Comments received on poems by arqios
the road to here and there
Jerry Reynolds said:
So much fun today. Good write, arqios.
August 2nd, 2025 06:49
Jerry Reynolds said:
So much fun today. Good write, arqios.
August 2nd, 2025 06:49
the road to here and there
arqios said:
Hope either or both works in your reading!
August 2nd, 2025 05:35
arqios said:
Hope either or both works in your reading!
August 2nd, 2025 05:35
the road to here and there
Poetic Licence said:
This entertaining read is describing the highway of my life, enjoyed the read
August 2nd, 2025 05:24
Poetic Licence said:
This entertaining read is describing the highway of my life, enjoyed the read
August 2nd, 2025 05:24
the road to here and there
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read Cryptic just remember that the road to underwear leads people to stare
August 2nd, 2025 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read Cryptic just remember that the road to underwear leads people to stare
August 2nd, 2025 04:03
firefly tandem
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words arqios, happy birthday to her.
Andy
August 2nd, 2025 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words arqios, happy birthday to her.
Andy
August 2nd, 2025 01:48
firefly tandem
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes we watch them grow up and realize we have also. Enjoyed.
August 1st, 2025 18:26
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes we watch them grow up and realize we have also. Enjoyed.
August 1st, 2025 18:26
firefly tandem
arqios said:
…sometimes two for one hardly makes a dent… curios.
August 1st, 2025 08:18
arqios said:
…sometimes two for one hardly makes a dent… curios.
August 1st, 2025 08:18
firefly tandem
Poetic Licence said:
Beautifully and joyous words celebrating the unbroken love between Father and Daughter, enjoyed the read
August 1st, 2025 07:59
Poetic Licence said:
Beautifully and joyous words celebrating the unbroken love between Father and Daughter, enjoyed the read
August 1st, 2025 07:59
firefly tandem
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, arqios,
A glowing tribute and birthday wishes from a loving father to his beloved daughter. A seam rich in light runs through each verse, where fireflies hail from, celebrating a never-ending love from child to teenager. Just beautiful.
Wishing you all the very best and your darling daughter a very happy birthday.
Tony
August 1st, 2025 05:27
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, arqios,
A glowing tribute and birthday wishes from a loving father to his beloved daughter. A seam rich in light runs through each verse, where fireflies hail from, celebrating a never-ending love from child to teenager. Just beautiful.
Wishing you all the very best and your darling daughter a very happy birthday.
Tony
August 1st, 2025 05:27
firefly tandem
arqios said:
Two poems intertwining over a span of 15 years. Happy birthday to my darling child. 🕊️🙏🏻
August 1st, 2025 04:59
arqios said:
Two poems intertwining over a span of 15 years. Happy birthday to my darling child. 🕊️🙏🏻
August 1st, 2025 04:59
firefly tandem
sorenbarrett said:
Most creative Cryptic this time span, evolution and intertwining of poems with evident evolution over time marking the concept itself. Very clever.
August 1st, 2025 04:39
sorenbarrett said:
Most creative Cryptic this time span, evolution and intertwining of poems with evident evolution over time marking the concept itself. Very clever.
August 1st, 2025 04:39
“games we play”
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words arqios and seeing morns early light every day is wonderful.
Andy
August 1st, 2025 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words arqios and seeing morns early light every day is wonderful.
Andy
August 1st, 2025 01:11
“games we play”
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem \"Games We Play\" explores the complexities of communication and connection in modern relationships, particularly in the digital age. It emphasizes the tension between the desire for authentic emotional connection and the superficial interactions that often dominate our lives.
July 31st, 2025 17:57
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem \"Games We Play\" explores the complexities of communication and connection in modern relationships, particularly in the digital age. It emphasizes the tension between the desire for authentic emotional connection and the superficial interactions that often dominate our lives.
