Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)
SCATTERED VERSE
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman...this one settled heavy. The loneliness, the pacing, the absent friends, then the verse itself becoming where all of it lands. Yeah, I felt that. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 1st, 2026 09:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman...this one settled heavy. The loneliness, the pacing, the absent friends, then the verse itself becoming where all of it lands. Yeah, I felt that. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 1st, 2026 09:51
SCATTERED VERSE
orchidee said:
Good write N. And now a poem complaining about no buses. It has about 5 million verses. lol.
October 1st, 2026 09:18
orchidee said:
Good write N. And now a poem complaining about no buses. It has about 5 million verses. lol.
October 1st, 2026 09:18
JUST A HINT
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I felt this, Norman. There are moments when you smile because there is no damn way you are going to let the room see what is happening inside you. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 1st, 2026 08:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I felt this, Norman. There are moments when you smile because there is no damn way you are going to let the room see what is happening inside you. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 1st, 2026 08:58
SCATTERED VERSE
arqios said:
The rhyming and scattering are most enjoyable, my friend 🙏🏻🕊️
October 1st, 2026 06:36
arqios said:
The rhyming and scattering are most enjoyable, my friend 🙏🏻🕊️
October 1st, 2026 06:36
SCATTERED VERSE
sorenbarrett said:
I had to read this one four times but it was well worth the effort. It contains not only rhyme and meter as well as a haunting flow but the meaning interwove with my post today or maybe it is just me that sees the similarities. In either case it is a fave my friend.
October 1st, 2026 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
I had to read this one four times but it was well worth the effort. It contains not only rhyme and meter as well as a haunting flow but the meaning interwove with my post today or maybe it is just me that sees the similarities. In either case it is a fave my friend.
October 1st, 2026 04:07
JUST A HINT
orchidee said:
Good write N. Any hint of a bus turning up? lol.
September 30th, 2026 09:58
orchidee said:
Good write N. Any hint of a bus turning up? lol.
September 30th, 2026 09:58
JUST A HINT
arqios said:
Very moving and very relatable. Very touched to read this my friend 🙏🏻🕊️
September 30th, 2026 06:15
arqios said:
Very moving and very relatable. Very touched to read this my friend 🙏🏻🕊️
September 30th, 2026 06:15
JUST A HINT
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes it\'s all pretence, a show for the crowd.
Couples play the game usually online now.
If you could get in their heads, I wonder what you would find.
September 30th, 2026 05:13
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes it\'s all pretence, a show for the crowd.
Couples play the game usually online now.
If you could get in their heads, I wonder what you would find.
September 30th, 2026 05:13
JUST A HINT
sorenbarrett said:
It was the words first that grabbed my attention then the subject and lastly the beat of the meter itself that cast the spell of mood in sad sense of jealousy without power that just eats. Nicely done Norman.
September 30th, 2026 03:42
sorenbarrett said:
It was the words first that grabbed my attention then the subject and lastly the beat of the meter itself that cast the spell of mood in sad sense of jealousy without power that just eats. Nicely done Norman.
September 30th, 2026 03:42
FINGERTIPS
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, that “garret coffin” image stopped me cold. Bleak as hell, and I could see the whole room. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 29th, 2026 19:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, that “garret coffin” image stopped me cold. Bleak as hell, and I could see the whole room. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 29th, 2026 19:57
FINGERTIPS
sorenbarrett said:
Norman this one grabbed me it combines vivid real images with symbolism to create a poetic enigma and painting of a surreal scene. Modernistic it uses classical images. Well done a fave my friend
September 29th, 2026 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
Norman this one grabbed me it combines vivid real images with symbolism to create a poetic enigma and painting of a surreal scene. Modernistic it uses classical images. Well done a fave my friend
September 29th, 2026 04:34
FINGERTIPS
orchidee said:
Good write N. We\'re holding on to hope with our fingertips, that a bus may come along. lol.
September 29th, 2026 03:40
orchidee said:
Good write N. We\'re holding on to hope with our fingertips, that a bus may come along. lol.
September 29th, 2026 03:40
HAUNTING TIME
Teddy.15 said:
Dear Norman, this is really beautiful as much as its sad because I feel the palpable loneliness it\'s written with such craft. 🌹
September 28th, 2026 10:37
Teddy.15 said:
Dear Norman, this is really beautiful as much as its sad because I feel the palpable loneliness it\'s written with such craft. 🌹
September 28th, 2026 10:37
HAUNTING TIME
orchidee said:
Good write N. The time we\'ve wasted at this bus stop is shocking.....lol.
September 28th, 2026 09:46
orchidee said:
Good write N. The time we\'ve wasted at this bus stop is shocking.....lol.
September 28th, 2026 09:46
HAUNTING TIME
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, damn...this feels like the kind of night where you hear one creak upstairs and immediately decide you do not need to know why. 😂 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 28th, 2026 07:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, damn...this feels like the kind of night where you hear one creak upstairs and immediately decide you do not need to know why. 😂 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 28th, 2026 07:01
HAUNTING TIME
arqios said:
It seems to always be nights when lonely shadows, memory, and passage of time brew a haunting atmosphere that causes reality and imagination seem to merge.
September 28th, 2026 06:15
arqios said:
It seems to always be nights when lonely shadows, memory, and passage of time brew a haunting atmosphere that causes reality and imagination seem to merge.
September 28th, 2026 06:15
HAUNTING TIME
sorenbarrett said:
I love the cadence of this poem as it unwinds its meter and rhyme through what is a spiral stairway of words. Stairways of images built step by step line by line leads us up to a haunted tower. Nicely done my friend
September 28th, 2026 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
I love the cadence of this poem as it unwinds its meter and rhyme through what is a spiral stairway of words. Stairways of images built step by step line by line leads us up to a haunted tower. Nicely done my friend
September 28th, 2026 04:29
AS BELOW
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this one pulled me right into its darkness. There is something deliciously eerie about it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 27th, 2026 15:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this one pulled me right into its darkness. There is something deliciously eerie about it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 27th, 2026 15:58
AS BELOW
arqios said:
I see it as being to write as if already buried, very haunting, the desk being the tomb, a buried act and process.
September 27th, 2026 07:13
arqios said:
I see it as being to write as if already buried, very haunting, the desk being the tomb, a buried act and process.
September 27th, 2026 07:13
AS BELOW
sorenbarrett said:
As above so below comes to mind as do muses and their demise at times. I loved the image of cobwebbed feet that says so much in two words. A fave
September 27th, 2026 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
As above so below comes to mind as do muses and their demise at times. I loved the image of cobwebbed feet that says so much in two words. A fave
September 27th, 2026 03:58
AS BELOW
orchidee said:
Good write N. Ahh, a description of the deteriorating bus shelter which sees no buses day nor night. lol.
September 27th, 2026 02:15
orchidee said:
Good write N. Ahh, a description of the deteriorating bus shelter which sees no buses day nor night. lol.
September 27th, 2026 02:15
THE MOMENT SLEEPS
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, I really liked this one. There is a gentleness here that made me slow down while reading it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 26th, 2026 22:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, I really liked this one. There is a gentleness here that made me slow down while reading it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 26th, 2026 22:50
THE MOMENT SLEEPS
orchidee said:
Good write N. Dozed off at the bus stop?! lol.
September 26th, 2026 11:32
orchidee said:
Good write N. Dozed off at the bus stop?! lol.
September 26th, 2026 11:32
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