Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)
OUT OF SIGHT
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Meanwhile - you out of sight, out of mind? Erm, who are ya? You\'re out of my sight, so I\'ve forgotten ya! lol. You forgotten me too? heehee.
December 23rd, 2025 08:37
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Meanwhile - you out of sight, out of mind? Erm, who are ya? You\'re out of my sight, so I\'ve forgotten ya! lol. You forgotten me too? heehee.
December 23rd, 2025 08:37
OUT OF SIGHT
sorenbarrett said:
A strong image is created in this poem leaving a sense of coldness. Well done
December 23rd, 2025 03:48
sorenbarrett said:
A strong image is created in this poem leaving a sense of coldness. Well done
December 23rd, 2025 03:48
SOLITUDE CALLS
sorenbarrett said:
Images of loneliness cast in this poem that reads smoothly. Nicely done
December 22nd, 2025 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
Images of loneliness cast in this poem that reads smoothly. Nicely done
December 22nd, 2025 04:03
THE ECHOING MOON
NafisaSB said:
I have always found the moonlight to be calming and serene- am impressed with your version of it and hope the sun keeps shining bright on you
December 21st, 2025 22:48
NafisaSB said:
I have always found the moonlight to be calming and serene- am impressed with your version of it and hope the sun keeps shining bright on you
December 21st, 2025 22:48
A VIOLENT NIGHT
NafisaSB said:
Seems to be a night that made a lasting impression and impact on you. Hope you don’t have many such more
December 21st, 2025 22:44
NafisaSB said:
Seems to be a night that made a lasting impression and impact on you. Hope you don’t have many such more
December 21st, 2025 22:44
THE SAME GRAVE LAID
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply poignant and applicable to all ages it reflects a dark truth that man has not evolved too far from ape and that the equality of death is the justice that nature meets out. A fave
December 21st, 2025 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply poignant and applicable to all ages it reflects a dark truth that man has not evolved too far from ape and that the equality of death is the justice that nature meets out. A fave
December 21st, 2025 04:35
EIGHT LINES IN
sorenbarrett said:
There is despair and regret in this piece. It calls out to prepare for worse. A haunting poem
December 20th, 2025 05:07
sorenbarrett said:
There is despair and regret in this piece. It calls out to prepare for worse. A haunting poem
December 20th, 2025 05:07
WITHOUT CARE
orchidee said:
You not caring? You couldn\'t care less? No use asking us, you and I, to be sympathetic?! lol.
December 19th, 2025 11:53
orchidee said:
You not caring? You couldn\'t care less? No use asking us, you and I, to be sympathetic?! lol.
December 19th, 2025 11:53
WITHOUT CARE
sorenbarrett said:
This poem sets the scene well with painted images of solitude and almost abandonment that fit the title and last line so well
December 19th, 2025 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
This poem sets the scene well with painted images of solitude and almost abandonment that fit the title and last line so well
December 19th, 2025 04:43
WITHOUT CARE
orchidee said:
Good write N. I don\'t care then!! Do you? lol.
December 19th, 2025 04:04
orchidee said:
Good write N. I don\'t care then!! Do you? lol.
December 19th, 2025 04:04
GOTHIC STAINED
sorenbarrett said:
Ignoring the light is sometimes chosen as a way of continuing. A deep poem of a most reflective nature and sometimes reflection can be too painful to consider.
December 18th, 2025 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
Ignoring the light is sometimes chosen as a way of continuing. A deep poem of a most reflective nature and sometimes reflection can be too painful to consider.
December 18th, 2025 04:12
MOMENT
sorenbarrett said:
Anthropomorphizing time in this poem gives it a both seductive and terrifying quality. Nicely done in short ticking words that fall like seconds on a clock
December 17th, 2025 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
Anthropomorphizing time in this poem gives it a both seductive and terrifying quality. Nicely done in short ticking words that fall like seconds on a clock
December 17th, 2025 04:02
GUTTERS CURSED
sorenbarrett said:
This leaves the feel of ruin and destruction, devastation. Metaphorically it spells disaster on an emotional level. Nicely done
December 16th, 2025 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
This leaves the feel of ruin and destruction, devastation. Metaphorically it spells disaster on an emotional level. Nicely done
December 16th, 2025 03:55
A VIOLENT NIGHT
arqios said:
As am I and many, many more, I would imagine. Beautiful expression here 🙏🏻🕊
December 15th, 2025 19:43
arqios said:
As am I and many, many more, I would imagine. Beautiful expression here 🙏🏻🕊
December 15th, 2025 19:43
A VIOLENT NIGHT
Friendship said:
Well written, this poem serves to explore the darker aspects of human experience, reflecting on how external environments can influence internal states, as well as the fragility of human existence in the face of violence and chaos. The poet\'s reflection may be a form of catharsis or an attempt to make sense of a turbulent experience.
December 15th, 2025 16:58
Friendship said:
Well written, this poem serves to explore the darker aspects of human experience, reflecting on how external environments can influence internal states, as well as the fragility of human existence in the face of violence and chaos. The poet\'s reflection may be a form of catharsis or an attempt to make sense of a turbulent experience.
December 15th, 2025 16:58
A VIOLENT NIGHT
orchidee said:
Is it morning yet, or you still in that violent night?! heehee.
December 15th, 2025 15:55
orchidee said:
Is it morning yet, or you still in that violent night?! heehee.
December 15th, 2025 15:55
A VIOLENT NIGHT
sorenbarrett said:
Thoughts can be violent not in physical but mental and emotional manner. A long and lonely night can easily foster them. Well written
December 15th, 2025 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
Thoughts can be violent not in physical but mental and emotional manner. A long and lonely night can easily foster them. Well written
December 15th, 2025 03:58
A VIOLENT NIGHT
orchidee said:
If the theme was not so violent. I would say - a bad-hair night then? Instead of a bad-hair day!
December 15th, 2025 03:26
orchidee said:
If the theme was not so violent. I would say - a bad-hair night then? Instead of a bad-hair day!
December 15th, 2025 03:26
TREMBLING THOUGHTS
sorenbarrett said:
A most intriguing rhyme scheme in this poem pulls the reader through with a sense of wonder. Nicely done
December 14th, 2025 03:51
sorenbarrett said:
A most intriguing rhyme scheme in this poem pulls the reader through with a sense of wonder. Nicely done
December 14th, 2025 03:51
DAY WITHOUT WORDS
sorenbarrett said:
A tumultuous exit and sad departure is conveyed in this poem with no resistance from the second party. Well written I could hear that car door and the engine.
December 13th, 2025 04:39
sorenbarrett said:
A tumultuous exit and sad departure is conveyed in this poem with no resistance from the second party. Well written I could hear that car door and the engine.
December 13th, 2025 04:39
DAY WITHOUT WORDS
orchidee said:
Goo write N. Yes, I never said a word either. Had a day without words, went off in a huff, threw my toys out of my pram, etc! lol.
I would add hissy fit too, but it seems that is an outburst of anger, when words would be said.
December 13th, 2025 03:24
orchidee said:
Goo write N. Yes, I never said a word either. Had a day without words, went off in a huff, threw my toys out of my pram, etc! lol.
I would add hissy fit too, but it seems that is an outburst of anger, when words would be said.
December 13th, 2025 03:24
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