Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)
I WAITED FOR YOU
ElizabethMoroz said:
You have a beautiful style, well done. Elizabeth profound and elegant,.
July 18th, 2025 22:24
ElizabethMoroz said:
You have a beautiful style, well done. Elizabeth profound and elegant,.
July 18th, 2025 22:24
THE DIRTY STREETS
ElizabethMoroz said:
Multiple themes explored. So very good!!Thankyou for this piece. Elizabeth
July 18th, 2025 22:22
ElizabethMoroz said:
Multiple themes explored. So very good!!Thankyou for this piece. Elizabeth
July 18th, 2025 22:22
REALIST NOT A ROYALIST
Priya Tomar said:
Very true....
You cleverly criticized priviledged class...
July 18th, 2025 21:17
Priya Tomar said:
Very true....
You cleverly criticized priviledged class...
July 18th, 2025 21:17
LITTLE GRANDA
Tony Grannell said:
Eerily endearing, the ghost of love in the form of his grandfather visiting his grandson. A hauntingly beautiful poem and true as well. Well done.
Wishing you all the very best and the little boy, too,
Tony.
July 18th, 2025 14:18
Tony Grannell said:
Eerily endearing, the ghost of love in the form of his grandfather visiting his grandson. A hauntingly beautiful poem and true as well. Well done.
Wishing you all the very best and the little boy, too,
Tony.
July 18th, 2025 14:18
THE KILLING OF MR BROWN
Keeter C said:
Also if you’re 16 you can vote! I feel for y’all. What has become of americas older brother? I’m afraid we may follow.
July 18th, 2025 08:37
Keeter C said:
Also if you’re 16 you can vote! I feel for y’all. What has become of americas older brother? I’m afraid we may follow.
July 18th, 2025 08:37
NEVER TOLD
ElizabethMoroz said:
Beautiful imagery and metaphor here and a wonderful very effective excercise in line by line brevity. Gorgeous piece, sincerely Elizabeth
July 18th, 2025 04:07
ElizabethMoroz said:
Beautiful imagery and metaphor here and a wonderful very effective excercise in line by line brevity. Gorgeous piece, sincerely Elizabeth
July 18th, 2025 04:07
SUSIE
Tony Grannell said:
Such a beautiful poem, tender is the love but so sad is the end. A complete joy to read.
Kind regards,
Tony.
July 17th, 2025 14:09
Tony Grannell said:
Such a beautiful poem, tender is the love but so sad is the end. A complete joy to read.
Kind regards,
Tony.
July 17th, 2025 14:09
SUSIE
sorenbarrett said:
A sensuous poem that breaths natural in a free form of nature itself. Nicely done.
July 17th, 2025 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
A sensuous poem that breaths natural in a free form of nature itself. Nicely done.
July 17th, 2025 04:43
AS HOURS CHIME
sorenbarrett said:
Dreamlike indeed it drifts and floats in its poetic words
July 16th, 2025 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
Dreamlike indeed it drifts and floats in its poetic words
July 16th, 2025 04:04
I FORGOT TO HATE
Damaso said:
Incredible writing. It flows. I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing. Best regards.
July 15th, 2025 10:01
Damaso said:
Incredible writing. It flows. I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing. Best regards.
July 15th, 2025 10:01
I FORGOT TO HATE
sorenbarrett said:
I truly love this poem. It is brilliant! It uses very short lines in a machinegun style hitting the reader with bullets. It sets the scene with a grey day and no empathy them escalates to violence on the roof top then shifts to the bitter taste and hits with the coup de grasce (I forgot to hate) that can be taken as too busy to remember something so insignificant as hate or as hate is not an important element in life. A lovely write and a fave
July 15th, 2025 05:03
sorenbarrett said:
I truly love this poem. It is brilliant! It uses very short lines in a machinegun style hitting the reader with bullets. It sets the scene with a grey day and no empathy them escalates to violence on the roof top then shifts to the bitter taste and hits with the coup de grasce (I forgot to hate) that can be taken as too busy to remember something so insignificant as hate or as hate is not an important element in life. A lovely write and a fave
July 15th, 2025 05:03
I FORGOT TO HATE
ElizabethMoroz said:
Emotionally resonant and quite profound . Beautiful imagery and sentiment here. Poetic and wistful. Very much enjoyed reading this one: well done! Sincerely Elizabeth
July 15th, 2025 02:59
ElizabethMoroz said:
Emotionally resonant and quite profound . Beautiful imagery and sentiment here. Poetic and wistful. Very much enjoyed reading this one: well done! Sincerely Elizabeth
July 15th, 2025 02:59
BEHIND A SMILE
Priya Tomar said:
You painted a scene of separation.
