Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
Raven\'s Encore
sorenbarrett said:
Rather spooky in that we both wrote of silence at the same time but you the more cheerful of poets in a somber tone and I the more morose in a tone of longing a most beautiful peace, I hope it is not personal. Fantastic metaphors\"
\"The clocks have stopped ticking
no chimes, no bells
no sound\"
I can hear the silence.
\"death has stolen my warm blanket\" another great line.
\"every clock in my house
now without hands\"
brilliant!
and the last line
\"my love, my love now gone.\" carries a bit of the flavor of Poe. A most wonderful write.
April 27th, 2024 03:41
sorenbarrett said:
Rather spooky in that we both wrote of silence at the same time but you the more cheerful of poets in a somber tone and I the more morose in a tone of longing a most beautiful peace, I hope it is not personal. Fantastic metaphors\"
\"The clocks have stopped ticking
no chimes, no bells
no sound\"
I can hear the silence.
\"death has stolen my warm blanket\" another great line.
\"every clock in my house
now without hands\"
brilliant!
and the last line
\"my love, my love now gone.\" carries a bit of the flavor of Poe. A most wonderful write.
April 27th, 2024 03:41
Raven\'s Encore
Bella Shepard said:
Haunting depiction of death\'s encapsulation. Sad and remarkably beautiful at the same time. This is one to read over and over.
April 26th, 2024 13:52
Bella Shepard said:
Haunting depiction of death\'s encapsulation. Sad and remarkably beautiful at the same time. This is one to read over and over.
April 26th, 2024 13:52
Raven\'s Encore
Doggerel Dave said:
Glad you are spreading the joy, Teddy.
Now go spread it some where else, will ya......😂🤣😇👅LOL
April 26th, 2024 06:11
Doggerel Dave said:
Glad you are spreading the joy, Teddy.
Now go spread it some where else, will ya......😂🤣😇👅LOL
April 26th, 2024 06:11
Raven\'s Encore
mirrorball said:
\"Death has stolen my warm blanket\" wow. I\'m in love with this one!!
April 26th, 2024 03:18
mirrorball said:
\"Death has stolen my warm blanket\" wow. I\'m in love with this one!!
April 26th, 2024 03:18
Our Skies Are Red With Blood
Parisab said:
Dear Teddy even your parent’s account of the war has left the generational trauma. The damages are real, be it on the TV screen, or falling from the red skies above. Please keep writing as poems have real impact…
April 26th, 2024 01:00
Parisab said:
Dear Teddy even your parent’s account of the war has left the generational trauma. The damages are real, be it on the TV screen, or falling from the red skies above. Please keep writing as poems have real impact…
April 26th, 2024 01:00
Awakening
Neville said:
sound advice dear T .. the old saying one mans dream is another mans delusion springs to mind .. 🌹
April 25th, 2024 16:31
Neville said:
sound advice dear T .. the old saying one mans dream is another mans delusion springs to mind .. 🌹
April 25th, 2024 16:31
Awakening
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Teddy and so true but we can use our imagination to take us to such wonderful times.
Andy
April 25th, 2024 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Teddy and so true but we can use our imagination to take us to such wonderful times.
Andy
April 25th, 2024 01:19
Awakening
sorenbarrett said:
Such good advice in poetic form. Both sides need to be considered and attempted but generally the consequences of disregard fall heavier on the reality side. The format of this poem with the first two stanzas taking on the nabla form or inverted triangle. Is this a reference to femininity, differential operator in vector calculus or just my imagination surrounding \"possibility, possibility\" and not reality. Nicely done my friend.
April 24th, 2024 03:38
sorenbarrett said:
Such good advice in poetic form. Both sides need to be considered and attempted but generally the consequences of disregard fall heavier on the reality side. The format of this poem with the first two stanzas taking on the nabla form or inverted triangle. Is this a reference to femininity, differential operator in vector calculus or just my imagination surrounding \"possibility, possibility\" and not reality. Nicely done my friend.
April 24th, 2024 03:38
Awakening
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy, keeping our feet on the ground is my understanding here. All too easy for dreamers to stay up in the clouds. Beautiful posted image and wise words. Have a lovely day dear poet. 🌹
April 24th, 2024 03:28
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy, keeping our feet on the ground is my understanding here. All too easy for dreamers to stay up in the clouds. Beautiful posted image and wise words. Have a lovely day dear poet. 🌹
April 24th, 2024 03:28
Awakening
Doggerel Dave said:
A worthwhile example many should heed, Teddy.
I will always come down on the side of reality every time.
April 24th, 2024 02:12
Doggerel Dave said:
A worthwhile example many should heed, Teddy.
I will always come down on the side of reality every time.
April 24th, 2024 02:12
Just to Hear your Laughter
Doggerel Dave said:
A gem about which I have no comment because it just is - a gem.
April 23rd, 2024 20:38
Doggerel Dave said:
A gem about which I have no comment because it just is - a gem.
April 23rd, 2024 20:38
Just to Hear your Laughter
aDarkerMind said:
one to savour and enjoy Teddy.
and worthy of much applause.
April 23rd, 2024 11:07
aDarkerMind said:
one to savour and enjoy Teddy.
and worthy of much applause.
April 23rd, 2024 11:07
Just to Hear your Laughter
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy, such eloquent words in this write. Your posted image is lovely. I felt the winding down at the day’s end. A calmness in your diction and the promise of a new sunrise. Happy Tuesday dear poet. 🏴🏴🏴🌹
Laughter is the best medicine
April 23rd, 2024 08:59
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy, such eloquent words in this write. Your posted image is lovely. I felt the winding down at the day’s end. A calmness in your diction and the promise of a new sunrise. Happy Tuesday dear poet. 🏴🏴🏴🌹
Laughter is the best medicine
April 23rd, 2024 08:59
Just to Hear your Laughter
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine poem Teddy.
