Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)



PAINTED ANGEL
orchidee said:

Good write N.

April 8th, 2026 14:14

PAINTED ANGEL
Katie B. said:

Wow, powerful. Leaving would be very hard.

April 8th, 2026 04:37

TINTORETTO PAINTING HIS DEAD DAUGHTER
Lorenz said:

A very victorian poetic perspective.

April 8th, 2026 03:49

TINTORETTO PAINTING HIS DEAD DAUGHTER
Abdullah123 said:

Haunting write. The short sentences were a great chocie to build that tension which carries the message beautifully. Well done

April 7th, 2026 11:58

SO QUIET
NafisaSB said:

Memories, daydreams interwoven very nicely

April 7th, 2026 03:33

TINTORETTO PAINTING HIS DEAD DAUGHTER
sorenbarrett said:

This poem seems almost classical in its form and speaks in romantic passion. Very nicely written, Norman.

April 7th, 2026 02:40

TINTORETTO PAINTING HIS DEAD DAUGHTER
orchidee said:

A fine write N.
If that gal was only sleeping, she could have been waiting for the No.7 bus, and the artist got her a bed to lie down on, as she was waiting so long, and painted her at the bus stop! lol.

April 7th, 2026 02:24

CHILD OF WORDS
Goldfinch60 said:

Great words Norman, those words eventually become written in our lives.

Andy

April 7th, 2026 01:10

CHILD OF WORDS
sorenbarrett said:

Beautiful words describing the creator and creation nicely done. \"In the beginning was the word\"

April 6th, 2026 04:25

CHILD OF WORDS
Abdullah123 said:

great write

April 6th, 2026 02:55

CHILD OF WORDS
orchidee said:

Good write N. How\'s those buses on Bank Holidays?! lol.

April 6th, 2026 02:38

DISTANT
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful words Norman.

Andy

April 6th, 2026 01:10

SILENCE TO CALL
NafisaSB said:

many of us tend to do that, but after all these years, i feel that we should know withhold our feelings, but let the dam burst out..it gives relief

April 6th, 2026 01:05

LOVES DYING DAYS
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April 5th, 2026 19:46

LOVES DYING DAYS
RSM0812 said:

This poem reminds a person that nothing lasts forever. Even in true love.

April 5th, 2026 19:46

THE PATH THAT NO ONE WALKS
RSM0812 said:



April 5th, 2026 19:44

THE PATH THAT NO ONE WALKS
RSM0812 said:

An erie ✍️. Quite chilling effect.

April 5th, 2026 19:44

DISTANT
Ellen Marsell said:

Beautifully written. Soft, tender, and quietly moving.

April 5th, 2026 04:11

DISTANT
sorenbarrett said:

Very beautiful in its imagery you paint it well. This leaves a soft and tender feel to the night. Loved it

April 5th, 2026 03:55

DISTANT
orchidee said:

Good write N.
You hearing the distant sound of the No.7 bus approaching?!

April 5th, 2026 03:27

THE PATH THAT NO ONE WALKS
Goldfinch60 said:

Obviously The Road Not Taken Norman, Robert Frost knew all about that one. Fine words.

Andy

April 5th, 2026 01:11

THE PATH THAT NO ONE WALKS
sorenbarrett said:

Norman I think that most children had such a house in their childhood neighborhood. We did but also a metaphor for alienation as we age. Nicely written it presents vivid images and leaves a feel of loneliness. Very nicely written

April 4th, 2026 04:05

THE PATH THAT NO ONE WALKS
orchidee said:

Thank you N. Or would we like to look inside - atmospheric, nostalgic, curious, etc? We\'ve an old house a couple of miles from us, all disused now.
And - does the No.4 bus route go near that house?! lol.

April 4th, 2026 02:31

THE HANGOVER BY TOULOUSE LAUTREC
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words about a very intriguing artwork Norman.

Andy

April 4th, 2026 01:15

THE HANGOVER BY TOULOUSE LAUTREC
sorenbarrett said:

Such a wonderful casting of mood and setting in this piece all set to good rhyme. Nicely done Norman

April 3rd, 2026 03:58

THE HANGOVER BY TOULOUSE LAUTREC
orchidee said:

Good write N.

April 3rd, 2026 02:38

SO QUIET
NafisaSB said:

a soothing verse..enjoyed the read

April 3rd, 2026 00:16

SO QUIET
arqios said:

A very moving read, Norman🙏🏻🕊️

April 2nd, 2026 07:04

SO QUIET
sorenbarrett said:

This poem to me speaks of how little things can stimulate past memories and feelings. Nicely written

April 2nd, 2026 04:28

SO QUIET
orchidee said:

Good write N. BOO!! I turned up and shattered the silence! Do ya hear me yelling?! lol.

April 2nd, 2026 02:16



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