Comments received on poems by arqios
not to the swift
Neville said:
Bravo dear literary friend .. it just had to be said .. Its not always the case, of more the merrier is it .. Quality must always reign supreme .. Well at least in my book .. Neville
February 1st, 2025 03:26
Neville said:
Bravo dear literary friend .. it just had to be said .. Its not always the case, of more the merrier is it .. Quality must always reign supreme .. Well at least in my book .. Neville
February 1st, 2025 03:26
speak to them
Michael Edwards said:
Such an elegant write. and I hear/feel (not sure which) the ribald viscosity.
February 1st, 2025 03:18
Michael Edwards said:
Such an elegant write. and I hear/feel (not sure which) the ribald viscosity.
February 1st, 2025 03:18
not to the swift
Cheeky Missy said:
David Main\'s Treasury of English Sonnets first introduced me to the comment from dear Shakespeare\'s generation regarding his work by one Francis Mere, I think it was, about the \"coterie of friends...[privy to and enjoying] his sugared sonnets--\", a reality few, if any of us know. Either that, or else the world 400 years later is too craven to offer such favor as poetry meet ups feature souls more keen on themselves than each other\'s excellences. Exquisitely rendered with charming imagery and a haunting poignancy, thank you for sharing.
January 31st, 2025 18:28
Cheeky Missy said:
David Main\'s Treasury of English Sonnets first introduced me to the comment from dear Shakespeare\'s generation regarding his work by one Francis Mere, I think it was, about the \"coterie of friends...[privy to and enjoying] his sugared sonnets--\", a reality few, if any of us know. Either that, or else the world 400 years later is too craven to offer such favor as poetry meet ups feature souls more keen on themselves than each other\'s excellences. Exquisitely rendered with charming imagery and a haunting poignancy, thank you for sharing.
January 31st, 2025 18:28
not to the swift
David Wakeling said:
This beautiful and sad. I see the plight of the writer. Excellent writing.Enjoyed reading
January 31st, 2025 15:15
David Wakeling said:
This beautiful and sad. I see the plight of the writer. Excellent writing.Enjoyed reading
January 31st, 2025 15:15
not to the swift
Poetic Licence said:
In anything quality over quantity is better, yet it is achieving that quality that is the struggle, enjoyed the read
January 31st, 2025 11:29
Poetic Licence said:
In anything quality over quantity is better, yet it is achieving that quality that is the struggle, enjoyed the read
January 31st, 2025 11:29
bridge is out
Kevin Hulme said:
Find poem about Breaking of a Relationship. And of course the wonderful ‘ABBA’.
January 31st, 2025 09:26
Kevin Hulme said:
Find poem about Breaking of a Relationship. And of course the wonderful ‘ABBA’.
January 31st, 2025 09:26
not to the swift
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Quality over quantity. This, by the way, is a quality poem about the writing that I thoroughly enjoyed. Loved the flow of it. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
January 31st, 2025 08:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Quality over quantity. This, by the way, is a quality poem about the writing that I thoroughly enjoyed. Loved the flow of it. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
January 31st, 2025 08:26
not to the swift
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed it is true that in poetry it is not quantity but quality that is the issue. Very nicely said
January 31st, 2025 07:12
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed it is true that in poetry it is not quantity but quality that is the issue. Very nicely said
January 31st, 2025 07:12
bully-free
Dan Williams said:
Anger seeded by taunts, but then \"Replaced by a sense of resolve,\". I think you have this figured out.. Well done.
January 30th, 2025 23:55
Dan Williams said:
Anger seeded by taunts, but then \"Replaced by a sense of resolve,\". I think you have this figured out.. Well done.
January 30th, 2025 23:55
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Dan Williams said:
So nice. \"burying the past in shallow graves\" revolves into \"some wounds will never truly mend.\", very nice.
January 30th, 2025 23:53
Dan Williams said:
So nice. \"burying the past in shallow graves\" revolves into \"some wounds will never truly mend.\", very nice.
January 30th, 2025 23:53
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NafisaSB said:
Wow that’s so brave and inspirational
Loved the concept of empathy
January 30th, 2025 23:07
NafisaSB said:
Wow that’s so brave and inspirational
Loved the concept of empathy
January 30th, 2025 23:07
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Accidental Poet said:
Well penned arqios, sadly it is a part of life. But not all relationships follow this path, some follow a path lined with roses along the way. 🌹
January 30th, 2025 10:09
Accidental Poet said:
Well penned arqios, sadly it is a part of life. But not all relationships follow this path, some follow a path lined with roses along the way. 🌹
January 30th, 2025 10:09
bridge is out
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Breaking up is never easy and, truth, some wounds never truly heal. I have a few of them myself. This is an easy fave for me my friend. Well done! 🌹👏
January 30th, 2025 08:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Breaking up is never easy and, truth, some wounds never truly heal. I have a few of them myself. This is an easy fave for me my friend. Well done! 🌹👏
January 30th, 2025 08:29
bridge is out
Teddy.15 said:
A superbly written piece dear arqios
We deceive ourselves,
clutching memories like
fragments of a broken mirror,
forgetting the faces we wore,
the warmth that once held us close,
burying the past
in shallow graves.
