Comments received on poems by nephilim56
GOODBYE FRIEND
sorenbarrett said:
Saying goodbye is a difficult thing sometimes but less so if we feel that the other is going to a good place. This poem speaks of this. Nicely written
April 25th, 2025 03:57
sorenbarrett said:
Saying goodbye is a difficult thing sometimes but less so if we feel that the other is going to a good place. This poem speaks of this. Nicely written
April 25th, 2025 03:57
GOODBYE FRIEND
Midnight Lasagna said:
Oh how I hope my loved ones are in a gentle place. This was touching. Im sorry for your loss.
April 25th, 2025 01:54
Midnight Lasagna said:
Oh how I hope my loved ones are in a gentle place. This was touching. Im sorry for your loss.
April 25th, 2025 01:54
OVER THE TOP
Tony Grannell said:
\'Over the Top\', I presume you are alluding to, World War One. An absolute senseless war and how you have expressed it in this splendid is most admirable, especially so: \'The same lips/ which kissed/ His wife, his child/ his mother\' - a beautiful poetic sorrow. Congratulations on this very fine poem.
Kind regards,
Tony.
April 24th, 2025 15:21
Tony Grannell said:
\'Over the Top\', I presume you are alluding to, World War One. An absolute senseless war and how you have expressed it in this splendid is most admirable, especially so: \'The same lips/ which kissed/ His wife, his child/ his mother\' - a beautiful poetic sorrow. Congratulations on this very fine poem.
Kind regards,
Tony.
April 24th, 2025 15:21
OVER THE TOP
sorenbarrett said:
Anti war? Me too. This poem puts it all out there the stupidity and lunacy of war when there is so much to live for. A powerful write
April 24th, 2025 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
Anti war? Me too. This poem puts it all out there the stupidity and lunacy of war when there is so much to live for. A powerful write
April 24th, 2025 04:38
ROBINS IN WINTER
RSM0812 said:
This was nicely done with great imagery and rhyme. One of my favorites today for sure.
April 23rd, 2025 06:38
RSM0812 said:
This was nicely done with great imagery and rhyme. One of my favorites today for sure.
April 23rd, 2025 06:38
IF TODAY HAD BEEN YESTERDAY
thinkerbell said:
A great poem about past atrocities and where the world could be heading in the future
April 23rd, 2025 06:35
thinkerbell said:
A great poem about past atrocities and where the world could be heading in the future
April 23rd, 2025 06:35
THE OLD PORTRAIT
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful poem of times lost in the past and forgotten as are its people with only an old photo as a remembrance. I remember years ago finding a box of old photos at my grandmothers house from the 1800\'s and many of the faces were unrecognizable as to who they were. No one living remembered them now just ghosts in picture format. A fave
April 23rd, 2025 05:14
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful poem of times lost in the past and forgotten as are its people with only an old photo as a remembrance. I remember years ago finding a box of old photos at my grandmothers house from the 1800\'s and many of the faces were unrecognizable as to who they were. No one living remembered them now just ghosts in picture format. A fave
April 23rd, 2025 05:14
YOU AND ME
sorenbarrett said:
Lost in the chaos of the past not to be found in the present. A poem that speaks of regret. So well written.
April 22nd, 2025 05:05
sorenbarrett said:
Lost in the chaos of the past not to be found in the present. A poem that speaks of regret. So well written.
April 22nd, 2025 05:05
IF TODAY HAD BEEN YESTERDAY
teardrop said:
So true. My mind watched this happening as i read it which makes this a perfect write. Good job poet.
April 21st, 2025 04:45
teardrop said:
So true. My mind watched this happening as i read it which makes this a perfect write. Good job poet.
