Comments received on poems by nephilim56
NOT THE QUEEN
Doggerel Dave said:
Social Justice isn\'t on the radar anymore.
Succinct statement re the deterioration of what once was a world class National Health Service - once.
August 29th, 2023 08:39
Doggerel Dave said:
Social Justice isn\'t on the radar anymore.
Succinct statement re the deterioration of what once was a world class National Health Service - once.
August 29th, 2023 08:39
NOT THE QUEEN
peto said:
Tremendous write
Enjoyed the rhyme but it\'s the content that grabbed me
Especially
\"No pomp or gun salute \"
This is a better and more fitting tribute than any of that
Super
August 29th, 2023 05:22
peto said:
Tremendous write
Enjoyed the rhyme but it\'s the content that grabbed me
Especially
\"No pomp or gun salute \"
This is a better and more fitting tribute than any of that
Super
August 29th, 2023 05:22
THE ROOM
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"The room” by Nephilim56
This poem should haunt those heartless “persons” who claim taxes on a room belonging to a child that had died. For the thugs, the lives of the parents do not matter : public coffers matter. Taxes must come in, by all means. The short period of grieving was given out of decency. They have forgotten how, three years back, Covid sent even heads of governments to the hospital… Those guys survived only because of the best treatment made available to them… In some cases, even medical teams arrived from abroad…. They were saved only to stab the poor anonymous citizen all the more… Soman Ragavan. 26 August, 2023.
August 26th, 2023 06:38
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"The room” by Nephilim56
This poem should haunt those heartless “persons” who claim taxes on a room belonging to a child that had died. For the thugs, the lives of the parents do not matter : public coffers matter. Taxes must come in, by all means. The short period of grieving was given out of decency. They have forgotten how, three years back, Covid sent even heads of governments to the hospital… Those guys survived only because of the best treatment made available to them… In some cases, even medical teams arrived from abroad…. They were saved only to stab the poor anonymous citizen all the more… Soman Ragavan. 26 August, 2023.
August 26th, 2023 06:38
CURRENCY
jarcher54 said:
The riddle poem is as old as the earliest Greek papyri and the tattered remnants of Norse and Old English. I enjoyed this one.
August 19th, 2023 09:58
jarcher54 said:
The riddle poem is as old as the earliest Greek papyri and the tattered remnants of Norse and Old English. I enjoyed this one.
August 19th, 2023 09:58
CURRENCY
Bobby O said:
I would have not passed. Would have had to reach out to previous nemesis E. Nigma if Halle Berry was Batgirl and the voiceover was soaked with the tension of a John Holmes subplot.
August 19th, 2023 03:25
Bobby O said:
I would have not passed. Would have had to reach out to previous nemesis E. Nigma if Halle Berry was Batgirl and the voiceover was soaked with the tension of a John Holmes subplot.
August 19th, 2023 03:25
MAGIC
Bobby O said:
Blood Ted vision into flame…
How cool is that?
You come up w such original monster stuff. I’m a fan.
Nice write good read
August 18th, 2023 06:59
Bobby O said:
Blood Ted vision into flame…
How cool is that?
You come up w such original monster stuff. I’m a fan.
Nice write good read
August 18th, 2023 06:59
GHOST
Bobby O said:
It’s probably just me but I read it twice and some if the symbolic nature excised me.
August 14th, 2023 05:03
Bobby O said:
It’s probably just me but I read it twice and some if the symbolic nature excised me.
August 14th, 2023 05:03
WAR MUSEUMS
Doggerel Dave said:
I feel very strongly about this, so I hope you will forgive me if I add my own answer to this topic, pinned way back:
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-143343
August 12th, 2023 21:01
Doggerel Dave said:
I feel very strongly about this, so I hope you will forgive me if I add my own answer to this topic, pinned way back:
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-143343
August 12th, 2023 21:01
WAR MUSEUMS
Bobby O said:
I get it paint a pretty smile but that pig don’t need L’Oreal. They run but the problem stays alive pewter or brass adornments set in museums might start as meaning well but diluting tragedy with walk through fanfare works in reverse
Nice piece and timely Shout Out!
