Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
The Backbone of a Poem
Parisab said:
We are indeed building castles sometimes from the dungeons-yours is always beautiful no matter what
July 4th, 2024 17:11
Parisab said:
We are indeed building castles sometimes from the dungeons-yours is always beautiful no matter what
July 4th, 2024 17:11
The Backbone of a Poem
sorenbarrett said:
I agree a poem is the emotion it evokes and whether it is sad or happy it matters not. You have worded it well and the poet is the pen that drips the ink of the soul onto the page. So well written this one is so true.
July 4th, 2024 14:52
sorenbarrett said:
I agree a poem is the emotion it evokes and whether it is sad or happy it matters not. You have worded it well and the poet is the pen that drips the ink of the soul onto the page. So well written this one is so true.
July 4th, 2024 14:52
The Backbone of a Poem
Thomas W Case said:
You have nailed this Teddy. Brilliant, you have drilled home the backbone of a poem. It\'s the hunger and filling. Truly superb.
July 4th, 2024 11:48
Thomas W Case said:
You have nailed this Teddy. Brilliant, you have drilled home the backbone of a poem. It\'s the hunger and filling. Truly superb.
July 4th, 2024 11:48
The Backbone of a Poem
MendedFences27 said:
Well, my belly\'s full. You\'ve defined the poem to a tee. I don\'t think there is an official definition of a poem, but you certainly hit most of the cues. So now, perhaps, I will be able to construct one. Thank you for this delightful start to my reading today. - Phil A.
July 4th, 2024 10:20
MendedFences27 said:
Well, my belly\'s full. You\'ve defined the poem to a tee. I don\'t think there is an official definition of a poem, but you certainly hit most of the cues. So now, perhaps, I will be able to construct one. Thank you for this delightful start to my reading today. - Phil A.
July 4th, 2024 10:20
Winter’s Meadow
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful sentiment and sense of temporary loss which is hoped will end in future reunification. Loved the last line that reflects the entire feeling of the poem.
July 3rd, 2024 11:30
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful sentiment and sense of temporary loss which is hoped will end in future reunification. Loved the last line that reflects the entire feeling of the poem.
July 3rd, 2024 11:30
On The Great Stage Is A Poetess And An Angel
Goldfinch60 said:
Dance with your angel at all times Teddy, she will always be with you.
Andy
July 3rd, 2024 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Dance with your angel at all times Teddy, she will always be with you.
Andy
July 3rd, 2024 01:20
Caged Hummingbird
Cassie58 said:
How beautifully poetic are your lines here Teddy. A most touching write. The mind can be truly powerful when we need it to be. Always best to be yourself. Your beautiful, unique self. 🌹
June 30th, 2024 19:20
Cassie58 said:
How beautifully poetic are your lines here Teddy. A most touching write. The mind can be truly powerful when we need it to be. Always best to be yourself. Your beautiful, unique self. 🌹
June 30th, 2024 19:20
On The Great Stage Is A Poetess And An Angel
Doggerel Dave said:
However much I refuse to consider angels Teddy, your poem forced me to suspend my disbelief and enjoy the spirit and the dance.😌
June 30th, 2024 17:53
Doggerel Dave said:
However much I refuse to consider angels Teddy, your poem forced me to suspend my disbelief and enjoy the spirit and the dance.😌
June 30th, 2024 17:53
On The Great Stage Is A Poetess And An Angel
Accidental Poet said:
Might it be dear Teddy, that it is your future and past beings come to dance and celebrate with you in your
present? 🌹🌹🌹
June 30th, 2024 15:37
Accidental Poet said:
Might it be dear Teddy, that it is your future and past beings come to dance and celebrate with you in your
present? 🌹🌹🌹
June 30th, 2024 15:37
On The Great Stage Is A Poetess And An Angel
sorenbarrett said:
At first given your last poem I thought of a humming bird then came the thought of a reflection a great thought a perfect unison in dance with one\'s reflection.
June 30th, 2024 12:50
sorenbarrett said:
At first given your last poem I thought of a humming bird then came the thought of a reflection a great thought a perfect unison in dance with one\'s reflection.