Well written
July 14th, 2025 06:57
Priya Tomar said:
You painted a scene of separation.
Well written
July 14th, 2025 06:57
SNIPER
sorenbarrett said:
I love this one it takes me in several directions all held together by a single theme. My favorite lines (A killer legalized by war) Very nicely done
July 14th, 2025 04:53
sorenbarrett said:
I love this one it takes me in several directions all held together by a single theme. My favorite lines (A killer legalized by war) Very nicely done
July 14th, 2025 04:53
SNIPER
ElizabethMoroz said:
Interesting characterisation of a fascinatingly macabre role. Poetic display of concise truth. Well done! Elizabeth
July 14th, 2025 04:08
ElizabethMoroz said:
Interesting characterisation of a fascinatingly macabre role. Poetic display of concise truth. Well done! Elizabeth
July 14th, 2025 04:08
THE FARTER
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read reminding me of the show (Blazing Saddles) of childhood fart jokes and those times in nursing homes where control is no longer important, Well done
July 13th, 2025 05:11
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read reminding me of the show (Blazing Saddles) of childhood fart jokes and those times in nursing homes where control is no longer important, Well done
July 13th, 2025 05:11
LEST WORDS CURSE
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a circular feel to it as it progresses from birth to death it feels cyclical and is quite metaphoric with great imagery. It seems ethereal and ephemeral in its nature. Very nicely written
July 12th, 2025 04:58
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a circular feel to it as it progresses from birth to death it feels cyclical and is quite metaphoric with great imagery. It seems ethereal and ephemeral in its nature. Very nicely written
July 12th, 2025 04:58
OUT OF DATE
RSM0812 said:
This is an unfotunate side effect of an unjust world. Your words expained it beautifully with perfect imagery and rhythm. Its a very truthful write.
July 11th, 2025 12:26
RSM0812 said:
This is an unfotunate side effect of an unjust world. Your words expained it beautifully with perfect imagery and rhythm. Its a very truthful write.
July 11th, 2025 12:26
ONCE YOUNG MEN WHO SMILED
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely sensitive write, the continued loss of life on the battlefield and what does it ever achieve, nicely expressed and written
July 11th, 2025 06:21
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely sensitive write, the continued loss of life on the battlefield and what does it ever achieve, nicely expressed and written
July 11th, 2025 06:21
ONCE YOUNG MEN WHO SMILED
sorenbarrett said:
The vikings looked forward to entering Valhalla reserved for warriors who valiantly died in battle and women who died in childbirth. Today we see things differently and wonder at the useless loss of soldiers that die in battle. A good poem to awaken awareness.
July 11th, 2025 05:45
sorenbarrett said:
The vikings looked forward to entering Valhalla reserved for warriors who valiantly died in battle and women who died in childbirth. Today we see things differently and wonder at the useless loss of soldiers that die in battle. A good poem to awaken awareness.
July 11th, 2025 05:45
OUT OF DATE
Damaso said:
The parabellum of the good psychopath. Failure is your fault, not the system\'s. The poor are the problem; it\'s all their fault. The elderly. The terrorists. I need a good enemy to cover up my lies. Thank you so much for sharing. Sorry for the long comment. Best regards.
July 10th, 2025 12:38
Damaso said:
The parabellum of the good psychopath. Failure is your fault, not the system\'s. The poor are the problem; it\'s all their fault. The elderly. The terrorists. I need a good enemy to cover up my lies. Thank you so much for sharing. Sorry for the long comment. Best regards.
July 10th, 2025 12:38
OUT OF DATE
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem about social problems and the response to them with out prevention or even concern for their cause. Well done
July 10th, 2025 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem about social problems and the response to them with out prevention or even concern for their cause. Well done
July 10th, 2025 04:11
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