Comments received on poems by arqios
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sorenbarrett said:
Isn\'t that funny how habit shows through. Have been accused of it as well and it does not go over well in an argument or very serious times. Loved it
June 26th, 2025 05:02
sorenbarrett said:
Isn\'t that funny how habit shows through. Have been accused of it as well and it does not go over well in an argument or very serious times. Loved it
June 26th, 2025 05:02
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David Wakeling said:
I think after awhile it becomes easy to write couplets in rhyme.No shame in that. An interesting reflection.Well done
June 26th, 2025 04:17
David Wakeling said:
I think after awhile it becomes easy to write couplets in rhyme.No shame in that. An interesting reflection.Well done
June 26th, 2025 04:17
lore-keeping
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Celestial and cryptic, this poem unravels like starlight on silk. Hauntingly beautiful.
June 25th, 2025 14:00
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Celestial and cryptic, this poem unravels like starlight on silk. Hauntingly beautiful.
June 25th, 2025 14:00
lore-keeping
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well hello fellow explorer. I love the journeys your poems always take me on. Excellent job! 🌹👏
June 25th, 2025 09:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well hello fellow explorer. I love the journeys your poems always take me on. Excellent job! 🌹👏
June 25th, 2025 09:25
in Wordsworth was my father\'s voice
Doggerel Dave said:
I can say nothing of the relationship, but the smoothness of the write carried me along and caught....something. Thanks.
June 25th, 2025 08:32
Doggerel Dave said:
I can say nothing of the relationship, but the smoothness of the write carried me along and caught....something. Thanks.
June 25th, 2025 08:32
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Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a delighted way to spend time uncoiling the springs of the mind, very enjoyable read
June 25th, 2025 07:52
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a delighted way to spend time uncoiling the springs of the mind, very enjoyable read
June 25th, 2025 07:52
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arqios said:
Thanks for the Fave @sorenbarrett and @Cheeky Missy 🙏🏻🕊️
June 25th, 2025 07:38
arqios said:
Thanks for the Fave @sorenbarrett and @Cheeky Missy 🙏🏻🕊️
June 25th, 2025 07:38
lore-keeping
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, arqios. A lot to unpack here. I enjoyed reading it over and over.
June 25th, 2025 06:13
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, arqios. A lot to unpack here. I enjoyed reading it over and over.
June 25th, 2025 06:13
lore-keeping
David Wakeling said:
There are spirals and unwinding going on everywhere. A great exploration poem.I like your use of adjectives.I can\'t get enough of them.Well done
June 25th, 2025 04:15
David Wakeling said:
There are spirals and unwinding going on everywhere. A great exploration poem.I like your use of adjectives.I can\'t get enough of them.Well done
June 25th, 2025 04:15
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nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
great write my friend
June 25th, 2025 04:15
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
great write my friend
June 25th, 2025 04:15
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sorenbarrett said:
The images merit pondering in this poem. With rhyme as well it spins its tale. Real and fanciful the images pull at ones mind the caterpillar and butterfly of the second stanza and the last stanza of the sun as a springless clock seen in its coils. Very nice in its subtlety a fave
June 25th, 2025 03:56
sorenbarrett said:
The images merit pondering in this poem. With rhyme as well it spins its tale. Real and fanciful the images pull at ones mind the caterpillar and butterfly of the second stanza and the last stanza of the sun as a springless clock seen in its coils. Very nice in its subtlety a fave
June 25th, 2025 03:56
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Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. You leave me breathless, and half delirious in concluding, sweetly fainting, half drunk on your delectable lines weaving a fantastical tale which takes my soul off on flights of fancy so dreamy I never want to leave. Gorgeous and beautifully rendered with exquisite imagery and a delicacy whose inherent poignancy makes me swoon. Thank you so very much for sharing. I love, love, LOVE it.
June 24th, 2025 17:04
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. You leave me breathless, and half delirious in concluding, sweetly fainting, half drunk on your delectable lines weaving a fantastical tale which takes my soul off on flights of fancy so dreamy I never want to leave. Gorgeous and beautifully rendered with exquisite imagery and a delicacy whose inherent poignancy makes me swoon. Thank you so very much for sharing. I love, love, LOVE it.
June 24th, 2025 17:04
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arqios said:
Here lies the hatchet 🪓 ochre-stained but buried deep
June 24th, 2025 06:57
arqios said:
Here lies the hatchet 🪓 ochre-stained but buried deep
June 24th, 2025 06:57
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Poetic Licence said:
A touching nicely written recollection of there father and his interests, nicely done
June 24th, 2025 06:02
Poetic Licence said:
A touching nicely written recollection of there father and his interests, nicely done
June 24th, 2025 06:02
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Jerry Reynolds said:
Excellent write, arqios. Dads can be overwhelming. I grieved mine with short-form poems. Still do.
June 24th, 2025 05:59
Jerry Reynolds said:
Excellent write, arqios. Dads can be overwhelming. I grieved mine with short-form poems. Still do.
June 24th, 2025 05:59
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David Wakeling said:
For me this is a great tribute to your Father and your childhood and the great William Wordsworth. I always loved Wordsworth.He had a simple genious that was easy to appreciate and enjoy.Well done Excellent piece
June 24th, 2025 04:38
David Wakeling said:
For me this is a great tribute to your Father and your childhood and the great William Wordsworth. I always loved Wordsworth.He had a simple genious that was easy to appreciate and enjoy.Well done Excellent piece
June 24th, 2025 04:38
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arqios said:
It\'s been forever that I haven\'t been able to get myself to write about things concerning my late father but it\'s getting easier over time. 🕊️🙏🏻
June 24th, 2025 04:37
arqios said:
It\'s been forever that I haven\'t been able to get myself to write about things concerning my late father but it\'s getting easier over time. 🕊️🙏🏻
June 24th, 2025 04:37
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sorenbarrett said:
It is the quaint familiarity that some how is not easily identifiable that gains the fave in this poem of tribute. A most lovely write
June 24th, 2025 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
It is the quaint familiarity that some how is not easily identifiable that gains the fave in this poem of tribute. A most lovely write
June 24th, 2025 04:26
cluEleSs
Goldfinch60 said:
Those who follow the many become clueless but those who think outside the box and are right are never heard arqios.
Andy
June 24th, 2025 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Those who follow the many become clueless but those who think outside the box and are right are never heard arqios.
Andy
June 24th, 2025 01:22
my poetic side
NafisaSB said:
you have explained the interaction amongst those who contribute here so well..
thanks for sharing
June 24th, 2025 01:19
NafisaSB said:
you have explained the interaction amongst those who contribute here so well..
thanks for sharing
June 24th, 2025 01:19
cluEleSs
Poetic Licence said:
This should be the mantra of the world as it is poignant, and it all endorsed, aided and abetted by our use and reliance on technology, enjoyed the read
June 23rd, 2025 06:22
Poetic Licence said:
This should be the mantra of the world as it is poignant, and it all endorsed, aided and abetted by our use and reliance on technology, enjoyed the read
June 23rd, 2025 06:22
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