Comments received on poems by nephilim56
JAGGED
arqios said:
Like a razor or a saw in its movement, tempo and rhythm 🙏🏻🕊
February 19th, 2025 05:30
arqios said:
Like a razor or a saw in its movement, tempo and rhythm 🙏🏻🕊
February 19th, 2025 05:30
JAGGED
sorenbarrett said:
It is the flow and rhyme of this poem that I loved the most. Very nicely done and deserves a fave
February 19th, 2025 05:04
sorenbarrett said:
It is the flow and rhyme of this poem that I loved the most. Very nicely done and deserves a fave
February 19th, 2025 05:04
ROMANTIC WARRIOR
sorenbarrett said:
Chasing a dream is a long journey that is like trying to catch a cloud in a net or the classic looking for the end of a rainbow. A lovely write.
February 18th, 2025 05:45
sorenbarrett said:
Chasing a dream is a long journey that is like trying to catch a cloud in a net or the classic looking for the end of a rainbow. A lovely write.
February 18th, 2025 05:45
ROMANTIC WARRIOR
Poetic Licence said:
A very poetic view on life and the battles we face, enjoyable read
February 18th, 2025 05:21
Poetic Licence said:
A very poetic view on life and the battles we face, enjoyable read
February 18th, 2025 05:21
ROMANTIC WARRIOR
arqios said:
A very romantic view of life and it’s challenges. Don Quixote’s windmill giants are a far cry from this reality. 🙏🏻🕊
February 18th, 2025 04:07
arqios said:
A very romantic view of life and it’s challenges. Don Quixote’s windmill giants are a far cry from this reality. 🙏🏻🕊
February 18th, 2025 04:07
BOXING BOOTH
arqios said:
A vivid tale as well as a metaphorical treatise in the circus of life, taking blows but always a sideshow… how much is the value of a life where life is meant to be of highest value!?
February 17th, 2025 05:24
arqios said:
A vivid tale as well as a metaphorical treatise in the circus of life, taking blows but always a sideshow… how much is the value of a life where life is meant to be of highest value!?
February 17th, 2025 05:24
BOXING BOOTH
sorenbarrett said:
In the literal memory loss and Parkinson\'s disease in the metaphorical more serious still. A wonderful write with great short lines like punches and careful wording delivering each blow
February 17th, 2025 04:50
sorenbarrett said:
In the literal memory loss and Parkinson\'s disease in the metaphorical more serious still. A wonderful write with great short lines like punches and careful wording delivering each blow
February 17th, 2025 04:50
OLD SOLDIER
sorenbarrett said:
This poem makes clear the devastation of war and the question that occurs to survivors. Well written and heartfelt
February 16th, 2025 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
This poem makes clear the devastation of war and the question that occurs to survivors. Well written and heartfelt
February 16th, 2025 04:20
OLD SOLDIER
arqios said:
It’s tough all around for the soldiering kind. Thanks for giving voice to this 🙏🏻🕊️
February 16th, 2025 04:01
arqios said:
It’s tough all around for the soldiering kind. Thanks for giving voice to this 🙏🏻🕊️
February 16th, 2025 04:01
STRANGER
RSM0812 said:
Really good read. Great rhym scheme. I really liked this one.
February 15th, 2025 14:38
RSM0812 said:
Really good read. Great rhym scheme. I really liked this one.
February 15th, 2025 14:38
WINTER SKY
RSM0812 said:
This is awesome. I really like the short stanza style and rhyming patterns. Tells the story with great imagery also. \"Upon first kiss, of winter sky\". Very pretty to imagine.
February 15th, 2025 10:42
RSM0812 said:
This is awesome. I really like the short stanza style and rhyming patterns. Tells the story with great imagery also. \"Upon first kiss, of winter sky\". Very pretty to imagine.
February 15th, 2025 10:42
ECHO
sorenbarrett said:
An image that had not occurred to me, love that burnt an echo. Very poetic and evokes several vivid images. The poem flows well and is a pleasurable read.
February 15th, 2025 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
An image that had not occurred to me, love that burnt an echo. Very poetic and evokes several vivid images. The poem flows well and is a pleasurable read.
