Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
Rapture of my Heart
sorenbarrett said:
Yes I could tell this by the nature of your poems. A poem appropriate for the day. Tasteful, poignant, and timely.
February 14th, 2024 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
Yes I could tell this by the nature of your poems. A poem appropriate for the day. Tasteful, poignant, and timely.
February 14th, 2024 04:05
Rapture of my Heart
Goldfinch60 said:
Such strong words Teddy, may that love be always so.
Andy
February 14th, 2024 02:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Such strong words Teddy, may that love be always so.
Andy
February 14th, 2024 02:52
Dante and I
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Teddy, those last three lines mean so much to me and my life at the moment.
Andy
February 14th, 2024 02:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Teddy, those last three lines mean so much to me and my life at the moment.
Andy
February 14th, 2024 02:19
Rapture of my Heart
Accidental Poet said:
Yes, I knew this. as you are that rare soul of gifted vision. Happy Valentine\'s Day Teddy. πΉ
February 14th, 2024 01:44
Accidental Poet said:
Yes, I knew this. as you are that rare soul of gifted vision. Happy Valentine\'s Day Teddy. πΉ
February 14th, 2024 01:44
Dante and I
Neville said:
Having read both his best known works albeit a long time ago now ..
I can see why and where and how you contracted such an infatuation .. remarkably well penned my friend ..πΉ
February 13th, 2024 14:20
Neville said:
Having read both his best known works albeit a long time ago now ..
I can see why and where and how you contracted such an infatuation .. remarkably well penned my friend ..πΉ
February 13th, 2024 14:20
Dante and I
Doggerel Dave said:
I feel I should know Dante\'s work (which I don\'t) in order to fully appreciate the depth of your? passion here, Teddy. but in the meantime.....ooh aha.......
February 13th, 2024 07:12
Doggerel Dave said:
I feel I should know Dante\'s work (which I don\'t) in order to fully appreciate the depth of your? passion here, Teddy. but in the meantime.....ooh aha.......
February 13th, 2024 07:12
Dante and I
sorenbarrett said:
Here the image of flames spreads from love to hell and even heaven where the image of burning in eternal glory comes to mind. This thread that unites this piece is like a wick in a candle conducting the reader from beginning to end. Brilliant !
February 13th, 2024 05:41
sorenbarrett said:
Here the image of flames spreads from love to hell and even heaven where the image of burning in eternal glory comes to mind. This thread that unites this piece is like a wick in a candle conducting the reader from beginning to end. Brilliant !
February 13th, 2024 05:41
Dante and I
Accidental Poet said:
So inspiring to read dear Teddy. ππ
February 13th, 2024 04:51
Accidental Poet said:
So inspiring to read dear Teddy. ππ
February 13th, 2024 04:51
Dante and I
Tom Dylan said:
A really powerful poem, Teddy. Love the last lines.
February 13th, 2024 03:15
Tom Dylan said:
A really powerful poem, Teddy. Love the last lines.
February 13th, 2024 03:15
From The Underside Of The Wild Roses
Thomas W Case said:
So true. Great work Teddy.
February 12th, 2024 15:36
Thomas W Case said:
So true. Great work Teddy.
February 12th, 2024 15:36
Noncence Geography
sorenbarrett said:
We all carry with us who we are and where we came from. A beautiful thought for a beautiful person.
February 12th, 2024 11:58
sorenbarrett said:
We all carry with us who we are and where we came from. A beautiful thought for a beautiful person.
February 12th, 2024 11:58
Showtime
Neville said:
Simply magic .. much like mother nature herself .. πΉ
February 12th, 2024 06:39
Neville said:
Simply magic .. much like mother nature herself .. πΉ
February 12th, 2024 06:39
Showtime
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words of Nature\'s beauty and wonder Teddy.
Andy
February 12th, 2024 02:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words of Nature\'s beauty and wonder Teddy.
Andy
February 12th, 2024 02:26
Showtime
Bella Shepard said:
Each stanza can beatifully stand alone, but when combined this poem is \"magic. Reading it evokes such a feeling of peace and wonder, it is picture perfect!
