Comments received on poems by arqios
come and get it
sorenbarrett said:
This one rings a bell. I used to bring cows in at night from the pasture and it brings back memories just like echoes.
April 17th, 2023 08:49
sorenbarrett said:
This one rings a bell. I used to bring cows in at night from the pasture and it brings back memories just like echoes.
April 17th, 2023 08:49
bedtime symphony
2781 said:
It\'s tricky to comment on..\"one generation passes away and another generation comes; but the earth abides forever.\" I used to think smart phones were evil.
April 16th, 2023 07:58
2781 said:
It\'s tricky to comment on..\"one generation passes away and another generation comes; but the earth abides forever.\" I used to think smart phones were evil.
April 16th, 2023 07:58
Kernou
sorenbarrett said:
Having been raised for the first two years of my life in a mining town (Now a ghost town) so the lines: \"ghosts of centuries of mining towns and specters of legend\" have a special meaning for me. Although they say that one does not remember befor they aquire language I have vivid visual memories of this mountain mining town that the details were confirked by my parents. In this town in a house next to ours there was a card game where a man was shot to death and the word spectre has meaning. dydh da to you as well.
April 16th, 2023 06:09
sorenbarrett said:
Having been raised for the first two years of my life in a mining town (Now a ghost town) so the lines: \"ghosts of centuries of mining towns and specters of legend\" have a special meaning for me. Although they say that one does not remember befor they aquire language I have vivid visual memories of this mountain mining town that the details were confirked by my parents. In this town in a house next to ours there was a card game where a man was shot to death and the word spectre has meaning. dydh da to you as well.
April 16th, 2023 06:09
Kernou
Neville said:
I was raised in gullworthy cottages a mere spit from the banks of the good old Tamar who has featured variously amongst my own little scribbles over a good many years .. Girt lush squire .. I will have to give lady Fay a nudge since I believe she resides thereabouts ... Neville
April 15th, 2023 14:27
Neville said:
I was raised in gullworthy cottages a mere spit from the banks of the good old Tamar who has featured variously amongst my own little scribbles over a good many years .. Girt lush squire .. I will have to give lady Fay a nudge since I believe she resides thereabouts ... Neville
April 15th, 2023 14:27
Kernou
Bella Shepard said:
Dear Bard, did some googling on this one and found the answers to my questions. In doing so I learned something about the Cornish tongue, and it is lovely. I\'m a huge fan of \"Doc Martin\", and scenes of the beautiful Cornish coast. What a delightful piece, thank you!
April 15th, 2023 13:16
Bella Shepard said:
Dear Bard, did some googling on this one and found the answers to my questions. In doing so I learned something about the Cornish tongue, and it is lovely. I\'m a huge fan of \"Doc Martin\", and scenes of the beautiful Cornish coast. What a delightful piece, thank you!
April 15th, 2023 13:16
Kernou
orchidee said:
Bit of French there? Doh! I\'m not expanding my Cornish vocabulary! lol.
April 15th, 2023 10:55
orchidee said:
Bit of French there? Doh! I\'m not expanding my Cornish vocabulary! lol.
April 15th, 2023 10:55
Kernou
Eugene S. said:
Interesting. I\'m expanding my Cornish vocabulary and my understand of the UK landscape. dydh da
April 15th, 2023 10:27
Eugene S. said:
Interesting. I\'m expanding my Cornish vocabulary and my understand of the UK landscape. dydh da
April 15th, 2023 10:27
life from home
Neville said:
lockdown days off to a T sir ..
funny thing is, I\'ve been thinking a lot about light emitting diodes myself recently ... 🐧
April 15th, 2023 03:43
Neville said:
lockdown days off to a T sir ..
funny thing is, I\'ve been thinking a lot about light emitting diodes myself recently ... 🐧
April 15th, 2023 03:43
life from home
2781 said:
Sounds nifty. We have ducted with a long hose, awkward but the decibels give the neighbours blower some competition.
April 14th, 2023 07:58
2781 said:
Sounds nifty. We have ducted with a long hose, awkward but the decibels give the neighbours blower some competition.
April 14th, 2023 07:58
seasonal diabetes
Neville said:
Great title lost somewhere in translation ...... maybe :)
April 13th, 2023 13:06
Neville said:
Great title lost somewhere in translation ...... maybe :)
April 13th, 2023 13:06
seasonal diabetes
sorenbarrett said:
This one left me thinking and that is dangerous. I often see things that others don\'t and that is called hallucinations, delusions or just plain crazy. Here the reversal of the letters reveal poetically stated the mental part of illness. \"emditation\" meditation, \"dictated maladies\" too many m\'s and another reversal of letters for intimidation- quite intimidating indeed. Another reversal on climbing. Not aware of seasonal diabetes, unless you over eat candies and sugars on the holidays. If there were I\'m sure it would have a temporary effect on the eyesight and maybe the spelling. Or was it just deliberate to boggle my mind?
