Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)



ACCEPTING FATE
Goldfinch60 said:

Such true words in this life and time Norman.

Andy

November 2nd, 2026 02:12

ACCEPTING FATE
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Damn, Norman. This is grim as hell. Addiction can rob people of so much, and I\'ve seen enough of its destruction to know. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

November 1st, 2026 18:42

ACCEPTING FATE
Tony Grannell said:

Hello, Norman,

It reads like the final scene in a play. Raw and uncomfortable, to accept such a fate, the hopelessness and wretchedness of the three characters is depressing to say the least. A powerful poem. Very well done indeed.

Fond regards,

Tony.

November 1st, 2026 12:30

THE WITCHING HOUR
Tony Grannell said:

Hello, Norman,

Hauntingly composed with a great flair for poetry and storytelling. Of the many Halloween poems of late this one is up there amongst the best. Very well done indeed. A joy to read.

Wishing you much happiness

Tony.

November 1st, 2026 11:48

ACCEPTING FATE
orchidee said:

Good write N.
Yes - we know, it\'s no use us hoping any more. We\'ll have to accept our fate that no bus will turn up! heehee.

November 1st, 2026 11:00

ACCEPTING FATE
Thomas W Case said:

There’s a bleak, almost cinematic quality here, with the ragged curtain, bare bulb, and three motionless figures creating a room where addiction has drained away identity, movement, and hope, leaving people who seem to have surrendered their place in the world. β€œThe sofa sports / Three figures stoned” is the keeper for me, because that blunt, almost casual description makes the scene especially disturbing: these are human beings reduced to fixtures in a room, present in body but seemingly absent from their own lives.

November 1st, 2026 09:24

ACCEPTING FATE
Lorenz said:

Accepting or not...Our name is recorded in the ledger .

November 1st, 2026 08:30

ACCEPTING FATE
arqios said:

Good write, my friend πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

November 1st, 2026 07:19

ACCEPTING FATE
sorenbarrett said:

This paints a bare and grim picture filling in the details one draws the conclusion that a life style has ended in this fate. Well written my friend and a fave.

November 1st, 2026 04:20

THE WITCHING HOUR
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Well, Norman...I come looking for a Halloween read and leave checking over my shoulder! Thanks for the shivers, and Happy Halloween, my friend. This delivered! πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

October 31st, 2026 22:20

THE WITCHING HOUR
orchidee said:

Good write N.
Witching hour, any hour..... but no bus! lol.

October 31st, 2026 09:13

THE WITCHING HOUR
Lorenz said:

I sent out an invitation to all my ectoplasmic friends !

October 31st, 2026 07:18

THE WITCHING HOUR
arqios said:

Timely and truly engaging πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈπŸ‘πŸ»

October 31st, 2026 04:56

THE WITCHING HOUR
sorenbarrett said:

I love this one Norman so appropriate for the season it sets a mood. Well done my friend

October 31st, 2026 04:09

A MEMORY SAVED
Tristan Robert Lange said:

This makes me want to look through my own photos, Norman… especially the ones I haven’t visited in a while. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

October 30th, 2026 11:23

A MEMORY SAVED
orchidee said:

Good write N. Yes, buses are only a memory now! lol.

October 30th, 2026 09:11

A MEMORY SAVED
arqios said:

So tender and resonant. Most thoroughly enjoyed. πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

October 30th, 2026 08:30

ARCHWAY OF ROSES
Gelyn said:

Why my heart ached while reading this....it moved me..
Thank you for sharing this...I\'ll include you to my favorites..

Gel

October 30th, 2026 05:46

A MEMORY SAVED
sorenbarrett said:

This was beautiful and quite romantic. It shimmers in word ripples. Lovely Norman

October 30th, 2026 04:02

THE SOLDIERS SONG
NafisaSB said:

Beautifully written

October 30th, 2026 03:03

THE NEVER ENDING WAR
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Damn, Norman… No. It hasn\'t...unfortunately. I’m sad for him and angry that we keep accepting this. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

October 30th, 2026 01:17

THE NEVER ENDING WAR
sorenbarrett said:

Man responsible for more deaths of his own kind than any outside force. It is a most violent species. Nicely written

October 29th, 2026 04:19

THE NEVER ENDING WAR
orchidee said:

Good write N.
And - have we ever stopped warring in protesting for a bus to arrive?! lol.

October 29th, 2026 02:44

IN THE DYING LIGHT
Tristan Robert Lange said:

What a sobering thought, Norman, that we spend so much of our lives worrying about things that may ultimately matter very little. Perhaps the greatest wisdom comes from learning what deserves our attention while we\'re still here. Much appreciated, my friend. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

October 28th, 2026 16:50

IN THE DYING LIGHT
orchidee said:

Good write N.
And so, in the fading light, a last desperate hope to try to spot a bus. No blooming success, of course! lol.

October 28th, 2026 10:10

IN THE DYING LIGHT
arqios said:

An excellent and freeing acknowledgment πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

October 28th, 2026 08:12

IN THE DYING LIGHT
Teddy.15 said:

Stunning, I wouldn\'t have the privilege to meet my old flames as I live abroad, and I wouldn\'t actually want to meet most but I love this poem, there is a fragile and very dignified quiet happiness in this kudos. 🌹

October 28th, 2026 06:10

IN THE DYING LIGHT
sorenbarrett said:

Meeting again with past lovers can be a difficult and enticing situation where relationships that have not worked out still hold sexual allure and those that have moved on still drag one back. Nicely worded Norman

October 28th, 2026 04:09

ALMOST TIME
arqios said:

Most enjoyable read my friend πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

October 27th, 2026 21:24

ALMOST TIME
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Norman, I had to sit with this for a moment…I’d want another afternoon together, even if we did nothing at all. You moved me with this. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

October 27th, 2026 20:07

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