Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
A Pin Drop Moment
sorenbarrett said:
I\'ll be all day thinking of this metaphor. Yes down, down, down finally it will register Ping! I hate dropping pins on the floor if I don\'t find them all I eventually will when I step on them. A fun read Teddy and yes I believe you could write a poem about anything.
August 2nd, 2024 05:43
sorenbarrett said:
I\'ll be all day thinking of this metaphor. Yes down, down, down finally it will register Ping! I hate dropping pins on the floor if I don\'t find them all I eventually will when I step on them. A fun read Teddy and yes I believe you could write a poem about anything.
August 2nd, 2024 05:43
A Pin Drop Moment
Cassie58 said:
A shape poem. Nicely done. Oh to hear a pin drop dear Teddy. I live in a house often filled with noise. Need to go to the peace of a marina to appreciate silence. How golden it can be. Have a beautiful day. ๐น
August 2nd, 2024 05:04
Cassie58 said:
A shape poem. Nicely done. Oh to hear a pin drop dear Teddy. I live in a house often filled with noise. Need to go to the peace of a marina to appreciate silence. How golden it can be. Have a beautiful day. ๐น
August 2nd, 2024 05:04
A Pin Drop Moment
Accidental Poet said:
I\'ll believe anything you say dear Teddy. ๐๐๐น
August 2nd, 2024 02:07
Accidental Poet said:
I\'ll believe anything you say dear Teddy. ๐๐๐น
August 2nd, 2024 02:07
Consequence of Love
sorenbarrett said:
We sacrifice ourselves for what we love and that is one of the meanings of life. There are far worse things than to die for love. Nicely written in such a succinct manner.
August 1st, 2024 10:56
sorenbarrett said:
We sacrifice ourselves for what we love and that is one of the meanings of life. There are far worse things than to die for love. Nicely written in such a succinct manner.
August 1st, 2024 10:56
A Battle With Irony
Thomas W Case said:
Superb work, Teddy. You have a great sense of humor. You are fantastic.
July 31st, 2024 21:29
Thomas W Case said:
Superb work, Teddy. You have a great sense of humor. You are fantastic.
July 31st, 2024 21:29
A Battle With Irony
Bella Shepard said:
I\'m still laughing over your final line as as I write. Now what would Napolean do in a circumstance such as yours? Would he counter with something totaly unexpected? Allow that Teddy imagination run wild and give them something to really talk about. One day your genius will be recognized, perhaps when you put those two old biddies in their place and write an amazing poem about it. Loved this write! P.S. I\'m still laughing.
July 31st, 2024 14:24
Bella Shepard said:
I\'m still laughing over your final line as as I write. Now what would Napolean do in a circumstance such as yours? Would he counter with something totaly unexpected? Allow that Teddy imagination run wild and give them something to really talk about. One day your genius will be recognized, perhaps when you put those two old biddies in their place and write an amazing poem about it. Loved this write! P.S. I\'m still laughing.
July 31st, 2024 14:24
A Battle With Irony
aDarkerMind said:
but Napeoleon didn\'t have a gift for poetry, did he Teddy.
a fun read.
am sure my nosey neighbours would enjoy such words.
they seem more involved when I come with a takeaway!
July 31st, 2024 14:17
aDarkerMind said:
but Napeoleon didn\'t have a gift for poetry, did he Teddy.
a fun read.
am sure my nosey neighbours would enjoy such words.
they seem more involved when I come with a takeaway!
July 31st, 2024 14:17
A Battle With Irony
Thoughtless said:
Hey. You give their lives meaning. What more can one do? They should thank you for keeping them on their toes. Oh, your poetry. It\'s good enough for some American rags. However, I think it can do better than that. I believe you have talent. It\'s just that so many people are writing it today. Keep going. I\'ve been published in a few magazines online and off. You can to.
July 31st, 2024 13:37
Thoughtless said:
Hey. You give their lives meaning. What more can one do? They should thank you for keeping them on their toes. Oh, your poetry. It\'s good enough for some American rags. However, I think it can do better than that. I believe you have talent. It\'s just that so many people are writing it today. Keep going. I\'ve been published in a few magazines online and off. You can to.
