Comments received on poems by PaperFlowerFields
Goodbye
Cassie58 said:
Change isn’t always easy. It takes courage to go in a new direction. The author tells this reader, it is time to make moves,, however challenging that might be. I find determination in these words to make improvements for the future.
December 23rd, 2023 01:08
Cassie58 said:
Change isn’t always easy. It takes courage to go in a new direction. The author tells this reader, it is time to make moves,, however challenging that might be. I find determination in these words to make improvements for the future.
December 23rd, 2023 01:08
Wax
dtrusss said:
This reminds me of Howl\'s Moving Castle, when Howl is fighting the war before swallowing his heart again. It\'s like he\'s melting and becoming a monster, until someone goes through the process of love to resurrect him. Love
November 8th, 2023 15:17
dtrusss said:
This reminds me of Howl\'s Moving Castle, when Howl is fighting the war before swallowing his heart again. It\'s like he\'s melting and becoming a monster, until someone goes through the process of love to resurrect him. Love
November 8th, 2023 15:17
To Whom it May Concern P.3 Pictures
Thomas W Case said:
Very, very well crafted. I relate, I hope this is healing for you.
October 27th, 2023 18:41
Thomas W Case said:
Very, very well crafted. I relate, I hope this is healing for you.
October 27th, 2023 18:41
Mourning
Alex Arnot said:
Absolutely phenomenal! Too easy is it to let grief consume you after a loss, but nothing helps to heal those wounds like remembering love!
August 29th, 2023 12:43
Alex Arnot said:
Absolutely phenomenal! Too easy is it to let grief consume you after a loss, but nothing helps to heal those wounds like remembering love!
August 29th, 2023 12:43
Empty Rooms
Beth K said:
PFF, thank you for your beautiful poem commemorating those lost to COVID. As a nurse myself, my heart breaks thinking of the many patients I witnessed taking their last breaths. Thank you for caring, and for being there for your patients, as difficult as it was! And know that you also touched their lives as much as they touched yours ❤️
August 17th, 2023 19:31
Beth K said:
PFF, thank you for your beautiful poem commemorating those lost to COVID. As a nurse myself, my heart breaks thinking of the many patients I witnessed taking their last breaths. Thank you for caring, and for being there for your patients, as difficult as it was! And know that you also touched their lives as much as they touched yours ❤️
August 17th, 2023 19:31
Burnt Out
Bobby O said:
Smoke is the perfect metaphor. This had continuity that draws a reader in. There was no pretense or exaggeration, just raw words carefully placed and selective to build the important story. Nice write good read. Props
August 14th, 2023 13:15
Bobby O said:
Smoke is the perfect metaphor. This had continuity that draws a reader in. There was no pretense or exaggeration, just raw words carefully placed and selective to build the important story. Nice write good read. Props
August 14th, 2023 13:15
Burnt Out
peto said:
Although steeped in sorrow I see strength in here
As its burnt out theme I have to say Phoenix like
I admire when a writer can wear their heart on their sleeve like this
Can\'t beat real for me
This is as real as it gets
Some great word choices to describe the grief
Hard to enjoy your pain
Outstanding writing though
August 14th, 2023 12:43
peto said:
Although steeped in sorrow I see strength in here
As its burnt out theme I have to say Phoenix like
I admire when a writer can wear their heart on their sleeve like this
Can\'t beat real for me
This is as real as it gets
Some great word choices to describe the grief
Hard to enjoy your pain
Outstanding writing though
August 14th, 2023 12:43
Castles of Snow and Glass
lostmoon said:
The story you\'re telling is very sad, but expressed beautifully. Since you referred to the beginning at the end by talking about being trapped on the throne, your poem has an even stronger effect. Well done, really. Keep creating great pieces like this!
July 17th, 2023 12:39
lostmoon said:
The story you\'re telling is very sad, but expressed beautifully. Since you referred to the beginning at the end by talking about being trapped on the throne, your poem has an even stronger effect. Well done, really. Keep creating great pieces like this!
