Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Strange! Come see \"it\" in my brain
PoeticBiscuit said:
You’re very much unique. Each write you share with us sends me on a journey that I didn’t even know I needed. Keep up the good work.
July 29th, 2019 12:41
PoeticBiscuit said:
You’re very much unique. Each write you share with us sends me on a journey that I didn’t even know I needed. Keep up the good work.
July 29th, 2019 12:41
Strange! Come see \"it\" in my brain
Suresh said:
-and that\'s what individualizes us, the \'it\', that is uniquely us.
Trust me, you have an artist in you, that so uniquely gives expression
July 29th, 2019 11:01
Suresh said:
-and that\'s what individualizes us, the \'it\', that is uniquely us.
Trust me, you have an artist in you, that so uniquely gives expression
July 29th, 2019 11:01
Love rays everyday
Goldfinch60 said:
That love shines through your words and it will go on for eternity.
July 28th, 2019 15:22
Goldfinch60 said:
That love shines through your words and it will go on for eternity.
July 28th, 2019 15:22
Love rays everyday
PoeticBiscuit said:
This has to be my favorite read yet. Its just such a delicate piece of work and you could feel the love even through the screen. Very well done Dan. Keep them coming!
July 28th, 2019 14:07
PoeticBiscuit said:
This has to be my favorite read yet. Its just such a delicate piece of work and you could feel the love even through the screen. Very well done Dan. Keep them coming!
July 28th, 2019 14:07
Love rays everyday
Neville said:
this is an absolute delight.. nuff said,
except I dont mind admitting I just shed a rainbow coloured sprinkle too x
July 28th, 2019 12:52
Neville said:
this is an absolute delight.. nuff said,
except I dont mind admitting I just shed a rainbow coloured sprinkle too x
July 28th, 2019 12:52
Love rays everyday
Fay Slimm. said:
A wonderful read Dan - you have made it................ congrats with hugs - - -- Fay
July 28th, 2019 12:21
Fay Slimm. said:
A wonderful read Dan - you have made it................ congrats with hugs - - -- Fay
July 28th, 2019 12:21
Love rays everyday
Christina8 said:
Oh your write today gave me the chills! Celebrate your love!! I could tell you my story but I don\'t want to take away from yours. Anyway, it lasted. Sometimes you just go for it!!! So happy for you! Much respect
July 28th, 2019 11:11
Christina8 said:
Oh your write today gave me the chills! Celebrate your love!! I could tell you my story but I don\'t want to take away from yours. Anyway, it lasted. Sometimes you just go for it!!! So happy for you! Much respect
July 28th, 2019 11:11
Love rays everyday
dusk arising said:
Lovely to read of your happiness together. Keep this because trying times are ahead. Your expected child will bring you turmoil... they just do... sleepless nights and stressed out partners.... remind yourselves often of this piece you have written. Take time away from little one to be together spiritually and celebrate this love.... such things will strengthen your wonderful bond and reassure your lady that she is still your everything rather than the chore busy stressed out mother she feels like sometimes. Mothering is hard work Dan.
July 28th, 2019 08:58
dusk arising said:
Lovely to read of your happiness together. Keep this because trying times are ahead. Your expected child will bring you turmoil... they just do... sleepless nights and stressed out partners.... remind yourselves often of this piece you have written. Take time away from little one to be together spiritually and celebrate this love.... such things will strengthen your wonderful bond and reassure your lady that she is still your everything rather than the chore busy stressed out mother she feels like sometimes. Mothering is hard work Dan.
July 28th, 2019 08:58
It doesn\'t matter any more
kevin browne said:
You speal of dimensions, magic, dreaming endless possibilities, your children with the key and the rest of everything till eternity. Good and vibrants resonations full of golden joy. Dan, you are the man, Proud of you, Buddy...
July 27th, 2019 18:14
kevin browne said:
You speal of dimensions, magic, dreaming endless possibilities, your children with the key and the rest of everything till eternity. Good and vibrants resonations full of golden joy. Dan, you are the man, Proud of you, Buddy...
