Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)
IN POETRY KEPT
RSM0812 said:
Great rhyme scheme as always. Loved your choice of descriptive words u used to get your point across. Nicely done.
June 24th, 2026 15:07
RSM0812 said:
Great rhyme scheme as always. Loved your choice of descriptive words u used to get your point across. Nicely done.
June 24th, 2026 15:07
IN POETRY KEPT
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, what struck me most is the contrast between what is visible and what remains hidden. The shadow, the cloak, the stranger moving away from the crowd...all of it builds toward that final acknowledgment that so much suffering goes unwitnessed. Yet through the words, something important is still shared. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 24th, 2026 12:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, what struck me most is the contrast between what is visible and what remains hidden. The shadow, the cloak, the stranger moving away from the crowd...all of it builds toward that final acknowledgment that so much suffering goes unwitnessed. Yet through the words, something important is still shared. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 24th, 2026 12:44
IN POETRY KEPT
arqios said:
Probably top tier fave of your work to date. Delectable.🕊️🙏🤩
June 24th, 2026 06:02
arqios said:
Probably top tier fave of your work to date. Delectable.🕊️🙏🤩
June 24th, 2026 06:02
IN POETRY KEPT
sorenbarrett said:
Not seen for who one is misunderstood is the essence of this poem that I get. Nicely written in good rhyme and meter. Well done
June 24th, 2026 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
Not seen for who one is misunderstood is the essence of this poem that I get. Nicely written in good rhyme and meter. Well done
June 24th, 2026 04:20
IN POETRY KEPT
orchidee said:
Good write N. In poetry kept - the notebook you kept, to write poems in while waiting for that bus?! lol.
June 24th, 2026 01:10
orchidee said:
Good write N. In poetry kept - the notebook you kept, to write poems in while waiting for that bus?! lol.
June 24th, 2026 01:10
WITHOUT A BRIDE
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this hit me hard. There is a quiet sadness running through it that never lets up. By the end, you really feel the weight this man has been carrying for years. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 23rd, 2026 22:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this hit me hard. There is a quiet sadness running through it that never lets up. By the end, you really feel the weight this man has been carrying for years. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 23rd, 2026 22:29
WITHOUT A BRIDE
orchidee said:
Good write N. And now your next poem: \'Without a bus\'. lol.
June 23rd, 2026 11:35
orchidee said:
Good write N. And now your next poem: \'Without a bus\'. lol.
June 23rd, 2026 11:35
WITHOUT A BRIDE
arqios said:
Feels like it was overly real for him that day. 🕊️🙏
June 23rd, 2026 05:45
arqios said:
Feels like it was overly real for him that day. 🕊️🙏
June 23rd, 2026 05:45
WITHOUT A BRIDE
sorenbarrett said:
Betrayal is a bitter pill to swallow it often catches in one\'s throat and doesn\'t go down and when it does it an make one sick. Well written Norman
June 23rd, 2026 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
Betrayal is a bitter pill to swallow it often catches in one\'s throat and doesn\'t go down and when it does it an make one sick. Well written Norman
June 23rd, 2026 04:02
CLOSURE
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Norman, those in power just do not care for people any more.
#As an aside I was a metallurgist in a foundry many years ago.
Andy
June 23rd, 2026 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Norman, those in power just do not care for people any more.
#As an aside I was a metallurgist in a foundry many years ago.
Andy
June 23rd, 2026 01:19
CLOSURE
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, what stayed with me most was the contrast between what once was and what remains. You can feel the pride in the work, the effort, the contribution...and then the emptiness that follows when all of that is set aside. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 22nd, 2026 10:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, what stayed with me most was the contrast between what once was and what remains. You can feel the pride in the work, the effort, the contribution...and then the emptiness that follows when all of that is set aside. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 22nd, 2026 10:27
TEARS REMAIN
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this really moved me. There is such a gentle reassurance running through it from beginning to end. Even with the sadness present, I walked away feeling comforted rather than weighed down. Beautiful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 22nd, 2026 10:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this really moved me. There is such a gentle reassurance running through it from beginning to end. Even with the sadness present, I walked away feeling comforted rather than weighed down. Beautiful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 22nd, 2026 10:02
CLOSURE
orchidee said:
I thought it was gonna be about the closure of the bus stop! heehee. Or was that years ago?!
