Comments received on poems by Teddy.15



So I Can Finally Become Me
Cassie58 said:

Beautifully penned Teddy. I think everyone. longs for a soul mate. That unconditional love is much desired but often elusive. Love your imagery here. Hope you have had a glorious day dear poet. 🌹

July 19th, 2024 16:55

So I Can Finally Become Me
Bella Shepard said:

I read this poem and sigh, the dream of a perfect love with whom to share everything that you hold dear. To find such a one would be a dream come true. Written from the true lover\'s heart.

July 19th, 2024 13:48

So I Can Finally Become Me
Jerry Reynolds said:

Nicely written, Teddy. When I was young I wanted to be a Lighthouse keeper. That would do it for me. I became an artist instead. I still dream of being a Lighthouse Keeper.

July 19th, 2024 13:20

So I Can Finally Become Me
Caring dove said:

Lovely writing .. makes me think of twin flames

July 19th, 2024 13:10

So I Can Finally Become Me
aDarkerMind said:

a poem from the heart of a woman with a gift of poetry.

beautifully put Teddy.

July 19th, 2024 13:10

So I Can Finally Become Me
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful and relatable. I love the vulnerability. You are loved, sweet Teddy.

July 19th, 2024 10:45

So I Can Finally Become Me
Tony36 said:

Great write and very well expressed

July 19th, 2024 09:52

The Great Moon and The Baubab
sorenbarrett said:

The fragrance of this poem hangs in the air like perfume. The essence of its presence invisible, not able to be seen, but sensed none the less. Beautiful

July 19th, 2024 05:48

So I Can Finally Become Me
sorenbarrett said:

A longing we all have until we find one or someone we think is one until lost and then what another search or become jaded and search no more. Very nice Teddy

July 19th, 2024 04:56

The Great Moon and The Baubab
Goldfinch60 said:

That romance is not lost Teddy it will be within your heart forever.

Andy

July 19th, 2024 01:23

The Great Moon and The Baubab
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful work, sweet Teddy. Powerful words.

July 18th, 2024 23:59

The Great Moon and The Baubab
aDarkerMind said:

as touching as always Teddy...

Sylvia would have enjoyed it,
of that am sure.

July 18th, 2024 14:07

Reflecting in The Shower
Thomas W Case said:

I love the ambiguity of this, sweet Teddy.

July 17th, 2024 16:48

My Gentle Soul Can Surely Rest
sorenbarrett said:

Somewhere over the rainbow we will all find rest in a colored land where we only need to click our heels to get back home. Lovely write my friend

July 17th, 2024 06:56

If I was A Mirror
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful work, sweet Teddy.

July 16th, 2024 16:03

If I was A Mirror
Cassie58 said:

Personification of the mirror. Love that idea Teddy. And of course you can hide nothing from the sharp unforgiving gaze of mirrors . They see it all lol. Every blemish, every line and your eyes are the give aways. The eyes are the mirrors of the soul. Look into a mirror if you dare:) But then on a good day …….. 🌹

July 16th, 2024 13:38

If I was A Mirror
sorenbarrett said:

Beneath all there is the beauty that one has. Some need to look deep while others it shines on the surface but we all have it. \"I would see your lost soul searching for its meaning\" A great line. Then the weeping for a thousand years for a lost love. Here it can be taken that it is someone else or the lost love for oneself. A most wonderful write.

July 16th, 2024 08:53

If I was A Mirror
Accidental Poet said:

Teddy, you dear poetess bring out the best in all of us. 🌹
I too am not in favor of the new changes here in MPS. Maybe it\'s only a trial thing. πŸ™„

July 16th, 2024 01:43

If I was A Mirror
Thad Wilk said:

Exhilarating
awesomeness poetess!! πŸ‘
Very evocative,
superbly expressed!
My pleasure to read indeed!
Best wishes πŸ™πŸŒΉ. Thad

July 15th, 2024 19:14

If I was A Mirror
Doggerel Dave said:

Nothing like some positive self talk, Teddy. A strong foundation with which to relate to others . Well poemed.

July 15th, 2024 17:31

A Gentleman’s Secret
sorenbarrett said:

This poem says a lot about human nature. Who do we know, how much do we know about them and how much do we want to know. A name is the entryway to intimacy without it we can keep our distance while still observing. A great write.

July 15th, 2024 11:29

No Regrets
sorenbarrett said:

A great message said so poetically. I think we would all be better off if we lived it.

July 14th, 2024 13:48

The Visitor (my Raven )
sorenbarrett said:

\"dreamer\'s quilt\" a beautiful image and the overall image of a raven as a harbinger of the lifting of grief is very nice and quite counter to that of Poe\'s

July 14th, 2024 05:45

When Two Roads Diverge
Bella Shepard said:

You hit the vunnerable spot in all of us in this poem, the mystery of life that we can never solve. Que sera, que sera as the song goes. I just loved this!

July 13th, 2024 11:06

On The Very Edge of Passion
Bella Shepard said:

This is stunning my friend. You made my day, I really needed this. A million starry fav\'s to you.

July 13th, 2024 10:59

On The Very Edge of Passion
sorenbarrett said:

I think you captured this one with the title, picture and words. As is so often true in poetry less is more and this one proves it. Well said my friend.

July 13th, 2024 05:44

On The Very Edge of Passion
Thomas W Case said:

So very true. Do you need a match? Lol. You are the best, sweet Teddy.

July 12th, 2024 18:22

On The Very Edge of Passion
Doggerel Dave said:

Fire ignited years ago - I don\'t think it\'s magnificent, but is definitely present, now you have reminded me, Teddy. Thanks for that.

July 12th, 2024 17:45

On The Very Edge of Passion
Accidental Poet said:

The brighter the fire, the stronger the passion Teddy. And every poet feels that passion. πŸ˜‰πŸ‘

July 12th, 2024 17:24

On The Very Edge of Passion
Cassie58 said:

Without passion how boring life would be. We all need to feel that fire. Beautiful brevity dear Teddy. Love your posted image . A perfect match for your words. Happy Friday. 🌹

July 12th, 2024 12:55



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