Comments received on poems by arqios
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Dan Williams said:
Lovely and touching, more somber than sad. Nice work.
February 10th, 2025 01:23
Dan Williams said:
Lovely and touching, more somber than sad. Nice work.
February 10th, 2025 01:23
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Kevin Hulme said:
I understand this. With me itβs books. Some books I know the Stories, others I forget what they were about . Stephen Fry mentions it in his Autobiography, so itβs not just me.
Your Poem said it well.
February 9th, 2025 20:36
Kevin Hulme said:
I understand this. With me itβs books. Some books I know the Stories, others I forget what they were about . Stephen Fry mentions it in his Autobiography, so itβs not just me.
Your Poem said it well.
February 9th, 2025 20:36
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Neville said:
Under the circumstances this is so understandable and relatable too π
February 9th, 2025 11:16
Neville said:
Under the circumstances this is so understandable and relatable too π
February 9th, 2025 11:16
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Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. But that was the reason for my eager attempt to collect the complete writings of various poets and poetesses of yore whom I dearly loved and adored, and likewise the cause for my detesting fiction since it left reality so far behind via smoke and mirrors that I failed to see who was writing. It\'s also the reason why I dearly love Shakespeare. But enough of me. Beautifully rendered with nigh exquisite imagery and a tantalizing poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
February 9th, 2025 07:36
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. But that was the reason for my eager attempt to collect the complete writings of various poets and poetesses of yore whom I dearly loved and adored, and likewise the cause for my detesting fiction since it left reality so far behind via smoke and mirrors that I failed to see who was writing. It\'s also the reason why I dearly love Shakespeare. But enough of me. Beautifully rendered with nigh exquisite imagery and a tantalizing poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
February 9th, 2025 07:36
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Paul Gerard Reed said:
A delicate and haunting poem written with great feeling. I love the first line especially.
February 9th, 2025 05:42
Paul Gerard Reed said:
A delicate and haunting poem written with great feeling. I love the first line especially.
February 9th, 2025 05:42
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David Wakeling said:
I\'m sure we can truly know anyone. It can be a difficult sea to navigate.This poem made me think. Excellent
February 9th, 2025 04:47
David Wakeling said:
I\'m sure we can truly know anyone. It can be a difficult sea to navigate.This poem made me think. Excellent
February 9th, 2025 04:47
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sorenbarrett said:
Wonderfully worded the means by which we gain knowledge, learn and know things and people. Bib by bit assembling the puzzle that lays before us.
February 9th, 2025 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderfully worded the means by which we gain knowledge, learn and know things and people. Bib by bit assembling the puzzle that lays before us.
February 9th, 2025 04:38
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Michael Edwards said:
Super descriptive write - I found myself reading it aloud and well worthy of another read
February 9th, 2025 03:17
Michael Edwards said:
Super descriptive write - I found myself reading it aloud and well worthy of another read
February 9th, 2025 03:17
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Cassie58 said:
Great poem. Like the shards metaphor. The shards can be precious.
As to interactions, an air of mystery is far better. You will never build a complete picture of someone through their writing. Poets I have met are often very different from the way their muse works. Enjoyed the read.
February 9th, 2025 03:16
Cassie58 said:
Great poem. Like the shards metaphor. The shards can be precious.
As to interactions, an air of mystery is far better. You will never build a complete picture of someone through their writing. Poets I have met are often very different from the way their muse works. Enjoyed the read.
February 9th, 2025 03:16
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orchidee said:
I\'ve fallen to pieces, I\'m all in a heap! heehee.
February 9th, 2025 02:55
orchidee said:
I\'ve fallen to pieces, I\'m all in a heap! heehee.
February 9th, 2025 02:55
they shall weep no more
Teddy.15 said:
I certainly see a positive outcome, I read this a few times, nonsense or most sense? As a woman I can say,. This poem can be read more than one way. πΉ
February 8th, 2025 18:44
Teddy.15 said:
I certainly see a positive outcome, I read this a few times, nonsense or most sense? As a woman I can say,. This poem can be read more than one way. πΉ
February 8th, 2025 18:44
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David Wakeling said:
Nice story of random meeting. Delightful read
February 8th, 2025 15:46
David Wakeling said:
Nice story of random meeting. Delightful read
February 8th, 2025 15:46
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Cheeky Missy said:
Bet you\'re a much cherished puppy dog more than worth any mere puppy love. Exquisitely rendered with gorgeous imagery and a heartening poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
February 8th, 2025 11:17
Cheeky Missy said:
Bet you\'re a much cherished puppy dog more than worth any mere puppy love. Exquisitely rendered with gorgeous imagery and a heartening poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
February 8th, 2025 11:17
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arqios said:
With the initial comments I am getting that it could pose a challenge to weigh in on this post. But yβall have been so accommodating and kindβ¦ Iβm truly thankful for your effort, time, kindness, and input. It means so much ππ»π
February 8th, 2025 08:52
arqios said:
With the initial comments I am getting that it could pose a challenge to weigh in on this post. But yβall have been so accommodating and kindβ¦ Iβm truly thankful for your effort, time, kindness, and input. It means so much ππ»π
February 8th, 2025 08:52
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Poetic Licence said:
A clever piece highlighting that males need for a little attention and how easily our thoughts and actions are predicted and controlled, enjoyed the read
February 8th, 2025 08:38
Poetic Licence said:
A clever piece highlighting that males need for a little attention and how easily our thoughts and actions are predicted and controlled, enjoyed the read
February 8th, 2025 08:38
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Mutley Ravishes said:
Intriguing write. If the man (who is able to bring home the bacon each week) appears to be under control then he won\'t wander?!!
