Gangster of love!
dusk arising said:

So much joy i see and read in you and your sprouts. Just think of how it could have been if you didn\'t have the guts, the courage, to face your inner demons and .... well enough of that, you\'ve broken the chain of bad parental influence Dan. Look at the fun and happiness around you with those young lives.

A picture speaks a thousand words - to each viewer in their own words.

There\'s a lot of love coming out of you these days.

August 12th, 2019 05:41

King\'s, Queens and all in between
kevin browne said:

Knowing your powers is a strong statement depending on how you think. I beileve firmly the further you can stretch your mind towards the outer bounds of existence then we can start talking about knowing your powers. Everyday I ride the merry go round of life and I\'m whopping and screaming in delight as I fly past those who look upon me in disarray whilst I am having fun. Searh for those new landscapes. Dan. Go beyond everything you know even if it takes a lifetime to acheive.
There is no replacement for your own thought. It\'s yours to keep forever and noone can ever take that away from you. Keep your finger dipped in the river of positivity and the under-current pattern of your life will change forever. It will allow you go go anywhere you want to go. No matter where in the world you are a though takes just the same amount of time to get around to the other side of Earth as if you were sat right next to me. Thouhgts of you entering into newly found worlds are now shining brighter than ever before. As you are already doing what you expect from your writing then you know you\'re on the right road. A magical one at that...!!!

August 11th, 2019 13:34

Rare
Suresh said:

Mover forget those that stood by

Well penned.


August 11th, 2019 11:14

King\'s, Queens and all in between
Neville said:

just about sums everything up in one go.... Nice

Neville

August 11th, 2019 02:14

King\'s, Queens and all in between
Michael Edwards said:

Sadly the song is not for me but your heart-lifting poem certainly is - a great write.

August 11th, 2019 01:13

Rare
Goldfinch60 said:

All it needs is a word or a thought from somebody and you can go along the path to the wonder of life that you have now found Dan, may that always be the way.

August 11th, 2019 00:42

Rare
kevin browne said:

Ah, I see the infancy of the innocence say a child holds close to his/her heart and the thought of working out who is who. You captured that in your beautiful poem thanking all of those wh adhere to what you write. Keep you innocent part and delve deep into what you can\'t normally perceive on a daily basis. There inbetween the number 1 and 2 is another dimensional stunning world most of us almost miss. The imaginations you bring to the board shall remain there forever in our hearts, Dan. Thank you for being so wonderfully adapt to making us feel your love. That\'s important to remember, It\'s all about living, it\'s all about loving and it\'s all about giving. There is nothing other than reaching the top of your world which it looks like your\'re heading upwards with the force of your determination to hit that perfect poem....!!!

August 10th, 2019 11:11

Rare
orchidee said:

A fine write Dan. My singing is rare, and that\'s a fact! It\'s a rare occasion if someone lasts out listening to me singing a whole song through! heehee.

August 10th, 2019 07:54

Rare
Michael Edwards said:

May friendships grow
with the words you distribute
a mighty fine tribute
to all who you know

August 10th, 2019 05:13

Rare
Neville said:

I am smiling big, because you just made me smile big.... N

August 10th, 2019 04:31

Let the voices in
Laura🌻 said:

Dan,

An exceptional write and choice of quote and music! I enjoyed reading the poem in its entirety! I especially liked...

...‘but one day you’ll hear a voice from within. Not that one that is you but the one that’s you but not you!’ ...

With each writing, you’re shining more and more everyday! 💫Let that shining star 🌟 forever guide you!

~Laura~

August 10th, 2019 00:34

Let the voices in
Goldfinch60 said:

Profound thoughts Dan, you are in a wonderful place in your life now.

August 9th, 2019 15:08

Let the voices in
dusk arising said:

May that quote sink deep into your every fibre so that you live it without wearing it.

August 9th, 2019 08:30

Let the voices in
Nafis Light said:

The quote is from The Group? Who are they?

August 9th, 2019 04:02

Let the voices in
Fay Slimm. said:

Great quote Dan with which I truly agree and your verse well poems the help inner voices can give to those trying to deal with who they really are.

August 9th, 2019 02:54