Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
Firefly
Doggerel Dave said:
Gone. And it takes a long time to reconcile, accept. Right at the start the pain can be overwhelming. That piece could help someone in that position along, Your effort is worthwhile, Teddy.
May 5th, 2024 08:01
Doggerel Dave said:
Gone. And it takes a long time to reconcile, accept. Right at the start the pain can be overwhelming. That piece could help someone in that position along, Your effort is worthwhile, Teddy.
May 5th, 2024 08:01
Firefly
Neilton said:
I recently lost a loved one .. This poem truly touched me❤️
May 5th, 2024 06:29
Neilton said:
I recently lost a loved one .. This poem truly touched me❤️
May 5th, 2024 06:29
A Very Epic Morning
Goldfinch60 said:
It happens sometimes Teddy where we forget which day it is, luckily being retired every day in my life is Saturday!
I am sure those Angels are always there for you to write about.
Andy
May 5th, 2024 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
It happens sometimes Teddy where we forget which day it is, luckily being retired every day in my life is Saturday!
I am sure those Angels are always there for you to write about.
Andy
May 5th, 2024 01:19
A Very Epic Morning
Doggerel Dave said:
I’m with sorenbarrett above, with the following exclusions or exceptions:
- I\'ve never owned a beloved alarm clock,
- I ask where… are you going boy? it\'s Saturday, Sunday, any old day of the week,
- At 6:56 am It’s time to go back to bed…..
Rich write, Teddy.
May 4th, 2024 19:44
Doggerel Dave said:
I’m with sorenbarrett above, with the following exclusions or exceptions:
- I\'ve never owned a beloved alarm clock,
- I ask where… are you going boy? it\'s Saturday, Sunday, any old day of the week,
- At 6:56 am It’s time to go back to bed…..
Rich write, Teddy.
May 4th, 2024 19:44
A Very Epic Morning
Kylie the 8th grade female poet said:
I have to say this poem is very relatable thank you for saying the truth.
May 4th, 2024 12:25
Kylie the 8th grade female poet said:
I have to say this poem is very relatable thank you for saying the truth.
May 4th, 2024 12:25
A Soul\'s Portrait
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy I am thankful to know that this is all in the past. The darkness does not become you. However, as the saying goes it is all part of life’s rich tapestry, a learning curve and it makes excellent poetry. Have a great weekend. 🌺
May 4th, 2024 09:31
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy I am thankful to know that this is all in the past. The darkness does not become you. However, as the saying goes it is all part of life’s rich tapestry, a learning curve and it makes excellent poetry. Have a great weekend. 🌺
May 4th, 2024 09:31
A Very Epic Morning
sorenbarrett said:
Life has no joy without balance. No appreciation of the good without experiencing the bad. The muse within you is fired by the fuel of adversity and so all good art comes from extremes with the greatest octane being pain to which joy may be compared. A most poignant write friend.
May 4th, 2024 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
Life has no joy without balance. No appreciation of the good without experiencing the bad. The muse within you is fired by the fuel of adversity and so all good art comes from extremes with the greatest octane being pain to which joy may be compared. A most poignant write friend.
May 4th, 2024 04:03
A Soul\'s Portrait
Neville said:
this is quite possibly the most generous gift you have left for us here to enjoy .. and tho\' the darkness it contains is blinding .. it shines brightly🌹
May 4th, 2024 02:52
Neville said:
this is quite possibly the most generous gift you have left for us here to enjoy .. and tho\' the darkness it contains is blinding .. it shines brightly🌹
May 4th, 2024 02:52
A Soul\'s Portrait
Goldfinch60 said:
So glad that this isn\'t you nowadays Teddy. Lives do have those sad times but we all have the strength to put them aside and move into the wonderful life that is there for us.
Andy
May 4th, 2024 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
So glad that this isn\'t you nowadays Teddy. Lives do have those sad times but we all have the strength to put them aside and move into the wonderful life that is there for us.
