Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Breakdown to breakthrough (warning emotional)
kevin browne said:
\"Pride took over knowing how precious life is\". You aimed your pen well to paper that and the result from this poem written in songful moments from the sound of your ears is quite remarkable. It clearly reveals a lot more about how your pen controls your mind over the matters in which they are concerned. Unveiling one\'s thoughts to an audience of poets and poetesses has a top-notch quality about the relevance of how much life really means to you. You take it on well, Dan...
September 7th, 2019 11:40
kevin browne said:
\"Pride took over knowing how precious life is\". You aimed your pen well to paper that and the result from this poem written in songful moments from the sound of your ears is quite remarkable. It clearly reveals a lot more about how your pen controls your mind over the matters in which they are concerned. Unveiling one\'s thoughts to an audience of poets and poetesses has a top-notch quality about the relevance of how much life really means to you. You take it on well, Dan...
September 7th, 2019 11:40
Breakdown to breakthrough (warning emotional)
Neville said:
a truly delightful emotional outpouring... all wrapped up in an equally delightful poem......... Neville
September 7th, 2019 10:23
Neville said:
a truly delightful emotional outpouring... all wrapped up in an equally delightful poem......... Neville
September 7th, 2019 10:23
Breakdown to breakthrough (warning emotional)
dusk arising said:
There are some things which happen in our lives which turn us about - put us into a spin of desperation and questions yes angered questions flow with tears of sorrow, guilt and more raging anger.
A truly testing time of unknown outcome.
For me, on the other side of this i have found peace in a spiritual belief. Though anger and sorrow are still there and fall from me when my thoughts return.
Am i stronger, better, more balanced for this... no!
September 7th, 2019 06:40
dusk arising said:
There are some things which happen in our lives which turn us about - put us into a spin of desperation and questions yes angered questions flow with tears of sorrow, guilt and more raging anger.
A truly testing time of unknown outcome.
For me, on the other side of this i have found peace in a spiritual belief. Though anger and sorrow are still there and fall from me when my thoughts return.
Am i stronger, better, more balanced for this... no!
September 7th, 2019 06:40
Breakdown to breakthrough (warning emotional)
Clara said:
Wow. PD.
I actually have no words. The song... Your words. Tears are running down my face too.
This is beautiful truly. Thank you for sharing this......... Just thank you.
CLARA X
September 7th, 2019 03:25
Clara said:
Wow. PD.
I actually have no words. The song... Your words. Tears are running down my face too.
This is beautiful truly. Thank you for sharing this......... Just thank you.
CLARA X
September 7th, 2019 03:25
Just a man in natures plan
Goldfinch60 said:
Mother Nature is so wonderful, she knows what she is doing, your lady will give birth to a wonderful child and they will be surrounded by your love and protection, you will always be there for them, their every call will be answered by you Dan and the greatest things that you can do is to love them more every moment, every moment is precious.
September 7th, 2019 00:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Mother Nature is so wonderful, she knows what she is doing, your lady will give birth to a wonderful child and they will be surrounded by your love and protection, you will always be there for them, their every call will be answered by you Dan and the greatest things that you can do is to love them more every moment, every moment is precious.
September 7th, 2019 00:37
Just a man in natures plan
Bragee said:
As a man currently living through this scenario I too wish nature had a different plan.
Good write!.....and stay strong!
September 6th, 2019 08:58
Bragee said:
As a man currently living through this scenario I too wish nature had a different plan.
Good write!.....and stay strong!
September 6th, 2019 08:58
Just a man in natures plan
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Bring home the bacon and bring it home on time (Cyndi Lauper)
Did I just quote Cyndi Lauper it must be the hormones
Great write Dan I\'m a big fan of the female prowess like yourself that\'s why we say mother nature I think
September 6th, 2019 07:21
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Bring home the bacon and bring it home on time (Cyndi Lauper)
Did I just quote Cyndi Lauper it must be the hormones
Great write Dan I\'m a big fan of the female prowess like yourself that\'s why we say mother nature I think
September 6th, 2019 07:21
Just a man in natures plan
dusk arising said:
You\'re definitely a bloke Dan, I\'ve seen your picture. Don\'t knock it m8, think of all the stuff you wouldn\'t be able to do if you were a woman. Plus you would have blokes pestering you all the time. Such attractive hair lol.
September 6th, 2019 03:38
dusk arising said:
You\'re definitely a bloke Dan, I\'ve seen your picture. Don\'t knock it m8, think of all the stuff you wouldn\'t be able to do if you were a woman. Plus you would have blokes pestering you all the time. Such attractive hair lol.
September 6th, 2019 03:38
My hero
Michael Edwards said:
What a fabulous relationship - you are truly blessed.
September 5th, 2019 14:43
Michael Edwards said:
What a fabulous relationship - you are truly blessed.
September 5th, 2019 14:43
My hero
Clara said:
Such a lovely poem! I hope your son realises how loved he is.... :-)
CLARA X
September 5th, 2019 08:42
Clara said:
Such a lovely poem! I hope your son realises how loved he is.... :-)
CLARA X
September 5th, 2019 08:42
My hero
Seek said:
Happy birthday young man. Lucky for you to be able to count on your dad\'s wisdom to help you grow. The big wide world awaits you.
