Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)
TOUCHES GROUND
NafisaSB said:
Written straight from the heart so touches the reader’s too 👌💐
May 19th, 2026 13:04
NafisaSB said:
Written straight from the heart so touches the reader’s too 👌💐
May 19th, 2026 13:04
FAMINE
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A great compassionate poem with humanitarian pleas and appeal against the rich esp those that exploit the poor. From Palestinians to sudanese, hungry children all their fault. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
May 19th, 2026 12:28
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A great compassionate poem with humanitarian pleas and appeal against the rich esp those that exploit the poor. From Palestinians to sudanese, hungry children all their fault. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
May 19th, 2026 12:28
BUT DAINTILY
Kevin Hulme said:
Reminds me of the Song \'Yesterday\'. A fine write.
May 19th, 2026 09:33
Kevin Hulme said:
Reminds me of the Song \'Yesterday\'. A fine write.
May 19th, 2026 09:33
FAMINE
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a hard moral weight in this—like the poem refuses to look away from what comfort often ignores.
And it lands with a bitter clarity: not just describing hunger, but indicting the distance that allows it to continue.
May 19th, 2026 09:15
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a hard moral weight in this—like the poem refuses to look away from what comfort often ignores.
And it lands with a bitter clarity: not just describing hunger, but indicting the distance that allows it to continue.
May 19th, 2026 09:15
FAMINE
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed a powerful message where the answer lies even deeper in controlling a birthrate where there is little chance of being fed. Well written
May 19th, 2026 03:37
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed a powerful message where the answer lies even deeper in controlling a birthrate where there is little chance of being fed. Well written
May 19th, 2026 03:37
FAMINE
orchidee said:
It\'s terrible. it seems there is enough to go round, but it\'s not shared equally, so we can\'t blame God, or a god, for it.
Meanwhile - you\'re famished waiting that long at the bus stop. Must be dinner time by now. lol.
May 19th, 2026 02:14
orchidee said:
It\'s terrible. it seems there is enough to go round, but it\'s not shared equally, so we can\'t blame God, or a god, for it.
Meanwhile - you\'re famished waiting that long at the bus stop. Must be dinner time by now. lol.
May 19th, 2026 02:14
BUT DAINTILY
Katie B. said:
Loss and sorrow told in calming, peacefully verse. Well done!
May 18th, 2026 11:12
Katie B. said:
Loss and sorrow told in calming, peacefully verse. Well done!
May 18th, 2026 11:12
BUT DAINTILY
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this really moved me. The quiet grief in this piece feels so intimate and lived-in…not dramatic, just deeply present in the ordinary details of the morning. That lingering absence hangs over every line. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 18th, 2026 09:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this really moved me. The quiet grief in this piece feels so intimate and lived-in…not dramatic, just deeply present in the ordinary details of the morning. That lingering absence hangs over every line. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 18th, 2026 09:39
BUT DAINTILY
arqios said:
So many are that have gone that way. Brings back the memories 🙏🏻🕊️
May 18th, 2026 06:28
arqios said:
So many are that have gone that way. Brings back the memories 🙏🏻🕊️
May 18th, 2026 06:28
BUT DAINTILY
sorenbarrett said:
A love missed and there is a feeling of emptiness and loneliness. Well expressed
May 18th, 2026 02:43
sorenbarrett said:
A love missed and there is a feeling of emptiness and loneliness. Well expressed
May 18th, 2026 02:43
BUT DAINTILY
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Yes, and it\'s three months since the last bus left. lol.
May 18th, 2026 02:16
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Yes, and it\'s three months since the last bus left. lol.
May 18th, 2026 02:16
THIS LONELY STREET
Goldfinch60 said:
Those streets can often be in our minds Norman, super write.
Andy
May 18th, 2026 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Those streets can often be in our minds Norman, super write.
Andy
May 18th, 2026 01:27
THIS LONELY STREET
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Why, yes, we know why it\'s a lonely street - they all got tired of waiting for the bus and went home - or walked to town! lol. You thought you saw a No 7 bus, but it was only in your dreams? lol.
