Comments received on poems by Teddy.15



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Doggerel Dave said:

Dunno where you are finding your graphic illustrations from Teddy, but are you not perpetuating the myth that females are poor naïve creatures who would sit on Pinocchio\'s face innocently..... Nice work if you can get away with it........LOL


August 1st, 2023 05:15

“Sommelier Full-Time Wanted”
orchidee said:

Oh lol good write T.

August 1st, 2023 03:57

“Sommelier Full-Time Wanted”
Neville said:



would you kindly make mine a double ❤️and one for yourself ..

fuck work, I fancy a picnic somewhere deep in the woods with the sound of the ocean close by ❤️

August 1st, 2023 03:56

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LIZ said:

Oh!! I love it!!! 😁 Mmmmm Tuscan Red Wine! At least you were honest lol 😆 And the picture is spot on!!! Did you get the job? Lol

August 1st, 2023 03:51

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Caring dove said:

lol 🙂🌸

Nice lighthearted writing )
Was she drunk when she went into the interview lol

Sometimes it’s very difficult to hide the truth from others ..

August 1st, 2023 03:45

Legend of Love
Sunsetmet said:

A lovely poem truly felt all the words thanks

July 31st, 2023 13:28

Unsighted
Neville said:


indeed how write you are dear Teddy .. a sound dedication speaks volumes Ms.15 ............. Neville ❤️


July 31st, 2023 12:40

Unsighted
Caring dove said:

Sounds like a nice singer ))

Your welcome 🙂

July 31st, 2023 04:56

Unsighted
Caring dove said:

Speaking from our soul / not our ego

A lovely writing teddy 🙂

July 31st, 2023 04:48

Unsighted
orchidee said:

Godo write T.
I serenade KP with horror stories.
One look into your face (KP) - I see.... one look\'s enough for anyone. Takes months to recover from it. lol.

July 31st, 2023 04:24

Unsighted
LIZ said:

I love it! The soul speaking/singing! 💚

July 31st, 2023 04:21

Unsighted
L. B. Mek said:

!Brilliant!
(from potent artwork
to sumptuously poetic
tonality and brevity)
!Brilliant!

July 31st, 2023 03:55

Legend of Love
L. B. Mek said:

as a fantasy reader
and from spending years
travelling to and from
those most majestic Scottish
hills
this, is just up me poetic creek
if you will..
effortlessly executed dear cherished Poet
(will this be part of your children\'s story collection?
it could work, would need to give her a name
and add a little depth to her character
otherwise all the ingredients are there)
\'but what do i know\' lol

July 31st, 2023 03:51

Pinocchio, deep in thought
L. B. Mek said:

ha! hmmm
pffft, only you lady\'s would find this funny
... what?! of course I was talking about height
..\'too\'..
ahem!
\'and dats all I gotsa a say bout daaat\'
(thanks for the chuckles)

July 31st, 2023 03:43

Legend of Love
peto said:

Teddy
This is a great read
Particularly liked the mention of Scottish hills
Many a dragon in these parts
Clever enjoyable write

July 31st, 2023 02:06

Legend of Love
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful words Teddy.

Andy

July 31st, 2023 01:51

Legend of Love
Bella Shepard said:


Beautifully told and illustrated dear Teddy. I will have fairytale dreams tonight. How weak and helpless the strong can become when it comes to affairs of the heart, for it can be so easily broken. Lighter than air this poem, for it just rises and rises!

July 30th, 2023 14:16

Legend of Love
LIZ said:

Mmmm sad ending....but happens all the time. Lack of confidence can make us miss many opportunities. It\'s better to risk it all...in my opinion. But, I understand we all walk that path differently...and it\'s a process. Really enjoyed this one! 🐉 🐲

July 30th, 2023 13:45

Legend of Love
orchidee said:

Good write T.
My poem is \'The old dragon KP\'. lol.

July 30th, 2023 13:21

Legend of Love
Caring dove said:

Great poem 🙂 like your words . It can be difficult when we are lacking in confidence .. I guess

July 30th, 2023 12:01

Pinocchio, deep in thought
Doggerel Dave said:

Truth to tell, you sat on Pinocchio\'s face (by accident.......)🤣

July 30th, 2023 02:09

Pinocchio, deep in thought
Goldfinch60 said:

I never lie so nothing grows. LOL

Andy

July 30th, 2023 01:46

Pinocchio, deep in thought
Neville said:



its not hard to feel where you are coming from mistress T ❤️

July 29th, 2023 23:16

Pinocchio, deep in thought
Bella Shepard said:

Such an adorable picture, with just a hit of double entendre? It was more than a chuckle, would have been a \"spit take\" had my coffee been near by. Dear Teddy this is a gem, as are you.

July 29th, 2023 14:53

Pinocchio, deep in thought
LIZ said:

LOL I like this side of you!!! 😉

July 29th, 2023 14:00

Pinocchio, deep in thought
LIZ said:

🤣🤣🤣🤣 thank you for the laugh! Happy Saturday! ❤️

July 29th, 2023 09:27

Pinocchio, deep in thought
peto said:

Tell the right lie and something else would grow
Cheers for the laugh

July 29th, 2023 09:01

Pinocchio, deep in thought
orchidee said:

An X-rated Pinocchio film. Swoon! lol.
But of course you mean, his little finger, for example. heehee.

July 29th, 2023 08:12

Pinocchio, deep in thought
Caring dove said:

Too much lying isn’t good lol it probably doesn’t help us either . Guess we use to question our own actions /behaviour ms sometimes

Happy Saturday to you too ))



July 29th, 2023 04:02

Winter’s Meadow
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful emotive words Teddy.

Andy

July 29th, 2023 01:55



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