Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)



UNSEEN TEARS
Priya Tomar said:

Well worded...
Nice poem ...

July 20th, 2025 05:15

UNSEEN TEARS
sorenbarrett said:

Sad, tragic, loss, pain, regret all these come to mind with this poem. A most well written piece.

July 20th, 2025 04:17

ANOTHER DAY OF WAR
Keeter C said:

It’s all
Gonna burn.

July 19th, 2025 16:24

OUT OF DATE
Keeter C said:

Agape love is the way of give this world is the way of get.

July 19th, 2025 09:44

I WAITED FOR YOU
Keeter C said:

Nice imagery

July 19th, 2025 09:35

FOUNTAIN
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

July 19th, 2025 07:17

FOUNTAIN
sorenbarrett said:

Is anything real indeed. Great metaphor in this piece that speaks to the reader about what one can believe. Love itself often a betrayer. Very nicely written a fave

July 19th, 2025 05:35

A MOTHERS GRIEF
ElizabethMoroz said:

Heart wrenching subject matter. Absolutely beautiful and desperately emotional exploration of very sensitive subject matter. Your poetry is profound and beautiful.

July 19th, 2025 04:42

I WAITED FOR YOU
ElizabethMoroz said:

You have a beautiful style, well done. Elizabeth profound and elegant,.

July 18th, 2025 22:24

THE DIRTY STREETS
ElizabethMoroz said:

Multiple themes explored. So very good!!Thankyou for this piece. Elizabeth

July 18th, 2025 22:22

REALIST NOT A ROYALIST
Priya Tomar said:

Very true....
You cleverly criticized priviledged class...

July 18th, 2025 21:17

LITTLE GRANDA
Tony Grannell said:

Eerily endearing, the ghost of love in the form of his grandfather visiting his grandson. A hauntingly beautiful poem and true as well. Well done.

Wishing you all the very best and the little boy, too,

Tony.

July 18th, 2025 14:18

LITTLE GRANDA
Tony36 said:

Really enjoyed it

July 18th, 2025 09:50

THE KILLING OF MR BROWN
Keeter C said:

Also if you’re 16 you can vote! I feel for y’all. What has become of americas older brother? I’m afraid we may follow.

July 18th, 2025 08:37

LITTLE GRANDA
sorenbarrett said:

Hauntingly cute a most fun read. Liked it

July 18th, 2025 04:15

NEVER TOLD
ElizabethMoroz said:

Beautiful imagery and metaphor here and a wonderful very effective excercise in line by line brevity. Gorgeous piece, sincerely Elizabeth

July 18th, 2025 04:07

SUSIE
Keeter C said:

Dude.

July 17th, 2025 17:45

A LONE TEAR CRIED
Keeter C said:

Interesting

July 17th, 2025 17:42

SUSIE
Tony Grannell said:

Such a beautiful poem, tender is the love but so sad is the end. A complete joy to read.

Kind regards,

Tony.

July 17th, 2025 14:09

SUSIE
sorenbarrett said:

A sensuous poem that breaths natural in a free form of nature itself. Nicely done.

July 17th, 2025 04:43

I FORGOT TO HATE
RSM0812 said:

Nice imagery and very imaginative.

July 16th, 2025 07:12

AS HOURS CHIME
sorenbarrett said:

Dreamlike indeed it drifts and floats in its poetic words

July 16th, 2025 04:04

I FORGOT TO HATE
Damaso said:

Incredible writing. It flows. I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing. Best regards.

July 15th, 2025 10:01

I FORGOT TO HATE
sorenbarrett said:

I truly love this poem. It is brilliant! It uses very short lines in a machinegun style hitting the reader with bullets. It sets the scene with a grey day and no empathy them escalates to violence on the roof top then shifts to the bitter taste and hits with the coup de grasce (I forgot to hate) that can be taken as too busy to remember something so insignificant as hate or as hate is not an important element in life. A lovely write and a fave

July 15th, 2025 05:03

I FORGOT TO HATE
ElizabethMoroz said:

Emotionally resonant and quite profound . Beautiful imagery and sentiment here. Poetic and wistful. Very much enjoyed reading this one: well done! Sincerely Elizabeth

July 15th, 2025 02:59

SNIPER
Priya Tomar said:

Very well
Your poetry catches my eyes

July 14th, 2025 07:49

BEHIND A SMILE
Priya Tomar said:

You painted a scene of separation.
Well written

July 14th, 2025 06:57

SNIPER
sorenbarrett said:

I love this one it takes me in several directions all held together by a single theme. My favorite lines (A killer legalized by war) Very nicely done

July 14th, 2025 04:53

SNIPER
ElizabethMoroz said:

Interesting characterisation of a fascinatingly macabre role. Poetic display of concise truth. Well done! Elizabeth

July 14th, 2025 04:08

THE FARTER
Tony36 said:

BRAVO

July 13th, 2025 07:38

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