Comments received on poems by nephilim56
HARD LIFE
Bobby O said:
So many had that courage and it’s great that you salute and recognize. Props my friend
October 11th, 2023 12:26
Bobby O said:
So many had that courage and it’s great that you salute and recognize. Props my friend
October 11th, 2023 12:26
STRANGE TOWN
Parisab said:
Your poem pictured a town so cold and detached from the misery and isolation of the person sleeping on the bench park! Yet they keep the fire in their poet heart! Great story telling…
October 8th, 2023 11:46
Parisab said:
Your poem pictured a town so cold and detached from the misery and isolation of the person sleeping on the bench park! Yet they keep the fire in their poet heart! Great story telling…
October 8th, 2023 11:46
ROBERTS HERO
janiselizabeth said:
This made me want to cry. As a parent, sometimes you cannot imagine having to do some of the hardest things that you think a heart couldn\'t possibly handle. It\'s the ultimate show of love even when your children don\'t necessarily see it that way.
October 3rd, 2023 04:46
janiselizabeth said:
This made me want to cry. As a parent, sometimes you cannot imagine having to do some of the hardest things that you think a heart couldn\'t possibly handle. It\'s the ultimate show of love even when your children don\'t necessarily see it that way.
October 3rd, 2023 04:46
BUSKER
L. B. Mek said:
I recognise your Busker
he visits in my mirror..
such is life.
a wonderfully tender tone to your wording
thanks for sharing, dear poet
October 2nd, 2023 06:37
L. B. Mek said:
I recognise your Busker
he visits in my mirror..
such is life.
a wonderfully tender tone to your wording
thanks for sharing, dear poet
October 2nd, 2023 06:37
BUSKER
2781 said:
Could have been the homeless guy with the softest smile.
All salt of the earth.
October 2nd, 2023 06:27
2781 said:
Could have been the homeless guy with the softest smile.
All salt of the earth.
October 2nd, 2023 06:27
BUSKER
Pop64 said:
An enjoyable, respectful dedication to this busker. Nicely penned!
October 2nd, 2023 05:28
Pop64 said:
An enjoyable, respectful dedication to this busker. Nicely penned!
October 2nd, 2023 05:28
BUSKER
Bobby O said:
The Personality injected in this piece makes it feel alive and I almost can hear the busker.
October 2nd, 2023 03:57
Bobby O said:
The Personality injected in this piece makes it feel alive and I almost can hear the busker.
October 2nd, 2023 03:57
BUSKER
Teddy.15 said:
You just brought him so much dignity. The busker loved this beautiful.
October 2nd, 2023 03:53
Teddy.15 said:
You just brought him so much dignity. The busker loved this beautiful.
October 2nd, 2023 03:53
THE FALLEN
Teddy.15 said:
What a beautiful sight, Angels are one of my favourite themes. You certainly have a magic for rhyme ❤️
October 1st, 2023 04:52
Teddy.15 said:
What a beautiful sight, Angels are one of my favourite themes. You certainly have a magic for rhyme ❤️
October 1st, 2023 04:52
SOON MY GRANDCHILDREN MOVE AWAY
Christina8 said:
i agree with Teddy on this....but I\'m glad you went with a lighter, more positive poem, where a lot of people might go towards the negative. Awesome!
September 30th, 2023 10:48
Christina8 said:
i agree with Teddy on this....but I\'m glad you went with a lighter, more positive poem, where a lot of people might go towards the negative. Awesome!
September 30th, 2023 10:48
SOON MY GRANDCHILDREN MOVE AWAY
Teddy.15 said:
May every grandchild in the world have a letter like this. ❤️
September 30th, 2023 05:13
Teddy.15 said:
May every grandchild in the world have a letter like this. ❤️
September 30th, 2023 05:13
SOON MY GRANDCHILDREN MOVE AWAY
Weep little lion girl said:
I am very close with my siblings as I helped raise them closely and even refer to them as my own children. They recently moved far away so this poem resonated with me a lot.
Also, it is stunningly written, you are very talented, and I love your style! :)
September 30th, 2023 04:51
Weep little lion girl said:
I am very close with my siblings as I helped raise them closely and even refer to them as my own children. They recently moved far away so this poem resonated with me a lot.
Also, it is stunningly written, you are very talented, and I love your style! :)
September 30th, 2023 04:51
HALL OF FAME
L. B. Mek said:
\'Keeping still
Her treasured note
In a creased and dirty
Envelope.
To which he swears
A silent oath.\'
This is beautiful, a joy to read
love wishes inked relatable and sincere
Thank you dear poet
September 29th, 2023 06:41
L. B. Mek said:
\'Keeping still
Her treasured note
In a creased and dirty
Envelope.
