Comments received on poems by nephilim56
SANCTUARY
Teddy.15 said:
❤️ all I can see is someone in a hospital ward, a very sad sight yet the patter of someone about to visit creeps in. ❤️
October 17th, 2023 11:46
Teddy.15 said:
❤️ all I can see is someone in a hospital ward, a very sad sight yet the patter of someone about to visit creeps in. ❤️
October 17th, 2023 11:46
THE ROSE WINDOW
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful. I love the imagery and use of language.
October 17th, 2023 05:12
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful. I love the imagery and use of language.
October 17th, 2023 05:12
HUNGRY BABIES
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
Hungry babies are uncontrollable, aggressive and literally it’s so difficult to handle them in public places
October 15th, 2023 11:39
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
Hungry babies are uncontrollable, aggressive and literally it’s so difficult to handle them in public places
October 15th, 2023 11:39
HARD LIFE
Bobby O said:
So many had that courage and it’s great that you salute and recognize. Props my friend
October 11th, 2023 12:26
Bobby O said:
So many had that courage and it’s great that you salute and recognize. Props my friend
October 11th, 2023 12:26
STRANGE TOWN
Parisab said:
Your poem pictured a town so cold and detached from the misery and isolation of the person sleeping on the bench park! Yet they keep the fire in their poet heart! Great story telling…
October 8th, 2023 11:46
Parisab said:
Your poem pictured a town so cold and detached from the misery and isolation of the person sleeping on the bench park! Yet they keep the fire in their poet heart! Great story telling…
October 8th, 2023 11:46
ROBERTS HERO
janiselizabeth said:
This made me want to cry. As a parent, sometimes you cannot imagine having to do some of the hardest things that you think a heart couldn\'t possibly handle. It\'s the ultimate show of love even when your children don\'t necessarily see it that way.
October 3rd, 2023 04:46
janiselizabeth said:
This made me want to cry. As a parent, sometimes you cannot imagine having to do some of the hardest things that you think a heart couldn\'t possibly handle. It\'s the ultimate show of love even when your children don\'t necessarily see it that way.
October 3rd, 2023 04:46
BUSKER
L. B. Mek said:
I recognise your Busker
he visits in my mirror..
such is life.
a wonderfully tender tone to your wording
thanks for sharing, dear poet
October 2nd, 2023 06:37
L. B. Mek said:
I recognise your Busker
he visits in my mirror..
such is life.
a wonderfully tender tone to your wording
thanks for sharing, dear poet
October 2nd, 2023 06:37
BUSKER
2781 said:
Could have been the homeless guy with the softest smile.
All salt of the earth.
October 2nd, 2023 06:27
2781 said:
Could have been the homeless guy with the softest smile.
All salt of the earth.
October 2nd, 2023 06:27
BUSKER
Pop64 said:
An enjoyable, respectful dedication to this busker. Nicely penned!
October 2nd, 2023 05:28
Pop64 said:
An enjoyable, respectful dedication to this busker. Nicely penned!
October 2nd, 2023 05:28
BUSKER
Bobby O said:
The Personality injected in this piece makes it feel alive and I almost can hear the busker.
October 2nd, 2023 03:57
Bobby O said:
The Personality injected in this piece makes it feel alive and I almost can hear the busker.
October 2nd, 2023 03:57
BUSKER
Teddy.15 said:
You just brought him so much dignity. The busker loved this beautiful.
October 2nd, 2023 03:53
Teddy.15 said:
You just brought him so much dignity. The busker loved this beautiful.
October 2nd, 2023 03:53
THE FALLEN
Teddy.15 said:
What a beautiful sight, Angels are one of my favourite themes. You certainly have a magic for rhyme ❤️
October 1st, 2023 04:52
Teddy.15 said:
What a beautiful sight, Angels are one of my favourite themes. You certainly have a magic for rhyme ❤️
October 1st, 2023 04:52
SOON MY GRANDCHILDREN MOVE AWAY
Christina8 said:
i agree with Teddy on this....but I\'m glad you went with a lighter, more positive poem, where a lot of people might go towards the negative. Awesome!
September 30th, 2023 10:48
Christina8 said:
i agree with Teddy on this....but I\'m glad you went with a lighter, more positive poem, where a lot of people might go towards the negative. Awesome!
September 30th, 2023 10:48
SOON MY GRANDCHILDREN MOVE AWAY
Teddy.15 said:
May every grandchild in the world have a letter like this. ❤️
September 30th, 2023 05:13
Teddy.15 said:
May every grandchild in the world have a letter like this. ❤️
September 30th, 2023 05:13
SOON MY GRANDCHILDREN MOVE AWAY
Weep little lion girl said:
I am very close with my siblings as I helped raise them closely and even refer to them as my own children. They recently moved far away so this poem resonated with me a lot.
Also, it is stunningly written, you are very talented, and I love your style! :)
September 30th, 2023 04:51
Weep little lion girl said:
I am very close with my siblings as I helped raise them closely and even refer to them as my own children. They recently moved far away so this poem resonated with me a lot.
Also, it is stunningly written, you are very talented, and I love your style! :)
September 30th, 2023 04:51
HALL OF FAME
L. B. Mek said:
\'Keeping still
Her treasured note
In a creased and dirty
Envelope.
To which he swears
A silent oath.\'
This is beautiful, a joy to read
love wishes inked relatable and sincere
Thank you dear poet
September 29th, 2023 06:41
L. B. Mek said:
\'Keeping still
Her treasured note
In a creased and dirty
Envelope.
To which he swears
A silent oath.\'
This is beautiful, a joy to read
love wishes inked relatable and sincere
Thank you dear poet
September 29th, 2023 06:41
HALL OF FAME
Teddy.15 said:
Sounds like an affair to remember of some kind. ❤️
September 29th, 2023 03:29
Teddy.15 said:
Sounds like an affair to remember of some kind. ❤️
September 29th, 2023 03:29
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