Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)
THE HAND OF POE
sorenbarrett said:
A bottle of Cognac and three red roses on a grave top. Loved Poe and his work. Gothic, ghostly, and a true romantic. A lovely write
June 27th, 2025 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
A bottle of Cognac and three red roses on a grave top. Loved Poe and his work. Gothic, ghostly, and a true romantic. A lovely write
June 27th, 2025 04:12
THE DOOR
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a very nice subtle rhyme scheme to it with internal rhyming to make it flow but not have a nauseating sweetness to it. It works well and carries the reader on through the poem to the end. A poem of a dream that takes one to wakefulness. Lovely
June 26th, 2025 05:21
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a very nice subtle rhyme scheme to it with internal rhyming to make it flow but not have a nauseating sweetness to it. It works well and carries the reader on through the poem to the end. A poem of a dream that takes one to wakefulness. Lovely
June 26th, 2025 05:21
WINTERS COLD CALL
sorenbarrett said:
Tombstones of time. A metaphor well done. Very nicely written.
June 25th, 2025 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
Tombstones of time. A metaphor well done. Very nicely written.
June 25th, 2025 04:18
PEOPLE
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting view that only half of the people would think. Clever wording in this one. Nicely done
June 24th, 2025 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting view that only half of the people would think. Clever wording in this one. Nicely done
June 24th, 2025 04:45
DREAM OF SARA
sorenbarrett said:
An emotional poem of memories evoked by things around with the feeling of loss in the past and a sense that it will not be regained. Wintery as cast by the snow flakes which are also delicate and beautiful as is the memory. Sad, longing, wistful. Well done
June 23rd, 2025 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
An emotional poem of memories evoked by things around with the feeling of loss in the past and a sense that it will not be regained. Wintery as cast by the snow flakes which are also delicate and beautiful as is the memory. Sad, longing, wistful. Well done
June 23rd, 2025 04:57
DREAM OF SARA
arqios said:
This poem drips with memory and longing, soaked in the atmosphere of a dimly lit venue and the ache of repetition. Very touching and moving 🕊️
June 23rd, 2025 02:39
arqios said:
This poem drips with memory and longing, soaked in the atmosphere of a dimly lit venue and the ache of repetition. Very touching and moving 🕊️
June 23rd, 2025 02:39
WHAT IF
sorenbarrett said:
Although humorous as in most humor there is a bit of truth. I certainly don\'t want to play a harp for eternity and would rather push the limits a bit by pulling on God\'s robe for a laugh. A fave
June 22nd, 2025 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
Although humorous as in most humor there is a bit of truth. I certainly don\'t want to play a harp for eternity and would rather push the limits a bit by pulling on God\'s robe for a laugh. A fave
June 22nd, 2025 04:11
CASTLE IN THE CLOUDS
sorenbarrett said:
Sadness frozen in this poem. No greater loss that that of a parent that looses a child. A most tragic poem
June 21st, 2025 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
Sadness frozen in this poem. No greater loss that that of a parent that looses a child. A most tragic poem
June 21st, 2025 04:38
A MOTHERS GRIEF
arqios said:
That would be the way any normal person would feel. Very moving poem and superbly relatable.🕊️🙏🏻
June 20th, 2025 05:46
arqios said:
That would be the way any normal person would feel. Very moving poem and superbly relatable.🕊️🙏🏻
June 20th, 2025 05:46
A MOTHERS GRIEF
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem the question is posed as to the individual against the needs of many the actions of the innocent against the guilty. The issue of God vs. nothing. We all search for understanding and meaning and whether we ascribe it to God\'s will or Chaos and random actions of the universe it still give no answers. A poem that raises questions and doesn\'t answer them and a fave
June 20th, 2025 05:04
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem the question is posed as to the individual against the needs of many the actions of the innocent against the guilty. The issue of God vs. nothing. We all search for understanding and meaning and whether we ascribe it to God\'s will or Chaos and random actions of the universe it still give no answers. A poem that raises questions and doesn\'t answer them and a fave
June 20th, 2025 05:04
BALCONY
arqios said:
This is the world and age that we live in; a familiar strangeness, no less. 🙏🏻🕊
June 18th, 2025 06:44
arqios said:
This is the world and age that we live in; a familiar strangeness, no less. 🙏🏻🕊
June 18th, 2025 06:44
BALCONY
Poetic Licence said:
For some reason madman throughout history have had a infinity with balcony\'s, and throughout history they have their devoted followers, it always end badly and I am sure it will this time, enjoyed the read
June 18th, 2025 04:29
Poetic Licence said:
For some reason madman throughout history have had a infinity with balcony\'s, and throughout history they have their devoted followers, it always end badly and I am sure it will this time, enjoyed the read
June 18th, 2025 04:29
BALCONY
sorenbarrett said:
This could be taken to mean many different people, political, religious or otherwise but given the political climate I take it that way. Nicely stated with much implied.
