Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)
LETTER IN A FOREIGN LANGUAGE
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a charming flow that is created by short rhyming lines. The message is consistent that aids the flow as well. Sad but well written
October 18th, 2025 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a charming flow that is created by short rhyming lines. The message is consistent that aids the flow as well. Sad but well written
October 18th, 2025 04:22
BY YOUR GRAVESIDE
sorenbarrett said:
This reads like a prayer to a dead father, mother or spouse. It recognizes their superiority and humbly begs forgiveness for not measuring up. It rings with sincerity and humility. Very nicely said in good rhyme and meter
October 17th, 2025 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
This reads like a prayer to a dead father, mother or spouse. It recognizes their superiority and humbly begs forgiveness for not measuring up. It rings with sincerity and humility. Very nicely said in good rhyme and meter
October 17th, 2025 04:04
DESCENT INTO MEDIOCRITY
Dan Williams said:
Amen. Just good enough has been promoted, the bar of accomplishment lowered way too many times. What happened to pride of workmanship, where went the craftsmen? Very tice work here.
October 16th, 2025 23:25
Dan Williams said:
Amen. Just good enough has been promoted, the bar of accomplishment lowered way too many times. What happened to pride of workmanship, where went the craftsmen? Very tice work here.
October 16th, 2025 23:25
DESCENT INTO MEDIOCRITY
NinjaGirl said:
There are so many greats who will never be known. Well done!
October 16th, 2025 15:12
NinjaGirl said:
There are so many greats who will never be known. Well done!
October 16th, 2025 15:12
DESCENT INTO MEDIOCRITY
sorenbarrett said:
The common taste is not for caviar but fish and chips. Cheap champagne fills the corner stores. A lovely write full of satire
October 16th, 2025 04:21
sorenbarrett said:
The common taste is not for caviar but fish and chips. Cheap champagne fills the corner stores. A lovely write full of satire
October 16th, 2025 04:21
DESCENT INTO MEDIOCRITY
Lorenz said:
Praise the breath of poetic blandness cloaked in proper politeness .
October 16th, 2025 03:09
Lorenz said:
Praise the breath of poetic blandness cloaked in proper politeness .
October 16th, 2025 03:09
UPON THE MORN
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic with warm images and images of one loved. Nicely done
October 15th, 2025 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic with warm images and images of one loved. Nicely done
October 15th, 2025 04:03
NO MORE PAIN
RSM0812 said:
This envokes to me rest and the simple escape from something painful. The words you choose fit wonderfully and was an enjoyable read. Nicely done.
October 14th, 2025 05:27
RSM0812 said:
This envokes to me rest and the simple escape from something painful. The words you choose fit wonderfully and was an enjoyable read. Nicely done.
October 14th, 2025 05:27
NO MIRACLES
RSM0812 said:
This envokes to me the ultimate power of a church and its potential coruption. Nicel done.
October 14th, 2025 05:17
RSM0812 said:
This envokes to me the ultimate power of a church and its potential coruption. Nicel done.
October 14th, 2025 05:17
A REQUIEM
sorenbarrett said:
A character marked in memory by their individuality. A poem nicely worded and in rhyme as well
October 14th, 2025 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
A character marked in memory by their individuality. A poem nicely worded and in rhyme as well
October 14th, 2025 04:08
NO MIRACLES
sorenbarrett said:
Whether religion, politics, cultural values all forms of brainwashing and indoctrination are an insidious form of control over others. The poem has a creepy feel to it. Nicely written
October 13th, 2025 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
Whether religion, politics, cultural values all forms of brainwashing and indoctrination are an insidious form of control over others. The poem has a creepy feel to it. Nicely written
October 13th, 2025 04:09
CRUEL VERSE
sorenbarrett said:
The feeling of betrayal comes through in this poem of sadness. It is dark and mournful with the feeling of sadness. Nicely written with great flow.
October 12th, 2025 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
The feeling of betrayal comes through in this poem of sadness. It is dark and mournful with the feeling of sadness. Nicely written with great flow.
October 12th, 2025 04:11
ONE MINUTE
Lorenz said:
that reminds me of something I must have forgotten...
October 11th, 2025 09:47
Lorenz said:
that reminds me of something I must have forgotten...
