Comments received on poems by arqios
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Friendship said:
Beautifully written,arqios,Your poem is to celebrate nature, inviting readers to appreciate the beauty and complexity of the natural world and to reflect on their relationship with it. Your poem serves as a reminder of the importance of preserving and valuing the environment.
March 16th, 2025 04:53
Friendship said:
Beautifully written,arqios,Your poem is to celebrate nature, inviting readers to appreciate the beauty and complexity of the natural world and to reflect on their relationship with it. Your poem serves as a reminder of the importance of preserving and valuing the environment.
March 16th, 2025 04:53
echoes of Babel
Cheeky Missy said:
I have read, and reread this eloquent cry of the poet\'s soul, that whisper in the gloaming where few hear, and methinks I know, or rather, understand better what I never realized before. It\'s not the disunity. No. It\'s our head. Gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery and a gripping, haunting poignancy whose voice lingers. Thank you for sharing.
March 15th, 2025 19:16
Cheeky Missy said:
I have read, and reread this eloquent cry of the poet\'s soul, that whisper in the gloaming where few hear, and methinks I know, or rather, understand better what I never realized before. It\'s not the disunity. No. It\'s our head. Gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery and a gripping, haunting poignancy whose voice lingers. Thank you for sharing.
March 15th, 2025 19:16
echoes of Babel
David Wakeling said:
This is brilliant. So well written and poetic. I felt like taking a journey finally searching for meaning.Excellent mi amigo
March 15th, 2025 15:30
David Wakeling said:
This is brilliant. So well written and poetic. I felt like taking a journey finally searching for meaning.Excellent mi amigo
March 15th, 2025 15:30
echoes of Babel
Poetic Licence said:
I don\'t know who babel is,my sense from this write is remembering days past and how things might have been and searching for a way to get back to them, for people to be heard and listened to again, apologies if wrong, enjoyed the read
March 15th, 2025 05:31
Poetic Licence said:
I don\'t know who babel is,my sense from this write is remembering days past and how things might have been and searching for a way to get back to them, for people to be heard and listened to again, apologies if wrong, enjoyed the read
March 15th, 2025 05:31
echoes of Babel
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant! I have heard this Bible (fable) used to explain many things even as an analogy of the development of language from its original roots through proto European and on to us, but never as a metaphor for individual relationships and their breakdown in communication. I works so well in the initial unity of a relationship where all is shared and time is spent in communication and its erosion and demise through lack of communication net even understanding each other any more. There are other metaphors that can be take from this but this one struck me. Very well done Cryptic
March 15th, 2025 05:27
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant! I have heard this Bible (fable) used to explain many things even as an analogy of the development of language from its original roots through proto European and on to us, but never as a metaphor for individual relationships and their breakdown in communication. I works so well in the initial unity of a relationship where all is shared and time is spent in communication and its erosion and demise through lack of communication net even understanding each other any more. There are other metaphors that can be take from this but this one struck me. Very well done Cryptic
March 15th, 2025 05:27
echoes of Babel
orchidee said:
Good write A. Wasn\'t the confusion of languages at Babel (Babble) so that mankind would not do even more evil than they were capable of? Of course, we can learn other languages now, and put them to good purposes - trade, commerce, treaties between nations, etc.
I dunno how those people would know when their tower had reached Heaven. When they saw the Pearly Gates, if they exist?!
March 15th, 2025 03:44
orchidee said:
Good write A. Wasn\'t the confusion of languages at Babel (Babble) so that mankind would not do even more evil than they were capable of? Of course, we can learn other languages now, and put them to good purposes - trade, commerce, treaties between nations, etc.
I dunno how those people would know when their tower had reached Heaven. When they saw the Pearly Gates, if they exist?!
March 15th, 2025 03:44
wide road of the exterior
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful tribute to a man who had such an impact on a country i have never had the privilege to visit, enjoyed the cascade
March 14th, 2025 09:11
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful tribute to a man who had such an impact on a country i have never had the privilege to visit, enjoyed the cascade
March 14th, 2025 09:11
wide road of the exterior
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! A tribute in a haiku sequence! Brilliant! Well done, my friend! 🌹👏 A fave for sure!!!
March 14th, 2025 09:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! A tribute in a haiku sequence! Brilliant! Well done, my friend! 🌹👏 A fave for sure!!!
March 14th, 2025 09:10
wide road of the exterior
arqios said:
This has not appeared to have fared well. Oh well.
March 14th, 2025 07:56
arqios said:
This has not appeared to have fared well. Oh well.
March 14th, 2025 07:56
wide road of the exterior
Friendship said:
Well done.Your poem serves to honor Basho\'s legacy and the enduring impact of Japanese culture, exploring how nature and history intertwine to shape identity and memory.
March 14th, 2025 05:59
Friendship said:
Well done.Your poem serves to honor Basho\'s legacy and the enduring impact of Japanese culture, exploring how nature and history intertwine to shape identity and memory.
March 14th, 2025 05:59
wide road of the exterior
David Wakeling said:
This is an amazing tribute to Basho.I sadly have not heard of him until now.Thank you for enlightening me.Wonderful poem
March 14th, 2025 05:03
David Wakeling said:
This is an amazing tribute to Basho.I sadly have not heard of him until now.Thank you for enlightening me.Wonderful poem
March 14th, 2025 05:03
wide road of the exterior
sorenbarrett said:
This cascade of Haikus a most unique tribute to a man and his journey. Beautiful
March 14th, 2025 03:50
sorenbarrett said:
This cascade of Haikus a most unique tribute to a man and his journey. Beautiful
March 14th, 2025 03:50
boarding pass
Mutley Ravishes said:
\"I am\" is indeed the key, as I\'m sure you already know. Turning that key and stepping into living realities takes a whole lot of patience, gratitude, persistence, faith and love, doesn\'t it?!
