Comments received on poems by nephilim56
RAIN
Cheeky Missy said:
Dang! I cherish rain, have long seen it even as you say, as tears, yet never thought of it in such a miserable case. Fascinating. Beautifully rendered in tasteful simplicity, eloquent with excellent imagery, what a haunting, sorrowful poignancy it owns. Thank you for sharing.
April 10th, 2025 02:14
Cheeky Missy said:
Dang! I cherish rain, have long seen it even as you say, as tears, yet never thought of it in such a miserable case. Fascinating. Beautifully rendered in tasteful simplicity, eloquent with excellent imagery, what a haunting, sorrowful poignancy it owns. Thank you for sharing.
April 10th, 2025 02:14
ATTIC
Ellen Marsell said:
The attic is a symbol not only of physical oblivion but also of internal loss, where the past lives in hidden, not always accessible forms. In this space, full of forgotten traces, one can feel the presence of invisible \"visitors\" — memories and lost connections. The striking imagery in your poem is truly remarkable.
April 9th, 2025 14:50
Ellen Marsell said:
The attic is a symbol not only of physical oblivion but also of internal loss, where the past lives in hidden, not always accessible forms. In this space, full of forgotten traces, one can feel the presence of invisible \"visitors\" — memories and lost connections. The striking imagery in your poem is truly remarkable.
April 9th, 2025 14:50
ATTIC
Poetic Licence said:
Images created giving off that haunting feeling, I am sensing the attic room is the brain and many negative emotions are being triggered, enjoyed the read
April 9th, 2025 05:09
Poetic Licence said:
Images created giving off that haunting feeling, I am sensing the attic room is the brain and many negative emotions are being triggered, enjoyed the read
April 9th, 2025 05:09
ATTIC
sorenbarrett said:
The mood is cast in a most haunting way where images are used to trigger emotions of fear, anxiety, trepidation and a desire to withdraw. Well set is a most aversive stage.
April 9th, 2025 04:59
sorenbarrett said:
The mood is cast in a most haunting way where images are used to trigger emotions of fear, anxiety, trepidation and a desire to withdraw. Well set is a most aversive stage.
April 9th, 2025 04:59
THE ORNATE BOWL
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Hello,
This poem is about one of those moments when through fleeting time our thoughts might cross over and intertwine with those of another. Perhaps of someone dear or lost, the short brief lines give way for clear imagery though the whole atmosphere remains dream like, I enjoyed the read!
April 8th, 2025 09:14
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Hello,
This poem is about one of those moments when through fleeting time our thoughts might cross over and intertwine with those of another. Perhaps of someone dear or lost, the short brief lines give way for clear imagery though the whole atmosphere remains dream like, I enjoyed the read!
April 8th, 2025 09:14
MY BURNING TOWER
Ellen Marsell said:
An elegant, vivid poem in the tradition of the purest love lyrics. Beautiful!
April 8th, 2025 06:15
Ellen Marsell said:
An elegant, vivid poem in the tradition of the purest love lyrics. Beautiful!
