Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Wanted and needed are not the same
orchidee said:
Here\'s a black humour joke - \'I wanted help, I called The Samaritans, but they were engaged!\' Doh! It could only happen to me. (not a true story. Phew!).
September 12th, 2019 10:50
orchidee said:
Here\'s a black humour joke - \'I wanted help, I called The Samaritans, but they were engaged!\' Doh! It could only happen to me. (not a true story. Phew!).
September 12th, 2019 10:50
Wanted and needed are not the same
orchidee said:
Here\'s a black humour joke - \'I wanted help, I called The Samaritans, but they were engaged!\' Doh! It could only happen to me. (not a true story. Phew!).
September 12th, 2019 10:50
orchidee said:
Here\'s a black humour joke - \'I wanted help, I called The Samaritans, but they were engaged!\' Doh! It could only happen to me. (not a true story. Phew!).
September 12th, 2019 10:50
Wanted and needed are not the same
Suresh said:
The equating of \"want\" with \"need\" that drives all of us into unknown territory-
September 12th, 2019 10:35
Suresh said:
The equating of \"want\" with \"need\" that drives all of us into unknown territory-
September 12th, 2019 10:35
Wanted and needed are not the same
dusk arising said:
That is the right attitude and determination with which to see thru this existence to it\'s end Dan.
September 12th, 2019 10:24
dusk arising said:
That is the right attitude and determination with which to see thru this existence to it\'s end Dan.
September 12th, 2019 10:24
I was not ready for this
dusk arising said:
Sympathy Dan, I have no answers here but to agree with your words.
Mt word Dan, you do write well and express yourself well when something really bites you.
THis piece really does show how you have moved on and learned so much from searching your soul.
Be strong.
September 11th, 2019 05:31
dusk arising said:
Sympathy Dan, I have no answers here but to agree with your words.
Mt word Dan, you do write well and express yourself well when something really bites you.
THis piece really does show how you have moved on and learned so much from searching your soul.
Be strong.
September 11th, 2019 05:31
I was not ready for this
Fay Slimm. said:
A powerful read Dan and I must agree with its sentiments - we have but a short space of time here to prove that right is never held in the hands of bullies - - a compelling message runs through this fine piece of work my friend.
September 11th, 2019 03:42
Fay Slimm. said:
A powerful read Dan and I must agree with its sentiments - we have but a short space of time here to prove that right is never held in the hands of bullies - - a compelling message runs through this fine piece of work my friend.
September 11th, 2019 03:42
I was not ready for this
sylviasearcher said:
Oh the school system!
I despair everyday.
It is like a monster machine.
The government are worried about the mental health of our children but they will never reform these Machines.
September 11th, 2019 02:26
sylviasearcher said:
Oh the school system!
I despair everyday.
It is like a monster machine.
The government are worried about the mental health of our children but they will never reform these Machines.
September 11th, 2019 02:26
I was not ready for this
Goldfinch60 said:
What a powerful write Dan. I do hope that your daughter is OK. I also hope that she can see bullies for what they are, they are complete ******* cowards who will get there comeuppance one day.
I saw a news item last night that an ex world champion kick boxer is offering free tuition to children in self defence, this is to try and combat the knife crime that is plaguing the Midlands (and other areas).
September 11th, 2019 02:25
Goldfinch60 said:
What a powerful write Dan. I do hope that your daughter is OK. I also hope that she can see bullies for what they are, they are complete ******* cowards who will get there comeuppance one day.
I saw a news item last night that an ex world champion kick boxer is offering free tuition to children in self defence, this is to try and combat the knife crime that is plaguing the Midlands (and other areas).
September 11th, 2019 02:25
I was not ready for this
orchidee said:
A first year at Secondary School can be particularly horrid for some. Pushed into the holly bush as \'initiation\' - and worse things!
I cried when leaving Primary School, out of sadness - though it was cosy, nice, warm in attitude and outlook.
Secondary School was not all bad for me, but I shed no tears on leaving.
