Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)
IMMORTALITYS BREATH
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, the image of the old gates leading nowhere stayed with me. There is something wonderfully unsettling about that idea...a destination that simply vanishes when you arrive. Powerful stuff, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 12th, 2026 13:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, the image of the old gates leading nowhere stayed with me. There is something wonderfully unsettling about that idea...a destination that simply vanishes when you arrive. Powerful stuff, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 12th, 2026 13:12
IMMORTALITYS BREATH
orchidee said:
Good write N. We\'ve become immortal, waiting so long at that bus stop! lol.
June 12th, 2026 10:25
orchidee said:
Good write N. We\'ve become immortal, waiting so long at that bus stop! lol.
June 12th, 2026 10:25
THIS LONELY STREET
Samprikta Paul said:
This kind of seems so heavy, and a sense of overthinking, or maybe noticing every single detail and being able to resonate with emotions. That\'s so good, well done.
June 12th, 2026 09:43
Samprikta Paul said:
This kind of seems so heavy, and a sense of overthinking, or maybe noticing every single detail and being able to resonate with emotions. That\'s so good, well done.
June 12th, 2026 09:43
IMMORTALITYS BREATH
sorenbarrett said:
This poem well worded wends its way along forlorn paths that seem to have no end. Very nicely done
June 12th, 2026 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
This poem well worded wends its way along forlorn paths that seem to have no end. Very nicely done
June 12th, 2026 04:20
THAT FRIGHTENING STARE
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this is a powerful piece, my friend. There is a deep sense of frustration and warning woven throughout it...a concern not only for what is lost, but for those who are too often overlooked in the process. Thought-provoking work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 11th, 2026 08:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this is a powerful piece, my friend. There is a deep sense of frustration and warning woven throughout it...a concern not only for what is lost, but for those who are too often overlooked in the process. Thought-provoking work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 11th, 2026 08:34
AT EACH TURN
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, what a thoughtful piece. The journey from memory, to choice, to renewal feels natural and earned. We all carry things we\'d rather leave behind, yet each sunrise offers another chance to grow beyond them. There is real hope woven into this one, my friend. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 11th, 2026 08:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, what a thoughtful piece. The journey from memory, to choice, to renewal feels natural and earned. We all carry things we\'d rather leave behind, yet each sunrise offers another chance to grow beyond them. There is real hope woven into this one, my friend. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 11th, 2026 08:28
THAT FRIGHTENING STARE
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of power given to others to control. Nicely written
June 11th, 2026 04:41
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of power given to others to control. Nicely written
June 11th, 2026 04:41
AT EACH TURN
sorenbarrett said:
Focusing on the good to forget the bad is not necessarily a bad thing. A positive point of view a key to happiness. Well written
June 10th, 2026 13:40
sorenbarrett said:
Focusing on the good to forget the bad is not necessarily a bad thing. A positive point of view a key to happiness. Well written
June 10th, 2026 13:40
AT EACH TURN
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
But at each turn of the road, or lane, or track, that we may take - no bus! lol.
June 10th, 2026 12:54
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
But at each turn of the road, or lane, or track, that we may take - no bus! lol.
June 10th, 2026 12:54
LAUGHTER FADES
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Yes, it\'s no laughing matter now, it\'s no joke now, waiting for that bus! lol.
June 9th, 2026 09:34
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Yes, it\'s no laughing matter now, it\'s no joke now, waiting for that bus! lol.
June 9th, 2026 09:34
THE LEGACY OF MANKIND
orchidee said:
Ohhh, so many questions in life - such as: will the bus ever arrive? what route number will it be? how long have we been waiting for it now?! etc. lol.
June 9th, 2026 02:37
orchidee said:
Ohhh, so many questions in life - such as: will the bus ever arrive? what route number will it be? how long have we been waiting for it now?! etc. lol.
June 9th, 2026 02:37
A POETS EYES
Samprikta Paul said:
I believe literature has always been an escape for us to keep breathing. Well written.
June 9th, 2026 01:18
Samprikta Paul said:
I believe literature has always been an escape for us to keep breathing. Well written.
