Comments received on poems by nephilim56
GREAT GRANDSON ( TO REGGIE )
sorenbarrett said:
Touching to any of us that have been a father. A beautiful write well worded in such poetic form. A fave
May 27th, 2025 05:16
sorenbarrett said:
Touching to any of us that have been a father. A beautiful write well worded in such poetic form. A fave
May 27th, 2025 05:16
EMPTY CHURCH
sorenbarrett said:
The search for meaning in life and how you make sense out of chaos. A lovely existential write.
May 26th, 2025 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
The search for meaning in life and how you make sense out of chaos. A lovely existential write.
May 26th, 2025 04:47
EMPTY CHURCH
Hollow Enigma said:
Awesome stuff as always! I imagen its me trying to force myself to find a preace, reckoning or just rockbottom.
May 26th, 2025 03:35
Hollow Enigma said:
Awesome stuff as always! I imagen its me trying to force myself to find a preace, reckoning or just rockbottom.
May 26th, 2025 03:35
TALL SHIPS
Lorenz said:
What a beautiful image that sails over the memory of a lost ocean !
May 25th, 2025 04:27
Lorenz said:
What a beautiful image that sails over the memory of a lost ocean !
May 25th, 2025 04:27
TALL SHIPS
David Wakeling said:
A great and powerful poem.I was taken to the seaside.Well done
May 25th, 2025 04:17
David Wakeling said:
A great and powerful poem.I was taken to the seaside.Well done
May 25th, 2025 04:17
TALL SHIPS
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the image pained in this beautiful poem. It seemed that i could see each brush stroke applied to the canvass of life in a worded poem. Lovely
May 25th, 2025 03:41
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the image pained in this beautiful poem. It seemed that i could see each brush stroke applied to the canvass of life in a worded poem. Lovely
May 25th, 2025 03:41
FREQUENCY OF GODS
sorenbarrett said:
Death and its mourning portrayed nicely in this poem that may be a dirge a type of lacrimosa for the passing. Very nice
May 24th, 2025 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
Death and its mourning portrayed nicely in this poem that may be a dirge a type of lacrimosa for the passing. Very nice
May 24th, 2025 04:22
CHILD GHOST
sorenbarrett said:
A haunting poem that is left to the reader\'s mind the outcome. This feeling of hanging outcome makes it the more haunting. Nicely done
May 23rd, 2025 05:19
sorenbarrett said:
A haunting poem that is left to the reader\'s mind the outcome. This feeling of hanging outcome makes it the more haunting. Nicely done
May 23rd, 2025 05:19
THE LONESOME FIELD
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely expressed write of the despair of having to accept failure, well written
May 22nd, 2025 12:47
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely expressed write of the despair of having to accept failure, well written
May 22nd, 2025 12:47
THE LONESOME FIELD
sorenbarrett said:
The anguish of failure seeps from these lines and falls in the despair of acceptance at the end. Powerful
May 22nd, 2025 05:14
sorenbarrett said:
The anguish of failure seeps from these lines and falls in the despair of acceptance at the end. Powerful
May 22nd, 2025 05:14
CURSED MOON
rrodriguez said:
I can relate to your message. I\'m a chaplain and I see death a lot... I see an empty shell when the spirit is gone. Thank you for sharing. A well written piece.
May 22nd, 2025 05:03
rrodriguez said:
I can relate to your message. I\'m a chaplain and I see death a lot... I see an empty shell when the spirit is gone. Thank you for sharing. A well written piece.
May 22nd, 2025 05:03
LONE CANDLE
arqios said:
Something about candles and their singular light amid a dark world. Beautiful! 🕯️🕊️🙏🏻
May 21st, 2025 05:35
arqios said:
Something about candles and their singular light amid a dark world. Beautiful! 🕯️🕊️🙏🏻
May 21st, 2025 05:35
LONE CANDLE
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a most haunting quality to it and feels a bit dark and ominous in nature. Very nicely written
May 21st, 2025 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a most haunting quality to it and feels a bit dark and ominous in nature. Very nicely written
May 21st, 2025 04:33
CURSED MOON
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written this poem speaks of death in a most intimate manner with great imagery and metaphor. Very nicely done
May 20th, 2025 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written this poem speaks of death in a most intimate manner with great imagery and metaphor. Very nicely done
May 20th, 2025 04:16
CURSED MOON
arqios said:
This has put words to experiences I have had over the years. Most touched🙏🏻🕊️
May 20th, 2025 03:52
arqios said:
This has put words to experiences I have had over the years. Most touched🙏🏻🕊️
May 20th, 2025 03:52
CURSED MOON
Poetic Licence said:
Very relatable write to many, being in a hospital watching the passing of a loved one, nicely expressed and written
May 20th, 2025 02:42
Poetic Licence said:
Very relatable write to many, being in a hospital watching the passing of a loved one, nicely expressed and written
May 20th, 2025 02:42
DELIVERED
arqios said:
Makes me think about the saying: \"don\'t shoot the messenger\" in many ways the postman in like the Grim Reaper with postal stamp sickle. Pardon the tangent.🙏🏻🕊️
May 19th, 2025 06:33
arqios said:
Makes me think about the saying: \"don\'t shoot the messenger\" in many ways the postman in like the Grim Reaper with postal stamp sickle. Pardon the tangent.🙏🏻🕊️
May 19th, 2025 06:33
DELIVERED
sorenbarrett said:
Mysteries in a letter well written in great rhyme and good meter with a nice flow leaves the reader wondering and guessing what the message was. Death, rejection what does (You\'ve gone away) mean? Then the issue of one knowing and another not. A wonderful poem of intrigue unanswered.
May 19th, 2025 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
Mysteries in a letter well written in great rhyme and good meter with a nice flow leaves the reader wondering and guessing what the message was. Death, rejection what does (You\'ve gone away) mean? Then the issue of one knowing and another not. A wonderful poem of intrigue unanswered.
May 19th, 2025 04:51
THE NAKED GODDESS
sorenbarrett said:
Deep thoughts the cycle of death and life seems to be portrayed here and the issue of time. Nicely written in rhyme.
May 18th, 2025 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
Deep thoughts the cycle of death and life seems to be portrayed here and the issue of time. Nicely written in rhyme.
May 18th, 2025 04:57
UK 2025
arqios said:
That\'s quite concerning...just digesting that makes the skin crawl and the mind falter🙏🏻🕊️
May 17th, 2025 06:41
arqios said:
That\'s quite concerning...just digesting that makes the skin crawl and the mind falter🙏🏻🕊️
May 17th, 2025 06:41
UK 2025
sorenbarrett said:
This super short sums up the message in so few words. The author\'s note reinforces the situation and the reader is left to find the answer.
May 17th, 2025 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
This super short sums up the message in so few words. The author\'s note reinforces the situation and the reader is left to find the answer.
May 17th, 2025 04:22
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