Comments received on poems by nephilim56
HOSPITAL
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! this conveys well the feelings and shock at loosing someone that close. The picture is painted well with olfactory as well as visual and auditory cues. A very well done poem
March 14th, 2025 11:31
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! this conveys well the feelings and shock at loosing someone that close. The picture is painted well with olfactory as well as visual and auditory cues. A very well done poem
March 14th, 2025 11:31
HOSPITAL
Poetic Licence said:
Touching write, tears of grief, write touches on a situation many will relate to, well expressed
March 14th, 2025 09:27
Poetic Licence said:
Touching write, tears of grief, write touches on a situation many will relate to, well expressed
March 14th, 2025 09:27
HOSPITAL
arqios said:
Always wondered, outside of the legal process why we have to go away (to hospital) to die. Heart rending goodness of a read🙏🏻🕊
March 14th, 2025 05:42
arqios said:
Always wondered, outside of the legal process why we have to go away (to hospital) to die. Heart rending goodness of a read🙏🏻🕊
March 14th, 2025 05:42
MEN OF THE CLOTH
Poetic Licence said:
Highlighting the abuse by police but also by all goverments and places of power that continue to cover up abuse, powerful write and well expressed
March 13th, 2025 10:11
Poetic Licence said:
Highlighting the abuse by police but also by all goverments and places of power that continue to cover up abuse, powerful write and well expressed
March 13th, 2025 10:11
MEN OF THE CLOTH
sorenbarrett said:
When violations are quietly condoned by those in power there is little recourse. A powerful poem of outrage.
March 13th, 2025 06:43
sorenbarrett said:
When violations are quietly condoned by those in power there is little recourse. A powerful poem of outrage.
March 13th, 2025 06:43
DREAM RETURNING
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! How nicely written this piece that could be about the old or one particular old person, or hope itself. Whether a dream, vision or reality it is haunting.
March 12th, 2025 08:33
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! How nicely written this piece that could be about the old or one particular old person, or hope itself. Whether a dream, vision or reality it is haunting.
March 12th, 2025 08:33
DREAM RETURNING
Poetic Licence said:
A returning dream can end up feeling like friend, a nicely expressed piece of writing
March 12th, 2025 08:14
Poetic Licence said:
A returning dream can end up feeling like friend, a nicely expressed piece of writing
March 12th, 2025 08:14
DREAM RETURNING
arqios said:
Recurring dreams are superbly interesting. Hope this isn’t too far off the mark. 🙏🏻🕊
March 12th, 2025 07:56
arqios said:
Recurring dreams are superbly interesting. Hope this isn’t too far off the mark. 🙏🏻🕊
March 12th, 2025 07:56
LEAVES
Poetic Licence said:
Seasons of life as of nature a natural cycle, has a very soothing feel as you read through with lovely imagery, really enjoyed
March 10th, 2025 10:34
Poetic Licence said:
Seasons of life as of nature a natural cycle, has a very soothing feel as you read through with lovely imagery, really enjoyed
March 10th, 2025 10:34
LEAVES
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful image in and of itself free of the metaphor. And such is life and the seasons. The feeling left is gently sad but with a sense of acceptance that this is nature\'s way. There is a peacefulness to the flow of the poem and it evokes a calm. Very nicely done
March 10th, 2025 08:33
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful image in and of itself free of the metaphor. And such is life and the seasons. The feeling left is gently sad but with a sense of acceptance that this is nature\'s way. There is a peacefulness to the flow of the poem and it evokes a calm. Very nicely done
March 10th, 2025 08:33
LEAVES
Soman Ragavan said:
There is a vague sadness in the poem. We notice the words \"forlorn moonlight\" appearing twice. The words
\"tears\" and \"pain\" add to the sadness. The return of autumn itself signals a dwindling down of activities, winding down for winter. Autumn gently prepares leaves to fall off, for their work is done. Next spring will bring a new life to the tree. Soman Ragavan.
