Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)
DISTANT
orchidee said:
Good write N.
You hearing the distant sound of the No.7 bus approaching?!
April 5th, 2026 03:27
orchidee said:
Good write N.
You hearing the distant sound of the No.7 bus approaching?!
April 5th, 2026 03:27
THE PATH THAT NO ONE WALKS
Goldfinch60 said:
Obviously The Road Not Taken Norman, Robert Frost knew all about that one. Fine words.
Andy
April 5th, 2026 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Obviously The Road Not Taken Norman, Robert Frost knew all about that one. Fine words.
Andy
April 5th, 2026 01:11
THE PATH THAT NO ONE WALKS
sorenbarrett said:
Norman I think that most children had such a house in their childhood neighborhood. We did but also a metaphor for alienation as we age. Nicely written it presents vivid images and leaves a feel of loneliness. Very nicely written
April 4th, 2026 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
Norman I think that most children had such a house in their childhood neighborhood. We did but also a metaphor for alienation as we age. Nicely written it presents vivid images and leaves a feel of loneliness. Very nicely written
April 4th, 2026 04:05
THE PATH THAT NO ONE WALKS
orchidee said:
Thank you N. Or would we like to look inside - atmospheric, nostalgic, curious, etc? We\'ve an old house a couple of miles from us, all disused now.
And - does the No.4 bus route go near that house?! lol.
April 4th, 2026 02:31
orchidee said:
Thank you N. Or would we like to look inside - atmospheric, nostalgic, curious, etc? We\'ve an old house a couple of miles from us, all disused now.
And - does the No.4 bus route go near that house?! lol.
April 4th, 2026 02:31
THE HANGOVER BY TOULOUSE LAUTREC
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words about a very intriguing artwork Norman.
Andy
April 4th, 2026 01:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words about a very intriguing artwork Norman.
Andy
April 4th, 2026 01:15
THE HANGOVER BY TOULOUSE LAUTREC
sorenbarrett said:
Such a wonderful casting of mood and setting in this piece all set to good rhyme. Nicely done Norman
April 3rd, 2026 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
Such a wonderful casting of mood and setting in this piece all set to good rhyme. Nicely done Norman
April 3rd, 2026 03:58
SO QUIET
sorenbarrett said:
This poem to me speaks of how little things can stimulate past memories and feelings. Nicely written
April 2nd, 2026 04:28
sorenbarrett said:
This poem to me speaks of how little things can stimulate past memories and feelings. Nicely written
April 2nd, 2026 04:28
SO QUIET
orchidee said:
Good write N. BOO!! I turned up and shattered the silence! Do ya hear me yelling?! lol.
April 2nd, 2026 02:16
orchidee said:
Good write N. BOO!! I turned up and shattered the silence! Do ya hear me yelling?! lol.
April 2nd, 2026 02:16
LOVES DYING DAYS
orchidee said:
Good write N. I wish I hadn\'t got that No.7 bus. Someone sitting in front of me had some awful pongy food he was eating. I\'m gonna be sick! lol.
April 1st, 2026 10:06
orchidee said:
Good write N. I wish I hadn\'t got that No.7 bus. Someone sitting in front of me had some awful pongy food he was eating. I\'m gonna be sick! lol.
April 1st, 2026 10:06
LOVES DYING DAYS
Katie B. said:
Well written. Difficult subject handled with care.
April 1st, 2026 09:44
Katie B. said:
Well written. Difficult subject handled with care.
April 1st, 2026 09:44
LOVES DYING DAYS
sorenbarrett said:
Norman this poem casts a solemn shadow using personification and maybe animism it speaks of love that has died. Well written with good rhyme it is most poetic.
April 1st, 2026 03:57
sorenbarrett said:
Norman this poem casts a solemn shadow using personification and maybe animism it speaks of love that has died. Well written with good rhyme it is most poetic.
April 1st, 2026 03:57
AT DAWNS ATTACK
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true and very sad words Norman, why can we not stop fighting in this world, love does exist and it should be for all.
Andy
April 1st, 2026 01:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true and very sad words Norman, why can we not stop fighting in this world, love does exist and it should be for all.
Andy
April 1st, 2026 01:05
IF I WERE TO FORGET
NafisaSB said:
it seems it still lives in your memory very vividly...
