Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)
BIZZARE
RSM0812 said:
There is blood everywhere. Its unfortunate and disappointing. One day people will learn. Good read.
June 6th, 2026 15:15
RSM0812 said:
There is blood everywhere. Its unfortunate and disappointing. One day people will learn. Good read.
June 6th, 2026 15:15
OPEN SOULS
orchidee said:
Good write N. A lonely time too waiting at that bus stop. Did everyone else give up and walk or go back home?! lol.
June 6th, 2026 11:25
orchidee said:
Good write N. A lonely time too waiting at that bus stop. Did everyone else give up and walk or go back home?! lol.
June 6th, 2026 11:25
OPEN SOULS
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this hit me hard. There’s a stark humanity running through this piece...the fog may blur the world, but it seems to sharpen the realities you’re pointing toward. The contrast between comfort and hardship lands with real force. Powerful poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 6th, 2026 08:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this hit me hard. There’s a stark humanity running through this piece...the fog may blur the world, but it seems to sharpen the realities you’re pointing toward. The contrast between comfort and hardship lands with real force. Powerful poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 6th, 2026 08:28
OPEN SOULS
sorenbarrett said:
Norman this one feels indeed lonely and cold. You have set it well and placed it all in rhyme. Nicely done
June 6th, 2026 04:00
sorenbarrett said:
Norman this one feels indeed lonely and cold. You have set it well and placed it all in rhyme. Nicely done
June 6th, 2026 04:00
BIZZARE
arqios said:
Telecracy is an oligarch\'s best friend, it seems. Distancing the reputation and personhood from the dirty work at all costs. I guess that\'s how henchmen. lacjeys and sidekicks abound.
June 5th, 2026 07:10
arqios said:
Telecracy is an oligarch\'s best friend, it seems. Distancing the reputation and personhood from the dirty work at all costs. I guess that\'s how henchmen. lacjeys and sidekicks abound.
June 5th, 2026 07:10
BIZZARE
Teddy.15 said:
A wonderful piece of poetry that your title works perfectly with. Those politicians wouldn\'t be seen on the front line. 🌹
June 5th, 2026 03:43
Teddy.15 said:
A wonderful piece of poetry that your title works perfectly with. Those politicians wouldn\'t be seen on the front line. 🌹
June 5th, 2026 03:43
BIZZARE
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is haunting and poignant where the justification for violence against one\'s fellow man is politically justified. Nicely penned
June 5th, 2026 03:22
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is haunting and poignant where the justification for violence against one\'s fellow man is politically justified. Nicely penned
June 5th, 2026 03:22
MAGIC CAUGHT
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this brought back that feeling of encountering someone or something that changes the atmosphere around you without a word being spoken. The poem captures those quiet moments that somehow become unforgettable. Really enjoyed this one, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 4th, 2026 18:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this brought back that feeling of encountering someone or something that changes the atmosphere around you without a word being spoken. The poem captures those quiet moments that somehow become unforgettable. Really enjoyed this one, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 4th, 2026 18:08
STRANGER AT THE STATION
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, I’ve always found train imagery carries a special kind of melancholy…that sense of movement, departure, and things that cannot be revisited. This poem taps into that feeling wonderfully. It feels reflective without becoming heavy-handed. Really enjoyed this one, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 4th, 2026 15:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, I’ve always found train imagery carries a special kind of melancholy…that sense of movement, departure, and things that cannot be revisited. This poem taps into that feeling wonderfully. It feels reflective without becoming heavy-handed. Really enjoyed this one, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 4th, 2026 15:10
STRANGER AT THE STATION
Lorenz said:
Excellent study on railway existentialism !
June 4th, 2026 12:11
Lorenz said:
Excellent study on railway existentialism !
June 4th, 2026 12:11
MAGIC CAUGHT
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Yes - magic caught - a bus? Or was it a mirage?! lol.
June 4th, 2026 10:46
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Yes - magic caught - a bus? Or was it a mirage?! lol.
June 4th, 2026 10:46
MAGIC CAUGHT
sorenbarrett said:
Such romance in a poem and in a dream. Nicely worded Norman you captured the elusive nature of love and dreams and tied them together. A wonderful poem and a fave
June 4th, 2026 06:57
sorenbarrett said:
Such romance in a poem and in a dream. Nicely worded Norman you captured the elusive nature of love and dreams and tied them together. A wonderful poem and a fave
June 4th, 2026 06:57
STRANGER AT THE STATION
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Norman, those memories can be taken from us in many ways.
Andy
June 4th, 2026 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Norman, those memories can be taken from us in many ways.
Andy
June 4th, 2026 00:50
STRANGER AT THE STATION
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem explores themes of solitude, nostalgia, and the passage of time, encapsulating the emotions tied to memories and the impact of past journeys on the present.
June 3rd, 2026 12:10
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem explores themes of solitude, nostalgia, and the passage of time, encapsulating the emotions tied to memories and the impact of past journeys on the present.
June 3rd, 2026 12:10
STRANGER AT THE STATION
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Ahh, you got to the bus station at last (maybe walked there?) and a friend said to you \'Hello stranger; not seen you for 50 years\'. You reply:\' Yes, I was waiting for a bus so I could meet you\'. Doh!
June 3rd, 2026 11:35
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Ahh, you got to the bus station at last (maybe walked there?) and a friend said to you \'Hello stranger; not seen you for 50 years\'. You reply:\' Yes, I was waiting for a bus so I could meet you\'. Doh!
June 3rd, 2026 11:35
STRANGER AT THE STATION
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphors of a train, tracks for the train and on the face of the clock that is time. Those tracks the life journey and the tracks the memory which bad need to be erased. It is a bumpy ride. Well done
June 3rd, 2026 11:03
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphors of a train, tracks for the train and on the face of the clock that is time. Those tracks the life journey and the tracks the memory which bad need to be erased. It is a bumpy ride. Well done
June 3rd, 2026 11:03
PENDANT
sorenbarrett said:
Memories evoked by a picture opened and closed. And so it is that the mind becomes the pendant and picture opened and closed. Well done Norman
June 2nd, 2026 07:08
sorenbarrett said:
Memories evoked by a picture opened and closed. And so it is that the mind becomes the pendant and picture opened and closed. Well done Norman
June 2nd, 2026 07:08
A DREAM
Goldfinch60 said:
Those dreams can bring both pleasure and sadness Norman/.
Andy
June 2nd, 2026 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Those dreams can bring both pleasure and sadness Norman/.
Andy
June 2nd, 2026 01:48
A DREAM
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, what a beautiful reflection. What struck me most is the contrast between the intimate details...the grass, the sand, the breeze...and the distant ships moving across the horizon. It creates a feeling of being both deeply present and slightly adrift at the same time. The dreamlike quality of the ending ties it all together perfectly. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 1st, 2026 17:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, what a beautiful reflection. What struck me most is the contrast between the intimate details...the grass, the sand, the breeze...and the distant ships moving across the horizon. It creates a feeling of being both deeply present and slightly adrift at the same time. The dreamlike quality of the ending ties it all together perfectly. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 1st, 2026 17:56
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