Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)
THE FADED BEAUTY ( TO M )
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this is a thoughtful piece. I especially appreciated the way it ends with \"Where do you go?\" After everything that comes before it, that question invites a deeper reflection than appearances ever could. Really enjoyed this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 12th, 2026 07:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this is a thoughtful piece. I especially appreciated the way it ends with \"Where do you go?\" After everything that comes before it, that question invites a deeper reflection than appearances ever could. Really enjoyed this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 12th, 2026 07:38
A POET DIED
rhmn_7 said:
Tragically brief life and the heartbreaking loss of a creative spirit. Nice poem nephilim!
July 12th, 2026 07:20
rhmn_7 said:
Tragically brief life and the heartbreaking loss of a creative spirit. Nice poem nephilim!
July 12th, 2026 07:20
THE FADED BEAUTY ( TO M )
arqios said:
This speaks to me of physical beauty fading with age, but the kind of person we are endures on. If beauty was our greatest asset while our character remained bitter, what is left when beauty disappears? 🕊️🙏
July 12th, 2026 05:37
arqios said:
This speaks to me of physical beauty fading with age, but the kind of person we are endures on. If beauty was our greatest asset while our character remained bitter, what is left when beauty disappears? 🕊️🙏
July 12th, 2026 05:37
A POET DIED
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
So it\'s come to this now? Drastic times. People kicking the bucket, waiting so long for that bus. lol.
July 11th, 2026 09:32
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
So it\'s come to this now? Drastic times. People kicking the bucket, waiting so long for that bus. lol.
July 11th, 2026 09:32
A POET DIED
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this is beautifully poignant. The imagery of fading wings, wandering souls, and forgotten pages creates such a reflective atmosphere, and the closing lands with quiet grace. A touching tribute and a wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 11th, 2026 08:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this is beautifully poignant. The imagery of fading wings, wandering souls, and forgotten pages creates such a reflective atmosphere, and the closing lands with quiet grace. A touching tribute and a wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 11th, 2026 08:01
THE MAP
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, what a beautifully atmospheric piece. The moon, the miles, the scented air, and finally that tension between reality and dream all weave together so naturally. It feels reflective without losing its emotional pull. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 11th, 2026 07:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, what a beautifully atmospheric piece. The moon, the miles, the scented air, and finally that tension between reality and dream all weave together so naturally. It feels reflective without losing its emotional pull. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 11th, 2026 07:35
A POET DIED
arqios said:
That is a thought that means so much that even as poets die their poetry may linger on 🙏🕊️
July 11th, 2026 07:21
arqios said:
That is a thought that means so much that even as poets die their poetry may linger on 🙏🕊️
July 11th, 2026 07:21
A POET DIED
sorenbarrett said:
This poem cast in short lines bleeds one line into the next with grace and good flow. It seems as if it is all recited in one breath. Well done and a fave
July 11th, 2026 04:52
sorenbarrett said:
This poem cast in short lines bleeds one line into the next with grace and good flow. It seems as if it is all recited in one breath. Well done and a fave
July 11th, 2026 04:52
THE MAP
orchidee said:
Good write N. What use a bus map? It never turns up. lol.
July 10th, 2026 12:42
orchidee said:
Good write N. What use a bus map? It never turns up. lol.
July 10th, 2026 12:42
THE MAP
Anna Wakey29 said:
Loved this. The flow, the choice of lexicon, everything was incredibly effective. Well done
July 10th, 2026 12:15
Anna Wakey29 said:
Loved this. The flow, the choice of lexicon, everything was incredibly effective. Well done
July 10th, 2026 12:15
THE MAP
sorenbarrett said:
Norman there is something special about this flow of words that turns it poetic in meter and meaning. Well done and a fave
July 10th, 2026 07:31
sorenbarrett said:
Norman there is something special about this flow of words that turns it poetic in meter and meaning. Well done and a fave
July 10th, 2026 07:31
TO A MOMENT
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, what a haunting piece. That opening image of the broken anchor immediately pulled me in, and from there it felt like wandering through forgotten paths where memory and dream quietly overlap. There\'s a gentle melancholy here that lingered with me long after I finished reading. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 9th, 2026 22:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, what a haunting piece. That opening image of the broken anchor immediately pulled me in, and from there it felt like wandering through forgotten paths where memory and dream quietly overlap. There\'s a gentle melancholy here that lingered with me long after I finished reading. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 9th, 2026 22:51
TO A MOMENT
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
A miraculous moment - a bus turned up, but only for a moment. lol.
July 9th, 2026 11:46
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
A miraculous moment - a bus turned up, but only for a moment. lol.
