Comments received on poems by nephilim56
A MOTHERS GRIEF
arqios said:
That would be the way any normal person would feel. Very moving poem and superbly relatable.๐๏ธ๐๐ป
June 20th, 2025 05:46
arqios said:
That would be the way any normal person would feel. Very moving poem and superbly relatable.๐๏ธ๐๐ป
June 20th, 2025 05:46
A MOTHERS GRIEF
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem the question is posed as to the individual against the needs of many the actions of the innocent against the guilty. The issue of God vs. nothing. We all search for understanding and meaning and whether we ascribe it to God\'s will or Chaos and random actions of the universe it still give no answers. A poem that raises questions and doesn\'t answer them and a fave
June 20th, 2025 05:04
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem the question is posed as to the individual against the needs of many the actions of the innocent against the guilty. The issue of God vs. nothing. We all search for understanding and meaning and whether we ascribe it to God\'s will or Chaos and random actions of the universe it still give no answers. A poem that raises questions and doesn\'t answer them and a fave
June 20th, 2025 05:04
BALCONY
arqios said:
This is the world and age that we live in; a familiar strangeness, no less. ๐๐ป๐
June 18th, 2025 06:44
arqios said:
This is the world and age that we live in; a familiar strangeness, no less. ๐๐ป๐
June 18th, 2025 06:44
BALCONY
Poetic Licence said:
For some reason madman throughout history have had a infinity with balcony\'s, and throughout history they have their devoted followers, it always end badly and I am sure it will this time, enjoyed the read
June 18th, 2025 04:29
Poetic Licence said:
For some reason madman throughout history have had a infinity with balcony\'s, and throughout history they have their devoted followers, it always end badly and I am sure it will this time, enjoyed the read
June 18th, 2025 04:29
BALCONY
sorenbarrett said:
This could be taken to mean many different people, political, religious or otherwise but given the political climate I take it that way. Nicely stated with much implied.
June 18th, 2025 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
This could be taken to mean many different people, political, religious or otherwise but given the political climate I take it that way. Nicely stated with much implied.
June 18th, 2025 03:52
MOMENTS
RSM0812 said:
Great imagry, rhythm and rhyme. I really like how it developed to the very last line.
June 17th, 2025 15:30
RSM0812 said:
Great imagry, rhythm and rhyme. I really like how it developed to the very last line.
June 17th, 2025 15:30
THE KILLING OF MR BROWN
Damaso said:
Vibrant! It left me heartbroken. Thank you so much for sharing. Cheers.
June 17th, 2025 08:49
Damaso said:
Vibrant! It left me heartbroken. Thank you so much for sharing. Cheers.
June 17th, 2025 08:49
THE KILLING OF MR BROWN
Poetic Licence said:
A very relavent and poignant write, that is going to have so many implications in the future and sadly I fear it is just the beginning, nicely expressed and written
June 17th, 2025 05:17
Poetic Licence said:
A very relavent and poignant write, that is going to have so many implications in the future and sadly I fear it is just the beginning, nicely expressed and written
June 17th, 2025 05:17
THE KILLING OF MR BROWN
sorenbarrett said:
A poem to raise consciousness and ask questions about what happens when the cost of care becomes more than what can be supported. Ethics remolded in a world overpopulated with limited resources. This is just the tip of the iceberg. Well written it makes its point in most poetic form
June 17th, 2025 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
A poem to raise consciousness and ask questions about what happens when the cost of care becomes more than what can be supported. Ethics remolded in a world overpopulated with limited resources. This is just the tip of the iceberg. Well written it makes its point in most poetic form
June 17th, 2025 04:35
MOMENTS
sorenbarrett said:
Full of vivid images this poem takes the reader on a voyage through his world. Nicely done
June 16th, 2025 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
Full of vivid images this poem takes the reader on a voyage through his world. Nicely done
June 16th, 2025 04:25
THE WANDERER
Tony Grannell said:
Clothed in beautiful poetry as life passes by. I absolutely love this poem. Accolades galore.
Kind regards,
Tony.