Andy
May 4th, 2024 01:17
A Perfect Moment in May
Neville said:
what a perfect picture you have captured Teddy .. and get this, we share the same taste in camera 🌹
May 3rd, 2024 00:57
Neville said:
what a perfect picture you have captured Teddy .. and get this, we share the same taste in camera 🌹
May 3rd, 2024 00:57
A Perfect Moment in May
aDarkerMind said:
a perfect picture for any month of year Teddy.
May 2nd, 2024 13:05
aDarkerMind said:
a perfect picture for any month of year Teddy.
May 2nd, 2024 13:05
A Perfect Moment in May
sorenbarrett said:
Your poem is a picture itself. In fact it has the advantage of portraying what film by itself can not, the the emotion of words. I can see the beauty of the iris praying before the wind and feel the cold force and wetness of the rain in the cloud like misty blanket. Lovely.
May 2nd, 2024 03:45
sorenbarrett said:
Your poem is a picture itself. In fact it has the advantage of portraying what film by itself can not, the the emotion of words. I can see the beauty of the iris praying before the wind and feel the cold force and wetness of the rain in the cloud like misty blanket. Lovely.
May 2nd, 2024 03:45
The Death Of A Poet
Goldfinch60 said:
Such very true words Teddy, the cellphone has taken over the younger generation.
Andy
May 2nd, 2024 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Such very true words Teddy, the cellphone has taken over the younger generation.
Andy
May 2nd, 2024 01:20
The Death Of A Poet
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy, all I can say is that I am happy that I was born when I was. I see sliding values and lack of interest in many of the things I was brought up to love. The times are certainly changing. Kids cooped up indoors instead of in the fresh air. Only interested in social media and their mobile phones. Yuk. I am beginning to sound like an old fart:) as for poets, they will always find something to write about. You eloquently express my own thoughts here dear poet 🌹
May 1st, 2024 16:07
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy, all I can say is that I am happy that I was born when I was. I see sliding values and lack of interest in many of the things I was brought up to love. The times are certainly changing. Kids cooped up indoors instead of in the fresh air. Only interested in social media and their mobile phones. Yuk. I am beginning to sound like an old fart:) as for poets, they will always find something to write about. You eloquently express my own thoughts here dear poet 🌹
May 1st, 2024 16:07
The Death Of A Poet
Neville said:
evolved or deconstructed, either way the message remains very much the same .. both this one and its predecessor are memorable .. 🌹
May 1st, 2024 09:13
Neville said:
evolved or deconstructed, either way the message remains very much the same .. both this one and its predecessor are memorable .. 🌹
May 1st, 2024 09:13
The Death Of A Poet
Doggerel Dave said:
Teddy, for once I don’ t really know to how put this, but to me you so certainly mirrored clearly the crap which exists out there, then asked for a different orientation….. Would the world be….?? Not sure, but I would hope so….. The poet either gets with it or shuts up!!!
(Can’t put an appropriate emoji, but you I hope can guess where my heart is…)
May 1st, 2024 06:55
Doggerel Dave said:
Teddy, for once I don’ t really know to how put this, but to me you so certainly mirrored clearly the crap which exists out there, then asked for a different orientation….. Would the world be….?? Not sure, but I would hope so….. The poet either gets with it or shuts up!!!
(Can’t put an appropriate emoji, but you I hope can guess where my heart is…)
May 1st, 2024 06:55
Rocking Worlds
DLewis88 said:
I love it. It\'s a great story. I hope you do become a great musician.
April 30th, 2024 04:38
DLewis88 said:
I love it. It\'s a great story. I hope you do become a great musician.
April 30th, 2024 04:38
Rocking Worlds
Goldfinch60 said:
Your time will certainly come Teddy and I will be in the front of the audience cheering you on.
Andy
April 30th, 2024 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Your time will certainly come Teddy and I will be in the front of the audience cheering you on.
