Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)
POTTERS FIELD
sorenbarrett said:
We are but memories and some leave none. A sad write of those that leave no mark. Well written
October 22nd, 2026 04:01
sorenbarrett said:
We are but memories and some leave none. A sad write of those that leave no mark. Well written
October 22nd, 2026 04:01
WHEN THE LIGHT
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, I really enjoyed this! A little melancholy, a little whimsical, and that cigar-smoking cherub gave me a good chuckle! LOL! š¹š¤ššÆļøš¦āā¬
October 21st, 2026 22:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, I really enjoyed this! A little melancholy, a little whimsical, and that cigar-smoking cherub gave me a good chuckle! LOL! š¹š¤ššÆļøš¦āā¬
October 21st, 2026 22:22
WHEN THE LIGHT
orchidee said:
Yes of course, I will think of you when the light fades, waiting at that bus top. How long ya been there?! lol.
October 21st, 2026 09:08
orchidee said:
Yes of course, I will think of you when the light fades, waiting at that bus top. How long ya been there?! lol.
October 21st, 2026 09:08
WHEN THE LIGHT
arqios said:
The fade and its articulation, superb read, my friend šš»šļøšš»
October 21st, 2026 06:18
arqios said:
The fade and its articulation, superb read, my friend šš»šļøšš»
October 21st, 2026 06:18
WHEN THE LIGHT
sorenbarrett said:
Norman I take this as metaphoric in nature with the day symbolizing life. I love the middle stanza that speaks to me of being remembered by one\'s works that one leaves behind. It holds a melancholic and fading feeling. Very nicely done my friend.
October 21st, 2026 03:46
sorenbarrett said:
Norman I take this as metaphoric in nature with the day symbolizing life. I love the middle stanza that speaks to me of being remembered by one\'s works that one leaves behind. It holds a melancholic and fading feeling. Very nicely done my friend.
October 21st, 2026 03:46
LONELY STREETS
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Norman, that loneliness can be so desponding for some.
Andy
October 21st, 2026 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Norman, that loneliness can be so desponding for some.
Andy
October 21st, 2026 01:06
LONELY STREETS
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this one hit close to home. I\'ve had nights when even a long walk couldn\'t clear my head. Really felt this one, my friend. š¹š¤ššÆļøš¦āā¬
October 20th, 2026 15:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this one hit close to home. I\'ve had nights when even a long walk couldn\'t clear my head. Really felt this one, my friend. š¹š¤ššÆļøš¦āā¬
October 20th, 2026 15:53
LONELY STREETS
arqios said:
That loudness can be deafening and assaulting. Powerful poem here dear friend. šš»šļø
October 20th, 2026 06:20
arqios said:
That loudness can be deafening and assaulting. Powerful poem here dear friend. šš»šļø
October 20th, 2026 06:20
LONELY STREETS
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of social need a longing for company. There is a strange sadness that hangs in the air with each breath in the cold. Nicely written Norman
October 20th, 2026 03:59
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of social need a longing for company. There is a strange sadness that hangs in the air with each breath in the cold. Nicely written Norman
October 20th, 2026 03:59
LONELY STREETS
orchidee said:
Good write N. Yes me too. Especially if they have a pet dog too. I start thinking more of the dog than the person sometimes - sentimental.
Lonely streets here and deserted - they given up waiting for that bus and gone home - or walked to town! lol.
October 20th, 2026 02:34
orchidee said:
Good write N. Yes me too. Especially if they have a pet dog too. I start thinking more of the dog than the person sometimes - sentimental.
Lonely streets here and deserted - they given up waiting for that bus and gone home - or walked to town! lol.
October 20th, 2026 02:34
RING WITHOUT A BOX
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Norman. You\'ve got me thinking about how little we sometimes know of the people closest to us. Even after decades together, there may be entire chapters of someone\'s life we\'ve never heard about. That\'s a rather sobering thought, my friend. š¹š¤ššÆļøš¦āā¬
October 19th, 2026 22:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Norman. You\'ve got me thinking about how little we sometimes know of the people closest to us. Even after decades together, there may be entire chapters of someone\'s life we\'ve never heard about. That\'s a rather sobering thought, my friend. š¹š¤ššÆļøš¦āā¬
October 19th, 2026 22:57
RING WITHOUT A BOX
arqios said:
Most touching my friend! A true fave. š¤©šš»šļø
October 19th, 2026 07:53
arqios said:
Most touching my friend! A true fave. š¤©šš»šļø
October 19th, 2026 07:53
RING WITHOUT A BOX
sorenbarrett said:
I could feel the nostalgia, romance, hole left by loss, melancholy, shadow of the past in this poem. Nicely written Norman a fave
October 19th, 2026 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
I could feel the nostalgia, romance, hole left by loss, melancholy, shadow of the past in this poem. Nicely written Norman a fave
October 19th, 2026 04:12
RING WITHOUT A BOX
orchidee said:
Good write N. Did you \'ring\' (phone) to ask where that bus was?! lol.
