Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)
A TOAST TO BARBARA
arqios said:
A full lived set of days bring the closing ones much memory, reminiscences and fondness. 🕊️🙏🏻
July 26th, 2025 05:44
arqios said:
A full lived set of days bring the closing ones much memory, reminiscences and fondness. 🕊️🙏🏻
July 26th, 2025 05:44
A TOAST TO BARBARA
sorenbarrett said:
Love and its course in old age, separation by death but not memories. Nicely crafted
July 26th, 2025 05:30
sorenbarrett said:
Love and its course in old age, separation by death but not memories. Nicely crafted
July 26th, 2025 05:30
FLYING HIGH
arqios said:
reminds me of my grandfather, whom I still haven\'t been able to write a proper tributary poem. Very moving.
July 25th, 2025 06:50
arqios said:
reminds me of my grandfather, whom I still haven\'t been able to write a proper tributary poem. Very moving.
July 25th, 2025 06:50
FLYING HIGH
Poetic Licence said:
A very touching write of a man who gave much to so many, passing away alone, nicely done
July 25th, 2025 05:02
Poetic Licence said:
A very touching write of a man who gave much to so many, passing away alone, nicely done
July 25th, 2025 05:02
FLYING HIGH
sorenbarrett said:
Had to give this one a fave. My father a navigator for B-17s during WWII and many a tale he had of battle in the air and he too died in bed old but not forgotten. A lovely write
July 25th, 2025 04:39
sorenbarrett said:
Had to give this one a fave. My father a navigator for B-17s during WWII and many a tale he had of battle in the air and he too died in bed old but not forgotten. A lovely write
July 25th, 2025 04:39
REFLECTION
Keeter C said:
I have gone to sleep listening to crashing waves. It’s a pleasant thing.
July 24th, 2025 20:43
Keeter C said:
I have gone to sleep listening to crashing waves. It’s a pleasant thing.
July 24th, 2025 20:43
A LONE COAT ON A HOOK
ElizabethMoroz said:
I love how you use minimalism to convey such depth of meaning. It’s very effective and potent in your technique. Elizabeth
July 24th, 2025 05:55
ElizabethMoroz said:
I love how you use minimalism to convey such depth of meaning. It’s very effective and potent in your technique. Elizabeth
July 24th, 2025 05:55
ONCE YOUNG MEN WHO SMILED
ElizabethMoroz said:
Such a beautifully written lament. Elizabeth
July 24th, 2025 05:37
ElizabethMoroz said:
Such a beautifully written lament. Elizabeth
July 24th, 2025 05:37
REFLECTION
sorenbarrett said:
This poem casts a spell. It is haunting and its metaphor lingers like the sun setting on the horizon. Very nicely done it settles in the soul like oncoming sleep. Dogs barking in rhyme (genius) I\'ll bet the wave crash in good meter. A fave
July 24th, 2025 04:15
sorenbarrett said:
This poem casts a spell. It is haunting and its metaphor lingers like the sun setting on the horizon. Very nicely done it settles in the soul like oncoming sleep. Dogs barking in rhyme (genius) I\'ll bet the wave crash in good meter. A fave
July 24th, 2025 04:15
WHEN IS A WAR CRIME NOT A WAR CRIME ?
Doggerel Dave said:
A well written and constructed work.
However, questions remain:
What is a war crime?
Is not all war a crime?
Images of dead, dying children heartbreaking, but should those children have been born in the first place?
Your heart, I think is the right place.....
July 23rd, 2025 18:31
Doggerel Dave said:
A well written and constructed work.
However, questions remain:
What is a war crime?
Is not all war a crime?
Images of dead, dying children heartbreaking, but should those children have been born in the first place?
Your heart, I think is the right place.....
July 23rd, 2025 18:31
WHEN IS A WAR CRIME NOT A WAR CRIME ?
Neilton said:
You described this unfortunately harsh reality in the most right way ! That takes talent.amazing work!!!
July 23rd, 2025 15:50
Neilton said:
You described this unfortunately harsh reality in the most right way ! That takes talent.amazing work!!!
July 23rd, 2025 15:50
WHEN IS A WAR CRIME NOT A WAR CRIME ?
Priya Tomar said:
Very well.
It has heart touching tone.
Your way of questioning... very nice
July 23rd, 2025 10:29
Priya Tomar said:
Very well.
It has heart touching tone.
Your way of questioning... very nice
July 23rd, 2025 10:29
WHEN IS A WAR CRIME NOT A WAR CRIME ?
Demar Desu said:
war crimes exist… this poem is the justice
July 23rd, 2025 05:10
Demar Desu said:
war crimes exist… this poem is the justice
July 23rd, 2025 05:10
WHEN IS A WAR CRIME NOT A WAR CRIME ?
sorenbarrett said:
Amazing I was working on a poem of the same topic that I will post tomorrow. Well written for reflection and the question is answered in my mind as war itself is a crime. It becomes a redundancy to say both. A good write.
July 23rd, 2025 03:49
sorenbarrett said:
Amazing I was working on a poem of the same topic that I will post tomorrow. Well written for reflection and the question is answered in my mind as war itself is a crime. It becomes a redundancy to say both. A good write.
July 23rd, 2025 03:49
ETERNAL MIDNIGHT
sorenbarrett said:
The witching hour, zero hour, dead of night a haunting poem of darkness and time of change. Lovely
July 22nd, 2025 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
The witching hour, zero hour, dead of night a haunting poem of darkness and time of change. Lovely
July 22nd, 2025 04:19
DADDYS GIRL
Cirawrites01 said:
The end broke me away but it was a nice poem and such bond to cherish coz usually most daughters and fathers dont get it some are messy if you get what I mean.
July 21st, 2025 23:40
Cirawrites01 said:
The end broke me away but it was a nice poem and such bond to cherish coz usually most daughters and fathers dont get it some are messy if you get what I mean.
July 21st, 2025 23:40
DADDYS GIRL
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem of paternal tie to a daughter. It is soft and tender and touching.
July 21st, 2025 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem of paternal tie to a daughter. It is soft and tender and touching.
July 21st, 2025 04:07
UNSEEN TEARS
Tony Grannell said:
What a sad farewell lingering in the pain of memories, as if pining for a lost loved one. Beautifully written, not a word out of place - perfect.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
July 20th, 2025 13:24
Tony Grannell said:
What a sad farewell lingering in the pain of memories, as if pining for a lost loved one. Beautifully written, not a word out of place - perfect.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
July 20th, 2025 13:24
THE VOTE
Keeter C said:
Also if you are 16 you can vote! Oh England my country’s older brother, I stare across the ocean vast and wonder how long.
July 20th, 2025 08:36
Keeter C said:
Also if you are 16 you can vote! Oh England my country’s older brother, I stare across the ocean vast and wonder how long.
July 20th, 2025 08:36
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