September 5th, 2019 08:27
Seek said:
Happy birthday young man. Lucky for you to be able to count on your dad\'s wisdom to help you grow. The big wide world awaits you.
September 5th, 2019 08:27
My hero
Nafis Light said:
When I gazed at that picture, I get this feeling like the air or the environment...like getting sucked into the picture.
I\'m not gonna gaze too long.
Happy Birthday and Lots of Happiness to Your Amazing Young Man.
September 5th, 2019 07:53
Nafis Light said:
When I gazed at that picture, I get this feeling like the air or the environment...like getting sucked into the picture.
I\'m not gonna gaze too long.
Happy Birthday and Lots of Happiness to Your Amazing Young Man.
September 5th, 2019 07:53
My hero
FineB said:
Hello Poetic Dan,
What a wonderful loving tribute to your children.
A charming write.
Keep writing FineB
September 5th, 2019 04:19
FineB said:
Hello Poetic Dan,
What a wonderful loving tribute to your children.
A charming write.
Keep writing FineB
September 5th, 2019 04:19
My hero
orchidee said:
A fine write Dan. The tricky bit is when we have birthday with a zero at the end (of our age!). lol. Tell him some say that 20 is getting old! heehee.
September 5th, 2019 03:04
orchidee said:
A fine write Dan. The tricky bit is when we have birthday with a zero at the end (of our age!). lol. Tell him some say that 20 is getting old! heehee.
September 5th, 2019 03:04
My hero
dusk arising said:
Happy birthday young \'un. I repeat the words of Goldfinch for there are none finer or more meaningful than those words.
September 5th, 2019 02:28
dusk arising said:
Happy birthday young \'un. I repeat the words of Goldfinch for there are none finer or more meaningful than those words.
September 5th, 2019 02:28
My hero
Goldfinch60 said:
Happy Birthday young man, the world is your to explore and enjoy - move forward with love.
September 5th, 2019 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Happy Birthday young man, the world is your to explore and enjoy - move forward with love.
September 5th, 2019 02:21
37 weeks and I love her to bits
FineB said:
Hello Poetic Dan,
A lovely poem.
One must always look forward in hope and never back in anger.
Keep writing FineB
September 4th, 2019 17:55
FineB said:
Hello Poetic Dan,
A lovely poem.
One must always look forward in hope and never back in anger.
Keep writing FineB
September 4th, 2019 17:55
Flipping Gods
Neville said:
an interesting concept and who am I to knock it..... . Neville
September 4th, 2019 16:41
Neville said:
an interesting concept and who am I to knock it..... . Neville
September 4th, 2019 16:41
Flipping Gods
Clara said:
I like this very much.
The coin representing that we always have a choice...
To remember that sometimes we need to just sit back and have trust that what will be will be. Action before consideration can sometimes lead to the opposite of our true intention.
It also speaks to the earth as a stage. Suggesting that our act, our story, is already scripted if you will... And so sometimes the coin is unnecessary as our path is already laid out before us.
Wonderful.
CLARA X
September 4th, 2019 08:41
Clara said:
I like this very much.
The coin representing that we always have a choice...
To remember that sometimes we need to just sit back and have trust that what will be will be. Action before consideration can sometimes lead to the opposite of our true intention.
It also speaks to the earth as a stage. Suggesting that our act, our story, is already scripted if you will... And so sometimes the coin is unnecessary as our path is already laid out before us.
Wonderful.
CLARA X
September 4th, 2019 08:41
Flipping Gods
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
These words you penned
speak volumes...
‘Heaven or hell is all here now’
I can totally understand because there are many times that I feel I’m in a hell of a situation...
and at other times I feel I’m in a heavenly one!
A word, a phrase, and/or an action can all trigger these hellish/heavenly feelings that I experience from time to time! As a matter of fact, it just happened a few days ago! My problem is that I read into things and let them affect me personally! It’s not easy for me to compartmentalize my feelings!
~Laura~
September 4th, 2019 05:45
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
These words you penned
speak volumes...
‘Heaven or hell is all here now’
I can totally understand because there are many times that I feel I’m in a hell of a situation...
and at other times I feel I’m in a heavenly one!
A word, a phrase, and/or an action can all trigger these hellish/heavenly feelings that I experience from time to time! As a matter of fact, it just happened a few days ago! My problem is that I read into things and let them affect me personally! It’s not easy for me to compartmentalize my feelings!
~Laura~
September 4th, 2019 05:45
Flipping Gods
Goldfinch60 said:
In your life’s renewal you have found that special place where love and joy now abound.
September 4th, 2019 04:47
Goldfinch60 said:
In your life’s renewal you have found that special place where love and joy now abound.
September 4th, 2019 04:47
Flipping Gods
orchidee said:
Well, in one or two places in the Bible, it says \'You are gods\' (you humans).