Andy
April 30th, 2024 01:16
Rocking Worlds
Cassie58 said:
Don’t let go of your dreams Teddy. About time there were more lady rock stars. Rock on . That’s some ambition, you’ve got there for the next world. Happy Monday. 🌸
April 29th, 2024 11:54
Cassie58 said:
Don’t let go of your dreams Teddy. About time there were more lady rock stars. Rock on . That’s some ambition, you’ve got there for the next world. Happy Monday. 🌸
April 29th, 2024 11:54
Rocking Worlds
Neville said:
I once shared that dream Teddy but had to content myself with rhythm guitar and mandolin .. I sold my bass to another would be rock star only a month or so back .. Neville 🌹
April 29th, 2024 11:06
Neville said:
I once shared that dream Teddy but had to content myself with rhythm guitar and mandolin .. I sold my bass to another would be rock star only a month or so back .. Neville 🌹
April 29th, 2024 11:06
Rocking Worlds
Thomas W Case said:
Superb vision. I saw King in the 90\'s. Superb concert. He played with so much soul.
April 29th, 2024 10:00
Thomas W Case said:
Superb vision. I saw King in the 90\'s. Superb concert. He played with so much soul.
April 29th, 2024 10:00
Rocking Worlds
peto said:
You are already a magnificent star Teddy
You wanna add music
Suits me just fine
Rock on
April 29th, 2024 09:40
peto said:
You are already a magnificent star Teddy
You wanna add music
Suits me just fine
Rock on
April 29th, 2024 09:40
Rocking Worlds
sorenbarrett said:
There are some famous musicians that keep such a little book and so are there poets. Loved the play on music.
April 29th, 2024 08:15
sorenbarrett said:
There are some famous musicians that keep such a little book and so are there poets. Loved the play on music.
April 29th, 2024 08:15
Rocking Worlds
Doggerel Dave said:
Sounds as reasonable a travel brochure advertising the after life as any other, Teddy. Still keeping an open mind.... but sometimes those advertising glossies and/or even those old parchment jobs can be entertaining - certainly that was so with yours... Bon voyage 😇😊👍
April 29th, 2024 07:14
Doggerel Dave said:
Sounds as reasonable a travel brochure advertising the after life as any other, Teddy. Still keeping an open mind.... but sometimes those advertising glossies and/or even those old parchment jobs can be entertaining - certainly that was so with yours... Bon voyage 😇😊👍
April 29th, 2024 07:14
Raven\'s Encore
Neville said:
Ouch, how extraordinarily noir my friend, but beautifully executed .. makes me wanna write you a rainbow 🌹
April 28th, 2024 03:21
Neville said:
Ouch, how extraordinarily noir my friend, but beautifully executed .. makes me wanna write you a rainbow 🌹
April 28th, 2024 03:21
Raven\'s Encore
Goldfinch60 said:
Spreading the joy indeed, so glad it is not true Teddy.
Andy
April 28th, 2024 02:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Spreading the joy indeed, so glad it is not true Teddy.
Andy
April 28th, 2024 02:01
Raven\'s Encore
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work, Teddy. You paint the mood and the scene so well.
April 27th, 2024 17:40
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work, Teddy. You paint the mood and the scene so well.
April 27th, 2024 17:40
Raven\'s Encore
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy, your lines this morning are so very much in the mood of Poe. He did darkness so well, and so do you. The black shroud of grief and the silence of time stopping still, comes through clearly. Loss is such a hard burden to bear. I hope you have a sunshine Saturday. We have wet and dreary here. Also Poe like. Have a bouquet of weekend flowers 💐
April 27th, 2024 07:43
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy, your lines this morning are so very much in the mood of Poe. He did darkness so well, and so do you. The black shroud of grief and the silence of time stopping still, comes through clearly. Loss is such a hard burden to bear. I hope you have a sunshine Saturday. We have wet and dreary here. Also Poe like. Have a bouquet of weekend flowers 💐
April 27th, 2024 07:43
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