June 9th, 2026 01:18
BIZZARE
NafisaSB said:
it is definitely a very moving sight, and no one who sees or reads, can fail to be moved by it...
June 9th, 2026 00:04
NafisaSB said:
it is definitely a very moving sight, and no one who sees or reads, can fail to be moved by it...
June 9th, 2026 00:04
THE LEGACY OF MANKIND
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, what struck me most is the image of eternity blinking an unforgiving eye. It creates the sense that humanity\'s actions are being viewed against a much larger backdrop, one that cannot be deceived by excuses or denial. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 8th, 2026 10:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, what struck me most is the image of eternity blinking an unforgiving eye. It creates the sense that humanity\'s actions are being viewed against a much larger backdrop, one that cannot be deceived by excuses or denial. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 8th, 2026 10:59
THE LEGACY OF MANKIND
sorenbarrett said:
This one snuck up on me and for the message and surprise that at the same time is so true a fave. Loved this one Norman very well done
June 8th, 2026 04:59
sorenbarrett said:
This one snuck up on me and for the message and surprise that at the same time is so true a fave. Loved this one Norman very well done
June 8th, 2026 04:59
THE LEGACY OF MANKIND
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
A legacy from hundreds of years ago, but now gone for ever? A bus appeared, that is! lol.
June 8th, 2026 02:18
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
A legacy from hundreds of years ago, but now gone for ever? A bus appeared, that is! lol.
June 8th, 2026 02:18
ONE TEAR
Samprikta Paul said:
Well written, let the tears pour until the heart heals with time.
June 8th, 2026 01:49
Samprikta Paul said:
Well written, let the tears pour until the heart heals with time.
June 8th, 2026 01:49
A BROKEN SOUL
Samprikta Paul said:
I love how simple the words you use are and how beautifully they still contain a rhythm.
June 8th, 2026 00:00
Samprikta Paul said:
I love how simple the words you use are and how beautifully they still contain a rhythm.
June 8th, 2026 00:00
MEMORY
Samprikta Paul said:
It\'s beautiful how you expressed an old man stuck in his memory, and with dampening eyes, he seems to move on slowly - It\'s time.
June 7th, 2026 23:55
Samprikta Paul said:
It\'s beautiful how you expressed an old man stuck in his memory, and with dampening eyes, he seems to move on slowly - It\'s time.
June 7th, 2026 23:55
THE LAST PERFORMANCE
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this really moved me. What stays with me is the balance between loss and legacy. The poem mourns a passing, yet it also honors the imagination, passion, and words left behind. The image of a poet reaching beyond sight while leaving echoes for others to find gives the piece a poignant and lasting beauty. Wonderful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 7th, 2026 09:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this really moved me. What stays with me is the balance between loss and legacy. The poem mourns a passing, yet it also honors the imagination, passion, and words left behind. The image of a poet reaching beyond sight while leaving echoes for others to find gives the piece a poignant and lasting beauty. Wonderful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 7th, 2026 09:03
THE LAST PERFORMANCE
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems to tell the tale of a writer, a poem written and with time forgotten buried in time and the loss grieved. Well done my friend
June 7th, 2026 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems to tell the tale of a writer, a poem written and with time forgotten buried in time and the loss grieved. Well done my friend
June 7th, 2026 04:48
THE LAST PERFORMANCE
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Have you given up? Is it your last \'performance\' of waiting for that bus?! lol.
June 7th, 2026 04:20
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Have you given up? Is it your last \'performance\' of waiting for that bus?! lol.
June 7th, 2026 04:20
OPEN SOULS
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Norman, this just should not be happening in our world there is enough for all but those who have more than they need will not let go of it.
Andy
June 7th, 2026 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Norman, this just should not be happening in our world there is enough for all but those who have more than they need will not let go of it.
Andy
June 7th, 2026 01:13
BIZZARE
RSM0812 said:
There is blood everywhere. Its unfortunate and disappointing. One day people will learn. Good read.
June 6th, 2026 15:15
RSM0812 said:
There is blood everywhere. Its unfortunate and disappointing. One day people will learn. Good read.
June 6th, 2026 15:15
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