Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
Pedestal
Doggerel Dave said:
Teddy, I\'ve said all I want to say about poetic love, and I don\'t want to spoil the party....so I will delete....on the other hand... Good for True Love in keeping away, \'cos it motivates you to write some fun, interesting poetry...
March 8th, 2024 17:03
Doggerel Dave said:
Teddy, I\'ve said all I want to say about poetic love, and I don\'t want to spoil the party....so I will delete....on the other hand... Good for True Love in keeping away, \'cos it motivates you to write some fun, interesting poetry...
March 8th, 2024 17:03
Pedestal
Cassie58 said:
On the subject of love , dear Teddy you have it buttoned up. So many beautiful poems you have penned, and another here. You have included Romeo and Juliet, that tragic pair in this offering. Such an elegant piece of writing. You ask yourself all the questions and many others ask the very same. Have a fabulous weekend dear poet.
March 8th, 2024 13:29
Cassie58 said:
On the subject of love , dear Teddy you have it buttoned up. So many beautiful poems you have penned, and another here. You have included Romeo and Juliet, that tragic pair in this offering. Such an elegant piece of writing. You ask yourself all the questions and many others ask the very same. Have a fabulous weekend dear poet.
March 8th, 2024 13:29
The Great Journey Home
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes, Teddy - this is one I\'ve been meaning to engage with you over a rather long time (Not seeking argument here, just....)
I too, no interest in religion, and so cannot cop an angel with all it\'s associations.
My fantasy is a vast cosmic game, analogous to one of those MMORPG computer things, and a controller with a brief to give me chances with only limited intervention, but from time to time, oh what interventions!
March 8th, 2024 07:27
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes, Teddy - this is one I\'ve been meaning to engage with you over a rather long time (Not seeking argument here, just....)
I too, no interest in religion, and so cannot cop an angel with all it\'s associations.
My fantasy is a vast cosmic game, analogous to one of those MMORPG computer things, and a controller with a brief to give me chances with only limited intervention, but from time to time, oh what interventions!
March 8th, 2024 07:27
Pedestal
Neville said:
well that\'s love wrapped up, beautifully bound and presented to the world .. this treatise on the subject was indeed a real treat .. please pardon the play on words
🌹Neville
March 8th, 2024 04:45
Neville said:
well that\'s love wrapped up, beautifully bound and presented to the world .. this treatise on the subject was indeed a real treat .. please pardon the play on words
🌹Neville
March 8th, 2024 04:45
The Great Journey Home
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have angels Teddy and I am sure yours will always be with you.
Andy
March 8th, 2024 02:25
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have angels Teddy and I am sure yours will always be with you.
Andy
March 8th, 2024 02:25
The Great Journey Home
MendedFences27 said:
Lovely poetry. Angels are what we cling to when seeking peace. They can bring solace and wisdom that aids in coping with this world. it\'s a wonderful thought you have posted. - Phil A.
March 7th, 2024 16:53
MendedFences27 said:
Lovely poetry. Angels are what we cling to when seeking peace. They can bring solace and wisdom that aids in coping with this world. it\'s a wonderful thought you have posted. - Phil A.
March 7th, 2024 16:53
The Great Journey Home
Bella Shepard said:
This wonderfulpoem evokes such sweet memories. As a child, there hung next to my bed a picture of a guardian angel, with arms spread over a child, and a traditional prayer printed beneath. I\'m so glad you have those protective arms around you, such solice in a troubled world. Beautifully and lovingly written dear friend!
March 7th, 2024 15:38
Bella Shepard said:
This wonderfulpoem evokes such sweet memories. As a child, there hung next to my bed a picture of a guardian angel, with arms spread over a child, and a traditional prayer printed beneath. I\'m so glad you have those protective arms around you, such solice in a troubled world. Beautifully and lovingly written dear friend!
March 7th, 2024 15:38
The Great Journey Home
Cassie58 said:
Your words dear Teddy are beautiful. I have no interest either in organized religion, but everyone needs a guardian Angel looking after them. I sincerely hope my mum had one guiding her into the spirit world when she passed. Your lovely poem created light and peace. I thank you for that. Hope your Thursday has been a happy one. 💐
March 7th, 2024 13:11
Cassie58 said:
Your words dear Teddy are beautiful. I have no interest either in organized religion, but everyone needs a guardian Angel looking after them. I sincerely hope my mum had one guiding her into the spirit world when she passed. Your lovely poem created light and peace. I thank you for that. Hope your Thursday has been a happy one. 💐
March 7th, 2024 13:11
The Great Journey Home
Cloie said:
Your poem tenderly expresses a longing for solace and peace. The imagery of flying with an angel away from a harsh world evokes a sense of seeking refuge and comfort. It beautifully portrays a heartfelt desire for release and tranquility. Well done!
