Comments received on poems by nephilim56
ROBINS IN WINTER
Poetic Licence said:
The loss of any child is a tragedy let alone if it is your own, sometimes that feeling of loss can be felt as your child grows and becomes a different person as well, nicely expressed and written
April 18th, 2025 04:58
Poetic Licence said:
The loss of any child is a tragedy let alone if it is your own, sometimes that feeling of loss can be felt as your child grows and becomes a different person as well, nicely expressed and written
April 18th, 2025 04:58
ROBINS IN WINTER
sorenbarrett said:
In the literal this is a parents worst nightmare. The poem well written with meter carrying us on. Here also is a metaphor where the loss can be the growing up of the child and their leaving of the nest a symbolic death to the parent. This too can be a difficult time. A poem well written
April 18th, 2025 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
In the literal this is a parents worst nightmare. The poem well written with meter carrying us on. Here also is a metaphor where the loss can be the growing up of the child and their leaving of the nest a symbolic death to the parent. This too can be a difficult time. A poem well written
April 18th, 2025 04:19
STONE IN MY BOOT
Poetic Licence said:
How sometimes we focus and worry on the smallest of things when there are much more important things going on, enjoyed the read
April 17th, 2025 06:10
Poetic Licence said:
How sometimes we focus and worry on the smallest of things when there are much more important things going on, enjoyed the read
April 17th, 2025 06:10
STONE IN MY BOOT
sorenbarrett said:
Small things that can distract from the bigger things in life. For the want of a nail so to speak. A lovely piece that deserves contemplation.
April 17th, 2025 04:36
sorenbarrett said:
Small things that can distract from the bigger things in life. For the want of a nail so to speak. A lovely piece that deserves contemplation.
April 17th, 2025 04:36
FOOTPRINTS IN THE SNOW
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply metaphoric this poem talks of the price of selling ones trust misplaced. Well written in its careful presentation it sends its message to the listener. Nicely done
April 16th, 2025 05:04
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply metaphoric this poem talks of the price of selling ones trust misplaced. Well written in its careful presentation it sends its message to the listener. Nicely done
April 16th, 2025 05:04
FOOTPRINTS IN THE SNOW
Poetic Licence said:
Beautiful write, when it hurts it\'s so hard to forget, nicely expressed and written
April 16th, 2025 04:44
Poetic Licence said:
Beautiful write, when it hurts it\'s so hard to forget, nicely expressed and written
April 16th, 2025 04:44
SOUL
sorenbarrett said:
Such a beautiful and peaceful image is in this poem it is soft and it lingers in a wistful way. Lovely
April 15th, 2025 04:06
sorenbarrett said:
Such a beautiful and peaceful image is in this poem it is soft and it lingers in a wistful way. Lovely
April 15th, 2025 04:06
RAIN
NafisaSB said:
some enjoy it as droplets from Heaven, and here you have painted it as tears falling from above..
enjoyed the read
April 14th, 2025 23:52
NafisaSB said:
some enjoy it as droplets from Heaven, and here you have painted it as tears falling from above..
enjoyed the read
April 14th, 2025 23:52
ANGELS WEEP
NinjaGirl said:
There\'s a quote \"for those who fought for it, freedom has a flavor the protected will never know.\" Many don\'t blink an eye at a soldier\'s life passing, but the cost of his life is another minute of freedom.
April 14th, 2025 11:07
NinjaGirl said:
There\'s a quote \"for those who fought for it, freedom has a flavor the protected will never know.\" Many don\'t blink an eye at a soldier\'s life passing, but the cost of his life is another minute of freedom.
April 14th, 2025 11:07
ANGELS WEEP
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful antiwar poem and who is not antiwar unless you are making money from it or benefiting politically from it. Well stated and a needed message that continues to go unheard.
April 14th, 2025 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful antiwar poem and who is not antiwar unless you are making money from it or benefiting politically from it. Well stated and a needed message that continues to go unheard.
