Comments received on poems by arqios
panhandler’s timepiece
orchidee said:
Do you prefer the ticking or the tocking of a clock?! lol.
March 12th, 2025 04:11
orchidee said:
Do you prefer the ticking or the tocking of a clock?! lol.
March 12th, 2025 04:11
panhandler’s timepiece
sorenbarrett said:
This one gives the mind space to wander. Like time itself it is in no hurry yet will not delay. A fun and most puzzling read.
March 12th, 2025 03:56
sorenbarrett said:
This one gives the mind space to wander. Like time itself it is in no hurry yet will not delay. A fun and most puzzling read.
March 12th, 2025 03:56
a royal pain
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. Esoteric, eh? A riddle for our indulgence. I could swear that\'s virtually an image of \"the British Josiah,\" but since I can\'t prove it...? Fascinating and excellently rendered with gorgeous imagery and a tantalizing, damning poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
March 11th, 2025 23:30
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. Esoteric, eh? A riddle for our indulgence. I could swear that\'s virtually an image of \"the British Josiah,\" but since I can\'t prove it...? Fascinating and excellently rendered with gorgeous imagery and a tantalizing, damning poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
March 11th, 2025 23:30
a royal pain
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah...the game of kings and queens...where anyone could find out they\'re pawn. Well done on this my friend. It had a real classic ring to it, too. Loved it. 🌹👏
March 11th, 2025 13:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah...the game of kings and queens...where anyone could find out they\'re pawn. Well done on this my friend. It had a real classic ring to it, too. Loved it. 🌹👏
March 11th, 2025 13:44
see you there
Neville said:
I\'m hooked on deep space too ...................... 🚀🌕🐄
March 11th, 2025 07:59
Neville said:
I\'m hooked on deep space too ...................... 🚀🌕🐄
March 11th, 2025 07:59
a royal pain
Poetic Licence said:
A reminder of our murderous past, how we have changed over time!!!, enjoyed the read
March 11th, 2025 05:33
Poetic Licence said:
A reminder of our murderous past, how we have changed over time!!!, enjoyed the read
March 11th, 2025 05:33
a royal pain
David Wakeling said:
This is an interesting poem.It leaves me wanting to know more.
March 11th, 2025 05:22
David Wakeling said:
This is an interesting poem.It leaves me wanting to know more.
March 11th, 2025 05:22
a royal pain
sorenbarrett said:
Pride and obstinacy together make for an immovable object as well as an irresistible force when meeting they go nowhere. A well worded and beautifully painted image in this very short piece.
March 11th, 2025 04:54
sorenbarrett said:
Pride and obstinacy together make for an immovable object as well as an irresistible force when meeting they go nowhere. A well worded and beautifully painted image in this very short piece.
March 11th, 2025 04:54
a royal pain
Cassie58 said:
Reminds me of the Tudor period in our history books. A brutal time, and as for Henry VIII, a right royal bar steward. An absolute tyrant and so religious !! Said his prayers all the time. I am assuming 2016 was the year you wrote this poem arqios? Or does it refer to something else.
March 11th, 2025 04:43
Cassie58 said:
Reminds me of the Tudor period in our history books. A brutal time, and as for Henry VIII, a right royal bar steward. An absolute tyrant and so religious !! Said his prayers all the time. I am assuming 2016 was the year you wrote this poem arqios? Or does it refer to something else.
March 11th, 2025 04:43
a royal pain
Neville said:
kneel down, stand firm, hold fast & with that, she promptly breathed her last .. history is full of such woe .. 💛👍
March 11th, 2025 03:26
Neville said:
kneel down, stand firm, hold fast & with that, she promptly breathed her last .. history is full of such woe .. 💛👍
March 11th, 2025 03:26
a royal pain
orchidee said:
There were dreadful days of Mary I. She and Henry VIII were murderers. Now that\'s no way to treat our mother-in-laws! lol.
March 11th, 2025 03:15
orchidee said:
There were dreadful days of Mary I. She and Henry VIII were murderers. Now that\'s no way to treat our mother-in-laws! lol.
March 11th, 2025 03:15
see you there
Cassie58 said:
Fine imagery here arqios, especially in the first stanza. Lovely.
March 10th, 2025 22:21
Cassie58 said:
Fine imagery here arqios, especially in the first stanza. Lovely.
March 10th, 2025 22:21
see you there
Friendship said:
the poem is filled with visual imagery, particularly in the references to stars and constellations, a sense of wonder and exploration.nicely done.
March 10th, 2025 15:32
Friendship said:
the poem is filled with visual imagery, particularly in the references to stars and constellations, a sense of wonder and exploration.nicely done.
