Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Shard of a shard
Goldfinch60 said:
Those shards can be formed together which is what you are doing and the broken shards that were evil will be formed into the beauty and wonder of your newly found life.
July 31st, 2019 04:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Those shards can be formed together which is what you are doing and the broken shards that were evil will be formed into the beauty and wonder of your newly found life.
July 31st, 2019 04:55
Shard of a shard
dusk arising said:
If you keep on doing what you are doing.... are you headed in the right direction. I hope your answer is quick and self assuring.... I only pose the question.... You are the answer.
July 31st, 2019 04:38
dusk arising said:
If you keep on doing what you are doing.... are you headed in the right direction. I hope your answer is quick and self assuring.... I only pose the question.... You are the answer.
July 31st, 2019 04:38
Shard of a shard
orchidee said:
A fine write Dan. Yes, have confidence to write. Sometimes I \'adapt\' it to what I think other people should hear (read). But then it\'s not unique, and is only done to please others.
July 31st, 2019 04:16
orchidee said:
A fine write Dan. Yes, have confidence to write. Sometimes I \'adapt\' it to what I think other people should hear (read). But then it\'s not unique, and is only done to please others.
July 31st, 2019 04:16
A speck
PoeticBiscuit said:
Sometimes all we can do is do the best we can with what we have. If everyone could learn to have compassion and respect for their fellow human beings the world would be better off. If only more people had a mind like yourself, keep writing my friend.
July 31st, 2019 01:49
PoeticBiscuit said:
Sometimes all we can do is do the best we can with what we have. If everyone could learn to have compassion and respect for their fellow human beings the world would be better off. If only more people had a mind like yourself, keep writing my friend.
July 31st, 2019 01:49
A speck
Suresh said:
A poetic reality
After thousands of years, we still have despots and tyrants ruling nations.
While events caused by nature can be overcome, those caused by man are impossible
July 30th, 2019 10:36
Suresh said:
A poetic reality
After thousands of years, we still have despots and tyrants ruling nations.
While events caused by nature can be overcome, those caused by man are impossible
July 30th, 2019 10:36
A speck
Michael Edwards said:
All we can do is lead by example - if only the values were universally held. Fine work Dan.
July 30th, 2019 10:12
Michael Edwards said:
All we can do is lead by example - if only the values were universally held. Fine work Dan.
July 30th, 2019 10:12
A speck
dusk arising said:
We may teach OUR children of love, peace and tolerance but.... what chance do they have of changing the world when religions teach hate, violence and intolerance.
July 30th, 2019 10:00
dusk arising said:
We may teach OUR children of love, peace and tolerance but.... what chance do they have of changing the world when religions teach hate, violence and intolerance.
July 30th, 2019 10:00
A speck
Neville said:
your first two lines are filled with truth.. if more folk opened their eyes and could see this, maybe some things might change.. we can only hope and do our own bit... but there is much wisdom in what Goldfinch60 has shared here also today........ N
July 30th, 2019 05:41
Neville said:
your first two lines are filled with truth.. if more folk opened their eyes and could see this, maybe some things might change.. we can only hope and do our own bit... but there is much wisdom in what Goldfinch60 has shared here also today........ N
July 30th, 2019 05:41
A speck
Goldfinch60 said:
In this time those who have the power to enable the peoples of the world will not do it in case they lose some of there wealth and power. Those that want to do something about like many of us without the means cannot do it although we try to do our best.
The world can be fixed but it is more profitable for those in power to leave it broken . (Sorry Dan, rant over.)
July 30th, 2019 02:38
Goldfinch60 said:
In this time those who have the power to enable the peoples of the world will not do it in case they lose some of there wealth and power. Those that want to do something about like many of us without the means cannot do it although we try to do our best.
The world can be fixed but it is more profitable for those in power to leave it broken . (Sorry Dan, rant over.)
July 30th, 2019 02:38
Strange! Come see \"it\" in my brain
dusk arising said:
I used to wonder what my appearance conjoured up in peoples minds. Then i realised there was no point in wondering because what people read into our appearance is totally in their head from their background and has very little to do with what i really am... so sod them LOL
I think that\'s how it works for you too.