September 11th, 2019 01:59
orchidee said:
A first year at Secondary School can be particularly horrid for some. Pushed into the holly bush as \'initiation\' - and worse things!
I cried when leaving Primary School, out of sadness - though it was cosy, nice, warm in attitude and outlook.
Secondary School was not all bad for me, but I shed no tears on leaving.
September 11th, 2019 01:59
No fear
Goldfinch60 said:
As you know as I do My Spirit will go on for eternity, see you there Dan.
September 10th, 2019 14:43
Goldfinch60 said:
As you know as I do My Spirit will go on for eternity, see you there Dan.
September 10th, 2019 14:43
No fear
Fay Slimm. said:
We who have the gift of life will not go into non-existence - as there is no opposite to life - - death is but the opposite of birth - -there is lots to think on in this gem of a posting dear Dan................
September 10th, 2019 12:24
Fay Slimm. said:
We who have the gift of life will not go into non-existence - as there is no opposite to life - - death is but the opposite of birth - -there is lots to think on in this gem of a posting dear Dan................
September 10th, 2019 12:24
No fear
Michael Edwards said:
A great little write Dan - and may it ever be so.
September 10th, 2019 04:05
Michael Edwards said:
A great little write Dan - and may it ever be so.
September 10th, 2019 04:05
End of her time
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful loving write. She will always be with you and will be there with your new one due soon.
September 10th, 2019 00:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful loving write. She will always be with you and will be there with your new one due soon.
September 10th, 2019 00:24
End of her time
Christina8 said:
a beautiful loving tribute Dan! Thanks for sharing!!
September 9th, 2019 09:47
Christina8 said:
a beautiful loving tribute Dan! Thanks for sharing!!
September 9th, 2019 09:47
End of her time
kevin browne said:
coinciding with Grandmothers passing your poem about her fits perfectly into anyones heart. You reveal yourself, yet again, in order for love, peace and underdtanding to take place and you have put your heart in the right place. I lost my brother-in-law to cancer ,13th September 2018 so there will be tears flowing over the next week. Thank you for sharing how you are dealing without Grandma around...
September 9th, 2019 09:10
kevin browne said:
coinciding with Grandmothers passing your poem about her fits perfectly into anyones heart. You reveal yourself, yet again, in order for love, peace and underdtanding to take place and you have put your heart in the right place. I lost my brother-in-law to cancer ,13th September 2018 so there will be tears flowing over the next week. Thank you for sharing how you are dealing without Grandma around...
September 9th, 2019 09:10
End of her time
dusk arising said:
Beautiful tribute to a loved soul, now freed from earthly toil and pains to continue a spiritual path whatever that be.
Super picture of grandmother Dan, showing her caring smile. She does look like the picture of the lovely grandmother we all could wish for. I never met mine.
I\'m sure that the good things she showed you are there inside you and will last in you long after you have passed them onto your own grandchildren.
Love and respect.
September 9th, 2019 03:45
dusk arising said:
Beautiful tribute to a loved soul, now freed from earthly toil and pains to continue a spiritual path whatever that be.
Super picture of grandmother Dan, showing her caring smile. She does look like the picture of the lovely grandmother we all could wish for. I never met mine.
I\'m sure that the good things she showed you are there inside you and will last in you long after you have passed them onto your own grandchildren.
Love and respect.
September 9th, 2019 03:45
Birdie Dan
Goldfinch60 said:
The view from above is so wondrous that is why when I come back I want to be a buzzard so that I can sail around the air looking down at natures artwork.
September 9th, 2019 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
The view from above is so wondrous that is why when I come back I want to be a buzzard so that I can sail around the air looking down at natures artwork.
September 9th, 2019 00:44
Birdie Dan
Clara said:
Lovely little poem! And a subtle reminder to climb more trees. Why do we stop doing this?! Great fun!
CLARA X
September 8th, 2019 06:59
Clara said:
Lovely little poem! And a subtle reminder to climb more trees. Why do we stop doing this?! Great fun!
