Comments received on poems by nephilim56
ANOTHER MILE
sorenbarrett said:
Memory fades slowly and once imprinted carries its mark. A wistful and nostalgic write that pulls at the heart. Lovely
February 28th, 2025 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
Memory fades slowly and once imprinted carries its mark. A wistful and nostalgic write that pulls at the heart. Lovely
February 28th, 2025 04:25
NIGHTMARE
Poetic Licence said:
The ongoing dance with ever present nightmares, nicely expressed
February 27th, 2025 07:58
Poetic Licence said:
The ongoing dance with ever present nightmares, nicely expressed
February 27th, 2025 07:58
NIGHTMARE
sorenbarrett said:
This seems to me a commentary on nightmares itself. Metaphor and more. nicely done
February 27th, 2025 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
This seems to me a commentary on nightmares itself. Metaphor and more. nicely done
February 27th, 2025 04:42
THE BIGGEST KILLER
Poetic Licence said:
A painful and sad write to read, but a very valid one as it is on the increase, have been there and it\'s an awful place to be, nicely expressed and written
February 26th, 2025 08:40
Poetic Licence said:
A painful and sad write to read, but a very valid one as it is on the increase, have been there and it\'s an awful place to be, nicely expressed and written
February 26th, 2025 08:40
THE BIGGEST KILLER
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and sad a tragic flash of memory described before a suicide. Well done
February 26th, 2025 06:33
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and sad a tragic flash of memory described before a suicide. Well done
February 26th, 2025 06:33
THE BIGGEST KILLER
arqios said:
Feeling that there are no choices left is the worst confrontation to face. Been there. 🙏🏻🕊
February 26th, 2025 05:56
arqios said:
Feeling that there are no choices left is the worst confrontation to face. Been there. 🙏🏻🕊
February 26th, 2025 05:56
THREAT OF SNOW
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write, children just want to be children, free from threat and free to play, enjoyed the read
February 25th, 2025 06:48
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write, children just want to be children, free from threat and free to play, enjoyed the read
February 25th, 2025 06:48
THREAT OF SNOW
sorenbarrett said:
Children do not heed threats. A lovely write and full of metaphor as well. Nicely done
February 25th, 2025 05:58
sorenbarrett said:
Children do not heed threats. A lovely write and full of metaphor as well. Nicely done
February 25th, 2025 05:58
BETWEEN
RSM0812 said:
Great write. We all can empathize with familiar memories like this. I really liked this piece. Thanks.
February 25th, 2025 00:02
RSM0812 said:
Great write. We all can empathize with familiar memories like this. I really liked this piece. Thanks.
February 25th, 2025 00:02
BETWEEN
sorenbarrett said:
Oh this is lovely, it is haunting and nostalgic. It has such a feel to it that has no word a longing and a sadness. If I were to go to another language I would say Saudade fits best. A word that has no direct translation. But it seems to fit better than any other. A definite fave
February 24th, 2025 11:13
sorenbarrett said:
Oh this is lovely, it is haunting and nostalgic. It has such a feel to it that has no word a longing and a sadness. If I were to go to another language I would say Saudade fits best. A word that has no direct translation. But it seems to fit better than any other. A definite fave
February 24th, 2025 11:13
EMMA ( 1986 )
sorenbarrett said:
Tender is the word that comes to mind, sweet too, Memories of my daughters as infants returns and a paternal feel erupts in the breast. Lovely simply lovely a touching poem of parenthood. Well written
February 23rd, 2025 05:48
sorenbarrett said:
Tender is the word that comes to mind, sweet too, Memories of my daughters as infants returns and a paternal feel erupts in the breast. Lovely simply lovely a touching poem of parenthood. Well written
