Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)
A LONE COAT ON A HOOK
ElizabethMoroz said:
I love how you use minimalism to convey such depth of meaning. It’s very effective and potent in your technique. Elizabeth
July 24th, 2025 05:55
ElizabethMoroz said:
I love how you use minimalism to convey such depth of meaning. It’s very effective and potent in your technique. Elizabeth
July 24th, 2025 05:55
ONCE YOUNG MEN WHO SMILED
ElizabethMoroz said:
Such a beautifully written lament. Elizabeth
July 24th, 2025 05:37
ElizabethMoroz said:
Such a beautifully written lament. Elizabeth
July 24th, 2025 05:37
REFLECTION
sorenbarrett said:
This poem casts a spell. It is haunting and its metaphor lingers like the sun setting on the horizon. Very nicely done it settles in the soul like oncoming sleep. Dogs barking in rhyme (genius) I\'ll bet the wave crash in good meter. A fave
July 24th, 2025 04:15
sorenbarrett said:
This poem casts a spell. It is haunting and its metaphor lingers like the sun setting on the horizon. Very nicely done it settles in the soul like oncoming sleep. Dogs barking in rhyme (genius) I\'ll bet the wave crash in good meter. A fave
July 24th, 2025 04:15
WHEN IS A WAR CRIME NOT A WAR CRIME ?
Doggerel Dave said:
A well written and constructed work.
However, questions remain:
What is a war crime?
Is not all war a crime?
Images of dead, dying children heartbreaking, but should those children have been born in the first place?
Your heart, I think is the right place.....
July 23rd, 2025 18:31
Doggerel Dave said:
A well written and constructed work.
However, questions remain:
What is a war crime?
Is not all war a crime?
Images of dead, dying children heartbreaking, but should those children have been born in the first place?
Your heart, I think is the right place.....
July 23rd, 2025 18:31
WHEN IS A WAR CRIME NOT A WAR CRIME ?
Neilton said:
You described this unfortunately harsh reality in the most right way ! That takes talent.amazing work!!!
July 23rd, 2025 15:50
Neilton said:
You described this unfortunately harsh reality in the most right way ! That takes talent.amazing work!!!
July 23rd, 2025 15:50
WHEN IS A WAR CRIME NOT A WAR CRIME ?
Priya Tomar said:
Very well.
It has heart touching tone.
Your way of questioning... very nice
July 23rd, 2025 10:29
Priya Tomar said:
Very well.
It has heart touching tone.
Your way of questioning... very nice
July 23rd, 2025 10:29
WHEN IS A WAR CRIME NOT A WAR CRIME ?
Demar Desu said:
war crimes exist… this poem is the justice
July 23rd, 2025 05:10
Demar Desu said:
war crimes exist… this poem is the justice
July 23rd, 2025 05:10
WHEN IS A WAR CRIME NOT A WAR CRIME ?
sorenbarrett said:
Amazing I was working on a poem of the same topic that I will post tomorrow. Well written for reflection and the question is answered in my mind as war itself is a crime. It becomes a redundancy to say both. A good write.
July 23rd, 2025 03:49
sorenbarrett said:
Amazing I was working on a poem of the same topic that I will post tomorrow. Well written for reflection and the question is answered in my mind as war itself is a crime. It becomes a redundancy to say both. A good write.
July 23rd, 2025 03:49
ETERNAL MIDNIGHT
sorenbarrett said:
The witching hour, zero hour, dead of night a haunting poem of darkness and time of change. Lovely
July 22nd, 2025 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
The witching hour, zero hour, dead of night a haunting poem of darkness and time of change. Lovely
July 22nd, 2025 04:19
DADDYS GIRL
Cirawrites01 said:
The end broke me away but it was a nice poem and such bond to cherish coz usually most daughters and fathers dont get it some are messy if you get what I mean.
July 21st, 2025 23:40
Cirawrites01 said:
The end broke me away but it was a nice poem and such bond to cherish coz usually most daughters and fathers dont get it some are messy if you get what I mean.
July 21st, 2025 23:40
DADDYS GIRL
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem of paternal tie to a daughter. It is soft and tender and touching.
July 21st, 2025 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem of paternal tie to a daughter. It is soft and tender and touching.
July 21st, 2025 04:07
UNSEEN TEARS
Tony Grannell said:
What a sad farewell lingering in the pain of memories, as if pining for a lost loved one. Beautifully written, not a word out of place - perfect.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
July 20th, 2025 13:24
Tony Grannell said:
What a sad farewell lingering in the pain of memories, as if pining for a lost loved one. Beautifully written, not a word out of place - perfect.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
July 20th, 2025 13:24
THE VOTE
Keeter C said:
Also if you are 16 you can vote! Oh England my country’s older brother, I stare across the ocean vast and wonder how long.
July 20th, 2025 08:36
Keeter C said:
Also if you are 16 you can vote! Oh England my country’s older brother, I stare across the ocean vast and wonder how long.
July 20th, 2025 08:36
UNSEEN TEARS
sorenbarrett said:
Sad, tragic, loss, pain, regret all these come to mind with this poem. A most well written piece.
July 20th, 2025 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
Sad, tragic, loss, pain, regret all these come to mind with this poem. A most well written piece.
July 20th, 2025 04:17
OUT OF DATE
Keeter C said:
Agape love is the way of give this world is the way of get.
July 19th, 2025 09:44
Keeter C said:
Agape love is the way of give this world is the way of get.
July 19th, 2025 09:44
FOUNTAIN
sorenbarrett said:
Is anything real indeed. Great metaphor in this piece that speaks to the reader about what one can believe. Love itself often a betrayer. Very nicely written a fave
July 19th, 2025 05:35
sorenbarrett said:
Is anything real indeed. Great metaphor in this piece that speaks to the reader about what one can believe. Love itself often a betrayer. Very nicely written a fave
July 19th, 2025 05:35
A MOTHERS GRIEF
ElizabethMoroz said:
Heart wrenching subject matter. Absolutely beautiful and desperately emotional exploration of very sensitive subject matter. Your poetry is profound and beautiful.
July 19th, 2025 04:42
ElizabethMoroz said:
Heart wrenching subject matter. Absolutely beautiful and desperately emotional exploration of very sensitive subject matter. Your poetry is profound and beautiful.
July 19th, 2025 04:42
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