I\'m becoming quite a fan of your videos Dan.
I\'m pleased to read that your writing is helping healing thoughts in other readers minds judging from comments..... how you have moved yourself and others along with your \'open soul\' poetry.
July 29th, 2019 16:04
dusk arising said:
I used to wonder what my appearance conjoured up in peoples minds. Then i realised there was no point in wondering because what people read into our appearance is totally in their head from their background and has very little to do with what i really am... so sod them LOL
I think that\'s how it works for you too.
I\'m becoming quite a fan of your videos Dan.
I\'m pleased to read that your writing is helping healing thoughts in other readers minds judging from comments..... how you have moved yourself and others along with your \'open soul\' poetry.
July 29th, 2019 16:04
Strange! Come see \"it\" in my brain
Goldfinch60 said:
Our brains hold the thoughts and differences between us all.
July 29th, 2019 15:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Our brains hold the thoughts and differences between us all.
July 29th, 2019 15:12
Strange! Come see \"it\" in my brain
PoeticBiscuit said:
You’re very much unique. Each write you share with us sends me on a journey that I didn’t even know I needed. Keep up the good work.
July 29th, 2019 12:41
PoeticBiscuit said:
You’re very much unique. Each write you share with us sends me on a journey that I didn’t even know I needed. Keep up the good work.
July 29th, 2019 12:41
Strange! Come see \"it\" in my brain
Suresh said:
-and that\'s what individualizes us, the \'it\', that is uniquely us.
Trust me, you have an artist in you, that so uniquely gives expression
July 29th, 2019 11:01
Suresh said:
-and that\'s what individualizes us, the \'it\', that is uniquely us.
Trust me, you have an artist in you, that so uniquely gives expression
July 29th, 2019 11:01
Love rays everyday
Goldfinch60 said:
That love shines through your words and it will go on for eternity.
July 28th, 2019 15:22
Goldfinch60 said:
That love shines through your words and it will go on for eternity.
July 28th, 2019 15:22
Love rays everyday
PoeticBiscuit said:
This has to be my favorite read yet. Its just such a delicate piece of work and you could feel the love even through the screen. Very well done Dan. Keep them coming!
July 28th, 2019 14:07
PoeticBiscuit said:
This has to be my favorite read yet. Its just such a delicate piece of work and you could feel the love even through the screen. Very well done Dan. Keep them coming!
July 28th, 2019 14:07
Love rays everyday
Neville said:
this is an absolute delight.. nuff said,
except I dont mind admitting I just shed a rainbow coloured sprinkle too x
July 28th, 2019 12:52
Neville said:
this is an absolute delight.. nuff said,
except I dont mind admitting I just shed a rainbow coloured sprinkle too x
July 28th, 2019 12:52
Love rays everyday
Fay Slimm. said:
A wonderful read Dan - you have made it................ congrats with hugs - - -- Fay
July 28th, 2019 12:21
Fay Slimm. said:
A wonderful read Dan - you have made it................ congrats with hugs - - -- Fay
July 28th, 2019 12:21
Love rays everyday
Christina8 said:
Oh your write today gave me the chills! Celebrate your love!! I could tell you my story but I don\'t want to take away from yours. Anyway, it lasted. Sometimes you just go for it!!! So happy for you! Much respect
July 28th, 2019 11:11
Christina8 said:
Oh your write today gave me the chills! Celebrate your love!! I could tell you my story but I don\'t want to take away from yours. Anyway, it lasted. Sometimes you just go for it!!! So happy for you! Much respect
July 28th, 2019 11:11
Love rays everyday
dusk arising said:
Lovely to read of your happiness together. Keep this because trying times are ahead. Your expected child will bring you turmoil... they just do... sleepless nights and stressed out partners.... remind yourselves often of this piece you have written. Take time away from little one to be together spiritually and celebrate this love.... such things will strengthen your wonderful bond and reassure your lady that she is still your everything rather than the chore busy stressed out mother she feels like sometimes. Mothering is hard work Dan.