June 18th, 2025 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
This could be taken to mean many different people, political, religious or otherwise but given the political climate I take it that way. Nicely stated with much implied.
June 18th, 2025 03:52
MOMENTS
RSM0812 said:
Great imagry, rhythm and rhyme. I really like how it developed to the very last line.
June 17th, 2025 15:30
RSM0812 said:
Great imagry, rhythm and rhyme. I really like how it developed to the very last line.
June 17th, 2025 15:30
THE KILLING OF MR BROWN
Damaso said:
Vibrant! It left me heartbroken. Thank you so much for sharing. Cheers.
June 17th, 2025 08:49
Damaso said:
Vibrant! It left me heartbroken. Thank you so much for sharing. Cheers.
June 17th, 2025 08:49
THE KILLING OF MR BROWN
Poetic Licence said:
A very relavent and poignant write, that is going to have so many implications in the future and sadly I fear it is just the beginning, nicely expressed and written
June 17th, 2025 05:17
Poetic Licence said:
A very relavent and poignant write, that is going to have so many implications in the future and sadly I fear it is just the beginning, nicely expressed and written
June 17th, 2025 05:17
THE KILLING OF MR BROWN
sorenbarrett said:
A poem to raise consciousness and ask questions about what happens when the cost of care becomes more than what can be supported. Ethics remolded in a world overpopulated with limited resources. This is just the tip of the iceberg. Well written it makes its point in most poetic form
June 17th, 2025 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
A poem to raise consciousness and ask questions about what happens when the cost of care becomes more than what can be supported. Ethics remolded in a world overpopulated with limited resources. This is just the tip of the iceberg. Well written it makes its point in most poetic form
June 17th, 2025 04:35
MOMENTS
sorenbarrett said:
Full of vivid images this poem takes the reader on a voyage through his world. Nicely done
June 16th, 2025 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
Full of vivid images this poem takes the reader on a voyage through his world. Nicely done
June 16th, 2025 04:25
THE WANDERER
Tony Grannell said:
Clothed in beautiful poetry as life passes by. I absolutely love this poem. Accolades galore.
Kind regards,
Tony.
June 15th, 2025 10:44
Tony Grannell said:
Clothed in beautiful poetry as life passes by. I absolutely love this poem. Accolades galore.
Kind regards,
Tony.
June 15th, 2025 10:44
THE WANDERER
sorenbarrett said:
I love the linking of nature and natural objects to emotion in this poem very nicely done
June 15th, 2025 04:58
sorenbarrett said:
I love the linking of nature and natural objects to emotion in this poem very nicely done
June 15th, 2025 04:58
THE WANDERER
arqios said:
Here is a deeply moving write, thank you for touching my thoughts and awareness this day. 🕊️🙏🏻
June 15th, 2025 03:55
arqios said:
Here is a deeply moving write, thank you for touching my thoughts and awareness this day. 🕊️🙏🏻
June 15th, 2025 03:55
EMBRACED
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words dance like starlight on water—ethereal and hauntingly beautiful. This poem lingers like a whispered dream in the moon’s embrace.
June 14th, 2025 13:11
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words dance like starlight on water—ethereal and hauntingly beautiful. This poem lingers like a whispered dream in the moon’s embrace.
June 14th, 2025 13:11
EMBRACED
sorenbarrett said:
Sensuous, romantic, nicely written this poem carries the reader through anthropomorphic transformation of nature to human form. Subtle yet clear it sends its message well.
June 14th, 2025 05:09
sorenbarrett said:
Sensuous, romantic, nicely written this poem carries the reader through anthropomorphic transformation of nature to human form. Subtle yet clear it sends its message well.
June 14th, 2025 05:09
EMBRACED
Hollow Enigma said:
this rings very very pretty. Would you tell me about it?
June 14th, 2025 02:59
Hollow Enigma said:
this rings very very pretty. Would you tell me about it?
June 14th, 2025 02:59
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