Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)
THE NAKED FRAME
sorenbarrett said:
Assumptions are what we all do but are the basis of misunderstandings and wrong judgements a poignant write.
August 15th, 2025 05:16
sorenbarrett said:
Assumptions are what we all do but are the basis of misunderstandings and wrong judgements a poignant write.
August 15th, 2025 05:16
THE MONK
sorenbarrett said:
Holy symbols gather in this poem to elevate the reader walking though it.
August 14th, 2025 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
Holy symbols gather in this poem to elevate the reader walking though it.
August 14th, 2025 04:16
THE LAST CIGARETTE
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that with short lines and rhyme emulate the relationship described short and with momentary fit. It is matter of factly melancholic speaking as if two passing strangers for a moment paused in time. A fave
August 13th, 2025 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that with short lines and rhyme emulate the relationship described short and with momentary fit. It is matter of factly melancholic speaking as if two passing strangers for a moment paused in time. A fave
August 13th, 2025 04:38
COMRADE IN SOUL
sorenbarrett said:
Subtle like the object of the poem many acts of heroism go unnoticed and unannounced in this life and as many war heros proclaim the true heroes lie buried on the battlefield unsung. A quiet write about the quiet dead beautiful and a fave
August 12th, 2025 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
Subtle like the object of the poem many acts of heroism go unnoticed and unannounced in this life and as many war heros proclaim the true heroes lie buried on the battlefield unsung. A quiet write about the quiet dead beautiful and a fave
August 12th, 2025 04:29
5 AM
sorenbarrett said:
A clear picture painted in this snapshot of life at an early hour. Here the car can be taken as a metaphor for a or the person themselves set in the poem. Nicely done.
August 11th, 2025 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
A clear picture painted in this snapshot of life at an early hour. Here the car can be taken as a metaphor for a or the person themselves set in the poem. Nicely done.
August 11th, 2025 04:05
JESUS SAVES
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting picture painted in this poem. It casts and image that is dark with a neon light, nature and man. A man doing what he feels is God\'s work to earn his keep. We all have our place in this world. A good read
August 10th, 2025 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting picture painted in this poem. It casts and image that is dark with a neon light, nature and man. A man doing what he feels is God\'s work to earn his keep. We all have our place in this world. A good read
August 10th, 2025 04:14
PAINT ME A PICTURE
sorenbarrett said:
Here deception changes in a blink of an eye. A lovely poem that has a tarot card like feel to it where inverted meaning are made. Very nice
August 9th, 2025 04:24
sorenbarrett said:
Here deception changes in a blink of an eye. A lovely poem that has a tarot card like feel to it where inverted meaning are made. Very nice
August 9th, 2025 04:24
TIME WARP
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting perspective looking back or forward through time in a time warp is a metaphor for memory itself or perchance imagination. Nicely penned
August 8th, 2025 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting perspective looking back or forward through time in a time warp is a metaphor for memory itself or perchance imagination. Nicely penned
August 8th, 2025 04:47
55 INCH SCREEN
arqios said:
Your poem beautifully captures how music can become a vessel for memory, longing, and transformation. It reminds me that even in stillness, our minds are alive with images and emotions that sing long after the final note.
August 7th, 2025 06:06
arqios said:
Your poem beautifully captures how music can become a vessel for memory, longing, and transformation. It reminds me that even in stillness, our minds are alive with images and emotions that sing long after the final note.
August 7th, 2025 06:06
55 INCH SCREEN
sorenbarrett said:
A nice flow to this poem that includes a nice pick for the song as sleep is coming along. A fun read
August 7th, 2025 05:09
sorenbarrett said:
A nice flow to this poem that includes a nice pick for the song as sleep is coming along. A fun read
August 7th, 2025 05:09
UNSUNG HERO
rrodriguez said:
It\'s resiliance that counts, you\'re right—enjoyed the read. Thank you for sharing.
August 6th, 2025 17:28
rrodriguez said:
It\'s resiliance that counts, you\'re right—enjoyed the read. Thank you for sharing.
