Comments received on poems by arqios
cavernous
rrodriguez said:
Simplicity with intensity, all in one well-written poem. Bravo!
April 23rd, 2025 16:49
rrodriguez said:
Simplicity with intensity, all in one well-written poem. Bravo!
April 23rd, 2025 16:49
a miscreant yearns
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well done, dear poet and friend! This reads like a quiet revelation—the kind of truth that whispers rather than shouts. I love how you show the soul’s cry not just as catharsis, but as careful craft—words chosen, woven, and made beautiful through longing. That line about beauty finding form through articulation really struck me. You capture the heart of why we write. 👏🌹 Again, well done!
April 23rd, 2025 07:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well done, dear poet and friend! This reads like a quiet revelation—the kind of truth that whispers rather than shouts. I love how you show the soul’s cry not just as catharsis, but as careful craft—words chosen, woven, and made beautiful through longing. That line about beauty finding form through articulation really struck me. You capture the heart of why we write. 👏🌹 Again, well done!
April 23rd, 2025 07:17
a miscreant yearns
David Wakeling said:
It is so true that Beauty finds its form in articulation.Interesting poem. It made me think.
April 23rd, 2025 05:37
David Wakeling said:
It is so true that Beauty finds its form in articulation.Interesting poem. It made me think.
April 23rd, 2025 05:37
a miscreant yearns
sorenbarrett said:
Poetry indeed does bridge the gap between mind and heart in words. A most meta poetic statement. Loved it Cryptic
April 23rd, 2025 05:02
sorenbarrett said:
Poetry indeed does bridge the gap between mind and heart in words. A most meta poetic statement. Loved it Cryptic
April 23rd, 2025 05:02
twilight trek
NafisaSB said:
what a lovely message of hope - even if the mountain looms - the path wil dlefinitely unwind and reveal itself if we have the patience and will to wait
April 22nd, 2025 23:41
NafisaSB said:
what a lovely message of hope - even if the mountain looms - the path wil dlefinitely unwind and reveal itself if we have the patience and will to wait
April 22nd, 2025 23:41
cavernous
Cheeky Missy said:
Haunting. \"...Thou tellest my wanderings: put Thou my tears into Thy bottle: are they not all in Thy book?\" (Ps 56:8) are you referencing this? Fascinatingly rendered in the seeming shape itself with excellent imagery and a poignancy which culls the thing itself. Thank you for sharing.
April 22nd, 2025 18:57
Cheeky Missy said:
Haunting. \"...Thou tellest my wanderings: put Thou my tears into Thy bottle: are they not all in Thy book?\" (Ps 56:8) are you referencing this? Fascinatingly rendered in the seeming shape itself with excellent imagery and a poignancy which culls the thing itself. Thank you for sharing.
April 22nd, 2025 18:57
cavernous
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful shape poem, the shape cleverly mirroring its content. Profoundly deep and open to multiple interpretations. What great poetry is made of. Well done, my friend! A must fave from me. 🌹👏
April 22nd, 2025 07:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful shape poem, the shape cleverly mirroring its content. Profoundly deep and open to multiple interpretations. What great poetry is made of. Well done, my friend! A must fave from me. 🌹👏
April 22nd, 2025 07:52
cavernous
sorenbarrett said:
This poem clever in its writing as well as form also used a homograph to add even greater appeal and charm. Unique in that the homograph leaves this poem up to interpretation of how it is read. This is a definite Fave
April 22nd, 2025 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
This poem clever in its writing as well as form also used a homograph to add even greater appeal and charm. Unique in that the homograph leaves this poem up to interpretation of how it is read. This is a definite Fave
April 22nd, 2025 04:38
cavernous
David Wakeling said:
This is very clever.The text is shaped like a vase.Very inspirational with some sadness as well.
April 22nd, 2025 03:04
David Wakeling said:
This is very clever.The text is shaped like a vase.Very inspirational with some sadness as well.
April 22nd, 2025 03:04
a poem’s succession
Goldfinch60 said:
That invisible ink is always within our minds arqios.
