Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)



NEVER LASTS
Vanna said:

I really love this

March 25th, 2026 19:12

NOW WITH HASTE
Vanna said:

Love it

March 25th, 2026 19:08

MERELY MEMORY
Vanna said:

Well done

March 25th, 2026 19:03

MERELY MEMORY
orchidee said:

Good write N. Erm, I remember you. You\'re not just a distant memory - not yet anyway! lol.

March 25th, 2026 04:05

MERELY MEMORY
sorenbarrett said:

A poem that focuses on the temporary nature of our existence and its dream like state. Nicely written

March 25th, 2026 04:02

IF I WERE TO FORGET
Goldfinch60 said:

Those special memories will never be forgotten Norman.

Andy

March 25th, 2026 02:44

IF I WERE TO FORGET
sorenbarrett said:

Romantic and sensual it is also nostalgic and holds somewhere that I can not identify a ting of sadness. Well done and a fave

March 24th, 2026 04:43

IF I WERE TO FORGET
orchidee said:

Good write N. You forgot it yet?! lol.

March 24th, 2026 03:37

FOR YOU I PRAYED
arqios said:

Tears do seem out of place in the brilliantly sunlit summer sky 🙏🏻🕊️

March 23rd, 2026 05:25

FOR YOU I PRAYED
sorenbarrett said:

This speaks of fond and not so fond memories that weld into a life missed and a sense of bitter sweet nostalgia. A wonderful poem and a fave

March 23rd, 2026 04:04

FOR YOU I PRAYED
orchidee said:

A fine write N.

March 23rd, 2026 03:03

FOR YOU I PRAYED
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful tribute Norman..

Andy

March 23rd, 2026 02:56

JULY FIRST 1916
Goldfinch60 said:

Super words Norman about a time when so many died, \" WE WILL REMEMBER THEM\"

Andy

March 23rd, 2026 02:49

JULY FIRST 1916
orchidee said:

A thoughtful write N.

March 22nd, 2026 11:39

JULY FIRST 1916
Doggerel Dave said:

Very real and atmospheric. I was obsessed by the trenches in WW1 once. Keep the memory alive if you have the motivation.

March 22nd, 2026 07:13

JULY FIRST 1916
2781 said:

I read that the soldiers on that first day were volunteers and worked in \"Pals Battalions\"- units made up of family and friends,
Devastating not only families, but whole communities.
God help us, war is brutal, to say the least.

March 22nd, 2026 05:27

JULY FIRST 1916
sorenbarrett said:

Quite a tribute to this battle, the men that died there, gritty and real about a real event now mostly forgotten. Well done Norman

March 22nd, 2026 04:24

THE GOODBYE NOTE
Goldfinch60 said:

Those times and memories often come back to us Norman showing the beauty of our passed lives. Beautiful words.

Andy

March 22nd, 2026 02:19

THE GOODBYE NOTE
Carmen Luca said:

Such a beautiful poem, the breeze carrying someone’s presence is quietly powerful.

March 21st, 2026 08:48

THE GOODBYE NOTE
arqios said:

How many goodbyes have disappeared to the years and then there’s some that remain as if they were just yesterday 🕊️🙏🏻

March 21st, 2026 06:25

THE GOODBYE NOTE
sorenbarrett said:

Most nostalgic of a time that was more innocent, brighter that time has taken away. Nicely written it conveys this well in good rhyme

March 21st, 2026 04:07

THE GOODBYE NOTE
Prachi Dalvi said:

Lovely poem!!

March 21st, 2026 04:04

THE GOODBYE NOTE
orchidee said:

Erm, goodbye - where ya going?! lol.

March 21st, 2026 03:37

THE SILENT OATH
Goldfinch60 said:

We write our words from many ideas and occurrences in our lives Norman, we must keep writing.

Andy

March 21st, 2026 02:22

BORDERS
Vipassana said:

Very nice. I especially like

The silent moon
Its prying eye
Its rounded face
That creeps into
The sleeping place.

March 21st, 2026 01:04

BORDERS
RSM0812 said:

A good read about war and peace and the the snowball effects of bitter vioelence in the world. I thouroughly enjoyed the write ✍️

March 20th, 2026 06:23

THE SILENT OATH
orchidee said:

Good write N. How\'s Costcutters?! lol.

March 20th, 2026 03:52

THE SILENT OATH
sorenbarrett said:

This poem to me speaks of poetry being born out of pain and suffering. Well written

March 20th, 2026 03:52

THE REST IS FATE
RSM0812 said:

Great rhyming skills. A fav for sure.

March 19th, 2026 07:19

BORDERS
sorenbarrett said:

The present has a way of banishing the past. Nostalgia is allowed to visit from time to time. Well done

March 19th, 2026 05:06



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