Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)
BUT GENTLY I WAIT TO SAY GOODBYE
orchidee said:
Good write N. You said goodbye yet, waiting at that bus stop?! lol.
August 28th, 2026 08:33
orchidee said:
Good write N. You said goodbye yet, waiting at that bus stop?! lol.
August 28th, 2026 08:33
BUT GENTLY I WAIT TO SAY GOODBYE
sorenbarrett said:
There is definitely a feel of departure in this poem a sense of death and moving on. It is melancholic and a bit somber if not sad. Well written my friend
August 28th, 2026 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
There is definitely a feel of departure in this poem a sense of death and moving on. It is melancholic and a bit somber if not sad. Well written my friend
August 28th, 2026 04:27
TRAPPED IN TIME
thinkerbell said:
A haunting piece of poetry..wonderfully worded
August 28th, 2026 00:57
thinkerbell said:
A haunting piece of poetry..wonderfully worded
August 28th, 2026 00:57
TRAPPED IN TIME
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, what a haunting and atmospheric piece. The old structures remain, but whatever power they once carried is steadily disappearing while the world continues around them. I’ve visited places that hold this same eerie presence...beautifully captured, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 27th, 2026 16:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, what a haunting and atmospheric piece. The old structures remain, but whatever power they once carried is steadily disappearing while the world continues around them. I’ve visited places that hold this same eerie presence...beautifully captured, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 27th, 2026 16:27
TRAPPED IN TIME
Lorenz said:
A somewhat poignant vision of the rust settling and dissolving shapes...
August 27th, 2026 10:54
Lorenz said:
A somewhat poignant vision of the rust settling and dissolving shapes...
August 27th, 2026 10:54
TRAPPED IN TIME
orchidee said:
Good write N. Yep, we\'re trapped in time waiting for that bus. Now a poem about it. The first line goes: Ohhh, F, F, F, and F! lol.
August 27th, 2026 09:16
orchidee said:
Good write N. Yep, we\'re trapped in time waiting for that bus. Now a poem about it. The first line goes: Ohhh, F, F, F, and F! lol.
August 27th, 2026 09:16
TRAPPED IN TIME
sorenbarrett said:
A most lovely imaged metaphor of age and disrepair. Nicely worded it paints its picture well and is a fave
August 27th, 2026 03:51
sorenbarrett said:
A most lovely imaged metaphor of age and disrepair. Nicely worded it paints its picture well and is a fave
August 27th, 2026 03:51
PATRIOTISM
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this hits with brutal clarity. Political power manufactures the fervor, ordinary families absorb the loss, and commerce waits at the other end…all beneath the disguise of noble devotion. Brilliantly delivered, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 26th, 2026 15:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this hits with brutal clarity. Political power manufactures the fervor, ordinary families absorb the loss, and commerce waits at the other end…all beneath the disguise of noble devotion. Brilliantly delivered, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 26th, 2026 15:53
OLD MEN
Doggerel Dave said:
I detest funerals. I decline to attend.I suppose I shall be forced to attend one shortly, my upright refusal no longer valid..
August 26th, 2026 07:13
Doggerel Dave said:
I detest funerals. I decline to attend.I suppose I shall be forced to attend one shortly, my upright refusal no longer valid..
August 26th, 2026 07:13
PATRIOTISM
Doggerel Dave said:
Got that right. Hear Hear. I\'m tired of this argument, have delt with it before. Will contribute no more unless a clown leaps to patriotism\'s defence...
August 26th, 2026 04:40
Doggerel Dave said:
Got that right. Hear Hear. I\'m tired of this argument, have delt with it before. Will contribute no more unless a clown leaps to patriotism\'s defence...
August 26th, 2026 04:40
PATRIOTISM
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is chilling even its form resembling a cross as a grave marker leaves one to shudder. Patriotism has been the rallying call for millennia but seems antiquated now days with a global internet, economy and relations. Isolationists an artifact of an out dated time. Patriotism a means of control.
August 26th, 2026 04:15
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is chilling even its form resembling a cross as a grave marker leaves one to shudder. Patriotism has been the rallying call for millennia but seems antiquated now days with a global internet, economy and relations. Isolationists an artifact of an out dated time. Patriotism a means of control.
