Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)
THE WATERS EDGE
Abdullah123 said:
beautiful. Incredibly immersive. Great write
April 13th, 2026 06:17
Abdullah123 said:
beautiful. Incredibly immersive. Great write
April 13th, 2026 06:17
THE WATERS EDGE
arqios said:
The poem and image work well together, Norman. The atmosphere is solidly set 🙏🏻🕊️
April 13th, 2026 05:56
arqios said:
The poem and image work well together, Norman. The atmosphere is solidly set 🙏🏻🕊️
April 13th, 2026 05:56
THE WATERS EDGE
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely worded this poem flows like a quiet stream through a meadow. Well written
April 13th, 2026 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely worded this poem flows like a quiet stream through a meadow. Well written
April 13th, 2026 04:14
THE WATERS EDGE
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Any buses go to the waters edge, e.g. seaside?!
April 13th, 2026 03:01
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Any buses go to the waters edge, e.g. seaside?!
April 13th, 2026 03:01
HEAD IN HANDS
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I never knew waiting for that bus caused you so much despair! lol.
April 12th, 2026 10:28
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I never knew waiting for that bus caused you so much despair! lol.
April 12th, 2026 10:28
HEAD IN HANDS
sorenbarrett said:
Love this write it holds a mood that it sends well to the reader. Well done a fave
April 12th, 2026 05:12
sorenbarrett said:
Love this write it holds a mood that it sends well to the reader. Well done a fave
April 12th, 2026 05:12
THE WRITING ROOM
arqios said:
More than a time filler, it fills the soul and everything around it. 🙏🕊️🤩
April 11th, 2026 18:25
arqios said:
More than a time filler, it fills the soul and everything around it. 🙏🕊️🤩
April 11th, 2026 18:25
THE WRITING ROOM
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman…this carries a real weight to it. It feels worn-in…like time has passed through it and left its mark. There’s something quiet but heavy here that just sits with you. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 11th, 2026 11:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman…this carries a real weight to it. It feels worn-in…like time has passed through it and left its mark. There’s something quiet but heavy here that just sits with you. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 11th, 2026 11:18
THE WRITING ROOM
sorenbarrett said:
It is the rhythm of the rhyme that sets this poem apart. Nicely done
April 11th, 2026 05:29
sorenbarrett said:
It is the rhythm of the rhyme that sets this poem apart. Nicely done
April 11th, 2026 05:29
THE FLOWER THAT DOES NOT DIE
NafisaSB said:
some memories live on - in our hearts, and through pressed flowers
beautifully expressed
April 11th, 2026 00:03
NafisaSB said:
some memories live on - in our hearts, and through pressed flowers
beautifully expressed
April 11th, 2026 00:03
CARAVAGGIO THE MARTYRDOM OF SAINT URSULA
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poetic tribute to a painting. Very nicely worded it speaks for itself
April 10th, 2026 05:20
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poetic tribute to a painting. Very nicely worded it speaks for itself
April 10th, 2026 05:20
CARAVAGGIO THE MARTYRDOM OF SAINT URSULA
orchidee said:
A good write N. Ghastly events. As ghastly as waiting for the No.12 bus?! I\'m trying a different bus today. lol.
April 10th, 2026 02:52
orchidee said:
A good write N. Ghastly events. As ghastly as waiting for the No.12 bus?! I\'m trying a different bus today. lol.
April 10th, 2026 02:52
THE FLOWER THAT DOES NOT DIE
orchidee said:
A fine write N. And now your next poem? The Bus That Never Arrives? lol.
April 9th, 2026 04:03
orchidee said:
A fine write N. And now your next poem? The Bus That Never Arrives? lol.
April 9th, 2026 04:03
THE FLOWER THAT DOES NOT DIE
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely wording and meter in this poem makes the metaphor work well. Nicely done Norman
April 9th, 2026 02:32
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely wording and meter in this poem makes the metaphor work well. Nicely done Norman
April 9th, 2026 02:32
PAINTED ANGEL
sorenbarrett said:
This is a particularly hard poem to read of what sounds to me as dependency. Well written
April 8th, 2026 16:02
sorenbarrett said:
This is a particularly hard poem to read of what sounds to me as dependency. Well written
April 8th, 2026 16:02
TINTORETTO PAINTING HIS DEAD DAUGHTER
Lorenz said:
A very victorian poetic perspective.
April 8th, 2026 03:49
Lorenz said:
A very victorian poetic perspective.
April 8th, 2026 03:49
TINTORETTO PAINTING HIS DEAD DAUGHTER
Abdullah123 said:
Haunting write. The short sentences were a great chocie to build that tension which carries the message beautifully. Well done
April 7th, 2026 11:58
Abdullah123 said:
Haunting write. The short sentences were a great chocie to build that tension which carries the message beautifully. Well done
April 7th, 2026 11:58
TINTORETTO PAINTING HIS DEAD DAUGHTER
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems almost classical in its form and speaks in romantic passion. Very nicely written, Norman.
April 7th, 2026 02:40
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems almost classical in its form and speaks in romantic passion. Very nicely written, Norman.
April 7th, 2026 02:40
TINTORETTO PAINTING HIS DEAD DAUGHTER
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
If that gal was only sleeping, she could have been waiting for the No.7 bus, and the artist got her a bed to lie down on, as she was waiting so long, and painted her at the bus stop! lol.
April 7th, 2026 02:24
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
If that gal was only sleeping, she could have been waiting for the No.7 bus, and the artist got her a bed to lie down on, as she was waiting so long, and painted her at the bus stop! lol.
April 7th, 2026 02:24
CHILD OF WORDS
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words Norman, those words eventually become written in our lives.
Andy
April 7th, 2026 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words Norman, those words eventually become written in our lives.
Andy
April 7th, 2026 01:10
CHILD OF WORDS
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words describing the creator and creation nicely done. \"In the beginning was the word\"
April 6th, 2026 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words describing the creator and creation nicely done. \"In the beginning was the word\"
April 6th, 2026 04:25
CHILD OF WORDS
orchidee said:
Good write N. How\'s those buses on Bank Holidays?! lol.
April 6th, 2026 02:38
orchidee said:
Good write N. How\'s those buses on Bank Holidays?! lol.
April 6th, 2026 02:38
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