Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Elders are the question, youth are the answer
kevin browne said:
I think you\'ve captured your heart at it\'s best. A baby beating to every breath it takes. A well penned peice if work. Great thinking within your poetry. Very thought provocing indded...!!
August 3rd, 2019 05:21
kevin browne said:
I think you\'ve captured your heart at it\'s best. A baby beating to every breath it takes. A well penned peice if work. Great thinking within your poetry. Very thought provocing indded...!!
August 3rd, 2019 05:21
Elders are the question, youth are the answer
Neville said:
this is a delightful little pre-birth dedication... and applicable throughout parenthood............
August 3rd, 2019 04:08
Neville said:
this is a delightful little pre-birth dedication... and applicable throughout parenthood............
August 3rd, 2019 04:08
Who covers the young ears, explicit language
Goldfinch60 said:
Racism and bad language just will not go away.
A few years ago I was visiting my Mum in her apartment when I saw two guys walking up the road with their young boys, probably brought them from school and every other words was the f word.
Good write Dan, good on you for sticking up for the rights of man.
August 3rd, 2019 00:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Racism and bad language just will not go away.
A few years ago I was visiting my Mum in her apartment when I saw two guys walking up the road with their young boys, probably brought them from school and every other words was the f word.
Good write Dan, good on you for sticking up for the rights of man.
August 3rd, 2019 00:24
Who covers the young ears, explicit language
PoeticBiscuit said:
I love this, a great poem with an even greater message. I struggle with following a story when writing poems so it was nice to see you do it perfectly. Racism is still alive when it should have been dead long ago. Keep on writing and sharing these messages that need to be heard my friend.
August 2nd, 2019 17:45
PoeticBiscuit said:
I love this, a great poem with an even greater message. I struggle with following a story when writing poems so it was nice to see you do it perfectly. Racism is still alive when it should have been dead long ago. Keep on writing and sharing these messages that need to be heard my friend.
August 2nd, 2019 17:45
Who covers the young ears, explicit language
Christina8 said:
Thank you for standing up for racial injustice...I have a mixed family. There are a lot of racists here and it angers me so.......much respect!
August 2nd, 2019 13:35
Christina8 said:
Thank you for standing up for racial injustice...I have a mixed family. There are a lot of racists here and it angers me so.......much respect!
August 2nd, 2019 13:35
Who covers the young ears, explicit language
dusk arising said:
Some will only see your words and not your meaning today Dan. Sadly swear words shut peoples minds to the main point, i don\'t know whether they are narrow minded or just thick.
You are right to be angered by such thoughtless people as the individual you describe. Within our peaceful and reasoning mind there remains a link to the flight or fight instinct and this guy as you said \'ticked your boxes\'. Good on you for not letting the oaf think such behaviour is acceptable and good on you for drawing the line which you were not prepared to cross because of your own self respect.
August 2nd, 2019 07:25
dusk arising said:
Some will only see your words and not your meaning today Dan. Sadly swear words shut peoples minds to the main point, i don\'t know whether they are narrow minded or just thick.
You are right to be angered by such thoughtless people as the individual you describe. Within our peaceful and reasoning mind there remains a link to the flight or fight instinct and this guy as you said \'ticked your boxes\'. Good on you for not letting the oaf think such behaviour is acceptable and good on you for drawing the line which you were not prepared to cross because of your own self respect.
August 2nd, 2019 07:25
Who covers the young ears, explicit language
orchidee said:
Cats and dogs! An anti-social cat at the start of your poem. (oohh).
Too much F and B from people can show laziness, I think - just not bothering to find suitable alternative words.
August 2nd, 2019 03:43
orchidee said:
Cats and dogs! An anti-social cat at the start of your poem. (oohh).
Too much F and B from people can show laziness, I think - just not bothering to find suitable alternative words.
August 2nd, 2019 03:43
Love you more
Goldfinch60 said:
Happy Birthday to Rainbow Ninja. Your love for her shines through your words Dan, that love will shine forever through your Spirit, your soul and you words. Great write.
August 2nd, 2019 01:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Happy Birthday to Rainbow Ninja. Your love for her shines through your words Dan, that love will shine forever through your Spirit, your soul and you words. Great write.
August 2nd, 2019 01:15
Love you more
Christina8 said:
Oh your daughter is so lucky to be loved so much! Happy birthday to her! Good vibes to you both!