Isn\'t it truly a tragedy when two people feel there is nothing left to say or do. Absolutely heartfelt my friend. 🌹
January 30th, 2025 04:58
Teddy.15 said:
A superbly written piece dear arqios
We deceive ourselves,
clutching memories like
fragments of a broken mirror,
forgetting the faces we wore,
the warmth that once held us close,
burying the past
in shallow graves.
Isn\'t it truly a tragedy when two people feel there is nothing left to say or do. Absolutely heartfelt my friend. 🌹
January 30th, 2025 04:58
bridge is out
sorenbarrett said:
This poem sings in a haunting dark fog. It is well worded and conveys well the message of past pain and hurt of burnt bridges and lost relationships. It offers little hope but the consolation that others too have walked this path. I deserves a fave
January 30th, 2025 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
This poem sings in a haunting dark fog. It is well worded and conveys well the message of past pain and hurt of burnt bridges and lost relationships. It offers little hope but the consolation that others too have walked this path. I deserves a fave
January 30th, 2025 04:25
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David Wakeling said:
Sadly I believe every relationship must fail.Its a law of physics called entropy.This a thoughtful poem linking many of the emotions involved in breaking up.Well done
January 30th, 2025 03:21
David Wakeling said:
Sadly I believe every relationship must fail.Its a law of physics called entropy.This a thoughtful poem linking many of the emotions involved in breaking up.Well done
January 30th, 2025 03:21
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Poetic Licence said:
Breaking up isn`t easy, breaking up in the right way is even harder either way memories take a long time to fade. A lovely read.
January 30th, 2025 03:09
Poetic Licence said:
Breaking up isn`t easy, breaking up in the right way is even harder either way memories take a long time to fade. A lovely read.
January 30th, 2025 03:09
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Goldfinch60 said:
I can understand this arqios but it is harder when your loved one dies as my wife did five years ago.
Andy
January 30th, 2025 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
I can understand this arqios but it is harder when your loved one dies as my wife did five years ago.
Andy
January 30th, 2025 02:48
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Cheeky Missy said:
ABBA!!!! Oh, I love them! Quintessentially perfect for this painfully eloquent number, where love is in the entire affair, I wonder since that\'s the only glue which holds. [Keeping it playing on repeat...] Exquisite and rendered superbly with perfect imagery and a bitter poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
January 30th, 2025 02:46
Cheeky Missy said:
ABBA!!!! Oh, I love them! Quintessentially perfect for this painfully eloquent number, where love is in the entire affair, I wonder since that\'s the only glue which holds. [Keeping it playing on repeat...] Exquisite and rendered superbly with perfect imagery and a bitter poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
January 30th, 2025 02:46
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Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words arqios, may that Spirit soar forever.
Andy
January 30th, 2025 02:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words arqios, may that Spirit soar forever.
Andy
January 30th, 2025 02:26
into the arms of night
NafisaSB said:
such a tender and lyrical way of expressing how to end the day, and fall asleep peacefully. Bravo, well done
January 29th, 2025 23:25
NafisaSB said:
such a tender and lyrical way of expressing how to end the day, and fall asleep peacefully. Bravo, well done
January 29th, 2025 23:25
bully-free
Cassie58 said:
A determination to rise above
That takes much courage but is the only way to deal with the situation. Stand up to them, then they will go elsewhere. Much wisdom in your fine words arqios.
January 29th, 2025 17:59
Cassie58 said:
A determination to rise above
That takes much courage but is the only way to deal with the situation. Stand up to them, then they will go elsewhere. Much wisdom in your fine words arqios.
January 29th, 2025 17:59
bully-free
David Wakeling said:
I am old enough now that all my bullys are dead.That\'s the secret to life.Live longer than your bullys.Bullys are just impotent .Excellent poem enjoyed
January 29th, 2025 15:45
David Wakeling said:
I am old enough now that all my bullys are dead.That\'s the secret to life.Live longer than your bullys.Bullys are just impotent .Excellent poem enjoyed
January 29th, 2025 15:45
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Neville said:
Sage words for the downtrodden .. excellent .. Neville
January 29th, 2025 12:56
Neville said:
Sage words for the downtrodden .. excellent .. Neville
January 29th, 2025 12:56
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