Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)
A MYSTICAL BREEZE
orchidee said:
Good write N. Is it breezy at that bus stop? You still waiting?! loll.
May 4th, 2026 10:40
orchidee said:
Good write N. Is it breezy at that bus stop? You still waiting?! loll.
May 4th, 2026 10:40
A MYSTICAL BREEZE
sorenbarrett said:
All that is attractive remembered in this write of nostalgia and wistfulness. Nicely written
May 4th, 2026 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
All that is attractive remembered in this write of nostalgia and wistfulness. Nicely written
May 4th, 2026 04:05
DISTANT WHISPER
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful days that will be filled with love Norman.
Andy
May 4th, 2026 01:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful days that will be filled with love Norman.
Andy
May 4th, 2026 01:53
DISTANT WHISPER
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this carries a gentle, reflective weight… memory, distance, and something still lingering beneath it all. The way it moves feels natural, like drifting back without warning. It stays with you. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 3rd, 2026 16:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this carries a gentle, reflective weight… memory, distance, and something still lingering beneath it all. The way it moves feels natural, like drifting back without warning. It stays with you. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 3rd, 2026 16:11
DISTANT WHISPER
arqios said:
Distance and echo and trap all in one poem! Amazing compacting🕊️🙏🏻
May 3rd, 2026 07:09
arqios said:
Distance and echo and trap all in one poem! Amazing compacting🕊️🙏🏻
May 3rd, 2026 07:09
DISTANT WHISPER
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem delves into themes of reminiscence, loss, and the beauty of fleeting moments. It captures the essence of childhood innocence and the warmth of summer experiences, contrasting them with the inevitable passage of time.
May 3rd, 2026 05:50
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem delves into themes of reminiscence, loss, and the beauty of fleeting moments. It captures the essence of childhood innocence and the warmth of summer experiences, contrasting them with the inevitable passage of time.
May 3rd, 2026 05:50
DISTANT WHISPER
sorenbarrett said:
Nostalgic, warm memories and the passage of time. Well done
May 3rd, 2026 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
Nostalgic, warm memories and the passage of time. Well done
May 3rd, 2026 04:25
DISTANT WHISPER
orchidee said:
You spending those summer days at the bus stop?! lol.
May 3rd, 2026 02:13
orchidee said:
You spending those summer days at the bus stop?! lol.
May 3rd, 2026 02:13
THE LONESOME DREAM
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this is a powerful piece…what stands out is how restrained it is. The imagery does all the talking—the empty streets, the shuttered stores, the calloused hands counting pennies…you feel the weight for sure. That sense of something slipping away, little by little, really lands. Well written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 2nd, 2026 11:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this is a powerful piece…what stands out is how restrained it is. The imagery does all the talking—the empty streets, the shuttered stores, the calloused hands counting pennies…you feel the weight for sure. That sense of something slipping away, little by little, really lands. Well written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 2nd, 2026 11:04
THE LONESOME DREAM
orchidee said:
You day-dreaming at that bus stop? I\'m tuning in bit late. Had to get a bus - it turned up. They usually do in our area. lol.
May 2nd, 2026 08:24
orchidee said:
You day-dreaming at that bus stop? I\'m tuning in bit late. Had to get a bus - it turned up. They usually do in our area. lol.
May 2nd, 2026 08:24
THE LONESOME DREAM
arqios said:
Railroad weed stood out to me, like those dandelions that grow through the gaps on concrete and stuff. Poverty on all sorts of levels and layers do abound. 🕊️🙏
May 2nd, 2026 07:55
arqios said:
Railroad weed stood out to me, like those dandelions that grow through the gaps on concrete and stuff. Poverty on all sorts of levels and layers do abound. 🕊️🙏
May 2nd, 2026 07:55
THE LONESOME DREAM
Katie B. said:
Wow, poem of loss of a once virant community. Very well written.
May 2nd, 2026 07:40
Katie B. said:
Wow, poem of loss of a once virant community. Very well written.
May 2nd, 2026 07:40
THE LONESOME DREAM
Friendship said:
Well written. You seem to be writing about my, State of New York to me. Your poem addresses themes of despair, economic hardship, and the cyclical nature of poverty, illustrating the struggle of individuals in a bleak environment.
May 2nd, 2026 06:54
Friendship said:
Well written. You seem to be writing about my, State of New York to me. Your poem addresses themes of despair, economic hardship, and the cyclical nature of poverty, illustrating the struggle of individuals in a bleak environment.
May 2nd, 2026 06:54
THE LONESOME DREAM
sorenbarrett said:
To escape the grasp of poverty is a difficult feat meant only for a few. It holds a cold grasp on many and seems a baren winter indeed
May 2nd, 2026 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
To escape the grasp of poverty is a difficult feat meant only for a few. It holds a cold grasp on many and seems a baren winter indeed
May 2nd, 2026 04:42
ALONE
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, I’ve seen moments like this before…those quiet glimpses of someone just moving through the day, carrying years you can’t fully see. There’s something about that kind of solitude that sticks with you. You captured that feeling honestly. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 1st, 2026 07:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, I’ve seen moments like this before…those quiet glimpses of someone just moving through the day, carrying years you can’t fully see. There’s something about that kind of solitude that sticks with you. You captured that feeling honestly. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 1st, 2026 07:38
ALONE
Friendship said:
Well written.Your poem explores the themes of aging, solitude, and the passage of time. It reflects on the life of an elderly man who experiences the weight of his years and the isolation that often accompanies the twilight of life.
May 1st, 2026 05:48
Friendship said:
Well written.Your poem explores the themes of aging, solitude, and the passage of time. It reflects on the life of an elderly man who experiences the weight of his years and the isolation that often accompanies the twilight of life.
May 1st, 2026 05:48
ALONE
sorenbarrett said:
Maybe it is because I can identify with this poem or maybe it is its rhyme and meter but it is a fave
May 1st, 2026 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
Maybe it is because I can identify with this poem or maybe it is its rhyme and meter but it is a fave
May 1st, 2026 04:04
WINTER UPON A SUMMERS DAY
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Norman, it does happen, in 1975 a cricket match in June was stopped because of snow.
Andy
May 1st, 2026 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Norman, it does happen, in 1975 a cricket match in June was stopped because of snow.
Andy
May 1st, 2026 01:18
WINTER UPON A SUMMERS DAY
sorenbarrett said:
Here the dichotomy of winter and summer is expressed in opposition yet one become the other. Well done
April 30th, 2026 04:49
sorenbarrett said:
Here the dichotomy of winter and summer is expressed in opposition yet one become the other. Well done
April 30th, 2026 04:49
WINTER UPON A SUMMERS DAY
orchidee said:
You waited so long at that bus stop in Summer, that it was Winter when the bus came along?! lol.
April 30th, 2026 02:31
orchidee said:
You waited so long at that bus stop in Summer, that it was Winter when the bus came along?! lol.
April 30th, 2026 02:31
TO CATCH A BUTTERFLY
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed Norman the butterfly in this poem is more than mere insect but dreams, thoughts, ambitions, all things poems and art included that flit through our lives. Well written my friend
April 29th, 2026 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed Norman the butterfly in this poem is more than mere insect but dreams, thoughts, ambitions, all things poems and art included that flit through our lives. Well written my friend
April 29th, 2026 04:51
TO CATCH A BUTTERFLY
orchidee said:
Good write N.
You had time to catch butterflies while waiting for that bus? lol.
April 29th, 2026 02:48
orchidee said:
Good write N.
You had time to catch butterflies while waiting for that bus? lol.
April 29th, 2026 02:48
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