July 17th, 2023 12:39
When it Rains
mono said:
Wow !! Your description on rain is just breathtaking. It still amazes me , how we all have different viewpoints about simplest things of life ✨
July 13th, 2023 01:23
mono said:
Wow !! Your description on rain is just breathtaking. It still amazes me , how we all have different viewpoints about simplest things of life ✨
July 13th, 2023 01:23
When it Rains
lostmoon said:
This is so wholesome and I love it. Your style is nice!
July 6th, 2023 13:19
lostmoon said:
This is so wholesome and I love it. Your style is nice!
July 6th, 2023 13:19
Lesson of the Flowers
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely writing I enjoyed reading this 🙂
Flowers are beautiful and like colours , they too can have meanings attached to them and make us think of so much more
July 3rd, 2023 12:25
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely writing I enjoyed reading this 🙂
Flowers are beautiful and like colours , they too can have meanings attached to them and make us think of so much more
July 3rd, 2023 12:25
Farewell
peto said:
Superb write
Could be straight from my guardian angel
Loved it
Verse 7 in particular
A deep and enjoyable read
June 23rd, 2023 12:24
peto said:
Superb write
Could be straight from my guardian angel
Loved it
Verse 7 in particular
A deep and enjoyable read
June 23rd, 2023 12:24
Going Home
L. B. Mek said:
great message
really well unfurled/argued
thanks for sharing
June 9th, 2023 02:55
L. B. Mek said:
great message
really well unfurled/argued
thanks for sharing
June 9th, 2023 02:55
Forgive Thise Corpse For Living
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Forgive this corpse for living” by PaperFlowerFields
This is a very tragic poem. It is full of despair and despondency. I have got many of my poems analysed by ChatGPT and published both the poems and he ChatGPT analysis on this site. I advise you to contact ChatGPT, insert the text of your poem into the screen, ask for an analysis and post it on this site. Best wishes. Soman Ragavan. 6 June, 2023. //
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June 6th, 2023 00:17
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Forgive this corpse for living” by PaperFlowerFields
This is a very tragic poem. It is full of despair and despondency. I have got many of my poems analysed by ChatGPT and published both the poems and he ChatGPT analysis on this site. I advise you to contact ChatGPT, insert the text of your poem into the screen, ask for an analysis and post it on this site. Best wishes. Soman Ragavan. 6 June, 2023. //
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June 6th, 2023 00:17
It Does Rain
L. B. Mek said:
so well executed, such wide scope
of the \'human experience\'
you\'ve covered and most pertinently
empathised with
indeed, rain may be the nurturing
hero of nature
yet, those waterfall of tears as price
for surviving life
makes us wonder, if the universe
really need to rain on our fate
so callously..
such an impassioned write, thanks for sharing
May 26th, 2023 03:30
L. B. Mek said:
so well executed, such wide scope
of the \'human experience\'
you\'ve covered and most pertinently
empathised with
indeed, rain may be the nurturing
hero of nature
yet, those waterfall of tears as price
for surviving life
makes us wonder, if the universe
really need to rain on our fate
so callously..
such an impassioned write, thanks for sharing
May 26th, 2023 03:30
What of a Painful Love?
Rohan Regi said:
Be strong and pull yourselves out of it. For me, love is always painful but it is this constant fear of losing it. When u want to get out of it, it is not love anymore. It\'s just pain.
May 22nd, 2023 17:30
Rohan Regi said:
Be strong and pull yourselves out of it. For me, love is always painful but it is this constant fear of losing it. When u want to get out of it, it is not love anymore. It\'s just pain.
May 22nd, 2023 17:30
Broken Bottles
NinjaGirl said:
This is really interesting I love the symbolism (:
May 18th, 2023 12:13
NinjaGirl said:
This is really interesting I love the symbolism (:
May 18th, 2023 12:13
To Say the Least
Bobby O said:
That’s some deep upon deep introspective. Shouting out is cathartic and writing clears the brave mind and I’m thinking a good process will start evolve and revolve around bits of hope.y best thoughts. Thanks got the piece.
May 5th, 2023 13:13
Bobby O said:
That’s some deep upon deep introspective. Shouting out is cathartic and writing clears the brave mind and I’m thinking a good process will start evolve and revolve around bits of hope.y best thoughts. Thanks got the piece.
May 5th, 2023 13:13