April 1st, 2026 00:21
NafisaSB said:
it seems it still lives in your memory very vividly...
April 1st, 2026 00:21
AT DAWNS ATTACK
arqios said:
The home front is also affected by those that return broken and the absence of those that will never come home. Most moved, Norman🕊️🙏🏻
March 31st, 2026 06:56
arqios said:
The home front is also affected by those that return broken and the absence of those that will never come home. Most moved, Norman🕊️🙏🏻
March 31st, 2026 06:56
AT DAWNS ATTACK
sorenbarrett said:
The horrors of war portrayed in this poem of battle. And so it is with any war physical or otherwise it takes casualties. ,Nicely written in good rhyme it pulls the reader along from line to line in an advance from from trench to trench. Well penned
March 31st, 2026 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
The horrors of war portrayed in this poem of battle. And so it is with any war physical or otherwise it takes casualties. ,Nicely written in good rhyme it pulls the reader along from line to line in an advance from from trench to trench. Well penned
March 31st, 2026 04:11
AT DAWNS ATTACK
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Is it a battle to catch that bus? Are you getting the No.14 bus today?! lol.
March 31st, 2026 02:09
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Is it a battle to catch that bus? Are you getting the No.14 bus today?! lol.
March 31st, 2026 02:09
WORDS I DID NOT SAY
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words are still within your mind Norman and one day you will say them.
Andy
March 31st, 2026 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words are still within your mind Norman and one day you will say them.
Andy
March 31st, 2026 01:21
WORDS I DID NOT SAY
orchidee said:
Good write N. Will you know the words that you didn\'t say? If you speak them, you will have said them! lol.
March 30th, 2026 10:41
orchidee said:
Good write N. Will you know the words that you didn\'t say? If you speak them, you will have said them! lol.
March 30th, 2026 10:41
WORDS I DID NOT SAY
arqios said:
Sounds like regret or was it more a scent of misgiving? Time will tell. Thanks for the thought provoking, Norman🙏🏻🕊️
March 30th, 2026 07:56
arqios said:
Sounds like regret or was it more a scent of misgiving? Time will tell. Thanks for the thought provoking, Norman🙏🏻🕊️
March 30th, 2026 07:56
WORDS I DID NOT SAY
sorenbarrett said:
Failure to act as much an error as acting wrongly. Well written in this poem
March 30th, 2026 03:45
sorenbarrett said:
Failure to act as much an error as acting wrongly. Well written in this poem
March 30th, 2026 03:45
SILENCE TO CALL
Goldfinch60 said:
We will be waiting for you outside that door Norman and will bring joy to you.
Andy
March 30th, 2026 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
We will be waiting for you outside that door Norman and will bring joy to you.
Andy
March 30th, 2026 01:13
SILENCE TO CALL
sorenbarrett said:
Although this poem can be taken as one of physical isolation from others it seems more to me a poem of mental isolation where one withdraws within. It ends more hopefully with a promise to reach outside and rejoin the world and forget the loneliness and isolation inside. Very nicely done
March 29th, 2026 05:21
sorenbarrett said:
Although this poem can be taken as one of physical isolation from others it seems more to me a poem of mental isolation where one withdraws within. It ends more hopefully with a promise to reach outside and rejoin the world and forget the loneliness and isolation inside. Very nicely done
March 29th, 2026 05:21
SILENCE TO CALL
orchidee said:
Good write N. Erm, how did you get in if no windows and no door! lol.
March 29th, 2026 03:19
orchidee said:
Good write N. Erm, how did you get in if no windows and no door! lol.
March 29th, 2026 03:19
AT ETERNITYS GATE BY VAN GOGH
Goldfinch60 said:
That eternity will be there for us all Norman but hopefully we will reach it in a happy state.
Andy
March 29th, 2026 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
That eternity will be there for us all Norman but hopefully we will reach it in a happy state.
Andy
March 29th, 2026 01:14
MERELY MEMORY
NafisaSB said:
Yes life is transitory and you have explained this beautifully 👌
March 29th, 2026 00:43
NafisaSB said:
Yes life is transitory and you have explained this beautifully 👌
March 29th, 2026 00:43
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