Comments received on poems by nephilim56
TO WANDER
sorenbarrett said:
The meter was hypnotic and for this a fave. I very much liked the line granite rock tears. Lovley
June 8th, 2025 06:15
sorenbarrett said:
The meter was hypnotic and for this a fave. I very much liked the line granite rock tears. Lovley
June 8th, 2025 06:15
A LONE COAT ON A HOOK
Lorenz said:
Our old coat eaten up by seasons is our conscience !
June 7th, 2025 13:07
Lorenz said:
Our old coat eaten up by seasons is our conscience !
June 7th, 2025 13:07
A LONE COAT ON A HOOK
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of loss and all the questions that go with it. Very nicely written
June 7th, 2025 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of loss and all the questions that go with it. Very nicely written
June 7th, 2025 04:05
ALIEN SKY
sorenbarrett said:
Foreign, alien, robotic, mechanical are words that come to mind with this poem. Nicely written
June 6th, 2025 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
Foreign, alien, robotic, mechanical are words that come to mind with this poem. Nicely written
June 6th, 2025 04:14
WHEN WINTER COMES
Damaso said:
Wow, I can feel like I\'ve known this formula since I was a kid. A vicious cycle that attacks everything good in this life until its time is up. Strength to resist. Cheers.
June 5th, 2025 08:30
Damaso said:
Wow, I can feel like I\'ve known this formula since I was a kid. A vicious cycle that attacks everything good in this life until its time is up. Strength to resist. Cheers.
June 5th, 2025 08:30
THE GOTHIC WINDOW
sorenbarrett said:
Good rhyme matched with good flow make this poem easy to read and with the metaphor of the eyes as windows it is easy to understand as well. Very nice.
June 5th, 2025 05:08
sorenbarrett said:
Good rhyme matched with good flow make this poem easy to read and with the metaphor of the eyes as windows it is easy to understand as well. Very nice.
June 5th, 2025 05:08
THE GOTHIC WINDOW
Lorenz said:
This road from the tarot of destiny is bound to attract me ! A fav !
June 5th, 2025 01:50
Lorenz said:
This road from the tarot of destiny is bound to attract me ! A fav !
June 5th, 2025 01:50
WHEN WINTER COMES
Lorenz said:
I spent several years in U.K and I\'ve seen this brutal fall . Brexit or europe it won\'t change things .
June 4th, 2025 14:27
Lorenz said:
I spent several years in U.K and I\'ve seen this brutal fall . Brexit or europe it won\'t change things .
June 4th, 2025 14:27
WHEN WINTER COMES
arqios said:
Democracy is dissolving in dystopian swill…. Powerful poem here🙏🏻🕊
June 4th, 2025 05:39
arqios said:
Democracy is dissolving in dystopian swill…. Powerful poem here🙏🏻🕊
June 4th, 2025 05:39
WHEN WINTER COMES
Poetic Licence said:
And sadly it is only going to get worse, poignant write, nicely expressed
June 4th, 2025 04:54
Poetic Licence said:
And sadly it is only going to get worse, poignant write, nicely expressed
June 4th, 2025 04:54
WHEN WINTER COMES
sorenbarrett said:
Capitalistic democracy sells its birthright for a pot of porridge. People would rather be a comfortable slave than a working freeman. Such is the state of humanity. Most well written
June 4th, 2025 04:44
sorenbarrett said:
Capitalistic democracy sells its birthright for a pot of porridge. People would rather be a comfortable slave than a working freeman. Such is the state of humanity. Most well written
June 4th, 2025 04:44
UNDER APRILS SUN
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoyed the read, thank you for brightening up my day
June 3rd, 2025 04:36
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoyed the read, thank you for brightening up my day
June 3rd, 2025 04:36
UNDER APRILS SUN
sorenbarrett said:
This poem enigmatically speaks of aging and death and the gentle flow of time that brings this on. A most symbolic and hypnotic flow to it. Very nice
June 3rd, 2025 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
This poem enigmatically speaks of aging and death and the gentle flow of time that brings this on. A most symbolic and hypnotic flow to it. Very nice
June 3rd, 2025 04:33
A LONE TEAR CRIED
Poetic Licence said:
A touching write of the drowning of sorrows and loss with alcohol , trying to drink the pain away, nicely expressed and written
June 2nd, 2025 11:09
Poetic Licence said:
A touching write of the drowning of sorrows and loss with alcohol , trying to drink the pain away, nicely expressed and written
June 2nd, 2025 11:09
A LONE TEAR CRIED
sorenbarrett said:
A most sad poem that paints the picture of loss leading to drowning of sorrows in alcohol a most sad situation. Nicely written
June 2nd, 2025 05:17
sorenbarrett said:
A most sad poem that paints the picture of loss leading to drowning of sorrows in alcohol a most sad situation. Nicely written
June 2nd, 2025 05:17
THE DIRTY STREETS
Damaso said:
Splendid, I can feel like I can read the whole thing in one sitting. Beautiful.
