Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)
THE SLEEPERS EYE
orchidee said:
That\'ll be you camping down for the night at that bus stop! lol.
October 17th, 2026 10:32
orchidee said:
That\'ll be you camping down for the night at that bus stop! lol.
October 17th, 2026 10:32
HARBOUR GATES
RSM0812 said:
Nice write man. The way u string your words together is very remarkable...
October 17th, 2026 10:01
RSM0812 said:
Nice write man. The way u string your words together is very remarkable...
October 17th, 2026 10:01
THE SLEEPERS EYE
sorenbarrett said:
Otherworldly this poem feels seductively hypnotic and a bit surreal as it seems to float into that shadowy world of slumber. Nicely crafted with rhyme it purrs. Well done Norman
October 17th, 2026 03:46
sorenbarrett said:
Otherworldly this poem feels seductively hypnotic and a bit surreal as it seems to float into that shadowy world of slumber. Nicely crafted with rhyme it purrs. Well done Norman
October 17th, 2026 03:46
HARBOUR GATES
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful poem, Norman! I\'ve always been fascinated by abandoned places, especially those where generations of people once earned their living. I often wish those old buildings could talk. Imagine the stories they\'d tell! Much appreciated, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 16th, 2026 11:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful poem, Norman! I\'ve always been fascinated by abandoned places, especially those where generations of people once earned their living. I often wish those old buildings could talk. Imagine the stories they\'d tell! Much appreciated, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 16th, 2026 11:03
HARBOUR GATES
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Yes, the harbour gates had to close, as the bus for the outing to the harbour took so long - did it even appear at all?! lol.
I though at canal lock was disused, but it\'s used on weekend and a weekday barge trips still. Have to pay. But we could try taking a barge to town. Save waiting at this bus stop. lol.
October 16th, 2026 10:04
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Yes, the harbour gates had to close, as the bus for the outing to the harbour took so long - did it even appear at all?! lol.
I though at canal lock was disused, but it\'s used on weekend and a weekday barge trips still. Have to pay. But we could try taking a barge to town. Save waiting at this bus stop. lol.
October 16th, 2026 10:04
HARBOUR GATES
sorenbarrett said:
There is a softness to this poem a tender mist like feel, a quiet reverence set by meter and word. A wonderful piece my friend and a fave
October 16th, 2026 03:43
sorenbarrett said:
There is a softness to this poem a tender mist like feel, a quiet reverence set by meter and word. A wonderful piece my friend and a fave
October 16th, 2026 03:43
STRANGER AT THE SHORE
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Norman. This one really got to me. There\'s a loneliness here that I know all too well, and I found myself sitting with it for a while. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 15th, 2026 21:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Norman. This one really got to me. There\'s a loneliness here that I know all too well, and I found myself sitting with it for a while. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 15th, 2026 21:39
STRANGER AT THE SHORE
orchidee said:
Good write N. And now a poem with no words in it, entitled: \'What happened on the bus journey!\' lol. Answer: Nothing.
October 15th, 2026 11:28
orchidee said:
Good write N. And now a poem with no words in it, entitled: \'What happened on the bus journey!\' lol. Answer: Nothing.
October 15th, 2026 11:28
STRANGER AT THE SHORE
Teddy.15 said:
A profoundly beautifully written peice. 🌹
October 15th, 2026 05:02
Teddy.15 said:
A profoundly beautifully written peice. 🌹
October 15th, 2026 05:02
STRANGER AT THE SHORE
sorenbarrett said:
A haunting write in such good meter that like the waves one is carried onward to distant shores. Lovely my friend
October 15th, 2026 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
A haunting write in such good meter that like the waves one is carried onward to distant shores. Lovely my friend
October 15th, 2026 04:17
FACELESS HEADS
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, there\'s something genuinely unsettling about this one. I can\'t quite decide whether I\'d want to investigate further or get the hell out of there! LOL! Either way, you\'ve got my imagination working overtime. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 14th, 2026 20:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, there\'s something genuinely unsettling about this one. I can\'t quite decide whether I\'d want to investigate further or get the hell out of there! LOL! Either way, you\'ve got my imagination working overtime. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 14th, 2026 20:59
FACELESS HEADS
sorenbarrett said:
Norman this one reads so well with its rhyme and meter. After three reads I decided that it can be taken various ways and that flexibility makes it have even greater appeal. Nicely done my friend and a fave
October 14th, 2026 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
Norman this one reads so well with its rhyme and meter. After three reads I decided that it can be taken various ways and that flexibility makes it have even greater appeal. Nicely done my friend and a fave
October 14th, 2026 04:05
FACELESS HEADS
orchidee said:
Good write N. Yes, fellow waiting passengers at bus stop become so familiar - seen them for so long - that they become almost faceless. lol.