To which he swears
A silent oath.\'
This is beautiful, a joy to read
love wishes inked relatable and sincere
Thank you dear poet
September 29th, 2023 06:41
HALL OF FAME
Teddy.15 said:
Sounds like an affair to remember of some kind. ❤️
September 29th, 2023 03:29
Teddy.15 said:
Sounds like an affair to remember of some kind. ❤️
September 29th, 2023 03:29
THE DAY ALAN DIED
Teddy.15 said:
Beautiful, I appreciate the loss of both . ❤️
September 28th, 2023 02:47
Teddy.15 said:
Beautiful, I appreciate the loss of both . ❤️
September 28th, 2023 02:47
CRADLE
Pop64 said:
Your write hits home, as my daughters have discussed this with my wife and I. They don\'t fight over who will take care of us, as I wouldn\'t want that on any one, but each one of them think we will be with that one. I recognize the spiritual aspect of this write and clearly identify with it.
September 27th, 2023 08:02
Pop64 said:
Your write hits home, as my daughters have discussed this with my wife and I. They don\'t fight over who will take care of us, as I wouldn\'t want that on any one, but each one of them think we will be with that one. I recognize the spiritual aspect of this write and clearly identify with it.
September 27th, 2023 08:02
CRADLE
Teddy.15 said:
Here in Italy there is an enormous respect between parents and their children it\'s almost incredible to see. Parents help their children buy homes and set up their lives and then they also take care of the grandchildren and when it\'s time to help out our parents we do it with great gratitude and pride. I\'ve always been amazed of the love we have over here and great respect for eachother. A great subject ❤️
September 27th, 2023 02:34
Teddy.15 said:
Here in Italy there is an enormous respect between parents and their children it\'s almost incredible to see. Parents help their children buy homes and set up their lives and then they also take care of the grandchildren and when it\'s time to help out our parents we do it with great gratitude and pride. I\'ve always been amazed of the love we have over here and great respect for eachother. A great subject ❤️
September 27th, 2023 02:34
CRADLE
Doggerel Dave said:
On one level I like the simplicity and your usual polish.
But please, don\'t put it on your offspring. I\'ve seen too many daughters and sons (but mostly daughters) have the middle part of their lives curtailed by the demands of ageing parents.
September 27th, 2023 02:19
Doggerel Dave said:
On one level I like the simplicity and your usual polish.
But please, don\'t put it on your offspring. I\'ve seen too many daughters and sons (but mostly daughters) have the middle part of their lives curtailed by the demands of ageing parents.
September 27th, 2023 02:19
JOURNEY
L. B. Mek said:
Poetry
as subtle as it was designed to be
Beauty
(thank you! dear Poet)
September 25th, 2023 05:40
L. B. Mek said:
Poetry
as subtle as it was designed to be
Beauty
(thank you! dear Poet)
September 25th, 2023 05:40
WOMAN
Teddy.15 said:
Such emotion an incredibly sad poem yet written with a beautiful pen hand. ❤️
September 24th, 2023 06:36
Teddy.15 said:
Such emotion an incredibly sad poem yet written with a beautiful pen hand. ❤️
September 24th, 2023 06:36
THE COST
Teddy.15 said:
I suspect the soul of a good man has already been torn away before they go to war, otherwise how could they even be so strong as to kill another. Beautiful words, I would hope that they were placed in a peaceful place such as heaven as we believe it to be. ❤️
September 23rd, 2023 04:08
Teddy.15 said:
I suspect the soul of a good man has already been torn away before they go to war, otherwise how could they even be so strong as to kill another. Beautiful words, I would hope that they were placed in a peaceful place such as heaven as we believe it to be. ❤️
September 23rd, 2023 04:08
NO MANS LAND
Pop64 said:
The rhyme is terrific while the details of the write, the imagery and story provided, hit deep. Burying someone is difficult, burying your child is worse, though there should be no comparison. I watched my mother bury my brother after the gulf war and this tells the truth of the tears.
September 22nd, 2023 10:31
Pop64 said:
The rhyme is terrific while the details of the write, the imagery and story provided, hit deep. Burying someone is difficult, burying your child is worse, though there should be no comparison. I watched my mother bury my brother after the gulf war and this tells the truth of the tears.
September 22nd, 2023 10:31
NO MANS LAND
L. B. Mek said:
\'His mother remembers
A child in her arms
Blind to the truth
Of battlefield scars.\'
it\'s too heart-breaking, to witness
so they choose to go blind...
(Brilliant!
thank you dear Poet)
September 22nd, 2023 06:08
L. B. Mek said:
\'His mother remembers
A child in her arms
Blind to the truth
Of battlefield scars.\'
it\'s too heart-breaking, to witness
so they choose to go blind...
(Brilliant!
thank you dear Poet)
September 22nd, 2023 06:08
NO MANS LAND
Teddy.15 said:
I give utmost respect to all soldiers of war but you also show through the eyes of a mother and that\'s superb writing. 💖
September 22nd, 2023 03:21
Teddy.15 said:
I give utmost respect to all soldiers of war but you also show through the eyes of a mother and that\'s superb writing. 💖
September 22nd, 2023 03:21
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