Comments received on poems by nephilim56
GOLDEN HAIR
Poetic Licence said:
A sad and haunting write of the devastation of war, something we just have to much off, nicely expressed and written
May 10th, 2025 04:13
Poetic Licence said:
A sad and haunting write of the devastation of war, something we just have to much off, nicely expressed and written
May 10th, 2025 04:13
IN FLIGHT
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of love that has drifted, make you write, nicely done
May 9th, 2025 06:15
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of love that has drifted, make you write, nicely done
May 9th, 2025 06:15
IN FLIGHT
sorenbarrett said:
Bits and pieces give glimpses of sparks of love through metaphor . Enticing and thought provoking nicely done
May 9th, 2025 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
Bits and pieces give glimpses of sparks of love through metaphor . Enticing and thought provoking nicely done
May 9th, 2025 04:26
THE WOMAN AROUND THE CORNER
Poetic Licence said:
Sad depiction of the slow self destruction of drug addiction, nicely composed
May 8th, 2025 05:36
Poetic Licence said:
Sad depiction of the slow self destruction of drug addiction, nicely composed
May 8th, 2025 05:36
THE WOMAN AROUND THE CORNER
sorenbarrett said:
In few words a self destructive addiction depicted in such poetic form. Well worded and great poetic images with metaphor and some rhyme. Very nicely done and a fave
May 8th, 2025 05:33
sorenbarrett said:
In few words a self destructive addiction depicted in such poetic form. Well worded and great poetic images with metaphor and some rhyme. Very nicely done and a fave
May 8th, 2025 05:33
GHOSTS OF WAR
sorenbarrett said:
The pointlessness of war and all the consequences it brings. A cold read. This may be taken as a metaphor and an internal war within oneself.
May 7th, 2025 03:50
sorenbarrett said:
The pointlessness of war and all the consequences it brings. A cold read. This may be taken as a metaphor and an internal war within oneself.
May 7th, 2025 03:50
GHOSTS OF WAR
Poetic Licence said:
I sense a asking what are wars for as generally no one is better off after one, nicely expressed and written
May 7th, 2025 02:56
Poetic Licence said:
I sense a asking what are wars for as generally no one is better off after one, nicely expressed and written
May 7th, 2025 02:56
LOVE
Damaso said:
\"An arrow
Tipped in poison\" What a pain! Thanks for this piece. Best regards
May 6th, 2025 09:05
Damaso said:
\"An arrow
Tipped in poison\" What a pain! Thanks for this piece. Best regards
May 6th, 2025 09:05
LOVE
sorenbarrett said:
It is the combination of the meter, flow and rhyme together with the message that gets the fave in this remarkable poem evoking a sense of emotional sadness over what could have and should have been. Lovely
May 6th, 2025 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
It is the combination of the meter, flow and rhyme together with the message that gets the fave in this remarkable poem evoking a sense of emotional sadness over what could have and should have been. Lovely
May 6th, 2025 04:27
FORGOTTEN
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and tragic a loss before the loss a death before the death. So nicely set in this poem and spiced with rhyme it tells its story of forgetfulness. A fave
May 5th, 2025 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and tragic a loss before the loss a death before the death. So nicely set in this poem and spiced with rhyme it tells its story of forgetfulness. A fave
May 5th, 2025 04:29
DEVILS PACT
sorenbarrett said:
This one smacks of Robert Johnson the devil the crossroads and the guitar. The man that couldn\'t play and sold his soul to the devil for the gift of music. Lovely
May 4th, 2025 04:52
sorenbarrett said:
This one smacks of Robert Johnson the devil the crossroads and the guitar. The man that couldn\'t play and sold his soul to the devil for the gift of music. Lovely
May 4th, 2025 04:52
AT THE GATES
sorenbarrett said:
This I think is one of your best. It is quite sophisticated in its wording with near rhymes barley recognizable in the background like ghosts. The meter is such that it carries one onward down a slippery slope toward the end. The message is both visually painted in a quaint literal manner and in a deeper metaphoric meaning. A most lovely write and a fave
May 3rd, 2025 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
This I think is one of your best. It is quite sophisticated in its wording with near rhymes barley recognizable in the background like ghosts. The meter is such that it carries one onward down a slippery slope toward the end. The message is both visually painted in a quaint literal manner and in a deeper metaphoric meaning. A most lovely write and a fave
May 3rd, 2025 04:03
MEN OF CLAY
sorenbarrett said:
This poem tells a story to me of the circle of emotion and how we come back to where we began as foolish as the morning we awoke to go through another day in bliss but not learning. Such is love.
May 2nd, 2025 04:50
sorenbarrett said:
This poem tells a story to me of the circle of emotion and how we come back to where we began as foolish as the morning we awoke to go through another day in bliss but not learning. Such is love.
May 2nd, 2025 04:50
MIDNIGHT BUS
Teddy.15 said:
This brings back so many memories of my childhood in London. 🌹
May 1st, 2025 07:05
Teddy.15 said:
This brings back so many memories of my childhood in London. 🌹
May 1st, 2025 07:05
TREMBLE
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor the closing of the eye and night and its opening at dawn. Very nice word usage as well
April 30th, 2025 04:06
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor the closing of the eye and night and its opening at dawn. Very nice word usage as well
April 30th, 2025 04:06
FRAGILE HANDS
sorenbarrett said:
nicely written this poem beats with love\'s heart through the night. Well done
April 29th, 2025 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
nicely written this poem beats with love\'s heart through the night. Well done
April 29th, 2025 04:57
GOODBYE FRIEND
NafisaSB said:
a hauntingly beautiful farewell message - may his/her soul rest in eternal peace
April 29th, 2025 00:42
NafisaSB said:
a hauntingly beautiful farewell message - may his/her soul rest in eternal peace
April 29th, 2025 00:42
MOONLIGHT
Cheeky Missy said:
The moon nakedly exposes the corpse\'s ghastly stare, as if to chill passersby with the notice of Death\'s presence. Macabre and frightening, it seems to inevitably point to whither the soul departed. Chillingly rendered with excellent imagery and a deeply haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 28th, 2025 18:10
Cheeky Missy said:
The moon nakedly exposes the corpse\'s ghastly stare, as if to chill passersby with the notice of Death\'s presence. Macabre and frightening, it seems to inevitably point to whither the soul departed. Chillingly rendered with excellent imagery and a deeply haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 28th, 2025 18:10
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