Comments received on poems by arqios
cure-alls
Friendship said:
Well written,Your poem explores themes of consumption, the search for meaning in art, and the contrast between public persona and private peace. It captures the essence of a society that prioritizes entertainment over profound artistic expression, revealing a sense of restlessness and dissatisfaction among its audience.
March 21st, 2025 12:46
Friendship said:
Well written,Your poem explores themes of consumption, the search for meaning in art, and the contrast between public persona and private peace. It captures the essence of a society that prioritizes entertainment over profound artistic expression, revealing a sense of restlessness and dissatisfaction among its audience.
March 21st, 2025 12:46
cure-alls
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautiful, arqios! Absolutely found truth in these words! Thank you for sharing their beauty and wisdom with us! 🌹👏
March 21st, 2025 08:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautiful, arqios! Absolutely found truth in these words! Thank you for sharing their beauty and wisdom with us! 🌹👏
March 21st, 2025 08:25
cure-alls
David Wakeling said:
Show us the justice of Poetry. Making me think again. Amazing poem with rhyme as well.
March 21st, 2025 04:59
David Wakeling said:
Show us the justice of Poetry. Making me think again. Amazing poem with rhyme as well.
March 21st, 2025 04:59
cure-alls
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoyed the read as it is very relatable to a lot of people, though I am still searching for that peace, have a great day
March 21st, 2025 04:47
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoyed the read as it is very relatable to a lot of people, though I am still searching for that peace, have a great day
March 21st, 2025 04:47
cure-alls
sorenbarrett said:
In comfort our choice of entertainment is far different than when under threat. This poem speaks to me on different levels poems I appreciate today are not the same tomorrow and like music are dictated by and also influence my mood of the moment. It is the last two lines that settle the poem. Loved it Cryptic
March 21st, 2025 04:06
sorenbarrett said:
In comfort our choice of entertainment is far different than when under threat. This poem speaks to me on different levels poems I appreciate today are not the same tomorrow and like music are dictated by and also influence my mood of the moment. It is the last two lines that settle the poem. Loved it Cryptic
March 21st, 2025 04:06
cure-alls
orchidee said:
Good write A. There\'s an olde hymn \'Teach me, my God and King\' that has a sort of alchemy theme. \'This is the precious stone, That turneth all to gold\', as if it\'s a cure-all, an elixir. Plus other alchemical connotations in the same hymn. But not meaning magically.
March 21st, 2025 03:20
orchidee said:
Good write A. There\'s an olde hymn \'Teach me, my God and King\' that has a sort of alchemy theme. \'This is the precious stone, That turneth all to gold\', as if it\'s a cure-all, an elixir. Plus other alchemical connotations in the same hymn. But not meaning magically.
March 21st, 2025 03:20
cure-alls
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words arqios, that private peace is within us all.
Andy
March 21st, 2025 02:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words arqios, that private peace is within us all.
Andy
March 21st, 2025 02:50
déjà brew
Tristan Robert Lange said:
How was the flight? ✈️ 🤣 As for the poem, truly wonderful. Loved the flow of this and metaphor! And, truly, smelling a good brew is like de ja vu every time! 🌹👏
March 20th, 2025 09:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
How was the flight? ✈️ 🤣 As for the poem, truly wonderful. Loved the flow of this and metaphor! And, truly, smelling a good brew is like de ja vu every time! 🌹👏
March 20th, 2025 09:01
déjà brew
Friendship said:
Nicely done,
You seem to have a memory , a strong sense of smell and atmosphere.
March 20th, 2025 07:08
Friendship said:
Nicely done,
You seem to have a memory , a strong sense of smell and atmosphere.
March 20th, 2025 07:08
déjà brew
Mutley Ravishes said:
I learned a new word today. Thanks! And this is coming from a tea drinker.....
March 20th, 2025 05:35
Mutley Ravishes said:
I learned a new word today. Thanks! And this is coming from a tea drinker.....
March 20th, 2025 05:35
déjà brew
Poetic Licence said:
Sharing is a wonderful thing in any form and so is the smell of fresh coffee, enjoyed the read
March 20th, 2025 04:56
Poetic Licence said:
Sharing is a wonderful thing in any form and so is the smell of fresh coffee, enjoyed the read
March 20th, 2025 04:56
déjà brew
sorenbarrett said:
This is not referring to Kopi luwak coffee is it? lol This write requires time to filter through this old brain and settle. It is subtle and like a deja vu has an air of familiarity. Nicely done.
