Comments received on poems by arqios
capricious recollections
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that poetry will kee us together Rik.
Andy
November 19th, 2022 02:58
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that poetry will kee us together Rik.
Andy
November 19th, 2022 02:58
capricious recollections
Doggerel Dave said:
Took several readings for again my literal mind to to work at this one Rik, but worthwhile. As a paean to poetry with a relationship and memories thrown in - a bonus, I arrived in the end.
November 18th, 2022 23:37
Doggerel Dave said:
Took several readings for again my literal mind to to work at this one Rik, but worthwhile. As a paean to poetry with a relationship and memories thrown in - a bonus, I arrived in the end.
November 18th, 2022 23:37
capricious recollections
Bella Shepard said:
The musical accompaniment seems to embody the different moods of poetry so well. Where else can you feel the freedom to express inner most thoughts and be accepted unconditionally. Bravo dear Poet!
November 18th, 2022 15:39
Bella Shepard said:
The musical accompaniment seems to embody the different moods of poetry so well. Where else can you feel the freedom to express inner most thoughts and be accepted unconditionally. Bravo dear Poet!
November 18th, 2022 15:39
capricious recollections
Fay Slimm. said:
Poems evoke so much more than words dear Rik - - memory can be kept alive by lines poets pen - - I really relate to the heart-moving music too
November 18th, 2022 14:21
Fay Slimm. said:
Poems evoke so much more than words dear Rik - - memory can be kept alive by lines poets pen - - I really relate to the heart-moving music too
November 18th, 2022 14:21
capricious recollections
Neville said:
As far as I am concerned, poetry is the glue that holds so much more than it is often given credit for ..
Nicely penned sir .. Neville :)
November 18th, 2022 14:17
Neville said:
As far as I am concerned, poetry is the glue that holds so much more than it is often given credit for ..
Nicely penned sir .. Neville :)
November 18th, 2022 14:17
where might you be?
Neville said:
I could of course try & be clever and pen something profound .. but shall resist and just say this is an excellent bit o poetry CB and no kiddin sir ..... Neville
November 18th, 2022 04:36
Neville said:
I could of course try & be clever and pen something profound .. but shall resist and just say this is an excellent bit o poetry CB and no kiddin sir ..... Neville
November 18th, 2022 04:36
where might you be?
Bella Shepard said:
I feel past, present and future converge, to beguile and entreat. So well done!
November 17th, 2022 12:43
Bella Shepard said:
I feel past, present and future converge, to beguile and entreat. So well done!
November 17th, 2022 12:43
where might you be?
orchidee said:
Phew! This is something like a 9.2.9.2. format. Or if not that, it comes under \'irregular\' format!
I\'ve tackled a 14.14.4.7.8. format before. I split the 14\'s into 8.6\'s. heehee.
Sounds like I\'m playing Bingo here! lol.
November 17th, 2022 09:04
orchidee said:
Phew! This is something like a 9.2.9.2. format. Or if not that, it comes under \'irregular\' format!
I\'ve tackled a 14.14.4.7.8. format before. I split the 14\'s into 8.6\'s. heehee.
Sounds like I\'m playing Bingo here! lol.
November 17th, 2022 09:04
where might you be?
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful dream like image of memories and the presence. So well worded that it hypnotizes and bears one on a journey, carried in the arms of Morpheus. The cycle of life is beautiful. I love the line \"revive severed umbilical dreams\"
November 17th, 2022 08:33
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful dream like image of memories and the presence. So well worded that it hypnotizes and bears one on a journey, carried in the arms of Morpheus. The cycle of life is beautiful. I love the line \"revive severed umbilical dreams\"
November 17th, 2022 08:33
substacking
Bella Shepard said:
Nice treatment of a sticky subject. I have never heard of Substack. I listened to the video and can truthfully say that I have never really understood all the internet jargon, so I can\'t really comment. However, I commiserate with you because I get other emails that pull the same stuff. Actually, I think that they should get stuffed.
November 16th, 2022 09:59
Bella Shepard said:
Nice treatment of a sticky subject. I have never heard of Substack. I listened to the video and can truthfully say that I have never really understood all the internet jargon, so I can\'t really comment. However, I commiserate with you because I get other emails that pull the same stuff. Actually, I think that they should get stuffed.
November 16th, 2022 09:59
substacking
Doggerel Dave said:
Rik - my procedure is: email? Substack? no request from me... WTF? delete (doesn\'t get past the viewing pane)
Am I missing something again?.
November 16th, 2022 07:20
Doggerel Dave said:
Rik - my procedure is: email? Substack? no request from me... WTF? delete (doesn\'t get past the viewing pane)
Am I missing something again?.
November 16th, 2022 07:20
substacking
orchidee said:
Ah yes, we stumble along the line - payment requested page, or join up now for a fee page.
Also, we may have about 5 million (well seems liek it) e-mails in our Bin/Trash. Never knew it was so many!
November 16th, 2022 04:34
orchidee said:
Ah yes, we stumble along the line - payment requested page, or join up now for a fee page.
Also, we may have about 5 million (well seems liek it) e-mails in our Bin/Trash. Never knew it was so many!
November 16th, 2022 04:34
irreconcilably different?
sorenbarrett said:
A good question that can be taken more than one way. I suppose that the answer is more than one as well.
November 15th, 2022 10:37
sorenbarrett said:
A good question that can be taken more than one way. I suppose that the answer is more than one as well.
November 15th, 2022 10:37
irreconcilably different?
orchidee said:
Good write CB. Aren\'t we on Day 746 or summat of the challenge now?! lol.
November 15th, 2022 08:35
orchidee said:
Good write CB. Aren\'t we on Day 746 or summat of the challenge now?! lol.
November 15th, 2022 08:35
irreconcilably different?
