Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)
PHOTOGRAPH
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write, I like the not framing of the photo, I think when people do that, they are framing what they want to remember not who the person was, enjoyed the read
May 13th, 2025 03:19
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write, I like the not framing of the photo, I think when people do that, they are framing what they want to remember not who the person was, enjoyed the read
May 13th, 2025 03:19
PHOTOGRAPH
Neilton said:
You wore freedom
As a coat
Such a great line !This is exactly how I feel when I look at a picture of a friend that changed or a loved one that is no longer here in this world! Perfectly written
May 13th, 2025 01:12
Neilton said:
You wore freedom
As a coat
Such a great line !This is exactly how I feel when I look at a picture of a friend that changed or a loved one that is no longer here in this world! Perfectly written
May 13th, 2025 01:12
IRISH LULLABY
Ellen Marsell said:
A very warm poem — and at the same time, strikingly deep.
May 12th, 2025 13:37
Ellen Marsell said:
A very warm poem — and at the same time, strikingly deep.
May 12th, 2025 13:37
IRISH LULLABY
sorenbarrett said:
And if we listen hard enough we can hear our mothers sing as well. A most lovely poem and feeling a fave
May 12th, 2025 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
And if we listen hard enough we can hear our mothers sing as well. A most lovely poem and feeling a fave
May 12th, 2025 04:31
IRISH LULLABY
Poetic Licence said:
Now that is a very sweet write, enjoyed the read
May 12th, 2025 03:58
Poetic Licence said:
Now that is a very sweet write, enjoyed the read
May 12th, 2025 03:58
JULIA
Hollow Enigma said:
I will say for some reaosn when I first read Julia my mind went ot singing Dire Straights but whatever lol. had a lot ifun with the rhythm of this poem. Had difficuly keeping up at the end probably on me though. Thankyou for the poem!
May 11th, 2025 05:53
Hollow Enigma said:
I will say for some reaosn when I first read Julia my mind went ot singing Dire Straights but whatever lol. had a lot ifun with the rhythm of this poem. Had difficuly keeping up at the end probably on me though. Thankyou for the poem!
May 11th, 2025 05:53
JULIA
sorenbarrett said:
A dark write of an illness neglected by medicine with a bleak prognosis. Well written
May 11th, 2025 05:00
sorenbarrett said:
A dark write of an illness neglected by medicine with a bleak prognosis. Well written
May 11th, 2025 05:00
JULIA
Poetic Licence said:
Another sad write around addiction, and watching the slow demise of someone, nicely expressed and written
May 11th, 2025 03:57
Poetic Licence said:
Another sad write around addiction, and watching the slow demise of someone, nicely expressed and written
May 11th, 2025 03:57
GOLDEN HAIR
sorenbarrett said:
Sadness is all that comes from wars disputes over land, power, beliefs, misunderstandings and greed. A well written piece the brings on strong feelings by the images presented. Well done
May 10th, 2025 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
Sadness is all that comes from wars disputes over land, power, beliefs, misunderstandings and greed. A well written piece the brings on strong feelings by the images presented. Well done
May 10th, 2025 04:27
GOLDEN HAIR
Poetic Licence said:
A sad and haunting write of the devastation of war, something we just have to much off, nicely expressed and written
May 10th, 2025 04:13
Poetic Licence said:
A sad and haunting write of the devastation of war, something we just have to much off, nicely expressed and written
May 10th, 2025 04:13
IN FLIGHT
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of love that has drifted, make you write, nicely done
May 9th, 2025 06:15
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of love that has drifted, make you write, nicely done
May 9th, 2025 06:15
IN FLIGHT
sorenbarrett said:
Bits and pieces give glimpses of sparks of love through metaphor . Enticing and thought provoking nicely done
May 9th, 2025 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
Bits and pieces give glimpses of sparks of love through metaphor . Enticing and thought provoking nicely done
May 9th, 2025 04:26
THE WOMAN AROUND THE CORNER
Poetic Licence said:
Sad depiction of the slow self destruction of drug addiction, nicely composed
May 8th, 2025 05:36
Poetic Licence said:
Sad depiction of the slow self destruction of drug addiction, nicely composed
May 8th, 2025 05:36
THE WOMAN AROUND THE CORNER
sorenbarrett said:
In few words a self destructive addiction depicted in such poetic form. Well worded and great poetic images with metaphor and some rhyme. Very nicely done and a fave
May 8th, 2025 05:33
sorenbarrett said:
In few words a self destructive addiction depicted in such poetic form. Well worded and great poetic images with metaphor and some rhyme. Very nicely done and a fave
May 8th, 2025 05:33
GHOSTS OF WAR
sorenbarrett said:
The pointlessness of war and all the consequences it brings. A cold read. This may be taken as a metaphor and an internal war within oneself.
May 7th, 2025 03:50
sorenbarrett said:
The pointlessness of war and all the consequences it brings. A cold read. This may be taken as a metaphor and an internal war within oneself.
May 7th, 2025 03:50
GHOSTS OF WAR
Poetic Licence said:
I sense a asking what are wars for as generally no one is better off after one, nicely expressed and written
May 7th, 2025 02:56
Poetic Licence said:
I sense a asking what are wars for as generally no one is better off after one, nicely expressed and written
May 7th, 2025 02:56
LOVE
Damaso said:
\"An arrow
Tipped in poison\" What a pain! Thanks for this piece. Best regards
May 6th, 2025 09:05
Damaso said:
\"An arrow
Tipped in poison\" What a pain! Thanks for this piece. Best regards
May 6th, 2025 09:05
LOVE
sorenbarrett said:
It is the combination of the meter, flow and rhyme together with the message that gets the fave in this remarkable poem evoking a sense of emotional sadness over what could have and should have been. Lovely
May 6th, 2025 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
It is the combination of the meter, flow and rhyme together with the message that gets the fave in this remarkable poem evoking a sense of emotional sadness over what could have and should have been. Lovely
May 6th, 2025 04:27
FORGOTTEN
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and tragic a loss before the loss a death before the death. So nicely set in this poem and spiced with rhyme it tells its story of forgetfulness. A fave
May 5th, 2025 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and tragic a loss before the loss a death before the death. So nicely set in this poem and spiced with rhyme it tells its story of forgetfulness. A fave
May 5th, 2025 04:29
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