Comments received on poems by PaperFlowerFields
Friends Forever
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the discourse and interchange I liked the format that kept straight who was speaking
July 30th, 2024 19:11
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the discourse and interchange I liked the format that kept straight who was speaking
July 30th, 2024 19:11
Distant
sorenbarrett said:
I hear two conflicting thoughts in this piece 1. that you are to blame for all this and 2. that the other person is unfair and treats you badly a nice dichotomy of that needs resolution.
July 29th, 2024 09:37
sorenbarrett said:
I hear two conflicting thoughts in this piece 1. that you are to blame for all this and 2. that the other person is unfair and treats you badly a nice dichotomy of that needs resolution.
July 29th, 2024 09:37
Just Take Your Time
Cassie58 said:
All things eventually pass. When struggling, it is a good thing to remember that.. In the meantime, the natural environment can be a comfort as can be poetry. I felt emotion in your words.
July 18th, 2024 01:32
Cassie58 said:
All things eventually pass. When struggling, it is a good thing to remember that.. In the meantime, the natural environment can be a comfort as can be poetry. I felt emotion in your words.
July 18th, 2024 01:32
To Whom It May Concern P: No Longer
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Beautiful and powerful write, FlowerFeilds.
I can see the emotion put into this wonderful Peice.
July 8th, 2024 13:02
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Beautiful and powerful write, FlowerFeilds.
I can see the emotion put into this wonderful Peice.
July 8th, 2024 13:02
Goodbye
Cassie58 said:
Change isn’t always easy. It takes courage to go in a new direction. The author tells this reader, it is time to make moves,, however challenging that might be. I find determination in these words to make improvements for the future.
December 23rd, 2023 01:08
Cassie58 said:
Change isn’t always easy. It takes courage to go in a new direction. The author tells this reader, it is time to make moves,, however challenging that might be. I find determination in these words to make improvements for the future.
December 23rd, 2023 01:08
Wax
dtrusss said:
This reminds me of Howl\'s Moving Castle, when Howl is fighting the war before swallowing his heart again. It\'s like he\'s melting and becoming a monster, until someone goes through the process of love to resurrect him. Love
November 8th, 2023 15:17
dtrusss said:
This reminds me of Howl\'s Moving Castle, when Howl is fighting the war before swallowing his heart again. It\'s like he\'s melting and becoming a monster, until someone goes through the process of love to resurrect him. Love
November 8th, 2023 15:17
To Whom it May Concern P.3 Pictures
Thomas W Case said:
Very, very well crafted. I relate, I hope this is healing for you.
October 27th, 2023 18:41
Thomas W Case said:
Very, very well crafted. I relate, I hope this is healing for you.
October 27th, 2023 18:41
Mourning
Alex Arnot said:
Absolutely phenomenal! Too easy is it to let grief consume you after a loss, but nothing helps to heal those wounds like remembering love!
August 29th, 2023 12:43
Alex Arnot said:
Absolutely phenomenal! Too easy is it to let grief consume you after a loss, but nothing helps to heal those wounds like remembering love!
August 29th, 2023 12:43
Empty Rooms
Beth K said:
PFF, thank you for your beautiful poem commemorating those lost to COVID. As a nurse myself, my heart breaks thinking of the many patients I witnessed taking their last breaths. Thank you for caring, and for being there for your patients, as difficult as it was! And know that you also touched their lives as much as they touched yours ❤️
August 17th, 2023 19:31
Beth K said:
PFF, thank you for your beautiful poem commemorating those lost to COVID. As a nurse myself, my heart breaks thinking of the many patients I witnessed taking their last breaths. Thank you for caring, and for being there for your patients, as difficult as it was! And know that you also touched their lives as much as they touched yours ❤️
August 17th, 2023 19:31
Burnt Out
Bobby O said:
Smoke is the perfect metaphor. This had continuity that draws a reader in. There was no pretense or exaggeration, just raw words carefully placed and selective to build the important story. Nice write good read. Props
August 14th, 2023 13:15
Bobby O said:
Smoke is the perfect metaphor. This had continuity that draws a reader in. There was no pretense or exaggeration, just raw words carefully placed and selective to build the important story. Nice write good read. Props
August 14th, 2023 13:15
Burnt Out
peto said:
Although steeped in sorrow I see strength in here
As its burnt out theme I have to say Phoenix like
I admire when a writer can wear their heart on their sleeve like this
Can\'t beat real for me
This is as real as it gets
Some great word choices to describe the grief
Hard to enjoy your pain
Outstanding writing though
August 14th, 2023 12:43
peto said:
Although steeped in sorrow I see strength in here
As its burnt out theme I have to say Phoenix like
I admire when a writer can wear their heart on their sleeve like this
Can\'t beat real for me
This is as real as it gets
Some great word choices to describe the grief
Hard to enjoy your pain
Outstanding writing though
August 14th, 2023 12:43
Castles of Snow and Glass
lostmoon said:
The story you\'re telling is very sad, but expressed beautifully. Since you referred to the beginning at the end by talking about being trapped on the throne, your poem has an even stronger effect. Well done, really. Keep creating great pieces like this!
July 17th, 2023 12:39
lostmoon said:
The story you\'re telling is very sad, but expressed beautifully. Since you referred to the beginning at the end by talking about being trapped on the throne, your poem has an even stronger effect. Well done, really. Keep creating great pieces like this!
July 17th, 2023 12:39
When it Rains
mono said:
Wow !! Your description on rain is just breathtaking. It still amazes me , how we all have different viewpoints about simplest things of life ✨
July 13th, 2023 01:23
mono said:
Wow !! Your description on rain is just breathtaking. It still amazes me , how we all have different viewpoints about simplest things of life ✨
July 13th, 2023 01:23
When it Rains
lostmoon said:
This is so wholesome and I love it. Your style is nice!
July 6th, 2023 13:19
lostmoon said:
This is so wholesome and I love it. Your style is nice!
July 6th, 2023 13:19
Lesson of the Flowers
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing I enjoyed reading this 🙂
Flowers are beautiful and like colours , they too can have meanings attached to them and make us think of so much more
July 3rd, 2023 12:25
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing I enjoyed reading this 🙂
Flowers are beautiful and like colours , they too can have meanings attached to them and make us think of so much more
July 3rd, 2023 12:25
Farewell
peto said:
Superb write
Could be straight from my guardian angel
Loved it
Verse 7 in particular
A deep and enjoyable read
June 23rd, 2023 12:24
peto said:
Superb write
Could be straight from my guardian angel
Loved it
Verse 7 in particular
A deep and enjoyable read
June 23rd, 2023 12:24
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