Comments received on poems by nephilim56
LEGEND
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s is a wonderful piece of writing, cracking last line
March 7th, 2025 09:46
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s is a wonderful piece of writing, cracking last line
March 7th, 2025 09:46
LEGEND
sorenbarrett said:
Only to live where poetry dances. Such a beautiful and wistful line. This is definitely a fave
March 7th, 2025 06:01
sorenbarrett said:
Only to live where poetry dances. Such a beautiful and wistful line. This is definitely a fave
March 7th, 2025 06:01
HEAR MY CALL
Poetic Licence said:
Fond memories of a loved one leaving, lovingly expressed in this write
March 6th, 2025 08:05
Poetic Licence said:
Fond memories of a loved one leaving, lovingly expressed in this write
March 6th, 2025 08:05
HEAR MY CALL
sorenbarrett said:
Sweet memories abound in this poem that speaks of a departure. Well written and crafted it has a sense of melancholy.
March 6th, 2025 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
Sweet memories abound in this poem that speaks of a departure. Well written and crafted it has a sense of melancholy.
March 6th, 2025 04:30
MISSION
sorenbarrett said:
Maybe I have gone too far on this one but it seems a genesis, a beginning of the myth cycle using Greek myth in metaphor \"Titan\" and the time before this. It speaks of space and time in a battle and the biblical creation of heavens and earth and separation of land and water. Deeper still it talks to the inner self. A very deep write loved it and deserves a fave
March 5th, 2025 06:14
sorenbarrett said:
Maybe I have gone too far on this one but it seems a genesis, a beginning of the myth cycle using Greek myth in metaphor \"Titan\" and the time before this. It speaks of space and time in a battle and the biblical creation of heavens and earth and separation of land and water. Deeper still it talks to the inner self. A very deep write loved it and deserves a fave
March 5th, 2025 06:14
TOWN
Poetic Licence said:
A sad write of all to common a sight these days the slow decay of a vibrant place, abandoned and left to die slowly, equally would apply to us oldens, enjoyed the read
March 4th, 2025 08:08
Poetic Licence said:
A sad write of all to common a sight these days the slow decay of a vibrant place, abandoned and left to die slowly, equally would apply to us oldens, enjoyed the read
March 4th, 2025 08:08
TOWN
arqios said:
Brings me to memories of expeditions in urban exploration. Our urban centres are in various states and conditions. It could be a mirror of ourselves if seen epithet open and honest eyes. 🙏🏻🕊
March 4th, 2025 06:49
arqios said:
Brings me to memories of expeditions in urban exploration. Our urban centres are in various states and conditions. It could be a mirror of ourselves if seen epithet open and honest eyes. 🙏🏻🕊
March 4th, 2025 06:49
TOWN
sorenbarrett said:
Literally a description of urban decay and metaphorically this might be a description of a person. Haunting and leaving a feeling of isolation and decay. A sad poem well done.
March 4th, 2025 04:50
sorenbarrett said:
Literally a description of urban decay and metaphorically this might be a description of a person. Haunting and leaving a feeling of isolation and decay. A sad poem well done.
March 4th, 2025 04:50
DEPARTURE
Poetic Licence said:
A poignant write around how easily people are left and forgotten, especially the returning military, well written piece
March 3rd, 2025 06:09
Poetic Licence said:
A poignant write around how easily people are left and forgotten, especially the returning military, well written piece
March 3rd, 2025 06:09
DEPARTURE
sorenbarrett said:
It may be an individual but it is also a metaphor for all the veterans returned that go forgotten and unnoticed. A sad and unfortunately true tale. Well written
March 3rd, 2025 05:37
sorenbarrett said:
It may be an individual but it is also a metaphor for all the veterans returned that go forgotten and unnoticed. A sad and unfortunately true tale. Well written
March 3rd, 2025 05:37
BRIGHTON BEACH
Poetic Licence said:
Remembering the family, while defending the nation,touching and poignant, where was the sand, I have never seen any, enjoyed the read
March 2nd, 2025 05:53
Poetic Licence said:
Remembering the family, while defending the nation,touching and poignant, where was the sand, I have never seen any, enjoyed the read
March 2nd, 2025 05:53
FREE
Poetic Licence said:
The freedom of nature and the positive effects it can have on us, lovely read
March 1st, 2025 06:27
Poetic Licence said:
The freedom of nature and the positive effects it can have on us, lovely read
March 1st, 2025 06:27
FREE
sorenbarrett said:
Although in metaphor more, in the literal it reminded me of camping trips I made in my youth and the places I slept. Very nicely done
March 1st, 2025 05:27
sorenbarrett said:
Although in metaphor more, in the literal it reminded me of camping trips I made in my youth and the places I slept. Very nicely done
March 1st, 2025 05:27
ANOTHER MILE
Poetic Licence said:
The best memories can become even better as time passes by, enjoyed the read
February 28th, 2025 07:46
Poetic Licence said:
The best memories can become even better as time passes by, enjoyed the read
February 28th, 2025 07:46
ANOTHER MILE
arqios said:
Sweet memories can grow sweeter through the years 🙏🏻🕊
February 28th, 2025 07:14
arqios said:
Sweet memories can grow sweeter through the years 🙏🏻🕊
February 28th, 2025 07:14
ANOTHER MILE
sorenbarrett said:
Memory fades slowly and once imprinted carries its mark. A wistful and nostalgic write that pulls at the heart. Lovely
February 28th, 2025 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
Memory fades slowly and once imprinted carries its mark. A wistful and nostalgic write that pulls at the heart. Lovely
February 28th, 2025 04:25
NIGHTMARE
Poetic Licence said:
The ongoing dance with ever present nightmares, nicely expressed
February 27th, 2025 07:58
Poetic Licence said:
The ongoing dance with ever present nightmares, nicely expressed
February 27th, 2025 07:58
NIGHTMARE
sorenbarrett said:
This seems to me a commentary on nightmares itself. Metaphor and more. nicely done
February 27th, 2025 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
This seems to me a commentary on nightmares itself. Metaphor and more. nicely done
February 27th, 2025 04:42
THE BIGGEST KILLER
Poetic Licence said:
A painful and sad write to read, but a very valid one as it is on the increase, have been there and it\'s an awful place to be, nicely expressed and written
February 26th, 2025 08:40
Poetic Licence said:
A painful and sad write to read, but a very valid one as it is on the increase, have been there and it\'s an awful place to be, nicely expressed and written
February 26th, 2025 08:40
THE BIGGEST KILLER
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and sad a tragic flash of memory described before a suicide. Well done
February 26th, 2025 06:33
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and sad a tragic flash of memory described before a suicide. Well done
February 26th, 2025 06:33
THE BIGGEST KILLER
arqios said:
Feeling that there are no choices left is the worst confrontation to face. Been there. 🙏🏻🕊
February 26th, 2025 05:56
arqios said:
Feeling that there are no choices left is the worst confrontation to face. Been there. 🙏🏻🕊
February 26th, 2025 05:56
THREAT OF SNOW
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write, children just want to be children, free from threat and free to play, enjoyed the read
February 25th, 2025 06:48
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write, children just want to be children, free from threat and free to play, enjoyed the read
February 25th, 2025 06:48
THREAT OF SNOW
sorenbarrett said:
Children do not heed threats. A lovely write and full of metaphor as well. Nicely done
February 25th, 2025 05:58
sorenbarrett said:
Children do not heed threats. A lovely write and full of metaphor as well. Nicely done
February 25th, 2025 05:58
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