Shingles—Ouch feel better soon.
April 23rd, 2024 06:53
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine poem Teddy.
Shingles—Ouch feel better soon.
April 23rd, 2024 06:53
Just to Hear your Laughter
Saxon Crow said:
That\'s really lovely Teddy. Faved for sure.
How are you?
April 23rd, 2024 02:52
Saxon Crow said:
That\'s really lovely Teddy. Faved for sure.
How are you?
April 23rd, 2024 02:52
Our Skies Are Red With Blood
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful true words Teddy.
Andy
\"War is created by people too old to fight for those too young to die!\"
April 23rd, 2024 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful true words Teddy.
Andy
\"War is created by people too old to fight for those too young to die!\"
April 23rd, 2024 01:24
Our Skies Are Red With Blood
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work Teddy. War is hell, to say the least.
April 22nd, 2024 19:27
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work Teddy. War is hell, to say the least.
April 22nd, 2024 19:27
Our Skies Are Red With Blood
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well written, Teddy.
If this is the result of a young girl eating an apple. Imagine if she had made a pie.
April 22nd, 2024 13:59
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well written, Teddy.
If this is the result of a young girl eating an apple. Imagine if she had made a pie.
April 22nd, 2024 13:59
Our Skies Are Red With Blood
sorenbarrett said:
Separated by many more years than Europe from war on her own ground, the Americas feel relatively peaceful. Fewer reminders remain but the television brings it into the home in a surreal way, never before possible. Distanced from death that is separated by plastic, it feels distant. Your poem evokes many buried images of past horrors and atrocities of war, not so distant. I loved your most poetic title and last line \"our skies are red with blood\" and instead of just watching it passively on TV as if it were a sunset, we need to do something to prevent it. Very nice Teddy
April 22nd, 2024 08:16
sorenbarrett said:
Separated by many more years than Europe from war on her own ground, the Americas feel relatively peaceful. Fewer reminders remain but the television brings it into the home in a surreal way, never before possible. Distanced from death that is separated by plastic, it feels distant. Your poem evokes many buried images of past horrors and atrocities of war, not so distant. I loved your most poetic title and last line \"our skies are red with blood\" and instead of just watching it passively on TV as if it were a sunset, we need to do something to prevent it. Very nice Teddy
April 22nd, 2024 08:16
Our Skies Are Red With Blood
Doggerel Dave said:
Hey Teddy – you’ve cracked it for me inasmuch as I experienced what you relate in parts of your rich poem. Your dismissal of war history I can only endorse.
Your concluding lines are solid, for which I am in frantic agreement and gratitude.
(I’m not mentioning the 40-inch flat screen television….mine’s only 32….😊).
April 22nd, 2024 06:38
Doggerel Dave said:
Hey Teddy – you’ve cracked it for me inasmuch as I experienced what you relate in parts of your rich poem. Your dismissal of war history I can only endorse.
Your concluding lines are solid, for which I am in frantic agreement and gratitude.
(I’m not mentioning the 40-inch flat screen television….mine’s only 32….😊).
April 22nd, 2024 06:38
The Death of Love
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful emotively loving words Teddy.
Andy
April 22nd, 2024 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful emotively loving words Teddy.
Andy
April 22nd, 2024 01:47
The Death of Love
Neville said:
if there was ever such a thing as a beautiful mourning song .. then this, would most surely be, a [prime contender .. both timeless and classy, Ms. T .. Neville 🌹
April 22nd, 2024 00:58
Neville said:
if there was ever such a thing as a beautiful mourning song .. then this, would most surely be, a [prime contender .. both timeless and classy, Ms. T .. Neville 🌹
April 22nd, 2024 00:58
The Death of Love
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy, beautiful words of undying love. Perfectly penned from a gifted poet. A treat to read. Your posted image, a visual match for the written word. Have a lovely Monday poet. 🌹
April 21st, 2024 23:44
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy, beautiful words of undying love. Perfectly penned from a gifted poet. A treat to read. Your posted image, a visual match for the written word. Have a lovely Monday poet. 🌹
April 21st, 2024 23:44
The Death of Love
sorenbarrett said:
\"I sleep alone
yet, I dream of you\"
A great line. In this plea for lost love, whether lost by distance or by other forces, there is a commitment that extends beyond time and space.
\"and I will wait, until
the great wrinkles in the moon
fade for the very last time
and I too am gone.\" Romantic and a commitment that few would be willing to issue in this day and age of fickle relationships. Nicely done Teddy.
April 21st, 2024 16:28
sorenbarrett said:
\"I sleep alone
yet, I dream of you\"
A great line. In this plea for lost love, whether lost by distance or by other forces, there is a commitment that extends beyond time and space.
\"and I will wait, until
the great wrinkles in the moon
fade for the very last time
and I too am gone.\" Romantic and a commitment that few would be willing to issue in this day and age of fickle relationships. Nicely done Teddy.
April 21st, 2024 16:28
visionary
sorenbarrett said:
As I read I notice that I have expectations as to the outcome of each work and tension builds as it appears that I was wrong and the unexpected is about to occur, and so is life. A wonderful expression of this in so few words again.
April 20th, 2024 08:51
sorenbarrett said:
As I read I notice that I have expectations as to the outcome of each work and tension builds as it appears that I was wrong and the unexpected is about to occur, and so is life. A wonderful expression of this in so few words again.
April 20th, 2024 08:51
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