Comments received on poems by nephilim56
EGO SUM DEFESSUS
Teddy.15 said:
This is stunning. Your rhyme so natural and I truly felt every bit of emotion. Kudos
July 28th, 2023 05:27
Teddy.15 said:
This is stunning. Your rhyme so natural and I truly felt every bit of emotion. Kudos
July 28th, 2023 05:27
BROKEN TOYS
Jeffrey Weese said:
Nephilim56, your poem \"BROKEN TOYS\" is a poignant piece that resonates deeply. The repeating line, \"Are we not the broken toys,\" is incredibly powerful and instantly relatable. It encapsulates feelings of abandonment and solitude in such a direct yet subtle manner that one can\'t help but connect with it. Your words have perfectly illustrated the shared human experience of feeling overlooked and neglected. While I enjoyed the brevity of this piece, I found myself longing for more - the sentiment you\'ve introduced has so much potential for further exploration. Regardless, this poem has left a strong impression on me. Thank you for sharing it.
July 27th, 2023 10:00
Jeffrey Weese said:
Nephilim56, your poem \"BROKEN TOYS\" is a poignant piece that resonates deeply. The repeating line, \"Are we not the broken toys,\" is incredibly powerful and instantly relatable. It encapsulates feelings of abandonment and solitude in such a direct yet subtle manner that one can\'t help but connect with it. Your words have perfectly illustrated the shared human experience of feeling overlooked and neglected. While I enjoyed the brevity of this piece, I found myself longing for more - the sentiment you\'ve introduced has so much potential for further exploration. Regardless, this poem has left a strong impression on me. Thank you for sharing it.
July 27th, 2023 10:00
SELF PORTRAIT
Pop64 said:
Fate, that which we are closer to each day, should never be what defines us, but still should be addressed realistically, as stated in this piece. Very clear and a wonderful read
July 24th, 2023 12:52
Pop64 said:
Fate, that which we are closer to each day, should never be what defines us, but still should be addressed realistically, as stated in this piece. Very clear and a wonderful read
July 24th, 2023 12:52
TO LIFE
Bobby O said:
Your phrases send simple message but w expertly crafted prose never touching cliche and you comfortably grab that rhyme.
July 8th, 2023 10:56
Bobby O said:
Your phrases send simple message but w expertly crafted prose never touching cliche and you comfortably grab that rhyme.
July 8th, 2023 10:56
R.I.P.
L. B. Mek said:
if this is about your own grandmother
then I can only offer my condolences
dear poet
and in your writer\'s comments
I like your contrast between
the fanfare of the queens funeral
and what reality is like
to society\'s majority downtrodden
a sad state, indeed
I can but sigh and relate, especially
as after covid\'s policy crimes
of the elderly, we would hope
the press would make such atrocities
more of a front page issue
a shame, that will taint our generation
far more than we can conceive
(an important issue, a well crafted write
thank you for choosing to share, dear poet)
June 30th, 2023 07:16
L. B. Mek said:
if this is about your own grandmother
then I can only offer my condolences
dear poet
and in your writer\'s comments
I like your contrast between
the fanfare of the queens funeral
and what reality is like
to society\'s majority downtrodden
a sad state, indeed
I can but sigh and relate, especially
as after covid\'s policy crimes
of the elderly, we would hope
the press would make such atrocities
more of a front page issue
a shame, that will taint our generation
far more than we can conceive
(an important issue, a well crafted write
thank you for choosing to share, dear poet)
June 30th, 2023 07:16
AMBER SKY
Bobby O said:
I felt like I was there. Your honest phrasing and lack of cumbersome prevention was the perfect dryly to let this story breathe. Nice write good read
June 24th, 2023 07:01
Bobby O said:
I felt like I was there. Your honest phrasing and lack of cumbersome prevention was the perfect dryly to let this story breathe. Nice write good read
June 24th, 2023 07:01
DIG DEEP
Bobby O said:
Like some discovered garden elf - how fun is that? I like your phrase
June 23rd, 2023 20:53
Bobby O said:
Like some discovered garden elf - how fun is that? I like your phrase
June 23rd, 2023 20:53
GOTHIC
tattooedreverie said:
The underbelly of this poem is not a thought I can express, but I feeling I know. Loss felt through silken fabric is the best way I can describe it. Thank you for sharing.
June 1st, 2023 10:38
tattooedreverie said:
The underbelly of this poem is not a thought I can express, but I feeling I know. Loss felt through silken fabric is the best way I can describe it. Thank you for sharing.