March 20th, 2025 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
This is not referring to Kopi luwak coffee is it? lol This write requires time to filter through this old brain and settle. It is subtle and like a deja vu has an air of familiarity. Nicely done.
March 20th, 2025 04:26
déjà brew
Goldfinch60 said:
That sharing is so important in our lives arqios.
Andy
March 20th, 2025 02:52
Goldfinch60 said:
That sharing is so important in our lives arqios.
Andy
March 20th, 2025 02:52
unveiling
Goldfinch60 said:
Each words we write arqios comes from within us to be shared with all.
Andy
March 20th, 2025 02:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Each words we write arqios comes from within us to be shared with all.
Andy
March 20th, 2025 02:23
déjà brew
Caring dove said:
Nice and interesting writing liked the read .. nice rhyming in this
March 20th, 2025 01:56
Caring dove said:
Nice and interesting writing liked the read .. nice rhyming in this
March 20th, 2025 01:56
unveiling
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The smooth beauty of this poem, it\'s rhyme scheme, and the mystery of it all...the unveiling...all make this poem stand out for me. Not to mention the thoughtful insight your poetry always incorporates. A great poem on writing poetry and creating art in general. A fave for sure my friend. 👏🌹
March 19th, 2025 08:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The smooth beauty of this poem, it\'s rhyme scheme, and the mystery of it all...the unveiling...all make this poem stand out for me. Not to mention the thoughtful insight your poetry always incorporates. A great poem on writing poetry and creating art in general. A fave for sure my friend. 👏🌹
March 19th, 2025 08:43
unveiling
Salvia.S said:
A beautiful ode to the power of poetry to reveal truth and guide us!
March 19th, 2025 07:49
Salvia.S said:
A beautiful ode to the power of poetry to reveal truth and guide us!
March 19th, 2025 07:49
unveiling
Friendship said:
Beautifuly done,Your poem addresses the nature of poetry itself, exploring themes of clarity, truth, and the challenges posed by overly complicated language. It advocates for the value of simple, honest expression in revealing fundamental truths.
March 19th, 2025 07:25
Friendship said:
Beautifuly done,Your poem addresses the nature of poetry itself, exploring themes of clarity, truth, and the challenges posed by overly complicated language. It advocates for the value of simple, honest expression in revealing fundamental truths.
March 19th, 2025 07:25
unveiling
Poetic Licence said:
Flows nicely, lovely message within and includes a poets message, really enjoyed
March 19th, 2025 06:57
Poetic Licence said:
Flows nicely, lovely message within and includes a poets message, really enjoyed
March 19th, 2025 06:57
unveiling
David Wakeling said:
This is a master piece both in structure and cadence, Very enjoyable to read.In tangled woods of prose we stray.Just wonderful.
March 19th, 2025 05:17
David Wakeling said:
This is a master piece both in structure and cadence, Very enjoyable to read.In tangled woods of prose we stray.Just wonderful.
March 19th, 2025 05:17
whale-watching season
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write with some wonderful lines. This works on several levels. Nicely done.
March 19th, 2025 04:16
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write with some wonderful lines. This works on several levels. Nicely done.
March 19th, 2025 04:16
unveiling
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully rhymed and metered it also sends a poet\'s message. So smooth it has to be a fave
March 19th, 2025 03:29
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully rhymed and metered it also sends a poet\'s message. So smooth it has to be a fave
March 19th, 2025 03:29
unveiling
Caring dove said:
That’s lovely )) really liked reading this
Love how you have mentioned a forest wood and trees to talk of words and writing .. very nice
March 19th, 2025 03:14
Caring dove said:
That’s lovely )) really liked reading this
Love how you have mentioned a forest wood and trees to talk of words and writing .. very nice
March 19th, 2025 03:14
pulse
Kevin Hulme said:
Wonderful poem about Nature and life. Having trouble logging in to M.P.S. Widgets or Robots , \'Danger Will Robinson\' . Doing this on another device. Hopefully normal service will be resumed.
March 18th, 2025 20:08
Kevin Hulme said:
Wonderful poem about Nature and life. Having trouble logging in to M.P.S. Widgets or Robots , \'Danger Will Robinson\' . Doing this on another device. Hopefully normal service will be resumed.
March 18th, 2025 20:08
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