July 31st, 2025 17:57
“games we play”
Tony Grannell said:
\'At your dawn I pin my doubts to linen white, while chords of conflict bruise my fragile calm;\' did it for me. As if out of a dream to be bruised by the reality of me. The poem as a whole is superlative in its composition and beautiful in its portrayal. I love how the stanzas get thicker as they approach the inevitable dawn - the light bearing down on the darkness and the sleeping poet sensing the change of a day anew. Very well done, arqios, accolades galore for this one.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
July 31st, 2025 05:59
Tony Grannell said:
\'At your dawn I pin my doubts to linen white, while chords of conflict bruise my fragile calm;\' did it for me. As if out of a dream to be bruised by the reality of me. The poem as a whole is superlative in its composition and beautiful in its portrayal. I love how the stanzas get thicker as they approach the inevitable dawn - the light bearing down on the darkness and the sleeping poet sensing the change of a day anew. Very well done, arqios, accolades galore for this one.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
July 31st, 2025 05:59
“games we play”
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, a beautiful poem arqios. I fell in love with the first six lines. The short-order cook in me kept feeling for a couplet at the end of each. Rendering four beautiful poems.
July 31st, 2025 05:55
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, a beautiful poem arqios. I fell in love with the first six lines. The short-order cook in me kept feeling for a couplet at the end of each. Rendering four beautiful poems.
July 31st, 2025 05:55
“games we play”
arqios said:
a fourth then a fifth then a sixth.... even an 8th and 16th... hahaha
July 31st, 2025 05:52
arqios said:
a fourth then a fifth then a sixth.... even an 8th and 16th... hahaha
July 31st, 2025 05:52
“games we play”
sorenbarrett said:
I was taken by the regularity of meter amidst changing rhyme scheme that like waves on the sea came against the shore in differing size. It was the rhythm and varying rhyme that took me most the wording aided in giving a soft and flowing feel to the work and of the lines I think my favorite were:
In fiery fonts I bind our sacred vow,
as embers dim and twilight takes its bow.
Beautiful imagery here. a fave
July 31st, 2025 03:38
sorenbarrett said:
I was taken by the regularity of meter amidst changing rhyme scheme that like waves on the sea came against the shore in differing size. It was the rhythm and varying rhyme that took me most the wording aided in giving a soft and flowing feel to the work and of the lines I think my favorite were:
In fiery fonts I bind our sacred vow,
as embers dim and twilight takes its bow.
Beautiful imagery here. a fave
July 31st, 2025 03:38
“games we play”
arqios said:
… sharing a newish poem today that dives into our midnight exchanges and the sunrise reflections they spark, no spoilers, just the rhythm of screens and dawn. Which image or line hit home for you? How do you feel when the glow of your device meets the first light of morning? I’d love to hear your take. 👍🏻📝🕊️🙏🏻
July 31st, 2025 03:12
arqios said:
… sharing a newish poem today that dives into our midnight exchanges and the sunrise reflections they spark, no spoilers, just the rhythm of screens and dawn. Which image or line hit home for you? How do you feel when the glow of your device meets the first light of morning? I’d love to hear your take. 👍🏻📝🕊️🙏🏻
July 31st, 2025 03:12
epilogue: the seed beyond memory
orchidee said:
Oooh, I don\'t know them guys and gals in this poem - You wouldn\'t, says Fido to me. lol.
July 30th, 2025 13:43
orchidee said:
Oooh, I don\'t know them guys and gals in this poem - You wouldn\'t, says Fido to me. lol.
July 30th, 2025 13:43
epilogue: the seed beyond memory
Bella Shepard said:
The resiliance of the human spirit in this poem gives hope to all. We have all that we need to begin again, we have each other. Beautifully told!
July 30th, 2025 10:37
Bella Shepard said:
The resiliance of the human spirit in this poem gives hope to all. We have all that we need to begin again, we have each other. Beautifully told!
July 30th, 2025 10:37
epilogue: the seed beyond memory
Jerry Reynolds said:
Splendid, arqios. A fine poem.
July 30th, 2025 06:28
Jerry Reynolds said:
Splendid, arqios. A fine poem.
July 30th, 2025 06:28
epilogue: the seed beyond memory
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely conclusion, ending on a positive note, that there is hope and all can be reborn, enjoyable read
July 30th, 2025 05:47
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely conclusion, ending on a positive note, that there is hope and all can be reborn, enjoyable read
July 30th, 2025 05:47
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