July 31st, 2024 13:37
A Battle With Irony
MendedFences27 said:
Perhaps the best thing to stop your snoopy neighbors is to send them some of your poetry. They\'ll like it and not know what to do or they\'ll be scared you\'ll write about them and start changing their ways. Win. Win. - Phil A.
July 31st, 2024 11:22
MendedFences27 said:
Perhaps the best thing to stop your snoopy neighbors is to send them some of your poetry. They\'ll like it and not know what to do or they\'ll be scared you\'ll write about them and start changing their ways. Win. Win. - Phil A.
July 31st, 2024 11:22
A Battle With Irony
Cassie58 said:
You know dear Teddy, if I were you Iโd be having a little fun with those neighbors. Give them something juicy to gossip about ๐. It is so hot here. Flaking out. Give my regards to Napoleon:)๐น
July 31st, 2024 07:40
Cassie58 said:
You know dear Teddy, if I were you Iโd be having a little fun with those neighbors. Give them something juicy to gossip about ๐. It is so hot here. Flaking out. Give my regards to Napoleon:)๐น
July 31st, 2024 07:40
A Battle With Irony
Doggerel Dave said:
Noooo - trouble with the neighbours, Teddy? Unprecedented...!๐ ๐๐คฃ
Irony you say.....?
July 31st, 2024 07:14
Doggerel Dave said:
Noooo - trouble with the neighbours, Teddy? Unprecedented...!๐ ๐๐คฃ
Irony you say.....?
July 31st, 2024 07:14
A Battle With Irony
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds like a great vacation but not from the neighbors. No matter how far one goes in this world one can not escape from gossip and the nosey. A little Napoleon brandy might help. A most fun read my friend.
July 31st, 2024 06:11
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds like a great vacation but not from the neighbors. No matter how far one goes in this world one can not escape from gossip and the nosey. A little Napoleon brandy might help. A most fun read my friend.
July 31st, 2024 06:11
A Battle With Irony
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Teddy, Back in the day those neighbours were the Facebook on the street.
Andy
July 31st, 2024 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Teddy, Back in the day those neighbours were the Facebook on the street.
Andy
July 31st, 2024 01:54
My Favourite Colour Is Blue
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Teddy but yellow means life when the sun rises every day.
Andy
July 31st, 2024 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Teddy but yellow means life when the sun rises every day.
Andy
July 31st, 2024 01:46
My Favourite Colour Is Blue
aDarkerMind said:
a yellow Fiat Panda running you over Teddy ?
glad you\'re ok tho o;)
a most delightful read.
July 30th, 2024 12:39
aDarkerMind said:
a yellow Fiat Panda running you over Teddy ?
glad you\'re ok tho o;)
a most delightful read.
July 30th, 2024 12:39
My Favourite Colour Is Blue
MendedFences27 said:
As I write this, I\'m sitting here in my yellow shirt, not because it\'s yellow, but because it is most comfortable.
I\'m with you on your comment about writing anything. My God, we\'re poets, we can turn the world inside out. Let\'s go easy on the color yellow though. Loved your poem. - Phil A
July 30th, 2024 12:18
MendedFences27 said:
As I write this, I\'m sitting here in my yellow shirt, not because it\'s yellow, but because it is most comfortable.
I\'m with you on your comment about writing anything. My God, we\'re poets, we can turn the world inside out. Let\'s go easy on the color yellow though. Loved your poem. - Phil A
July 30th, 2024 12:18
My Favourite Colour Is Blue
Accidental Poet said:
I never really cared either way on yellow, and like you dear Teddy, blue has always been my color of choice.
And YOU dear Teddy, can write whatever you want cause I said so. ๐๐
July 30th, 2024 10:06
Accidental Poet said:
I never really cared either way on yellow, and like you dear Teddy, blue has always been my color of choice.
And YOU dear Teddy, can write whatever you want cause I said so. ๐๐
July 30th, 2024 10:06
My Favourite Colour Is Blue
Doggerel Dave said:
I vacillate between precisely those two colours, Teddy.
โTie a Yellow Ribbon Round the Ole Oak Treeโ always gets to me, while blue with all its variants wins most of the time.
Yes, you can write about anythingโฆโฆโฆ
July 30th, 2024 08:17
Doggerel Dave said:
I vacillate between precisely those two colours, Teddy.
