Comments received on poems by E Naughton
Your Way
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reminds me of the efforts of a young child learning to stand and walk and with this metaphor so it is learning any independent act. Well done.
June 4th, 2026 02:48
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reminds me of the efforts of a young child learning to stand and walk and with this metaphor so it is learning any independent act. Well done.
June 4th, 2026 02:48
Your Way
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem revolves around the journey of self-discovery and empowerment. I love how you emphasize the importance of moving forward despite uncertainty, embracing independence, and finding strength within oneself.
June 3rd, 2026 21:20
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem revolves around the journey of self-discovery and empowerment. I love how you emphasize the importance of moving forward despite uncertainty, embracing independence, and finding strength within oneself.
June 3rd, 2026 21:20
Farting Free
rhmn_7 said:
Sounds like a very joyful experience with your own child, lovely poem!
May 31st, 2026 02:00
rhmn_7 said:
Sounds like a very joyful experience with your own child, lovely poem!
May 31st, 2026 02:00
Farting Free
sorenbarrett said:
Cute and a tender poem of fun with a child. Well written. ( I hope it is the child doing the farting)
May 30th, 2026 19:30
sorenbarrett said:
Cute and a tender poem of fun with a child. Well written. ( I hope it is the child doing the farting)
May 30th, 2026 19:30
Aoibhe
sorenbarrett said:
This poem a pledge of love and taking care of. Nicely written
October 27th, 2025 07:19
sorenbarrett said:
This poem a pledge of love and taking care of. Nicely written
October 27th, 2025 07:19
Choice
Poetic Licence said:
I like this, asking the reader to have a different approach when facing fears or things we don\'t like, enjoyed the read
July 11th, 2025 06:23
Poetic Licence said:
I like this, asking the reader to have a different approach when facing fears or things we don\'t like, enjoyed the read
July 11th, 2025 06:23
Choice
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and fun this poem teases the reader to confront and take more lightly fear and evil. Well done
July 11th, 2025 05:46
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and fun this poem teases the reader to confront and take more lightly fear and evil. Well done
July 11th, 2025 05:46
Fools And Their Folly
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write with some wordly wisdom for the fools if they care to read it, enjoyed the read
May 31st, 2025 05:46
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write with some wordly wisdom for the fools if they care to read it, enjoyed the read
May 31st, 2025 05:46
Fools And Their Folly
sorenbarrett said:
I love this poem of apparent paradox that beneath its incongruities contains wisdom well written. A fave
May 31st, 2025 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
I love this poem of apparent paradox that beneath its incongruities contains wisdom well written. A fave
May 31st, 2025 04:35
Loss
sorenbarrett said:
You depict well the loss of someone or something so significant. And then the advice that one can not hear at the time but is so true to look through the pain. A lovely well written poem
May 3rd, 2025 06:41
sorenbarrett said:
You depict well the loss of someone or something so significant. And then the advice that one can not hear at the time but is so true to look through the pain. A lovely well written poem
May 3rd, 2025 06:41
I Wait
Poetic Licence said:
There is a lot to hear if we all just took a moment to stop and listen, enjoyed the read
March 20th, 2025 04:51
Poetic Licence said:
There is a lot to hear if we all just took a moment to stop and listen, enjoyed the read
March 20th, 2025 04:51
I Wait
sorenbarrett said:
Word play in this poem where stillness reigns a thought provoking write.
March 20th, 2025 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
Word play in this poem where stillness reigns a thought provoking write.
March 20th, 2025 04:18
I Wait
arqios said:
In this moment of stillness, let\'s cherish the beauty around us and the love that quietly waits to be acknowledged. May we find joy in the gentle bird song and the world that unfolds before us, right here.🙏🏻🕊
March 20th, 2025 01:31
arqios said:
In this moment of stillness, let\'s cherish the beauty around us and the love that quietly waits to be acknowledged. May we find joy in the gentle bird song and the world that unfolds before us, right here.🙏🏻🕊
March 20th, 2025 01:31
Let Them
Poetic Licence said:
Sometimes it is best just to let it go and go with the flow, enjoyed the read
February 22nd, 2025 04:01
Poetic Licence said:
Sometimes it is best just to let it go and go with the flow, enjoyed the read
February 22nd, 2025 04:01
Let Them
arqios said:
Let it flow… let it flow… can’t hold it back anymo-oh-ore…. That’s great wisdom right there, E.N. 🙏🏻🕊
February 21st, 2025 21:58
arqios said:
Let it flow… let it flow… can’t hold it back anymo-oh-ore…. That’s great wisdom right there, E.N. 🙏🏻🕊
February 21st, 2025 21:58
Let Them
sorenbarrett said:
As people we need an explanation but nature needs none it just happens. Lovely
February 21st, 2025 20:24
sorenbarrett said:
As people we need an explanation but nature needs none it just happens. Lovely
February 21st, 2025 20:24
The Impossible
arqios said:
There may be things that seem impossible but together are achievable.
