Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
The Last Goodbye
L. B. Mek said:
we never know what it will take
to cut that line, and
transmogrify someone\'s role
in our lives
from pivotal
to that rear mirror, irrelevant
but what a relief, when it arrives
so we may live our life, unchained
from regret...
(I so relate my friend
your matter of fact delivery
suited this subject
a crisp clean poem, about
a clean break)
how fitting
July 17th, 2023 04:06
L. B. Mek said:
we never know what it will take
to cut that line, and
transmogrify someone\'s role
in our lives
from pivotal
to that rear mirror, irrelevant
but what a relief, when it arrives
so we may live our life, unchained
from regret...
(I so relate my friend
your matter of fact delivery
suited this subject
a crisp clean poem, about
a clean break)
how fitting
July 17th, 2023 04:06
Just The Peaceful Silence of A Happy Day
L. B. Mek said:
nature\'s gifts, are so gracefully subtle
we oft, fail to notice and appreciate
thus, thankful am I for your poetic
reminder, dear Poetess
this, a fresh breeze
of tranquillity, in a poem
such a lovely read
thank you!
July 17th, 2023 03:59
L. B. Mek said:
nature\'s gifts, are so gracefully subtle
we oft, fail to notice and appreciate
thus, thankful am I for your poetic
reminder, dear Poetess
this, a fresh breeze
of tranquillity, in a poem
such a lovely read
thank you!
July 17th, 2023 03:59
Destination
LIZ said:
An empty canvas, a blank sheet, let\'s fill them up with all our gifts! ❤️
July 17th, 2023 03:26
LIZ said:
An empty canvas, a blank sheet, let\'s fill them up with all our gifts! ❤️
July 17th, 2023 03:26
Destination
orchidee said:
Bit like some birds in cages? What to do about \'domestic\' birds? Budgies, etc.
July 17th, 2023 01:49
orchidee said:
Bit like some birds in cages? What to do about \'domestic\' birds? Budgies, etc.
July 17th, 2023 01:49
The Poetess and the Pussy
Goldfinch60 said:
Cats are such arrogant creatures. LOL
Andy
July 17th, 2023 01:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Cats are such arrogant creatures. LOL
Andy
July 17th, 2023 01:05
The Poetess and the Pussy
orchidee said:
Oohh lol. Ahh, a talking cat - like Fido, me talking dog!
They\'ll take us to the madhouse soon. lol. I been there once already. Was where I met KP.
July 16th, 2023 14:21
orchidee said:
Oohh lol. Ahh, a talking cat - like Fido, me talking dog!
They\'ll take us to the madhouse soon. lol. I been there once already. Was where I met KP.
July 16th, 2023 14:21
The Poetess and the Pussy
LIZ said:
LMAO 🤣 Damn! But really....the cat\'s not wrong! Title got me fooled for a minute. “those who have never experienced madness at least once in their lives, have never lived”-isn\'t that the truth!!!!!
July 16th, 2023 14:13
LIZ said:
LMAO 🤣 Damn! But really....the cat\'s not wrong! Title got me fooled for a minute. “those who have never experienced madness at least once in their lives, have never lived”-isn\'t that the truth!!!!!
July 16th, 2023 14:13
Spellbound
Goldfinch60 said:
That spark of light will always be with you Teddy and it will shine out for us all.
Andy
July 16th, 2023 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
That spark of light will always be with you Teddy and it will shine out for us all.
Andy
July 16th, 2023 01:55
My Path to Paradise Begins in Hell
Goldfinch60 said:
Love can be so overpowering in many different ways Teddy.
Andy
July 16th, 2023 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Love can be so overpowering in many different ways Teddy.
Andy
July 16th, 2023 01:30
The Last Goodbye
Goldfinch60 said:
I know that your life became filled with joy, wonder and love Teddy.
Andy
July 16th, 2023 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
I know that your life became filled with joy, wonder and love Teddy.
Andy
July 16th, 2023 01:18
The Last Goodbye
Neville said:
when it feels as bad as that, then it just has to be done .. did you get change from the phone ... I seem to recall one did if the call was cut short ..
and although I\'m sure it hurt like hell at the time, you now know deep down in your heart that you did the right thing .. Here, have a little bit of mine 💔x
July 16th, 2023 00:28
Neville said:
when it feels as bad as that, then it just has to be done .. did you get change from the phone ... I seem to recall one did if the call was cut short ..
and although I\'m sure it hurt like hell at the time, you now know deep down in your heart that you did the right thing .. Here, have a little bit of mine 💔x
July 16th, 2023 00:28
The Last Goodbye
orchidee said:
Aww, I remember the moment you said goodbye to me. I wish I had never met \'someone else\' - being KP. That\'ll teach me to leave ya! lol.
July 15th, 2023 11:24
orchidee said:
Aww, I remember the moment you said goodbye to me. I wish I had never met \'someone else\' - being KP. That\'ll teach me to leave ya! lol.
July 15th, 2023 11:24
The Last Goodbye
peto said:
Happy new life
Always a joy to read Teddy
No change today
July 15th, 2023 10:20
peto said:
Happy new life
Always a joy to read Teddy
No change today
July 15th, 2023 10:20
The Last Goodbye
Poetic Dan said:
Boom... love you it. Do what you need to move on and let those wings take you far beyond what we ever dreamed was possible! The great unknown
Keep up the write my friend
July 15th, 2023 07:15
Poetic Dan said:
Boom... love you it. Do what you need to move on and let those wings take you far beyond what we ever dreamed was possible! The great unknown
Keep up the write my friend
July 15th, 2023 07:15
Just The Peaceful Silence of A Happy Day
peto said:
Absolutely loved this
Rhyme flow spit on
And my fav on any write
Brilliant ending
July 15th, 2023 04:47
peto said:
Absolutely loved this
Rhyme flow spit on
And my fav on any write
Brilliant ending
July 15th, 2023 04:47
Just The Peaceful Silence of A Happy Day
orchidee said:
Good write Teddy.