Great write.
March 13th, 2025 18:34
Mutley Ravishes said:
\"I am\" is indeed the key, as I\'m sure you already know. Turning that key and stepping into living realities takes a whole lot of patience, gratitude, persistence, faith and love, doesn\'t it?!
Great write.
March 13th, 2025 18:34
boarding pass
David Wakeling said:
Wonderful personificaition. Enjoyed reading. We are all universes that people can discover
March 13th, 2025 15:18
David Wakeling said:
Wonderful personificaition. Enjoyed reading. We are all universes that people can discover
March 13th, 2025 15:18
boarding pass
Neville said:
We shall have to wait and see, but until then, I shall hang on to the thought tight .. Neville
March 13th, 2025 08:25
Neville said:
We shall have to wait and see, but until then, I shall hang on to the thought tight .. Neville
March 13th, 2025 08:25
boarding pass
Tristan Robert Lange said:
In this I read one\'s imagination. Where it takes one is limitless. But the beauty of this poem is its openness to interpretation. This could be anything. If we think in terms of spirituality and religion, the boarding pass could be faith. In other situations...the possibilities are limitless. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
March 13th, 2025 07:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
In this I read one\'s imagination. Where it takes one is limitless. But the beauty of this poem is its openness to interpretation. This could be anything. If we think in terms of spirituality and religion, the boarding pass could be faith. In other situations...the possibilities are limitless. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
March 13th, 2025 07:36
boarding pass
Poetic Licence said:
My imagination does a lot of flying and I don\'t always like the destinations, a lovely write
March 13th, 2025 06:56
Poetic Licence said:
My imagination does a lot of flying and I don\'t always like the destinations, a lovely write
March 13th, 2025 06:56
boarding pass
sorenbarrett said:
Believe me Cryptic I have flown to endless horizons and when I got there they looked the same as the ones I left. I do like the idea of metaphor in this poem of endless internal horizons where imagination does the flying. I fly that airline frequently and have lots of frequent flyer miles accrued. A fun read my friend.
March 13th, 2025 03:53
sorenbarrett said:
Believe me Cryptic I have flown to endless horizons and when I got there they looked the same as the ones I left. I do like the idea of metaphor in this poem of endless internal horizons where imagination does the flying. I fly that airline frequently and have lots of frequent flyer miles accrued. A fun read my friend.
March 13th, 2025 03:53
panhandler’s timepiece
Tom Dylan said:
Really enjoyed this. Some cracking lines. A fine write.
March 13th, 2025 03:27
Tom Dylan said:
Really enjoyed this. Some cracking lines. A fine write.
March 13th, 2025 03:27
panhandler’s timepiece
Goldfinch60 said:
Time changes its time in so many ways arqios.
Andy
March 13th, 2025 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Time changes its time in so many ways arqios.
Andy
March 13th, 2025 01:42
panhandler’s timepiece
David Wakeling said:
This is an insightful view of Old Father Time. Enjoyable.
March 12th, 2025 16:56
David Wakeling said:
This is an insightful view of Old Father Time. Enjoyable.
March 12th, 2025 16:56
panhandler’s timepiece
Poetic Licence said:
Time for me is ticking on this one as I ponder, an enjoyable and entertaining read
March 12th, 2025 08:00
Poetic Licence said:
Time for me is ticking on this one as I ponder, an enjoyable and entertaining read
March 12th, 2025 08:00
panhandler’s timepiece
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Time is ultimately a human construct. The earth turns without any recognition of it. The stars we see today could have imploded 500 light years ago. Even as I write this I cannot write \"outside of time\" because it is so embedded in language; yet, what is it really? Is this moment disconnected from every previous moment and from every moment to come? Or do we make a measurement of time to keep ourselves from coming completely unraveled in uncertainty? I believe the latter. We invent time to keep an order of things...because we need that order to survive. Or, it is possible that time is truly real in this plane of existence and if that is the case, the question becomes, what lies beyond time? Either way, the stuff that will keep one up pondering at night. And for that, this gets a fave. Well done, my friend. ⏱️🖤🐦⬛
March 12th, 2025 07:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Time is ultimately a human construct. The earth turns without any recognition of it. The stars we see today could have imploded 500 light years ago. Even as I write this I cannot write \"outside of time\" because it is so embedded in language; yet, what is it really? Is this moment disconnected from every previous moment and from every moment to come? Or do we make a measurement of time to keep ourselves from coming completely unraveled in uncertainty? I believe the latter. We invent time to keep an order of things...because we need that order to survive. Or, it is possible that time is truly real in this plane of existence and if that is the case, the question becomes, what lies beyond time? Either way, the stuff that will keep one up pondering at night. And for that, this gets a fave. Well done, my friend. ⏱️🖤🐦⬛
March 12th, 2025 07:47
panhandler’s timepiece
Mutley Ravishes said:
Armless pirates! How are they going to dig for treasure for crying out loud?!
March 12th, 2025 06:43
Mutley Ravishes said:
Armless pirates! How are they going to dig for treasure for crying out loud?!
March 12th, 2025 06:43
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