Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
Paddy McGee
Doggerel Dave said:
The twists and turns of this rumbunctious tale had me giddy by the end - a \'big dipper\' of a tale that one - but I do believe I got my money\'s worth Teddy. 🤪
February 18th, 2024 07:37
Doggerel Dave said:
The twists and turns of this rumbunctious tale had me giddy by the end - a \'big dipper\' of a tale that one - but I do believe I got my money\'s worth Teddy. 🤪
February 18th, 2024 07:37
Paddy McGee
arqios said:
Lovely, lively, fun read! Thanks for featuring this on your ‘page!’
February 18th, 2024 06:33
arqios said:
Lovely, lively, fun read! Thanks for featuring this on your ‘page!’
February 18th, 2024 06:33
Paddy McGee
sorenbarrett said:
I always loved ballads as poems. They may be longer but the story enthralls me. This one is great in that it is set in a mythological sense and carries a mystical feel. Wonderfully done Teddy.
February 18th, 2024 06:32
sorenbarrett said:
I always loved ballads as poems. They may be longer but the story enthralls me. This one is great in that it is set in a mythological sense and carries a mystical feel. Wonderfully done Teddy.
February 18th, 2024 06:32
Paddy McGee
Bobby O said:
That’s really freaking clever. It’s alive. It paints a story’ with invisible air as the only canvas as the words jump off the static page snd affix with motion and pathos
February 18th, 2024 05:20
Bobby O said:
That’s really freaking clever. It’s alive. It paints a story’ with invisible air as the only canvas as the words jump off the static page snd affix with motion and pathos
February 18th, 2024 05:20
A Very Fine Romance
Doggerel Dave said:
So he didn\'t get a boner after all? No further comment - empathy only goes so far.....🤣
February 17th, 2024 23:57
Doggerel Dave said:
So he didn\'t get a boner after all? No further comment - empathy only goes so far.....🤣
February 17th, 2024 23:57
A Very Fine Romance
Thomas W Case said:
Wow. This one id different for you. I love it.
February 17th, 2024 15:51
Thomas W Case said:
Wow. This one id different for you. I love it.
February 17th, 2024 15:51
A Very Fine Romance
Accidental Poet said:
Certainly a chuckling of my bones dear Teddy. Stay tuned for tomorrow and I\'ll repay you with my own entry of humor. 🤣
February 17th, 2024 13:48
Accidental Poet said:
Certainly a chuckling of my bones dear Teddy. Stay tuned for tomorrow and I\'ll repay you with my own entry of humor. 🤣
February 17th, 2024 13:48
A Very Fine Romance
Jerry Reynolds said:
Oh yes, Teddy. You have a couple of good characters there. They could have a pint and wash their feet.
February 17th, 2024 10:36
Jerry Reynolds said:
Oh yes, Teddy. You have a couple of good characters there. They could have a pint and wash their feet.
February 17th, 2024 10:36
A Very Fine Romance
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
lol 😂 I needed this today! Hopefully they are still together..
February 17th, 2024 10:10
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
lol 😂 I needed this today! Hopefully they are still together..
February 17th, 2024 10:10
A Very Fine Romance
Neville said:
and would you believe after all that he still preferred Bendy Wendy .. she was far more flexible and in lots of ways .. ❤️
February 17th, 2024 08:58
Neville said:
and would you believe after all that he still preferred Bendy Wendy .. she was far more flexible and in lots of ways .. ❤️
February 17th, 2024 08:58
Indecent Proposal
sorenbarrett said:
Always a fan of Shakespeare and many of his lines, I have wondered how he had such an expansive vocabulary\' This poem rings true and I too have felt how wonderful it would be to be able to get a lesson or two from the greatest, but then it would be like Mozart trying to teach me piano, a waste of his time. Your meter carries one along this poem which is enhanced by the rhyme that is pleasing to the ear. Shakespeare did not always rhyme. Maybe you could teach him a thing or two. Lovely poem Teddy with a thought dear to the heart of many a poet.
February 17th, 2024 06:09
sorenbarrett said:
Always a fan of Shakespeare and many of his lines, I have wondered how he had such an expansive vocabulary\' This poem rings true and I too have felt how wonderful it would be to be able to get a lesson or two from the greatest, but then it would be like Mozart trying to teach me piano, a waste of his time. Your meter carries one along this poem which is enhanced by the rhyme that is pleasing to the ear. Shakespeare did not always rhyme. Maybe you could teach him a thing or two. Lovely poem Teddy with a thought dear to the heart of many a poet.