May 17th, 2026 12:21
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Why, yes, we know why it\'s a lonely street - they all got tired of waiting for the bus and went home - or walked to town! lol. You thought you saw a No 7 bus, but it was only in your dreams? lol.
May 17th, 2026 12:21
THIS LONELY STREET
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, “The silence echoes / So very loud” lands beautifully. It captures that strange emotional paradox where isolation itself becomes overwhelming noise inside the mind. Strong piece, Norman. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 17th, 2026 08:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, “The silence echoes / So very loud” lands beautifully. It captures that strange emotional paradox where isolation itself becomes overwhelming noise inside the mind. Strong piece, Norman. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 17th, 2026 08:04
THIS LONELY STREET
arqios said:
A quite familiar street scene in expressive poetry🕊️🙏
May 17th, 2026 06:00
arqios said:
A quite familiar street scene in expressive poetry🕊️🙏
May 17th, 2026 06:00
THIS LONELY STREET
sorenbarrett said:
A vivid image poetically painted but there may be more in metaphor in this cold and desolate picture where the inner workings of the individual may be represented. Well done Norman
May 17th, 2026 05:03
sorenbarrett said:
A vivid image poetically painted but there may be more in metaphor in this cold and desolate picture where the inner workings of the individual may be represented. Well done Norman
May 17th, 2026 05:03
AN EMPTY ROOM
NafisaSB said:
this should ring a bell in everyone\'s mind - it happens to each of us sometime or the other...
May 16th, 2026 23:55
NafisaSB said:
this should ring a bell in everyone\'s mind - it happens to each of us sometime or the other...
May 16th, 2026 23:55
PREMONITION
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem captures a narrative of a night filled with ominous feelings and a sense of impending doom, culminating in an act of violence.
May 16th, 2026 14:54
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem captures a narrative of a night filled with ominous feelings and a sense of impending doom, culminating in an act of violence.
May 16th, 2026 14:54
PREMONITION
orchidee said:
Good write N.
You been waiting so long for that bus that you\'re having premonitions, illusions, seeing things, about it now! lol. It\'s a ghost-bus, a mirage. lol.
May 16th, 2026 11:40
orchidee said:
Good write N.
You been waiting so long for that bus that you\'re having premonitions, illusions, seeing things, about it now! lol. It\'s a ghost-bus, a mirage. lol.
May 16th, 2026 11:40
PREMONITION
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, “Like a cigarette / Rolled too tight” is such an effective opening image. It immediately creates pressure, discomfort, and the feeling that something is about to snap. Great job on this, Norman. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 16th, 2026 09:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, “Like a cigarette / Rolled too tight” is such an effective opening image. It immediately creates pressure, discomfort, and the feeling that something is about to snap. Great job on this, Norman. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 16th, 2026 09:18
PREMONITION
sorenbarrett said:
This poem chills to the bone. It is a premonition neglected. Well written my friend
May 16th, 2026 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
This poem chills to the bone. It is a premonition neglected. Well written my friend
May 16th, 2026 04:09
NIGHTMARE
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this has the feel of wandering through an abandoned inner landscape at night. Strange rooms, trembling voices, shadowed kingdoms, pounding heartbeat…it all builds a powerful sense of emotional exhaustion and haunted unrest. Wonderful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 15th, 2026 09:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this has the feel of wandering through an abandoned inner landscape at night. Strange rooms, trembling voices, shadowed kingdoms, pounding heartbeat…it all builds a powerful sense of emotional exhaustion and haunted unrest. Wonderful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 15th, 2026 09:39
NIGHTMARE
sorenbarrett said:
This poem feels so alone and withdrawn it is filled with shadows and darkness. Well composed Norman
May 15th, 2026 06:19
sorenbarrett said:
This poem feels so alone and withdrawn it is filled with shadows and darkness. Well composed Norman
May 15th, 2026 06:19
NIGHTMARE
orchidee said:
Good write N. Was your nightmare in the day time, as you waited for that bus? When WILL it arrive?! lol.
May 15th, 2026 02:56
orchidee said:
Good write N. Was your nightmare in the day time, as you waited for that bus? When WILL it arrive?! lol.
May 15th, 2026 02:56
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