Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)
OLD MEN
cully45 said:
Sad statement of life but so true. Well put together. Regards Owen
September 7th, 2026 10:42
cully45 said:
Sad statement of life but so true. Well put together. Regards Owen
September 7th, 2026 10:42
ARCHWAY OF ROSES
orchidee said:
Good write N. Does the no 7 bus go through any archways of roses? Or dunno - it\'s never turned up yet! lol.
September 7th, 2026 09:11
orchidee said:
Good write N. Does the no 7 bus go through any archways of roses? Or dunno - it\'s never turned up yet! lol.
September 7th, 2026 09:11
ARCHWAY OF ROSES
arqios said:
Beauty can be the gateway or threshold of the moment of departure while twilight softens grief. The night them wraps the world in an embrace of acceptance. All in all keeping our dignity. z👍🏻🕊️
September 7th, 2026 05:00
arqios said:
Beauty can be the gateway or threshold of the moment of departure while twilight softens grief. The night them wraps the world in an embrace of acceptance. All in all keeping our dignity. z👍🏻🕊️
September 7th, 2026 05:00
ARCHWAY OF ROSES
sorenbarrett said:
Most picturesque and lovely, this poem is also metaphoric and for me depicts the ending that could be of life itself or of loss. Nicely done my friend.
September 7th, 2026 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
Most picturesque and lovely, this poem is also metaphoric and for me depicts the ending that could be of life itself or of loss. Nicely done my friend.
September 7th, 2026 04:07
PRECIOUS MEMORIES
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this really moved me. There’s such tenderness in facing death through love rather than fear…quiet, heartfelt, and deeply human. Beautiful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 6th, 2026 13:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this really moved me. There’s such tenderness in facing death through love rather than fear…quiet, heartfelt, and deeply human. Beautiful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 6th, 2026 13:04
PRECIOUS MEMORIES
Lorenz said:
We all have a precious sepia-toned memory within us...
September 6th, 2026 06:53
Lorenz said:
We all have a precious sepia-toned memory within us...
September 6th, 2026 06:53
PRECIOUS MEMORIES
sorenbarrett said:
A clever and catchy rhyme is delivered in this poetic report of holding onto love through life and into death. Nicely done my friend
September 6th, 2026 04:41
sorenbarrett said:
A clever and catchy rhyme is delivered in this poetic report of holding onto love through life and into death. Nicely done my friend
September 6th, 2026 04:41
PRECIOUS MEMORIES
orchidee said:
Good write N. And now - Precious memories too, of when buses would pass by, and even stop at bus stops. Must have been a long time ago - about 200 years?! lol.
September 6th, 2026 03:13
orchidee said:
Good write N. And now - Precious memories too, of when buses would pass by, and even stop at bus stops. Must have been a long time ago - about 200 years?! lol.
September 6th, 2026 03:13
BABYN YAR
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Norman, we need t show our grandchildren that life can be wonderful.
Andy
September 6th, 2026 01:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Norman, we need t show our grandchildren that life can be wonderful.
Andy
September 6th, 2026 01:57
BABYN YAR
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, what a devastating piece. The history is enormous, but you bring it into one intimate moment between a grandfather and child…love trying to shelter innocence even when nothing else can. That final lullaby absolutely breaks the heart. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 5th, 2026 20:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, what a devastating piece. The history is enormous, but you bring it into one intimate moment between a grandfather and child…love trying to shelter innocence even when nothing else can. That final lullaby absolutely breaks the heart. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 5th, 2026 20:15
HALFWAY HOUSE
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a haunting piece, Norman. The whole room feels saturated with lives that have passed through it…old songs, fading memories, empty chairs, and that quiet heaviness left behind when the night is over. One heck of a poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 5th, 2026 19:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a haunting piece, Norman. The whole room feels saturated with lives that have passed through it…old songs, fading memories, empty chairs, and that quiet heaviness left behind when the night is over. One heck of a poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 5th, 2026 19:44
BABYN YAR
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Can this madness be stopped too? - people waiting at bus stop for non-existent No 7 bus? lol.
September 5th, 2026 04:50
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Can this madness be stopped too? - people waiting at bus stop for non-existent No 7 bus? lol.
September 5th, 2026 04:50
BABYN YAR
sorenbarrett said:
I can feel this poem although my ignorance prevents its full understanding and that means something. When a poem can touch those that don\'t know its history it becomes universal. Nicely done
September 5th, 2026 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
I can feel this poem although my ignorance prevents its full understanding and that means something. When a poem can touch those that don\'t know its history it becomes universal. Nicely done
September 5th, 2026 04:26
HALFWAY HOUSE
Goldfinch60 said:
Takes me back to such wonderful time of my past Norman.
Andy
September 5th, 2026 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Takes me back to such wonderful time of my past Norman.
Andy
September 5th, 2026 01:06
HALFWAY HOUSE
orchidee said:
Good write N. So you\'re halfway to town? Which bus did you get? lol.
September 4th, 2026 07:52
orchidee said:
Good write N. So you\'re halfway to town? Which bus did you get? lol.
September 4th, 2026 07:52
HALFWAY HOUSE
sorenbarrett said:
There is a rocking meter that with the rhyme provides a bit of melancholy to this poem and a sense of resignation in the wording finishes it well.
September 4th, 2026 03:39
sorenbarrett said:
There is a rocking meter that with the rhyme provides a bit of melancholy to this poem and a sense of resignation in the wording finishes it well.
September 4th, 2026 03:39
OLD MEN
NafisaSB said:
who indeed? one never knows, and always lives as if he/she is going to be a 100- and I pray all in this group reach that golden age with all senses fully intact..
September 4th, 2026 02:22
NafisaSB said:
who indeed? one never knows, and always lives as if he/she is going to be a 100- and I pray all in this group reach that golden age with all senses fully intact..
September 4th, 2026 02:22
MY LONELY CALL
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a haunting piece, Norman. The stillness, passing hours, and remembered closeness all deepen the sense of a voice calling into a place where love no longer answers...quietly devastating and beautifully written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 3rd, 2026 10:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a haunting piece, Norman. The stillness, passing hours, and remembered closeness all deepen the sense of a voice calling into a place where love no longer answers...quietly devastating and beautifully written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 3rd, 2026 10:25
MY LONELY CALL
sorenbarrett said:
Loss and memories promote pain in this write Norman. It is felt by the reader and there is a sadness to it. A sadness in its loneliness. Nicely written my friend.
September 3rd, 2026 04:00
sorenbarrett said:
Loss and memories promote pain in this write Norman. It is felt by the reader and there is a sadness to it. A sadness in its loneliness. Nicely written my friend.
September 3rd, 2026 04:00
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