July 27th, 2019 18:14
It doesn\'t matter any more
Neville said:
Read several times now and I think this page is privy to some of your personal values, dreams and belies that may not be evident just by reading ..
These words need to be considered slower than just a casual read or flick through.. Note to those who may follow... Enjoy them and leave your mark for a guy who is determined to move forward... N
July 27th, 2019 17:20
Neville said:
Read several times now and I think this page is privy to some of your personal values, dreams and belies that may not be evident just by reading ..
These words need to be considered slower than just a casual read or flick through.. Note to those who may follow... Enjoy them and leave your mark for a guy who is determined to move forward... N
July 27th, 2019 17:20
It doesn\'t matter any more
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Dan, your life is now in a magic place, it is home, home is always a magical place and your home is obviously filled with love and joy.
July 27th, 2019 14:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Dan, your life is now in a magic place, it is home, home is always a magical place and your home is obviously filled with love and joy.
July 27th, 2019 14:52
It doesn\'t matter any more
Christina8 said:
It is beautiful...what you have created for your children....a safe haven that many do not have. This is a powerful write and I thank you very much for sharing!!
July 27th, 2019 13:50
Christina8 said:
It is beautiful...what you have created for your children....a safe haven that many do not have. This is a powerful write and I thank you very much for sharing!!
July 27th, 2019 13:50
It doesn\'t matter any more
Suresh said:
Ditto to what d.a. said....
now the time has come to take your poetic self and explore the nature.
July 27th, 2019 09:39
Suresh said:
Ditto to what d.a. said....
now the time has come to take your poetic self and explore the nature.
July 27th, 2019 09:39
It doesn\'t matter any more
dusk arising said:
Now when it comes to beautiful words i think you\'ve created something special both for us to read today and in your family\'s life forever.
This is by far the most moving piece i have seen from you Dan.
\"My children understand, they have the only key
As they showed the one, I had deep within me\"
Those two lines are a thing of such beauty.
July 27th, 2019 06:31
dusk arising said:
Now when it comes to beautiful words i think you\'ve created something special both for us to read today and in your family\'s life forever.
This is by far the most moving piece i have seen from you Dan.
\"My children understand, they have the only key
As they showed the one, I had deep within me\"
Those two lines are a thing of such beauty.
July 27th, 2019 06:31
Fear of love & criticism
Goldfinch60 said:
In this life we must try to do the best we can, if we keep trying we will go forward to the light that is always there for us.
July 26th, 2019 14:15
Goldfinch60 said:
In this life we must try to do the best we can, if we keep trying we will go forward to the light that is always there for us.
July 26th, 2019 14:15
Fear of love & criticism
Suresh said:
It\'s all perception!!!!!!.....
..... you be the best you know how, and try to be the best you can be.
Thnx for letting us share
July 26th, 2019 12:03
Suresh said:
It\'s all perception!!!!!!.....
..... you be the best you know how, and try to be the best you can be.
Thnx for letting us share
July 26th, 2019 12:03
Thunder
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes be all that you can because you are enough my friend. I loved the flow of this meaningful message that being ourselves we face being responsible for our own life and for no other........ thank you for these thoughts Dan........
July 25th, 2019 13:06
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes be all that you can because you are enough my friend. I loved the flow of this meaningful message that being ourselves we face being responsible for our own life and for no other........ thank you for these thoughts Dan........
July 25th, 2019 13:06
Thunder
Neville said:
now that\'s more like it... a little bit of optimism goes a long long way....
Neville
July 25th, 2019 06:02
Neville said:
now that\'s more like it... a little bit of optimism goes a long long way....
Neville
July 25th, 2019 06:02
Thunder
dusk arising said:
Do you have room in your life for the imperfect? Can you tolerate the troubled minds of others? Are you able to make judgements which enable you to say - nothing. Will you acknowledge the pain of damaged souls beginning their path of self realisation.
To all these i know you answer yes which makes you a compassionate and understanding human being. Walk the walk.