I once showed a video of the Dax song \"To Be a Man\" to my wife. She didn\'t like it. Not that I\'m saying I agree with everything Dax said in that song!
February 8th, 2025 07:45
Mutley Ravishes said:
Intriguing write. If the man (who is able to bring home the bacon each week) appears to be under control then he won\'t wander?!!
I once showed a video of the Dax song \"To Be a Man\" to my wife. She didn\'t like it. Not that I\'m saying I agree with everything Dax said in that song!
February 8th, 2025 07:45
Edgar Allan : Ravenous Poe, 216 years on
Simurgh said:
What a poem to honour Adgar Allen Poe! I found it captivating!β€οΈπ
I am a huge fan of Adgar Allen Poe\'s writing! From the International Kolkata Book Fair, India I bought the Collection Of 100 Best Stories including Edgar Allan Poe\'s beautiful works.ππΉπΉ
Thank you arqios for writing such a theme of darkness so beautifully! It was a marvelous work. ππ
February 8th, 2025 06:43
Simurgh said:
What a poem to honour Adgar Allen Poe! I found it captivating!β€οΈπ
I am a huge fan of Adgar Allen Poe\'s writing! From the International Kolkata Book Fair, India I bought the Collection Of 100 Best Stories including Edgar Allan Poe\'s beautiful works.ππΉπΉ
Thank you arqios for writing such a theme of darkness so beautifully! It was a marvelous work. ππ
February 8th, 2025 06:43
sound of a day, precluded
Simurgh said:
Thanks for providing us with such a beautiful picture as well! πππ
February 8th, 2025 06:28
Simurgh said:
Thanks for providing us with such a beautiful picture as well! πππ
February 8th, 2025 06:28
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sorenbarrett said:
In the literal sense it makes no sense so I go to the metaphorical. Here I find a gold mine as males arn\'t we all dogs? Controlled by that sexual colar willing to please for a little attention and closeness? And the willows weep no more.
February 8th, 2025 06:06
sorenbarrett said:
In the literal sense it makes no sense so I go to the metaphorical. Here I find a gold mine as males arn\'t we all dogs? Controlled by that sexual colar willing to please for a little attention and closeness? And the willows weep no more.
February 8th, 2025 06:06
poetspeak
Simurgh said:
Beautiful and celebrated, arqios! Marvellous write.
What a turn and twist of words! I loved your poem and found it captivating!βοΈβοΈπΉ
Poetry is a art and not everyone an artist...It\'s truly indeed! πΉπ₯
Poems are felt by heart not by just running for being celebrated and famous. It comes naturally.
Poets are the most passionate minds of the world!
They are the visionary guiding us and including you as our guide as well, arqios! ππΉ
Get ready for my upcoming poem on love for the Valentine\'s Day Celebration!
Love is in the air...ππ
Let us together pledge that on 16th February in the occasion of Valentine\'s Day, we will all write love poems! π₯π
February 8th, 2025 06:06
Simurgh said:
Beautiful and celebrated, arqios! Marvellous write.
What a turn and twist of words! I loved your poem and found it captivating!βοΈβοΈπΉ
Poetry is a art and not everyone an artist...It\'s truly indeed! πΉπ₯
Poems are felt by heart not by just running for being celebrated and famous. It comes naturally.
Poets are the most passionate minds of the world!
They are the visionary guiding us and including you as our guide as well, arqios! ππΉ
Get ready for my upcoming poem on love for the Valentine\'s Day Celebration!
Love is in the air...ππ
Let us together pledge that on 16th February in the occasion of Valentine\'s Day, we will all write love poems! π₯π
February 8th, 2025 06:06
poetspeak
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words arqios, poetry shows our hearts.
Andy
February 8th, 2025 02:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words arqios, poetry shows our hearts.
Andy
February 8th, 2025 02:54
poetspeak
arqios said:
βPoesyβ could also be part of an apt title. Thanks to David Wakeling for using that term in his much appreciated comment ππ»ποΈ
February 8th, 2025 00:53
arqios said:
βPoesyβ could also be part of an apt title. Thanks to David Wakeling for using that term in his much appreciated comment ππ»ποΈ
February 8th, 2025 00:53
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Kevin Hulme said:
I always find your Poems very Philosophical , and this no exception. A good way to describe the Art.
Nice One.
February 7th, 2025 20:36
Kevin Hulme said:
I always find your Poems very Philosophical , and this no exception. A good way to describe the Art.
Nice One.
February 7th, 2025 20:36
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David Wakeling said:
This is quite a beautiful tribute to the gentle art of poesy.Wonderful
February 7th, 2025 15:46
David Wakeling said:
This is quite a beautiful tribute to the gentle art of poesy.Wonderful
February 7th, 2025 15:46
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sorenbarrett said:
A poem with sparkeling words that shine in every line. Eloquently spoken.
February 7th, 2025 10:07
sorenbarrett said:
A poem with sparkeling words that shine in every line. Eloquently spoken.
February 7th, 2025 10:07
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