Comments received on poems by arqios



Zara’s Choice
Poetic Licence said:

The greatest battle we will have to fight man against the machine, I have said for many years man is to clever for its own good, now with something man invented we face the real possibility of being surplus to requirements, enjoyed the read

March 25th, 2025 05:28

Zara’s Choice
David Wakeling said:

This is interesting.John and Zara a love story around computers.I often wonder if computers have improved the world or not. An important poem that made me think.Excellent

March 25th, 2025 05:25

Zara’s Choice
sorenbarrett said:

A in vivo metaphor in this poem. This is the first time that I have heard this topic presented in this manner. Man vs machine. Nicely worked out in words.

March 25th, 2025 04:08

Zara’s Choice
Goldfinch60 said:

This world is being controlled by computing arqios, that is why I think outside the box.

Andy

March 25th, 2025 02:54

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Kevin Hulme said:

Some fine Images spring out from your lines . Nice One.

March 24th, 2025 20:42

and then us, content creators
Friendship said:

very powerful poem

March 24th, 2025 18:38

and then us, content creators
Thomas W Case said:

Brilliant.

March 24th, 2025 09:17

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Tom Dylan said:

A fine write. Nicely done.

March 24th, 2025 07:34

and then us, content creators
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Man, if more people would see their influence, no matter how big or small, no matter if digital or in-person, as genuinely and responsibly as this, we wouldn\'t have such a bad world to live in! Excellent job, my friend! Truth bytes! 🌹👏

March 24th, 2025 06:47

and then us, content creators
arqios said:

Probably not as catchy as its predecessor

March 24th, 2025 06:18

and then us, content creators
Poetic Licence said:

The power and influence it has is terrifying really, moulding our future generations without our knowledge or understanding, enjoyed the read

March 24th, 2025 05:35

and then us, content creators
David Wakeling said:

wow this poem packs a punch.You are right about the power of Social Media and influencing. Well written and thought provoking

March 24th, 2025 05:19

and then us, content creators
sorenbarrett said:

Influence has grown with the internet. What was once just a neighborhood thing is now worldwide. People count their influence in hundreds of thousands it not more. A great metaphor for the spread of information and the issue of perceived trust is big.

March 24th, 2025 04:06

a royal pain
NafisaSB said:

history is full of such tales- thanks for reviving my interest in it - had read about it

March 23rd, 2025 23:47

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Tony36 said:

Excellent write

March 23rd, 2025 14:11

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Poetic Licence said:

The washing away of the old allowing fresh new memories to be made, a lovely read

March 23rd, 2025 05:22

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David Wakeling said:

This is amazing.Such wonderful immagery and depth.The cycles of life explored in great detail.Enjoyed reading

March 23rd, 2025 05:06

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sorenbarrett said:

A lovely metaphor I like the idea of the past being the sand where footprints are cast and the future,( time ) or the sea that washes away every trace. A poem with a somewhat melancholy feel. Very nice

March 23rd, 2025 04:03

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orchidee said:

A fine write A.

March 23rd, 2025 02:53

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Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words arqios, memories came and gone but forever in our lives.

Andy

March 23rd, 2025 02:49

“the internet does not lie”
Tony36 said:

Great write

March 22nd, 2025 11:14

“the internet does not lie”
ChrisLyn🕊 said:

Indeed true

March 22nd, 2025 09:49

unveiling
whats write for me said:

Beautiful rthymic flow, casting shadows and revealing light with words. Excellent!

March 22nd, 2025 09:20

“the internet does not lie”
Tristan Robert Lange said:

A most though-provoking poem, my friend. Question, if the Internet does not lie, what about AI? 🤖 🤣 Okay, okay, I could not resist that. Seriously though, between your poem and your note, what I am getting is that the input feeds the output, which makes perfect sense. Bad input equals bad output. And people never enter in 100% good input, do we? Hence the silly AI question, but it is not that silly at all, is it? What we knew to be truths today are no longer seen as truths, in sometimes very scary ways. Everything we have is fed to us through a single device that we carry on our person all the time. We sometimes even talk to people in the same room through them. My kids would notoriously NOT get an answer if they did that! 🤣 Anywho, all of this to ask, what is truth anymore? It, of course, still exists. A very fine write, my friend, that got the gears in my head spinning! A fave for sure!

March 22nd, 2025 08:11

“the internet does not lie”
Friendship said:

Sadly it does lie! well written ,Your poem aims to inspire and empower the conviction that the internet can be a reliable source of information amidst a landscape often plagued by doubt and misinformation, championing a visionary view of technology as a catalyst for knowledge and understanding.

March 22nd, 2025 07:12

“the internet does not lie”
Poetic Licence said:

It shouldn\'t lie, but it is programmed by humans so it\'s bound to. makes you wonder how it will be when the computers completely take over, enjoyed the read

March 22nd, 2025 06:08

“the internet does not lie”
Mutley Ravishes said:

If I can find it in an internet search then it must be real!

March 22nd, 2025 06:04

“the internet does not lie”
David Wakeling said:

If its made by human beings there will be 50% lies an 50% truth.Great poem mi amigo

March 22nd, 2025 05:25

“the internet does not lie”
sorenbarrett said:

It matters not whether the data entry of faulty material is intentional or not the outcome is the same. In an everchanging world what was true yesterday no longer is today so output based on yesterdays input is no longer correct today. A most mind provoking write and well done as well with the lead in line spewing what is known to be most controversial ( the internet speaks truth) one of those statements that is both true and false. Loved it

March 22nd, 2025 04:59

“the internet does not lie”
Goldfinch60 said:

But it can lie, I used to work in computing and it can be programmed to tell untruths.

Andy

March 22nd, 2025 03:01



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