Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
And I\'ll Write About That Too
sorenbarrett said:
I too like to write from all perspectives about all things and since poetry comes from the heart one has to be in the mood or it is just another journal note. Well done friend
July 29th, 2024 05:29
sorenbarrett said:
I too like to write from all perspectives about all things and since poetry comes from the heart one has to be in the mood or it is just another journal note. Well done friend
July 29th, 2024 05:29
And I\'ll Write About That Too
Goldfinch60 said:
May that happiness fill all your days Teddy.
Andy
July 29th, 2024 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
May that happiness fill all your days Teddy.
Andy
July 29th, 2024 01:46
And I\'ll Write About That Too
Doggerel Dave said:
Moody, but gives your muse plenty of scope and ensures a presence on these pages for an extended period, I would hope, Teddy....😊
July 28th, 2024 16:52
Doggerel Dave said:
Moody, but gives your muse plenty of scope and ensures a presence on these pages for an extended period, I would hope, Teddy....😊
July 28th, 2024 16:52
To the Bride and Groom
Accidental Poet said:
Best wishes for your younger brother Teddy. Special words from a special sister. 🫂
July 28th, 2024 04:37
Accidental Poet said:
Best wishes for your younger brother Teddy. Special words from a special sister. 🫂
July 28th, 2024 04:37
To the Bride and Groom
Cassie58 said:
Wishing your brother much happiness Teddy. A beautiful senryu to mark the occasion. Love your posted image. Have a great weekend. 🌹
July 27th, 2024 16:25
Cassie58 said:
Wishing your brother much happiness Teddy. A beautiful senryu to mark the occasion. Love your posted image. Have a great weekend. 🌹
July 27th, 2024 16:25
To the Bride and Groom
aDarkerMind said:
a touching haiku Teddy;
my best wishes for the happy couple...
and to you also.
July 27th, 2024 03:29
aDarkerMind said:
a touching haiku Teddy;
my best wishes for the happy couple...
and to you also.
July 27th, 2024 03:29
To the Bride and Groom
Goldfinch60 said:
Good senryu Teddy, may he have a wonderful life.
Andy
July 27th, 2024 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Good senryu Teddy, may he have a wonderful life.
Andy
July 27th, 2024 01:41
But What Of Love?
sorenbarrett said:
When it comes to love I feel that all are lost. In its pendulum swing love takes one to the heights of paradise to the depths of hell whose fires are only quenched with the salty tears. Another wonderful write.
July 26th, 2024 04:44
sorenbarrett said:
When it comes to love I feel that all are lost. In its pendulum swing love takes one to the heights of paradise to the depths of hell whose fires are only quenched with the salty tears. Another wonderful write.
July 26th, 2024 04:44
There\'s Nothing But Grief in My Empty Fridge
Accidental Poet said:
Were it within my power I\'d leave you a fridge full of smiles. 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
July 24th, 2024 23:00
Accidental Poet said:
Were it within my power I\'d leave you a fridge full of smiles. 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
July 24th, 2024 23:00
Poet\'s True Worth
Accidental Poet said:
hmm, how\'d my picture get in here? I thought there was someone watching me after I completed my yardwork and enjoying my ice-cold drink. 😉👍
July 24th, 2024 22:46
Accidental Poet said:
hmm, how\'d my picture get in here? I thought there was someone watching me after I completed my yardwork and enjoying my ice-cold drink. 😉👍
July 24th, 2024 22:46
There\'s Nothing But Grief in My Empty Fridge
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful symbolism and metaphor, sweet Teddy.an
July 24th, 2024 21:35
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful symbolism and metaphor, sweet Teddy.an
July 24th, 2024 21:35
There\'s Nothing But Grief in My Empty Fridge
MendedFences27 said:
The third stanza hit me the hardest.
The entire poem is masterful. It brings loneliness and grief, a missed someone, to its greatest height. Throughout your poem many tender moments are reproduced. The reader watches as one struggles with grief through loneliness of a departed lover. Very, very sad. - Phil A.
July 24th, 2024 15:27
MendedFences27 said:
The third stanza hit me the hardest.
The entire poem is masterful. It brings loneliness and grief, a missed someone, to its greatest height. Throughout your poem many tender moments are reproduced. The reader watches as one struggles with grief through loneliness of a departed lover. Very, very sad. - Phil A.
July 24th, 2024 15:27
There\'s Nothing But Grief in My Empty Fridge
Bella Shepard said:
You express the feeling of profound emptiness so tangibly in this poem, as everything you encounter is a sad reminder. So beautifully written dear friend.!
