Comments received on poems by nephilim56



THE LONESOME FIELD
Damaso said:

Wow, how intriguing. Impressive! Cheers!

May 22nd, 2025 11:04

THE LONESOME FIELD
sorenbarrett said:

The anguish of failure seeps from these lines and falls in the despair of acceptance at the end. Powerful

May 22nd, 2025 05:14

CURSED MOON
rrodriguez said:

I can relate to your message. I\'m a chaplain and I see death a lot... I see an empty shell when the spirit is gone. Thank you for sharing. A well written piece.

May 22nd, 2025 05:03

LONE CANDLE
arqios said:

Something about candles and their singular light amid a dark world. Beautiful! 🕯️🕊️🙏🏻

May 21st, 2025 05:35

LONE CANDLE
sorenbarrett said:

This poem has a most haunting quality to it and feels a bit dark and ominous in nature. Very nicely written

May 21st, 2025 04:33

CURSED MOON
sorenbarrett said:

Very nicely written this poem speaks of death in a most intimate manner with great imagery and metaphor. Very nicely done

May 20th, 2025 04:16

CURSED MOON
arqios said:

This has put words to experiences I have had over the years. Most touched🙏🏻🕊️

May 20th, 2025 03:52

CURSED MOON
Poetic Licence said:

Very relatable write to many, being in a hospital watching the passing of a loved one, nicely expressed and written

May 20th, 2025 02:42

DELIVERED
arqios said:

Makes me think about the saying: \"don\'t shoot the messenger\" in many ways the postman in like the Grim Reaper with postal stamp sickle. Pardon the tangent.🙏🏻🕊️

May 19th, 2025 06:33

DELIVERED
sorenbarrett said:

Mysteries in a letter well written in great rhyme and good meter with a nice flow leaves the reader wondering and guessing what the message was. Death, rejection what does (You\'ve gone away) mean? Then the issue of one knowing and another not. A wonderful poem of intrigue unanswered.

May 19th, 2025 04:51

IDLE SOLITUDE
RSM0812 said:

Scented whispers of a dying breeze. Wow.

May 18th, 2025 08:53

THE NAKED GODDESS
sorenbarrett said:

Deep thoughts the cycle of death and life seems to be portrayed here and the issue of time. Nicely written in rhyme.

May 18th, 2025 04:57

UK 2025
arqios said:

That\'s quite concerning...just digesting that makes the skin crawl and the mind falter🙏🏻🕊️

May 17th, 2025 06:41

UK 2025
sorenbarrett said:

This super short sums up the message in so few words. The author\'s note reinforces the situation and the reader is left to find the answer.

May 17th, 2025 04:22

IDLE SOLITUDE
MatPie said:

how I be feeling nowadays, thank you for capturing a shot of solitude in such a deeply personal way. its beautiful

May 16th, 2025 06:56

IDLE SOLITUDE
Poetic Licence said:

A very relatable write to me, some people enjoy solitude, myself I end feeling like this, nicely done

May 16th, 2025 05:17

IDLE SOLITUDE
sorenbarrett said:

Cold hard and powerful images of solitude gives a stark feel to this poem painting a winter picture to being alone. Nicely worded

May 16th, 2025 04:20

A FOREIGN FIELD
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

May 15th, 2025 12:06

A FOREIGN FIELD
sorenbarrett said:

The devastation and meaninglessness of war falls from this poem and lays in front of the reader. Stark and emotionally engaging this poem protests violence and destruction of war. Well done

May 15th, 2025 05:18

A FOREIGN FIELD
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

Your poem etches war\'s haunting toll—where flesh and spirit fade unseen—asking if foreign fields ever truly release the souls they claim.

May 15th, 2025 04:23

TIME TO SAY GOODBYE
sorenbarrett said:

There is a melancholy and sense of sadness in this poem over days past and loves now burnt out. A wonderful write

May 14th, 2025 04:07

IRISH LULLABY
Teddy.15 said:

Having travelled well in the south of Ireland, I got to meet the very, very special people and I absolutely love this, Christie Moore would be proud. Such a magical tone especially at the end which gave me goosebumps 🌹

May 13th, 2025 14:12

PHOTOGRAPH
Tony36 said:

Great write

May 13th, 2025 08:49

IRISH LULLABY
Tony Grannell said:

What a splendid poem and from the west of Ireland, a beautiful part of the island. You should repost this every year on Saint Patrick\'s Day, so that we can savour its beauty over and over again. Perfect.

All the very best to you,

Tony.

May 13th, 2025 08:49

PHOTOGRAPH
sorenbarrett said:

Sad, nostalgic, a loss well written in most poetic form. Well done

May 13th, 2025 04:11

PHOTOGRAPH
Ellen Marsell said:

Such a beautiful and touching poem!

May 13th, 2025 03:50

PHOTOGRAPH
Poetic Licence said:

A lovely write, I like the not framing of the photo, I think when people do that, they are framing what they want to remember not who the person was, enjoyed the read

May 13th, 2025 03:19

PHOTOGRAPH
Neilton said:

You wore freedom
As a coat
Such a great line !This is exactly how I feel when I look at a picture of a friend that changed or a loved one that is no longer here in this world! Perfectly written

May 13th, 2025 01:12

RAIN
Neilton said:

Excellent imagery and such a great poem in general

May 13th, 2025 01:03

IRISH LULLABY
Ellen Marsell said:

A very warm poem — and at the same time, strikingly deep.

May 12th, 2025 13:37

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