February 23rd, 2025 05:48
THE OLD NOTE
Poetic Licence said:
The note brought back sad memories of loss, nicely expressed in this well written piece
February 22nd, 2025 06:21
Poetic Licence said:
The note brought back sad memories of loss, nicely expressed in this well written piece
February 22nd, 2025 06:21
THE OLD NOTE
arqios said:
Beautiful! I loved finding old notes and written stuff in various nooks of the old ancestral home, when it was still around… almost as fun as taking a ride on a true to life time machine 🙏🏻🕊
February 22nd, 2025 05:54
arqios said:
Beautiful! I loved finding old notes and written stuff in various nooks of the old ancestral home, when it was still around… almost as fun as taking a ride on a true to life time machine 🙏🏻🕊
February 22nd, 2025 05:54
THE OLD NOTE
sorenbarrett said:
I feel sadness and loss in this poem that has a haunting quality. It reads like a voice out of the fog. Very nice
February 22nd, 2025 05:19
sorenbarrett said:
I feel sadness and loss in this poem that has a haunting quality. It reads like a voice out of the fog. Very nice
February 22nd, 2025 05:19
UNKNOWN HERO
arqios said:
A tragic hero and a wonderful verse to tell their tale🙏🏻🕊️
February 21st, 2025 06:00
arqios said:
A tragic hero and a wonderful verse to tell their tale🙏🏻🕊️
February 21st, 2025 06:00
UNKNOWN HERO
sorenbarrett said:
The wounds of war after triumph still bleed. A wonderful write of metaphor that bleeds into the readers mind. Well done
February 21st, 2025 05:36
sorenbarrett said:
The wounds of war after triumph still bleed. A wonderful write of metaphor that bleeds into the readers mind. Well done
February 21st, 2025 05:36
TRAIN STATION
arqios said:
Most families have had this kind of experience in every major conflict in the history of humanity 🙏🏻🕊️
February 20th, 2025 05:05
arqios said:
Most families have had this kind of experience in every major conflict in the history of humanity 🙏🏻🕊️
February 20th, 2025 05:05
TRAIN STATION
sorenbarrett said:
A timeless poem casting a distant image set in a distant time so as not to touch tender nerves but set this in perspective. Well done and with graphic images that remind us well what war is and its lack of purpose. Well done
February 20th, 2025 04:54
sorenbarrett said:
A timeless poem casting a distant image set in a distant time so as not to touch tender nerves but set this in perspective. Well done and with graphic images that remind us well what war is and its lack of purpose. Well done
February 20th, 2025 04:54
JAGGED
arqios said:
Like a razor or a saw in its movement, tempo and rhythm 🙏🏻🕊
February 19th, 2025 05:30
arqios said:
Like a razor or a saw in its movement, tempo and rhythm 🙏🏻🕊
February 19th, 2025 05:30
JAGGED
sorenbarrett said:
It is the flow and rhyme of this poem that I loved the most. Very nicely done and deserves a fave
February 19th, 2025 05:04
sorenbarrett said:
It is the flow and rhyme of this poem that I loved the most. Very nicely done and deserves a fave
February 19th, 2025 05:04
ROMANTIC WARRIOR
sorenbarrett said:
Chasing a dream is a long journey that is like trying to catch a cloud in a net or the classic looking for the end of a rainbow. A lovely write.
February 18th, 2025 05:45
sorenbarrett said:
Chasing a dream is a long journey that is like trying to catch a cloud in a net or the classic looking for the end of a rainbow. A lovely write.
February 18th, 2025 05:45
ROMANTIC WARRIOR
Poetic Licence said:
A very poetic view on life and the battles we face, enjoyable read
February 18th, 2025 05:21
Poetic Licence said:
A very poetic view on life and the battles we face, enjoyable read
February 18th, 2025 05:21
ROMANTIC WARRIOR
arqios said:
A very romantic view of life and it’s challenges. Don Quixote’s windmill giants are a far cry from this reality. 🙏🏻🕊
February 18th, 2025 04:07
arqios said:
A very romantic view of life and it’s challenges. Don Quixote’s windmill giants are a far cry from this reality. 🙏🏻🕊
February 18th, 2025 04:07
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