Comments received on poems by nephilim56
MARBLE ANGEL
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the image painted in this poem and the metaphor extends beyond the image to the meaning of a marble angel that remains frozen and imprisoned in stone. Nicely written
May 30th, 2025 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the image painted in this poem and the metaphor extends beyond the image to the meaning of a marble angel that remains frozen and imprisoned in stone. Nicely written
May 30th, 2025 04:48
BITTER SHOW
Damaso said:
I wish I could measure the day like a bird measures its flight. It sounds very comforting. Greetings, and thank you so much for sharing.
May 29th, 2025 08:34
Damaso said:
I wish I could measure the day like a bird measures its flight. It sounds very comforting. Greetings, and thank you so much for sharing.
May 29th, 2025 08:34
BITTER SHOW
sorenbarrett said:
This poem gage a feeling throughout of nature and beauty to be turned about with the last line and the words (bitter show) that seemed to be incongruous with the flow. It is this that gave the poem its charm and appeal. Most lovely making the mind put on the breaks and reconsider the direction it was headed in.
May 29th, 2025 04:36
sorenbarrett said:
This poem gage a feeling throughout of nature and beauty to be turned about with the last line and the words (bitter show) that seemed to be incongruous with the flow. It is this that gave the poem its charm and appeal. Most lovely making the mind put on the breaks and reconsider the direction it was headed in.
May 29th, 2025 04:36
NEVER TOLD
sorenbarrett said:
This poem fanciful reads mystical and may well be metaphorical but aside from all this reads well. Nicely doen
May 28th, 2025 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
This poem fanciful reads mystical and may well be metaphorical but aside from all this reads well. Nicely doen
May 28th, 2025 04:09
GREAT GRANDSON ( TO REGGIE )
sorenbarrett said:
Touching to any of us that have been a father. A beautiful write well worded in such poetic form. A fave
May 27th, 2025 05:16
sorenbarrett said:
Touching to any of us that have been a father. A beautiful write well worded in such poetic form. A fave
May 27th, 2025 05:16
EMPTY CHURCH
sorenbarrett said:
The search for meaning in life and how you make sense out of chaos. A lovely existential write.
May 26th, 2025 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
The search for meaning in life and how you make sense out of chaos. A lovely existential write.
May 26th, 2025 04:47
EMPTY CHURCH
Hollow Enigma said:
Awesome stuff as always! I imagen its me trying to force myself to find a preace, reckoning or just rockbottom.
May 26th, 2025 03:35
Hollow Enigma said:
Awesome stuff as always! I imagen its me trying to force myself to find a preace, reckoning or just rockbottom.
May 26th, 2025 03:35
TALL SHIPS
Lorenz said:
What a beautiful image that sails over the memory of a lost ocean !
May 25th, 2025 04:27
Lorenz said:
What a beautiful image that sails over the memory of a lost ocean !
May 25th, 2025 04:27
TALL SHIPS
David Wakeling said:
A great and powerful poem.I was taken to the seaside.Well done
May 25th, 2025 04:17
David Wakeling said:
A great and powerful poem.I was taken to the seaside.Well done
May 25th, 2025 04:17
TALL SHIPS
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the image pained in this beautiful poem. It seemed that i could see each brush stroke applied to the canvass of life in a worded poem. Lovely
May 25th, 2025 03:41
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the image pained in this beautiful poem. It seemed that i could see each brush stroke applied to the canvass of life in a worded poem. Lovely
May 25th, 2025 03:41
FREQUENCY OF GODS
sorenbarrett said:
Death and its mourning portrayed nicely in this poem that may be a dirge a type of lacrimosa for the passing. Very nice
May 24th, 2025 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
Death and its mourning portrayed nicely in this poem that may be a dirge a type of lacrimosa for the passing. Very nice
May 24th, 2025 04:22
CHILD GHOST
sorenbarrett said:
A haunting poem that is left to the reader\'s mind the outcome. This feeling of hanging outcome makes it the more haunting. Nicely done
May 23rd, 2025 05:19
sorenbarrett said:
A haunting poem that is left to the reader\'s mind the outcome. This feeling of hanging outcome makes it the more haunting. Nicely done
May 23rd, 2025 05:19
THE LONESOME FIELD
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely expressed write of the despair of having to accept failure, well written
May 22nd, 2025 12:47
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely expressed write of the despair of having to accept failure, well written
May 22nd, 2025 12:47
THE LONESOME FIELD
sorenbarrett said:
The anguish of failure seeps from these lines and falls in the despair of acceptance at the end. Powerful
May 22nd, 2025 05:14
sorenbarrett said:
The anguish of failure seeps from these lines and falls in the despair of acceptance at the end. Powerful
May 22nd, 2025 05:14
CURSED MOON
rrodriguez said:
I can relate to your message. I\'m a chaplain and I see death a lot... I see an empty shell when the spirit is gone. Thank you for sharing. A well written piece.
May 22nd, 2025 05:03
rrodriguez said:
I can relate to your message. I\'m a chaplain and I see death a lot... I see an empty shell when the spirit is gone. Thank you for sharing. A well written piece.
May 22nd, 2025 05:03
LONE CANDLE
arqios said:
Something about candles and their singular light amid a dark world. Beautiful! 🕯️🕊️🙏🏻
May 21st, 2025 05:35
arqios said:
Something about candles and their singular light amid a dark world. Beautiful! 🕯️🕊️🙏🏻
May 21st, 2025 05:35
LONE CANDLE
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a most haunting quality to it and feels a bit dark and ominous in nature. Very nicely written
May 21st, 2025 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a most haunting quality to it and feels a bit dark and ominous in nature. Very nicely written
May 21st, 2025 04:33
CURSED MOON
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written this poem speaks of death in a most intimate manner with great imagery and metaphor. Very nicely done
May 20th, 2025 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written this poem speaks of death in a most intimate manner with great imagery and metaphor. Very nicely done
May 20th, 2025 04:16
CURSED MOON
arqios said:
This has put words to experiences I have had over the years. Most touched🙏🏻🕊️
May 20th, 2025 03:52
arqios said:
This has put words to experiences I have had over the years. Most touched🙏🏻🕊️
May 20th, 2025 03:52
CURSED MOON
Poetic Licence said:
Very relatable write to many, being in a hospital watching the passing of a loved one, nicely expressed and written
May 20th, 2025 02:42
Poetic Licence said:
Very relatable write to many, being in a hospital watching the passing of a loved one, nicely expressed and written
May 20th, 2025 02:42
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