Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
On The Very Edge of Passion
aDarkerMind said:
love the title Teddy.
and so much in so few words.
most impressed.
July 12th, 2024 12:21
aDarkerMind said:
love the title Teddy.
and so much in so few words.
most impressed.
July 12th, 2024 12:21
When Two Roads Diverge
Goldfinch60 said:
In one of the infinite number of parallel Universes you would have trod both paths in one to them Teddy.
Andy
July 12th, 2024 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
In one of the infinite number of parallel Universes you would have trod both paths in one to them Teddy.
Andy
July 12th, 2024 01:16
When Two Roads Diverge
Thomas W Case said:
I have a feeling, nothing is wasted on you, dear Teddy.
July 11th, 2024 23:00
Thomas W Case said:
I have a feeling, nothing is wasted on you, dear Teddy.
July 11th, 2024 23:00
When Two Roads Diverge
MendedFences27 said:
Well as the great Yogi Berra once said, \"When you come to a fork in the road, take it.\" Not making light of your poem, but when confronted with a choice that must be made, do not hesitate. Choose to the best of your abilities. Loved your poem. It made me think, \"What would I do?\" - Phil A.
July 11th, 2024 21:45
MendedFences27 said:
Well as the great Yogi Berra once said, \"When you come to a fork in the road, take it.\" Not making light of your poem, but when confronted with a choice that must be made, do not hesitate. Choose to the best of your abilities. Loved your poem. It made me think, \"What would I do?\" - Phil A.
July 11th, 2024 21:45
When Two Roads Diverge
Cassie58 said:
Choices dear Teddy can cause such problems. Which pathway to take? Once decided, no looking back. Well, that’s what I try to do lol, Not saying I am successful, but I know reflections on decisions can be unsettling. Loved this read and hope you have had a perfect Thursday.dear poet 🌹
July 11th, 2024 14:40
Cassie58 said:
Choices dear Teddy can cause such problems. Which pathway to take? Once decided, no looking back. Well, that’s what I try to do lol, Not saying I am successful, but I know reflections on decisions can be unsettling. Loved this read and hope you have had a perfect Thursday.dear poet 🌹
July 11th, 2024 14:40
When Two Roads Diverge
sorenbarrett said:
Choices, there is the illusion. Maybe it doesn\'t matter which road is chosen they may all end up at the same place. It all depends on whether you believe in determinism or free will. Green or blue are fine with me in that I like them both and actually I like red and orange yellow purple and even black and white. I feel the loss in this poem and hope it will heal in a joining of roads and colors
July 11th, 2024 13:12
sorenbarrett said:
Choices, there is the illusion. Maybe it doesn\'t matter which road is chosen they may all end up at the same place. It all depends on whether you believe in determinism or free will. Green or blue are fine with me in that I like them both and actually I like red and orange yellow purple and even black and white. I feel the loss in this poem and hope it will heal in a joining of roads and colors
July 11th, 2024 13:12
When Two Roads Diverge
Accidental Poet said:
Every road a journey, every path a lesson. May you always be happy with your chosen paths Teddy. 🌹
July 11th, 2024 10:21
Accidental Poet said:
Every road a journey, every path a lesson. May you always be happy with your chosen paths Teddy. 🌹
July 11th, 2024 10:21
When Two Roads Diverge
aDarkerMind said:
a very interesting and complex question Teddy.
and one deserving of a story to share, if that\'s ok with you?
it won\'t answer your question, but it might suggest life\'s conundrums are a part of life.through poetry or otherwise.
July 11th, 2024 09:58
aDarkerMind said:
a very interesting and complex question Teddy.
and one deserving of a story to share, if that\'s ok with you?
it won\'t answer your question, but it might suggest life\'s conundrums are a part of life.through poetry or otherwise.
July 11th, 2024 09:58
Floating thoughts
Goldfinch60 said:
Those decisions are with us all our life Teddy and I am sure the best ones will always be the ones you take.
Andy
July 11th, 2024 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Those decisions are with us all our life Teddy and I am sure the best ones will always be the ones you take.
Andy
July 11th, 2024 01:25
Floating thoughts
Doggerel Dave said:
No, do stay anchored hereabouts, Teddy. We (me) need you in all your colourful variety.
July 10th, 2024 19:48
Doggerel Dave said:
No, do stay anchored hereabouts, Teddy. We (me) need you in all your colourful variety.
July 10th, 2024 19:48
Floating thoughts
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant imagery, you could float over here. lol Great work, sweet Teddy.
July 10th, 2024 14:12
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant imagery, you could float over here. lol Great work, sweet Teddy.
July 10th, 2024 14:12
Floating thoughts
aDarkerMind said:
a very nice thought Teddy.
if only wishes came true my friend.
July 10th, 2024 14:09
aDarkerMind said:
a very nice thought Teddy.
if only wishes came true my friend.