August 12th, 2023 06:00
Bobby O said:
I get it paint a pretty smile but that pig don’t need L’Oreal. They run but the problem stays alive pewter or brass adornments set in museums might start as meaning well but diluting tragedy with walk through fanfare works in reverse
Nice piece and timely Shout Out!
August 12th, 2023 06:00
WAR MUSEUMS
Teddy.15 said:
Veterans don\'t get anything near what their worth, if it wasn\'t for them we all wouldn\'t be here today doing all these wonderful things we can do. 100% respect for all those who fought for our freedom. 💖
August 12th, 2023 03:55
Teddy.15 said:
Veterans don\'t get anything near what their worth, if it wasn\'t for them we all wouldn\'t be here today doing all these wonderful things we can do. 100% respect for all those who fought for our freedom. 💖
August 12th, 2023 03:55
WAR MUSEUMS
Doggerel Dave said:
War museums seem to be a celebration of war - you make this very clear, I think. And it is everywhere. I grew up on war stories. It took time to work out the stupidities. Just keep the message going as you have here in a very polished piece. Thank you.
August 12th, 2023 02:31
Doggerel Dave said:
War museums seem to be a celebration of war - you make this very clear, I think. And it is everywhere. I grew up on war stories. It took time to work out the stupidities. Just keep the message going as you have here in a very polished piece. Thank you.
August 12th, 2023 02:31
SIXTIES GIRL
Bobby O said:
…. Now sublets. That says a bunch of tealstive material thought in just two words. Freaking great harmony if thought. Nice write good read
August 11th, 2023 14:42
Bobby O said:
…. Now sublets. That says a bunch of tealstive material thought in just two words. Freaking great harmony if thought. Nice write good read
August 11th, 2023 14:42
SIXTIES GIRL
Teddy.15 said:
The 60\'s was a decade before I was born, I see a harsh women with a beehive in this poem, much enjoyed this even though she was unpleasant, ego is one of the ugliest traits anyone can have. 💖
August 11th, 2023 05:47
Teddy.15 said:
The 60\'s was a decade before I was born, I see a harsh women with a beehive in this poem, much enjoyed this even though she was unpleasant, ego is one of the ugliest traits anyone can have. 💖
August 11th, 2023 05:47
LISTENING TO ESSEX
Teddy.15 said:
I love the rhyme and my heart skipped a beat beautifully expressed right till the end. 💖
August 10th, 2023 07:37
Teddy.15 said:
I love the rhyme and my heart skipped a beat beautifully expressed right till the end. 💖
August 10th, 2023 07:37
ROMANTIC
Teddy.15 said:
LOL 🤣 this is hilarious. Irony of being a great writer 💖
August 9th, 2023 02:04
Teddy.15 said:
LOL 🤣 this is hilarious. Irony of being a great writer 💖
August 9th, 2023 02:04
THE VISIT
Pop64 said:
I truly enjoyed this read and believe that through love, we all live on. Not visual to those on earth, but yet felt. Wonderful write!
August 4th, 2023 10:07
Pop64 said:
I truly enjoyed this read and believe that through love, we all live on. Not visual to those on earth, but yet felt. Wonderful write!
August 4th, 2023 10:07
THE VISIT
Teddy.15 said:
I truly believe this. I hope this is all just fiction though. 💖
August 4th, 2023 02:47
Teddy.15 said:
I truly believe this. I hope this is all just fiction though. 💖
August 4th, 2023 02:47
THE BROKEN MAN
Teddy.15 said:
So very powerful and I found myself emotionally attached, death through the eyes of a man waiting to go. 💖 Sad but a reality for all.
August 3rd, 2023 09:07
Teddy.15 said:
So very powerful and I found myself emotionally attached, death through the eyes of a man waiting to go. 💖 Sad but a reality for all.
