Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)
BARCODE
Lorenz said:
When the individual feels the community reels .( Brave new world)
January 22nd, 2026 09:49
Lorenz said:
When the individual feels the community reels .( Brave new world)
January 22nd, 2026 09:49
BARCODE
sorenbarrett said:
Where capitalism is established money is the bottom line by which all values are judged. People nothing more than a tool to achieve a goal and he that dies with the most toys wins. A lovely write
January 22nd, 2026 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
Where capitalism is established money is the bottom line by which all values are judged. People nothing more than a tool to achieve a goal and he that dies with the most toys wins. A lovely write
January 22nd, 2026 04:31
CARAVAGGIO ( JUDITH AND HOLOFERNES )
Lorenz said:
I feel the clinical call of this evil twin ...
January 21st, 2026 07:32
Lorenz said:
I feel the clinical call of this evil twin ...
January 21st, 2026 07:32
CARAVAGGIO ( JUDITH AND HOLOFERNES )
Friendship said:
Your poem revolves around the exploration of violence and death, portrayed through the metaphor of art. The poet includes themes of murder, the duality of human nature, and the relationship between destruction and creativity. Nicely done.
January 21st, 2026 07:07
Friendship said:
Your poem revolves around the exploration of violence and death, portrayed through the metaphor of art. The poet includes themes of murder, the duality of human nature, and the relationship between destruction and creativity. Nicely done.
January 21st, 2026 07:07
CARAVAGGIO ( JUDITH AND HOLOFERNES )
sorenbarrett said:
Such a wonderful critique of a painting in a poem art dealing with art. A lovely write
January 21st, 2026 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
Such a wonderful critique of a painting in a poem art dealing with art. A lovely write
January 21st, 2026 04:51
MEMORY RETURNED
gray0328 said:
Your poem explores loss, memory, and the haunting presence of the past, framed through vivid sensory imagery and emotional introspection. It feels like the speaker is walking through the aftermath of something deeply personal — perhaps a relationship that ended or the death of someone close — and is caught between the realities of the present and the echoes of what once was. Well Done Norman
January 20th, 2026 10:33
gray0328 said:
Your poem explores loss, memory, and the haunting presence of the past, framed through vivid sensory imagery and emotional introspection. It feels like the speaker is walking through the aftermath of something deeply personal — perhaps a relationship that ended or the death of someone close — and is caught between the realities of the present and the echoes of what once was. Well Done Norman
January 20th, 2026 10:33
WHERE WAS YOUR JESUS ?
Friendship said:
A powerful poem. Your poem grapples with the absence and perceived indifference of divinity amidst human suffering, particularly in the context of war. It questions the presence of Jesus and the spirit of protection during tragic events characterized by death, destruction, and despair.
January 20th, 2026 08:40
Friendship said:
A powerful poem. Your poem grapples with the absence and perceived indifference of divinity amidst human suffering, particularly in the context of war. It questions the presence of Jesus and the spirit of protection during tragic events characterized by death, destruction, and despair.
January 20th, 2026 08:40
WHERE WAS YOUR JESUS ?
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful, and still poignant today maybe even more so. Not just in war declared but in our own streets between political factions and in our institutions where we treat illegal aliens as non human and even citizens as undeserving of life. A sad world we live in
January 20th, 2026 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful, and still poignant today maybe even more so. Not just in war declared but in our own streets between political factions and in our institutions where we treat illegal aliens as non human and even citizens as undeserving of life. A sad world we live in
January 20th, 2026 04:16
WHY ?
NafisaSB said:
Medals may have been won
At the cost of a brother or son ..
So many innocents slain
Si much grief and pain😔
January 20th, 2026 02:44
NafisaSB said:
Medals may have been won
At the cost of a brother or son ..
So many innocents slain
Si much grief and pain😔
January 20th, 2026 02:44
MIDNIGHT UPON
NafisaSB said:
solitude amidst the reverly well represented...