June 22nd, 2026 06:58
orchidee said:
I thought it was gonna be about the closure of the bus stop! heehee. Or was that years ago?!
June 22nd, 2026 06:58
CLOSURE
arqios said:
We are navigating a world with the former/older OS that they keep scrapping and upgrading while keeping the majority out of the loop. 🕊️🙏
June 22nd, 2026 06:33
arqios said:
We are navigating a world with the former/older OS that they keep scrapping and upgrading while keeping the majority out of the loop. 🕊️🙏
June 22nd, 2026 06:33
CLOSURE
sorenbarrett said:
I like the style of this poem as it tells its story in such short bursts. Nicely rhymed and with a rapid flow it is a fave
June 22nd, 2026 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
I like the style of this poem as it tells its story in such short bursts. Nicely rhymed and with a rapid flow it is a fave
June 22nd, 2026 03:54
TEARS REMAIN
orchidee said:
Yes, tears remain as we wait for that bus - it makes us despair! lol.
June 21st, 2026 08:08
orchidee said:
Yes, tears remain as we wait for that bus - it makes us despair! lol.
June 21st, 2026 08:08
TEARS REMAIN
arqios said:
This remains after reading and is an instant fave. 🕊️🙏
June 21st, 2026 08:05
arqios said:
This remains after reading and is an instant fave. 🕊️🙏
June 21st, 2026 08:05
TEARS REMAIN
sorenbarrett said:
The rhyme carries the reader along through this journey and reassures them that the next line and event in time will be fine. Nicely done
June 21st, 2026 07:17
sorenbarrett said:
The rhyme carries the reader along through this journey and reassures them that the next line and event in time will be fine. Nicely done
June 21st, 2026 07:17
EQUAL SHARES
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Norman but I am sure all is well.
Andy
June 21st, 2026 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Norman but I am sure all is well.
Andy
June 21st, 2026 01:11
IF I WAS
Syd said:
Brilliantly written Norman. I love the flow to this piece.
- Syd
June 20th, 2026 12:11
Syd said:
Brilliantly written Norman. I love the flow to this piece.
- Syd
June 20th, 2026 12:11
EQUAL SHARES
orchidee said:
I was cut orf - so, as I was about to say... Good write N.
June 20th, 2026 11:10
orchidee said:
I was cut orf - so, as I was about to say... Good write N.
June 20th, 2026 11:10
MEMORY
FrasMac said:
Yes. I can relate well to this, since I\'m well over the halfway point.....
June 20th, 2026 09:47
FrasMac said:
Yes. I can relate well to this, since I\'m well over the halfway point.....
June 20th, 2026 09:47
EQUAL SHARES
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this really moved me. There\'s a quiet heaviness here that settles in line by line, and by the end the full weight of the loss becomes impossible to ignore. Powerful piece, my friend. A fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 20th, 2026 09:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this really moved me. There\'s a quiet heaviness here that settles in line by line, and by the end the full weight of the loss becomes impossible to ignore. Powerful piece, my friend. A fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 20th, 2026 09:32
EQUAL SHARES
Friendship said:
A powerful poem. Your poem can be interpreted as an exploration of the emotional landscape that follows separation, loss, or the end of a relationship, seeking to understand and articulate the feelings tied to those experiences.
June 20th, 2026 09:32
Friendship said:
A powerful poem. Your poem can be interpreted as an exploration of the emotional landscape that follows separation, loss, or the end of a relationship, seeking to understand and articulate the feelings tied to those experiences.
June 20th, 2026 09:32
EQUAL SHARES
arqios said:
Wave upon wave, verse upon verse moving from heart to heart. A sure fave, dear friend 🙏🏻🕊️
June 20th, 2026 06:31
arqios said:
Wave upon wave, verse upon verse moving from heart to heart. A sure fave, dear friend 🙏🏻🕊️
June 20th, 2026 06:31
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