April 14th, 2025 04:40
WANDERED
Poetic Licence said:
I think that is a lovely way, not leaving just wandering away, it will still hurt and you still long for them, but it sounds so much better, lovely write
April 13th, 2025 05:15
Poetic Licence said:
I think that is a lovely way, not leaving just wandering away, it will still hurt and you still long for them, but it sounds so much better, lovely write
April 13th, 2025 05:15
WANDERED
sorenbarrett said:
Whether a person, love, a season or time itself this poem speaks of loss and in such a wistful manner. Lovely
April 13th, 2025 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
Whether a person, love, a season or time itself this poem speaks of loss and in such a wistful manner. Lovely
April 13th, 2025 04:43
BUTTERFLY
rrodriguez said:
Nicely done! I enjoyed your metaphor of the child and the butterfly, implying the innocence in both. Thank you for sharing.
April 12th, 2025 12:00
rrodriguez said:
Nicely done! I enjoyed your metaphor of the child and the butterfly, implying the innocence in both. Thank you for sharing.
April 12th, 2025 12:00
A BED WITH TWO BLANKETS
Hollow Enigma said:
I swear every single time I come back to this place. I check if my friend here has written something and always he has. But every single time Im swept away by his writing. Great poem nephilim.
April 12th, 2025 05:21
Hollow Enigma said:
I swear every single time I come back to this place. I check if my friend here has written something and always he has. But every single time Im swept away by his writing. Great poem nephilim.
April 12th, 2025 05:21
A BED WITH TWO BLANKETS
sorenbarrett said:
It is the metaphor and careful imaging that gets the fave in this poem it sends a powerful message. So well done in rhyme and good meter. Love it
April 12th, 2025 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
It is the metaphor and careful imaging that gets the fave in this poem it sends a powerful message. So well done in rhyme and good meter. Love it
April 12th, 2025 04:33
THE OLD NORTH CEMETERY
arqios said:
Always loved a good cemetery visit. Hence poems about graveyards 🪦 can be particularly interesting, it’s like a direct line and link to the past; a sort of time machine of the mind and awareness.🙏🏻🕊
April 11th, 2025 05:32
arqios said:
Always loved a good cemetery visit. Hence poems about graveyards 🪦 can be particularly interesting, it’s like a direct line and link to the past; a sort of time machine of the mind and awareness.🙏🏻🕊
April 11th, 2025 05:32
THE OLD NORTH CEMETERY
sorenbarrett said:
Haunting and well depicted in images the meter with short lines was rapid as if running through this place in fear. Well done
April 11th, 2025 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
Haunting and well depicted in images the meter with short lines was rapid as if running through this place in fear. Well done
April 11th, 2025 04:17
THE OLD NORTH CEMETERY
Mourgana of the Fey said:
There is something quite specific when one visits older parts of a graveyard. Many histories linger there, an eerie haunted echo accompanied this piece!
April 11th, 2025 04:01
Mourgana of the Fey said:
There is something quite specific when one visits older parts of a graveyard. Many histories linger there, an eerie haunted echo accompanied this piece!
April 11th, 2025 04:01
THE OLD NORTH CEMETERY
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write if the angels were looking down they are probably wondering what is going on, enjoyed the read
April 11th, 2025 03:15
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write if the angels were looking down they are probably wondering what is going on, enjoyed the read
April 11th, 2025 03:15
RAIN
sorenbarrett said:
The staggered, irregular, near rhyme with the meter in this poem simulated drops of rain for me. Well worded with its twists and turns it seems rivulets of rain. A fave
April 10th, 2025 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
The staggered, irregular, near rhyme with the meter in this poem simulated drops of rain for me. Well worded with its twists and turns it seems rivulets of rain. A fave
April 10th, 2025 04:27
RAIN
Poetic Licence said:
Tears that fell with no regret, I like that, a lovely and enjoyable read
April 10th, 2025 04:06
Poetic Licence said:
Tears that fell with no regret, I like that, a lovely and enjoyable read
April 10th, 2025 04:06
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