January 20th, 2026 00:07
NafisaSB said:
solitude amidst the reverly well represented...
January 20th, 2026 00:07
A WEARY TRAVELLER
sorenbarrett said:
How oft I have been in that church. A beautiful poem with great rhyme and pacing that shows wonderful flow so nicely done that it conveys that rest spoken of and is a fave
January 19th, 2026 04:44
sorenbarrett said:
How oft I have been in that church. A beautiful poem with great rhyme and pacing that shows wonderful flow so nicely done that it conveys that rest spoken of and is a fave
January 19th, 2026 04:44
MEMORY RETURNED
sorenbarrett said:
Memories and fading ones in this poem whether due to distance, disease, or desire a sad loss.
January 18th, 2026 04:28
sorenbarrett said:
Memories and fading ones in this poem whether due to distance, disease, or desire a sad loss.
January 18th, 2026 04:28
MEMORY RETURNED
orchidee said:
Good write N. You got 3 brain cells like me? Difficult to remember things? lol.
January 18th, 2026 03:01
orchidee said:
Good write N. You got 3 brain cells like me? Difficult to remember things? lol.
January 18th, 2026 03:01
THE NIGHT CAFE BY VINCENT VAN GOGH
RSM0812 said:
This is a powerfull write man. \"The sleepy lust\", \"The essence of man\". Brilliant!!!!!
January 17th, 2026 12:33
RSM0812 said:
This is a powerfull write man. \"The sleepy lust\", \"The essence of man\". Brilliant!!!!!
January 17th, 2026 12:33
THE LONELY DAWN
RSM0812 said:
This was perfectly rhymed all the way through. I didnt want it to end. Lol. Great job.
January 17th, 2026 12:30
RSM0812 said:
This was perfectly rhymed all the way through. I didnt want it to end. Lol. Great job.
January 17th, 2026 12:30
DEATH ENGAGES
RSM0812 said:
This is remarkably written with curved rhymes written elegantly and with solemn care. One of my favs fir a while.
January 17th, 2026 12:26
RSM0812 said:
This is remarkably written with curved rhymes written elegantly and with solemn care. One of my favs fir a while.
January 17th, 2026 12:26
DEEP
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant flow in this poem with some near rhyme make for a stunning piece and a fave
January 17th, 2026 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant flow in this poem with some near rhyme make for a stunning piece and a fave
January 17th, 2026 04:32
DEATH ENGAGES
arqios said:
This has outlined a portion of this poet\'s heart. 🙏🕊️
January 16th, 2026 21:29
arqios said:
This has outlined a portion of this poet\'s heart. 🙏🕊️
January 16th, 2026 21:29
DEATH ENGAGES
sorenbarrett said:
The last two lines gave me the image of poetic words remaining like bones where bodies were burned by lime. Well written
January 16th, 2026 06:57
sorenbarrett said:
The last two lines gave me the image of poetic words remaining like bones where bodies were burned by lime. Well written
January 16th, 2026 06:57
FROZEN PAIN
Katie B. said:
Terrific write, powerful and moving. Thanks for sharing!
January 15th, 2026 09:34
Katie B. said:
Terrific write, powerful and moving. Thanks for sharing!
January 15th, 2026 09:34
TO FIND A HAND
NafisaSB said:
the longing for an anchor is so well expressed here - great job
January 15th, 2026 02:08
NafisaSB said:
the longing for an anchor is so well expressed here - great job
January 15th, 2026 02:08
STAGGERED RAIN
sorenbarrett said:
Most melancholic and at the same time a bit wistful it paints a gray and wet day. The repeated stanza and rhyme give a powerful and heavy feel to this poem a fave
January 14th, 2026 05:05
sorenbarrett said:
Most melancholic and at the same time a bit wistful it paints a gray and wet day. The repeated stanza and rhyme give a powerful and heavy feel to this poem a fave
January 14th, 2026 05:05
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