Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)
EQUAL SHARES
sorenbarrett said:
A feeling so well expressed in poetic form. Loved it a fave
June 20th, 2026 05:36
sorenbarrett said:
A feeling so well expressed in poetic form. Loved it a fave
June 20th, 2026 05:36
THE PERFUME FADES
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, what a beautifully melancholic piece. The fading light, the worn memories, the stillness throughout…it all feels like an evening spent keeping company with the past. And that closing question leaves a lingering ache behind. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 19th, 2026 22:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, what a beautifully melancholic piece. The fading light, the worn memories, the stillness throughout…it all feels like an evening spent keeping company with the past. And that closing question leaves a lingering ache behind. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 19th, 2026 22:19
THE PERFUME FADES
orchidee said:
Anyone wearing perfume at that bus stop?! lol.
June 19th, 2026 12:23
orchidee said:
Anyone wearing perfume at that bus stop?! lol.
June 19th, 2026 12:23
RACE RIOT UK
Mutley Ravishes said:
Do you and me know
What`s really going on?
Shenanigans
June 19th, 2026 07:10
Mutley Ravishes said:
Do you and me know
What`s really going on?
Shenanigans
June 19th, 2026 07:10
THE PERFUME FADES
arqios said:
The line \"Who cares?\" hit me hardest. After all the beautiful imagery and fading memories, it feels like the speaker isn\'t really asking a question any longer but expressing a deep sense of being alone with those memories. It gives the ending a sense of heartbreak that will linger with the reader for a long time. 🕊️🙏
June 19th, 2026 05:54
arqios said:
The line \"Who cares?\" hit me hardest. After all the beautiful imagery and fading memories, it feels like the speaker isn\'t really asking a question any longer but expressing a deep sense of being alone with those memories. It gives the ending a sense of heartbreak that will linger with the reader for a long time. 🕊️🙏
June 19th, 2026 05:54
THE PERFUME FADES
sorenbarrett said:
Poetic memories in an almost dreamlike atmosphere it wafts its way through the air like a perfume. Nicely done
June 19th, 2026 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
Poetic memories in an almost dreamlike atmosphere it wafts its way through the air like a perfume. Nicely done
June 19th, 2026 04:38
RACE RIOT UK
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, what a powerful piece. The contrast between everyday scenes and the aftermath of destruction gives this real weight. What stays with me is that final sense of ownership...or rather the refusal to claim what has been done in one\'s name. That lands hard. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 18th, 2026 20:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, what a powerful piece. The contrast between everyday scenes and the aftermath of destruction gives this real weight. What stays with me is that final sense of ownership...or rather the refusal to claim what has been done in one\'s name. That lands hard. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 18th, 2026 20:40
RACE RIOT UK
Syd said:
Hi Norman, I wholeheartedly agree with this piece. Hit the nail on the head. You\'d probably enjoy my latest regarding Farage.
Well written - Syd
June 18th, 2026 13:57
Syd said:
Hi Norman, I wholeheartedly agree with this piece. Hit the nail on the head. You\'d probably enjoy my latest regarding Farage.
Well written - Syd
June 18th, 2026 13:57
RACE RIOT UK
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem addresses themes of patriotism, social decay, and the consequences of collective actions in a community. It paints a vivid picture of a place where national pride is marred by violence and hatred, raising questions about the true meaning of patriotism and the impact of societal behaviors on the image of a community.
June 18th, 2026 07:13
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem addresses themes of patriotism, social decay, and the consequences of collective actions in a community. It paints a vivid picture of a place where national pride is marred by violence and hatred, raising questions about the true meaning of patriotism and the impact of societal behaviors on the image of a community.
