Comments received on poems by arqios
clarity
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love the poem text image my friend! Really fits well. Love the poem too. A total fave. That last turn...“clarity not the absence of confusion, but its quiet companion”...hit me hard. Answers don’t always scream…sometimes they just wait beneath the noise. A beautiful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 19th, 2025 06:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love the poem text image my friend! Really fits well. Love the poem too. A total fave. That last turn...“clarity not the absence of confusion, but its quiet companion”...hit me hard. Answers don’t always scream…sometimes they just wait beneath the noise. A beautiful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 19th, 2025 06:46
simple sample
arqios said:
From lamplight scribbles to flickering screens, our relationship with words keeps reinventing itself. This piece looks back at how we once wrote, how we now connect, and how we might someday return to the quiet permanence of the printed page. It’s not a nostalgia trip so much as a reflection on the spaces, both private and public, where creativity has lived, and might live again.
August 19th, 2025 05:18
arqios said:
From lamplight scribbles to flickering screens, our relationship with words keeps reinventing itself. This piece looks back at how we once wrote, how we now connect, and how we might someday return to the quiet permanence of the printed page. It’s not a nostalgia trip so much as a reflection on the spaces, both private and public, where creativity has lived, and might live again.
August 19th, 2025 05:18
simple sample
Poetic Dan said:
Absolutely outstanding poetry
May that word we all search for be serenity
Thanks for sharing and spreading your harmony
August 19th, 2025 04:38
Poetic Dan said:
Absolutely outstanding poetry
May that word we all search for be serenity
Thanks for sharing and spreading your harmony
August 19th, 2025 04:38
simple sample
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed there is something distancing in the technological, mechanical tapping, in the glowing screen. Something much more personal in the organic feel of a fountain pen and the flow of the ink on the page. More thought before touching tip to page with indelible dye the can not be changed. Times have changed and with them we and our feelings. A lovely write
August 19th, 2025 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed there is something distancing in the technological, mechanical tapping, in the glowing screen. Something much more personal in the organic feel of a fountain pen and the flow of the ink on the page. More thought before touching tip to page with indelible dye the can not be changed. Times have changed and with them we and our feelings. A lovely write
August 19th, 2025 04:33
clarity
Neville said:
Inkredible wordsmithing demonstrated throughout .. so many best lines, the whole entity is that bloomin good .. Neville
August 19th, 2025 02:37
Neville said:
Inkredible wordsmithing demonstrated throughout .. so many best lines, the whole entity is that bloomin good .. Neville
August 19th, 2025 02:37
clarity
Poetic Dan said:
Although I write my knowledge of words is not great and got a bit lost on the way but the when I got to bottom of this page. I could feel a pleasant wave.
Maybe clarity came my way.
Keep up the write
Much peace and respect
August 19th, 2025 01:54
Poetic Dan said:
Although I write my knowledge of words is not great and got a bit lost on the way but the when I got to bottom of this page. I could feel a pleasant wave.
Maybe clarity came my way.
Keep up the write
Much peace and respect
August 19th, 2025 01:54
clarity
Goldfinch60 said:
Clarity is there arqios once we ever understand what is happening in this world, it may be a long time coming.
Andy
August 19th, 2025 01:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Clarity is there arqios once we ever understand what is happening in this world, it may be a long time coming.
Andy
August 19th, 2025 01:00
clarity
Poetic Licence said:
A life long search for clarity amongst the confusion as many do, I am sure it\'s there somewhere , but for me anyway it\'s very well hidden, enjoyed the read
August 18th, 2025 20:30
Poetic Licence said:
A life long search for clarity amongst the confusion as many do, I am sure it\'s there somewhere , but for me anyway it\'s very well hidden, enjoyed the read
August 18th, 2025 20:30
clarity
Friendship said:
The poem delves into themes of human vulnerability, the search for truth, and the nature of reality. It contemplates the interplay between confusion and clarity, portraying clarity as a companion to chaos rather than its opponent.
August 18th, 2025 20:23
Friendship said:
The poem delves into themes of human vulnerability, the search for truth, and the nature of reality. It contemplates the interplay between confusion and clarity, portraying clarity as a companion to chaos rather than its opponent.
