Comments received on poems by nephilim56
SILENT SOLDIER
arqios said:
Quite moving and very resonant. Much respect and honour 👍🏻🕊🙏🏻
January 29th, 2025 07:55
arqios said:
Quite moving and very resonant. Much respect and honour 👍🏻🕊🙏🏻
January 29th, 2025 07:55
SILENT SOLDIER
Poetic Licence said:
A poignant and touching write a soldier prepairing for what he believes is the end, enjoyed the read
January 29th, 2025 04:21
Poetic Licence said:
A poignant and touching write a soldier prepairing for what he believes is the end, enjoyed the read
January 29th, 2025 04:21
SILENT SOLDIER
sorenbarrett said:
In so few words so much said. Loved the short lines giving a sense of urgency, The terseness added to this feel of something comming, The last lines with metaphor send the message clearly. Very well done
January 29th, 2025 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
In so few words so much said. Loved the short lines giving a sense of urgency, The terseness added to this feel of something comming, The last lines with metaphor send the message clearly. Very well done
January 29th, 2025 04:20
WISHES
Cassie58 said:
If some of our wishes come true, we can consider ourselves fortunate. I would imagine there are many coins cast in hopes that don’t materialize. I really liked your poem. It reads beautifully out loud.
January 28th, 2025 15:59
Cassie58 said:
If some of our wishes come true, we can consider ourselves fortunate. I would imagine there are many coins cast in hopes that don’t materialize. I really liked your poem. It reads beautifully out loud.
January 28th, 2025 15:59
WISHES
RSM0812 said:
A lot of people probably can relate to this. Great write.
January 28th, 2025 15:41
RSM0812 said:
A lot of people probably can relate to this. Great write.
January 28th, 2025 15:41
WISHES
sorenbarrett said:
The reason so many play the lottery and I guess we all do in the journey of life. Very nicely written in verse
January 28th, 2025 06:52
sorenbarrett said:
The reason so many play the lottery and I guess we all do in the journey of life. Very nicely written in verse
January 28th, 2025 06:52
WISHES
arqios said:
Oh if only all those wishes thrived…. but then again on second thought not all our wishes are for our or others’ good. Provocative poem! Quite enjoyed 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
January 28th, 2025 05:14
arqios said:
Oh if only all those wishes thrived…. but then again on second thought not all our wishes are for our or others’ good. Provocative poem! Quite enjoyed 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
January 28th, 2025 05:14
WISHES
Poetic Licence said:
They say if we have nothing to wish or dream for, then what is the point, maybe why we hang on to them, enjoyed the read.
January 28th, 2025 04:30
Poetic Licence said:
They say if we have nothing to wish or dream for, then what is the point, maybe why we hang on to them, enjoyed the read.
January 28th, 2025 04:30
CLASSLESS
sorenbarrett said:
And so it has always been. A great write with a good point
January 27th, 2025 18:15
sorenbarrett said:
And so it has always been. A great write with a good point
January 27th, 2025 18:15
CLASSLESS
Poetic Licence said:
wrongly It has always been not what you know, who you know that matters, enjoyed the read
January 27th, 2025 16:45
Poetic Licence said:
wrongly It has always been not what you know, who you know that matters, enjoyed the read
January 27th, 2025 16:45
MY DAD
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Heart felt message about loss. I am deeply sorry for yours.
January 27th, 2025 13:56
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Heart felt message about loss. I am deeply sorry for yours.
January 27th, 2025 13:56
MORE
arqios said:
So much more is the invite to both enjoy this moment and prepare for those yet to come 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
January 26th, 2025 07:21
arqios said:
So much more is the invite to both enjoy this moment and prepare for those yet to come 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
January 26th, 2025 07:21
MORE
sorenbarrett said:
A recognition of nature\'s beauty and grandure. Very nicely said in most poetic form
January 26th, 2025 05:48
sorenbarrett said:
A recognition of nature\'s beauty and grandure. Very nicely said in most poetic form
January 26th, 2025 05:48
BLUE
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A soulful poem with poignant feel abd compassion all in one.
Kudos for expeessing superbly!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
January 25th, 2025 06:30
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A soulful poem with poignant feel abd compassion all in one.