June 18th, 2026 07:13
RACE RIOT UK
arqios said:
A sad and sorry plight, truly. A moving read, my friend 🕊️🙏🏻
June 18th, 2026 06:09
arqios said:
A sad and sorry plight, truly. A moving read, my friend 🕊️🙏🏻
June 18th, 2026 06:09
RACE RIOT UK
sorenbarrett said:
Mob action where animalistic action is unloosed. Well written
June 18th, 2026 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
Mob action where animalistic action is unloosed. Well written
June 18th, 2026 04:46
BETRAYAL
Goldfinch60 said:
Powerful words Norman showing the pain that can happen in life sometimes but hopefully it turns to goodness in the end.
Andy
June 18th, 2026 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Powerful words Norman showing the pain that can happen in life sometimes but hopefully it turns to goodness in the end.
Andy
June 18th, 2026 01:19
BETRAYAL
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this carries a deep ache, my friend. The sadness here feels fresh and unvarnished, as though the speaker is still trying to make sense of the wound while standing inside it. There is a quiet power in that honesty. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 17th, 2026 11:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this carries a deep ache, my friend. The sadness here feels fresh and unvarnished, as though the speaker is still trying to make sense of the wound while standing inside it. There is a quiet power in that honesty. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 17th, 2026 11:48
BETRAYAL
sorenbarrett said:
As I read this poem of in and out I became hypnotized with its flow and indeed did become its prey. Well done.
June 17th, 2026 04:28
sorenbarrett said:
As I read this poem of in and out I became hypnotized with its flow and indeed did become its prey. Well done.
June 17th, 2026 04:28
BETRAYAL
orchidee said:
I see - you were betrayed - someone said to you \'There will be a bus along in 5 minutes time\' - and then you waited 3 hours!
June 17th, 2026 02:12
orchidee said:
I see - you were betrayed - someone said to you \'There will be a bus along in 5 minutes time\' - and then you waited 3 hours!
June 17th, 2026 02:12
IF I WAS
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this carries such a gentle sadness, my friend. There is a quiet longing running through it that feels very sincere. I found myself lingering in the memories right alongside the speaker. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 16th, 2026 09:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this carries such a gentle sadness, my friend. There is a quiet longing running through it that feels very sincere. I found myself lingering in the memories right alongside the speaker. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 16th, 2026 09:24
IF I WAS
orchidee said:
Good write N. If you was waiting for a bus, how many lines of a poem would it take to describe the situation?! lol. And would it be 18+ with plenty of ^\"*%#&^%!! in it?
June 16th, 2026 07:42
orchidee said:
Good write N. If you was waiting for a bus, how many lines of a poem would it take to describe the situation?! lol. And would it be 18+ with plenty of ^\"*%#&^%!! in it?
June 16th, 2026 07:42
IF I WAS
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of memory and departure. Well written a bit melancholic but also uplifting. Nicely written
June 16th, 2026 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of memory and departure. Well written a bit melancholic but also uplifting. Nicely written
June 16th, 2026 04:08
GASP
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this drew me right in, my friend. It has that wonderful ghost-story atmosphere where the tension builds slowly and quietly until that final moment lands. I could feel the unease growing with every stanza. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 15th, 2026 08:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this drew me right in, my friend. It has that wonderful ghost-story atmosphere where the tension builds slowly and quietly until that final moment lands. I could feel the unease growing with every stanza. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 15th, 2026 08:18
GASP
Friendship said:
Well written . The ghost could represent unresolved emotions, perhaps related to grief or nostalgia.
June 15th, 2026 07:18
Friendship said:
Well written . The ghost could represent unresolved emotions, perhaps related to grief or nostalgia.
June 15th, 2026 07:18
GASP
sorenbarrett said:
A dark and haunting poem of startled reaction to the unexpected. Well done
June 15th, 2026 04:06
sorenbarrett said:
A dark and haunting poem of startled reaction to the unexpected. Well done
June 15th, 2026 04:06
GASP
orchidee said:
Good write N. And gasp - what you said when a bus arrived?! lol.
June 15th, 2026 02:28
orchidee said:
Good write N. And gasp - what you said when a bus arrived?! lol.
June 15th, 2026 02:28
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