October 19th, 2026 02:31
orchidee said:
Good write N. Did you \'ring\' (phone) to ask where that bus was?! lol.
October 19th, 2026 02:31
GRAPEVINE
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I\'ve been there, Norman. Sometimes you hear news about someone from your past and wish you hadn\'t. Not because you begrudge them their happiness, but because it brings up things you\'d rather leave alone. š¹š¤ššÆļøš¦āā¬
October 19th, 2026 00:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I\'ve been there, Norman. Sometimes you hear news about someone from your past and wish you hadn\'t. Not because you begrudge them their happiness, but because it brings up things you\'d rather leave alone. š¹š¤ššÆļøš¦āā¬
October 19th, 2026 00:21
GRAPEVINE
orchidee said:
Good write N. You\'ve heard the gossip of the whole neighbourhood, waiting so long for that bus! lol.
October 18th, 2026 09:57
orchidee said:
Good write N. You\'ve heard the gossip of the whole neighbourhood, waiting so long for that bus! lol.
October 18th, 2026 09:57
GRAPEVINE
arqios said:
Where are those little foxes among the vines?! š š¦
October 18th, 2026 06:33
arqios said:
Where are those little foxes among the vines?! š š¦
October 18th, 2026 06:33
GRAPEVINE
sorenbarrett said:
To me this speaks of changes time and distance cause. Distance may make the heart grow fonder but also leads to growing distance between what was and is. Nicely written Norman
October 18th, 2026 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
To me this speaks of changes time and distance cause. Distance may make the heart grow fonder but also leads to growing distance between what was and is. Nicely written Norman
October 18th, 2026 04:25
GRAPEVINE
Teddy.15 said:
Grapevines can be very persuasive. Beautifully done as ever. š¹
October 18th, 2026 03:30
Teddy.15 said:
Grapevines can be very persuasive. Beautifully done as ever. š¹
October 18th, 2026 03:30
THE SLEEPERS EYE
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, Iād happily stay asleep a little longer for the chance to see certain people again. Even knowing Iād have to wake up. š¹š¤ššÆļøš¦āā¬
October 17th, 2026 14:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, Iād happily stay asleep a little longer for the chance to see certain people again. Even knowing Iād have to wake up. š¹š¤ššÆļøš¦āā¬
October 17th, 2026 14:28
THE SLEEPERS EYE
orchidee said:
That\'ll be you camping down for the night at that bus stop! lol.
October 17th, 2026 10:32
orchidee said:
That\'ll be you camping down for the night at that bus stop! lol.
October 17th, 2026 10:32
HARBOUR GATES
RSM0812 said:
Nice write man. The way u string your words together is very remarkable...
October 17th, 2026 10:01
RSM0812 said:
Nice write man. The way u string your words together is very remarkable...
October 17th, 2026 10:01
THE SLEEPERS EYE
sorenbarrett said:
Otherworldly this poem feels seductively hypnotic and a bit surreal as it seems to float into that shadowy world of slumber. Nicely crafted with rhyme it purrs. Well done Norman
October 17th, 2026 03:46
sorenbarrett said:
Otherworldly this poem feels seductively hypnotic and a bit surreal as it seems to float into that shadowy world of slumber. Nicely crafted with rhyme it purrs. Well done Norman
October 17th, 2026 03:46
HARBOUR GATES
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful poem, Norman! I\'ve always been fascinated by abandoned places, especially those where generations of people once earned their living. I often wish those old buildings could talk. Imagine the stories they\'d tell! Much appreciated, my friend! š¹š¤ššÆļøš¦āā¬
October 16th, 2026 11:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful poem, Norman! I\'ve always been fascinated by abandoned places, especially those where generations of people once earned their living. I often wish those old buildings could talk. Imagine the stories they\'d tell! Much appreciated, my friend! š¹š¤ššÆļøš¦āā¬
October 16th, 2026 11:03
HARBOUR GATES
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Yes, the harbour gates had to close, as the bus for the outing to the harbour took so long - did it even appear at all?! lol.
I though at canal lock was disused, but it\'s used on weekend and a weekday barge trips still. Have to pay. But we could try taking a barge to town. Save waiting at this bus stop. lol.
October 16th, 2026 10:04
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Yes, the harbour gates had to close, as the bus for the outing to the harbour took so long - did it even appear at all?! lol.
I though at canal lock was disused, but it\'s used on weekend and a weekday barge trips still. Have to pay. But we could try taking a barge to town. Save waiting at this bus stop. lol.
October 16th, 2026 10:04
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