Doggerel Dave said:
Rik, I\'ve never worked out what the orchillenge is all about , but with respect to your present conundrum, I\'d say there\'s much open negotiation required here. (don\'t mind me - the sixties and seventies were my era)......
November 15th, 2022 05:21
Doggerel Dave said:
Rik, I\'ve never worked out what the orchillenge is all about , but with respect to your present conundrum, I\'d say there\'s much open negotiation required here. (don\'t mind me - the sixties and seventies were my era)......
November 15th, 2022 05:21
ode to Phillis Wheatley
Doggerel Dave said:
A tribute to a short but both strange and amazing life about which I had no prior notion. So Thanks, Rik.
I have to spend some more time cogitating upon your poem now.....
November 14th, 2022 19:47
Doggerel Dave said:
A tribute to a short but both strange and amazing life about which I had no prior notion. So Thanks, Rik.
I have to spend some more time cogitating upon your poem now.....
November 14th, 2022 19:47
ode to Phillis Wheatley
Fay Slimm. said:
Your beautiful tribute brought my attention to the video of Phyllis Wheatly\'s words sung so soothingly as the painting took shape - a most interesting and inspiring poetess whose pierceing perception held me spellbound - - thank you for sharing her wonderful talent Rik.
November 14th, 2022 17:21
Fay Slimm. said:
Your beautiful tribute brought my attention to the video of Phyllis Wheatly\'s words sung so soothingly as the painting took shape - a most interesting and inspiring poetess whose pierceing perception held me spellbound - - thank you for sharing her wonderful talent Rik.
November 14th, 2022 17:21
ode to Phillis Wheatley
orchidee said:
You\'ll start me off singing! Arrgghh! they say. lol. Good write CB.
November 14th, 2022 06:14
orchidee said:
You\'ll start me off singing! Arrgghh! they say. lol. Good write CB.
November 14th, 2022 06:14
ode to Phillis Wheatley
L. B. Mek said:
really like that second stanza
thanks for sharing, dear poet
November 14th, 2022 05:55
L. B. Mek said:
really like that second stanza
thanks for sharing, dear poet
November 14th, 2022 05:55
transitions
Bella Shepard said:
A timely write dear poet. Something we think we can control, but our primitive brains know better. Also love rowlf\'s Liberace-esque performance of Autumn Leaves, candelabra and all.
November 13th, 2022 14:44
Bella Shepard said:
A timely write dear poet. Something we think we can control, but our primitive brains know better. Also love rowlf\'s Liberace-esque performance of Autumn Leaves, candelabra and all.
November 13th, 2022 14:44
transitions
sorenbarrett said:
I particularly liked the last stanza, pregnant with imagery. A timely write in this hemisphere. This brings feelings of passing time and age.
November 13th, 2022 09:03
sorenbarrett said:
I particularly liked the last stanza, pregnant with imagery. A timely write in this hemisphere. This brings feelings of passing time and age.
November 13th, 2022 09:03
transitions
orchidee said:
Good write and one of Fido\'s friends in the video CB! lol.
November 13th, 2022 05:55
orchidee said:
Good write and one of Fido\'s friends in the video CB! lol.
November 13th, 2022 05:55
muffly muppet
L. B. Mek said:
your words went over me little head
but that music, seeped
deep, inside of me
what a wonderful gift
thank you! kind Poet
November 11th, 2022 07:42
L. B. Mek said:
your words went over me little head
but that music, seeped
deep, inside of me
what a wonderful gift
thank you! kind Poet
November 11th, 2022 07:42
muffly muppet
sorenbarrett said:
Somehow this little miss Tuffet sounds vaguely familiar. Are you sure that she is not operating under an assumed name? Could bear watching you know. enjoyed the word play.
November 11th, 2022 07:29
sorenbarrett said:
Somehow this little miss Tuffet sounds vaguely familiar. Are you sure that she is not operating under an assumed name? Could bear watching you know. enjoyed the word play.
November 11th, 2022 07:29
muffly muppet
orchidee said:
Do not \'Fall\' in the challenge. Corny joke there! lol.
November 11th, 2022 05:47
orchidee said:
Do not \'Fall\' in the challenge. Corny joke there! lol.
November 11th, 2022 05:47
fallen
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes that one last leaf can be so meaningful Rik.
Andy
November 11th, 2022 02:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes that one last leaf can be so meaningful Rik.
Andy
November 11th, 2022 02:16
fallen
Bella Shepard said:
Such wonderful, descriptive words dear poet. Sitting on my deck this morning I watched as your poem came to life. That last leaf finally succumbing, and joining the autumnal stream. It is no wonder that this season is so inspirational.
November 10th, 2022 14:20
Bella Shepard said:
Such wonderful, descriptive words dear poet. Sitting on my deck this morning I watched as your poem came to life. That last leaf finally succumbing, and joining the autumnal stream. It is no wonder that this season is so inspirational.
November 10th, 2022 14:20
fallen
Fay Slimm. said:
The feel of autumnal essence oozes from these expressive lines - - I love the metaphor of looking at autumn and wondering how long lovers have left before winter parts and berefts them.
November 10th, 2022 05:40
Fay Slimm. said:
The feel of autumnal essence oozes from these expressive lines - - I love the metaphor of looking at autumn and wondering how long lovers have left before winter parts and berefts them.
November 10th, 2022 05:40
fallen
A Boy With Roses said:
\"Sun ripe, weaving one last dream before joining; flowing on burnished autumnal stream.\"
This last stanza feels like a painting. A good painting.
November 10th, 2022 04:06
A Boy With Roses said:
\"Sun ripe, weaving one last dream before joining; flowing on burnished autumnal stream.\"
This last stanza feels like a painting. A good painting.
November 10th, 2022 04:06
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