Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Flowing forward while going back
dusk arising said:
No, we don\'t all have to play the blagging game. Best advice is - when you\'ve nothing to say, say nothing.
Sometimes when theres a hard job to be done our mind enters a turmoil. Funny thing is though, once that job is done our mind returns to where it was before.... with just a little bit more self knowledge onboard.
September 16th, 2019 14:37
dusk arising said:
No, we don\'t all have to play the blagging game. Best advice is - when you\'ve nothing to say, say nothing.
Sometimes when theres a hard job to be done our mind enters a turmoil. Funny thing is though, once that job is done our mind returns to where it was before.... with just a little bit more self knowledge onboard.
September 16th, 2019 14:37
Flowing forward while going back
Neville said:
I am quite sure we all get days like this.... tomorrow will be entirely different .. just mark my words.........
Neville
September 16th, 2019 12:11
Neville said:
I am quite sure we all get days like this.... tomorrow will be entirely different .. just mark my words.........
Neville
September 16th, 2019 12:11
It\'s in the art
Goldfinch60 said:
Art seen by one may not be that seen by others.
September 16th, 2019 00:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Art seen by one may not be that seen by others.
September 16th, 2019 00:35
It\'s in the art
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Hey
If Mona Lisa was smiling Dan...
You can call that art
We\'ll give you that
September 15th, 2019 07:32
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Hey
If Mona Lisa was smiling Dan...
You can call that art
We\'ll give you that
September 15th, 2019 07:32
It\'s in the art
dusk arising said:
That\'s just what the mother-in-law said to me in bed last night!
September 15th, 2019 06:20
dusk arising said:
That\'s just what the mother-in-law said to me in bed last night!
September 15th, 2019 06:20
She found me in the grass
Goldfinch60 said:
Our life within us is the one we have and your life has become so good that it is a delight that you share it with us all, thank you.
And what is wrong with five o\'clock in the morning, I am often up then, if i am still in bed at six o\'clock (in the morning) I\'ve had a lay in!
September 15th, 2019 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Our life within us is the one we have and your life has become so good that it is a delight that you share it with us all, thank you.
And what is wrong with five o\'clock in the morning, I am often up then, if i am still in bed at six o\'clock (in the morning) I\'ve had a lay in!
September 15th, 2019 01:08
She found me in the grass
dusk arising said:
Open heart poetry from you Dan. Let it all flow.
September 14th, 2019 13:01
dusk arising said:
Open heart poetry from you Dan. Let it all flow.
September 14th, 2019 13:01
She found me in the grass
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
If you will always hide in the long Grass Dan she\'ll always find you there.
Great early morning exploration it fits you well
BRAVO! my friend
September 14th, 2019 03:36
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
If you will always hide in the long Grass Dan she\'ll always find you there.
Great early morning exploration it fits you well
BRAVO! my friend
September 14th, 2019 03:36
She found me in the grass
Michael Edwards said:
A great outpouring of creativity - super work Dan.
September 14th, 2019 03:05
Michael Edwards said:
A great outpouring of creativity - super work Dan.
September 14th, 2019 03:05
She found me in the grass
Neville said:
Well I never.... 5.00 am must be your writing window... so creative, free flowing and disclosive.... Prose and a touch of philosophy thrown in for good measure... Neville
September 14th, 2019 02:52
Neville said:
Well I never.... 5.00 am must be your writing window... so creative, free flowing and disclosive.... Prose and a touch of philosophy thrown in for good measure... Neville
September 14th, 2019 02:52
Welcome yourself in
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Dan, all are welcome at my home.
September 13th, 2019 14:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Dan, all are welcome at my home.
September 13th, 2019 14:53
Welcome yourself in
kevin browne said:
I see the power of your poems starting to become a more understood man than ther ever was before. Short, sweet and welcome yourself into a world of paradise. A perfevt plave to be...
September 13th, 2019 11:04
kevin browne said:
I see the power of your poems starting to become a more understood man than ther ever was before. Short, sweet and welcome yourself into a world of paradise. A perfevt plave to be...
September 13th, 2019 11:04
Welcome yourself in
H.M. Reynolds, hmrwrites said:
This is really lovely, thank you for sharing. :)
September 13th, 2019 08:57
H.M. Reynolds, hmrwrites said:
This is really lovely, thank you for sharing. :)
September 13th, 2019 08:57
Welcome yourself in
dusk arising said:
My home is a mess but my heart is emotionally tidy.
May your home and heart reside together for life.
September 13th, 2019 06:30
dusk arising said:
My home is a mess but my heart is emotionally tidy.
May your home and heart reside together for life.
September 13th, 2019 06:30
Welcome yourself in
Neville said:
Nicely stated, said and writ... wriggle toes a little bit....
September 13th, 2019 05:55
Neville said:
Nicely stated, said and writ... wriggle toes a little bit....
September 13th, 2019 05:55
Wanted and needed are not the same
sylviasearcher said:
Such insight in these lines
September 13th, 2019 03:33
sylviasearcher said:
Such insight in these lines
September 13th, 2019 03:33
Wanted and needed are not the same
Goldfinch60 said:
Great last stanza Dan, you know where you are going in your life gained from the experiences in your life. Go forward into your new joyful life with happiness and love.
