Comments received on poems by Teddy.15



My Gentle Soul Can Surely Rest
L. B. Mek said:

Brilliant!
(knock on those red shoes
and let yourself glide
to a reality that\'s sure to provide
meaning and worth
for each breath and scar, cherished
sincere)

June 26th, 2023 03:40

My Gentle Soul Can Surely Rest
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Dear Teddy,

ā€¦ā€˜the bad times I have gladly tossedā€™ā€¦

The bad times are the pastā€¦
where they will stay.
Your focus is the present to be enjoyed to the fullest ā£ļø

Laura šŸŒ»


June 25th, 2023 11:01

My Gentle Soul Can Surely Rest
Goldfinch60 said:

Those bad times are so inconsequential when you consider the good times in life Teddy.

Andy

June 25th, 2023 01:43

My Gentle Soul Can Surely Rest
Neville said:



its a real treat to read you again too .. now maybe at least one of us can rest easy .. ā¤ļø

June 25th, 2023 00:47

My Gentle Soul Can Surely Rest
orchidee said:

Good write T.
Me own gentle soul cannot rest, since KP. It\'s been shattered, damaged, irreparable. I\'m all in a heap emotionally! heehee.

June 24th, 2023 11:21

It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun
L. B. Mek said:

\'No man presumes such tender gasp of breath

Such beauty could send my lungs to their death\'

\'Saved the sweet honey from beeā€™s who have stung

Dusk until dawn, to your love I have clung\'
Brilliant!!!
(hope you have a romantic weekend, dear Poetess)

June 23rd, 2023 03:03

A Gentlemanā€™s Secret
Poetic Dan said:

Nature gives each other no name! They just know who\'s a friend again and again! Love the feeling behind this and another pleasant read!
Have a wonderful day

June 22nd, 2023 06:53

It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun
Poetic Dan said:

Wow what a rhyme and so nice to read in the sunshine..I really should come back more for your special kind of vibe!
Thank you

June 22nd, 2023 06:50

It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Dear Teddy,

A beautifully written and illustrated gem of a poem. I enjoyed the read very much.

Grazie Mille. šŸ«¶šŸ»šŸ¤—

LaurašŸŒ»

June 20th, 2023 10:13

It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun
orchidee said:

Next thing is - Is that Me, Myself, or I? lol.

June 20th, 2023 07:01

It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun
Accidental Poet said:

A masterpiece work of poetry my dear poetess. šŸ‘

June 20th, 2023 07:00

It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun
orchidee said:

I is liking this poem. I is maybe not gramatically correct (lol) but there are times when we say \'I be.....\'
I talk some rubbish sometimes. lol.

June 20th, 2023 02:00

A Gentlemanā€™s Secret
L. B. Mek said:

the more intimate, a connection
the more we want to keep it, loose
unchanging, undefined, unrefined
just right, for us..
(I so relate, dear Poetess
a soothing read
we small pebbles
leaning on each other
swimming along
in our rivers of fate
mapping our legacies)

June 19th, 2023 02:05

A Gentlemanā€™s Secret
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Dear Teddy,
Thatā€™s amazing that you still donā€™t know his name. I imagine that bus ride must be more enjoyable while talking to your friend.
Thank you for sharing your your ā€œbus rideā€.

Buon weekend.

Laura šŸŒ»

June 17th, 2023 08:56

A Gentlemanā€™s Secret
Goldfinch60 said:

Some of us old codgers are nice Teddy. LOL

Andy

June 17th, 2023 01:49

A Gentlemanā€™s Secret
orchidee said:

So you sat next to me - you knows my name by now! lol.

June 16th, 2023 14:33

A Gentlemanā€™s Secret
Caring dove said:

Some people are so nice arenā€™t they ))

Nice writing , teddy ))

June 16th, 2023 12:13

Caged Bird
L. B. Mek said:

One of your very best! dear Poetess
(and that saying something)
thank you!
\'I must reject these tiresome thoughts
That savage my taunted mind
Reduce them to a petal of hope
With harmony entwined\'
Amen!

June 16th, 2023 02:39

Broken Mirror
L. B. Mek said:

Brilliant!
(oh how I missed your poetry
most cherished Poetess)
thank you!

June 16th, 2023 02:36

Caged Bird
Goldfinch60 said:

That freedom will bring you so much joy in the future Teddy.

Andy

June 16th, 2023 01:04

The Visitor (my Raven )
Caring dove said:

I like your poem teddy šŸ™‚ itā€™s interesting the spiritual meaning behind seeing different animals / birds .. the sign of ravens isnā€™t always dark tho .. I think it can be related to positive things aswell or so I read ..( I saw ravens a few weeks back , in our back garden then the next two days after outside of our front window .

A nicely expressed poem which I liked reading ))



June 15th, 2023 15:32

Broken Mirror
Accidental Poet said:

Only those who see without blinders can see the beauty reflected in their own mirror. Well penned Teddy. šŸ‘

June 14th, 2023 20:08

Caged Bird
Accidental Poet said:

May all your days and nights be forever free Teddy.

June 14th, 2023 20:02

Caged Bird
2781 said:

Really enjoyed that.

June 14th, 2023 06:44

Caged Bird
Caring dove said:

Lovely writing šŸ™‚ some really beautiful lines in this

Your last nights are powerful )

June 14th, 2023 05:35

Caged Bird
orchidee said:

Yes, I must break free of KP, but she spends all my money on botox! heehee. I\'m that bird in the cage. boohoo!

June 14th, 2023 05:17

Broken Mirror
Caring dove said:

Lovely and interesting writing teddy šŸ™‚ sad tho .. some people struggle to accept themselves .. and some people try to make us feel unworthy and yes we should definately stand up for ourselves if we can

Nice to see you back on here

I havnt been posting that much recently but I may every now and then

June 13th, 2023 13:11

Broken Mirror
orchidee said:

Ahh, a poem about KP. Remember I married her one Halloween?! lol.

June 13th, 2023 04:51

No Regrets
rhmn_7 said:

Love so much that you don\'t regret not loving enough, nice words!

June 4th, 2023 09:51

Consequence of Love
orchidee said:

Cooeee Teddy! lol.

June 2nd, 2023 12:03



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