Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)
WITHOUT CARE
orchidee said:
You not caring? You couldn\'t care less? No use asking us, you and I, to be sympathetic?! lol.
December 19th, 2025 11:53
orchidee said:
You not caring? You couldn\'t care less? No use asking us, you and I, to be sympathetic?! lol.
December 19th, 2025 11:53
WITHOUT CARE
sorenbarrett said:
This poem sets the scene well with painted images of solitude and almost abandonment that fit the title and last line so well
December 19th, 2025 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
This poem sets the scene well with painted images of solitude and almost abandonment that fit the title and last line so well
December 19th, 2025 04:43
WITHOUT CARE
orchidee said:
Good write N. I don\'t care then!! Do you? lol.
December 19th, 2025 04:04
orchidee said:
Good write N. I don\'t care then!! Do you? lol.
December 19th, 2025 04:04
GOTHIC STAINED
sorenbarrett said:
Ignoring the light is sometimes chosen as a way of continuing. A deep poem of a most reflective nature and sometimes reflection can be too painful to consider.
December 18th, 2025 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
Ignoring the light is sometimes chosen as a way of continuing. A deep poem of a most reflective nature and sometimes reflection can be too painful to consider.
December 18th, 2025 04:12
MOMENT
sorenbarrett said:
Anthropomorphizing time in this poem gives it a both seductive and terrifying quality. Nicely done in short ticking words that fall like seconds on a clock
December 17th, 2025 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
Anthropomorphizing time in this poem gives it a both seductive and terrifying quality. Nicely done in short ticking words that fall like seconds on a clock
December 17th, 2025 04:02
GUTTERS CURSED
sorenbarrett said:
This leaves the feel of ruin and destruction, devastation. Metaphorically it spells disaster on an emotional level. Nicely done
December 16th, 2025 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
This leaves the feel of ruin and destruction, devastation. Metaphorically it spells disaster on an emotional level. Nicely done
December 16th, 2025 03:55
A VIOLENT NIGHT
arqios said:
As am I and many, many more, I would imagine. Beautiful expression here 🙏🏻🕊
December 15th, 2025 19:43
arqios said:
As am I and many, many more, I would imagine. Beautiful expression here 🙏🏻🕊
December 15th, 2025 19:43
A VIOLENT NIGHT
Friendship said:
Well written, this poem serves to explore the darker aspects of human experience, reflecting on how external environments can influence internal states, as well as the fragility of human existence in the face of violence and chaos. The poet\'s reflection may be a form of catharsis or an attempt to make sense of a turbulent experience.
December 15th, 2025 16:58
Friendship said:
Well written, this poem serves to explore the darker aspects of human experience, reflecting on how external environments can influence internal states, as well as the fragility of human existence in the face of violence and chaos. The poet\'s reflection may be a form of catharsis or an attempt to make sense of a turbulent experience.
December 15th, 2025 16:58
A VIOLENT NIGHT
orchidee said:
Is it morning yet, or you still in that violent night?! heehee.
December 15th, 2025 15:55
orchidee said:
Is it morning yet, or you still in that violent night?! heehee.
December 15th, 2025 15:55
A VIOLENT NIGHT
sorenbarrett said:
Thoughts can be violent not in physical but mental and emotional manner. A long and lonely night can easily foster them. Well written
December 15th, 2025 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
Thoughts can be violent not in physical but mental and emotional manner. A long and lonely night can easily foster them. Well written
December 15th, 2025 03:58
A VIOLENT NIGHT
orchidee said:
If the theme was not so violent. I would say - a bad-hair night then? Instead of a bad-hair day!
December 15th, 2025 03:26
orchidee said:
If the theme was not so violent. I would say - a bad-hair night then? Instead of a bad-hair day!
December 15th, 2025 03:26
TREMBLING THOUGHTS
sorenbarrett said:
A most intriguing rhyme scheme in this poem pulls the reader through with a sense of wonder. Nicely done
December 14th, 2025 03:51
sorenbarrett said:
A most intriguing rhyme scheme in this poem pulls the reader through with a sense of wonder. Nicely done
December 14th, 2025 03:51
DAY WITHOUT WORDS
sorenbarrett said:
A tumultuous exit and sad departure is conveyed in this poem with no resistance from the second party. Well written I could hear that car door and the engine.