July 25th, 2019 02:24
dusk arising said:
Do you have room in your life for the imperfect? Can you tolerate the troubled minds of others? Are you able to make judgements which enable you to say - nothing. Will you acknowledge the pain of damaged souls beginning their path of self realisation.
To all these i know you answer yes which makes you a compassionate and understanding human being. Walk the walk.
July 25th, 2019 02:24
Thunder
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
The positivity interwoven throughout your poem is infectious! I’m very happy for you! With this new attitude, the world is your oyster!
~Laura~
July 25th, 2019 01:56
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
The positivity interwoven throughout your poem is infectious! I’m very happy for you! With this new attitude, the world is your oyster!
~Laura~
July 25th, 2019 01:56
The \"who\" I shall retain
Christina8 said:
Congratulations on your new life of moving forward. Forgiving is not always easy to do but a good route to your path of healing. Much respect, Dan. Christina
July 24th, 2019 23:13
Christina8 said:
Congratulations on your new life of moving forward. Forgiving is not always easy to do but a good route to your path of healing. Much respect, Dan. Christina
July 24th, 2019 23:13
The \"who\" I shall retain
Neville said:
You are not there yet, are you.. but you have moved forward, and that is the main thing.........actually, to be honest, I dont believe there is a there yet.. life and living and all that it consists of is a continuum .. a series of choices and risks, decisions and opportunities.... there are several excellent lines within this poem.. very meaningful ones...... Neville
July 24th, 2019 09:01
Neville said:
You are not there yet, are you.. but you have moved forward, and that is the main thing.........actually, to be honest, I dont believe there is a there yet.. life and living and all that it consists of is a continuum .. a series of choices and risks, decisions and opportunities.... there are several excellent lines within this poem.. very meaningful ones...... Neville
July 24th, 2019 09:01
The \"who\" I shall retain
Goldfinch60 said:
May that clean shelf become full of words that carry you into a wonderful future.
July 24th, 2019 05:03
Goldfinch60 said:
May that clean shelf become full of words that carry you into a wonderful future.
July 24th, 2019 05:03
The \"who\" I shall retain
dusk arising said:
Forgiving and moving forward is a vision easier seen than carried through. Take your time.
July 24th, 2019 02:36
dusk arising said:
Forgiving and moving forward is a vision easier seen than carried through. Take your time.
July 24th, 2019 02:36
To much positive, kiss my negative
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Dan, your Universe is expanding in joy and wonder.
July 24th, 2019 00:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Dan, your Universe is expanding in joy and wonder.
July 24th, 2019 00:35
To much positive, kiss my negative
dusk arising said:
Spider Dan, Spider Dan
does whatever a spider can
on the web writes out verses
whilst skateboard huskies
he traverses
watch out... here comes our Spider Dan
(I saw your BatDan reference and thought.... that skateboard will never pass for a Batmobile)
July 23rd, 2019 02:48
dusk arising said:
Spider Dan, Spider Dan
does whatever a spider can
on the web writes out verses
whilst skateboard huskies
he traverses
watch out... here comes our Spider Dan
(I saw your BatDan reference and thought.... that skateboard will never pass for a Batmobile)
July 23rd, 2019 02:48
I could never of made it alone
Goldfinch60 said:
Your path has been rocky but now all is clear and your life can now move on into calmness and love.
July 23rd, 2019 00:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Your path has been rocky but now all is clear and your life can now move on into calmness and love.
July 23rd, 2019 00:58
I could never of made it alone
Christina8 said:
This is wonderful Dan! Congratulations on finding whatever it is that makes you happy!!
July 22nd, 2019 17:17
Christina8 said:
This is wonderful Dan! Congratulations on finding whatever it is that makes you happy!!
July 22nd, 2019 17:17
I could never of made it alone
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Worth the wait and never too late
Beautiful Dan
This is Beautiful
The most powerful force in the universe... right there
BRAVO
July 22nd, 2019 13:23
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Worth the wait and never too late
Beautiful Dan
This is Beautiful
The most powerful force in the universe... right there
BRAVO
July 22nd, 2019 13:23
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