Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)



WHEN IS A WAR CRIME NOT A WAR CRIME ?
Demar Desu said:

war crimes exist… this poem is the justice

July 23rd, 2025 05:10

WHEN IS A WAR CRIME NOT A WAR CRIME ?
sorenbarrett said:

Amazing I was working on a poem of the same topic that I will post tomorrow. Well written for reflection and the question is answered in my mind as war itself is a crime. It becomes a redundancy to say both. A good write.

July 23rd, 2025 03:49

ETERNAL MIDNIGHT
sorenbarrett said:

The witching hour, zero hour, dead of night a haunting poem of darkness and time of change. Lovely

July 22nd, 2025 04:19

DADDYS GIRL
Cirawrites01 said:

The end broke me away but it was a nice poem and such bond to cherish coz usually most daughters and fathers dont get it some are messy if you get what I mean.

July 21st, 2025 23:40

DADDYS GIRL
Ellen Marsell said:

So touching. I really liked it.

July 21st, 2025 13:13

REALIST NOT A ROYALIST
RSM0812 said:

A remarkable truth about war. Nice write.

July 21st, 2025 09:06

DADDYS GIRL
Tony36 said:

BRAVO

July 21st, 2025 08:18

DADDYS GIRL
Priya Tomar said:

Heart touching poem

July 21st, 2025 05:09

DADDYS GIRL
sorenbarrett said:

A lovely poem of paternal tie to a daughter. It is soft and tender and touching.

July 21st, 2025 04:07

UNSEEN TEARS
Tony Grannell said:

What a sad farewell lingering in the pain of memories, as if pining for a lost loved one. Beautifully written, not a word out of place - perfect.

Wishing you all the very best,

Tony.

July 20th, 2025 13:24

UNSEEN TEARS
Tony36 said:

BRAVO

July 20th, 2025 13:11

BALCONY
Keeter C said:

Do not look to a man for your salvation

July 20th, 2025 12:09

THE VOTE
Keeter C said:

Also if you are 16 you can vote! Oh England my country’s older brother, I stare across the ocean vast and wonder how long.

July 20th, 2025 08:36

HUNGER WINTER
Keeter C said:

Why does this sound too real?

July 20th, 2025 08:27

UNSEEN TEARS
Priya Tomar said:

Well worded...
Nice poem ...

July 20th, 2025 05:15

UNSEEN TEARS
sorenbarrett said:

Sad, tragic, loss, pain, regret all these come to mind with this poem. A most well written piece.

July 20th, 2025 04:17

ANOTHER DAY OF WAR
Keeter C said:

It’s all
Gonna burn.

July 19th, 2025 16:24

OUT OF DATE
Keeter C said:

Agape love is the way of give this world is the way of get.

July 19th, 2025 09:44

I WAITED FOR YOU
Keeter C said:

Nice imagery

July 19th, 2025 09:35

FOUNTAIN
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

July 19th, 2025 07:17

FOUNTAIN
sorenbarrett said:

Is anything real indeed. Great metaphor in this piece that speaks to the reader about what one can believe. Love itself often a betrayer. Very nicely written a fave

July 19th, 2025 05:35

A MOTHERS GRIEF
ElizabethMoroz said:

Heart wrenching subject matter. Absolutely beautiful and desperately emotional exploration of very sensitive subject matter. Your poetry is profound and beautiful.

July 19th, 2025 04:42

I WAITED FOR YOU
ElizabethMoroz said:

You have a beautiful style, well done. Elizabeth profound and elegant,.

July 18th, 2025 22:24

THE DIRTY STREETS
ElizabethMoroz said:

Multiple themes explored. So very good!!Thankyou for this piece. Elizabeth

July 18th, 2025 22:22

REALIST NOT A ROYALIST
Priya Tomar said:

Very true....
You cleverly criticized priviledged class...

July 18th, 2025 21:17

LITTLE GRANDA
Tony Grannell said:

Eerily endearing, the ghost of love in the form of his grandfather visiting his grandson. A hauntingly beautiful poem and true as well. Well done.

Wishing you all the very best and the little boy, too,

Tony.

July 18th, 2025 14:18

LITTLE GRANDA
Tony36 said:

Really enjoyed it

July 18th, 2025 09:50

THE KILLING OF MR BROWN
Keeter C said:

Also if you’re 16 you can vote! I feel for y’all. What has become of americas older brother? I’m afraid we may follow.

July 18th, 2025 08:37

LITTLE GRANDA
sorenbarrett said:

Hauntingly cute a most fun read. Liked it

July 18th, 2025 04:15

NEVER TOLD
ElizabethMoroz said:

Beautiful imagery and metaphor here and a wonderful very effective excercise in line by line brevity. Gorgeous piece, sincerely Elizabeth

July 18th, 2025 04:07



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