KP will have to have this gold, cos I got no gold bars to give her - never did have - lol.
Not that I\'m skint, but for our wedding her ring was a ring pull from a can of drink, from me to her! heehee.
Her ring to me was made of botox (if that\'s possible?) lol.
July 14th, 2023 08:33
orchidee said:
Good write Teddy.
KP will have to have this gold, cos I got no gold bars to give her - never did have - lol.
Not that I\'m skint, but for our wedding her ring was a ring pull from a can of drink, from me to her! heehee.
Her ring to me was made of botox (if that\'s possible?) lol.
July 14th, 2023 08:33
My Path to Paradise Begins in Hell
L. B. Mek said:
Beatrice has some serious competition!
lol
beautifully realised and rendered from art to last syllable
that we\'re passionate about
makes it so easy for us to write
I find
a lovely dedication dear Poetess
(hope you have a lovely weekend)
July 14th, 2023 04:15
L. B. Mek said:
Beatrice has some serious competition!
lol
beautifully realised and rendered from art to last syllable
that we\'re passionate about
makes it so easy for us to write
I find
a lovely dedication dear Poetess
(hope you have a lovely weekend)
July 14th, 2023 04:15
Spellbound
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'my intelligence, challenged
will win through to wisdom
a simple spark in my mind\'
July 14th, 2023 04:11
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'my intelligence, challenged
will win through to wisdom
a simple spark in my mind\'
July 14th, 2023 04:11
When it comes to love
L. B. Mek said:
\'after all I am the poetess\'
of yes your are, truly
\'The\' Poetess, indeed!
(i\'m allowed to trumpet
i\'m invested!) lol
maybe indecision, is your decision
that artistic license to bamboozle
and delight
is all yours my friend, a reward
for these inking skills
you\'ve so evidently cultivated
with zeal!
July 14th, 2023 04:09
L. B. Mek said:
\'after all I am the poetess\'
of yes your are, truly
\'The\' Poetess, indeed!
(i\'m allowed to trumpet
i\'m invested!) lol
maybe indecision, is your decision
that artistic license to bamboozle
and delight
is all yours my friend, a reward
for these inking skills
you\'ve so evidently cultivated
with zeal!
July 14th, 2023 04:09
My Path to Paradise Begins in Hell
peto said:
Pity he is gone
I\'m sure he would love your writing just as much
Take 2nd best if he\'s not a corpse also
You know dante would want you to
A great talent
July 14th, 2023 01:02
peto said:
Pity he is gone
I\'m sure he would love your writing just as much
Take 2nd best if he\'s not a corpse also
You know dante would want you to
A great talent
July 14th, 2023 01:02
My Path to Paradise Begins in Hell
Neville said:
this is so flaming good it makes my quill quiver in awe ... or as near as damn it ... Neville ❤️
July 14th, 2023 00:21
Neville said:
this is so flaming good it makes my quill quiver in awe ... or as near as damn it ... Neville ❤️
July 14th, 2023 00:21
My Path to Paradise Begins in Hell
LIZ said:
The first line got me in my feelings! \"You’re the king of my universe
your poetry ignites my gentle heart
where the river was born to a peaceful flow we stand together as one sweet soul\" 🥺 \"There is no greater sorrow
than knowing our hands will never touch but you are deep within me\"- ah but there\'s always poetry, right? And you never know, maybe you\'ll get to burn before it all goes to hell!!! I guess I\'m a hopeless romantic! Very beautiful!!
July 13th, 2023 12:43
LIZ said:
The first line got me in my feelings! \"You’re the king of my universe
your poetry ignites my gentle heart
where the river was born to a peaceful flow we stand together as one sweet soul\" 🥺 \"There is no greater sorrow
than knowing our hands will never touch but you are deep within me\"- ah but there\'s always poetry, right? And you never know, maybe you\'ll get to burn before it all goes to hell!!! I guess I\'m a hopeless romantic! Very beautiful!!
July 13th, 2023 12:43
Spellbound
peto said:
Amazing
Finding hell inspirational
Enjoy your writing very much
I\'m approaching
Surprise me
July 12th, 2023 14:02
peto said:
Amazing
Finding hell inspirational
Enjoy your writing very much
I\'m approaching
Surprise me
July 12th, 2023 14:02
Spellbound
Bella Shepard said:
We need the opposites of life to live fully, said so beautifully in this poem. Your simple spark has created a real gem here, and a real fav.
July 12th, 2023 11:17
Bella Shepard said:
We need the opposites of life to live fully, said so beautifully in this poem. Your simple spark has created a real gem here, and a real fav.
July 12th, 2023 11:17
Spellbound
orchidee said:
I know the darkest places of....... in me marriage to KP! lol.
July 12th, 2023 10:40
orchidee said:
I know the darkest places of....... in me marriage to KP! lol.
July 12th, 2023 10:40
Spellbound
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Hope there is always light at the end of every tunnel. Nice work Teddy!
July 12th, 2023 10:21
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Hope there is always light at the end of every tunnel. Nice work Teddy!
July 12th, 2023 10:21
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