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Thad Wilk said:

BRAVO!! 👏
Terrific poem,
awesomazing presentation!! 👍
Last stanza says it all,
deserving a standing ovation!! 🤩
Thank you for sharing my friend!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad

January 26th, 2025 20:33

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Teddy.15 said:

Just beautiful, and I\'m a huge fan of Cher and that particular song. 🌹

January 26th, 2025 07:23

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sorenbarrett said:

The appeal of this poem to me is in its presentation and construction. Each frist line of a stanza presents the central thought that is expounded on in the following lines of the stanza just as would be in any standard paragraph but in condensed form and with a strong presenting idea. It is as if each line is a breath. It is powerful and breaths life.

January 26th, 2025 05:17

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Goldfinch60 said:

We will all move forward along that River of Time arqios.

Andy

January 26th, 2025 03:03

star signed
Thad Wilk said:

Short and succinct
a powerful and
refreshing write!! 🤩
You get three stars ⭐⭐⭐
my friend!
To read a delight!!
I gaze at the bear
too, most every night! 🌃
Thanks for sharing! 🙏
Best regards ✌️ Thad

January 25th, 2025 20:26

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Teddy.15 said:

I have always found the richest education possible is that of travel. This is stunning. 🌹

January 25th, 2025 08:27

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Tristan Robert Lange said:

Yay, the first comment. As for your poem, I spot my beloved Ursa Minor. Was just looking up at the smaller bear, or little dipper, last night. I pretty much do any night I am outside and it is clear out. Love the stars. As I read this along with your note, I get a sense of a specific place really having an impact on who you are and where you\'ve ended up. The Ursa Minor, then, is a metaphor for guidance and constancy. Connecting 30 years ago to today. A beautiful, powerful poem, my friend. Well done! 🌹👏

January 25th, 2025 07:08

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Teddy.15 said:

Sometimes less is more and by that I mean don\'t over think it. Tomorrow is a new day. Very emotional write 🌹

January 25th, 2025 03:02

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Cassie58 said:

Mental exhaustion. Not a good place to be. When I can’t sleep and am over tired, the place you describe sounds familiar. A complete break helps.

January 24th, 2025 21:13

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David Wakeling said:

I think you are just exhausted. Writing is a tough journey.It is a marathon event. Coming up with new ideas is difficult.My advice is take a holiday get some new views to look at. The world wants to see what you see but more importantly it wants to know how you feel about that scene.Anyway good luck. A profound and important poem

January 24th, 2025 15:56

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Spencer Wilhelm said:

We\'ll put, that\'s the stage I\'m in, hence I\'m trying to experiment with something new within poetry

January 24th, 2025 12:59

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Thad Wilk said:

Wow, what emotional and
poignant feelings indeed!! 😳
Been there, felt that way
glad it was temporary!! 🙏
Awesome penning my friend,
Thanks for sharing,!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad



January 24th, 2025 10:30

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Neville said:



Reminds me pretty much of a hypnogogic experience I once had and can still recall from yonks back when I was messing around with Marion and her old man threatened to blow both my knee caps off .. jeez .. I dunno why I disclosed that here .. have I consciously missed some subliminal message contained herein by any chance .. Neville


January 24th, 2025 09:05

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Goldfinch60 said:

Fine words arqios but in our life I know there are better times leading to love and happiness.

Andy

January 24th, 2025 02:16

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Tony36 said:

BRAVO

January 23rd, 2025 12:36