Comments received on poems by arqios
ribald viscosity
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful words said with force. Lack of trust is hard to rebuild. The last stanza is the most difficult to understand but the most enlightening
October 8th, 2024 10:14
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful words said with force. Lack of trust is hard to rebuild. The last stanza is the most difficult to understand but the most enlightening
October 8th, 2024 10:14
ribald viscosity
Neville said:
Dont\'cha just love it when she lets ya talk dirty to her eh\' .. just don\'t do it on the first date .. otherwise you could be on a sticky wicket .. 😎👍
October 8th, 2024 07:59
Neville said:
Dont\'cha just love it when she lets ya talk dirty to her eh\' .. just don\'t do it on the first date .. otherwise you could be on a sticky wicket .. 😎👍
October 8th, 2024 07:59
being an npc in their story
sorenbarrett said:
Now here my friend you have tapped into multiple meanings from not standing up for values and liberties threatened to AI and many more in between. In your cryptic style you have left the door open for interpretation and so nicely in style and form. Definately a favorite
October 7th, 2024 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
Now here my friend you have tapped into multiple meanings from not standing up for values and liberties threatened to AI and many more in between. In your cryptic style you have left the door open for interpretation and so nicely in style and form. Definately a favorite
October 7th, 2024 04:40
by fiction of pen
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words my friend so poetic in form and word.
October 6th, 2024 18:40
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words my friend so poetic in form and word.
October 6th, 2024 18:40
look out tomorrow
sorenbarrett said:
A serious situation that I certainly hope works out well. My best wishes friend.
October 6th, 2024 18:30
sorenbarrett said:
A serious situation that I certainly hope works out well. My best wishes friend.
October 6th, 2024 18:30
verse on a hill
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully done Cryptic. Line after line building toward a meaningful end. The use of cliches to make something original. Brilliant
October 6th, 2024 05:41
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully done Cryptic. Line after line building toward a meaningful end. The use of cliches to make something original. Brilliant
October 6th, 2024 05:41
dream slices
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words to accompany stunning images my friend
October 3rd, 2024 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words to accompany stunning images my friend
October 3rd, 2024 04:33
rue the hay
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that goes far deeper than plants. A great metaphor for many things. Very nicely written
September 29th, 2024 19:32
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that goes far deeper than plants. A great metaphor for many things. Very nicely written
September 29th, 2024 19:32
mail carrier’s bill
Cheeky Missy said:
What the [*@#$%] is this?! Cryptic signifies nonsensical???? Nothing like interesting details in every little line where neither rhyme nor reason can see eye to eye. Lovely...
September 29th, 2024 19:27
Cheeky Missy said:
What the [*@#$%] is this?! Cryptic signifies nonsensical???? Nothing like interesting details in every little line where neither rhyme nor reason can see eye to eye. Lovely...
September 29th, 2024 19:27
mail carrier’s bill
sorenbarrett said:
I think I have seen this. A great image painted here. Good to read your poems again.
September 29th, 2024 19:26
sorenbarrett said:
I think I have seen this. A great image painted here. Good to read your poems again.
September 29th, 2024 19:26
long distance for now
Neville said:
my word, has it really been that long already .. how time flies .. you sure made me exercise my mental muscle this mane mate ..
three is not my personal lucky number by any means, but it is a very important number nevertheless .. where would we be without it eh\' .. Neville
February 19th, 2024 03:35
Neville said:
my word, has it really been that long already .. how time flies .. you sure made me exercise my mental muscle this mane mate ..
three is not my personal lucky number by any means, but it is a very important number nevertheless .. where would we be without it eh\' .. Neville
February 19th, 2024 03:35
long distance for now
Teddy.15 said:
Pushback for me is when I\'m sitting on that flight waiting to go, as I have more than one home in the world I feel your poem has brought a large amount of nostalgia to me, very nicely done. 🌹
February 18th, 2024 10:41
Teddy.15 said:
Pushback for me is when I\'m sitting on that flight waiting to go, as I have more than one home in the world I feel your poem has brought a large amount of nostalgia to me, very nicely done. 🌹
February 18th, 2024 10:41
long distance for now
sorenbarrett said:
Time stops for no man. A sense of urgency here and almost a sense of finality? The number three is magical and is equated to the trinity. Mentioned three times twice it leaves a feel of incompletion in that expectation that it will come once more to complete a series of nine.
February 18th, 2024 06:43
sorenbarrett said:
Time stops for no man. A sense of urgency here and almost a sense of finality? The number three is magical and is equated to the trinity. Mentioned three times twice it leaves a feel of incompletion in that expectation that it will come once more to complete a series of nine.
February 18th, 2024 06:43
long distance for now
orchidee said:
I missed the plane. I took four minutes to freshen up beforehand! lol.
There\'s a shortage of threes now!
February 18th, 2024 03:03
orchidee said:
I missed the plane. I took four minutes to freshen up beforehand! lol.
There\'s a shortage of threes now!
February 18th, 2024 03:03
long distance for now
Doggerel Dave said:
Three, three - it is everywhere in literature, et al.
Any insights while you\'re there?
February 18th, 2024 01:48
Doggerel Dave said:
Three, three - it is everywhere in literature, et al.
Any insights while you\'re there?
February 18th, 2024 01:48
rosy cheeked
sorenbarrett said:
Your poems are a privilege to review. I feel in ahh of their composition and images. This is another one that kindles deep emotions from depths unplumbed
February 14th, 2024 06:18
sorenbarrett said:
Your poems are a privilege to review. I feel in ahh of their composition and images. This is another one that kindles deep emotions from depths unplumbed
February 14th, 2024 06:18
rosy cheeked
Neville said:
this is uncannily good sir .. regards to your pen & with much respect ..