โTie a Yellow Ribbon Round the Ole Oak Treeโ always gets to me, while blue with all its variants wins most of the time.
Yes, you can write about anythingโฆโฆโฆ
July 30th, 2024 08:17
My Favourite Colour Is Blue
Cassie58 said:
Yellow is the colour of my true loveโs hair, in the morning. Can you remember Donovan singing that Teddy. Yellow is not a colour I would ever wear, but I love buttercups and sunflowers and of course daffodils in spring. Such a lovely bright write. That yellow fiat though!!!! What a nightmare. ๐น
July 30th, 2024 07:31
Cassie58 said:
Yellow is the colour of my true loveโs hair, in the morning. Can you remember Donovan singing that Teddy. Yellow is not a colour I would ever wear, but I love buttercups and sunflowers and of course daffodils in spring. Such a lovely bright write. That yellow fiat though!!!! What a nightmare. ๐น
July 30th, 2024 07:31
My Favourite Colour Is Blue
sorenbarrett said:
In the US the term yellow means cowardly, also yellow ribbons were used as tokens to express loss in war for the victims or to bring back prisoners or the lost. Although bright as the sun it is not my favorite color either I prefer blue. mLoved your write friend.
July 30th, 2024 06:31
sorenbarrett said:
In the US the term yellow means cowardly, also yellow ribbons were used as tokens to express loss in war for the victims or to bring back prisoners or the lost. Although bright as the sun it is not my favorite color either I prefer blue. mLoved your write friend.
July 30th, 2024 06:31
My Favourite Colour Is Blue
Caring dove said:
Yeah we can write about whatever we want ..
July 30th, 2024 04:15
Caring dove said:
Yeah we can write about whatever we want ..
July 30th, 2024 04:15
My Favourite Colour Is Blue
Caring dove said:
Sounds like you sometimes like the colour yellow lol .. I like the colour blue too tho i think one of my favourite colours is purple .
July 30th, 2024 04:14
Caring dove said:
Sounds like you sometimes like the colour yellow lol .. I like the colour blue too tho i think one of my favourite colours is purple .
July 30th, 2024 04:14
And I\'ll Write About That Too
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful. We as poets, will write about anything we can. Lol
July 29th, 2024 22:33
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful. We as poets, will write about anything we can. Lol
July 29th, 2024 22:33
And I\'ll Write About That Too
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy, long may that happiness continue. Enjoy your holiday. Your poem is so uplifting a read. Much enjoyed dear poet. ๐น
July 29th, 2024 21:46
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy, long may that happiness continue. Enjoy your holiday. Your poem is so uplifting a read. Much enjoyed dear poet. ๐น
July 29th, 2024 21:46
And I\'ll Write About That Too
Bella Shepard said:
Beautifully said dear Teddy. The perfect poem and the perfect pic. Whatever your inspiration, it always blooms into something wonderful.
July 29th, 2024 12:25
Bella Shepard said:
Beautifully said dear Teddy. The perfect poem and the perfect pic. Whatever your inspiration, it always blooms into something wonderful.
July 29th, 2024 12:25
And I\'ll Write About That Too
aDarkerMind said:
on a beautiful island writing a beautiful poem for all to see.
perfect I reckon.
July 29th, 2024 11:04
aDarkerMind said:
on a beautiful island writing a beautiful poem for all to see.
perfect I reckon.
July 29th, 2024 11:04
And I\'ll Write About That Too
Accidental Poet said:
Every time you dip your quill into the inkwell a new rose is born. ๐น
July 29th, 2024 06:53
Accidental Poet said:
Every time you dip your quill into the inkwell a new rose is born. ๐น
July 29th, 2024 06:53
And I\'ll Write About That Too
sorenbarrett said:
I too like to write from all perspectives about all things and since poetry comes from the heart one has to be in the mood or it is just another journal note. Well done friend
July 29th, 2024 05:29
sorenbarrett said:
I too like to write from all perspectives about all things and since poetry comes from the heart one has to be in the mood or it is just another journal note. Well done friend
July 29th, 2024 05:29
And I\'ll Write About That Too
Goldfinch60 said:
May that happiness fill all your days Teddy.
Andy
July 29th, 2024 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
May that happiness fill all your days Teddy.
Andy
July 29th, 2024 01:46
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