Comments received on poems by Teddy.15



When The Shadows Come Calling
sorenbarrett said:

I see them as nothing more than two sides to the same coin, Life and death two gentle forces of nature Life brings pain, death peace. Most lovely

August 30th, 2024 06:41

When The Shadows Come Calling
Goldfinch60 said:

The shadow of death has been seen but My Angel is always there to protect me Teddy.

Andy

August 30th, 2024 01:49

When Motown Meets The Blues
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words Teddy that can be so very true, music brings us together.

Andy

August 30th, 2024 01:16

When Motown Meets The Blues
Thad Wilk said:

\"clapping\"πŸ‘πŸ‘
You have painted a
outstanding scene; 🎡 🎢 🎢
very evocative,
picturesque and serene!πŸ‘Œ
Thanks for sharing poetess!
Best wishes πŸ€ 🌹 πŸ€— Thad


August 29th, 2024 15:05

When Motown Meets The Blues
MendedFences27 said:

I think, maybe, Billie could have used a lot more understanding. If only someone had looked into her eyes and saw what was there.
Music is the great unifier of man. If we communicated by music and not language, we\'d all be a lot better off. Oh well, I\'m rambling. Your poem is responsible. It had me thinking, \"What if?\" Thoroughly enjoyed your poem. \"A woman isn\'t always easy to see\" is a brilliant line. - Phil A.

August 29th, 2024 11:09

When Motown Meets The Blues
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful. You bring this scene to life. Billie was tremendous. Great work, sweet Teddy.

August 29th, 2024 11:07

When Motown Meets The Blues
Tony36 said:

Love it

August 29th, 2024 06:48

When Motown Meets The Blues
sorenbarrett said:

Loved this one Teddy and the last line is what pulled it all together. Whether lovers, dancers, or jamming on instruments it is that understanding that brings it all together and makes music.

August 29th, 2024 05:27

All About Hats
Goldfinch60 said:

My wife Joyce could never find a hat to suit her, her best friend was going to fix this so she took Joyce out to find her a hat and came back exhausted as she said she just could not find a hat that suited her!

Andy

August 29th, 2024 00:58

All About Hats
Cheeky Missy said:

Well, well, well, if your limerick parrying wasn\'t a fun distraction, I don\'t know what it was, but I certainly loved THIS.

August 28th, 2024 13:49

All About Hats
Thomas W Case said:

I relate. I am always wearing hats. Great work, sweet Teddy.

August 28th, 2024 12:35

All About Hats
sorenbarrett said:

I too have several hats on the wall from fedora to Stetsons of a cowboy type, some in felt, some straw. some corduroy. Seldom wear them though. A most fun write my friend hats off to you.

August 28th, 2024 05:42

All About Hats
Doggerel Dave said:

A battle of the limericks is there
Because Teddy is up for the dare;
But what she hasn’t done though
Is send a picture to go
Of all the hats on her stand in her care.

Come on Teddy - do an artistic arrangement.


August 28th, 2024 02:17

All About Hats
Michael Edwards said:

There was a young lady called Teddy
Who wore a big hat on her heady
β€˜twas tied β€˜neath her chin with fine gauze
And the reason for this was because
In the wind her big hat was unsteady


August 28th, 2024 01:28

Bello Casentino
Dan Williams said:

Yes! Perfect imagery! Very well done.

August 28th, 2024 00:40

Bello Casentino
MendedFences27 said:

Wonderful images. Like being in the forest. Well-spoken in a few words and yet picturesque. Loved \"The Ghost of Dante.\" It set the tone. - Phil A.

August 27th, 2024 18:38

Bello Casentino
Doggerel Dave said:

Richness of sensation provided in so very few words, Teddy. Often I pass poems relating to nature by, but here as I put my nose close to the screen, I swear I smelt that richness.

August 27th, 2024 07:06

Bello Casentino
sorenbarrett said:

What an image you paint in poetic ink. It is not just black and white but contains the colors of ghosts and past rides in dusk over hallowed ground. I can hear the heart beat of the forest and the breath of the horse. Lovely

August 27th, 2024 05:48

Senryu to Love
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful senryu Teddy.

Andy

August 27th, 2024 01:20

Senryu to Love
Dan Williams said:

Fundamental truth stated cleanly. Nice.

August 27th, 2024 00:02

Senryu to Love
Thomas W Case said:

You hit the nail on the head sweet Teddy.

August 26th, 2024 21:36

Senryu to Love
Bella Shepard said:

Golden my dear!! And did I mention perfect?

August 26th, 2024 14:37

Senryu to Love
Thad Wilk said:

A stunning senryu!! πŸ‘
Very romantic 😍
and refreshing too!! πŸ†
My pleasure to read
today thank you!! 😊
Best wishes πŸ™ 🌹 Thad

August 26th, 2024 09:48

Senryu to Love
Doggerel Dave said:

Words (perish the thought!) can be false, whereas actions speak for themselves. A truth so well poemed, Teddy.

Does that mean that poetry is now redundant??? 🀣


August 26th, 2024 07:13

Senryu to Love
Cassie58 said:

Dear Teddy, words can be precious but the proof of the pudding is unquestionably in actions. Nothing proves love more than what a dear one does, not what they say. Someone with no words can be the most caring and thoughtful of all. A lovely senryu. Have a beautiful day dear poet. 🌹

August 26th, 2024 06:21

Senryu to Love
sorenbarrett said:

This strikes deep to the heart of anyone who loves. Is it love or words? Concisely and beautifully said my friend.

August 26th, 2024 05:20

Inside Out
Bella Shepard said:

Your words strike a note deep in the heart, for everyone who has had those darkest days, that hope is there and light will find them. Thank you dear Teddy, this poem is especially appreciated.

August 25th, 2024 10:42

Temporal LobeΒ 
Bella Shepard said:

Oh Teddy, the story of my life. How did you know. I\'m sorry, what was I talking about?

August 25th, 2024 10:33

The day of New To You Belongs
sorenbarrett said:

Beautiful images portrayed in this poem that merges fantasy and reality into a single shining morning. Lovely my friend

August 25th, 2024 06:11

Inside Out
aDarkerMind said:

nailed it indeed Teddy...

what a talent you are.

August 25th, 2024 01:37



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