April 21st, 2025 04:45
IF TODAY HAD BEEN YESTERDAY
sorenbarrett said:
This poem holds a deep metaphor. Although so pertinent to war and nations it also applies to individuals. Animals of the moment and false at heart, who is lover today is victim of a passion crime tomorrow, Allies today enemies tomorrow. Yet the people do not change only the momentary needs, driven by greed and lust. A powerful poem of the human condition or lack there of. A fave
April 21st, 2025 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
This poem holds a deep metaphor. Although so pertinent to war and nations it also applies to individuals. Animals of the moment and false at heart, who is lover today is victim of a passion crime tomorrow, Allies today enemies tomorrow. Yet the people do not change only the momentary needs, driven by greed and lust. A powerful poem of the human condition or lack there of. A fave
April 21st, 2025 04:33
IF TODAY HAD BEEN YESTERDAY
arqios said:
Majestic expression and exploration🙏🏻🕊️
April 21st, 2025 02:51
arqios said:
Majestic expression and exploration🙏🏻🕊️
April 21st, 2025 02:51
THE EARTH IS CRYING
David Wakeling said:
This certainly has all the headlines here. I guess we need to work harder to improve things
April 20th, 2025 05:15
David Wakeling said:
This certainly has all the headlines here. I guess we need to work harder to improve things
April 20th, 2025 05:15
THE EARTH IS CRYING
sorenbarrett said:
It is sad and a shameful commentary on man the way he treats his environment. This is voiced in this poem well written.
April 20th, 2025 05:08
sorenbarrett said:
It is sad and a shameful commentary on man the way he treats his environment. This is voiced in this poem well written.
April 20th, 2025 05:08
SOUL
rrodriguez said:
Intriguing poem. Is it metaphorical? Laced with mystery. Read it twice. It has a rhythmic quality to it. Interesting write!
April 19th, 2025 14:06
rrodriguez said:
Intriguing poem. Is it metaphorical? Laced with mystery. Read it twice. It has a rhythmic quality to it. Interesting write!
April 19th, 2025 14:06
ROBINS IN WINTER
Sunshinefalling said:
That was good. Made me feel very sad. You captured that moment very well.
April 19th, 2025 05:53
Sunshinefalling said:
That was good. Made me feel very sad. You captured that moment very well.
April 19th, 2025 05:53
STAYING WITH THE DEAD
sorenbarrett said:
A graphic and powerful statement in this poem that speaks to the horrors of war and what little is accomplished by it. Very well written
April 19th, 2025 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
A graphic and powerful statement in this poem that speaks to the horrors of war and what little is accomplished by it. Very well written
April 19th, 2025 03:58
ROBINS IN WINTER
arqios said:
Quite the saddest state wherein the normal state of affairs of us outliving our young. Deeply felt write🙏🏻🕊️
April 18th, 2025 06:55
arqios said:
Quite the saddest state wherein the normal state of affairs of us outliving our young. Deeply felt write🙏🏻🕊️
April 18th, 2025 06:55
STONE IN MY BOOT
teardrop said:
I picked this poem to read because of the title. I;m glad I did! Great write!!
April 18th, 2025 05:31
teardrop said:
I picked this poem to read because of the title. I;m glad I did! Great write!!
April 18th, 2025 05:31
ROBINS IN WINTER
Poetic Licence said:
The loss of any child is a tragedy let alone if it is your own, sometimes that feeling of loss can be felt as your child grows and becomes a different person as well, nicely expressed and written
April 18th, 2025 04:58
Poetic Licence said:
The loss of any child is a tragedy let alone if it is your own, sometimes that feeling of loss can be felt as your child grows and becomes a different person as well, nicely expressed and written
April 18th, 2025 04:58
ROBINS IN WINTER
sorenbarrett said:
In the literal this is a parents worst nightmare. The poem well written with meter carrying us on. Here also is a metaphor where the loss can be the growing up of the child and their leaving of the nest a symbolic death to the parent. This too can be a difficult time. A poem well written
April 18th, 2025 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
In the literal this is a parents worst nightmare. The poem well written with meter carrying us on. Here also is a metaphor where the loss can be the growing up of the child and their leaving of the nest a symbolic death to the parent. This too can be a difficult time. A poem well written
April 18th, 2025 04:19
STONE IN MY BOOT
Poetic Licence said:
How sometimes we focus and worry on the smallest of things when there are much more important things going on, enjoyed the read
April 17th, 2025 06:10
Poetic Licence said:
How sometimes we focus and worry on the smallest of things when there are much more important things going on, enjoyed the read
April 17th, 2025 06:10
STONE IN MY BOOT
sorenbarrett said:
Small things that can distract from the bigger things in life. For the want of a nail so to speak. A lovely piece that deserves contemplation.
April 17th, 2025 04:36
sorenbarrett said:
Small things that can distract from the bigger things in life. For the want of a nail so to speak. A lovely piece that deserves contemplation.
April 17th, 2025 04:36
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