Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)
SORROW
orchidee said:
Good write N. I never knew ya was so sad about the bus not turning up! lol.
April 21st, 2026 02:28
orchidee said:
Good write N. I never knew ya was so sad about the bus not turning up! lol.
April 21st, 2026 02:28
AN ANGELS PRAYER
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, my friend, this holds a quiet, haunting stillness…like emotion caught in place with no release. That image of frozen tears in marble eyes stays with me…feeling present, yet unable to move. I’ve felt that kind of weight too, where something sits just beneath the surface without escape. This lands as reflective, eerie, and deeply felt. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 20th, 2026 10:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, my friend, this holds a quiet, haunting stillness…like emotion caught in place with no release. That image of frozen tears in marble eyes stays with me…feeling present, yet unable to move. I’ve felt that kind of weight too, where something sits just beneath the surface without escape. This lands as reflective, eerie, and deeply felt. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 20th, 2026 10:30
AN ANGELS PRAYER
orchidee said:
A fine write N. And now a prayer rarely answered - that the bus arrives on time! lol.
April 20th, 2026 08:22
orchidee said:
A fine write N. And now a prayer rarely answered - that the bus arrives on time! lol.
April 20th, 2026 08:22
KNOCK DOWN AND REBUILD
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
Like breaking down oneself and being made new piece by piece. An inspiring write! In my opinion.
April 20th, 2026 07:35
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
Like breaking down oneself and being made new piece by piece. An inspiring write! In my opinion.
April 20th, 2026 07:35
AN ANGELS PRAYER
arqios said:
Ah, I remember that feeling. There have been such angel sightings along my timeline over the years. 🕊️🙏
April 20th, 2026 06:58
arqios said:
Ah, I remember that feeling. There have been such angel sightings along my timeline over the years. 🕊️🙏
April 20th, 2026 06:58
AN ANGELS PRAYER
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely crafted this poem evokes images of a marble work of art. Well done
April 20th, 2026 04:56
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely crafted this poem evokes images of a marble work of art. Well done
April 20th, 2026 04:56
I WILL REMEMBER
Goldfinch60 said:
I too will remember Norman, our memories are so important in our lives.
Andy
April 20th, 2026 00:45
Goldfinch60 said:
I too will remember Norman, our memories are so important in our lives.
Andy
April 20th, 2026 00:45
I WILL REMEMBER
orchidee said:
Good write N. Ahh, you remembered what time the bus arrives. lol.
April 19th, 2026 12:10
orchidee said:
Good write N. Ahh, you remembered what time the bus arrives. lol.
April 19th, 2026 12:10
I WILL REMEMBER
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this carries a steady, quiet strength…like memory itself standing its ground against time. That image of returning from the soil stays with me…loss and renewal wrapped together. I’ve felt that need to remember, even when everything else moves on. This lands as both resistance and hope. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 19th, 2026 09:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this carries a steady, quiet strength…like memory itself standing its ground against time. That image of returning from the soil stays with me…loss and renewal wrapped together. I’ve felt that need to remember, even when everything else moves on. This lands as both resistance and hope. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 19th, 2026 09:08
I WILL REMEMBER
arqios said:
Makes a joint remembrance an essential part of being. Most enjoyed🕊️🙏
April 19th, 2026 06:01
arqios said:
Makes a joint remembrance an essential part of being. Most enjoyed🕊️🙏
April 19th, 2026 06:01
I WILL REMEMBER
Friendship said:
Well said. You painted an image of a flower dying and being reborn, symbolizing the cyclical nature of life and the persistence of memory.
April 19th, 2026 05:15
Friendship said:
Well said. You painted an image of a flower dying and being reborn, symbolizing the cyclical nature of life and the persistence of memory.
April 19th, 2026 05:15
I WILL REMEMBER
sorenbarrett said:
There is something special about this piece that is like an echo from the past a voice into the future that haunts the ear as if eroding stone and leaving one\'s mark it speaks of eternity and the immortality of memory. Well spoken
April 19th, 2026 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
There is something special about this piece that is like an echo from the past a voice into the future that haunts the ear as if eroding stone and leaving one\'s mark it speaks of eternity and the immortality of memory. Well spoken
April 19th, 2026 04:14
A RAINY SKY
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words and images of Nature\'s beauty Norman.
Andy
April 19th, 2026 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words and images of Nature\'s beauty Norman.