June 1st, 2023 10:38
LILEIGH
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Aww a touching sweet sentimental poem to the stillborn babe. Expressed in superb rhyming and flow. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
May 29th, 2023 14:28
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Aww a touching sweet sentimental poem to the stillborn babe. Expressed in superb rhyming and flow. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
May 29th, 2023 14:28
SZERETLEK CHRISTINA
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful poem, thanks for sharing
(one word for I love you
testimony, to a country
rich in cultural heritage)
March 3rd, 2023 07:16
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful poem, thanks for sharing
(one word for I love you
testimony, to a country
rich in cultural heritage)
March 3rd, 2023 07:16
SZERETLEK CHRISTINA
Christina8 said:
I think this is a very sweet poem. Of course I am partial to the name Christina..lol. Beautifully done!
March 3rd, 2023 07:13
Christina8 said:
I think this is a very sweet poem. Of course I am partial to the name Christina..lol. Beautifully done!
March 3rd, 2023 07:13
MURDER BY SIGNATURE
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, like tax cuts
that cut life\'s short
yet never show up, on those
\'transparent\' statistics...
acute commentary, an important write
thanks for sharing
February 13th, 2023 06:42
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, like tax cuts
that cut life\'s short
yet never show up, on those
\'transparent\' statistics...
acute commentary, an important write
thanks for sharing
February 13th, 2023 06:42
FREE ONESELF FROM THE CHAINS OF DEMOCRACY
Doggerel Dave said:
You are correct, of course. Any solutions in sight?
February 2nd, 2023 07:41
Doggerel Dave said:
You are correct, of course. Any solutions in sight?
February 2nd, 2023 07:41
GUARDIAN ANGEL
L. B. Mek said:
\'Bleeding poetry from my fate\'
how I know these words, intimately
even, if this
be the very first time, I\'m reading them...
thanks for sharing, dear poet
(crazy
how deceiving our side mirrors
can be
often, we have to stick our heads out
and check for ourselves, to make sure
we\'re not missing anything..
see, proximity
affords, that we most treasure
a blind spot, in our life
and so, once again
we\'re left appreciating the deeds
of those
who helped us in our time of need
when only feeling the draft, void
of a presence
we once, took for granted as being
ubiquitous, in our life...)
January 27th, 2023 07:19
L. B. Mek said:
\'Bleeding poetry from my fate\'
how I know these words, intimately
even, if this
be the very first time, I\'m reading them...
thanks for sharing, dear poet
(crazy
how deceiving our side mirrors
can be
often, we have to stick our heads out
and check for ourselves, to make sure
we\'re not missing anything..
see, proximity
affords, that we most treasure
a blind spot, in our life
and so, once again
we\'re left appreciating the deeds
of those
who helped us in our time of need
when only feeling the draft, void
of a presence
we once, took for granted as being
ubiquitous, in our life...)
January 27th, 2023 07:19
JANUARY CHILD
L. B. Mek said:
vivid imagery, such wonderful flow
a great read!
thanks for sharing, dear poet
January 23rd, 2023 06:59
L. B. Mek said:
vivid imagery, such wonderful flow
a great read!
thanks for sharing, dear poet
January 23rd, 2023 06:59
MISCARRIAGE
mvvenkataraman said:
Nice meaning and rhyme, but a poem mustn\'t be written in capital letters throughout as that is abnormal and may spoil the beauty of the poem!
January 21st, 2023 09:40
mvvenkataraman said:
Nice meaning and rhyme, but a poem mustn\'t be written in capital letters throughout as that is abnormal and may spoil the beauty of the poem!
January 21st, 2023 09:40
IDEOLOGY
L. B. Mek said:
I\'m so sorry for your loss
this is acute and insightful commentary
thanks for sharing
(i still think, they tried to decimate
the elder population with covid
but that battle hardened generation
wouldn\'t give-in and go quite
so now its frozen homes
with gas price hikes
I wonder, what fate they think
awaits them
when they too, reach
that threshold age?
shameful, absolutely shameful!)
January 20th, 2023 07:05
L. B. Mek said:
I\'m so sorry for your loss
this is acute and insightful commentary
thanks for sharing
(i still think, they tried to decimate
the elder population with covid
but that battle hardened generation
wouldn\'t give-in and go quite
so now its frozen homes
with gas price hikes
I wonder, what fate they think
awaits them
when they too, reach
that threshold age?
shameful, absolutely shameful!)
January 20th, 2023 07:05
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