June 30th, 2024 12:50
Caged Hummingbird
sorenbarrett said:
\"I wish for the day
empathy opens my cage
and lets me fly away?\"
Ah the question mark. Would you or would you not, A great message in this poem Teddy we all need to be who we are. Very nice.
June 30th, 2024 12:44
sorenbarrett said:
\"I wish for the day
empathy opens my cage
and lets me fly away?\"
Ah the question mark. Would you or would you not, A great message in this poem Teddy we all need to be who we are. Very nice.
June 30th, 2024 12:44
On The Great Stage Is A Poetess And An Angel
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful. I love the way you painted this scene with your words.
June 30th, 2024 12:30
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful. I love the way you painted this scene with your words.
June 30th, 2024 12:30
On The Great Stage Is A Poetess And An Angel
aDarkerMind said:
a reflection written as only you know how Teddy.
and so we danced....
my Sunday mood now lifted.
June 30th, 2024 11:41
aDarkerMind said:
a reflection written as only you know how Teddy.
and so we danced....
my Sunday mood now lifted.
June 30th, 2024 11:41
Caged Hummingbird
Accidental Poet said:
As poets, we are all free with the gift of words that rise in the air of freedom and respect for each other. And you Teddy are the one to inspire us all. 🌹👍
June 30th, 2024 08:30
Accidental Poet said:
As poets, we are all free with the gift of words that rise in the air of freedom and respect for each other. And you Teddy are the one to inspire us all. 🌹👍
June 30th, 2024 08:30
Caged Hummingbird
aDarkerMind said:
a poem to inspire us all Teddy.
I will learn much from this....
a wonderful poem.
June 30th, 2024 05:07
aDarkerMind said:
a poem to inspire us all Teddy.
I will learn much from this....
a wonderful poem.
June 30th, 2024 05:07
Caged Hummingbird
Dan Williams said:
Amen. Who wants to be like everybody else.
June 30th, 2024 01:12
Dan Williams said:
Amen. Who wants to be like everybody else.
June 30th, 2024 01:12
Caged Hummingbird
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful. A truly sad image of a hummingbird in a cage. You are the sweetest spirit.
June 29th, 2024 21:41
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful. A truly sad image of a hummingbird in a cage. You are the sweetest spirit.
June 29th, 2024 21:41
Caged Hummingbird
Doggerel Dave said:
“I found out who I really am?” A rhetorical question, because you do know who you are Teddy, and even if there’s the slightest possibility there that you don’t, then by the end you do – no need for further expansion.
Everyone who reads this will know you better by the end here.
A rich little poem I enjoyed.
June 29th, 2024 17:24
Doggerel Dave said:
“I found out who I really am?” A rhetorical question, because you do know who you are Teddy, and even if there’s the slightest possibility there that you don’t, then by the end you do – no need for further expansion.
Everyone who reads this will know you better by the end here.
A rich little poem I enjoyed.
June 29th, 2024 17:24
Extraordinary Vision
Cassie58 said:
Another feast in poetry. You transported me Teddy. My senses were stirred. Loved the imagery and the bird song was divine. You have a beautiful mind. 🌹
June 29th, 2024 06:52
Cassie58 said:
Another feast in poetry. You transported me Teddy. My senses were stirred. Loved the imagery and the bird song was divine. You have a beautiful mind. 🌹
June 29th, 2024 06:52
Secrets of Slumberbash
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy. Many is the time I have woken up crying from dreams. Yes, I dream in colour and feel the emotions too. Your words are truly relatable. As to that feeling of emptiness, part of the human condition. I do believe we all experience it at times in our lives. Love your posted image. My birth city. Etched in my heart. Have a beautiful weekend dear poet. 🌹
June 29th, 2024 05:48
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy. Many is the time I have woken up crying from dreams. Yes, I dream in colour and feel the emotions too. Your words are truly relatable. As to that feeling of emptiness, part of the human condition. I do believe we all experience it at times in our lives. Love your posted image. My birth city. Etched in my heart. Have a beautiful weekend dear poet. 🌹
June 29th, 2024 05:48
Extraordinary Vision
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful imagery. You painted a sublime picture with words here.
June 28th, 2024 19:11
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful imagery. You painted a sublime picture with words here.