August 1st, 2019 21:28
Christina8 said:
Oh your daughter is so lucky to be loved so much! Happy birthday to her! Good vibes to you both!
August 1st, 2019 21:28
Love you more
dusk arising said:
Dan, if you put that video together you sure have a talent for it...... talk to me and i will give u ideas about how to get work from it....
What a lovely poem... laughed out loud several times.... great kids you have... great dad they have... thought again about your words -they have the only key and they showed yo your key,
Happiness just shouts its presence from both vid and poem.... you create good vibes.
August 1st, 2019 11:49
dusk arising said:
Dan, if you put that video together you sure have a talent for it...... talk to me and i will give u ideas about how to get work from it....
What a lovely poem... laughed out loud several times.... great kids you have... great dad they have... thought again about your words -they have the only key and they showed yo your key,
Happiness just shouts its presence from both vid and poem.... you create good vibes.
August 1st, 2019 11:49
Love you more
Neville said:
Happy Birthday Rainbow Ninja.. can ya see that ya Dad loves ya...
Coz we can.......... N
August 1st, 2019 11:46
Neville said:
Happy Birthday Rainbow Ninja.. can ya see that ya Dad loves ya...
Coz we can.......... N
August 1st, 2019 11:46
Love you more
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a loving birthday poem Dan and adding my own wishes to your beautiful daughter on her special day.
August 1st, 2019 05:50
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a loving birthday poem Dan and adding my own wishes to your beautiful daughter on her special day.
August 1st, 2019 05:50
Love you more
Michael Edwards said:
A tugfull of great comments - I could use them all when it comes to my own daughter, to my wife, in fact to all the female relatives in my life. I love them all.
August 1st, 2019 05:41
Michael Edwards said:
A tugfull of great comments - I could use them all when it comes to my own daughter, to my wife, in fact to all the female relatives in my life. I love them all.
August 1st, 2019 05:41
Love you more
orchidee said:
Ahh, a fine Ninja Happy Birthday tribute Dan! Arrgghhh - teenage years?! But you love \'em still!
August 1st, 2019 03:11
orchidee said:
Ahh, a fine Ninja Happy Birthday tribute Dan! Arrgghhh - teenage years?! But you love \'em still!
August 1st, 2019 03:11
Shard of a shard
Fay Slimm. said:
An amazing piece of encouragement and sense. Humility was and is ever the answer. Thank you Dan.
July 31st, 2019 13:21
Fay Slimm. said:
An amazing piece of encouragement and sense. Humility was and is ever the answer. Thank you Dan.
July 31st, 2019 13:21
Shard of a shard
Suresh said:
Keep on writing. Write to record, to recall, to revisit, but above all, write for yourself.
July 31st, 2019 13:13
Suresh said:
Keep on writing. Write to record, to recall, to revisit, but above all, write for yourself.
July 31st, 2019 13:13
Shard of a shard
Neville said:
I think these words should be read as they are writ or laid down... and without any attempt to synthesize or analyse them or their meaning... I am quite sure if your readers are able to approach your written voice in such a way.... they will be more than happy with what they find and feel..... I enjoyed this page very much sir..... Neville
July 31st, 2019 07:02
Neville said:
I think these words should be read as they are writ or laid down... and without any attempt to synthesize or analyse them or their meaning... I am quite sure if your readers are able to approach your written voice in such a way.... they will be more than happy with what they find and feel..... I enjoyed this page very much sir..... Neville
July 31st, 2019 07:02
Shard of a shard
Goldfinch60 said:
Those shards can be formed together which is what you are doing and the broken shards that were evil will be formed into the beauty and wonder of your newly found life.
July 31st, 2019 04:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Those shards can be formed together which is what you are doing and the broken shards that were evil will be formed into the beauty and wonder of your newly found life.
July 31st, 2019 04:55
Shard of a shard
dusk arising said:
If you keep on doing what you are doing.... are you headed in the right direction. I hope your answer is quick and self assuring.... I only pose the question.... You are the answer.
July 31st, 2019 04:38
dusk arising said:
If you keep on doing what you are doing.... are you headed in the right direction. I hope your answer is quick and self assuring.... I only pose the question.... You are the answer.
