Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)



WHERE WAS YOUR JESUS ?
orchidee said:

The madness of war.

January 20th, 2026 02:54

WHY ?
NafisaSB said:

Medals may have been won
At the cost of a brother or son ..
So many innocents slain
Si much grief and pain😔

January 20th, 2026 02:44

MIDNIGHT UPON
NafisaSB said:

solitude amidst the reverly well represented...

January 20th, 2026 00:07

DEATH ENGAGES
NafisaSB said:

a good write..enjoyed it

January 19th, 2026 23:37

A WEARY TRAVELLER
Lorenz said:

Intriguing feeling of beyond !

January 19th, 2026 11:55

A WEARY TRAVELLER
sorenbarrett said:

How oft I have been in that church. A beautiful poem with great rhyme and pacing that shows wonderful flow so nicely done that it conveys that rest spoken of and is a fave

January 19th, 2026 04:44

A WEARY TRAVELLER
orchidee said:

A fine write N. You home now? lol.

January 19th, 2026 03:12

MEMORY RETURNED
sorenbarrett said:

Memories and fading ones in this poem whether due to distance, disease, or desire a sad loss.

January 18th, 2026 04:28

MEMORY RETURNED
orchidee said:

Good write N. You got 3 brain cells like me? Difficult to remember things? lol.

January 18th, 2026 03:01

THE NIGHT CAFE BY VINCENT VAN GOGH
RSM0812 said:

This is a powerfull write man. \"The sleepy lust\", \"The essence of man\". Brilliant!!!!!

January 17th, 2026 12:33

THE LONELY DAWN
RSM0812 said:

This was perfectly rhymed all the way through. I didnt want it to end. Lol. Great job.

January 17th, 2026 12:30

DEATH ENGAGES
RSM0812 said:

This is remarkably written with curved rhymes written elegantly and with solemn care. One of my favs fir a while.

January 17th, 2026 12:26

DEEP
sorenbarrett said:

Brilliant flow in this poem with some near rhyme make for a stunning piece and a fave

January 17th, 2026 04:32

DEEP
orchidee said:

Good write N.

January 17th, 2026 03:10

DEATH ENGAGES
arqios said:

This has outlined a portion of this poet\'s heart. 🙏🕊️

January 16th, 2026 21:29

DEATH ENGAGES
Lorenz said:

No comment just fave !

January 16th, 2026 09:12

DEATH ENGAGES
sorenbarrett said:

The last two lines gave me the image of poetic words remaining like bones where bodies were burned by lime. Well written

January 16th, 2026 06:57

DEATH ENGAGES
orchidee said:

Good write N. Been to that Co-op lately?! lol.

January 16th, 2026 03:32

FROZEN PAIN
Katie B. said:

Terrific write, powerful and moving. Thanks for sharing!

January 15th, 2026 09:34

TO FIND A HAND
NafisaSB said:

the longing for an anchor is so well expressed here - great job

January 15th, 2026 02:08

STAGGERED RAIN
sorenbarrett said:

Most melancholic and at the same time a bit wistful it paints a gray and wet day. The repeated stanza and rhyme give a powerful and heavy feel to this poem a fave

January 14th, 2026 05:05

TO FIND A HAND
Lorenz said:

This midnight clock reaching out to us...

January 13th, 2026 06:37

TO FIND A HAND
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful and mournful poem of sadness that still retains a bit of hope for the future. It is lonely and yearns for company that is not to be found. There is something about the wording itself that calls out to me. A fave

January 13th, 2026 04:30

TO FIND A HAND
orchidee said:

A fine write N. You battered?!

January 13th, 2026 02:56

FASCISM
NafisaSB said:

yes it is true- unfortunately for us all.
i wonder if it ever left - residue always resided deep within a few, then grew and grew..

January 13th, 2026 02:31

THE NIGHT CAFE BY VINCENT VAN GOGH
sorenbarrett said:

I remember the painting and the poem seems to fit it well. I love the mention of color in that this was a principle element characterizing his paintings. Loved it

January 12th, 2026 04:25

THE NIGHT CAFE BY VINCENT VAN GOGH
orchidee said:

Good write N. Can you add the actual picture in too?
Meanwhile - not that old joke: \'Ear, ear, that\'s a good poem!\' lol.

January 12th, 2026 03:31

THE NIGHT CAFE BY VINCENT VAN GOGH
Dominic Windram said:

What a great poem...it really captures Van Gogh\'s state of mind through his painting!

January 12th, 2026 03:30

CANNON FODDER
Lorenz said:

Woman the god cannon is hungry ! Give it your breast !

January 11th, 2026 13:20

FASCISM
Tristan Robert Lange said:

What can be said but amen…not in the “hallelujah, everything’s fine” sense, but in the so be it…this is true sense. Terribly true. You’re right…it never went away. And when people refuse to confront evil, they slowly become it. Powerful…necessary work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

January 11th, 2026 08:59



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