July 24th, 2024 13:24
Bella Shepard said:
You express the feeling of profound emptiness so tangibly in this poem, as everything you encounter is a sad reminder. So beautifully written dear friend.!
July 24th, 2024 13:24
There\'s Nothing But Grief in My Empty Fridge
aDarkerMind said:
sad....yes.
but how beautifully put in words Teddy.
brought a tear to my eye...
bless you.
July 24th, 2024 09:48
aDarkerMind said:
sad....yes.
but how beautifully put in words Teddy.
brought a tear to my eye...
bless you.
July 24th, 2024 09:48
There\'s Nothing But Grief in My Empty Fridge
Thoughtless said:
Grief is so personal and experienced so differently by each individual. It never goes away. But the joy of better times is a balm for it. After more than eight years, I still miss my wife. But joy does grow our of grief and the love we had for each other. Your poem- Well done.
July 24th, 2024 06:45
Thoughtless said:
Grief is so personal and experienced so differently by each individual. It never goes away. But the joy of better times is a balm for it. After more than eight years, I still miss my wife. But joy does grow our of grief and the love we had for each other. Your poem- Well done.
July 24th, 2024 06:45
There\'s Nothing But Grief in My Empty Fridge
sorenbarrett said:
I am slow to come to realizations but it became apparent in this poem that your poetry is not just from the metaphor or image and symbolism but from the emotion evoked woven into the images and metaphors tying them together and weaving them into a single tapestry. Most beautiful in its sad forlornness.
July 24th, 2024 06:18
sorenbarrett said:
I am slow to come to realizations but it became apparent in this poem that your poetry is not just from the metaphor or image and symbolism but from the emotion evoked woven into the images and metaphors tying them together and weaving them into a single tapestry. Most beautiful in its sad forlornness.
July 24th, 2024 06:18
Stars
Caring dove said:
Very lovely .. beautiful writing . Like your gentle way with words
July 24th, 2024 02:57
Caring dove said:
Very lovely .. beautiful writing . Like your gentle way with words
July 24th, 2024 02:57
There\'s Nothing But Grief in My Empty Fridge
Caring dove said:
Very sad writing .. yet well expressed , teddy
July 24th, 2024 02:54
Caring dove said:
Very sad writing .. yet well expressed , teddy
July 24th, 2024 02:54
Poet\'s True Worth
Bella Shepard said:
It gave me more than a chuckle, the perfect senyru and the perfect pic. I love the self satisfied smile on his face. You made me feel the emotion of happiness,dear poetess, and I thank you!
July 23rd, 2024 13:20
Bella Shepard said:
It gave me more than a chuckle, the perfect senyru and the perfect pic. I love the self satisfied smile on his face. You made me feel the emotion of happiness,dear poetess, and I thank you!
July 23rd, 2024 13:20
Poet\'s True Worth
MendedFences27 said:
If writing in \"Word,\" just highlight the entire poem and select the centered justified format.
I think I knew Art once, a former neighbor who sat out on his patio and never mowed his lawn, just drank a lot of beer and listened to his music.
A very fine description of poetry. - Phil A.
July 23rd, 2024 12:10
MendedFences27 said:
If writing in \"Word,\" just highlight the entire poem and select the centered justified format.
I think I knew Art once, a former neighbor who sat out on his patio and never mowed his lawn, just drank a lot of beer and listened to his music.
A very fine description of poetry. - Phil A.
July 23rd, 2024 12:10
Poet\'s True Worth
sorenbarrett said:
So true Teddy it is the first measure I use in my definition of art. One of the best Haiku\'s I\'ve seen. I truly love this one friend.
July 23rd, 2024 05:48
sorenbarrett said:
So true Teddy it is the first measure I use in my definition of art. One of the best Haiku\'s I\'ve seen. I truly love this one friend.
July 23rd, 2024 05:48
A Life Lesson In Tapestry
Goldfinch60 said:
Very sad words Teddy, I do hope that this is just some very good words and not the way you really feel.
Andy
July 23rd, 2024 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Very sad words Teddy, I do hope that this is just some very good words and not the way you really feel.
Andy
July 23rd, 2024 01:48
A Life Lesson In Tapestry
Dan Williams said:
Wow, I thought I was negative. I agree and appreciate a fellow pessimist. Good work.
July 22nd, 2024 23:36
Dan Williams said:
Wow, I thought I was negative. I agree and appreciate a fellow pessimist. Good work.
July 22nd, 2024 23:36
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