Comments received on poems by nephilim56
MY BURNING TOWER
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting and enjoyable write, is the burning tower the heart?, or am I way of sink here, enjoyed the read
April 8th, 2025 06:03
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting and enjoyable write, is the burning tower the heart?, or am I way of sink here, enjoyed the read
April 8th, 2025 06:03
MY BURNING TOWER
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor here of a burning tower. A guide, a passion what ever the burning might be it leads through the poem to the end. Very nice
April 8th, 2025 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor here of a burning tower. A guide, a passion what ever the burning might be it leads through the poem to the end. Very nice
April 8th, 2025 04:32
GHOSTLIKE
Teddy.15 said:
I love this theme. I am sensitive to weirdness of supernatural. 🌹
April 7th, 2025 12:42
Teddy.15 said:
I love this theme. I am sensitive to weirdness of supernatural. 🌹
April 7th, 2025 12:42
GHOSTLIKE
sorenbarrett said:
Have felt that before as I feel it now. A most haunting poem. Lovely
April 7th, 2025 03:48
sorenbarrett said:
Have felt that before as I feel it now. A most haunting poem. Lovely
April 7th, 2025 03:48
BUTTERFLY
sorenbarrett said:
If we could only keep that innocence and nonprejudicial view into adulthood how much different our race would be. A lovely poem
April 6th, 2025 06:18
sorenbarrett said:
If we could only keep that innocence and nonprejudicial view into adulthood how much different our race would be. A lovely poem
April 6th, 2025 06:18
BUTTERFLY
Poetic Licence said:
Seeing things through a childs eye would help us, they see the world naturally, in an honest and innocent way, we need to hope for them their will be a better future, enjoyed the read
April 6th, 2025 04:41
Poetic Licence said:
Seeing things through a childs eye would help us, they see the world naturally, in an honest and innocent way, we need to hope for them their will be a better future, enjoyed the read
April 6th, 2025 04:41
THE RIVER
sorenbarrett said:
So many metaphors flow through this poem that it is easy to miss one. Nicely done
April 5th, 2025 05:44
sorenbarrett said:
So many metaphors flow through this poem that it is easy to miss one. Nicely done
April 5th, 2025 05:44
ANGELIC
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written with good meter it flows like honey and with nice rhyme
April 4th, 2025 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written with good meter it flows like honey and with nice rhyme
April 4th, 2025 04:25
VIELLE RUELLES
sorenbarrett said:
Lingering memories lit the aftertaste of coffee are part of this poem. Very nicely written leaving a sense of nostalgia.
April 3rd, 2025 03:24
sorenbarrett said:
Lingering memories lit the aftertaste of coffee are part of this poem. Very nicely written leaving a sense of nostalgia.
April 3rd, 2025 03:24
DREAMER
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderfully written description of a fading dream, very relatable, enjoyed the read
April 2nd, 2025 04:50
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderfully written description of a fading dream, very relatable, enjoyed the read
April 2nd, 2025 04:50
DREAMER
sorenbarrett said:
(The fiery tail of a fading dream) a great opening and line. A wonderful poem full of great imagery. Nicely done
April 2nd, 2025 03:32
sorenbarrett said:
(The fiery tail of a fading dream) a great opening and line. A wonderful poem full of great imagery. Nicely done
April 2nd, 2025 03:32
THE CALM BEFORE
sorenbarrett said:
Suicide is a most serious thing being a one way street with no return it also affects others and may be seen as a selfish act but in some cases may be warranted such as intractable chronic pain in terminal disease and even this people argue. A very serious subject that does not get enough discussion.
April 1st, 2025 05:00
sorenbarrett said:
Suicide is a most serious thing being a one way street with no return it also affects others and may be seen as a selfish act but in some cases may be warranted such as intractable chronic pain in terminal disease and even this people argue. A very serious subject that does not get enough discussion.