June 1st, 2025 08:36
Damaso said:
Splendid, I can feel like I can read the whole thing in one sitting. Beautiful.
June 1st, 2025 08:36
BEHIND A SMILE
sorenbarrett said:
How things go unsaid in a world of no conversation. Darkness falls in this poem. Very well written a fave
June 1st, 2025 05:04
sorenbarrett said:
How things go unsaid in a world of no conversation. Darkness falls in this poem. Very well written a fave
June 1st, 2025 05:04
THE DIRTY STREETS
sorenbarrett said:
A dark poem that presents a sad commentary on society but in such a poetic manner that it is a fave
May 31st, 2025 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
A dark poem that presents a sad commentary on society but in such a poetic manner that it is a fave
May 31st, 2025 04:40
NEVER TOLD
rrodriguez said:
So much imagery in this poem. It flows and feels melancholic, like something slipping... I like what you did here. Bravo, my friend!
May 30th, 2025 20:19
rrodriguez said:
So much imagery in this poem. It flows and feels melancholic, like something slipping... I like what you did here. Bravo, my friend!
May 30th, 2025 20:19
MARBLE ANGEL
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the image painted in this poem and the metaphor extends beyond the image to the meaning of a marble angel that remains frozen and imprisoned in stone. Nicely written
May 30th, 2025 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the image painted in this poem and the metaphor extends beyond the image to the meaning of a marble angel that remains frozen and imprisoned in stone. Nicely written
May 30th, 2025 04:48
BITTER SHOW
Damaso said:
I wish I could measure the day like a bird measures its flight. It sounds very comforting. Greetings, and thank you so much for sharing.
May 29th, 2025 08:34
Damaso said:
I wish I could measure the day like a bird measures its flight. It sounds very comforting. Greetings, and thank you so much for sharing.
May 29th, 2025 08:34
BITTER SHOW
sorenbarrett said:
This poem gage a feeling throughout of nature and beauty to be turned about with the last line and the words (bitter show) that seemed to be incongruous with the flow. It is this that gave the poem its charm and appeal. Most lovely making the mind put on the breaks and reconsider the direction it was headed in.
May 29th, 2025 04:36
sorenbarrett said:
This poem gage a feeling throughout of nature and beauty to be turned about with the last line and the words (bitter show) that seemed to be incongruous with the flow. It is this that gave the poem its charm and appeal. Most lovely making the mind put on the breaks and reconsider the direction it was headed in.
May 29th, 2025 04:36
NEVER TOLD
sorenbarrett said:
This poem fanciful reads mystical and may well be metaphorical but aside from all this reads well. Nicely doen
May 28th, 2025 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
This poem fanciful reads mystical and may well be metaphorical but aside from all this reads well. Nicely doen
May 28th, 2025 04:09
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