Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
An Ode to Sunday
aDarkerMind said:
am surrounded by trees, squirrels forever squabbling, and a birds nest right outside my window here on my 2nd floor flat. and your Ode To Sunday adds even more of a sparkle Teddy.
August 19th, 2024 10:08
aDarkerMind said:
am surrounded by trees, squirrels forever squabbling, and a birds nest right outside my window here on my 2nd floor flat. and your Ode To Sunday adds even more of a sparkle Teddy.
August 19th, 2024 10:08
The Devil\'s In Town
AuburnScribbler said:
A brilliantly written piece here Teddy.15, to me, it sounds like a saucily penned diary entry, that either tells the wanting to create such a scene in town, or documents the fear of doing so.
Or perhaps, you have already done it, eh!?
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
August 19th, 2024 04:57
AuburnScribbler said:
A brilliantly written piece here Teddy.15, to me, it sounds like a saucily penned diary entry, that either tells the wanting to create such a scene in town, or documents the fear of doing so.
Or perhaps, you have already done it, eh!?
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
August 19th, 2024 04:57
An Ode to Sunday
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful ode Teddy, we too had a relaxing Sunday.
Andy
August 19th, 2024 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful ode Teddy, we too had a relaxing Sunday.
Andy
August 19th, 2024 01:20
An Ode to Sunday
Dan Williams said:
So uplifting, I\'m jealous. This kind of simple pleasure often eludes me; thank for reminding me of it.
August 19th, 2024 00:21
Dan Williams said:
So uplifting, I\'m jealous. This kind of simple pleasure often eludes me; thank for reminding me of it.
August 19th, 2024 00:21
An Ode to Sunday
MendedFences27 said:
There is nothing quite like a relaxing Sunday with the freedom to do as one pleases, and then to be in Tuscany as well. Just too uplifting and spiritual an experience. it seems ever so fitting that you paint that tree. Loved your poem. - Phil A.
August 18th, 2024 20:45
MendedFences27 said:
There is nothing quite like a relaxing Sunday with the freedom to do as one pleases, and then to be in Tuscany as well. Just too uplifting and spiritual an experience. it seems ever so fitting that you paint that tree. Loved your poem. - Phil A.
August 18th, 2024 20:45
An Ode to Sunday
jarcher54 said:
Sharing your Sunday morning thoughts and sights and sounds is a treat! Anything can happen. For us as well as you! My Sunday has been busy, occasionally stressful, but unlike Monday I don\'t have to check in with anyone and attend to their agenda!
August 18th, 2024 18:43
jarcher54 said:
Sharing your Sunday morning thoughts and sights and sounds is a treat! Anything can happen. For us as well as you! My Sunday has been busy, occasionally stressful, but unlike Monday I don\'t have to check in with anyone and attend to their agenda!
August 18th, 2024 18:43
An Ode to Sunday
Michael Edwards said:
You\'ve sure not lost your touch - I\'m reminded of one my early poems in which I refer to the land of cobalt skies \'\'where cyprus fingers point\'\'
August 18th, 2024 14:32
Michael Edwards said:
You\'ve sure not lost your touch - I\'m reminded of one my early poems in which I refer to the land of cobalt skies \'\'where cyprus fingers point\'\'
August 18th, 2024 14:32
An Ode to Sunday
Accidental Poet said:
Paint the tree? Did the tree not grow with color? Ahh well, yes it is Sunday, Do whatever your heart desires Teddy. After all, you are a poet and an artist. 🌹
August 18th, 2024 10:35
Accidental Poet said:
Paint the tree? Did the tree not grow with color? Ahh well, yes it is Sunday, Do whatever your heart desires Teddy. After all, you are a poet and an artist. 🌹
August 18th, 2024 10:35
An Ode to Sunday
Doggerel Dave said:
Got to call out the set builders, but they won’t come out on a Sunday…
Love your Sunday, Teddy. Don’t want to boast but it is an almost perfect description of quite a number of days in my week (retired). There’s trees out of my window, flowers, green…but it just ain’t quite Tuscan. Can smell the coffee from here.
A very evocative write.
August 18th, 2024 08:17
Doggerel Dave said:
Got to call out the set builders, but they won’t come out on a Sunday…
Love your Sunday, Teddy. Don’t want to boast but it is an almost perfect description of quite a number of days in my week (retired). There’s trees out of my window, flowers, green…but it just ain’t quite Tuscan. Can smell the coffee from here.
A very evocative write.
August 18th, 2024 08:17
An Ode to Sunday
Thoughtless said:
There is nothing like a Sunday with a sundae at the local dessert parlor. Your Sunday is a treat in words.
August 18th, 2024 08:10
Thoughtless said:
There is nothing like a Sunday with a sundae at the local dessert parlor. Your Sunday is a treat in words.
August 18th, 2024 08:10
An Ode to Sunday
sorenbarrett said:
Sunday, not so much lazy day but rather choice day. A feeling of freedom pervades this poem and more still carefree maybe carefreedom. Colorful bright and open a fulfilling felling to the opening or closing, as you choose, of a week.
August 18th, 2024 06:11
sorenbarrett said:
Sunday, not so much lazy day but rather choice day. A feeling of freedom pervades this poem and more still carefree maybe carefreedom. Colorful bright and open a fulfilling felling to the opening or closing, as you choose, of a week.
August 18th, 2024 06:11
An Ode to Sunday
rhmn_7 said:
Isn\'t that the perfect Sunday put together into verses? Great poem Teddy!
August 18th, 2024 05:54
rhmn_7 said:
Isn\'t that the perfect Sunday put together into verses? Great poem Teddy!