June 28th, 2024 19:11
Extraordinary Vision
sorenbarrett said:
\"I could hear the birds
having a bath in the sweetness
of their own glorious voices
splashing their musical notes
upon my thoughts\"
Such a beautiful image!
Reflection does indeed sway from side to side and very shortly drifts away
\"away from the now
and into tomorrow\"
The placement of this in this location of the poem was masterful. This poem left a light airy feeling.
June 28th, 2024 04:55
sorenbarrett said:
\"I could hear the birds
having a bath in the sweetness
of their own glorious voices
splashing their musical notes
upon my thoughts\"
Such a beautiful image!
Reflection does indeed sway from side to side and very shortly drifts away
\"away from the now
and into tomorrow\"
The placement of this in this location of the poem was masterful. This poem left a light airy feeling.
June 28th, 2024 04:55
Extraordinary Vision
Accidental Poet said:
A beautiful vision Teddy. Your tomorrows await your presence. 🌹
June 28th, 2024 04:38
Accidental Poet said:
A beautiful vision Teddy. Your tomorrows await your presence. 🌹
June 28th, 2024 04:38
Secrets of Slumberbash
Doggerel Dave said:
I too have a recurring dream or rather the setting for a series of dreams, which I don’t intend to relate ‘cos there’s too many of them…. But the setting is an expansive never-ending building – a cross between a large hotel and an ocean liner (sort of) with all those doors……. Fun.
You stirred my imagination Teddy, and I shall hold you responsible if you have managed to evict me from my very comfortable environment.😄
PS: Your picture….Sigh…..
June 27th, 2024 17:54
Doggerel Dave said:
I too have a recurring dream or rather the setting for a series of dreams, which I don’t intend to relate ‘cos there’s too many of them…. But the setting is an expansive never-ending building – a cross between a large hotel and an ocean liner (sort of) with all those doors……. Fun.
You stirred my imagination Teddy, and I shall hold you responsible if you have managed to evict me from my very comfortable environment.😄
PS: Your picture….Sigh…..
June 27th, 2024 17:54
Secrets of Slumberbash
sorenbarrett said:
Dreams are most intriguing whether natural or metaphoric. Yes I emote in my dreams and have experience time distortion and lucid dreaming. Here in this poem it seems a search for an archetype a soulmate may I be so bold as to say God that is omnipresent, I have never found him either
\"but I just get on
with my day
regardless
because that is just what one does...
well, isn\'t it?\"
So nicely finished.
June 27th, 2024 15:39
sorenbarrett said:
Dreams are most intriguing whether natural or metaphoric. Yes I emote in my dreams and have experience time distortion and lucid dreaming. Here in this poem it seems a search for an archetype a soulmate may I be so bold as to say God that is omnipresent, I have never found him either
\"but I just get on
with my day
regardless
because that is just what one does...
well, isn\'t it?\"
So nicely finished.
June 27th, 2024 15:39
Secrets of Slumberbash
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous. I relate totally. I awake heart sick sometimes. Powerful writing, dear Teddy.
June 27th, 2024 12:22
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous. I relate totally. I awake heart sick sometimes. Powerful writing, dear Teddy.
June 27th, 2024 12:22
Secrets of Slumberbash
Accidental Poet said:
BRAVA POETESS! 🌹😀👍
Oh, what I wouldn\'t do to see, touch and embrace my soulmate. So very beautiful a write today Teddy. I love it. 🌹
June 27th, 2024 09:24
Accidental Poet said:
BRAVA POETESS! 🌹😀👍
Oh, what I wouldn\'t do to see, touch and embrace my soulmate. So very beautiful a write today Teddy. I love it. 🌹
June 27th, 2024 09:24
Secrets of Slumberbash
Qurrathul Ain said:
So relatable. For some reasons, it spoke to my heart. Thank you for sharing!
June 27th, 2024 03:34
Qurrathul Ain said:
So relatable. For some reasons, it spoke to my heart. Thank you for sharing!
June 27th, 2024 03:34
Back from The Future
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous. I love the reference. Excellent work, Sweet Teddy.
June 25th, 2024 19:21
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous. I love the reference. Excellent work, Sweet Teddy.
June 25th, 2024 19:21
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