CLARA X
September 8th, 2019 06:59
Birdie Dan
Neville said:
a fun write and a smashing pic /selfie... Happy Sunday....
September 8th, 2019 06:11
Neville said:
a fun write and a smashing pic /selfie... Happy Sunday....
September 8th, 2019 06:11
Birdie Dan
dusk arising said:
Long time since i climbed a tree Dan, I\'m envious.... DON\'T JUMP!
September 8th, 2019 05:24
dusk arising said:
Long time since i climbed a tree Dan, I\'m envious.... DON\'T JUMP!
September 8th, 2019 05:24
Breakdown to breakthrough (warning emotional)
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an emotive write and so true of music, it can bring all emotions to us but the overwhelming one is that which you describe.
September 8th, 2019 00:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an emotive write and so true of music, it can bring all emotions to us but the overwhelming one is that which you describe.
September 8th, 2019 00:41
Breakdown to breakthrough (warning emotional)
kevin browne said:
\"Pride took over knowing how precious life is\". You aimed your pen well to paper that and the result from this poem written in songful moments from the sound of your ears is quite remarkable. It clearly reveals a lot more about how your pen controls your mind over the matters in which they are concerned. Unveiling one\'s thoughts to an audience of poets and poetesses has a top-notch quality about the relevance of how much life really means to you. You take it on well, Dan...
September 7th, 2019 11:40
kevin browne said:
\"Pride took over knowing how precious life is\". You aimed your pen well to paper that and the result from this poem written in songful moments from the sound of your ears is quite remarkable. It clearly reveals a lot more about how your pen controls your mind over the matters in which they are concerned. Unveiling one\'s thoughts to an audience of poets and poetesses has a top-notch quality about the relevance of how much life really means to you. You take it on well, Dan...
September 7th, 2019 11:40
Breakdown to breakthrough (warning emotional)
Neville said:
a truly delightful emotional outpouring... all wrapped up in an equally delightful poem......... Neville
September 7th, 2019 10:23
Neville said:
a truly delightful emotional outpouring... all wrapped up in an equally delightful poem......... Neville
September 7th, 2019 10:23
Breakdown to breakthrough (warning emotional)
dusk arising said:
There are some things which happen in our lives which turn us about - put us into a spin of desperation and questions yes angered questions flow with tears of sorrow, guilt and more raging anger.
A truly testing time of unknown outcome.
For me, on the other side of this i have found peace in a spiritual belief. Though anger and sorrow are still there and fall from me when my thoughts return.
Am i stronger, better, more balanced for this... no!
September 7th, 2019 06:40
dusk arising said:
There are some things which happen in our lives which turn us about - put us into a spin of desperation and questions yes angered questions flow with tears of sorrow, guilt and more raging anger.
A truly testing time of unknown outcome.
For me, on the other side of this i have found peace in a spiritual belief. Though anger and sorrow are still there and fall from me when my thoughts return.
Am i stronger, better, more balanced for this... no!
September 7th, 2019 06:40
Breakdown to breakthrough (warning emotional)
Clara said:
Wow. PD.
I actually have no words. The song... Your words. Tears are running down my face too.
This is beautiful truly. Thank you for sharing this......... Just thank you.
CLARA X
September 7th, 2019 03:25
Clara said:
Wow. PD.
I actually have no words. The song... Your words. Tears are running down my face too.
This is beautiful truly. Thank you for sharing this......... Just thank you.
CLARA X
September 7th, 2019 03:25
Just a man in natures plan
Goldfinch60 said:
Mother Nature is so wonderful, she knows what she is doing, your lady will give birth to a wonderful child and they will be surrounded by your love and protection, you will always be there for them, their every call will be answered by you Dan and the greatest things that you can do is to love them more every moment, every moment is precious.
September 7th, 2019 00:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Mother Nature is so wonderful, she knows what she is doing, your lady will give birth to a wonderful child and they will be surrounded by your love and protection, you will always be there for them, their every call will be answered by you Dan and the greatest things that you can do is to love them more every moment, every moment is precious.
September 7th, 2019 00:37
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