August 18th, 2025 20:23
clarity
arqios said:
Sometimes you get the niggling feeling that welcome has been overstayed
August 18th, 2025 18:57
arqios said:
Sometimes you get the niggling feeling that welcome has been overstayed
August 18th, 2025 18:57
clarity
David Wakeling said:
Oh I think we all seek clarity in this confusing life.I\'m not sure I have found it.Like the poem says its waiting beneath the noise.A great poem.I enjoyed reading compadre
August 18th, 2025 17:46
David Wakeling said:
Oh I think we all seek clarity in this confusing life.I\'m not sure I have found it.Like the poem says its waiting beneath the noise.A great poem.I enjoyed reading compadre
August 18th, 2025 17:46
clarity
arqios said:
Sometimes we don’t get rid of the questions; we just learn to live alongside them. Clarity is a quiet walk through tangled thoughts and odd turns, pausing to notice the beauty in what isn’t perfectly straight. It’s an invitation to settle in and listen for the gentle truths drumming their beat underneath.
August 18th, 2025 05:15
arqios said:
Sometimes we don’t get rid of the questions; we just learn to live alongside them. Clarity is a quiet walk through tangled thoughts and odd turns, pausing to notice the beauty in what isn’t perfectly straight. It’s an invitation to settle in and listen for the gentle truths drumming their beat underneath.
August 18th, 2025 05:15
clarity
sorenbarrett said:
This one left me in a different land. I feel drifting somehow, vaguely aware that I have been here before. Nicely written
August 18th, 2025 03:43
sorenbarrett said:
This one left me in a different land. I feel drifting somehow, vaguely aware that I have been here before. Nicely written
August 18th, 2025 03:43
week in a wink
RSM0812 said:
This poem has a great beat and rhyme shceme. Nice job.
August 17th, 2025 23:32
RSM0812 said:
This poem has a great beat and rhyme shceme. Nice job.
August 17th, 2025 23:32
week in a wink
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, arqios,
This is lovely, it reads like a skipping rope ditty - the last two lines, a gem - a gem in the mud, that is. As I said, Lovely and then some.
Fond regards,
Tony.
August 17th, 2025 15:31
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, arqios,
This is lovely, it reads like a skipping rope ditty - the last two lines, a gem - a gem in the mud, that is. As I said, Lovely and then some.
Fond regards,
Tony.
August 17th, 2025 15:31
8-days in a gum-leaf blur
Tony Grannell said:
Good, day, arqios,
What a delightful passage of poetry - so entertaining with delicious quirky bits throughout the week. Lovely, truly lovely.
Fond regards,
Tony.
August 17th, 2025 12:46
Tony Grannell said:
Good, day, arqios,
What a delightful passage of poetry - so entertaining with delicious quirky bits throughout the week. Lovely, truly lovely.
Fond regards,
Tony.
August 17th, 2025 12:46
week in a wink
Neville said:
that BIG smile you just lent me is now a broad smile .. write across my face sidewards with the ends curled up at each corner .. nice one squire ..
August 17th, 2025 11:44
Neville said:
that BIG smile you just lent me is now a broad smile .. write across my face sidewards with the ends curled up at each corner .. nice one squire ..
August 17th, 2025 11:44
week in a wink
Kevin Hulme said:
Must be nice to hear Kookaburras first thing.
Enjoyed.
August 17th, 2025 08:59
Kevin Hulme said:
Must be nice to hear Kookaburras first thing.
Enjoyed.
August 17th, 2025 08:59
week in a wink
Tristan Robert Lange said:
No scrolling past by me...loved every movement through the week. What a wonderfully creative and poetic way to tackle the week! Love it, mon! We be jammin\' here! 🤣 A fave from me, dear friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 17th, 2025 07:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
No scrolling past by me...loved every movement through the week. What a wonderfully creative and poetic way to tackle the week! Love it, mon! We be jammin\' here! 🤣 A fave from me, dear friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 17th, 2025 07:35
week in a wink
arqios said:
Love how each day arrives with its own little cameo — trackpants and Tim-Tams setting the mood, kookaburras as the week’s chorus, hope literally striding in to clear the muck. The quick, breezy rhymes make it feel like flipping through a week’s worth of Polaroids, ending on that perfect contrast of gold and mud. It’s got that wink‑and‑wave tone that makes you want to read it aloud. And we hope reading it aloud is enjoyable! 🕊️🙏🏻
August 17th, 2025 05:02
arqios said:
Love how each day arrives with its own little cameo — trackpants and Tim-Tams setting the mood, kookaburras as the week’s chorus, hope literally striding in to clear the muck. The quick, breezy rhymes make it feel like flipping through a week’s worth of Polaroids, ending on that perfect contrast of gold and mud. It’s got that wink‑and‑wave tone that makes you want to read it aloud. And we hope reading it aloud is enjoyable! 🕊️🙏🏻
August 17th, 2025 05:02
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