Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)
LOVES DYING DAYS
Katie B. said:
Well written. Difficult subject handled with care.
April 1st, 2026 09:44
Katie B. said:
Well written. Difficult subject handled with care.
April 1st, 2026 09:44
LOVES DYING DAYS
sorenbarrett said:
Norman this poem casts a solemn shadow using personification and maybe animism it speaks of love that has died. Well written with good rhyme it is most poetic.
April 1st, 2026 03:57
sorenbarrett said:
Norman this poem casts a solemn shadow using personification and maybe animism it speaks of love that has died. Well written with good rhyme it is most poetic.
April 1st, 2026 03:57
AT DAWNS ATTACK
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true and very sad words Norman, why can we not stop fighting in this world, love does exist and it should be for all.
Andy
April 1st, 2026 01:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true and very sad words Norman, why can we not stop fighting in this world, love does exist and it should be for all.
Andy
April 1st, 2026 01:05
IF I WERE TO FORGET
NafisaSB said:
it seems it still lives in your memory very vividly...
April 1st, 2026 00:21
NafisaSB said:
it seems it still lives in your memory very vividly...
April 1st, 2026 00:21
AT DAWNS ATTACK
arqios said:
The home front is also affected by those that return broken and the absence of those that will never come home. Most moved, Norman🕊️🙏🏻
March 31st, 2026 06:56
arqios said:
The home front is also affected by those that return broken and the absence of those that will never come home. Most moved, Norman🕊️🙏🏻
March 31st, 2026 06:56
AT DAWNS ATTACK
sorenbarrett said:
The horrors of war portrayed in this poem of battle. And so it is with any war physical or otherwise it takes casualties. ,Nicely written in good rhyme it pulls the reader along from line to line in an advance from from trench to trench. Well penned
March 31st, 2026 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
The horrors of war portrayed in this poem of battle. And so it is with any war physical or otherwise it takes casualties. ,Nicely written in good rhyme it pulls the reader along from line to line in an advance from from trench to trench. Well penned
March 31st, 2026 04:11
AT DAWNS ATTACK
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Is it a battle to catch that bus? Are you getting the No.14 bus today?! lol.
March 31st, 2026 02:09
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Is it a battle to catch that bus? Are you getting the No.14 bus today?! lol.
March 31st, 2026 02:09
WORDS I DID NOT SAY
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words are still within your mind Norman and one day you will say them.
Andy
March 31st, 2026 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words are still within your mind Norman and one day you will say them.
Andy
March 31st, 2026 01:21
WORDS I DID NOT SAY
orchidee said:
Good write N. Will you know the words that you didn\'t say? If you speak them, you will have said them! lol.
March 30th, 2026 10:41
orchidee said:
Good write N. Will you know the words that you didn\'t say? If you speak them, you will have said them! lol.
March 30th, 2026 10:41
WORDS I DID NOT SAY
arqios said:
Sounds like regret or was it more a scent of misgiving? Time will tell. Thanks for the thought provoking, Norman🙏🏻🕊️
March 30th, 2026 07:56
arqios said:
Sounds like regret or was it more a scent of misgiving? Time will tell. Thanks for the thought provoking, Norman🙏🏻🕊️
March 30th, 2026 07:56
WORDS I DID NOT SAY
sorenbarrett said:
Failure to act as much an error as acting wrongly. Well written in this poem
March 30th, 2026 03:45
sorenbarrett said:
Failure to act as much an error as acting wrongly. Well written in this poem
March 30th, 2026 03:45
SILENCE TO CALL
Goldfinch60 said:
We will be waiting for you outside that door Norman and will bring joy to you.
Andy
March 30th, 2026 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
We will be waiting for you outside that door Norman and will bring joy to you.
Andy
March 30th, 2026 01:13
SILENCE TO CALL
sorenbarrett said:
Although this poem can be taken as one of physical isolation from others it seems more to me a poem of mental isolation where one withdraws within. It ends more hopefully with a promise to reach outside and rejoin the world and forget the loneliness and isolation inside. Very nicely done
March 29th, 2026 05:21
sorenbarrett said:
Although this poem can be taken as one of physical isolation from others it seems more to me a poem of mental isolation where one withdraws within. It ends more hopefully with a promise to reach outside and rejoin the world and forget the loneliness and isolation inside. Very nicely done
March 29th, 2026 05:21
SILENCE TO CALL
orchidee said:
Good write N. Erm, how did you get in if no windows and no door! lol.