October 11th, 2025 09:47
ONE MINUTE
Poetic Licence said:
Feels like the closing of the door for the final of a haunting memory off loss, well written
October 11th, 2025 07:53
Poetic Licence said:
Feels like the closing of the door for the final of a haunting memory off loss, well written
October 11th, 2025 07:53
ONE MINUTE
sorenbarrett said:
This poem to me seems a metaphor of loss. Sad it is in some way haunting and dark. Well written
October 11th, 2025 03:46
sorenbarrett said:
This poem to me seems a metaphor of loss. Sad it is in some way haunting and dark. Well written
October 11th, 2025 03:46
THE OLD TREE
Poetic Licence said:
This has a really nice flow as you read, keeps your attention, enjoyed the read
October 10th, 2025 15:41
Poetic Licence said:
This has a really nice flow as you read, keeps your attention, enjoyed the read
October 10th, 2025 15:41
THE OLD TREE
Lorenz said:
Under the old wise tree facing the river I would fall asleep...
October 10th, 2025 09:47
Lorenz said:
Under the old wise tree facing the river I would fall asleep...
October 10th, 2025 09:47
THE OLD TREE
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the feel of this verse and the wording was perfect for the meter. It has a comforting but haunted feel to it. Very nicely done a fave
October 10th, 2025 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the feel of this verse and the wording was perfect for the meter. It has a comforting but haunted feel to it. Very nicely done a fave
October 10th, 2025 04:13
NO FIXED ABODE
Doggerel Dave said:
Situation perfectly described there - cannot be repeated too often.
Good to see.
October 9th, 2025 16:40
Doggerel Dave said:
Situation perfectly described there - cannot be repeated too often.
Good to see.
October 9th, 2025 16:40
NO FIXED ABODE
sorenbarrett said:
We live in an individualistic world, economy, society with values weighed for the individual. Until we become communal nothing will change a good write that is mind provoking
October 9th, 2025 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
We live in an individualistic world, economy, society with values weighed for the individual. Until we become communal nothing will change a good write that is mind provoking
October 9th, 2025 04:18
FACES ON A STREET
sorenbarrett said:
A free bird is always searching for a home. A most reflective poem. Well done
October 8th, 2025 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
A free bird is always searching for a home. A most reflective poem. Well done
October 8th, 2025 04:05
FAVOURITE CHAIR
Ellen Marsell said:
The last line feels like a full stop at the end of a long breath.
After light, wind, and sea — silence and acceptance remain.
The whole poem seems to live within the old man’s gaze.
Beautifully done.
October 7th, 2025 05:47
Ellen Marsell said:
The last line feels like a full stop at the end of a long breath.
After light, wind, and sea — silence and acceptance remain.
The whole poem seems to live within the old man’s gaze.
Beautifully done.
October 7th, 2025 05:47
FAVOURITE CHAIR
sorenbarrett said:
I like the evolution of this poem on several levels. Passage of time in the day, season, and life. All nicely layered. Well done a fave
October 7th, 2025 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
I like the evolution of this poem on several levels. Passage of time in the day, season, and life. All nicely layered. Well done a fave
October 7th, 2025 04:11
FAVOURITE CHAIR
Lorenz said:
It reminds me Bognor-Regis where I spent some years ...
October 7th, 2025 04:02
Lorenz said:
It reminds me Bognor-Regis where I spent some years ...
October 7th, 2025 04:02
TOMORROWS KILLERS
RSM0812 said:
Wow, this is ama,ing. I can tell u have been practicing. Lol. No, though all kidding aside i like both rhythm and rhyme. Your point and story is emebellished with importance. Nice write.
October 6th, 2025 20:21
RSM0812 said:
Wow, this is ama,ing. I can tell u have been practicing. Lol. No, though all kidding aside i like both rhythm and rhyme. Your point and story is emebellished with importance. Nice write.
October 6th, 2025 20:21
TOMORROWS KILLERS
sorenbarrett said:
Distancing is the key to making a soulless warrior. We have known this for a long time calling them Hun\'s, Japs, Gooks, Charlie. Now virtually putting them on a computer screen reduced to pixels works even better. Movies and video games are not real and neither does this appear to be. What\'s the harm in a little projected death on screen.
October 6th, 2025 04:28
sorenbarrett said:
Distancing is the key to making a soulless warrior. We have known this for a long time calling them Hun\'s, Japs, Gooks, Charlie. Now virtually putting them on a computer screen reduced to pixels works even better. Movies and video games are not real and neither does this appear to be. What\'s the harm in a little projected death on screen.
October 6th, 2025 04:28
THE POETS GATEWAY
sorenbarrett said:
This poem\'s flow and associations makes a connection inexplicable that is the magic of poetic words. A fave
October 5th, 2025 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
This poem\'s flow and associations makes a connection inexplicable that is the magic of poetic words. A fave
October 5th, 2025 04:10
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