December 5th, 2024 07:26
arqios said:
There may be things that seem impossible but together are achievable.
December 5th, 2024 07:26
Ask Yourself
Poetic Dan said:
Wow fantastically done not sure if that\'s me as an adult doing some shadow work or a baby first steps!
Maybe it\'s an one in the same as I know what it also feels like to be born again.
Keep up the write
May 18th, 2024 10:28
Poetic Dan said:
Wow fantastically done not sure if that\'s me as an adult doing some shadow work or a baby first steps!
Maybe it\'s an one in the same as I know what it also feels like to be born again.
Keep up the write
May 18th, 2024 10:28
Legacy
sorenbarrett said:
The question of destiny a good start. The image of a flame does it burn the one you attract or just bring them close? So many thoughts to think. Good write.
December 28th, 2023 08:47
sorenbarrett said:
The question of destiny a good start. The image of a flame does it burn the one you attract or just bring them close? So many thoughts to think. Good write.
December 28th, 2023 08:47
Like a curious child
Pop64 said:
Sometimes we all stand and just watch, rather than be participants. The flow and rhyme are very good in this, as is the imagery therein.
August 4th, 2023 08:45
Pop64 said:
Sometimes we all stand and just watch, rather than be participants. The flow and rhyme are very good in this, as is the imagery therein.
August 4th, 2023 08:45
Stay a while
L. B. Mek said:
a beautiful ode, to those gifted glimpses
of nature\'s soothing wonders
thanks for sharing, wonderful tonality
March 13th, 2023 04:41
L. B. Mek said:
a beautiful ode, to those gifted glimpses
of nature\'s soothing wonders
thanks for sharing, wonderful tonality
March 13th, 2023 04:41
Reaching
L. B. Mek said:
such an intriguing read, thanks for sharing
and inspiring my little scribble
(sunrise\'s gift earth its shadows
seeking light, to unearth our worth
vanquishing darkness, to excavate
that which we know, feel
awaits on us, to realise
before
its all too late and our horizons
can only be witnessed, dimmed
by the life weary shades
warping-bleak, our view of life..)
January 23rd, 2023 06:53
L. B. Mek said:
such an intriguing read, thanks for sharing
and inspiring my little scribble
(sunrise\'s gift earth its shadows
seeking light, to unearth our worth
vanquishing darkness, to excavate
that which we know, feel
awaits on us, to realise
before
its all too late and our horizons
can only be witnessed, dimmed
by the life weary shades
warping-bleak, our view of life..)
January 23rd, 2023 06:53
1 Thousand Cuts
James Stinson said:
I am new to this‘game’ and don’t always understand a lot of poetry, so thank you for helping.
I thoroughly enjoyed reading your piece and looking forward to reading more.
December 16th, 2022 05:42
James Stinson said:
I am new to this‘game’ and don’t always understand a lot of poetry, so thank you for helping.
I thoroughly enjoyed reading your piece and looking forward to reading more.
December 16th, 2022 05:42
1 Thousand Cuts
arqios said:
And for them to be unshown, that as a lot to carry and bury and curate.
November 18th, 2022 18:54
arqios said:
And for them to be unshown, that as a lot to carry and bury and curate.
November 18th, 2022 18:54
1 Thousand Cuts
L. B. Mek said:
so true! thanks for sharing dear Poet
indeed
\'beware! that dark empath in your life\'
November 18th, 2022 07:06
L. B. Mek said:
so true! thanks for sharing dear Poet
indeed
\'beware! that dark empath in your life\'
November 18th, 2022 07:06
« Return to the profile of E Naughton
