Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)



CHILD OF WORDS
orchidee said:

Good write N. How\'s those buses on Bank Holidays?! lol.

April 6th, 2026 02:38

DISTANT
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful words Norman.

Andy

April 6th, 2026 01:10

SILENCE TO CALL
NafisaSB said:

many of us tend to do that, but after all these years, i feel that we should know withhold our feelings, but let the dam burst out..it gives relief

April 6th, 2026 01:05

LOVES DYING DAYS
RSM0812 said:



April 5th, 2026 19:46

LOVES DYING DAYS
RSM0812 said:

This poem reminds a person that nothing lasts forever. Even in true love.

April 5th, 2026 19:46

THE PATH THAT NO ONE WALKS
RSM0812 said:



April 5th, 2026 19:44

THE PATH THAT NO ONE WALKS
RSM0812 said:

An erie ✍️. Quite chilling effect.

April 5th, 2026 19:44

DISTANT
Ellen Marsell said:

Beautifully written. Soft, tender, and quietly moving.

April 5th, 2026 04:11

DISTANT
sorenbarrett said:

Very beautiful in its imagery you paint it well. This leaves a soft and tender feel to the night. Loved it

April 5th, 2026 03:55

DISTANT
orchidee said:

Good write N.
You hearing the distant sound of the No.7 bus approaching?!

April 5th, 2026 03:27

THE PATH THAT NO ONE WALKS
Goldfinch60 said:

Obviously The Road Not Taken Norman, Robert Frost knew all about that one. Fine words.

Andy

April 5th, 2026 01:11

THE PATH THAT NO ONE WALKS
sorenbarrett said:

Norman I think that most children had such a house in their childhood neighborhood. We did but also a metaphor for alienation as we age. Nicely written it presents vivid images and leaves a feel of loneliness. Very nicely written

April 4th, 2026 04:05

THE PATH THAT NO ONE WALKS
orchidee said:

Thank you N. Or would we like to look inside - atmospheric, nostalgic, curious, etc? We\'ve an old house a couple of miles from us, all disused now.
And - does the No.4 bus route go near that house?! lol.

April 4th, 2026 02:31

THE HANGOVER BY TOULOUSE LAUTREC
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words about a very intriguing artwork Norman.

Andy

April 4th, 2026 01:15

THE HANGOVER BY TOULOUSE LAUTREC
sorenbarrett said:

Such a wonderful casting of mood and setting in this piece all set to good rhyme. Nicely done Norman

April 3rd, 2026 03:58

THE HANGOVER BY TOULOUSE LAUTREC
orchidee said:

Good write N.

April 3rd, 2026 02:38

SO QUIET
NafisaSB said:

a soothing verse..enjoyed the read

April 3rd, 2026 00:16

SO QUIET
arqios said:

A very moving read, Norman🙏🏻🕊️

April 2nd, 2026 07:04

SO QUIET
sorenbarrett said:

This poem to me speaks of how little things can stimulate past memories and feelings. Nicely written

April 2nd, 2026 04:28

SO QUIET
orchidee said:

Good write N. BOO!! I turned up and shattered the silence! Do ya hear me yelling?! lol.

April 2nd, 2026 02:16

LOVES DYING DAYS
orchidee said:

Good write N. I wish I hadn\'t got that No.7 bus. Someone sitting in front of me had some awful pongy food he was eating. I\'m gonna be sick! lol.

April 1st, 2026 10:06

LOVES DYING DAYS
Katie B. said:

Well written. Difficult subject handled with care.

April 1st, 2026 09:44

LOVES DYING DAYS
sorenbarrett said:

Norman this poem casts a solemn shadow using personification and maybe animism it speaks of love that has died. Well written with good rhyme it is most poetic.

April 1st, 2026 03:57

AT DAWNS ATTACK
Goldfinch60 said:

Such true and very sad words Norman, why can we not stop fighting in this world, love does exist and it should be for all.

Andy

April 1st, 2026 01:05

IF I WERE TO FORGET
NafisaSB said:

it seems it still lives in your memory very vividly...

April 1st, 2026 00:21

AT DAWNS ATTACK
arqios said:

The home front is also affected by those that return broken and the absence of those that will never come home. Most moved, Norman🕊️🙏🏻

March 31st, 2026 06:56

AT DAWNS ATTACK
sorenbarrett said:

The horrors of war portrayed in this poem of battle. And so it is with any war physical or otherwise it takes casualties. ,Nicely written in good rhyme it pulls the reader along from line to line in an advance from from trench to trench. Well penned

March 31st, 2026 04:11

AT DAWNS ATTACK
orchidee said:

Good write N.
Is it a battle to catch that bus? Are you getting the No.14 bus today?! lol.

March 31st, 2026 02:09

WORDS I DID NOT SAY
Goldfinch60 said:

Those words are still within your mind Norman and one day you will say them.

Andy

March 31st, 2026 01:21

WORDS I DID NOT SAY
orchidee said:

Good write N. Will you know the words that you didn\'t say? If you speak them, you will have said them! lol.

March 30th, 2026 10:41

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