Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)
EMPTY CHURCH
Hollow Enigma said:
Awesome stuff as always! I imagen its me trying to force myself to find a preace, reckoning or just rockbottom.
May 26th, 2025 03:35
Hollow Enigma said:
Awesome stuff as always! I imagen its me trying to force myself to find a preace, reckoning or just rockbottom.
May 26th, 2025 03:35
TALL SHIPS
Lorenz said:
What a beautiful image that sails over the memory of a lost ocean !
May 25th, 2025 04:27
Lorenz said:
What a beautiful image that sails over the memory of a lost ocean !
May 25th, 2025 04:27
TALL SHIPS
David Wakeling said:
A great and powerful poem.I was taken to the seaside.Well done
May 25th, 2025 04:17
David Wakeling said:
A great and powerful poem.I was taken to the seaside.Well done
May 25th, 2025 04:17
TALL SHIPS
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the image pained in this beautiful poem. It seemed that i could see each brush stroke applied to the canvass of life in a worded poem. Lovely
May 25th, 2025 03:41
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the image pained in this beautiful poem. It seemed that i could see each brush stroke applied to the canvass of life in a worded poem. Lovely
May 25th, 2025 03:41
FREQUENCY OF GODS
sorenbarrett said:
Death and its mourning portrayed nicely in this poem that may be a dirge a type of lacrimosa for the passing. Very nice
May 24th, 2025 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
Death and its mourning portrayed nicely in this poem that may be a dirge a type of lacrimosa for the passing. Very nice
May 24th, 2025 04:22
CHILD GHOST
sorenbarrett said:
A haunting poem that is left to the reader\'s mind the outcome. This feeling of hanging outcome makes it the more haunting. Nicely done
May 23rd, 2025 05:19
sorenbarrett said:
A haunting poem that is left to the reader\'s mind the outcome. This feeling of hanging outcome makes it the more haunting. Nicely done
May 23rd, 2025 05:19
THE LONESOME FIELD
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely expressed write of the despair of having to accept failure, well written
May 22nd, 2025 12:47
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely expressed write of the despair of having to accept failure, well written
May 22nd, 2025 12:47
THE LONESOME FIELD
sorenbarrett said:
The anguish of failure seeps from these lines and falls in the despair of acceptance at the end. Powerful
May 22nd, 2025 05:14
sorenbarrett said:
The anguish of failure seeps from these lines and falls in the despair of acceptance at the end. Powerful
May 22nd, 2025 05:14
CURSED MOON
rrodriguez said:
I can relate to your message. I\'m a chaplain and I see death a lot... I see an empty shell when the spirit is gone. Thank you for sharing. A well written piece.
May 22nd, 2025 05:03
rrodriguez said:
I can relate to your message. I\'m a chaplain and I see death a lot... I see an empty shell when the spirit is gone. Thank you for sharing. A well written piece.
May 22nd, 2025 05:03
LONE CANDLE
arqios said:
Something about candles and their singular light amid a dark world. Beautiful! 🕯️🕊️🙏🏻
May 21st, 2025 05:35
arqios said:
Something about candles and their singular light amid a dark world. Beautiful! 🕯️🕊️🙏🏻
May 21st, 2025 05:35
LONE CANDLE
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a most haunting quality to it and feels a bit dark and ominous in nature. Very nicely written
May 21st, 2025 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a most haunting quality to it and feels a bit dark and ominous in nature. Very nicely written
May 21st, 2025 04:33
CURSED MOON
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written this poem speaks of death in a most intimate manner with great imagery and metaphor. Very nicely done
May 20th, 2025 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written this poem speaks of death in a most intimate manner with great imagery and metaphor. Very nicely done
May 20th, 2025 04:16
CURSED MOON
arqios said:
This has put words to experiences I have had over the years. Most touched🙏🏻🕊️
May 20th, 2025 03:52
arqios said:
This has put words to experiences I have had over the years. Most touched🙏🏻🕊️
May 20th, 2025 03:52
CURSED MOON
Poetic Licence said:
Very relatable write to many, being in a hospital watching the passing of a loved one, nicely expressed and written
May 20th, 2025 02:42
Poetic Licence said:
Very relatable write to many, being in a hospital watching the passing of a loved one, nicely expressed and written
May 20th, 2025 02:42
DELIVERED
arqios said:
Makes me think about the saying: \"don\'t shoot the messenger\" in many ways the postman in like the Grim Reaper with postal stamp sickle. Pardon the tangent.🙏🏻🕊️
May 19th, 2025 06:33
arqios said:
Makes me think about the saying: \"don\'t shoot the messenger\" in many ways the postman in like the Grim Reaper with postal stamp sickle. Pardon the tangent.🙏🏻🕊️
May 19th, 2025 06:33
DELIVERED
sorenbarrett said:
Mysteries in a letter well written in great rhyme and good meter with a nice flow leaves the reader wondering and guessing what the message was. Death, rejection what does (You\'ve gone away) mean? Then the issue of one knowing and another not. A wonderful poem of intrigue unanswered.
May 19th, 2025 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
Mysteries in a letter well written in great rhyme and good meter with a nice flow leaves the reader wondering and guessing what the message was. Death, rejection what does (You\'ve gone away) mean? Then the issue of one knowing and another not. A wonderful poem of intrigue unanswered.
May 19th, 2025 04:51
THE NAKED GODDESS
sorenbarrett said:
Deep thoughts the cycle of death and life seems to be portrayed here and the issue of time. Nicely written in rhyme.
May 18th, 2025 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
Deep thoughts the cycle of death and life seems to be portrayed here and the issue of time. Nicely written in rhyme.
May 18th, 2025 04:57
UK 2025
arqios said:
That\'s quite concerning...just digesting that makes the skin crawl and the mind falter🙏🏻🕊️
May 17th, 2025 06:41
arqios said:
That\'s quite concerning...just digesting that makes the skin crawl and the mind falter🙏🏻🕊️
May 17th, 2025 06:41
UK 2025
sorenbarrett said:
This super short sums up the message in so few words. The author\'s note reinforces the situation and the reader is left to find the answer.
May 17th, 2025 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
This super short sums up the message in so few words. The author\'s note reinforces the situation and the reader is left to find the answer.
May 17th, 2025 04:22
IDLE SOLITUDE
MatPie said:
how I be feeling nowadays, thank you for capturing a shot of solitude in such a deeply personal way. its beautiful
May 16th, 2025 06:56
MatPie said:
how I be feeling nowadays, thank you for capturing a shot of solitude in such a deeply personal way. its beautiful
May 16th, 2025 06:56
IDLE SOLITUDE
Poetic Licence said:
A very relatable write to me, some people enjoy solitude, myself I end feeling like this, nicely done
May 16th, 2025 05:17
Poetic Licence said:
A very relatable write to me, some people enjoy solitude, myself I end feeling like this, nicely done
May 16th, 2025 05:17
IDLE SOLITUDE
sorenbarrett said:
Cold hard and powerful images of solitude gives a stark feel to this poem painting a winter picture to being alone. Nicely worded
May 16th, 2025 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
Cold hard and powerful images of solitude gives a stark feel to this poem painting a winter picture to being alone. Nicely worded
May 16th, 2025 04:20
A FOREIGN FIELD
sorenbarrett said:
The devastation and meaninglessness of war falls from this poem and lays in front of the reader. Stark and emotionally engaging this poem protests violence and destruction of war. Well done
May 15th, 2025 05:18
sorenbarrett said:
The devastation and meaninglessness of war falls from this poem and lays in front of the reader. Stark and emotionally engaging this poem protests violence and destruction of war. Well done
May 15th, 2025 05:18
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