Comments received on poems by nephilim56
A COLD MARCH DAY
Cassie58 said:
The painful reality of a partnership ending in death. A funeral scene that many of us one day may have to witness. I felt the chill. Nicely penned stanzas. Visual.
March 8th, 2024 22:22
Cassie58 said:
The painful reality of a partnership ending in death. A funeral scene that many of us one day may have to witness. I felt the chill. Nicely penned stanzas. Visual.
March 8th, 2024 22:22
THEATRE
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ve worked in theatre (London, West End). You\'ve cracked it perfectly.
March 1st, 2024 04:23
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ve worked in theatre (London, West End). You\'ve cracked it perfectly.
March 1st, 2024 04:23
SOLDIER
Doggerel Dave said:
The guilt, I believe should be shared - although in some instances, for some individuals economic disadvantage initially kicked them into the armed services.
Question well posed.
February 23rd, 2024 20:29
Doggerel Dave said:
The guilt, I believe should be shared - although in some instances, for some individuals economic disadvantage initially kicked them into the armed services.
Question well posed.
February 23rd, 2024 20:29
KNOWING AND WAITING
Doggerel Dave said:
Deeply felt I feel, but deeply relevant to us all. A universal experience for most, I believe.
Spare but complete.
February 7th, 2024 07:29
Doggerel Dave said:
Deeply felt I feel, but deeply relevant to us all. A universal experience for most, I believe.
Spare but complete.
February 7th, 2024 07:29
IMMORTAL ROSE
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Immortal rose” by nephilim56
The rose is said to be a symbol of love. This rose here is immortal; it never dies. Sometimes people keep a dried rose petal between two pages in a book. This heart metaphorically has pages. A rose is kept between the pages of the heart. The heart is a broken one.
A suspended sky probably signifies that life has stopped in time. Tear-filled eye denotes paid and suffering. “Frozen in time” : life moves on, but this being himself cannot do so. He remains frozen in his memories. The years go by, but he is stuck in past memories. Soman Ragavan. 11 January, 2024.
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January 11th, 2024 09:00
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Immortal rose” by nephilim56
The rose is said to be a symbol of love. This rose here is immortal; it never dies. Sometimes people keep a dried rose petal between two pages in a book. This heart metaphorically has pages. A rose is kept between the pages of the heart. The heart is a broken one.
A suspended sky probably signifies that life has stopped in time. Tear-filled eye denotes paid and suffering. “Frozen in time” : life moves on, but this being himself cannot do so. He remains frozen in his memories. The years go by, but he is stuck in past memories. Soman Ragavan. 11 January, 2024.
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January 11th, 2024 09:00
CRUEL BREEZE
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A poignant muse expressed in awesome poetics wow! Admiring the word choice as well. Kudos for the poem!
Plz plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
January 8th, 2024 03:10
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A poignant muse expressed in awesome poetics wow! Admiring the word choice as well. Kudos for the poem!
Plz plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
January 8th, 2024 03:10
UK TODAY
Doggerel Dave said:
Thought you described Australia for a moment...
Well said.
December 21st, 2023 17:19
Doggerel Dave said:
Thought you described Australia for a moment...
Well said.
December 21st, 2023 17:19
UK TODAY
Cassie58 said:
Sadly this has now become all too common and is nothing short of a National scandal. Working people should be able to afford their rent. Our taxes aren’t being used wisely. A shortage of homes in a vastly over populated country. That causes stuff like this to happen. Tragic, at Christmas time in particular. Your poem touches the heart of anyone who has a heart.
December 21st, 2023 05:20
Cassie58 said:
Sadly this has now become all too common and is nothing short of a National scandal. Working people should be able to afford their rent. Our taxes aren’t being used wisely. A shortage of homes in a vastly over populated country. That causes stuff like this to happen. Tragic, at Christmas time in particular. Your poem touches the heart of anyone who has a heart.
December 21st, 2023 05:20
THE SEAMANS MISSION
Cassie58 said:
Filled with pathos. Reminds me of when my brother!s local was shut down. Grown men cried. It was their social club for years. I understand this poem entirely. The last two lines are brilliant.
December 20th, 2023 07:26
Cassie58 said:
Filled with pathos. Reminds me of when my brother!s local was shut down. Grown men cried. It was their social club for years. I understand this poem entirely. The last two lines are brilliant.
December 20th, 2023 07:26
THE OLD TREE
Parisab said:
A shading tree
Where once we loved
In thought I travel
Mind ungloved.
Beautifully crafted: the tone of this poem is stoic and heavy hearted like “The Old Tree” I hope that you will visit my poems about nature reflecting human emotions…
December 10th, 2023 11:56
Parisab said:
A shading tree
Where once we loved
In thought I travel
Mind ungloved.
Beautifully crafted: the tone of this poem is stoic and heavy hearted like “The Old Tree” I hope that you will visit my poems about nature reflecting human emotions…
December 10th, 2023 11:56
POLITICS
Bragee said:
I’ve always said that politicians who declare war should have to lead the war
December 8th, 2023 10:44
Bragee said:
I’ve always said that politicians who declare war should have to lead the war
December 8th, 2023 10:44
POLITICS
Doggerel Dave said:
It\'s War, and innocent people die or are maimed in war.
December 8th, 2023 07:29
Doggerel Dave said:
It\'s War, and innocent people die or are maimed in war.
December 8th, 2023 07:29
THE SEA COALERS CONVOY
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ll judge you just as harshly as I feel necessary:
I enjoyed the atmosphere of derring-do and community solidarity .
Can you reference the real happening for me, please.
December 4th, 2023 00:49
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ll judge you just as harshly as I feel necessary:
I enjoyed the atmosphere of derring-do and community solidarity .
Can you reference the real happening for me, please.
December 4th, 2023 00:49
IN THE BELFRY
Doggerel Dave said:
Had a funny feeling its got something to do with bats..........😂
Fun write though...
November 30th, 2023 07:04
Doggerel Dave said:
Had a funny feeling its got something to do with bats..........😂
Fun write though...
November 30th, 2023 07:04
DAD
Lil said:
I can kinda relate , but I lost both of my parents for a different reason they couldn\'t take care of me so I was taken.
November 30th, 2023 06:40
Lil said:
I can kinda relate , but I lost both of my parents for a different reason they couldn\'t take care of me so I was taken.
November 30th, 2023 06:40
DAD
Cassie58 said:
A touching tribute to your Father. The passing of years may soften the grief but the love and the missing remain. Nicely conveyed emotion.
November 29th, 2023 15:23
Cassie58 said:
A touching tribute to your Father. The passing of years may soften the grief but the love and the missing remain. Nicely conveyed emotion.
November 29th, 2023 15:23
DAD
Accidental Poet said:
Very relatable, as my own Dad past nearly 2 years ago.
November 29th, 2023 06:42
Accidental Poet said:
Very relatable, as my own Dad past nearly 2 years ago.
November 29th, 2023 06:42
DEBUT READING
Tom Dylan said:
I really enjoyed this. I\'ve never read my poems to an audience but you really capture how daunting and exciting it must me.
November 24th, 2023 05:42
Tom Dylan said:
I really enjoyed this. I\'ve never read my poems to an audience but you really capture how daunting and exciting it must me.
November 24th, 2023 05:42
THE FORGOTTEN PEOPLE
Thomas W Case said:
A powerful and poignant snapshot. Great job.
November 1st, 2023 07:16
Thomas W Case said:
A powerful and poignant snapshot. Great job.
November 1st, 2023 07:16
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