February 15th, 2025 04:34
ECHO
Poetic Licence said:
This read has a lovely flow as you read it, enjoyed
February 15th, 2025 03:22
Poetic Licence said:
This read has a lovely flow as you read it, enjoyed
February 15th, 2025 03:22
GABRIEL
arqios said:
If it’s the message announced that is needed, then Gabriel is the one to be heeded!
February 14th, 2025 07:42
arqios said:
If it’s the message announced that is needed, then Gabriel is the one to be heeded!
February 14th, 2025 07:42
GABRIEL
Poetic Licence said:
Has a lovely feeling as you read through, enjoyed the read
February 14th, 2025 05:28
Poetic Licence said:
Has a lovely feeling as you read through, enjoyed the read
February 14th, 2025 05:28
GABRIEL
sorenbarrett said:
Such a rocking rhythm to this poem the meter rolls on and on carrying the reader to the end; Very nicely done
February 14th, 2025 05:04
sorenbarrett said:
Such a rocking rhythm to this poem the meter rolls on and on carrying the reader to the end; Very nicely done
February 14th, 2025 05:04
HUMBLE
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully written this poem flowes off the tongue easily. Very nice
February 13th, 2025 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully written this poem flowes off the tongue easily. Very nice
February 13th, 2025 03:54
SNIPPET
Poetic Licence said:
We have become a throw away society and do not value anything anymore including people, and it is very sad it has become like this. The write makes it`s points very well, enjoyed the read.
February 12th, 2025 06:01
Poetic Licence said:
We have become a throw away society and do not value anything anymore including people, and it is very sad it has become like this. The write makes it`s points very well, enjoyed the read.
February 12th, 2025 06:01
SNIPPET
arqios said:
Nan used to tell us that a story as such used to go on for half a year or so, then later slips into town legend. Now it is so common that we have been desensitised. 🙏🏻🕊
February 12th, 2025 05:45
arqios said:
Nan used to tell us that a story as such used to go on for half a year or so, then later slips into town legend. Now it is so common that we have been desensitised. 🙏🏻🕊
February 12th, 2025 05:45
SNIPPET
sorenbarrett said:
Such a great metaphor the paper with the notice used to wrap up a meal then to be discarded just as the memory of a life. Casual and calloused we go on with our lives what was once someone\'s treasure is now our trash. A powerful write
February 12th, 2025 04:37
sorenbarrett said:
Such a great metaphor the paper with the notice used to wrap up a meal then to be discarded just as the memory of a life. Casual and calloused we go on with our lives what was once someone\'s treasure is now our trash. A powerful write
February 12th, 2025 04:37
NECESSARY FOR ECONOMIC GROWTH
sorenbarrett said:
Tis true that eliminating the weak, old and disabled is a cost savings but on the other side of the scale a heavy cost. Nicely written
February 11th, 2025 08:49
sorenbarrett said:
Tis true that eliminating the weak, old and disabled is a cost savings but on the other side of the scale a heavy cost. Nicely written
February 11th, 2025 08:49
NECESSARY FOR ECONOMIC GROWTH
arqios said:
Wow a tough (subject matter and tone) but moving read. A pleasure as always 🙏🏻🕊️
February 11th, 2025 05:24
arqios said:
Wow a tough (subject matter and tone) but moving read. A pleasure as always 🙏🏻🕊️
February 11th, 2025 05:24
RAINDROP
RSM0812 said:
I like your poems like this. Short stanzas, off rhymes and beauty in the words. Thanks for the read.
February 10th, 2025 09:15
RSM0812 said:
I like your poems like this. Short stanzas, off rhymes and beauty in the words. Thanks for the read.
February 10th, 2025 09:15
WASTEGROUND
arqios said:
And as we get on in years we see more and more of this around us, in other places and within ourselves as well… a striking work 🙏🏻🕊
February 10th, 2025 07:31
arqios said:
And as we get on in years we see more and more of this around us, in other places and within ourselves as well… a striking work 🙏🏻🕊
February 10th, 2025 07:31
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