July 31st, 2019 04:38
Shard of a shard
orchidee said:
A fine write Dan. Yes, have confidence to write. Sometimes I \'adapt\' it to what I think other people should hear (read). But then it\'s not unique, and is only done to please others.
July 31st, 2019 04:16
orchidee said:
A fine write Dan. Yes, have confidence to write. Sometimes I \'adapt\' it to what I think other people should hear (read). But then it\'s not unique, and is only done to please others.
July 31st, 2019 04:16
A speck
PoeticBiscuit said:
Sometimes all we can do is do the best we can with what we have. If everyone could learn to have compassion and respect for their fellow human beings the world would be better off. If only more people had a mind like yourself, keep writing my friend.
July 31st, 2019 01:49
PoeticBiscuit said:
Sometimes all we can do is do the best we can with what we have. If everyone could learn to have compassion and respect for their fellow human beings the world would be better off. If only more people had a mind like yourself, keep writing my friend.
July 31st, 2019 01:49
A speck
Suresh said:
A poetic reality
After thousands of years, we still have despots and tyrants ruling nations.
While events caused by nature can be overcome, those caused by man are impossible
July 30th, 2019 10:36
Suresh said:
A poetic reality
After thousands of years, we still have despots and tyrants ruling nations.
While events caused by nature can be overcome, those caused by man are impossible
July 30th, 2019 10:36
A speck
Michael Edwards said:
All we can do is lead by example - if only the values were universally held. Fine work Dan.
July 30th, 2019 10:12
Michael Edwards said:
All we can do is lead by example - if only the values were universally held. Fine work Dan.
July 30th, 2019 10:12
A speck
dusk arising said:
We may teach OUR children of love, peace and tolerance but.... what chance do they have of changing the world when religions teach hate, violence and intolerance.
July 30th, 2019 10:00
dusk arising said:
We may teach OUR children of love, peace and tolerance but.... what chance do they have of changing the world when religions teach hate, violence and intolerance.
July 30th, 2019 10:00
A speck
Neville said:
your first two lines are filled with truth.. if more folk opened their eyes and could see this, maybe some things might change.. we can only hope and do our own bit... but there is much wisdom in what Goldfinch60 has shared here also today........ N
July 30th, 2019 05:41
Neville said:
your first two lines are filled with truth.. if more folk opened their eyes and could see this, maybe some things might change.. we can only hope and do our own bit... but there is much wisdom in what Goldfinch60 has shared here also today........ N
July 30th, 2019 05:41
A speck
Goldfinch60 said:
In this time those who have the power to enable the peoples of the world will not do it in case they lose some of there wealth and power. Those that want to do something about like many of us without the means cannot do it although we try to do our best.
The world can be fixed but it is more profitable for those in power to leave it broken . (Sorry Dan, rant over.)
July 30th, 2019 02:38
Goldfinch60 said:
In this time those who have the power to enable the peoples of the world will not do it in case they lose some of there wealth and power. Those that want to do something about like many of us without the means cannot do it although we try to do our best.
The world can be fixed but it is more profitable for those in power to leave it broken . (Sorry Dan, rant over.)
July 30th, 2019 02:38
Strange! Come see \"it\" in my brain
dusk arising said:
I used to wonder what my appearance conjoured up in peoples minds. Then i realised there was no point in wondering because what people read into our appearance is totally in their head from their background and has very little to do with what i really am... so sod them LOL
I think that\'s how it works for you too.
I\'m becoming quite a fan of your videos Dan.
I\'m pleased to read that your writing is helping healing thoughts in other readers minds judging from comments..... how you have moved yourself and others along with your \'open soul\' poetry.
July 29th, 2019 16:04
dusk arising said:
I used to wonder what my appearance conjoured up in peoples minds. Then i realised there was no point in wondering because what people read into our appearance is totally in their head from their background and has very little to do with what i really am... so sod them LOL
I think that\'s how it works for you too.
I\'m becoming quite a fan of your videos Dan.
I\'m pleased to read that your writing is helping healing thoughts in other readers minds judging from comments..... how you have moved yourself and others along with your \'open soul\' poetry.
July 29th, 2019 16:04
Strange! Come see \"it\" in my brain
Goldfinch60 said:
Our brains hold the thoughts and differences between us all.
July 29th, 2019 15:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Our brains hold the thoughts and differences between us all.
July 29th, 2019 15:12
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