Andy
April 19th, 2026 01:13
A RAINY SKY
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this is beautiful…there’s a softness here that just settles in. It feels calm but not empty…like a quiet moment that still holds emotion underneath. Really peaceful read. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 18th, 2026 14:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this is beautiful…there’s a softness here that just settles in. It feels calm but not empty…like a quiet moment that still holds emotion underneath. Really peaceful read. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 18th, 2026 14:25
A RAINY SKY
orchidee said:
Don\'t wait for that bus when there\'s a rainy sky. Did they knock down the shelter cos they thought the bus would never arrive?! lol.
April 18th, 2026 08:43
orchidee said:
Don\'t wait for that bus when there\'s a rainy sky. Did they knock down the shelter cos they thought the bus would never arrive?! lol.
April 18th, 2026 08:43
THE WATERS EDGE
jim56 said:
hi thanks for always lovely comments
means a lot jim
April 18th, 2026 06:32
jim56 said:
hi thanks for always lovely comments
means a lot jim
April 18th, 2026 06:32
THE WATERS EDGE
jim56 said:
hi thanks for always lovely comments
means a lot jim
April 18th, 2026 06:32
jim56 said:
hi thanks for always lovely comments
means a lot jim
April 18th, 2026 06:32
A RAINY SKY
arqios said:
A fave to begin with and periodically return to, dear Norman 🙏🏻🕊️
April 18th, 2026 06:30
arqios said:
A fave to begin with and periodically return to, dear Norman 🙏🏻🕊️
April 18th, 2026 06:30
A RAINY SKY
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful images painted in this poem. Nicely done Norman
April 18th, 2026 05:41
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful images painted in this poem. Nicely done Norman
April 18th, 2026 05:41
KNOCK DOWN AND REBUILD
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this hits with a heavy, grinding force…you can feel the destruction as it unfolds. It doesn’t hold back, and that gives it real weight. Powerful write and, honestly, a fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 17th, 2026 10:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this hits with a heavy, grinding force…you can feel the destruction as it unfolds. It doesn’t hold back, and that gives it real weight. Powerful write and, honestly, a fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 17th, 2026 10:53
KNOCK DOWN AND REBUILD
Abdullah123 said:
great write. very powerfully expressed
April 17th, 2026 10:44
Abdullah123 said:
great write. very powerfully expressed
April 17th, 2026 10:44
KNOCK DOWN AND REBUILD
orchidee said:
Good write N. Ahh, a poem about a bus shelter?! lol.
April 17th, 2026 08:53
orchidee said:
Good write N. Ahh, a poem about a bus shelter?! lol.
April 17th, 2026 08:53
KNOCK DOWN AND REBUILD
Friendship said:
A sad poem, it touches upon themes of memory, the fragility of human life, and the relentless nature of change.
April 17th, 2026 08:14
Friendship said:
A sad poem, it touches upon themes of memory, the fragility of human life, and the relentless nature of change.
April 17th, 2026 08:14
KNOCK DOWN AND REBUILD
Katie B. said:
This must be painful losing your home to destruction most likely due to commercial take over.
Excellent piece. Well written and thought out.
April 17th, 2026 04:40
Katie B. said:
This must be painful losing your home to destruction most likely due to commercial take over.
Excellent piece. Well written and thought out.
April 17th, 2026 04:40
KNOCK DOWN AND REBUILD
sorenbarrett said:
Norman this to me beyond the vivid picture painted of physical destruction is metaphoric of greater destruction where the physical falls in rubble self inflicted by not only neglect but active destruction. It is a sad poem of the activities of man and how what was once beautiful and useful is pulled down. Well written a fave
April 17th, 2026 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
Norman this to me beyond the vivid picture painted of physical destruction is metaphoric of greater destruction where the physical falls in rubble self inflicted by not only neglect but active destruction. It is a sad poem of the activities of man and how what was once beautiful and useful is pulled down. Well written a fave
April 17th, 2026 04:10
HOP SCOTCH
Goldfinch60 said:
We must all play our own games Norman and live for the happiness they give us.
Andy
April 17th, 2026 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
We must all play our own games Norman and live for the happiness they give us.
Andy
April 17th, 2026 01:12
HOP SCOTCH
sorenbarrett said:
I love the balance from old age to young children in this poem and the difference between the two. It is wise but playful it is forgetful but mindful, it is lonely but social
April 16th, 2026 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
I love the balance from old age to young children in this poem and the difference between the two. It is wise but playful it is forgetful but mindful, it is lonely but social
April 16th, 2026 04:03
HOP SCOTCH
orchidee said:
I know it - that bus took so long to arrive that you had time for a game of hopscotch - or ten! lol.
April 16th, 2026 02:15
orchidee said:
I know it - that bus took so long to arrive that you had time for a game of hopscotch - or ten! lol.
April 16th, 2026 02:15
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