June 15th, 2025 10:44
Tony Grannell said:
Clothed in beautiful poetry as life passes by. I absolutely love this poem. Accolades galore.
Kind regards,
Tony.
June 15th, 2025 10:44
THE WANDERER
sorenbarrett said:
I love the linking of nature and natural objects to emotion in this poem very nicely done
June 15th, 2025 04:58
sorenbarrett said:
I love the linking of nature and natural objects to emotion in this poem very nicely done
June 15th, 2025 04:58
THE WANDERER
arqios said:
Here is a deeply moving write, thank you for touching my thoughts and awareness this day. ๐๏ธ๐๐ป
June 15th, 2025 03:55
arqios said:
Here is a deeply moving write, thank you for touching my thoughts and awareness this day. ๐๏ธ๐๐ป
June 15th, 2025 03:55
EMBRACED
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words dance like starlight on waterโethereal and hauntingly beautiful. This poem lingers like a whispered dream in the moonโs embrace.
June 14th, 2025 13:11
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words dance like starlight on waterโethereal and hauntingly beautiful. This poem lingers like a whispered dream in the moonโs embrace.
June 14th, 2025 13:11
EMBRACED
sorenbarrett said:
Sensuous, romantic, nicely written this poem carries the reader through anthropomorphic transformation of nature to human form. Subtle yet clear it sends its message well.
June 14th, 2025 05:09
sorenbarrett said:
Sensuous, romantic, nicely written this poem carries the reader through anthropomorphic transformation of nature to human form. Subtle yet clear it sends its message well.
June 14th, 2025 05:09
EMBRACED
Hollow Enigma said:
this rings very very pretty. Would you tell me about it?
June 14th, 2025 02:59
Hollow Enigma said:
this rings very very pretty. Would you tell me about it?
June 14th, 2025 02:59
SILENT THOUGHTS
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely portrayed as a friend and a refuge this poem presents silence as most helpful. Most poetically written it calls out of the silence.
June 13th, 2025 04:50
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely portrayed as a friend and a refuge this poem presents silence as most helpful. Most poetically written it calls out of the silence.
June 13th, 2025 04:50
SILENT THOUGHTS
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Silence becomes alive in your verses, a sanctuary and a storm. Truly mesmerizing.
June 13th, 2025 03:09
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Silence becomes alive in your verses, a sanctuary and a storm. Truly mesmerizing.
June 13th, 2025 03:09
HER BROKEN HEART
sorenbarrett said:
Lost love and the sadness it brings is hard to hide. This is expressed in rhyme in this poem of sadness and loss. Nicely done
June 12th, 2025 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
Lost love and the sadness it brings is hard to hide. This is expressed in rhyme in this poem of sadness and loss. Nicely done
June 12th, 2025 04:20
IN DREAM
Damaso said:
Wow, what a beautiful post. I really liked it. Thanks for sharing. Cheers.
June 11th, 2025 07:34
Damaso said:
Wow, what a beautiful post. I really liked it. Thanks for sharing. Cheers.
June 11th, 2025 07:34
IN DREAM
sorenbarrett said:
A most compelling poem of beauty. Well worded and inked
June 11th, 2025 05:23
sorenbarrett said:
A most compelling poem of beauty. Well worded and inked
June 11th, 2025 05:23
STATUES
sorenbarrett said:
It is the power of this poem and the poignant relevance that gets the fave. It has always been that way recognition is bought not in deeds but in the currency of power. This is the same on all fields of battle even poetry
June 10th, 2025 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
It is the power of this poem and the poignant relevance that gets the fave. It has always been that way recognition is bought not in deeds but in the currency of power. This is the same on all fields of battle even poetry
June 10th, 2025 04:51
I WAITED FOR YOU
sorenbarrett said:
The vivid imagery in this poem sets the tone and scene but later in metaphor gives meaning as well. Very nicely done and a fave
June 9th, 2025 05:17
sorenbarrett said:
The vivid imagery in this poem sets the tone and scene but later in metaphor gives meaning as well. Very nicely done and a fave
June 9th, 2025 05:17
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