August 18th, 2024 05:54
The Last Goodbye
sorenbarrett said:
And so it is after such moments we have to pick up and carry on. I remember those days with the phone on the wall or table operator and party lines. Used to listen in to the neighbor ladies and yell at them to hang up so I could use the phone. (I was 10 at the time) got in alot of trouble from my parents about this.
August 17th, 2024 08:57
sorenbarrett said:
And so it is after such moments we have to pick up and carry on. I remember those days with the phone on the wall or table operator and party lines. Used to listen in to the neighbor ladies and yell at them to hang up so I could use the phone. (I was 10 at the time) got in alot of trouble from my parents about this.
August 17th, 2024 08:57
Pinocchio, deep in thought
sorenbarrett said:
That might have made me a little more than what could be taken in. A fun write Teddy
August 16th, 2024 05:28
sorenbarrett said:
That might have made me a little more than what could be taken in. A fun write Teddy
August 16th, 2024 05:28
Because My Darling It all Belongs to You
Parisab said:
Your love language displayed on the beautiful stage you described in your poem! That’s what happens in Tuscany, forget Keanu’s Hollywood-your heart sings of opera 🥂
August 16th, 2024 00:54
Parisab said:
Your love language displayed on the beautiful stage you described in your poem! That’s what happens in Tuscany, forget Keanu’s Hollywood-your heart sings of opera 🥂
August 16th, 2024 00:54
In The Line Of Fire
sorenbarrett said:
A little humor is the fuel needed to start the morning. Funny how these things make their way into children\'s nursery rhymes. A most fun write.
August 15th, 2024 04:36
sorenbarrett said:
A little humor is the fuel needed to start the morning. Funny how these things make their way into children\'s nursery rhymes. A most fun write.
August 15th, 2024 04:36
Because My Darling It all Belongs to You
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy. This is a beautiful. Heartfelt and gorgeous words. Now if that doesn’t melt his butter heart, I don’t know what will. Love your posted image too. Happy Thursday dear poet 🌹
August 15th, 2024 02:53
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy. This is a beautiful. Heartfelt and gorgeous words. Now if that doesn’t melt his butter heart, I don’t know what will. Love your posted image too. Happy Thursday dear poet 🌹
August 15th, 2024 02:53
Because My Darling It all Belongs to You
aDarkerMind said:
a deep and touching write Teddy...
and if I were to be granted one wish,
it would that I am Keanu Reeves.
am longing for an Italian pizza, and my ironing.......
that can wait ;o)
August 14th, 2024 11:40
aDarkerMind said:
a deep and touching write Teddy...
and if I were to be granted one wish,
it would that I am Keanu Reeves.
am longing for an Italian pizza, and my ironing.......
that can wait ;o)
August 14th, 2024 11:40
My Nevada
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful expression of love lost and soul at the same time. An existential crisis where faith in the words of others was not sustained, and the sought after sun was not obtained. Sad but so close to truth and truth is what a poet is supposed to tell.
August 14th, 2024 06:01
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful expression of love lost and soul at the same time. An existential crisis where faith in the words of others was not sustained, and the sought after sun was not obtained. Sad but so close to truth and truth is what a poet is supposed to tell.
August 14th, 2024 06:01
Because My Darling It all Belongs to You
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful lovelorn words Teddy.
Andy
August 14th, 2024 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful lovelorn words Teddy.
Andy
August 14th, 2024 01:28
Because My Darling It all Belongs to You
Dan Williams said:
Ahh, you successful lovers. I am so jealous.
August 14th, 2024 00:37
Dan Williams said:
Ahh, you successful lovers. I am so jealous.
August 14th, 2024 00:37
Because My Darling It all Belongs to You
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful work, Teddy. Tremendous.
August 13th, 2024 20:29
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful work, Teddy. Tremendous.
August 13th, 2024 20:29
Because My Darling It all Belongs to You
MendedFences27 said:
A sweet tribute to one\'s lover. Taking the night sky and giving it to him. He would trade it all for your love, I\'m sure. Wonderful poem. _ Phil A.
August 13th, 2024 12:21
MendedFences27 said:
A sweet tribute to one\'s lover. Taking the night sky and giving it to him. He would trade it all for your love, I\'m sure. Wonderful poem. _ Phil A.
August 13th, 2024 12:21
Because My Darling It all Belongs to You
Accidental Poet said:
Such passionate words of love for one so special. For me, brings thoughts of one such person. Beautiful write Teddy. 🌹
August 13th, 2024 08:39
Accidental Poet said:
Such passionate words of love for one so special. For me, brings thoughts of one such person. Beautiful write Teddy. 🌹
August 13th, 2024 08:39
Because My Darling It all Belongs to You
sorenbarrett said:
An endearing present in words given to another in the form of natures splendors compared to another\'s worth. So nicely worded
August 13th, 2024 08:33
sorenbarrett said:
An endearing present in words given to another in the form of natures splendors compared to another\'s worth. So nicely worded
August 13th, 2024 08:33
Because My Darling It all Belongs to You
Doggerel Dave said:
That is a close impassioned tribute Teddy that I know your husband will take to his heart and cherish.
August 13th, 2024 07:37
Doggerel Dave said:
That is a close impassioned tribute Teddy that I know your husband will take to his heart and cherish.
August 13th, 2024 07:37
What Of Love?
sorenbarrett said:
Now Teddy this one is a jewel that shines. It reads so perfectly with such nice rhyme and meter. Loved it.
August 13th, 2024 04:59
sorenbarrett said:
Now Teddy this one is a jewel that shines. It reads so perfectly with such nice rhyme and meter. Loved it.
August 13th, 2024 04:59
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