December 13th, 2025 04:39
sorenbarrett said:
A tumultuous exit and sad departure is conveyed in this poem with no resistance from the second party. Well written I could hear that car door and the engine.
December 13th, 2025 04:39
DAY WITHOUT WORDS
orchidee said:
Goo write N. Yes, I never said a word either. Had a day without words, went off in a huff, threw my toys out of my pram, etc! lol.
I would add hissy fit too, but it seems that is an outburst of anger, when words would be said.
December 13th, 2025 03:24
orchidee said:
Goo write N. Yes, I never said a word either. Had a day without words, went off in a huff, threw my toys out of my pram, etc! lol.
I would add hissy fit too, but it seems that is an outburst of anger, when words would be said.
December 13th, 2025 03:24
BEFORE COMING STORM
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful scene is set with this poetic imagery most lovely
December 12th, 2025 04:15
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful scene is set with this poetic imagery most lovely
December 12th, 2025 04:15
DREAMS OF SUMMER
NafisaSB said:
keep reliving the good times, and rememeber dreams can be there for old men too...
December 12th, 2025 01:42
NafisaSB said:
keep reliving the good times, and rememeber dreams can be there for old men too...
December 12th, 2025 01:42
THE HOTTEST DAY
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Aww, why they call it the Shortest Day? Would you prefer it be called the Longest Night? lol. Both have 24 hours. Eh?!
December 11th, 2025 03:45
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Aww, why they call it the Shortest Day? Would you prefer it be called the Longest Night? lol. Both have 24 hours. Eh?!
December 11th, 2025 03:45
THE HOTTEST DAY
sorenbarrett said:
Lips which told so many lies. This line for me ties the previous bright memories and images to something darker and more painful. I love the merging of the two. A lovely poem
December 11th, 2025 03:38
sorenbarrett said:
Lips which told so many lies. This line for me ties the previous bright memories and images to something darker and more painful. I love the merging of the two. A lovely poem
December 11th, 2025 03:38
FOOTSTEPS WHISPER
sorenbarrett said:
This poem holds a ethereal beauty to its cryptic and rather esoteric wording. It reaches beyond. Lovely
December 10th, 2025 03:56
sorenbarrett said:
This poem holds a ethereal beauty to its cryptic and rather esoteric wording. It reaches beyond. Lovely
December 10th, 2025 03:56
FOOTSTEPS WHISPER
orchidee said:
A whispering good write N. Should I have whispered that comment?! lol.
December 10th, 2025 03:36
orchidee said:
A whispering good write N. Should I have whispered that comment?! lol.
December 10th, 2025 03:36
MOMENT WITHOUT A COAT
Katie B. said:
Lovely sentiment. Great write and share!
December 9th, 2025 06:58
Katie B. said:
Lovely sentiment. Great write and share!
December 9th, 2025 06:58
MOMENT WITHOUT A COAT
sorenbarrett said:
I like the way that the second character is left anonymous and can be taken for an old lover, friend or even a symbolic piece of oneself. The startle at seeing and the wondering of where they had been as a ghost fits so well. Very nicely worked out and written a fave
December 9th, 2025 04:01
sorenbarrett said:
I like the way that the second character is left anonymous and can be taken for an old lover, friend or even a symbolic piece of oneself. The startle at seeing and the wondering of where they had been as a ghost fits so well. Very nicely worked out and written a fave
December 9th, 2025 04:01
MOMENT WITHOUT A COAT
orchidee said:
Thank you N. I had a coat. I became a bore at a party, so I had to say \'I\'ll get my coat\' (and be gone). lol.
December 9th, 2025 03:48
orchidee said:
Thank you N. I had a coat. I became a bore at a party, so I had to say \'I\'ll get my coat\' (and be gone). lol.
December 9th, 2025 03:48
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