July 28th, 2019 08:58
dusk arising said:
Lovely to read of your happiness together. Keep this because trying times are ahead. Your expected child will bring you turmoil... they just do... sleepless nights and stressed out partners.... remind yourselves often of this piece you have written. Take time away from little one to be together spiritually and celebrate this love.... such things will strengthen your wonderful bond and reassure your lady that she is still your everything rather than the chore busy stressed out mother she feels like sometimes. Mothering is hard work Dan.
July 28th, 2019 08:58
It doesn\'t matter any more
kevin browne said:
You speal of dimensions, magic, dreaming endless possibilities, your children with the key and the rest of everything till eternity. Good and vibrants resonations full of golden joy. Dan, you are the man, Proud of you, Buddy...
July 27th, 2019 18:14
kevin browne said:
You speal of dimensions, magic, dreaming endless possibilities, your children with the key and the rest of everything till eternity. Good and vibrants resonations full of golden joy. Dan, you are the man, Proud of you, Buddy...
July 27th, 2019 18:14
It doesn\'t matter any more
Neville said:
Read several times now and I think this page is privy to some of your personal values, dreams and belies that may not be evident just by reading ..
These words need to be considered slower than just a casual read or flick through.. Note to those who may follow... Enjoy them and leave your mark for a guy who is determined to move forward... N
July 27th, 2019 17:20
Neville said:
Read several times now and I think this page is privy to some of your personal values, dreams and belies that may not be evident just by reading ..
These words need to be considered slower than just a casual read or flick through.. Note to those who may follow... Enjoy them and leave your mark for a guy who is determined to move forward... N
July 27th, 2019 17:20
It doesn\'t matter any more
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Dan, your life is now in a magic place, it is home, home is always a magical place and your home is obviously filled with love and joy.
July 27th, 2019 14:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Dan, your life is now in a magic place, it is home, home is always a magical place and your home is obviously filled with love and joy.
July 27th, 2019 14:52
It doesn\'t matter any more
Christina8 said:
It is beautiful...what you have created for your children....a safe haven that many do not have. This is a powerful write and I thank you very much for sharing!!
July 27th, 2019 13:50
Christina8 said:
It is beautiful...what you have created for your children....a safe haven that many do not have. This is a powerful write and I thank you very much for sharing!!
July 27th, 2019 13:50
It doesn\'t matter any more
Suresh said:
Ditto to what d.a. said....
now the time has come to take your poetic self and explore the nature.
July 27th, 2019 09:39
Suresh said:
Ditto to what d.a. said....
now the time has come to take your poetic self and explore the nature.
July 27th, 2019 09:39
It doesn\'t matter any more
dusk arising said:
Now when it comes to beautiful words i think you\'ve created something special both for us to read today and in your family\'s life forever.
This is by far the most moving piece i have seen from you Dan.
\"My children understand, they have the only key
As they showed the one, I had deep within me\"
Those two lines are a thing of such beauty.
July 27th, 2019 06:31
dusk arising said:
Now when it comes to beautiful words i think you\'ve created something special both for us to read today and in your family\'s life forever.
This is by far the most moving piece i have seen from you Dan.
\"My children understand, they have the only key
As they showed the one, I had deep within me\"
Those two lines are a thing of such beauty.
July 27th, 2019 06:31
Fear of love & criticism
Goldfinch60 said:
In this life we must try to do the best we can, if we keep trying we will go forward to the light that is always there for us.
July 26th, 2019 14:15
Goldfinch60 said:
In this life we must try to do the best we can, if we keep trying we will go forward to the light that is always there for us.
July 26th, 2019 14:15
Fear of love & criticism
Suresh said:
It\'s all perception!!!!!!.....
..... you be the best you know how, and try to be the best you can be.
Thnx for letting us share
July 26th, 2019 12:03
Suresh said:
It\'s all perception!!!!!!.....
..... you be the best you know how, and try to be the best you can be.
Thnx for letting us share
July 26th, 2019 12:03
Thunder
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes be all that you can because you are enough my friend. I loved the flow of this meaningful message that being ourselves we face being responsible for our own life and for no other........ thank you for these thoughts Dan........
July 25th, 2019 13:06
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes be all that you can because you are enough my friend. I loved the flow of this meaningful message that being ourselves we face being responsible for our own life and for no other........ thank you for these thoughts Dan........
July 25th, 2019 13:06
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