April 1st, 2025 05:00
THE CALM BEFORE
Poetic Licence said:
A very poignant and touching write around a sensitive subject, that in today\'s world is dramatically on the increase, nicely expressed and written
April 1st, 2025 03:33
Poetic Licence said:
A very poignant and touching write around a sensitive subject, that in today\'s world is dramatically on the increase, nicely expressed and written
April 1st, 2025 03:33
A GENTLE SOUL
Poetic Licence said:
Just casually travelling the journey of life, enjoyed the read
March 31st, 2025 05:42
Poetic Licence said:
Just casually travelling the journey of life, enjoyed the read
March 31st, 2025 05:42
A GENTLE SOUL
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feel of drifting in this poem where the gentle soul passively floats through life. There is a melancholic feel to this piece. Lovely
March 31st, 2025 04:54
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feel of drifting in this poem where the gentle soul passively floats through life. There is a melancholic feel to this piece. Lovely
March 31st, 2025 04:54
GENOCIDE
sorenbarrett said:
Somber and dark this poem speaks of the shadow cast by memory of the past. Well written
March 30th, 2025 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
Somber and dark this poem speaks of the shadow cast by memory of the past. Well written
March 30th, 2025 04:27
HONEYSUCKLE
Poetic Licence said:
A touch of sadness in this write, a sense of all things will eventually pass, nicely expressed and written
March 29th, 2025 04:52
Poetic Licence said:
A touch of sadness in this write, a sense of all things will eventually pass, nicely expressed and written
March 29th, 2025 04:52
HONEYSUCKLE
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of sadness pervades this poem of passing. There is a feeling in the metaphor that all things have their season. Nicely written
March 29th, 2025 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of sadness pervades this poem of passing. There is a feeling in the metaphor that all things have their season. Nicely written
March 29th, 2025 04:48
SPRINGTIMES TEARS
sorenbarrett said:
There is much hidden in this poem. I have read it three times and each time a new thing appears altering the last reading. Very nicely worded with just enough ambiguity to keep the reader wondering. It has a mysterious and somewhat haunting feel to it.
March 28th, 2025 04:41
sorenbarrett said:
There is much hidden in this poem. I have read it three times and each time a new thing appears altering the last reading. Very nicely worded with just enough ambiguity to keep the reader wondering. It has a mysterious and somewhat haunting feel to it.
March 28th, 2025 04:41
ASHAMED
Poetic Licence said:
I echo every sentiment expressed in this write, nicely done
March 27th, 2025 07:34
Poetic Licence said:
I echo every sentiment expressed in this write, nicely done
March 27th, 2025 07:34
ASHAMED
sorenbarrett said:
Increasing population stokes the fires of a Dachau of the present where it is not religion or ethnicity but monetary value that designates who will be burned.
March 27th, 2025 06:20
sorenbarrett said:
Increasing population stokes the fires of a Dachau of the present where it is not religion or ethnicity but monetary value that designates who will be burned.
March 27th, 2025 06:20
THE ORNATE BOWL
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of connecting with someone in the peace of the night to someone there missing, enjoyed the read
March 26th, 2025 07:17
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of connecting with someone in the peace of the night to someone there missing, enjoyed the read
March 26th, 2025 07:17
THE ORNATE BOWL
sorenbarrett said:
Missing someone is what comes through to me from this poem. Very well painted with images
March 26th, 2025 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
Missing someone is what comes through to me from this poem. Very well painted with images
March 26th, 2025 04:38
FIT FOR WORK
Poetic Licence said:
Very valid points and issues raised at what is to come from labour and no doubt many will suffer the effects of the cuts, but if we are honest there are many many people taking out of the system that should not be, and just maybe if they had not being that for many years, there would be enough money for those who genuinely need it, well written write that makes it point
March 25th, 2025 05:51
Poetic Licence said:
Very valid points and issues raised at what is to come from labour and no doubt many will suffer the effects of the cuts, but if we are honest there are many many people taking out of the system that should not be, and just maybe if they had not being that for many years, there would be enough money for those who genuinely need it, well written write that makes it point
March 25th, 2025 05:51
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