Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)
LEGALIZED MURDER
sorenbarrett said:
The darkness of war and in the end its insanity where little is accomplished at terrible expense. Well written
December 27th, 2025 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
The darkness of war and in the end its insanity where little is accomplished at terrible expense. Well written
December 27th, 2025 04:02
MARKET PLACE
sorenbarrett said:
A vivid and gritty description in this poem of the aftermath. A storm has past and now the lull of a holiday. Well written Norman
December 26th, 2025 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
A vivid and gritty description in this poem of the aftermath. A storm has past and now the lull of a holiday. Well written Norman
December 26th, 2025 03:52
RETURN OF THE PARSNIP
sorenbarrett said:
I understand completely not a fan of parsnips. A fun read on a special day. Merry Christmas
December 25th, 2025 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
I understand completely not a fan of parsnips. A fun read on a special day. Merry Christmas
December 25th, 2025 04:16
ARIA
orchidee said:
A fine write N but I\'m having a bit of trouble meself - aww, why when I do an aria, do they say (the anonymous \'they\') \'That you singing there, or is two cats fighting I hear?!\' lol Do they say the same to you?
December 24th, 2025 08:55
orchidee said:
A fine write N but I\'m having a bit of trouble meself - aww, why when I do an aria, do they say (the anonymous \'they\') \'That you singing there, or is two cats fighting I hear?!\' lol Do they say the same to you?
December 24th, 2025 08:55
ARIA
sorenbarrett said:
This is a blend of the natural and the emotional as they flow together in a memory collage. Very nice. Happy holidays to you
December 24th, 2025 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
This is a blend of the natural and the emotional as they flow together in a memory collage. Very nice. Happy holidays to you
December 24th, 2025 04:11
OUT OF SIGHT
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Meanwhile - you out of sight, out of mind? Erm, who are ya? You\'re out of my sight, so I\'ve forgotten ya! lol. You forgotten me too? heehee.
December 23rd, 2025 08:37
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Meanwhile - you out of sight, out of mind? Erm, who are ya? You\'re out of my sight, so I\'ve forgotten ya! lol. You forgotten me too? heehee.
December 23rd, 2025 08:37
OUT OF SIGHT
sorenbarrett said:
A strong image is created in this poem leaving a sense of coldness. Well done
December 23rd, 2025 03:48
sorenbarrett said:
A strong image is created in this poem leaving a sense of coldness. Well done
December 23rd, 2025 03:48
SOLITUDE CALLS
sorenbarrett said:
Images of loneliness cast in this poem that reads smoothly. Nicely done
December 22nd, 2025 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
Images of loneliness cast in this poem that reads smoothly. Nicely done
December 22nd, 2025 04:03
THE ECHOING MOON
NafisaSB said:
I have always found the moonlight to be calming and serene- am impressed with your version of it and hope the sun keeps shining bright on you
December 21st, 2025 22:48
NafisaSB said:
I have always found the moonlight to be calming and serene- am impressed with your version of it and hope the sun keeps shining bright on you
December 21st, 2025 22:48
A VIOLENT NIGHT
NafisaSB said:
Seems to be a night that made a lasting impression and impact on you. Hope you don’t have many such more
December 21st, 2025 22:44
NafisaSB said:
Seems to be a night that made a lasting impression and impact on you. Hope you don’t have many such more
December 21st, 2025 22:44
THE SAME GRAVE LAID
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply poignant and applicable to all ages it reflects a dark truth that man has not evolved too far from ape and that the equality of death is the justice that nature meets out. A fave
December 21st, 2025 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply poignant and applicable to all ages it reflects a dark truth that man has not evolved too far from ape and that the equality of death is the justice that nature meets out. A fave
December 21st, 2025 04:35
EIGHT LINES IN
sorenbarrett said:
There is despair and regret in this piece. It calls out to prepare for worse. A haunting poem
December 20th, 2025 05:07
sorenbarrett said:
There is despair and regret in this piece. It calls out to prepare for worse. A haunting poem
December 20th, 2025 05:07
WITHOUT CARE
orchidee said:
You not caring? You couldn\'t care less? No use asking us, you and I, to be sympathetic?! lol.
December 19th, 2025 11:53
orchidee said:
You not caring? You couldn\'t care less? No use asking us, you and I, to be sympathetic?! lol.
December 19th, 2025 11:53
WITHOUT CARE
sorenbarrett said:
This poem sets the scene well with painted images of solitude and almost abandonment that fit the title and last line so well
December 19th, 2025 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
This poem sets the scene well with painted images of solitude and almost abandonment that fit the title and last line so well
December 19th, 2025 04:43
WITHOUT CARE
orchidee said:
Good write N. I don\'t care then!! Do you? lol.
December 19th, 2025 04:04
orchidee said:
Good write N. I don\'t care then!! Do you? lol.
December 19th, 2025 04:04
GOTHIC STAINED
sorenbarrett said:
Ignoring the light is sometimes chosen as a way of continuing. A deep poem of a most reflective nature and sometimes reflection can be too painful to consider.
December 18th, 2025 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
Ignoring the light is sometimes chosen as a way of continuing. A deep poem of a most reflective nature and sometimes reflection can be too painful to consider.
December 18th, 2025 04:12
MOMENT
sorenbarrett said:
Anthropomorphizing time in this poem gives it a both seductive and terrifying quality. Nicely done in short ticking words that fall like seconds on a clock
December 17th, 2025 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
Anthropomorphizing time in this poem gives it a both seductive and terrifying quality. Nicely done in short ticking words that fall like seconds on a clock
December 17th, 2025 04:02
GUTTERS CURSED
sorenbarrett said:
This leaves the feel of ruin and destruction, devastation. Metaphorically it spells disaster on an emotional level. Nicely done
December 16th, 2025 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
This leaves the feel of ruin and destruction, devastation. Metaphorically it spells disaster on an emotional level. Nicely done
December 16th, 2025 03:55
A VIOLENT NIGHT
arqios said:
As am I and many, many more, I would imagine. Beautiful expression here 🙏🏻🕊
December 15th, 2025 19:43
arqios said:
As am I and many, many more, I would imagine. Beautiful expression here 🙏🏻🕊
December 15th, 2025 19:43
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