August 6th, 2025 17:28
ASYLUM
sorenbarrett said:
God help any life form that extends a hand to the human species. Like a virus it will destroy them infecting their way of life. A good write
August 6th, 2025 04:56
sorenbarrett said:
God help any life form that extends a hand to the human species. Like a virus it will destroy them infecting their way of life. A good write
August 6th, 2025 04:56
LAST SHADOW
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the gentle weaving of metaphor into subtle foreshadowing in this poem The last stanza leaving the reader with the feeling of the relationship washed away with the incoming tide. Loved the imagery in this poem as well
August 5th, 2025 05:07
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the gentle weaving of metaphor into subtle foreshadowing in this poem The last stanza leaving the reader with the feeling of the relationship washed away with the incoming tide. Loved the imagery in this poem as well
August 5th, 2025 05:07
HAUNTED LIGHTHOUSE
Ellen Marsell said:
An atmospheric poem that carries the breath of old sea folklore. Really loved it!
August 3rd, 2025 13:38
Ellen Marsell said:
An atmospheric poem that carries the breath of old sea folklore. Really loved it!
August 3rd, 2025 13:38
HAUNTED LIGHTHOUSE
sorenbarrett said:
A great ghost tale in verse and rhyme. Very nicely done
August 3rd, 2025 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
A great ghost tale in verse and rhyme. Very nicely done
August 3rd, 2025 04:32
JAIL THE SINGLE MOTHER
sorenbarrett said:
Why must we rely on government to take care of the poor when it should come from each individual that sees it? Everyone is responsible for taking care of their fellow man. Nicely written
August 2nd, 2025 05:01
sorenbarrett said:
Why must we rely on government to take care of the poor when it should come from each individual that sees it? Everyone is responsible for taking care of their fellow man. Nicely written
August 2nd, 2025 05:01
JAIL THE SINGLE MOTHER
2781 said:
They used to say that charity starts at home.
I doubt there would be as much poverty it we understand what that meant.
August 2nd, 2025 04:08
2781 said:
They used to say that charity starts at home.
I doubt there would be as much poverty it we understand what that meant.
August 2nd, 2025 04:08
ANCIENT WINGS
sorenbarrett said:
The images presented in this poem haunt the mind and in its darkness from the shadows emerges phantoms of thought. Nicely crafted with rhyme
August 1st, 2025 05:07
sorenbarrett said:
The images presented in this poem haunt the mind and in its darkness from the shadows emerges phantoms of thought. Nicely crafted with rhyme
August 1st, 2025 05:07
THE MEN LEFT BEHIND
sorenbarrett said:
A chilly and haunting poem of death, war, separation, loss. Nicely done
July 31st, 2025 03:56
sorenbarrett said:
A chilly and haunting poem of death, war, separation, loss. Nicely done
July 31st, 2025 03:56
THE OLD STREET
sorenbarrett said:
The neighborhood a metaphor for the people that lived there, all rusted and broken with time. A lovely write
July 30th, 2025 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
The neighborhood a metaphor for the people that lived there, all rusted and broken with time. A lovely write
July 30th, 2025 04:11
GODS ONCE WALKED
sorenbarrett said:
A rocking rhythm flows through this poem with a flow felt as it is read. Nicely done
July 29th, 2025 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
A rocking rhythm flows through this poem with a flow felt as it is read. Nicely done
July 29th, 2025 04:38
AS DAYLIGHT FADES
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of remorse at the end of one\'s days and the coming final hour. Well written
July 28th, 2025 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of remorse at the end of one\'s days and the coming final hour. Well written
July 28th, 2025 04:51
AS DAYLIGHT FADES
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of remorse at the end of one\'s days and the coming final hour. Well written
July 28th, 2025 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of remorse at the end of one\'s days and the coming final hour. Well written
July 28th, 2025 04:51
TOMORROWS DICTATOR
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of warning about a topic everyone knows but are afraid to address because the answer affects them personally. Greed and neglect have gotten us hear and are the same reason that keeps us here. A sad but all to true tale. Nicely done
July 27th, 2025 05:28
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of warning about a topic everyone knows but are afraid to address because the answer affects them personally. Greed and neglect have gotten us hear and are the same reason that keeps us here. A sad but all to true tale. Nicely done
July 27th, 2025 05:28
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