Comments received on poems by arqios
unyielding eyes
David Wakeling said:
For me this explores the so called rules of poetry and creativity. Poetry doesn\'t have to rhyme bit there is nothing wrong if it does. Surely to enjoy writing Poetry or any literature should be free.A great poem with a serious theme.
June 21st, 2025 04:43
David Wakeling said:
For me this explores the so called rules of poetry and creativity. Poetry doesn\'t have to rhyme bit there is nothing wrong if it does. Surely to enjoy writing Poetry or any literature should be free.A great poem with a serious theme.
June 21st, 2025 04:43
unyielding eyes
Poetic Licence said:
The world is big enough for all types of writing regardless of how poetic, structered, planned or randomly written they are, I myself as you say the need to speak, interesting write
June 21st, 2025 04:13
Poetic Licence said:
The world is big enough for all types of writing regardless of how poetic, structered, planned or randomly written they are, I myself as you say the need to speak, interesting write
June 21st, 2025 04:13
unyielding eyes
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic it is the meaning of this poem that gets the fave. I hold poetry to be the ability to convey emotion in words. Poetry without emotion is merely a decoration an icing and without the substance of cake beneath it a simple window dressing for the eye not for the stomach or heart. A lovely work
June 21st, 2025 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic it is the meaning of this poem that gets the fave. I hold poetry to be the ability to convey emotion in words. Poetry without emotion is merely a decoration an icing and without the substance of cake beneath it a simple window dressing for the eye not for the stomach or heart. A lovely work
June 21st, 2025 04:04
unyielding eyes
Caring dove said:
I think sometimes it’s best to write how we wish .. and In our way
I never follow a certain rhyme or anything ..
June 21st, 2025 02:43
Caring dove said:
I think sometimes it’s best to write how we wish .. and In our way
I never follow a certain rhyme or anything ..
June 21st, 2025 02:43
bridges
Goldfinch60 said:
Those bridges are so important in our lives arqios.
Andy
( My wife died from dementia so I know all about it, may your friend find peace.)
June 21st, 2025 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Those bridges are so important in our lives arqios.
Andy
( My wife died from dementia so I know all about it, may your friend find peace.)
June 21st, 2025 01:26
bridges
rrodriguez said:
This is so beautiful. It softly glides in musicality and rhythm. Excellent piece!
June 20th, 2025 20:45
rrodriguez said:
This is so beautiful. It softly glides in musicality and rhythm. Excellent piece!
June 20th, 2025 20:45
bridges
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh, my dear friend. I am sorry to hear this. What a profound poem not only honoring your friend, but our memories as a whole. As someone who has worked with people who have dementia of various kinds, I cherish this poem. Bless you. 🌹👏
June 20th, 2025 13:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh, my dear friend. I am sorry to hear this. What a profound poem not only honoring your friend, but our memories as a whole. As someone who has worked with people who have dementia of various kinds, I cherish this poem. Bless you. 🌹👏
June 20th, 2025 13:29
bridges
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write to a friend who is suffering from probably one of the worst ways to die, wish them peace
June 20th, 2025 07:18
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write to a friend who is suffering from probably one of the worst ways to die, wish them peace
June 20th, 2025 07:18
velveteen quietude
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice one arqios
Theres a gifted sweet
and soothing flow
WithIn stanzas
June 20th, 2025 06:03
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice one arqios
Theres a gifted sweet
and soothing flow
WithIn stanzas
June 20th, 2025 06:03
bridges
arqios said:
Forgot to work on a reduced image to load up at posting. Here it is now.
June 20th, 2025 05:44
arqios said:
Forgot to work on a reduced image to load up at posting. Here it is now.