August 3rd, 2023 09:07
THE BROKEN MAN
Parisab said:
You set a stunning stage for passing through: ‘blue light’ moment is strong in both stanza ‘deaths falling gown’ ‘the echo of falling sound’ poetic moments at the hospital ?.
August 3rd, 2023 08:12
Parisab said:
You set a stunning stage for passing through: ‘blue light’ moment is strong in both stanza ‘deaths falling gown’ ‘the echo of falling sound’ poetic moments at the hospital ?.
August 3rd, 2023 08:12
OLD FLAME
L. B. Mek said:
I so related, dear poet
thanks for sharing these poignant words
hope you are in a better place now..
(\'if cloud\'s could speak\'
we would be saved
from their seasonal tearful typhoons
intrusted to carry
all our whispered regrets and promises
no wonder we recognise the salt
in those
pooling seas of rainfall laments...)
July 31st, 2023 06:17
L. B. Mek said:
I so related, dear poet
thanks for sharing these poignant words
hope you are in a better place now..
(\'if cloud\'s could speak\'
we would be saved
from their seasonal tearful typhoons
intrusted to carry
all our whispered regrets and promises
no wonder we recognise the salt
in those
pooling seas of rainfall laments...)
July 31st, 2023 06:17
VETERAN
Doggerel Dave said:
\"It\'s the same the whole world over...\"
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-143343
July 30th, 2023 02:23
Doggerel Dave said:
\"It\'s the same the whole world over...\"
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-143343
July 30th, 2023 02:23
VETERAN
Teddy.15 said:
Your title of course is perfect your poem speak the dark truth. Actually I believe that veterans mostly are left in the gutter I\'m only speaking of the UK here but I know also in the USA they are also considered yesterday\'s news. Without these amazing brave soldiers we wouldn\'t even be having this discussion
How is the world this harsh?
Drink, drugs and homelessness
Shattered bodies fill his dreams
Faces of friends and enemies
The horror still is real
So powerful and painful because it\'s the truth. Wonderful and full respect to all veterans across the world.
July 29th, 2023 10:05
Teddy.15 said:
Your title of course is perfect your poem speak the dark truth. Actually I believe that veterans mostly are left in the gutter I\'m only speaking of the UK here but I know also in the USA they are also considered yesterday\'s news. Without these amazing brave soldiers we wouldn\'t even be having this discussion
How is the world this harsh?
Drink, drugs and homelessness
Shattered bodies fill his dreams
Faces of friends and enemies
The horror still is real
So powerful and painful because it\'s the truth. Wonderful and full respect to all veterans across the world.
July 29th, 2023 10:05
EGO SUM DEFESSUS
Bobby O said:
The sunshine and rain can’t touch you. Must be Hammertime.
Nice write
Good read
July 28th, 2023 16:40
Bobby O said:
The sunshine and rain can’t touch you. Must be Hammertime.
Nice write
Good read
July 28th, 2023 16:40
EGO SUM DEFESSUS
Bobby O said:
The sunshine and rain can’t touch you. Must be Hammertime.
Nice write
Good read
July 28th, 2023 16:40
Bobby O said:
The sunshine and rain can’t touch you. Must be Hammertime.
Nice write
Good read
July 28th, 2023 16:40
EGO SUM DEFESSUS
L. B. Mek said:
yes, if we were all as brave
and admitted our shadow thoughts
we all relate
get\'s harder with each passing day
to sip from that positivity cup
of salty tears..
laud your sincerity, thanks for sharing
luckily bleak is not a colour
adorning our skies
just passing greys and brooding wrathful heatwaves
then back to blue comforts and puffy clouds
of rarely gifted levity...
July 28th, 2023 06:50
L. B. Mek said:
yes, if we were all as brave
and admitted our shadow thoughts
we all relate
get\'s harder with each passing day
to sip from that positivity cup
of salty tears..
laud your sincerity, thanks for sharing
luckily bleak is not a colour
adorning our skies
just passing greys and brooding wrathful heatwaves
then back to blue comforts and puffy clouds
of rarely gifted levity...
July 28th, 2023 06:50
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