April 13th, 2023 12:39
sorenbarrett said:
This one left me thinking and that is dangerous. I often see things that others don\'t and that is called hallucinations, delusions or just plain crazy. Here the reversal of the letters reveal poetically stated the mental part of illness. \"emditation\" meditation, \"dictated maladies\" too many m\'s and another reversal of letters for intimidation- quite intimidating indeed. Another reversal on climbing. Not aware of seasonal diabetes, unless you over eat candies and sugars on the holidays. If there were I\'m sure it would have a temporary effect on the eyesight and maybe the spelling. Or was it just deliberate to boggle my mind?
April 13th, 2023 12:39
seasonal diabetes
orchidee said:
That spell-checker didn\'t work today then?! lol.
April 13th, 2023 11:54
orchidee said:
That spell-checker didn\'t work today then?! lol.
April 13th, 2023 11:54
full stop
Bella Shepard said:
Dear friend I am of two thoughts here, the light at the intersection of the road, or the intersection of life. Either one will require patience and consideration as we proceed. Just loved this one!
April 8th, 2023 13:01
Bella Shepard said:
Dear friend I am of two thoughts here, the light at the intersection of the road, or the intersection of life. Either one will require patience and consideration as we proceed. Just loved this one!
April 8th, 2023 13:01
full stop
sorenbarrett said:
Been there, done that. That is to say in literal traffic and also metaphorically. The traffic now days is really bad.
April 5th, 2023 09:18
sorenbarrett said:
Been there, done that. That is to say in literal traffic and also metaphorically. The traffic now days is really bad.
April 5th, 2023 09:18
full stop
Neville said:
knuckles clenched & turning white .. drowning in adrenaline ..
I know those lights only too well ..
April 5th, 2023 08:50
Neville said:
knuckles clenched & turning white .. drowning in adrenaline ..
I know those lights only too well ..
April 5th, 2023 08:50
full stop
orchidee said:
Good write CB. Now for my next poem: \'comma\', or it might be \'colon\' - notice one got in there in this comment?
April 5th, 2023 07:54
orchidee said:
Good write CB. Now for my next poem: \'comma\', or it might be \'colon\' - notice one got in there in this comment?
April 5th, 2023 07:54
full stop
2781 said:
My wife tells me they target yellow light runners now. I don\'t want to curse myself so I will shut up.
April 5th, 2023 07:25
2781 said:
My wife tells me they target yellow light runners now. I don\'t want to curse myself so I will shut up.
April 5th, 2023 07:25
stairs
Neville said:
I hear stairs have their own local accent or dialect .. I sure wooden be surprised ............. N :)
April 4th, 2023 12:16
Neville said:
I hear stairs have their own local accent or dialect .. I sure wooden be surprised ............. N :)
April 4th, 2023 12:16
hanami
Bella Shepard said:
This poem is truly a beautiful memorium to a beloved father, such gentle and loving words. Thank you for sharing dear friend, God bless you and dad.
April 3rd, 2023 13:51
Bella Shepard said:
This poem is truly a beautiful memorium to a beloved father, such gentle and loving words. Thank you for sharing dear friend, God bless you and dad.
April 3rd, 2023 13:51
battle and dream
L. B. Mek said:
\'out of arms reach\'
but not far from reverie\'s, reveal
oft, what we forget, regrets n all
we so enthusiastically, recall
(love the metaphorical, poetic layering
a lovely read, thank you dear Poet)
March 31st, 2023 02:46
L. B. Mek said:
\'out of arms reach\'
but not far from reverie\'s, reveal
oft, what we forget, regrets n all
we so enthusiastically, recall
(love the metaphorical, poetic layering
a lovely read, thank you dear Poet)
March 31st, 2023 02:46
battle and dream
Bella Shepard said:
The slings and arrows of outrageous fortune will always get us, no matter how big or small, or even minute they be. In our simplest flaws of character, we realize our own vulnerabalities and how little we control. Wisely worded dear poet.
March 30th, 2023 13:11
Bella Shepard said:
The slings and arrows of outrageous fortune will always get us, no matter how big or small, or even minute they be. In our simplest flaws of character, we realize our own vulnerabalities and how little we control. Wisely worded dear poet.
March 30th, 2023 13:11
battle and dream
Fay Slimm. said:
Methinks this is a reflection of early experience - A long-ago memory of trying to beat the results of a boozing weekend ? - -
March 30th, 2023 12:24
Fay Slimm. said:
Methinks this is a reflection of early experience - A long-ago memory of trying to beat the results of a boozing weekend ? - -
March 30th, 2023 12:24
battle and dream
Neville said:
Takes me back a bit & then some .. Friday nights particularly spring to mind ..
March 30th, 2023 09:03
Neville said:
Takes me back a bit & then some .. Friday nights particularly spring to mind ..
March 30th, 2023 09:03
awkward footfalls
Neville said:
now just let that be a warming to you all folks ..
March 29th, 2023 05:14
Neville said:
now just let that be a warming to you all folks ..
March 29th, 2023 05:14
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