yes Rocky, as a child (or an adult) walking at the edge of the waves as they move nearer and further is so real for me. I love this and also what it can mean in life.
May 13th, 2022 18:24
Shoreline
Bella Shepard said:
Life tantalizes us, lures us, beckons us to figure it out. We are truly mesmerized with its profound beauty, and yet it always seems to be a few steps ahead of us. I love it when you tease me with thought compelling lines and beautiful verse. Thank you dear Rocky!
May 13th, 2022 14:11
Bella Shepard said:
Life tantalizes us, lures us, beckons us to figure it out. We are truly mesmerized with its profound beauty, and yet it always seems to be a few steps ahead of us. I love it when you tease me with thought compelling lines and beautiful verse. Thank you dear Rocky!
May 13th, 2022 14:11
Shoreline
Not Entirely here said:
I love this, simply because I can relate to it. I live at the coast and every time I go to the beach I feel like the waves I just trying to trick me into walking into the water, lol. Not sure if that makes sense but yeah. I love the poem, keep up the good work. :)
May 13th, 2022 13:40
Not Entirely here said:
I love this, simply because I can relate to it. I live at the coast and every time I go to the beach I feel like the waves I just trying to trick me into walking into the water, lol. Not sure if that makes sense but yeah. I love the poem, keep up the good work. :)
May 13th, 2022 13:40
Shoreline
Saxon Crow said:
What a lovely piece of poetry Rocky. Diet rate stuff.
May 13th, 2022 12:57
Saxon Crow said:
What a lovely piece of poetry Rocky. Diet rate stuff.
May 13th, 2022 12:57
Shoreline
dusk arising said:
Where we meet the edge of the ocean is exhillerating isn\'t it. And when we relax in it\'s presence it\'s majesty does things to our thinking, brings forth the spiritual and with that so many unanswerable questions. At that stage for me, i feel insignificant. All my problems and worries become miniscule confronted by this perpetual motion which is only a tiny part of the wonders we so easily overlook and take for granted in our everyday lives.
I get the vibe from your post that you are on the same wavelength when contemplating the shoreline too. It\'s a fascinating thing to write about, well done. I bet the subject will come time and time again in your writing too.
May 13th, 2022 10:52
dusk arising said:
Where we meet the edge of the ocean is exhillerating isn\'t it. And when we relax in it\'s presence it\'s majesty does things to our thinking, brings forth the spiritual and with that so many unanswerable questions. At that stage for me, i feel insignificant. All my problems and worries become miniscule confronted by this perpetual motion which is only a tiny part of the wonders we so easily overlook and take for granted in our everyday lives.
I get the vibe from your post that you are on the same wavelength when contemplating the shoreline too. It\'s a fascinating thing to write about, well done. I bet the subject will come time and time again in your writing too.
May 13th, 2022 10:52
Shoreline
orchidee said:
Good write Rocky.
Ohhh, it\'s too deep for me sometimes, these poems! I\'m all un-cultured! Am I? lol.
May 13th, 2022 09:48
orchidee said:
Good write Rocky.
Ohhh, it\'s too deep for me sometimes, these poems! I\'m all un-cultured! Am I? lol.
May 13th, 2022 09:48
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