October 14th, 2026 02:32
orchidee said:
Good write N. Yes, fellow waiting passengers at bus stop become so familiar - seen them for so long - that they become almost faceless. lol.
October 14th, 2026 02:32
LONE WOLF
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, I think there\'s a little lone wolf in quite a few of us poets. I know mine tends to come out when I\'ve had enough of humanity for one day. 😂 Seriously, though, I enjoyed this one, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 13th, 2026 23:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, I think there\'s a little lone wolf in quite a few of us poets. I know mine tends to come out when I\'ve had enough of humanity for one day. 😂 Seriously, though, I enjoyed this one, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 13th, 2026 23:19
A QUIET TIME
NafisaSB said:
As usual written so well with an insight that’s amazing 👍
October 13th, 2026 04:26
NafisaSB said:
As usual written so well with an insight that’s amazing 👍
October 13th, 2026 04:26
FRIENDSHIP ( TO DAVID R.I.P )
NafisaSB said:
Heartfelt verse. May his soul rest in peace
October 13th, 2026 04:25
NafisaSB said:
Heartfelt verse. May his soul rest in peace
October 13th, 2026 04:25
LONE WOLF
sorenbarrett said:
These words are sufficient. I have always been a lone wolf and there is nothing wrong with that. Silence has its virtues. What is that old saying \" Better to be thought a fool than to open one\'s mouth and remove all doubt\" Nicely rhymed this one is identifiable my friend.
October 13th, 2026 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
These words are sufficient. I have always been a lone wolf and there is nothing wrong with that. Silence has its virtues. What is that old saying \" Better to be thought a fool than to open one\'s mouth and remove all doubt\" Nicely rhymed this one is identifiable my friend.
October 13th, 2026 04:17
LONE WOLF
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Yes, we\'re feeling like that lone wolf at this bus stop! lol.
October 13th, 2026 02:24
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Yes, we\'re feeling like that lone wolf at this bus stop! lol.
October 13th, 2026 02:24
FRIENDSHIP ( TO DAVID R.I.P )
orchidee said:
A sensitive write N.
Meanwhile in \'bus-land\' - there\'s skeletons waiting at the bus stop now!
October 12th, 2026 08:22
orchidee said:
A sensitive write N.
Meanwhile in \'bus-land\' - there\'s skeletons waiting at the bus stop now!
October 12th, 2026 08:22
FRIENDSHIP ( TO DAVID R.I.P )
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a wonderful way to honor David, Norman. I wish I\'d had the pleasure of knowing him. He sounds like someone who had plenty of stories to tell, and I\'m glad he had a friend who listened and remembers. Sending you much love, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 12th, 2026 08:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a wonderful way to honor David, Norman. I wish I\'d had the pleasure of knowing him. He sounds like someone who had plenty of stories to tell, and I\'m glad he had a friend who listened and remembers. Sending you much love, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 12th, 2026 08:12
FRIENDSHIP ( TO DAVID R.I.P )
arqios said:
Warmest sympathies dear friend 🙏🏻🕊️
October 12th, 2026 07:10
arqios said:
Warmest sympathies dear friend 🙏🏻🕊️
October 12th, 2026 07:10
FRIENDSHIP ( TO DAVID R.I.P )
Paul Bell said:
Always sad when great charactors leave us.
I think he left his mark though.
October 12th, 2026 05:57
Paul Bell said:
Always sad when great charactors leave us.
I think he left his mark though.
October 12th, 2026 05:57
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