Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)
A QUIET TIME
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Yes, we say, it\'s a quiet time waiting for this bus you know!\' lol.
October 11th, 2026 10:05
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Yes, we say, it\'s a quiet time waiting for this bus you know!\' lol.
October 11th, 2026 10:05
A QUIET TIME
Lorenz said:
I have experienced this dialogue with the mineral void.
October 11th, 2026 09:07
Lorenz said:
I have experienced this dialogue with the mineral void.
October 11th, 2026 09:07
A QUIET TIME
sorenbarrett said:
The structure and meter of this poem together with its rhyme lend to its beauty. Nicely written my friend
October 11th, 2026 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
The structure and meter of this poem together with its rhyme lend to its beauty. Nicely written my friend
October 11th, 2026 04:31
SUNDAY TREAT
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I was ready to help myself to a chocolate biscuit, Normanβ¦now Iβd rather sit with you and hear more about your grandma. Great poem, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 10th, 2026 22:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I was ready to help myself to a chocolate biscuit, Normanβ¦now Iβd rather sit with you and hear more about your grandma. Great poem, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 10th, 2026 22:00
SUNDAY TREAT
π€s.zaynab.kamoonpuriπ·π¦π½ said:
Wow you\'ve captured memories so poetically, it reads beautifully with imaginative terms. Kudos!!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
October 10th, 2026 15:01
π€s.zaynab.kamoonpuriπ·π¦π½ said:
Wow you\'ve captured memories so poetically, it reads beautifully with imaginative terms. Kudos!!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
October 10th, 2026 15:01
SUNDAY TREAT
orchidee said:
Good write N. A Sunday treat - a bus - the only one for the whole day! lol.
October 10th, 2026 10:41
orchidee said:
Good write N. A Sunday treat - a bus - the only one for the whole day! lol.
October 10th, 2026 10:41
SUNDAY TREAT
sorenbarrett said:
There are certain things that revive memories and I hear some of them in this poem. It leaves nostalgic feelings of another time. Nicely done Norman it speaks to me.
October 10th, 2026 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
There are certain things that revive memories and I hear some of them in this poem. It leaves nostalgic feelings of another time. Nicely done Norman it speaks to me.
October 10th, 2026 03:52
THE SAINT CHRISTOPHER
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Norman. When I married my wife in 1981 we gave each other a St Christopher which I still wear around my neck and always have done, when she passed in December 2019 she was still wearing hers and I now have it around my neck as well.
Andy
October 10th, 2026 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Norman. When I married my wife in 1981 we gave each other a St Christopher which I still wear around my neck and always have done, when she passed in December 2019 she was still wearing hers and I now have it around my neck as well.
Andy
October 10th, 2026 01:08
THE SAINT CHRISTOPHER
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh, Norman...I wanted to go looking for it myself. Ridiculous after all those years, I know, but I still wanted you to have it. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 9th, 2026 11:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh, Norman...I wanted to go looking for it myself. Ridiculous after all those years, I know, but I still wanted you to have it. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 9th, 2026 11:43
THE SAINT CHRISTOPHER
orchidee said:
Doh! That patron saint of travellers is not helping us much. We wish to travel by bus! lol.
October 9th, 2026 09:29
orchidee said:
Doh! That patron saint of travellers is not helping us much. We wish to travel by bus! lol.
October 9th, 2026 09:29
THE SAINT CHRISTOPHER
arqios said:
A definite enjoyment to read dear friend ππ»ποΈ
October 9th, 2026 08:42
arqios said:
A definite enjoyment to read dear friend ππ»ποΈ
October 9th, 2026 08:42
THE SAINT CHRISTOPHER
sorenbarrett said:
There is a great deal of sadness and nostalgia in this poem. I love the lines \"An old man remembers through youth\'s inner eye\". Nicely done Norman.
October 9th, 2026 03:57
sorenbarrett said:
There is a great deal of sadness and nostalgia in this poem. I love the lines \"An old man remembers through youth\'s inner eye\". Nicely done Norman.
October 9th, 2026 03:57
ACT THE FOOL
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, you\'ve actually got me looking forward to the first snowfall! And that\'s saying something, considering how quickly I start complaining about winter once it arrives! π A lovely read, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 8th, 2026 21:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, you\'ve actually got me looking forward to the first snowfall! And that\'s saying something, considering how quickly I start complaining about winter once it arrives! π A lovely read, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 8th, 2026 21:08
ACT THE FOOL
sorenbarrett said:
This reminds me of what seemed only yesterday but has been over forty years now. A lovely write Norman a seasonal poem now the Northern Hemisphere is cooling toward winter. Well done my friend.
October 8th, 2026 03:44
sorenbarrett said:
This reminds me of what seemed only yesterday but has been over forty years now. A lovely write Norman a seasonal poem now the Northern Hemisphere is cooling toward winter. Well done my friend.
October 8th, 2026 03:44
ACT THE FOOL
orchidee said:
Good write N. Snow, all weathers at the bus stop! lol.
October 8th, 2026 03:11
orchidee said:
Good write N. Snow, all weathers at the bus stop! lol.
October 8th, 2026 03:11
GHOSTS OF INK
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Norman, those ghosts are always there even if only in our minds.
Andy
October 8th, 2026 01:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Norman, those ghosts are always there even if only in our minds.
Andy
October 8th, 2026 01:04
GHOSTS OF INK
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh, Norman, you\'ve got me wanting to wander through an old English town after midnight! Though knowing my luck, I\'d stumble into a pub full of dead poets arguing over whose work deserved publication. And I\'d probably join the argument! ππΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 7th, 2026 22:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh, Norman, you\'ve got me wanting to wander through an old English town after midnight! Though knowing my luck, I\'d stumble into a pub full of dead poets arguing over whose work deserved publication. And I\'d probably join the argument! ππΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 7th, 2026 22:11
GHOSTS OF INK
sorenbarrett said:
The meter and cadence of this poem made it special. It showed good rhyme as well as an ornament and the message was enchanted in fog with each line emerging from it magically. Most lovely and a fave
October 7th, 2026 03:51
sorenbarrett said:
The meter and cadence of this poem made it special. It showed good rhyme as well as an ornament and the message was enchanted in fog with each line emerging from it magically. Most lovely and a fave
October 7th, 2026 03:51
GHOSTS OF INK
Lorenz said:
I love this evocation ! Taste of cursed absinthe and inspired madness .
October 7th, 2026 03:13
Lorenz said:
I love this evocation ! Taste of cursed absinthe and inspired madness .
October 7th, 2026 03:13
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