Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan



Come to sea
Clara said:

\'\' To live is to perform the art from our soul, with a spirit that won\'t quit no matter what UNFOLDS \'\'

This... I love this. I may make it my new motto! Excellent. I keep repeating it outloud to myself. Letting it sink in!

CLARA X

September 2nd, 2019 10:38

Septembers first tear
Goldfinch60 said:

Your family is always there for you no matter how far away they appear to be - and you are always there for them.

September 2nd, 2019 01:35

Septembers first tear
Laura🌻 said:

Dan,

Yes, so true...

‘The most important person to keep your promises to, is yourself’

These words are so powerful and inspirational as are your words...

‘Release and rhyme
One moment at a time’

~Laura~


September 1st, 2019 23:39

Septembers first tear
Clara said:

Reading this, I feel such a sense of belonging and contentment. Family in all of its forms at the very centre. Like a previous comment, the line \'\' in the eyes of my family I\'m all I need to be. \'\' is truly humbling and breathtaking in its honest simplicity.

A great read!

CLARA X

September 1st, 2019 14:45

Septembers first tear
dusk arising said:

\"In the eyes of my family i am all i need to be\" .... wonderful!

What more could a man ask?

September 1st, 2019 11:20

Septembers first tear
poetboy123 said:

You always find hope when you least expect it. Wonderful write, Dan.

September 1st, 2019 10:45

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Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful exposition of your thoughts and concerns Dan. You have moved on so far in your life that all those thoughts and obstacles will be accepted and you are glorying in that eperience.

September 1st, 2019 00:53

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Michael Edwards said:

The main obstacles in life are recognising the problems and having the courage to ask the questions - you are over the main hurdles and the answers will come.

August 31st, 2019 07:55

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dusk arising said:

This reads like you are in a state of flux Dan. The answers are there but you wont find them whilst you are asking the questions. Slowly the answers will come to you and you will truly know yourself.

Like i wrote the other day the words of lennon \"life is what happens to you whilst you\'re busy doing something else\"



August 31st, 2019 07:48

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orchidee said:

Not \'I, I who have nothing\' as the song goes. Call me Shirley (Bassey), or better, call me Tom (Jones)! Rather, \'I who have a lot, expressed in this fine write!\'
*Staggers back in amazement*. I didn\'t know I was gonna comment that!

August 31st, 2019 06:16

My man
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful tribute to your son, he knows that you will always be there for him Dan so his life will be wonderful.

August 31st, 2019 00:16

My man
vvnrose said:

Love it! I have a sixteen yr old superstar as well.

August 30th, 2019 19:53

My man
Jeffrey Roy said:

Neat poem

August 30th, 2019 15:47

My man
orchidee said:

A fine tribute Dan.

August 30th, 2019 06:31

My man
dusk arising said:

Teen years can be difficult and trying for him and you. Stay close, teens do come to an end and then the real man steps forward all the richer for what he has learned.
You know the answer already to all lifes problems - love.

August 30th, 2019 04:42

My man
kevin browne said:

Yes, Dan keep you boys love close to your heart and let him stay ther brside you for evermore, A gret tribut poem. Nice....

August 30th, 2019 04:39

I am found
Goldfinch60 said:

May those memories be filled with the wonderful symphonies from your heart and soul Dan

August 30th, 2019 00:50

I am found
dusk arising said:

A lyric from that old Beatles song comes to mind Dan. \"Nothing you can do but you can learn how to be you in time - It\'s easy, All you need is love\".

Another John Lennon wise phrase \"life is what happens to you whilst you are doing something else\".

It\'s plain to see that you are truly living m8.

August 29th, 2019 12:04

I am found
Christina8 said:

I certainly can relate Dan to your words. Wonderful write!

August 29th, 2019 09:33

I am found
Suresh said:

You are the creator of your destiny.

August 29th, 2019 09:07

I am found
Neville said:

these words do have a certain something..

August 29th, 2019 04:49

I am found
orchidee said:

Fine write and dancing feet there Dan!

August 29th, 2019 04:15

37 weeks and I love her to bits
Christina8 said:

Wonderful words you are living by, dan! Forward is always the best way! respect

August 28th, 2019 13:01

37 weeks and I love her to bits
Suresh said:

The joyous anticipation with a promise to love and care- there is nothing else

August 28th, 2019 10:24

Always there
Alta H Mabin said:

Music and our poetic flow. Beautiful write.

August 28th, 2019 03:07

37 weeks and I love her to bits
dusk arising said:

A privilege to read your personal promise of love and \'good behaviour\' to your loved one Dan.

Love finds a way. When we slip or falter then love always find a way to forgive. Each slip then creates a new beginning.... and they can be such fun LOL.

August 28th, 2019 02:10

37 weeks and I love her to bits
orchidee said:

A fine write Dan - scary clip! lol.

August 28th, 2019 01:26

37 weeks and I love her to bits
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words Dan, going forward into your wonderful life is the way to go.

August 28th, 2019 01:06

37 weeks and I love her to bits
kevin browne said:

Never worry about the past because the furture comes too soon. Live each minute as you do by searching out your Moon..

August 28th, 2019 01:04

Farmer Dan
Goldfinch60 said:

Children just do not live outside any more, such a shame but you have hit the nail on the head Dan.

August 28th, 2019 01:01



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