February 17th, 2024 06:09
Fantasia
Neville said:
almost the same thing happened to me a while back .. I thought I was playing a sitar .. opened my eyes and was plucking a chicken .. ❤️
February 17th, 2024 03:52
Neville said:
almost the same thing happened to me a while back .. I thought I was playing a sitar .. opened my eyes and was plucking a chicken .. ❤️
February 17th, 2024 03:52
Fantasia
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful fun words Teddy, did you mange to finish the piece of music?
Andy
https://youtu.be/dXa8my9pb5g?si=9QK7F4IqBt_yqDyv
February 17th, 2024 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful fun words Teddy, did you mange to finish the piece of music?
Andy
https://youtu.be/dXa8my9pb5g?si=9QK7F4IqBt_yqDyv
February 17th, 2024 01:50
Fantasia
sorenbarrett said:
You had me. I myself was thinking of when I was playing piano. I never became all that proficient in that my teacher refused to teach me blues when I was a child. Then the end or your poem hit me and the title made sense and I realized I had been doing the same as I read it. Very nice
February 16th, 2024 15:25
sorenbarrett said:
You had me. I myself was thinking of when I was playing piano. I never became all that proficient in that my teacher refused to teach me blues when I was a child. Then the end or your poem hit me and the title made sense and I realized I had been doing the same as I read it. Very nice
February 16th, 2024 15:25
Fantasia
Accidental Poet said:
Teddy, you had me lost in that fantasy too. Excellently penned dear poet. May I join your next concert? 😉👍
February 16th, 2024 10:17
Accidental Poet said:
Teddy, you had me lost in that fantasy too. Excellently penned dear poet. May I join your next concert? 😉👍
February 16th, 2024 10:17
Fantasia
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good to read one of your poems Teddy. It has been some hard days. I need a good fantasy.
February 16th, 2024 09:38
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good to read one of your poems Teddy. It has been some hard days. I need a good fantasy.
February 16th, 2024 09:38
Fantasia
Tom Dylan said:
Just fantastic! I\'d give this a standing ovation if I could. A great build up and the last line just nailed it! Brilliant!
February 16th, 2024 03:15
Tom Dylan said:
Just fantastic! I\'d give this a standing ovation if I could. A great build up and the last line just nailed it! Brilliant!
February 16th, 2024 03:15
No One Else Can See Them
sorenbarrett said:
Haunting. Yes I too at times find myself talking to such ghosts of people that I once knew and are no longer here. Lovely
February 15th, 2024 13:57
sorenbarrett said:
Haunting. Yes I too at times find myself talking to such ghosts of people that I once knew and are no longer here. Lovely
February 15th, 2024 13:57
Rapture of my Heart
Bella Shepard said:
Simply elegant! Perfect picture, and perfect words. Happy Valentine\'s day dear Teddy!
February 14th, 2024 15:51
Bella Shepard said:
Simply elegant! Perfect picture, and perfect words. Happy Valentine\'s day dear Teddy!
February 14th, 2024 15:51
Rapture of my Heart
Doggerel Dave said:
Quite possibly a good enough excuse, Teddy...... 😇!!!
February 14th, 2024 07:23
Doggerel Dave said:
Quite possibly a good enough excuse, Teddy...... 😇!!!
February 14th, 2024 07:23
Rapture of my Heart
Neville said:
I don\'t think it is just because at all .. I sense it is f ... 🌹x
February 14th, 2024 04:07
Neville said:
I don\'t think it is just because at all .. I sense it is f ... 🌹x
February 14th, 2024 04:07
Rapture of my Heart
sorenbarrett said:
Yes I could tell this by the nature of your poems. A poem appropriate for the day. Tasteful, poignant, and timely.
February 14th, 2024 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
Yes I could tell this by the nature of your poems. A poem appropriate for the day. Tasteful, poignant, and timely.
February 14th, 2024 04:05
Rapture of my Heart
Goldfinch60 said:
Such strong words Teddy, may that love be always so.
Andy
February 14th, 2024 02:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Such strong words Teddy, may that love be always so.
Andy
February 14th, 2024 02:52
Dante and I
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Teddy, those last three lines mean so much to me and my life at the moment.
Andy
February 14th, 2024 02:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Teddy, those last three lines mean so much to me and my life at the moment.
Andy
February 14th, 2024 02:19
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