March 10th, 2025 15:32
see you there
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautiful poem and not just the words of it. I love how it is structured to taper outward. From the shorter opening lines to the broader/longer lines at the end. Well done, my friend. That chorus of yours...awesome!🌹👏
On another note, read your notice of absence. Yikes, Glad you are all okay. Cyclones are no fun, I know...having endured Superstorm Sandy. Keeping you all in prayers, my friend.
March 10th, 2025 08:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautiful poem and not just the words of it. I love how it is structured to taper outward. From the shorter opening lines to the broader/longer lines at the end. Well done, my friend. That chorus of yours...awesome!🌹👏
On another note, read your notice of absence. Yikes, Glad you are all okay. Cyclones are no fun, I know...having endured Superstorm Sandy. Keeping you all in prayers, my friend.
March 10th, 2025 08:08
see you there
Doggerel Dave said:
The sometime chaos of my own mind can find some consolation here.
March 10th, 2025 06:35
Doggerel Dave said:
The sometime chaos of my own mind can find some consolation here.
March 10th, 2025 06:35
see you there
David Wakeling said:
This is very enjoyable word play.It creates wonderful images . Well done commendatore.
March 10th, 2025 05:24
David Wakeling said:
This is very enjoyable word play.It creates wonderful images . Well done commendatore.
March 10th, 2025 05:24
see you there
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful vision of the unified relationship of all things from infinitesimally small to the infinitely large from energy to matter. Music of the universe Beautiful.
March 10th, 2025 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful vision of the unified relationship of all things from infinitesimally small to the infinitely large from energy to matter. Music of the universe Beautiful.
March 10th, 2025 04:07
see you there
Goldfinch60 said:
May that chorus always bring love to our lives arqios.
Andy
March 10th, 2025 02:22
Goldfinch60 said:
May that chorus always bring love to our lives arqios.
Andy
March 10th, 2025 02:22
goodbye robin
Goldfinch60 said:
This is my life with Mary arqios, \'..always and forever\'.
Andy
March 10th, 2025 02:09
Goldfinch60 said:
This is my life with Mary arqios, \'..always and forever\'.
Andy
March 10th, 2025 02:09
goodbye robin
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. Mum having read and reread countless times Winnie the Pooh and etc until the tales are entrenched within me, I even bought the book on my own and retell the various tidbits from memory when occasion serves, and what is this farewell? Fascinating and intriguing in brevity with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy, thank you for sharing.
March 9th, 2025 18:58
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. Mum having read and reread countless times Winnie the Pooh and etc until the tales are entrenched within me, I even bought the book on my own and retell the various tidbits from memory when occasion serves, and what is this farewell? Fascinating and intriguing in brevity with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy, thank you for sharing.
March 9th, 2025 18:58
goodbye robin
Friendship said:
Lovely done, arqios,Your poem \"always and forever\" conveys the profound bond and commitment shared between two entities, likely representing lovers or close companions. It explores themes of unity, enduring love, and the intertwining of lives over time.
March 9th, 2025 08:51
Friendship said:
Lovely done, arqios,Your poem \"always and forever\" conveys the profound bond and commitment shared between two entities, likely representing lovers or close companions. It explores themes of unity, enduring love, and the intertwining of lives over time.
March 9th, 2025 08:51
goodbye robin
Cassie58 said:
always and forever
Such very touching thoughts and your poem transferred me back to childhood days and promises made to forever friends. And then we grow up and forever takes on a new meaning. For some, it’s until something better comes along. Call me a cynic why don’t chã. I still believe there can be happy ever afters though. I have known many that have worked out. Your poem is a fairy story and I love it.
March 9th, 2025 08:04
Cassie58 said:
always and forever
Such very touching thoughts and your poem transferred me back to childhood days and promises made to forever friends. And then we grow up and forever takes on a new meaning. For some, it’s until something better comes along. Call me a cynic why don’t chã. I still believe there can be happy ever afters though. I have known many that have worked out. Your poem is a fairy story and I love it.
March 9th, 2025 08:04
goodbye robin
Distant View said:
This poem speaks to me of childhood. A rite of passage kind of thing. Hopefully most of us have wonderful childhood memories. Some of them become bitter-sweet as we grow older, for those innocent days are now gone! We still have the memories though, and we should cherish them!
March 9th, 2025 05:41
Distant View said:
This poem speaks to me of childhood. A rite of passage kind of thing. Hopefully most of us have wonderful childhood memories. Some of them become bitter-sweet as we grow older, for those innocent days are now gone! We still have the memories though, and we should cherish them!
March 9th, 2025 05:41
goodbye robin
Poetic Licence said:
I didn\'t get it until I read the comments, am having a slow day, enjoyed the read
March 9th, 2025 05:40
Poetic Licence said:
I didn\'t get it until I read the comments, am having a slow day, enjoyed the read
March 9th, 2025 05:40
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