Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)



FROM THE PULPIT
sorenbarrett said:

This for some reason reminds me of the scripture faith without works is dead. There is the necessity of doing something not just speaking to make things work. Well done

July 17th, 2026 05:03

THIRTEEN STEPS
RSM0812 said:

A very well crafted poem. I appreciate the read.

July 16th, 2026 16:22

EMBRACING TIME
arqios said:

A stretching of such familiarity. Definitive faveπŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈπŸ€©

July 16th, 2026 11:20

EMBRACING TIME
orchidee said:

A fine write N. You had plenty of time to embrace at that bus stop. lol.

July 16th, 2026 09:29

A POET DIED
Zellie said:

Amazingg

July 16th, 2026 08:57

EMBRACING TIME
Tristan Robert Lange said:

This speaks to me, my friend. There are moments when simply sitting with the years behind us feels almost sacred...not trying to recover them, just honoring that they were ours. Loved this, Norman. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

July 16th, 2026 08:22

EMBRACING TIME
sorenbarrett said:

Very lovely it takes one to a dream world and fantasy that seems to stretch and twist memories for better or worse. Nicely done

July 16th, 2026 03:43

EMBRACING TIME
Teddy.15 said:

Absolutely stunning and is quite how I felt after watching the England match last night from my home in Italy. 🌹

July 16th, 2026 03:22

BETWEEN TWO WORLDS
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Norman, this really touched me. It carries that bittersweet feeling of remembering someone who never knew the place they held in your heart. Quietly beautiful, my friend. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

July 15th, 2026 22:37

THIRTEEN STEPS
Tristan Robert Lange said:

My friend, those \"thirteen steps\" immediately caught my attention. They become so much more than stairs...they feel like the distance between the life everyone saw and the man who had almost nothing left to give. Beautifully done, Norman. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

July 15th, 2026 20:37

BETWEEN TWO WORLDS
Friendship said:

Lovely written. Your poem explores the complexity of human emotions, particularly the pain of unexpressed love and the passage of time that separates the poet from the one they care for.

July 15th, 2026 13:20

BETWEEN TWO WORLDS
Lorenz said:

You should set some of your lyrics to music !

July 15th, 2026 13:18

BETWEEN TWO WORLDS
orchidee said:

Between two worlds - Earth and ..... Mars? you waited for a bus. lol.

July 15th, 2026 10:11

BETWEEN TWO WORLDS
arqios said:

Solemn and intimate. πŸ™πŸ•ŠοΈ

July 15th, 2026 06:29

SUNSET
NafisaSB said:

Beautifully described

July 15th, 2026 06:00

BETWEEN TWO WORLDS
sorenbarrett said:

There is such a note of sadness and melancholy in this write Norman it sings softly in metaphor that touches the heart and calls faintly from a distant place one has been before but can not quite recall. Lovely, a bit fragile and a fave

July 15th, 2026 05:47

THIRTEEN STEPS
orchidee said:

Good write N. There\'s a guy in our area nicknamed Elvis - or what Elvis would sort of look like now, in his early 70\'s.
Ahh, 13 steps to the bus stop for that bus that never comes. lol.

July 14th, 2026 10:58

THIRTEEN STEPS
isa kemmy said:

oh u got a talent right there its so wonderful

July 14th, 2026 06:50

THIRTEEN STEPS
arqios said:

The last ascent. An excellent atmosphereπŸ•ŠοΈπŸ™

July 14th, 2026 04:38

THIRTEEN STEPS
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful tribute to a great performer and artist. Nicely done

July 14th, 2026 03:33

EYES TO SLEEP
orchidee said:

Good write N. I thought this would be about you falling asleep at that bus stop. heehee.

July 13th, 2026 08:50

EYES TO SLEEP
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Norman, this really brought a sense of peace over me, my friend. It feels like a gentle invitation to lay down every burden for a while and simply rest. There\'s a quiet beauty here that never has to force itself. Wonderful write. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

July 13th, 2026 08:44

EYES TO SLEEP
arqios said:

To get good rest is a blessingπŸ•ŠοΈπŸ™πŸ»

July 13th, 2026 05:35

EYES TO SLEEP
sorenbarrett said:

Such nice flow and meter in this poem give it a sleepy feel almost hypnotic. Nicely done my friend

July 13th, 2026 04:22

THE FADED BEAUTY ( TO M )
Goldfinch60 said:

Many are like this Norman and get worse with age but I also believe the reverse that there are good people out there who get kinder as they grow older.

Andy

July 13th, 2026 01:15

THE FADED BEAUTY ( TO M )
orchidee said:

Good write N. Was it also someone named M who lost their natural beauty.... we know it... waiting for a bus so long?! lol.

July 12th, 2026 11:20

A POET DIED
Kevin Hulme said:

Enjoyable Read. \'Your Passing came far too soon\'. Could be Keats. Nice one.

July 12th, 2026 10:56

THE FADED BEAUTY ( TO M )
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work. You paint this scene well.

July 12th, 2026 09:48

TO A MOMENT
RSM0812 said:

A dreamy write. Hidden in self consciousness. Dreams teach us things about the future. Well written.

July 12th, 2026 09:32

THE FADED BEAUTY ( TO M )
sorenbarrett said:

Too much focus on beauty is vanity and such is the present state of this world.

July 12th, 2026 08:26

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