March 29th, 2026 03:19
orchidee said:
Good write N. Erm, how did you get in if no windows and no door! lol.
March 29th, 2026 03:19
AT ETERNITYS GATE BY VAN GOGH
Goldfinch60 said:
That eternity will be there for us all Norman but hopefully we will reach it in a happy state.
Andy
March 29th, 2026 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
That eternity will be there for us all Norman but hopefully we will reach it in a happy state.
Andy
March 29th, 2026 01:14
MERELY MEMORY
NafisaSB said:
Yes life is transitory and you have explained this beautifully 👌
March 29th, 2026 00:43
NafisaSB said:
Yes life is transitory and you have explained this beautifully 👌
March 29th, 2026 00:43
AT ETERNITYS GATE BY VAN GOGH
Katie B. said:
Love it! You said so much in a few words. Big fan of brevity. Thanks for sharing!.
Katie
March 28th, 2026 07:40
Katie B. said:
Love it! You said so much in a few words. Big fan of brevity. Thanks for sharing!.
Katie
March 28th, 2026 07:40
AT ETERNITYS GATE BY VAN GOGH
sorenbarrett said:
I love the way that you have woven this poem not only from a faithfulness to the painting but its apparent emotion as well and threads of other paintings the scream by Munch. In good rhyme you do justice to this work. A fave
March 28th, 2026 04:15
sorenbarrett said:
I love the way that you have woven this poem not only from a faithfulness to the painting but its apparent emotion as well and threads of other paintings the scream by Munch. In good rhyme you do justice to this work. A fave
March 28th, 2026 04:15
AT ETERNITYS GATE BY VAN GOGH
orchidee said:
Good write N. Is that someone who they got a chair for them to sit on as they took so long standing around waiting for the No.7 bus, and \'fell to pieces\'?! lol.
March 28th, 2026 03:20
orchidee said:
Good write N. Is that someone who they got a chair for them to sit on as they took so long standing around waiting for the No.7 bus, and \'fell to pieces\'?! lol.
March 28th, 2026 03:20
DREAMED AWAY
Goldfinch60 said:
That beauty is there for all us oldies Norman and needs to be grasped with both hands.
Andy
March 28th, 2026 02:47
Goldfinch60 said:
That beauty is there for all us oldies Norman and needs to be grasped with both hands.
Andy
March 28th, 2026 02:47
DREAMED AWAY
sorenbarrett said:
The difference between what the heart and mind tell are echoed in what society values and the individual. Life to be lived for self or others is the question. Nicely written
March 27th, 2026 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
The difference between what the heart and mind tell are echoed in what society values and the individual. Life to be lived for self or others is the question. Nicely written
March 27th, 2026 04:18
SUNFLOWERS BY VINCENT VAN GOGH
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words about a wonderful artist Norman.
Andy
March 27th, 2026 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words about a wonderful artist Norman.
Andy
March 27th, 2026 01:54
SUNFLOWERS BY VINCENT VAN GOGH
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Erm, can we buy that original painting for 50p from a second hand shop?! lol.
March 26th, 2026 04:27
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Erm, can we buy that original painting for 50p from a second hand shop?! lol.
March 26th, 2026 04:27
SUNFLOWERS BY VINCENT VAN GOGH
sorenbarrett said:
A painter with so much mental turmoil that he expressed on canvass in bright colors of joy and pain. Nicely written
March 26th, 2026 03:46
sorenbarrett said:
A painter with so much mental turmoil that he expressed on canvass in bright colors of joy and pain. Nicely written
March 26th, 2026 03:46
MERELY MEMORY
Goldfinch60 said:
May the memories we leave are good ones for people to remember Norman.
Andy
March 26th, 2026 02:56
Goldfinch60 said:
May the memories we leave are good ones for people to remember Norman.
Andy
March 26th, 2026 02:56
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