March 7th, 2024 09:44
Cloie said:
Your poem tenderly expresses a longing for solace and peace. The imagery of flying with an angel away from a harsh world evokes a sense of seeking refuge and comfort. It beautifully portrays a heartfelt desire for release and tranquility. Well done!
March 7th, 2024 09:44
Death In Verona
Cloie said:
Your retelling of Romeo and Juliet\'s story is truly captivating. The depth of emotion you infuse into their tale is remarkable. Despite the obstacles posed by their feuding families, you portray their love as an unstoppable force, which is incredibly moving. As Shakespeare said, \"The course of true love never did run smooth,\" and your narrative beautifully illustrates this sentiment. The imagery you use, such as the metaphor of \"a million lightning bolts,\" vividly conveys the intensity of their connection. The drama in the narrative emphasizes its timeless allure. The climax, depicting Romeo and Juliet\'s tragic end, is handled with poignant detail and depth. The uncertainty surrounding their fate in the afterlife evokes a profound sense of longing and melancholy, yet there\'s a glimmer of hope that they might reunite beyond mortal constraints. Your retelling skillfully captures both the beauty and tragedy of this enduring love story from literature.
March 7th, 2024 09:26
Cloie said:
Your retelling of Romeo and Juliet\'s story is truly captivating. The depth of emotion you infuse into their tale is remarkable. Despite the obstacles posed by their feuding families, you portray their love as an unstoppable force, which is incredibly moving. As Shakespeare said, \"The course of true love never did run smooth,\" and your narrative beautifully illustrates this sentiment. The imagery you use, such as the metaphor of \"a million lightning bolts,\" vividly conveys the intensity of their connection. The drama in the narrative emphasizes its timeless allure. The climax, depicting Romeo and Juliet\'s tragic end, is handled with poignant detail and depth. The uncertainty surrounding their fate in the afterlife evokes a profound sense of longing and melancholy, yet there\'s a glimmer of hope that they might reunite beyond mortal constraints. Your retelling skillfully captures both the beauty and tragedy of this enduring love story from literature.
March 7th, 2024 09:26
The Great Journey Home
sorenbarrett said:
Now Teddy this could be the last goodbye from one departing or just the acknowledgment of a dream coming on. Beautiful and serene in any sense, hope it\'s the latter.
March 7th, 2024 09:00
sorenbarrett said:
Now Teddy this could be the last goodbye from one departing or just the acknowledgment of a dream coming on. Beautiful and serene in any sense, hope it\'s the latter.
March 7th, 2024 09:00
The Great Journey Home
Neville said:
same here but everyone needs an angel .. 🌹
March 7th, 2024 05:38
Neville said:
same here but everyone needs an angel .. 🌹
March 7th, 2024 05:38
Death In Verona
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb words Teddy, showing just how powerful love can be.
Andy
https://youtu.be/QxidjMJK9f4?si=QHt346XtWQ5Pjdv7
March 7th, 2024 02:02
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb words Teddy, showing just how powerful love can be.
Andy
https://youtu.be/QxidjMJK9f4?si=QHt346XtWQ5Pjdv7
March 7th, 2024 02:02
Death In Verona
sorenbarrett said:
I know that this is an ancient tale going back before Matteo Bandello\'s original tale that became a great cover by Shakespeare. Others before him covered it as well so I guess it was well known. It is a great love story with all that a love story needs, forbidden love being the greatest. It has a great twist at the end and is most tragic. However I believe love never dies and is only transformed so what ever you believe as far as afterlife, transformed existence, etc. they can not be kept apart. You have done a most marvelous job of condensing a long play or story into a short poem, brevity is the job of a poet. Well done.
March 6th, 2024 16:48
sorenbarrett said:
I know that this is an ancient tale going back before Matteo Bandello\'s original tale that became a great cover by Shakespeare. Others before him covered it as well so I guess it was well known. It is a great love story with all that a love story needs, forbidden love being the greatest. It has a great twist at the end and is most tragic. However I believe love never dies and is only transformed so what ever you believe as far as afterlife, transformed existence, etc. they can not be kept apart. You have done a most marvelous job of condensing a long play or story into a short poem, brevity is the job of a poet. Well done.
March 6th, 2024 16:48
Death In Verona
Bella Shepard said:
I love your version of one of my favorite plays. Each time I\'ve seen it I keep hoping that somehow it will have a happier ending, but alas it is not to be. You\'ve made it so easy and pleasurable to enjoy, Thank you dear Teddy!
March 6th, 2024 16:22
Bella Shepard said:
I love your version of one of my favorite plays. Each time I\'ve seen it I keep hoping that somehow it will have a happier ending, but alas it is not to be. You\'ve made it so easy and pleasurable to enjoy, Thank you dear Teddy!
