Comments received on poems by arqios



some things, we overlook
2781 said:

\"He that goes forth and weepeth, bearing precious seed, shall doubtless come again with rejoicing, bringing his sheaths with him.\"

February 3rd, 2024 06:53

unlimiting
sorenbarrett said:

With this explanation and some speculation in my meditation I have no good formulation but retain great admiration.

January 5th, 2024 19:03

becoming keeper and herald
orchidee said:

Good write A.

January 4th, 2024 10:48

becoming keeper and herald
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic

January 4th, 2024 09:47

becoming keeper and herald
arqios said:

(Something curious must have occurred on this comment box, so keeping it with this aside) 😃

January 4th, 2024 07:14

becoming keeper and herald
Tom Dylan said:

Completely agree with this. Dance to your own tune. Well done.

January 4th, 2024 07:13

becoming keeper and herald
Alan R said:

Very liberating to read...

January 4th, 2024 07:11

becoming keeper and herald
sorenbarrett said:

A great theme. So many times I have written something close to the heart, and carefully taken a good deal of time working it out to have it rated poorly and hardly reviewed at others something easily written and just a thought to rated highly and lauded by many. Now I write for myself. I admire many of your metaphors and imagry that seem naturally poetic.

January 4th, 2024 06:37

lone light
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent work.

January 3rd, 2024 15:34

lone light
orchidee said:

Good write A.

January 3rd, 2024 08:38

the only light
2781 said:

Like he says, \"sing me a new song.\"

January 3rd, 2024 04:32

the only light
Neville said:



sounds almost too good to be true ..a treat for the senses & deeply ..

January 3rd, 2024 02:41

the only light
orchidee said:

Good write A.

January 2nd, 2024 11:39

the only light
sorenbarrett said:

This one so full of great images and characteristically enigmatic on your part. Loved it. Good to hear from you albeit under another alias. Happy New Year

January 2nd, 2024 10:00

“teqsun”
orchidee said:

Good write A. Confucius say \'I am confused\'.
Dunno why I wrote that. Neville\'s comment seemed a bit Confucius-like, to me.
Oh go back to sleep Orchi, says Fido! lol.

December 19th, 2023 10:35

“teqsun”
Neville said:


tex son bows low beneath a low horizon .. downs his fill too much self kill shadow disappears as sun sets pissed .. hic nice burp .. cheers

December 19th, 2023 10:08

Pearly whites
orchidee said:

Good write A.

December 18th, 2023 11:19

Pearly whites
Neville said:


makes you wonder if all the effort and associated pain was worth it .. 😬🪥😬👍

December 18th, 2023 08:01

Promises
John Lee said:

Moments are rarely lived anymore. Only captured then released.

December 17th, 2023 23:37

There be no poetry-by-numbers
orchidee said:

And furthermore in witty sayings included in your poem - two squirrels don\'t make a summer. Or is it two swallows? I dunno. They look the same to me! lol. Eh?

December 17th, 2023 10:42

There be no poetry-by-numbers
Neville said:


oh\' yes indeed, freedom .. let\'s now go take a walk on the wild side ..

December 17th, 2023 09:56

wishful thinking
Neville said:


You are such a smarty pants .. bet you were a thesaurus in a previous life ..

December 17th, 2023 04:35

pareidolia
Neville said:


This is quite brill & I aint talking fish neither .. and what\'s more, you are the only other poet I can recall who has touched on a subject that I have variously written about before on several occasions .. ps Your new avatar resembles a cloud at the moment .. must be summat to do with the residual jetlag .. Neville

December 17th, 2023 04:32

poetically breathe
Thomas W Case said:

Brilliant work.

December 16th, 2023 13:18

poetically breathe
2781 said:

His word will not return void.

December 15th, 2023 05:47

poetically breathe
Nicholas Browning said:

Elsewhere? You cheatin\' on MPS? O. O

lol, don\'t mind me

December 15th, 2023 05:17

poetically breathe
orchidee said:

Good write A.
A cue for my corny joke: I tried not breathing for 24 hours, to save air for one day. I did it, but didn\'t feel well afterwards. Doh! lol.

December 15th, 2023 04:30

Branches of a tree
orchidee said:

A fine write CB.

December 14th, 2023 10:57

Branches of a tree
Nicholas Browning said:

This is actually pretty well done. I like the finish, and the (seemingly) scattered symbols add a sense of depth not often seen in poetry. Very nice.

December 14th, 2023 06:37

wishful thinking
orchidee said:

Now, yes, why they bash us with the Bible in some places?! Ouch, that hurt! lol. There\'s preaching though, which we expect from sermons.

December 11th, 2023 08:12



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