June 20th, 2025 05:44
bridges
sorenbarrett said:
Your author\'s note gives greater meaning to this poem that uses common metaphors to build a new image and feeling of far greater proportions. Very nicely stated my friend
June 20th, 2025 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
Your author\'s note gives greater meaning to this poem that uses common metaphors to build a new image and feeling of far greater proportions. Very nicely stated my friend
June 20th, 2025 04:31
bridges
David Wakeling said:
Slippping away with Dementia.I know the feeling. My Father suffered that and he just didn\'t recognise anyone in the family. A kindly written poem.Well done
June 20th, 2025 04:13
David Wakeling said:
Slippping away with Dementia.I know the feeling. My Father suffered that and he just didn\'t recognise anyone in the family. A kindly written poem.Well done
June 20th, 2025 04:13
my poetic side
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words weave a quiet magic, tender yet profound—like roots deepening in shared soil. A beautiful reflection on connection and the rhythms of being.
June 20th, 2025 03:32
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words weave a quiet magic, tender yet profound—like roots deepening in shared soil. A beautiful reflection on connection and the rhythms of being.
June 20th, 2025 03:32
bridges
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
This poem resonates deeply—bridges as symbols of connection, memory, and the gentle impact of our actions. I love how you capture both the tangible and the fleeting—the pebbles we toss, the ripples they leave, and the way they merge with dreams. There’s something quietly powerful in the idea that what we build (and keep building) remains a passage, even into the past. Beautifully crafted!\"
June 20th, 2025 03:23
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
This poem resonates deeply—bridges as symbols of connection, memory, and the gentle impact of our actions. I love how you capture both the tangible and the fleeting—the pebbles we toss, the ripples they leave, and the way they merge with dreams. There’s something quietly powerful in the idea that what we build (and keep building) remains a passage, even into the past. Beautifully crafted!\"
June 20th, 2025 03:23
my poetic side
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words show life in our community here arqios.
Andy
June 20th, 2025 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words show life in our community here arqios.
Andy
June 20th, 2025 01:40
my poetic side
MendedFences27 said:
Arqios, this is a great synopsis of the site and a beautiful poem as well. I loved it.
June 19th, 2025 11:45
MendedFences27 said:
Arqios, this is a great synopsis of the site and a beautiful poem as well. I loved it.
June 19th, 2025 11:45
my poetic side
Kevin Hulme said:
Fine way of describing MPS. It\'s a being but you can\'t touch it. You have a good way with words ,
Like Wot eye wood like two bee.
June 19th, 2025 10:29
Kevin Hulme said:
Fine way of describing MPS. It\'s a being but you can\'t touch it. You have a good way with words ,
Like Wot eye wood like two bee.
June 19th, 2025 10:29
my poetic side
Tristan Robert Lange said:
It takes all kinds and, despite the kinds I don\'t like, I wouldn\'t change a thing about it...even them. Though I do wish they would change themselves! 🤣 Humans need community and we make community. It\'s a beautiful thing overall, hiccups aside. Wonderful write, my friend.
June 19th, 2025 08:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
It takes all kinds and, despite the kinds I don\'t like, I wouldn\'t change a thing about it...even them. Though I do wish they would change themselves! 🤣 Humans need community and we make community. It\'s a beautiful thing overall, hiccups aside. Wonderful write, my friend.
June 19th, 2025 08:39
my poetic side
Poetic Licence said:
Without words and art we would know nothing of any history, we would never have developed as human beings and we could never learn about each other. This site is a proper box of all sorts, so many different life experiences, cultures, history, events, festivals, different views which makes it a wonderful place to reveal your words, enjoyed the read
June 19th, 2025 06:13
Poetic Licence said:
Without words and art we would know nothing of any history, we would never have developed as human beings and we could never learn about each other. This site is a proper box of all sorts, so many different life experiences, cultures, history, events, festivals, different views which makes it a wonderful place to reveal your words, enjoyed the read
June 19th, 2025 06:13
my poetic side
David Wakeling said:
This is delightful to read. I particularly liked the \'Voices scatter across a vast terrain\" Very powerful images here
June 19th, 2025 04:24
David Wakeling said:
This is delightful to read. I particularly liked the \'Voices scatter across a vast terrain\" Very powerful images here
June 19th, 2025 04:24
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