March 6th, 2024 16:22
Death In Verona
Tom Dylan said:
In fair Verona we lay our scene... love this, Teddy. You nailed it. :-)
March 6th, 2024 06:43
Tom Dylan said:
In fair Verona we lay our scene... love this, Teddy. You nailed it. :-)
March 6th, 2024 06:43
Death In Verona
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Night Teddy - Sweet dreams. (For me? lol)
March 6th, 2024 06:31
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Night Teddy - Sweet dreams. (For me? lol)
March 6th, 2024 06:31
Death In Verona
Doggerel Dave said:
From all reports the end is roughly right - they did both cark it, didn\'t they Teddy.... As is blindingly obvious, my knowledge of this play is not great, but your version sounds very Shakespearian to me... and if perchance there maybe some variations, then this can only be a tribute to your creativity and versatility.
(\'Have I gone over the top here?\' - \'Quite probably, question is will she swallow it?\'...)
March 6th, 2024 06:14
Doggerel Dave said:
From all reports the end is roughly right - they did both cark it, didn\'t they Teddy.... As is blindingly obvious, my knowledge of this play is not great, but your version sounds very Shakespearian to me... and if perchance there maybe some variations, then this can only be a tribute to your creativity and versatility.
(\'Have I gone over the top here?\' - \'Quite probably, question is will she swallow it?\'...)
March 6th, 2024 06:14
Death In Verona
Neville said:
Dear Lady T ..
I imagine with ease, even the great Bard himself would give this version his thumbs up and verily .. 👍👍it gets mine as well .. I\'ve been to Verona, but only once and stood looking up at the balcony there and just wondered ..
Here, have one of these, as well🌹
March 6th, 2024 03:05
Neville said:
Dear Lady T ..
I imagine with ease, even the great Bard himself would give this version his thumbs up and verily .. 👍👍it gets mine as well .. I\'ve been to Verona, but only once and stood looking up at the balcony there and just wondered ..
Here, have one of these, as well🌹
March 6th, 2024 03:05
Algebra of Love
Goldfinch60 said:
It does happen sometimes Teddy, Mary and I found each other.
Andy
March 6th, 2024 02:11
Goldfinch60 said:
It does happen sometimes Teddy, Mary and I found each other.
Andy
March 6th, 2024 02:11
Algebra of Love
MendedFences27 said:
Sometimes, they find one another and it lasts forever. They would tell you how very fortunate they were. Romeo and Juliet lasted a lifetime.
Loved your little mind- bending poem - Phil A.
March 5th, 2024 17:57
MendedFences27 said:
Sometimes, they find one another and it lasts forever. They would tell you how very fortunate they were. Romeo and Juliet lasted a lifetime.
Loved your little mind- bending poem - Phil A.
March 5th, 2024 17:57
Algebra of Love
Neville said:
One on one = babies .. dunno why I wrote that .. maybe it was just a math thing .. or was it that you asked the billion dollar question .. 🌹
March 5th, 2024 13:34
Neville said:
One on one = babies .. dunno why I wrote that .. maybe it was just a math thing .. or was it that you asked the billion dollar question .. 🌹
March 5th, 2024 13:34
Algebra of Love
peto said:
Teddy
I love how you say so much with so few words
An artist of the highest order
March 5th, 2024 13:32
peto said:
Teddy
I love how you say so much with so few words
An artist of the highest order
March 5th, 2024 13:32
Algebra of Love
Thomas W Case said:
Algebra drives me crazy, as does love. Tremendous work.
March 5th, 2024 13:27
Thomas W Case said:
Algebra drives me crazy, as does love. Tremendous work.
March 5th, 2024 13:27
Algebra of Love
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Tis because, as a grumpy old bugger, I believe that most poets don\'t be within a bum\'s scratch of working out wot \'love\' really is..... I kno I shouldn\'t a writ this... I just kno I shouldn\'t... I kno (fades quickly towards the horizon never to be heard...of...again...)
March 5th, 2024 07:32
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Tis because, as a grumpy old bugger, I believe that most poets don\'t be within a bum\'s scratch of working out wot \'love\' really is..... I kno I shouldn\'t a writ this... I just kno I shouldn\'t... I kno (fades quickly towards the horizon never to be heard...of...again...)
March 5th, 2024 07:32
Algebra of Love
sorenbarrett said:
A thought profound set in a poem. Yes is it because opposites attract? Is it because in this world of billions the odds of finding one match is so small? Poignant and well stated.
March 5th, 2024 05:06
sorenbarrett said:
A thought profound set in a poem. Yes is it because opposites attract? Is it because in this world of billions the odds of finding one match is so small? Poignant and well stated.
March 5th, 2024 05:06
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