Comments received on poems by nephilim56
TOWN
arqios said:
Brings me to memories of expeditions in urban exploration. Our urban centres are in various states and conditions. It could be a mirror of ourselves if seen epithet open and honest eyes. 🙏🏻🕊
March 4th, 2025 06:49
arqios said:
Brings me to memories of expeditions in urban exploration. Our urban centres are in various states and conditions. It could be a mirror of ourselves if seen epithet open and honest eyes. 🙏🏻🕊
March 4th, 2025 06:49
TOWN
sorenbarrett said:
Literally a description of urban decay and metaphorically this might be a description of a person. Haunting and leaving a feeling of isolation and decay. A sad poem well done.
March 4th, 2025 04:50
sorenbarrett said:
Literally a description of urban decay and metaphorically this might be a description of a person. Haunting and leaving a feeling of isolation and decay. A sad poem well done.
March 4th, 2025 04:50
DEPARTURE
Poetic Licence said:
A poignant write around how easily people are left and forgotten, especially the returning military, well written piece
March 3rd, 2025 06:09
Poetic Licence said:
A poignant write around how easily people are left and forgotten, especially the returning military, well written piece
March 3rd, 2025 06:09
DEPARTURE
sorenbarrett said:
It may be an individual but it is also a metaphor for all the veterans returned that go forgotten and unnoticed. A sad and unfortunately true tale. Well written
March 3rd, 2025 05:37
sorenbarrett said:
It may be an individual but it is also a metaphor for all the veterans returned that go forgotten and unnoticed. A sad and unfortunately true tale. Well written
March 3rd, 2025 05:37
BRIGHTON BEACH
Poetic Licence said:
Remembering the family, while defending the nation,touching and poignant, where was the sand, I have never seen any, enjoyed the read
March 2nd, 2025 05:53
Poetic Licence said:
Remembering the family, while defending the nation,touching and poignant, where was the sand, I have never seen any, enjoyed the read
March 2nd, 2025 05:53
FREE
Poetic Licence said:
The freedom of nature and the positive effects it can have on us, lovely read
March 1st, 2025 06:27
Poetic Licence said:
The freedom of nature and the positive effects it can have on us, lovely read
March 1st, 2025 06:27
FREE
sorenbarrett said:
Although in metaphor more, in the literal it reminded me of camping trips I made in my youth and the places I slept. Very nicely done
March 1st, 2025 05:27
sorenbarrett said:
Although in metaphor more, in the literal it reminded me of camping trips I made in my youth and the places I slept. Very nicely done
March 1st, 2025 05:27
ANOTHER MILE
Poetic Licence said:
The best memories can become even better as time passes by, enjoyed the read
February 28th, 2025 07:46
Poetic Licence said:
The best memories can become even better as time passes by, enjoyed the read
February 28th, 2025 07:46
ANOTHER MILE
arqios said:
Sweet memories can grow sweeter through the years 🙏🏻🕊
February 28th, 2025 07:14
arqios said:
Sweet memories can grow sweeter through the years 🙏🏻🕊
February 28th, 2025 07:14
ANOTHER MILE
sorenbarrett said:
Memory fades slowly and once imprinted carries its mark. A wistful and nostalgic write that pulls at the heart. Lovely
February 28th, 2025 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
Memory fades slowly and once imprinted carries its mark. A wistful and nostalgic write that pulls at the heart. Lovely
February 28th, 2025 04:25
NIGHTMARE
Poetic Licence said:
The ongoing dance with ever present nightmares, nicely expressed
February 27th, 2025 07:58
Poetic Licence said:
The ongoing dance with ever present nightmares, nicely expressed
February 27th, 2025 07:58
NIGHTMARE
sorenbarrett said:
This seems to me a commentary on nightmares itself. Metaphor and more. nicely done
February 27th, 2025 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
This seems to me a commentary on nightmares itself. Metaphor and more. nicely done
February 27th, 2025 04:42
THE BIGGEST KILLER
Poetic Licence said:
A painful and sad write to read, but a very valid one as it is on the increase, have been there and it\'s an awful place to be, nicely expressed and written
February 26th, 2025 08:40
Poetic Licence said:
A painful and sad write to read, but a very valid one as it is on the increase, have been there and it\'s an awful place to be, nicely expressed and written
February 26th, 2025 08:40
THE BIGGEST KILLER
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and sad a tragic flash of memory described before a suicide. Well done
February 26th, 2025 06:33
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and sad a tragic flash of memory described before a suicide. Well done
February 26th, 2025 06:33
THE BIGGEST KILLER
arqios said:
Feeling that there are no choices left is the worst confrontation to face. Been there. 🙏🏻🕊
February 26th, 2025 05:56
arqios said:
Feeling that there are no choices left is the worst confrontation to face. Been there. 🙏🏻🕊
February 26th, 2025 05:56
THREAT OF SNOW
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write, children just want to be children, free from threat and free to play, enjoyed the read
February 25th, 2025 06:48
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write, children just want to be children, free from threat and free to play, enjoyed the read
February 25th, 2025 06:48
THREAT OF SNOW
sorenbarrett said:
Children do not heed threats. A lovely write and full of metaphor as well. Nicely done
February 25th, 2025 05:58
sorenbarrett said:
Children do not heed threats. A lovely write and full of metaphor as well. Nicely done
February 25th, 2025 05:58
BETWEEN
RSM0812 said:
Great write. We all can empathize with familiar memories like this. I really liked this piece. Thanks.
February 25th, 2025 00:02
RSM0812 said:
Great write. We all can empathize with familiar memories like this. I really liked this piece. Thanks.
February 25th, 2025 00:02
BETWEEN
sorenbarrett said:
Oh this is lovely, it is haunting and nostalgic. It has such a feel to it that has no word a longing and a sadness. If I were to go to another language I would say Saudade fits best. A word that has no direct translation. But it seems to fit better than any other. A definite fave
February 24th, 2025 11:13
sorenbarrett said:
Oh this is lovely, it is haunting and nostalgic. It has such a feel to it that has no word a longing and a sadness. If I were to go to another language I would say Saudade fits best. A word that has no direct translation. But it seems to fit better than any other. A definite fave
February 24th, 2025 11:13
EMMA ( 1986 )
sorenbarrett said:
Tender is the word that comes to mind, sweet too, Memories of my daughters as infants returns and a paternal feel erupts in the breast. Lovely simply lovely a touching poem of parenthood. Well written
February 23rd, 2025 05:48
sorenbarrett said:
Tender is the word that comes to mind, sweet too, Memories of my daughters as infants returns and a paternal feel erupts in the breast. Lovely simply lovely a touching poem of parenthood. Well written
February 23rd, 2025 05:48
THE OLD NOTE
Poetic Licence said:
The note brought back sad memories of loss, nicely expressed in this well written piece
February 22nd, 2025 06:21
Poetic Licence said:
The note brought back sad memories of loss, nicely expressed in this well written piece
February 22nd, 2025 06:21
THE OLD NOTE
arqios said:
Beautiful! I loved finding old notes and written stuff in various nooks of the old ancestral home, when it was still around… almost as fun as taking a ride on a true to life time machine 🙏🏻🕊
February 22nd, 2025 05:54
arqios said:
Beautiful! I loved finding old notes and written stuff in various nooks of the old ancestral home, when it was still around… almost as fun as taking a ride on a true to life time machine 🙏🏻🕊
February 22nd, 2025 05:54
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