February 11th, 2024 15:35
Bella Shepard said:
Each stanza can beatifully stand alone, but when combined this poem is \"magic. Reading it evokes such a feeling of peace and wonder, it is picture perfect!
February 11th, 2024 15:35
Showtime
Accidental Poet said:
May you take your bow only to repeat it again and again Teddy, for you have put forth here a magnificent poem of rhyme and imagination. One of your best dare I say. ππ
February 11th, 2024 10:35
Accidental Poet said:
May you take your bow only to repeat it again and again Teddy, for you have put forth here a magnificent poem of rhyme and imagination. One of your best dare I say. ππ
February 11th, 2024 10:35
Showtime
sorenbarrett said:
\"As evening sun lays his head
onto winter\'s frozen bed\" a magnificent line I wished i had thought of, followed below with
\"once more the moon, her head will tilt
and sun will rise from night-timeβs quilt\"
A truly ingenious accompaniment to make a perfect completion. It is rare to have one such line in a poem but two in such resolving majesty in the same poem is transcendent indeed. Kudos for this masterpiece.
February 11th, 2024 07:08
sorenbarrett said:
\"As evening sun lays his head
onto winter\'s frozen bed\" a magnificent line I wished i had thought of, followed below with
\"once more the moon, her head will tilt
and sun will rise from night-timeβs quilt\"
A truly ingenious accompaniment to make a perfect completion. It is rare to have one such line in a poem but two in such resolving majesty in the same poem is transcendent indeed. Kudos for this masterpiece.
February 11th, 2024 07:08
Leave Me Here To Dream (Song Lyrics)
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful emotive words Teddy thank you for sharing them.
Andy
February 11th, 2024 02:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful emotive words Teddy thank you for sharing them.
Andy
February 11th, 2024 02:30
Leave Me Here To Dream (Song Lyrics)
Accidental Poet said:
Very relative Teddy. Suffering the loss of a loved one really hits home. π«
February 10th, 2024 10:04
Accidental Poet said:
Very relative Teddy. Suffering the loss of a loved one really hits home. π«
February 10th, 2024 10:04
Leave Me Here To Dream (Song Lyrics)
Neville said:
You are a rock goddess babe .. β€οΈ
February 10th, 2024 09:03
Neville said:
You are a rock goddess babe .. β€οΈ
February 10th, 2024 09:03
Leave Me Here To Dream (Song Lyrics)
sorenbarrett said:
\"Iβm a stream without water
tears just donβt flow
the river I\'ve cried
it\'s emptied my soul\"
Anyone who has suffered this deeply can feel this verse. A sad and somewhat dark song (poem) it is very powerful. The chorus
\"I don\'t want to wake
leave me here to dream\"
is highly identifiable and I am sure that I have been there before.
February 10th, 2024 08:58
sorenbarrett said:
\"Iβm a stream without water
tears just donβt flow
the river I\'ve cried
it\'s emptied my soul\"
Anyone who has suffered this deeply can feel this verse. A sad and somewhat dark song (poem) it is very powerful. The chorus
\"I don\'t want to wake
leave me here to dream\"
is highly identifiable and I am sure that I have been there before.
February 10th, 2024 08:58
Senryu to Opera
Bella Shepard said:
Oh, I love it! I read your lines and I\'m hearing \"O Mio Babbino Caro\". Bless you!
February 9th, 2024 16:04
Bella Shepard said:
Oh, I love it! I read your lines and I\'m hearing \"O Mio Babbino Caro\". Bless you!
February 9th, 2024 16:04
Senryu to Opera
Neville said:
this is like music to my mind .. almost zenryu in fact ... π
February 9th, 2024 13:38
Neville said:
this is like music to my mind .. almost zenryu in fact ... π
February 9th, 2024 13:38
Senryu to Opera
Doggerel Dave said:
For some reason this reminds me of Milan - such a contradiction....
February 9th, 2024 07:56
Doggerel Dave said:
For some reason this reminds me of Milan - such a contradiction....
February 9th, 2024 07:56
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