July 10th, 2024 14:09
Rose Garden
sorenbarrett said:
I can not only feel this but feel I have lived it. It is you last stanza that stands out the most. It is from the buried corps of love that new growth emerges. May yours sprout and grow with the birth of the new sun of spring.
July 10th, 2024 12:34
sorenbarrett said:
I can not only feel this but feel I have lived it. It is you last stanza that stands out the most. It is from the buried corps of love that new growth emerges. May yours sprout and grow with the birth of the new sun of spring.
July 10th, 2024 12:34
Forget Me Not
Cassie58 said:
Amazing how children think. I love this poem Teddy. It is stunning and forget me nots have special significance for me too. Lovely work. 🌹
July 9th, 2024 15:54
Cassie58 said:
Amazing how children think. I love this poem Teddy. It is stunning and forget me nots have special significance for me too. Lovely work. 🌹
July 9th, 2024 15:54
Rose Garden
Cassie58 said:
Hello darkness my old friend. You reminded me of Simon and Garfunkel dear Teddy. Such wonderful lyrics they wrote and performed. Where love goes to die is surely a sad tale of all sunlight being eclipsed from life. I guess the rose garden would soften the blow by a degree or two. Heartfelt writing, beautifully composed.
July 9th, 2024 14:49
Cassie58 said:
Hello darkness my old friend. You reminded me of Simon and Garfunkel dear Teddy. Such wonderful lyrics they wrote and performed. Where love goes to die is surely a sad tale of all sunlight being eclipsed from life. I guess the rose garden would soften the blow by a degree or two. Heartfelt writing, beautifully composed.
July 9th, 2024 14:49
Rose Garden
Doggerel Dave said:
I feel all wrung out after that Teddy. It\'s only that I know it isn\'t true, that keeps me going.
July 9th, 2024 08:59
Doggerel Dave said:
I feel all wrung out after that Teddy. It\'s only that I know it isn\'t true, that keeps me going.
July 9th, 2024 08:59
Rose Garden
aDarkerMind said:
am deeply touched Teddy...
more than you could possibly imagine.
bless you.
July 9th, 2024 05:14
aDarkerMind said:
am deeply touched Teddy...
more than you could possibly imagine.
bless you.
July 9th, 2024 05:14
Broken Mirror
sorenbarrett said:
A reflection? A splendid story told in such entrancing form. It seems to begin as a fairytale and becomes archetypal. We all need that mirror or maybe we have it and just don\'t see being blind. A wonderful write.
July 7th, 2024 17:00
sorenbarrett said:
A reflection? A splendid story told in such entrancing form. It seems to begin as a fairytale and becomes archetypal. We all need that mirror or maybe we have it and just don\'t see being blind. A wonderful write.
July 7th, 2024 17:00
Forget Me Not
sorenbarrett said:
The innocence of a child and the honesty to say what things are in their eyes is what leads to the genius of learning. We do forget as we grow old and what I think is the greatest shame is we forget how to be a child.
July 7th, 2024 11:34
sorenbarrett said:
The innocence of a child and the honesty to say what things are in their eyes is what leads to the genius of learning. We do forget as we grow old and what I think is the greatest shame is we forget how to be a child.
July 7th, 2024 11:34
Forget Me Not
aDarkerMind said:
the innocence of a child.
beautifully written Teddy.
July 7th, 2024 07:13
aDarkerMind said:
the innocence of a child.
beautifully written Teddy.
July 7th, 2024 07:13
The Backbone of a Poem
aDarkerMind said:
word perfect and a delightful read Teddy.
as always.
July 7th, 2024 06:12
aDarkerMind said:
word perfect and a delightful read Teddy.
as always.
July 7th, 2024 06:12
Forget Me Not
Goldfinch60 said:
An intriguing write Teddy, such a wise child.
if you answered him can you please also let me know what happened to the first 74 years of my life. 🤣🌹
Andy
July 7th, 2024 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
An intriguing write Teddy, such a wise child.
if you answered him can you please also let me know what happened to the first 74 years of my life. 🤣🌹
Andy
July 7th, 2024 01:20
Forget Me Not
MendedFences27 said:
A lot of wisdom here. A poem that shows the innocent wisdom of a child
and also the wisdom of your own recognition. It\'s also sad that there is no answer to the child\'s question, not yet . Perhaps in the future. when we comprehend all the workings of a brain, we\'ll be able to answer it. A lovely poem. - Phil A.
July 6th, 2024 17:37
MendedFences27 said:
A lot of wisdom here. A poem that shows the innocent wisdom of a child
and also the wisdom of your own recognition. It\'s also sad that there is no answer to the child\'s question, not yet . Perhaps in the future. when we comprehend all the workings of a brain, we\'ll be able to answer it. A lovely poem. - Phil A.
July 6th, 2024 17:37
The Backbone of a Poem
Goldfinch60 said:
Or \"he seeps from his pen\" as well Teddy.
Very fine words .
Andy
July 5th, 2024 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Or \"he seeps from his pen\" as well Teddy.
Very fine words .
Andy
July 5th, 2024 01:22
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