It can be explained by saying that magistrates, judges, those in authority, etc were thought of as \'gods\'.
Erm, it made it a bit difficult to explain to one who did not believe in the same way as I do though!
September 4th, 2019 02:07
orchidee said:
Well, in one or two places in the Bible, it says \'You are gods\' (you humans).
It can be explained by saying that magistrates, judges, those in authority, etc were thought of as \'gods\'.
Erm, it made it a bit difficult to explain to one who did not believe in the same way as I do though!
September 4th, 2019 02:07
Flipping Gods
dusk arising said:
The light of god is within you. Those who search will find it.
Maybe that which caused us to search was us being given the opportunity to seek out the real truth. Until it was violently stamped out by the orthodox christian churches (to ensure they had power over the masses) there were many christian faiths which believed god was within oneself.
Today we are less fearful of the established churches power base and more able to return to a natural path of spirituality.
September 4th, 2019 01:59
dusk arising said:
The light of god is within you. Those who search will find it.
Maybe that which caused us to search was us being given the opportunity to seek out the real truth. Until it was violently stamped out by the orthodox christian churches (to ensure they had power over the masses) there were many christian faiths which believed god was within oneself.
Today we are less fearful of the established churches power base and more able to return to a natural path of spirituality.
September 4th, 2019 01:59
Try your luck and never give up
Goldfinch60 said:
If only the \'spirit of the animal\' could bring their peaceful existence to homo sapiens.
September 4th, 2019 01:32
Goldfinch60 said:
If only the \'spirit of the animal\' could bring their peaceful existence to homo sapiens.
September 4th, 2019 01:32
Try your luck and never give up
FineB said:
Hello Poetic Dan,
What a great poem.
It\'s TRUE we should never give up in life.
Life is to be lived to the full and to enjoy the beauty all around us that it brings us such as the animal kingdom.
Keep writing FineB
September 3rd, 2019 15:46
FineB said:
Hello Poetic Dan,
What a great poem.
It\'s TRUE we should never give up in life.
Life is to be lived to the full and to enjoy the beauty all around us that it brings us such as the animal kingdom.
Keep writing FineB
September 3rd, 2019 15:46
Try your luck and never give up
Clara said:
Excellent PD,
I take it as there are such differences between ourselves as human beings and animals... And then such differences between the animals themselves. But yet, it is fine to be as we are... Imperfections and all... Embracing all of our differences and just making the most of life!
Wonderful poem as always. I look forward to reading what you post.
CLARA X
September 3rd, 2019 14:01
Clara said:
Excellent PD,
I take it as there are such differences between ourselves as human beings and animals... And then such differences between the animals themselves. But yet, it is fine to be as we are... Imperfections and all... Embracing all of our differences and just making the most of life!
Wonderful poem as always. I look forward to reading what you post.
CLARA X
September 3rd, 2019 14:01
Try your luck and never give up
Michael Edwards said:
Not quite sure what to make of this which makes it ever more intriguing - and, yes, I did enjoy the read.
September 3rd, 2019 10:41
Michael Edwards said:
Not quite sure what to make of this which makes it ever more intriguing - and, yes, I did enjoy the read.
September 3rd, 2019 10:41
Try your luck and never give up
Neville said:
an intriguing little poem sir..... N
September 3rd, 2019 10:05
Neville said:
an intriguing little poem sir..... N
September 3rd, 2019 10:05
Come to sea
kevin browne said:
Each time I get to read your work it appears to deepen into a philosophical exploration of wonder, growing in personality and character, a thriving environment which is almost like the Alice In Wonderland\" film. You now cherish from the path you put yourself on and I now look back at your work from a year ago and there is no comparison to it as you write today. A gift from above, you\'ll never let us down, a battle you have found, but the battlefield you stand in now you hold the belt around your waist equipped with the tools to win the day. Your soul has grown into a beautiful being with the intentions of reaching out to people and to show your hand is held out because you\'ve turned into a wonderful man and with a gift to express your inner thoughts of how your mind can control the direction in a positive life which indeed you have achieved. Topman in my opinion.
September 3rd, 2019 01:18
kevin browne said:
Each time I get to read your work it appears to deepen into a philosophical exploration of wonder, growing in personality and character, a thriving environment which is almost like the Alice In Wonderland\" film. You now cherish from the path you put yourself on and I now look back at your work from a year ago and there is no comparison to it as you write today. A gift from above, you\'ll never let us down, a battle you have found, but the battlefield you stand in now you hold the belt around your waist equipped with the tools to win the day. Your soul has grown into a beautiful being with the intentions of reaching out to people and to show your hand is held out because you\'ve turned into a wonderful man and with a gift to express your inner thoughts of how your mind can control the direction in a positive life which indeed you have achieved. Topman in my opinion.
September 3rd, 2019 01:18
Come to sea
Goldfinch60 said:
Good positive write Dan. You know that you are now on your journey to a wonderful future.
September 3rd, 2019 00:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Good positive write Dan. You know that you are now on your journey to a wonderful future.
September 3rd, 2019 00:18
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