Comments received on poems by E Naughton
Legacy
sorenbarrett said:
The question of destiny a good start. The image of a flame does it burn the one you attract or just bring them close? So many thoughts to think. Good write.
December 28th, 2023 08:47
sorenbarrett said:
The question of destiny a good start. The image of a flame does it burn the one you attract or just bring them close? So many thoughts to think. Good write.
December 28th, 2023 08:47
Like a curious child
Pop64 said:
Sometimes we all stand and just watch, rather than be participants. The flow and rhyme are very good in this, as is the imagery therein.
August 4th, 2023 08:45
Pop64 said:
Sometimes we all stand and just watch, rather than be participants. The flow and rhyme are very good in this, as is the imagery therein.
August 4th, 2023 08:45
Stay a while
L. B. Mek said:
a beautiful ode, to those gifted glimpses
of nature\'s soothing wonders
thanks for sharing, wonderful tonality
March 13th, 2023 04:41
L. B. Mek said:
a beautiful ode, to those gifted glimpses
of nature\'s soothing wonders
thanks for sharing, wonderful tonality
March 13th, 2023 04:41
Reaching
L. B. Mek said:
such an intriguing read, thanks for sharing
and inspiring my little scribble
(sunrise\'s gift earth its shadows
seeking light, to unearth our worth
vanquishing darkness, to excavate
that which we know, feel
awaits on us, to realise
before
its all too late and our horizons
can only be witnessed, dimmed
by the life weary shades
warping-bleak, our view of life..)
January 23rd, 2023 06:53
L. B. Mek said:
such an intriguing read, thanks for sharing
and inspiring my little scribble
(sunrise\'s gift earth its shadows
seeking light, to unearth our worth
vanquishing darkness, to excavate
that which we know, feel
awaits on us, to realise
before
its all too late and our horizons
can only be witnessed, dimmed
by the life weary shades
warping-bleak, our view of life..)
January 23rd, 2023 06:53
1 Thousand Cuts
James Stinson said:
I am new to this‘game’ and don’t always understand a lot of poetry, so thank you for helping.
I thoroughly enjoyed reading your piece and looking forward to reading more.
December 16th, 2022 05:42
James Stinson said:
I am new to this‘game’ and don’t always understand a lot of poetry, so thank you for helping.
I thoroughly enjoyed reading your piece and looking forward to reading more.
December 16th, 2022 05:42
1 Thousand Cuts
arqios said:
And for them to be unshown, that as a lot to carry and bury and curate.
November 18th, 2022 18:54
arqios said:
And for them to be unshown, that as a lot to carry and bury and curate.
November 18th, 2022 18:54
1 Thousand Cuts
L. B. Mek said:
so true! thanks for sharing dear Poet
indeed
\'beware! that dark empath in your life\'
November 18th, 2022 07:06
L. B. Mek said:
so true! thanks for sharing dear Poet
indeed
\'beware! that dark empath in your life\'
November 18th, 2022 07:06
Free Falling
L. B. Mek said:
I like the defiance, in the face of realism
thanks for sharing, stay strong!
November 14th, 2022 04:56
L. B. Mek said:
I like the defiance, in the face of realism
thanks for sharing, stay strong!
November 14th, 2022 04:56
I Sang My Song
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Reminds me of my late best friend and those I have lost. Beautiful!
November 8th, 2022 16:16
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Reminds me of my late best friend and those I have lost. Beautiful!
November 8th, 2022 16:16
To Feel It All
arflory90 said:
This honestly brought tears to my eyes. Being alive is a gift, for so many of us (including myself) can not fight through the pain of it all. And seeing how others feel about it is heart warming. Great write!
November 7th, 2022 11:13
arflory90 said:
This honestly brought tears to my eyes. Being alive is a gift, for so many of us (including myself) can not fight through the pain of it all. And seeing how others feel about it is heart warming. Great write!
November 7th, 2022 11:13
Pain
arqios said:
Reminds me of the pain of the caterpillar in its arduous journey toward flight. A delight to read. TFS.
November 6th, 2022 06:43
arqios said:
Reminds me of the pain of the caterpillar in its arduous journey toward flight. A delight to read. TFS.
November 6th, 2022 06:43
Pain
Eugene S. said:
I truly appreciate this poem. Something about its innuendo pulls me in with a revelation at the end....and who can deny its relevance and meaning?
November 6th, 2022 03:16
Eugene S. said:
I truly appreciate this poem. Something about its innuendo pulls me in with a revelation at the end....and who can deny its relevance and meaning?
November 6th, 2022 03:16
Pain
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
In many forms I have met pain. True; to sit with it and face it alone brings out in one a resilience one would never know if it weren’t for pain. Good write!
November 5th, 2022 20:10
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
In many forms I have met pain. True; to sit with it and face it alone brings out in one a resilience one would never know if it weren’t for pain. Good write!
November 5th, 2022 20:10
I See Green
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Being part Irish, this has special meaning!
November 4th, 2022 13:18
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Being part Irish, this has special meaning!
November 4th, 2022 13:18
I See Green
arqios said:
We had child in our daughter\'s playgroup once that needed corrective lenses... as we drove through wooded roads this child would call out the greenish blur that we call trees and after the glasses were prescribed retorted, they now \"look like people waving at me!\" To see beauty and connection is a real gift and one we should not disavow. TFS.
November 4th, 2022 06:45
arqios said:
We had child in our daughter\'s playgroup once that needed corrective lenses... as we drove through wooded roads this child would call out the greenish blur that we call trees and after the glasses were prescribed retorted, they now \"look like people waving at me!\" To see beauty and connection is a real gift and one we should not disavow. TFS.
November 4th, 2022 06:45
Defused Future
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
A deep read. Thank you for sharing!
November 3rd, 2022 19:40
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
A deep read. Thank you for sharing!
November 3rd, 2022 19:40
Defused Future
arqios said:
Oh, that is quite harrowing, fake fusion. That didn\'t work for long in our case. By the time I was 11 dad hadn\'t returned home and started a second family.
November 3rd, 2022 09:25
arqios said:
Oh, that is quite harrowing, fake fusion. That didn\'t work for long in our case. By the time I was 11 dad hadn\'t returned home and started a second family.
November 3rd, 2022 09:25
Journey
arqios said:
And that is all that could be asked for of us: to \'do as only we can do.\' An uplifting journey of being. Thanks for sharing. And welcome to MPS, Eric! /Rik.
November 2nd, 2022 22:36
arqios said:
And that is all that could be asked for of us: to \'do as only we can do.\' An uplifting journey of being. Thanks for sharing. And welcome to MPS, Eric! /Rik.
November 2nd, 2022 22:36