Kudos for expeessing superbly!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
January 25th, 2025 06:30
BLUE
arqios said:
Sometimes it’s only a while that we’ve got and when we take it all the untoward melts and is forgot! 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 20th, 2025 22:22
arqios said:
Sometimes it’s only a while that we’ve got and when we take it all the untoward melts and is forgot! 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 20th, 2025 22:22
BLUE
sorenbarrett said:
Separation and hope or reunion themes in this poem that is written in good verse. Nicely done
January 20th, 2025 17:01
sorenbarrett said:
Separation and hope or reunion themes in this poem that is written in good verse. Nicely done
January 20th, 2025 17:01
PAIN
sorenbarrett said:
Poor self esteem can lead to feelings of being looked down on and feeling odd. In this poem pain leads to anxiety and wandering the streets feeling the object of other\'s eyes and out of place and withdrawal is seen as the only recourse. Well written with good rhyme.
January 15th, 2025 10:30
sorenbarrett said:
Poor self esteem can lead to feelings of being looked down on and feeling odd. In this poem pain leads to anxiety and wandering the streets feeling the object of other\'s eyes and out of place and withdrawal is seen as the only recourse. Well written with good rhyme.
January 15th, 2025 10:30
SUMMER HAZE
arqios said:
Very relatable and moving! How some people seem to vanish and leave the heart wanting and longing. 🙏🏻🕊
January 13th, 2025 06:56
arqios said:
Very relatable and moving! How some people seem to vanish and leave the heart wanting and longing. 🙏🏻🕊
January 13th, 2025 06:56
SUMMER HAZE
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of longing for what has gone and i feel a sense of wondering why, a touching and sensitive write
January 13th, 2025 05:52
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of longing for what has gone and i feel a sense of wondering why, a touching and sensitive write
January 13th, 2025 05:52
SUMMER HAZE
sorenbarrett said:
Haunting in feel aswell as longing. It reads with an unfinished ending and this is as it should be. A most delicate and fragil wirte the leaves a broken feeling. Lovely
January 13th, 2025 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
Haunting in feel aswell as longing. It reads with an unfinished ending and this is as it should be. A most delicate and fragil wirte the leaves a broken feeling. Lovely
January 13th, 2025 04:51
STREETLIGHT
Poetic Licence said:
Has a lovely feel to the writing, enjoyed the read
January 12th, 2025 05:34
Poetic Licence said:
Has a lovely feel to the writing, enjoyed the read
January 12th, 2025 05:34
STREETLIGHT
arqios said:
Liking the shape of this poem and the contemplative and atmospheric feel, almost like an embrace. Thanks for sharing. 👍🕊️
January 12th, 2025 05:00
arqios said:
Liking the shape of this poem and the contemplative and atmospheric feel, almost like an embrace. Thanks for sharing. 👍🕊️
January 12th, 2025 05:00
STREETLIGHT
sorenbarrett said:
You have set the scene well and I feel that I have been there, in fact am sure I have. I feel that I am there now and from here were do I proceed? Nicely written
January 12th, 2025 04:53
sorenbarrett said:
You have set the scene well and I feel that I have been there, in fact am sure I have. I feel that I am there now and from here were do I proceed? Nicely written
January 12th, 2025 04:53
JIM
arqios said:
Brings it home for me. Many of my relatives served at the frontlines in all the conflicts that I know of, from WWI to the present. It’s tough for their families as well, if they don’t turn their backs on them. Thanks for sharing.
January 11th, 2025 07:50
arqios said:
Brings it home for me. Many of my relatives served at the frontlines in all the conflicts that I know of, from WWI to the present. It’s tough for their families as well, if they don’t turn their backs on them. Thanks for sharing.
January 11th, 2025 07:50
JIM
sorenbarrett said:
Post traumatic stress disorder from trauma lived is a devastating and debilitating disability. Here you paint the picture well.
January 11th, 2025 05:09
sorenbarrett said:
Post traumatic stress disorder from trauma lived is a devastating and debilitating disability. Here you paint the picture well.
January 11th, 2025 05:09
JIM
Poetic Licence said:
This gives me the impression it is a haunting and touch poem of the ongoing struggles of a Ex Soldier, reliving all the nightmares he has seen in real life. Well written
January 11th, 2025 05:00
Poetic Licence said:
This gives me the impression it is a haunting and touch poem of the ongoing struggles of a Ex Soldier, reliving all the nightmares he has seen in real life. Well written
January 11th, 2025 05:00
LOVE DYING
arqios said:
No matter how much we prepare and anticipate, it strikes just as heavily. 🙏🏻🕊
January 10th, 2025 07:29
arqios said:
No matter how much we prepare and anticipate, it strikes just as heavily. 🙏🏻🕊
January 10th, 2025 07:29
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