Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)
LAUGHTER FADES
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Yes, it\'s no laughing matter now, it\'s no joke now, waiting for that bus! lol.
June 9th, 2026 09:34
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Yes, it\'s no laughing matter now, it\'s no joke now, waiting for that bus! lol.
June 9th, 2026 09:34
THE LEGACY OF MANKIND
orchidee said:
Ohhh, so many questions in life - such as: will the bus ever arrive? what route number will it be? how long have we been waiting for it now?! etc. lol.
June 9th, 2026 02:37
orchidee said:
Ohhh, so many questions in life - such as: will the bus ever arrive? what route number will it be? how long have we been waiting for it now?! etc. lol.
June 9th, 2026 02:37
A POETS EYES
Samprikta Paul said:
I believe literature has always been an escape for us to keep breathing. Well written.
June 9th, 2026 01:18
Samprikta Paul said:
I believe literature has always been an escape for us to keep breathing. Well written.
June 9th, 2026 01:18
BIZZARE
NafisaSB said:
it is definitely a very moving sight, and no one who sees or reads, can fail to be moved by it...
June 9th, 2026 00:04
NafisaSB said:
it is definitely a very moving sight, and no one who sees or reads, can fail to be moved by it...
June 9th, 2026 00:04
THE LEGACY OF MANKIND
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, what struck me most is the image of eternity blinking an unforgiving eye. It creates the sense that humanity\'s actions are being viewed against a much larger backdrop, one that cannot be deceived by excuses or denial. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 8th, 2026 10:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, what struck me most is the image of eternity blinking an unforgiving eye. It creates the sense that humanity\'s actions are being viewed against a much larger backdrop, one that cannot be deceived by excuses or denial. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 8th, 2026 10:59
THE LEGACY OF MANKIND
sorenbarrett said:
This one snuck up on me and for the message and surprise that at the same time is so true a fave. Loved this one Norman very well done
June 8th, 2026 04:59
sorenbarrett said:
This one snuck up on me and for the message and surprise that at the same time is so true a fave. Loved this one Norman very well done
June 8th, 2026 04:59
THE LEGACY OF MANKIND
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
A legacy from hundreds of years ago, but now gone for ever? A bus appeared, that is! lol.
June 8th, 2026 02:18
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
A legacy from hundreds of years ago, but now gone for ever? A bus appeared, that is! lol.
June 8th, 2026 02:18
ONE TEAR
Samprikta Paul said:
Well written, let the tears pour until the heart heals with time.
June 8th, 2026 01:49
Samprikta Paul said:
Well written, let the tears pour until the heart heals with time.
June 8th, 2026 01:49
A BROKEN SOUL
Samprikta Paul said:
I love how simple the words you use are and how beautifully they still contain a rhythm.
June 8th, 2026 00:00
Samprikta Paul said:
I love how simple the words you use are and how beautifully they still contain a rhythm.
June 8th, 2026 00:00
MEMORY
Samprikta Paul said:
It\'s beautiful how you expressed an old man stuck in his memory, and with dampening eyes, he seems to move on slowly - It\'s time.
June 7th, 2026 23:55
Samprikta Paul said:
It\'s beautiful how you expressed an old man stuck in his memory, and with dampening eyes, he seems to move on slowly - It\'s time.
June 7th, 2026 23:55
THE LAST PERFORMANCE
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this really moved me. What stays with me is the balance between loss and legacy. The poem mourns a passing, yet it also honors the imagination, passion, and words left behind. The image of a poet reaching beyond sight while leaving echoes for others to find gives the piece a poignant and lasting beauty. Wonderful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 7th, 2026 09:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this really moved me. What stays with me is the balance between loss and legacy. The poem mourns a passing, yet it also honors the imagination, passion, and words left behind. The image of a poet reaching beyond sight while leaving echoes for others to find gives the piece a poignant and lasting beauty. Wonderful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 7th, 2026 09:03
THE LAST PERFORMANCE
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems to tell the tale of a writer, a poem written and with time forgotten buried in time and the loss grieved. Well done my friend
June 7th, 2026 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems to tell the tale of a writer, a poem written and with time forgotten buried in time and the loss grieved. Well done my friend
June 7th, 2026 04:48
THE LAST PERFORMANCE
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Have you given up? Is it your last \'performance\' of waiting for that bus?! lol.