Andy.
September 13th, 2019 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Great last stanza Dan, you know where you are going in your life gained from the experiences in your life. Go forward into your new joyful life with happiness and love.
Andy.
September 13th, 2019 00:57
Wanted and needed are not the same
orchidee said:
Here\'s a black humour joke - \'I wanted help, I called The Samaritans, but they were engaged!\' Doh! It could only happen to me. (not a true story. Phew!).
September 12th, 2019 10:50
orchidee said:
Here\'s a black humour joke - \'I wanted help, I called The Samaritans, but they were engaged!\' Doh! It could only happen to me. (not a true story. Phew!).
September 12th, 2019 10:50
Wanted and needed are not the same
orchidee said:
Here\'s a black humour joke - \'I wanted help, I called The Samaritans, but they were engaged!\' Doh! It could only happen to me. (not a true story. Phew!).
September 12th, 2019 10:50
orchidee said:
Here\'s a black humour joke - \'I wanted help, I called The Samaritans, but they were engaged!\' Doh! It could only happen to me. (not a true story. Phew!).
September 12th, 2019 10:50
Wanted and needed are not the same
Suresh said:
The equating of \"want\" with \"need\" that drives all of us into unknown territory-
September 12th, 2019 10:35
Suresh said:
The equating of \"want\" with \"need\" that drives all of us into unknown territory-
September 12th, 2019 10:35
Wanted and needed are not the same
dusk arising said:
That is the right attitude and determination with which to see thru this existence to it\'s end Dan.
September 12th, 2019 10:24
dusk arising said:
That is the right attitude and determination with which to see thru this existence to it\'s end Dan.
September 12th, 2019 10:24
I was not ready for this
dusk arising said:
Sympathy Dan, I have no answers here but to agree with your words.
Mt word Dan, you do write well and express yourself well when something really bites you.
THis piece really does show how you have moved on and learned so much from searching your soul.
Be strong.
September 11th, 2019 05:31
dusk arising said:
Sympathy Dan, I have no answers here but to agree with your words.
Mt word Dan, you do write well and express yourself well when something really bites you.
THis piece really does show how you have moved on and learned so much from searching your soul.
Be strong.
September 11th, 2019 05:31
I was not ready for this
Fay Slimm. said:
A powerful read Dan and I must agree with its sentiments - we have but a short space of time here to prove that right is never held in the hands of bullies - - a compelling message runs through this fine piece of work my friend.
September 11th, 2019 03:42
Fay Slimm. said:
A powerful read Dan and I must agree with its sentiments - we have but a short space of time here to prove that right is never held in the hands of bullies - - a compelling message runs through this fine piece of work my friend.
September 11th, 2019 03:42
I was not ready for this
sylviasearcher said:
Oh the school system!
I despair everyday.
It is like a monster machine.
The government are worried about the mental health of our children but they will never reform these Machines.
September 11th, 2019 02:26
sylviasearcher said:
Oh the school system!
I despair everyday.
It is like a monster machine.
The government are worried about the mental health of our children but they will never reform these Machines.
September 11th, 2019 02:26
I was not ready for this
Goldfinch60 said:
What a powerful write Dan. I do hope that your daughter is OK. I also hope that she can see bullies for what they are, they are complete ******* cowards who will get there comeuppance one day.
I saw a news item last night that an ex world champion kick boxer is offering free tuition to children in self defence, this is to try and combat the knife crime that is plaguing the Midlands (and other areas).
September 11th, 2019 02:25
Goldfinch60 said:
What a powerful write Dan. I do hope that your daughter is OK. I also hope that she can see bullies for what they are, they are complete ******* cowards who will get there comeuppance one day.
I saw a news item last night that an ex world champion kick boxer is offering free tuition to children in self defence, this is to try and combat the knife crime that is plaguing the Midlands (and other areas).
September 11th, 2019 02:25
I was not ready for this
orchidee said:
A first year at Secondary School can be particularly horrid for some. Pushed into the holly bush as \'initiation\' - and worse things!
I cried when leaving Primary School, out of sadness - though it was cosy, nice, warm in attitude and outlook.
Secondary School was not all bad for me, but I shed no tears on leaving.
September 11th, 2019 01:59
orchidee said:
A first year at Secondary School can be particularly horrid for some. Pushed into the holly bush as \'initiation\' - and worse things!
I cried when leaving Primary School, out of sadness - though it was cosy, nice, warm in attitude and outlook.
Secondary School was not all bad for me, but I shed no tears on leaving.
September 11th, 2019 01:59
No fear
Goldfinch60 said:
As you know as I do My Spirit will go on for eternity, see you there Dan.
September 10th, 2019 14:43
Goldfinch60 said:
As you know as I do My Spirit will go on for eternity, see you there Dan.
September 10th, 2019 14:43
No fear
Fay Slimm. said:
We who have the gift of life will not go into non-existence - as there is no opposite to life - - death is but the opposite of birth - -there is lots to think on in this gem of a posting dear Dan................
September 10th, 2019 12:24
Fay Slimm. said:
We who have the gift of life will not go into non-existence - as there is no opposite to life - - death is but the opposite of birth - -there is lots to think on in this gem of a posting dear Dan................
September 10th, 2019 12:24
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