Andy
April 22nd, 2025 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
That invisible ink is always within our minds arqios.
Andy
April 22nd, 2025 01:13
a poem’s succession
Kevin Hulme said:
An enjoyable Poem on the Process of Creating Poetry.
Good One.
April 21st, 2025 20:05
Kevin Hulme said:
An enjoyable Poem on the Process of Creating Poetry.
Good One.
April 21st, 2025 20:05
a poem’s succession
Cheeky Missy said:
La, what a gorgeous beauty! Delicately rendered with delicious imagery and a richly haunting poignancy, I fail at words to express my happiness in it. Thank you so very, very much for sharing. I love it.
April 21st, 2025 18:34
Cheeky Missy said:
La, what a gorgeous beauty! Delicately rendered with delicious imagery and a richly haunting poignancy, I fail at words to express my happiness in it. Thank you so very, very much for sharing. I love it.
April 21st, 2025 18:34
a poem’s succession
John Prophet said:
What a wonderful piece of writing and so true about yet to be born poems.
John
April 21st, 2025 06:32
John Prophet said:
What a wonderful piece of writing and so true about yet to be born poems.
John
April 21st, 2025 06:32
a poem’s succession
David Wakeling said:
A wonderful evaluation of the power of poetry.A very clever poem.I enjoyed going on the journey
April 21st, 2025 05:12
David Wakeling said:
A wonderful evaluation of the power of poetry.A very clever poem.I enjoyed going on the journey
April 21st, 2025 05:12
a poem’s succession
sorenbarrett said:
This touches close to heart. I have many fledglings in the nest some will survive some not they are hungry and need food to grow. From day to day a new egg hatches and a new face appears. Sometimes the stronger eat the weak. A wonderful poem of a poet\'s creativity.
April 21st, 2025 04:00
sorenbarrett said:
This touches close to heart. I have many fledglings in the nest some will survive some not they are hungry and need food to grow. From day to day a new egg hatches and a new face appears. Sometimes the stronger eat the weak. A wonderful poem of a poet\'s creativity.
April 21st, 2025 04:00
see you there
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent poem. Internal, cerebral cosmic beauty meets poetic eloquence. A fave from me, my friend. 🌹👏
April 20th, 2025 07:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent poem. Internal, cerebral cosmic beauty meets poetic eloquence. A fave from me, my friend. 🌹👏
April 20th, 2025 07:49
twilight trek
NafisaSB said:
like the mellow tone of the poem, and the spirit of hope - good read
April 20th, 2025 06:10
NafisaSB said:
like the mellow tone of the poem, and the spirit of hope - good read
April 20th, 2025 06:10
see you there
David Wakeling said:
I like the imagery this piece evokes.The night sky and the passage of time.Wonderful
April 20th, 2025 05:18
David Wakeling said:
I like the imagery this piece evokes.The night sky and the passage of time.Wonderful
April 20th, 2025 05:18
see you there
sorenbarrett said:
have you ever read a poem that pieces of it seem like bits or fragments of past memories but now it starts to fit together like a jig-saw puzzle? This poem is just that. Always thought of how miraculously ingenious writing is and how the mind can so quickly interpret bits of broken twisted lines to form not just a word but a meaning and join such so quickly into an entire picture and thought. The Kabbalists believe that meaning is written in the stars and to one who understand this that they call the (angels alphabet) can read the past present and future. Ah but my thoughts wander. A fave
April 20th, 2025 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
have you ever read a poem that pieces of it seem like bits or fragments of past memories but now it starts to fit together like a jig-saw puzzle? This poem is just that. Always thought of how miraculously ingenious writing is and how the mind can so quickly interpret bits of broken twisted lines to form not just a word but a meaning and join such so quickly into an entire picture and thought. The Kabbalists believe that meaning is written in the stars and to one who understand this that they call the (angels alphabet) can read the past present and future. Ah but my thoughts wander. A fave
April 20th, 2025 04:05
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