June 7th, 2026 04:20
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Have you given up? Is it your last \'performance\' of waiting for that bus?! lol.
June 7th, 2026 04:20
OPEN SOULS
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Norman, this just should not be happening in our world there is enough for all but those who have more than they need will not let go of it.
Andy
June 7th, 2026 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Norman, this just should not be happening in our world there is enough for all but those who have more than they need will not let go of it.
Andy
June 7th, 2026 01:13
BIZZARE
RSM0812 said:
There is blood everywhere. Its unfortunate and disappointing. One day people will learn. Good read.
June 6th, 2026 15:15
RSM0812 said:
There is blood everywhere. Its unfortunate and disappointing. One day people will learn. Good read.
June 6th, 2026 15:15
OPEN SOULS
orchidee said:
Good write N. A lonely time too waiting at that bus stop. Did everyone else give up and walk or go back home?! lol.
June 6th, 2026 11:25
orchidee said:
Good write N. A lonely time too waiting at that bus stop. Did everyone else give up and walk or go back home?! lol.
June 6th, 2026 11:25
OPEN SOULS
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this hit me hard. There’s a stark humanity running through this piece...the fog may blur the world, but it seems to sharpen the realities you’re pointing toward. The contrast between comfort and hardship lands with real force. Powerful poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 6th, 2026 08:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this hit me hard. There’s a stark humanity running through this piece...the fog may blur the world, but it seems to sharpen the realities you’re pointing toward. The contrast between comfort and hardship lands with real force. Powerful poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 6th, 2026 08:28
OPEN SOULS
sorenbarrett said:
Norman this one feels indeed lonely and cold. You have set it well and placed it all in rhyme. Nicely done
June 6th, 2026 04:00
sorenbarrett said:
Norman this one feels indeed lonely and cold. You have set it well and placed it all in rhyme. Nicely done
June 6th, 2026 04:00
BIZZARE
arqios said:
Telecracy is an oligarch\'s best friend, it seems. Distancing the reputation and personhood from the dirty work at all costs. I guess that\'s how henchmen. lacjeys and sidekicks abound.
June 5th, 2026 07:10
arqios said:
Telecracy is an oligarch\'s best friend, it seems. Distancing the reputation and personhood from the dirty work at all costs. I guess that\'s how henchmen. lacjeys and sidekicks abound.
June 5th, 2026 07:10
BIZZARE
Teddy.15 said:
A wonderful piece of poetry that your title works perfectly with. Those politicians wouldn\'t be seen on the front line. 🌹
June 5th, 2026 03:43
Teddy.15 said:
A wonderful piece of poetry that your title works perfectly with. Those politicians wouldn\'t be seen on the front line. 🌹
June 5th, 2026 03:43
BIZZARE
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is haunting and poignant where the justification for violence against one\'s fellow man is politically justified. Nicely penned
June 5th, 2026 03:22
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is haunting and poignant where the justification for violence against one\'s fellow man is politically justified. Nicely penned
June 5th, 2026 03:22
MAGIC CAUGHT
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this brought back that feeling of encountering someone or something that changes the atmosphere around you without a word being spoken. The poem captures those quiet moments that somehow become unforgettable. Really enjoyed this one, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 4th, 2026 18:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this brought back that feeling of encountering someone or something that changes the atmosphere around you without a word being spoken. The poem captures those quiet moments that somehow become unforgettable. Really enjoyed this one, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 4th, 2026 18:08
STRANGER AT THE STATION
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, I’ve always found train imagery carries a special kind of melancholy…that sense of movement, departure, and things that cannot be revisited. This poem taps into that feeling wonderfully. It feels reflective without becoming heavy-handed. Really enjoyed this one, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 4th, 2026 15:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, I’ve always found train imagery carries a special kind of melancholy…that sense of movement, departure, and things that cannot be revisited. This poem taps into that feeling wonderfully. It feels reflective without becoming heavy-handed. Really enjoyed this one, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 4th, 2026 15:10
STRANGER AT THE STATION
Lorenz said:
Excellent study on railway existentialism !
June 4th, 2026 12:11
Lorenz said:
Excellent study on railway existentialism !
June 4th, 2026 12:11
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