Comments received on poems by nephilim56
A FOREIGN FIELD
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your poem etches war\'s haunting toll—where flesh and spirit fade unseen—asking if foreign fields ever truly release the souls they claim.
May 15th, 2025 04:23
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your poem etches war\'s haunting toll—where flesh and spirit fade unseen—asking if foreign fields ever truly release the souls they claim.
May 15th, 2025 04:23
TIME TO SAY GOODBYE
sorenbarrett said:
There is a melancholy and sense of sadness in this poem over days past and loves now burnt out. A wonderful write
May 14th, 2025 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
There is a melancholy and sense of sadness in this poem over days past and loves now burnt out. A wonderful write
May 14th, 2025 04:07
IRISH LULLABY
Teddy.15 said:
Having travelled well in the south of Ireland, I got to meet the very, very special people and I absolutely love this, Christie Moore would be proud. Such a magical tone especially at the end which gave me goosebumps 🌹
May 13th, 2025 14:12
Teddy.15 said:
Having travelled well in the south of Ireland, I got to meet the very, very special people and I absolutely love this, Christie Moore would be proud. Such a magical tone especially at the end which gave me goosebumps 🌹
May 13th, 2025 14:12
IRISH LULLABY
Tony Grannell said:
What a splendid poem and from the west of Ireland, a beautiful part of the island. You should repost this every year on Saint Patrick\'s Day, so that we can savour its beauty over and over again. Perfect.
All the very best to you,
Tony.
May 13th, 2025 08:49
Tony Grannell said:
What a splendid poem and from the west of Ireland, a beautiful part of the island. You should repost this every year on Saint Patrick\'s Day, so that we can savour its beauty over and over again. Perfect.
All the very best to you,
Tony.
May 13th, 2025 08:49
PHOTOGRAPH
sorenbarrett said:
Sad, nostalgic, a loss well written in most poetic form. Well done
May 13th, 2025 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
Sad, nostalgic, a loss well written in most poetic form. Well done
May 13th, 2025 04:11
PHOTOGRAPH
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write, I like the not framing of the photo, I think when people do that, they are framing what they want to remember not who the person was, enjoyed the read
May 13th, 2025 03:19
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write, I like the not framing of the photo, I think when people do that, they are framing what they want to remember not who the person was, enjoyed the read
May 13th, 2025 03:19
PHOTOGRAPH
Neilton said:
You wore freedom
As a coat
Such a great line !This is exactly how I feel when I look at a picture of a friend that changed or a loved one that is no longer here in this world! Perfectly written
May 13th, 2025 01:12
Neilton said:
You wore freedom
As a coat
Such a great line !This is exactly how I feel when I look at a picture of a friend that changed or a loved one that is no longer here in this world! Perfectly written
May 13th, 2025 01:12
IRISH LULLABY
Ellen Marsell said:
A very warm poem — and at the same time, strikingly deep.
May 12th, 2025 13:37
Ellen Marsell said:
A very warm poem — and at the same time, strikingly deep.
May 12th, 2025 13:37
IRISH LULLABY
sorenbarrett said:
And if we listen hard enough we can hear our mothers sing as well. A most lovely poem and feeling a fave
May 12th, 2025 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
And if we listen hard enough we can hear our mothers sing as well. A most lovely poem and feeling a fave
May 12th, 2025 04:31
IRISH LULLABY
Poetic Licence said:
Now that is a very sweet write, enjoyed the read
May 12th, 2025 03:58
Poetic Licence said:
Now that is a very sweet write, enjoyed the read
May 12th, 2025 03:58
JULIA
Hollow Enigma said:
I will say for some reaosn when I first read Julia my mind went ot singing Dire Straights but whatever lol. had a lot ifun with the rhythm of this poem. Had difficuly keeping up at the end probably on me though. Thankyou for the poem!
May 11th, 2025 05:53
Hollow Enigma said:
I will say for some reaosn when I first read Julia my mind went ot singing Dire Straights but whatever lol. had a lot ifun with the rhythm of this poem. Had difficuly keeping up at the end probably on me though. Thankyou for the poem!
May 11th, 2025 05:53
JULIA
sorenbarrett said:
A dark write of an illness neglected by medicine with a bleak prognosis. Well written
May 11th, 2025 05:00
sorenbarrett said:
A dark write of an illness neglected by medicine with a bleak prognosis. Well written
May 11th, 2025 05:00
JULIA
Poetic Licence said:
Another sad write around addiction, and watching the slow demise of someone, nicely expressed and written
May 11th, 2025 03:57
Poetic Licence said:
Another sad write around addiction, and watching the slow demise of someone, nicely expressed and written
May 11th, 2025 03:57
GOLDEN HAIR
sorenbarrett said:
Sadness is all that comes from wars disputes over land, power, beliefs, misunderstandings and greed. A well written piece the brings on strong feelings by the images presented. Well done
May 10th, 2025 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
Sadness is all that comes from wars disputes over land, power, beliefs, misunderstandings and greed. A well written piece the brings on strong feelings by the images presented. Well done
May 10th, 2025 04:27
GOLDEN HAIR
Poetic Licence said:
A sad and haunting write of the devastation of war, something we just have to much off, nicely expressed and written
May 10th, 2025 04:13
Poetic Licence said:
A sad and haunting write of the devastation of war, something we just have to much off, nicely expressed and written
May 10th, 2025 04:13
IN FLIGHT
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of love that has drifted, make you write, nicely done
May 9th, 2025 06:15
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of love that has drifted, make you write, nicely done
May 9th, 2025 06:15
IN FLIGHT
sorenbarrett said:
Bits and pieces give glimpses of sparks of love through metaphor . Enticing and thought provoking nicely done
May 9th, 2025 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
Bits and pieces give glimpses of sparks of love through metaphor . Enticing and thought provoking nicely done
May 9th, 2025 04:26
THE WOMAN AROUND THE CORNER
Poetic Licence said:
Sad depiction of the slow self destruction of drug addiction, nicely composed
May 8th, 2025 05:36
Poetic Licence said:
Sad depiction of the slow self destruction of drug addiction, nicely composed
May 8th, 2025 05:36
THE WOMAN AROUND THE CORNER
sorenbarrett said:
In few words a self destructive addiction depicted in such poetic form. Well worded and great poetic images with metaphor and some rhyme. Very nicely done and a fave
May 8th, 2025 05:33
sorenbarrett said:
In few words a self destructive addiction depicted in such poetic form. Well worded and great poetic images with metaphor and some rhyme. Very nicely done and a fave
May 8th, 2025 05:33
GHOSTS OF WAR
sorenbarrett said:
The pointlessness of war and all the consequences it brings. A cold read. This may be taken as a metaphor and an internal war within oneself.
May 7th, 2025 03:50
sorenbarrett said:
The pointlessness of war and all the consequences it brings. A cold read. This may be taken as a metaphor and an internal war within oneself.
May 7th, 2025 03:50
GHOSTS OF WAR
Poetic Licence said:
I sense a asking what are wars for as generally no one is better off after one, nicely expressed and written
May 7th, 2025 02:56
Poetic Licence said:
I sense a asking what are wars for as generally no one is better off after one, nicely expressed and written
May 7th, 2025 02:56
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