August 26th, 2026 04:15
OLD MEN
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this hit me hard. Every farewell among lifelong friends carries the awareness that the circle is becoming smaller...and another person’s passing forces each survivor to confront their own mortality. Stark, honest, and powerful, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 25th, 2026 18:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this hit me hard. Every farewell among lifelong friends carries the awareness that the circle is becoming smaller...and another person’s passing forces each survivor to confront their own mortality. Stark, honest, and powerful, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 25th, 2026 18:51
OLD MEN
Lorenz said:
I\'ll keep posting poems from the realm of ectoplasms...
August 25th, 2026 11:16
Lorenz said:
I\'ll keep posting poems from the realm of ectoplasms...
August 25th, 2026 11:16
OLD MEN
orchidee said:
We\'re wittering our lives away waiting for that bus! lol.
August 25th, 2026 10:34
orchidee said:
We\'re wittering our lives away waiting for that bus! lol.
August 25th, 2026 10:34
OLD MEN
arqios said:
And in so doing anticipate their turn at the queue👍🏻🕊️🙏🏻
August 25th, 2026 07:17
arqios said:
And in so doing anticipate their turn at the queue👍🏻🕊️🙏🏻
August 25th, 2026 07:17
OLD MEN
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording in this poem. We all stand in line but never know when our number will be called. Well written.
August 25th, 2026 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording in this poem. We all stand in line but never know when our number will be called. Well written.
August 25th, 2026 04:33
OLD MEN
Classicmister said:
Yery poignant words for another old man - It used to be 4 weddings and a funeral and now it\'s 4 funerals and a wedding!!
August 25th, 2026 03:25
Classicmister said:
Yery poignant words for another old man - It used to be 4 weddings and a funeral and now it\'s 4 funerals and a wedding!!
August 25th, 2026 03:25
OLD MEN
Paul Bell said:
Sure is the deadpool incorporated.
Wonder if those vitamin pills will give me another week.
August 25th, 2026 03:15
Paul Bell said:
Sure is the deadpool incorporated.
Wonder if those vitamin pills will give me another week.
August 25th, 2026 03:15
WHEN THE WAR IS OVER
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this hit hard. You confront the invisible aftermath carried by those who return home physically while remaining trapped within what they endured. Powerful and compassionate work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 24th, 2026 08:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this hit hard. You confront the invisible aftermath carried by those who return home physically while remaining trapped within what they endured. Powerful and compassionate work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 24th, 2026 08:07
WHEN THE WAR IS OVER
sorenbarrett said:
There is an emotional story the remains hidden in this write. One of violence and a trauma if one would. Nicely written
August 24th, 2026 04:24
sorenbarrett said:
There is an emotional story the remains hidden in this write. One of violence and a trauma if one would. Nicely written
August 24th, 2026 04:24
WHEN THE WAR IS OVER
orchidee said:
Good write N - the horrors of war. No other species does it. Animals need to kill for prey, but not just for the sake of killing each other. And in Nature, etc, many good things done by humans. But in other cases, along comes man and mucks it up.
When that bus turns up, you\'ll have war with the driver - what kept ya, you will say?! lol.
August 24th, 2026 02:23
orchidee said:
Good write N - the horrors of war. No other species does it. Animals need to kill for prey, but not just for the sake of killing each other. And in Nature, etc, many good things done by humans. But in other cases, along comes man and mucks it up.
When that bus turns up, you\'ll have war with the driver - what kept ya, you will say?! lol.
August 24th, 2026 02:23
I TELL MYSELF
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Such a haunting write, Norman. Denial offers no real refuge here; absence continues to occupy the mind and disturb every attempt at peace. Excellent work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 23rd, 2026 12:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Such a haunting write, Norman. Denial offers no real refuge here; absence continues to occupy the mind and disturb every attempt at peace. Excellent work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 23rd, 2026 12:51
I TELL MYSELF
orchidee said:
Good write N. Yes, you tell yourself that bus will turn up soon. Does it heck! lol.
August 23rd, 2026 07:56
orchidee said:
Good write N. Yes, you tell yourself that bus will turn up soon. Does it heck! lol.
August 23rd, 2026 07:56
I TELL MYSELF
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a damn haunted loneliness in this, where the speaker keeps trying to convince themselves that the relationship was never real while every memory argues otherwise. “The silence shouts” is the line that really sticks—it captures how absence can become louder than anything that was ever said.
August 23rd, 2026 07:25
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a damn haunted loneliness in this, where the speaker keeps trying to convince themselves that the relationship was never real while every memory argues otherwise. “The silence shouts” is the line that really sticks—it captures how absence can become louder than anything that was ever said.
August 23rd, 2026 07:25
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