Neville
February 14th, 2024 04:01
Neville said:
this is uncannily good sir .. regards to your pen & with much respect ..
Neville
February 14th, 2024 04:01
think of others
Neville said:
there simply is not enough of it about .. is there ..
February 13th, 2024 14:23
Neville said:
there simply is not enough of it about .. is there ..
February 13th, 2024 14:23
think of others
sorenbarrett said:
Your poems always leave a great deal of room for interpretation. I identified with a feeling of \"who have you angered now\" in that personal attacks often come through in critiques of a person\'s poetry. Evocative bringing on the provocative where envy and jealousy play a role. I loved image of hirsute thoughts bristling.
February 13th, 2024 05:36
sorenbarrett said:
Your poems always leave a great deal of room for interpretation. I identified with a feeling of \"who have you angered now\" in that personal attacks often come through in critiques of a person\'s poetry. Evocative bringing on the provocative where envy and jealousy play a role. I loved image of hirsute thoughts bristling.
February 13th, 2024 05:36
think of others
orchidee said:
I gave up shallying, but having difficulty giving up shillying! It\'s Lent soon. I will try then. lol.
February 13th, 2024 02:57
orchidee said:
I gave up shallying, but having difficulty giving up shillying! It\'s Lent soon. I will try then. lol.
February 13th, 2024 02:57
think of you
sorenbarrett said:
As is common with you, your words are captivating and pregnant with meaning. I loved the imagery from beginning to end. The first line vivid but also creative, the second line following up made great sense for someone scavenging then I imagined the play on words that could be associated with your desert and the word dessert. This would put a different twist to the meaning. The middle line \"In picture-book perfect gales brought an abrupt stop to the top thought and like the gale indeed blew away the phisical image created in the first stanza transforming it into the last stanza, a metaphor from the physical to the emotional. A most wonderful transformation and wonderful ride on that picture-book perfect gale indeed.
February 12th, 2024 06:50
sorenbarrett said:
As is common with you, your words are captivating and pregnant with meaning. I loved the imagery from beginning to end. The first line vivid but also creative, the second line following up made great sense for someone scavenging then I imagined the play on words that could be associated with your desert and the word dessert. This would put a different twist to the meaning. The middle line \"In picture-book perfect gales brought an abrupt stop to the top thought and like the gale indeed blew away the phisical image created in the first stanza transforming it into the last stanza, a metaphor from the physical to the emotional. A most wonderful transformation and wonderful ride on that picture-book perfect gale indeed.
February 12th, 2024 06:50
think of you
Neville said:
there is much hunger here and a thirst I can feel ..
February 12th, 2024 06:32
Neville said:
there is much hunger here and a thirst I can feel ..
February 12th, 2024 06:32
think of you
orchidee said:
Yep, you\'ve lost me again in the crypticness of this - if that\'s even a word?! lol.
February 12th, 2024 02:49
orchidee said:
Yep, you\'ve lost me again in the crypticness of this - if that\'s even a word?! lol.
February 12th, 2024 02:49
think of me
orchidee said:
Well, I thought of ya by popping in here. Is that sufficient? Or ya want 20 \'likes\' if I could give them?! heehee.
We can cheat and \'like\' our own poems - but only once - one click. lol. We get caught out. On a second click on the \'like\' button, it goes back one number.
February 11th, 2024 09:51
orchidee said:
Well, I thought of ya by popping in here. Is that sufficient? Or ya want 20 \'likes\' if I could give them?! heehee.
We can cheat and \'like\' our own poems - but only once - one click. lol. We get caught out. On a second click on the \'like\' button, it goes back one number.
February 11th, 2024 09:51
think of me
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful and melancholic poem with wistful thoughts that evoke a deep longing. Magnificent
February 11th, 2024 06:54
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful and melancholic poem with wistful thoughts that evoke a deep longing. Magnificent
February 11th, 2024 06:54
poetically breathe
sorenbarrett said:
It is often from emptiness that a poem emerges. That void as the pause in breathing is the beginning of the next breath or creation. Or maybe I\'m just blowing a lot of hot air. Beautiful none the less it has a feeling of peace to it just like a calm breath.
February 4th, 2024 22:25
sorenbarrett said:
It is often from emptiness that a poem emerges. That void as the pause in breathing is the beginning of the next breath or creation. Or maybe I\'m just blowing a lot of hot air. Beautiful none the less it has a feeling of peace to it just like a calm breath.
February 4th, 2024 22:25
some things, we overlook
sorenbarrett said:
It is only when one is alone that one is free to express all that one has held inside. Simple on the surface yet deep below. The mask we wear with others is not what lies beneath. This seems mirrored in the very image of the poem where a toast may be expected, but the words we offer are not the emotions inside. Cheers Cryptic a poem to ponder over.
February 3rd, 2024 11:48
sorenbarrett said:
It is only when one is alone that one is free to express all that one has held inside. Simple on the surface yet deep below. The mask we wear with others is not what lies beneath. This seems mirrored in the very image of the poem where a toast may be expected, but the words we offer are not the emotions inside. Cheers Cryptic a poem to ponder over.
February 3rd, 2024 11:48
some things, we overlook
orchidee said:
Good write A.
I must know certain things, such as - how ya get those diamonds shape? What key to press? lol.
February 3rd, 2024 09:19
orchidee said:
Good write A.
I must know certain things, such as - how ya get those diamonds shape? What key to press? lol.
February 3rd, 2024 09:19
some things, we overlook
orchidee said:
Good write A.
I must know the things - how ya get those diamonds shape? What key to press? lol.
February 3rd, 2024 09:18
orchidee said:
Good write A.
I must know the things - how ya get those diamonds shape? What key to press? lol.
February 3rd, 2024 09:18
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