July 9th, 2026 11:46
TO A MOMENT
arqios said:
The feel makes me agree on the impermanence of moments and the impossibility of preserving them completely. 🕊️🙏
July 9th, 2026 06:28
arqios said:
The feel makes me agree on the impermanence of moments and the impossibility of preserving them completely. 🕊️🙏
July 9th, 2026 06:28
THE SHADING TREE
arqios said:
Could it that the fallen leaves and twigs be as poems and poets making up millions of perpetuated memories....
July 8th, 2026 19:35
arqios said:
Could it that the fallen leaves and twigs be as poems and poets making up millions of perpetuated memories....
July 8th, 2026 19:35
THE SHADING TREE
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is one of those pieces that earns its ending, my friend. The poet’s heart, the shading tree, the sleeping memory…it all builds toward that final image of a lifetime held gently in open hands. Beautifully done, Norman! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 8th, 2026 19:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is one of those pieces that earns its ending, my friend. The poet’s heart, the shading tree, the sleeping memory…it all builds toward that final image of a lifetime held gently in open hands. Beautifully done, Norman! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 8th, 2026 19:26
THE SHADING TREE
Friendship said:
Lovely written. Your poem explores the interplay of memory, emotion, and the passage of time. It reflects on the experiences that shape the human soul, emphasizing the balance between joy and sorrow and the significance of memories in one’s life.
July 8th, 2026 12:24
Friendship said:
Lovely written. Your poem explores the interplay of memory, emotion, and the passage of time. It reflects on the experiences that shape the human soul, emphasizing the balance between joy and sorrow and the significance of memories in one’s life.
July 8th, 2026 12:24
THE SHADING TREE
orchidee said:
A fine write N. That\'ll be the tree by the bus stop, that\'s grown from a seed, since you been waiting there! lol.
July 8th, 2026 10:15
orchidee said:
A fine write N. That\'ll be the tree by the bus stop, that\'s grown from a seed, since you been waiting there! lol.
July 8th, 2026 10:15
THE SHADING TREE
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem I hear metaphor the trees become the paper the paths are virtual and imagined. The roots may be for a poem or of life itself. Nicely written it is a fave
July 8th, 2026 05:55
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem I hear metaphor the trees become the paper the paths are virtual and imagined. The roots may be for a poem or of life itself. Nicely written it is a fave
July 8th, 2026 05:55
SUNSET
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, this hit me hard, Norman…I’ve had that same feeling watching a sunset and wishing I had the words to do it justice. You found them here in a way that feels timeless.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 7th, 2026 23:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, this hit me hard, Norman…I’ve had that same feeling watching a sunset and wishing I had the words to do it justice. You found them here in a way that feels timeless.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 7th, 2026 23:04
SUNSET
orchidee said:
Good write N. Ahh, sunset already, you say, as you wait for that bus. You been there at that bus stop since daybreak?! lol.
As you said, did they ever tell us - No service on Sundays - same as any other day. lol.
July 7th, 2026 09:39
orchidee said:
Good write N. Ahh, sunset already, you say, as you wait for that bus. You been there at that bus stop since daybreak?! lol.
As you said, did they ever tell us - No service on Sundays - same as any other day. lol.
July 7th, 2026 09:39
ABOVE US SING THE LARKS
Samprikta Paul said:
I wish there were no wars. I had friends whose dads were soldiers of various defence systems, and I saw how their family was scared before they left for war, \'What if this is the last time we see him?\'
Well written.
July 7th, 2026 08:45
Samprikta Paul said:
I wish there were no wars. I had friends whose dads were soldiers of various defence systems, and I saw how their family was scared before they left for war, \'What if this is the last time we see him?\'
Well written.
July 7th, 2026 08:45
SUNSET
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a reverence for the natural world here, like the sunset becomes a sacred moment too many people rush past.
The imagery carries a quiet music, reminding us that beauty keeps unfolding whether we stop to witness it or not.
July 7th, 2026 07:59
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a reverence for the natural world here, like the sunset becomes a sacred moment too many people rush past.
The imagery carries a quiet music, reminding us that beauty keeps unfolding whether we stop to witness it or not.
July 7th, 2026 07:59
SUNSET
sorenbarrett said:
This is a lovely write its meter holds attention, periodic rhyme charms the ear, its meaning is dream like and enchanting. Very nicely done leaving a calm feeling and a fave
July 7th, 2026 03:48
sorenbarrett said:
This is a lovely write its meter holds attention, periodic rhyme charms the ear, its meaning is dream like and enchanting. Very nicely done leaving a calm feeling and a fave
July 7th, 2026 03:48
SUNSET
Teddy.15 said:
having such beauty around us, some don\'t even notice, I\'ve seen some of the most beautiful sunsets in the world. Such a lovely poem. 🌹
July 7th, 2026 03:34
Teddy.15 said:
having such beauty around us, some don\'t even notice, I\'ve seen some of the most beautiful sunsets in the world. Such a lovely poem. 🌹
July 7th, 2026 03:34
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