March 10th, 2025 08:27
Soman Ragavan said:
There is a vague sadness in the poem. We notice the words \"forlorn moonlight\" appearing twice. The words
\"tears\" and \"pain\" add to the sadness. The return of autumn itself signals a dwindling down of activities, winding down for winter. Autumn gently prepares leaves to fall off, for their work is done. Next spring will bring a new life to the tree. Soman Ragavan.
March 10th, 2025 08:27
LEGEND
RSM0812 said:
Nice write. I would enjoy a vacation to where poetry dances. Lol
March 9th, 2025 15:59
RSM0812 said:
Nice write. I would enjoy a vacation to where poetry dances. Lol
March 9th, 2025 15:59
THE OLD SCHOOL
sorenbarrett said:
A great picture painted here and a metaphor for each person as they age as well. Very nice
March 9th, 2025 08:19
sorenbarrett said:
A great picture painted here and a metaphor for each person as they age as well. Very nice
March 9th, 2025 08:19
SECRET PLACE
sorenbarrett said:
Words begin where none can see and form out of what one only feels a lovely write
March 8th, 2025 07:25
sorenbarrett said:
Words begin where none can see and form out of what one only feels a lovely write
March 8th, 2025 07:25
SECRET PLACE
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful and uplifting write, enjoyed the read
March 8th, 2025 05:37
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful and uplifting write, enjoyed the read
March 8th, 2025 05:37
SECRET PLACE
arqios said:
Speaks of wonders and miracles, like when a book brings the author and reader together! 🙏🏻🕊
March 8th, 2025 04:51
arqios said:
Speaks of wonders and miracles, like when a book brings the author and reader together! 🙏🏻🕊
March 8th, 2025 04:51
JAGGED
Poetic Licence said:
Wonderful flow and beautifully written, really enjoyed this
March 7th, 2025 10:20
Poetic Licence said:
Wonderful flow and beautifully written, really enjoyed this
March 7th, 2025 10:20
LEGEND
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s is a wonderful piece of writing, cracking last line
March 7th, 2025 09:46
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s is a wonderful piece of writing, cracking last line
March 7th, 2025 09:46
LEGEND
sorenbarrett said:
Only to live where poetry dances. Such a beautiful and wistful line. This is definitely a fave
March 7th, 2025 06:01
sorenbarrett said:
Only to live where poetry dances. Such a beautiful and wistful line. This is definitely a fave
March 7th, 2025 06:01
HEAR MY CALL
Poetic Licence said:
Fond memories of a loved one leaving, lovingly expressed in this write
March 6th, 2025 08:05
Poetic Licence said:
Fond memories of a loved one leaving, lovingly expressed in this write
March 6th, 2025 08:05
HEAR MY CALL
sorenbarrett said:
Sweet memories abound in this poem that speaks of a departure. Well written and crafted it has a sense of melancholy.
March 6th, 2025 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
Sweet memories abound in this poem that speaks of a departure. Well written and crafted it has a sense of melancholy.
March 6th, 2025 04:30
MISSION
sorenbarrett said:
Maybe I have gone too far on this one but it seems a genesis, a beginning of the myth cycle using Greek myth in metaphor \"Titan\" and the time before this. It speaks of space and time in a battle and the biblical creation of heavens and earth and separation of land and water. Deeper still it talks to the inner self. A very deep write loved it and deserves a fave
March 5th, 2025 06:14
sorenbarrett said:
Maybe I have gone too far on this one but it seems a genesis, a beginning of the myth cycle using Greek myth in metaphor \"Titan\" and the time before this. It speaks of space and time in a battle and the biblical creation of heavens and earth and separation of land and water. Deeper still it talks to the inner self. A very deep write loved it and deserves a fave
March 5th, 2025 06:14
TOWN
Poetic Licence said:
A sad write of all to common a sight these days the slow decay of a vibrant place, abandoned and left to die slowly, equally would apply to us oldens, enjoyed the read
March 4th, 2025 08:08
Poetic Licence said:
A sad write of all to common a sight these days the slow decay of a vibrant place, abandoned and left to die slowly, equally would apply to us oldens, enjoyed the read
March 4th, 2025 08:08
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