April 8th, 2025 06:15
MY BURNING TOWER
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting and enjoyable write, is the burning tower the heart?, or am I way of sink here, enjoyed the read
April 8th, 2025 06:03
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting and enjoyable write, is the burning tower the heart?, or am I way of sink here, enjoyed the read
April 8th, 2025 06:03
MY BURNING TOWER
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor here of a burning tower. A guide, a passion what ever the burning might be it leads through the poem to the end. Very nice
April 8th, 2025 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor here of a burning tower. A guide, a passion what ever the burning might be it leads through the poem to the end. Very nice
April 8th, 2025 04:32
GHOSTLIKE
Teddy.15 said:
I love this theme. I am sensitive to weirdness of supernatural. 🌹
April 7th, 2025 12:42
Teddy.15 said:
I love this theme. I am sensitive to weirdness of supernatural. 🌹
April 7th, 2025 12:42
GHOSTLIKE
sorenbarrett said:
Have felt that before as I feel it now. A most haunting poem. Lovely
April 7th, 2025 03:48
sorenbarrett said:
Have felt that before as I feel it now. A most haunting poem. Lovely
April 7th, 2025 03:48
BUTTERFLY
sorenbarrett said:
If we could only keep that innocence and nonprejudicial view into adulthood how much different our race would be. A lovely poem
April 6th, 2025 06:18
sorenbarrett said:
If we could only keep that innocence and nonprejudicial view into adulthood how much different our race would be. A lovely poem
April 6th, 2025 06:18
BUTTERFLY
Poetic Licence said:
Seeing things through a childs eye would help us, they see the world naturally, in an honest and innocent way, we need to hope for them their will be a better future, enjoyed the read
April 6th, 2025 04:41
Poetic Licence said:
Seeing things through a childs eye would help us, they see the world naturally, in an honest and innocent way, we need to hope for them their will be a better future, enjoyed the read
April 6th, 2025 04:41
THE RIVER
sorenbarrett said:
So many metaphors flow through this poem that it is easy to miss one. Nicely done
April 5th, 2025 05:44
sorenbarrett said:
So many metaphors flow through this poem that it is easy to miss one. Nicely done
April 5th, 2025 05:44
ANGELIC
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written with good meter it flows like honey and with nice rhyme
April 4th, 2025 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written with good meter it flows like honey and with nice rhyme
April 4th, 2025 04:25
VIELLE RUELLES
sorenbarrett said:
Lingering memories lit the aftertaste of coffee are part of this poem. Very nicely written leaving a sense of nostalgia.
April 3rd, 2025 03:24
sorenbarrett said:
Lingering memories lit the aftertaste of coffee are part of this poem. Very nicely written leaving a sense of nostalgia.
April 3rd, 2025 03:24
DREAMER
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderfully written description of a fading dream, very relatable, enjoyed the read
April 2nd, 2025 04:50
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderfully written description of a fading dream, very relatable, enjoyed the read
April 2nd, 2025 04:50
DREAMER
sorenbarrett said:
(The fiery tail of a fading dream) a great opening and line. A wonderful poem full of great imagery. Nicely done
April 2nd, 2025 03:32
sorenbarrett said:
(The fiery tail of a fading dream) a great opening and line. A wonderful poem full of great imagery. Nicely done
April 2nd, 2025 03:32
THE CALM BEFORE
sorenbarrett said:
Suicide is a most serious thing being a one way street with no return it also affects others and may be seen as a selfish act but in some cases may be warranted such as intractable chronic pain in terminal disease and even this people argue. A very serious subject that does not get enough discussion.
April 1st, 2025 05:00
sorenbarrett said:
Suicide is a most serious thing being a one way street with no return it also affects others and may be seen as a selfish act but in some cases may be warranted such as intractable chronic pain in terminal disease and even this people argue. A very serious subject that does not get enough discussion.
April 1st, 2025 05:00
THE CALM BEFORE
Poetic Licence said:
A very poignant and touching write around a sensitive subject, that in today\'s world is dramatically on the increase, nicely expressed and written
April 1st, 2025 03:33
Poetic Licence said:
A very poignant and touching write around a sensitive subject, that in today\'s world is dramatically on the increase, nicely expressed and written
April 1st, 2025 03:33
A GENTLE SOUL
Poetic Licence said:
Just casually travelling the journey of life, enjoyed the read
March 31st, 2025 05:42
Poetic Licence said:
Just casually travelling the journey of life, enjoyed the read
March 31st, 2025 05:42
A GENTLE SOUL
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feel of drifting in this poem where the gentle soul passively floats through life. There is a melancholic feel to this piece. Lovely
March 31st, 2025 04:54
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feel of drifting in this poem where the gentle soul passively floats through life. There is a melancholic feel to this piece. Lovely
March 31st, 2025 04:54
GENOCIDE
sorenbarrett said:
Somber and dark this poem speaks of the shadow cast by memory of the past. Well written
March 30th, 2025 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
Somber and dark this poem speaks of the shadow cast by memory of the past. Well written
March 30th, 2025 04:27
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