Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
But What Of Love?
Christina8 said:
A wonderful write Teddy! I think most of us as we get older have felt the sting of loss
July 3rd, 2023 10:34
Christina8 said:
A wonderful write Teddy! I think most of us as we get older have felt the sting of loss
July 3rd, 2023 10:34
But What Of Love?
Neville said:
its what makes the world go round .. and like the great song say\'s \'love hurts yet of course, we can never get enough of it, can we .. ❤️
July 3rd, 2023 06:52
Neville said:
its what makes the world go round .. and like the great song say\'s \'love hurts yet of course, we can never get enough of it, can we .. ❤️
July 3rd, 2023 06:52
My Giant
Goldfinch60 said:
Your soul is the life and love within your heart Teddy.
Andy
July 3rd, 2023 02:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Your soul is the life and love within your heart Teddy.
Andy
July 3rd, 2023 02:26
My Angel
L. B. Mek said:
brilliant, dear Poetess
love the patience you showcase
line by line, layering imagery
while unravelling your metaphor
great example of your skills
I think you got the pacing perfect
and that poetic voice, tonality
in-sync with your theme
it\'s not too bleak nor too upbeat
imbued with a
a tendril of that serenity we all
seek
(I know how much the angels
in your life, mean to you
so am so happy you inked a poem
to attest to their worth in your life)
a poem as beautiful
as the kind heart that penned it
thank you!
July 3rd, 2023 02:19
L. B. Mek said:
brilliant, dear Poetess
love the patience you showcase
line by line, layering imagery
while unravelling your metaphor
great example of your skills
I think you got the pacing perfect
and that poetic voice, tonality
in-sync with your theme
it\'s not too bleak nor too upbeat
imbued with a
a tendril of that serenity we all
seek
(I know how much the angels
in your life, mean to you
so am so happy you inked a poem
to attest to their worth in your life)
a poem as beautiful
as the kind heart that penned it
thank you!
July 3rd, 2023 02:19
My Angel
Bella Shepard said:
Dearest Teddy, this is so beautiful. To find that angel, that confidence and sense of well being that is priceless. Your angel shines inside and lights your way. God bless dear friend!
July 2nd, 2023 11:44
Bella Shepard said:
Dearest Teddy, this is so beautiful. To find that angel, that confidence and sense of well being that is priceless. Your angel shines inside and lights your way. God bless dear friend!
July 2nd, 2023 11:44
My Angel
Christina8 said:
This is a wonderful write, Teddy! I\'m glad you found your courage. I do believe in angels. Great job!
July 2nd, 2023 09:38
Christina8 said:
This is a wonderful write, Teddy! I\'m glad you found your courage. I do believe in angels. Great job!
July 2nd, 2023 09:38
My Angel
orchidee said:
A fine write T.
KP scared me. She got some over-sized wings, pretending to be The Bird Woman! heehee. Anything to draw attention to herself. lol.
I talk some rubbish.
July 2nd, 2023 09:02
orchidee said:
A fine write T.
KP scared me. She got some over-sized wings, pretending to be The Bird Woman! heehee. Anything to draw attention to herself. lol.
I talk some rubbish.
July 2nd, 2023 09:02
My Angel
Caring dove said:
I believe in angels , teddy 🙂
A lovely writing
Glad the Angel gave you courage
July 2nd, 2023 04:32
Caring dove said:
I believe in angels , teddy 🙂
A lovely writing
Glad the Angel gave you courage
July 2nd, 2023 04:32
My Giant
L. B. Mek said:
Sophie, as my heroin supreme
above Tinkerbelle or Alice
and BFF as the ideal of kindness
i wish our world still remembered
..
and loved your poetic reimagining
of BFF\'s dreams as our soul\'s
language revealed, anchoring
us to our subconscious\'
empowering ideals
---
such a soothing read, dear Poetess
thank you!
June 30th, 2023 04:34
L. B. Mek said:
Sophie, as my heroin supreme
above Tinkerbelle or Alice
and BFF as the ideal of kindness
i wish our world still remembered
..
and loved your poetic reimagining
of BFF\'s dreams as our soul\'s
language revealed, anchoring
us to our subconscious\'
empowering ideals
---
such a soothing read, dear Poetess
thank you!
June 30th, 2023 04:34
What Of Love?
L. B. Mek said:
to love or not love, that is
what nightmares are born, of
indecision as our fallibility
a heart\'s volition as our vindication
we strive to infuse hope in every
choice, knowing
our scars are yet to callous
and our tears, still feel wet
on our cheeks, dear brave Poetess
but we dare, and validate
that intuitive need to believe
and entrust, in a love
we\'re promised by the very
pulse, in this
our one and most romantically
finite, life...
June 30th, 2023 04:26
L. B. Mek said:
to love or not love, that is
what nightmares are born, of
indecision as our fallibility
a heart\'s volition as our vindication
we strive to infuse hope in every
choice, knowing
our scars are yet to callous
and our tears, still feel wet
on our cheeks, dear brave Poetess
but we dare, and validate
that intuitive need to believe
and entrust, in a love
we\'re promised by the very
pulse, in this
our one and most romantically
finite, life...
June 30th, 2023 04:26
Summoning of a Gentle Spirit
L. B. Mek said:
beautifully worded , dear Poetess
this is steeped in that relatable melancholy
where a heart\'s love refuses to cease
reaching and dreaming, even through
the annals of time, hoping for fate
to once again deliver us
to those we lost and yet can never
accept, as being gone
we can but yearn, remember
and hope...
June 30th, 2023 04:20
L. B. Mek said:
beautifully worded , dear Poetess
this is steeped in that relatable melancholy
where a heart\'s love refuses to cease
reaching and dreaming, even through
the annals of time, hoping for fate
to once again deliver us
to those we lost and yet can never
accept, as being gone
we can but yearn, remember
and hope...
June 30th, 2023 04:20
My Giant
orchidee said:
Doh! That\'s the \'size\' of my marriage to KP, with the man and woman reversed in size. lol.
June 30th, 2023 02:15
orchidee said:
Doh! That\'s the \'size\' of my marriage to KP, with the man and woman reversed in size. lol.
June 30th, 2023 02:15
My Giant
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Teddy,
A heavenly and powerful poem.
I was especially drawn to the following words:
“this giant who walks beside me
Is actually my soul.”
Laura 🌻
P.S.—what happened to yesterday post?
I saw it but I didn’t comment on it because my iPhone went powerless.
I was going to make a comment on it today but it was no longer. I totally got the message you had conveyed .
June 29th, 2023 15:46
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Teddy,
A heavenly and powerful poem.
I was especially drawn to the following words:
“this giant who walks beside me
Is actually my soul.”
Laura 🌻
P.S.—what happened to yesterday post?
I saw it but I didn’t comment on it because my iPhone went powerless.
I was going to make a comment on it today but it was no longer. I totally got the message you had conveyed .
June 29th, 2023 15:46
My Giant
Garth Rakumakoe said:
For man shall not live on bread alone... A true reminder of who and what we really are... Profound. 🙏🏼
June 29th, 2023 14:51
Garth Rakumakoe said:
For man shall not live on bread alone... A true reminder of who and what we really are... Profound. 🙏🏼
June 29th, 2023 14:51
My Giant
Caring dove said:
the soul / higher self
A lovely writing teddy I liked the read .. so nicely expressed 🌸
Our higher self will always believe us to be worthy good enough and loveable
June 29th, 2023 12:29
Caring dove said:
the soul / higher self
A lovely writing teddy I liked the read .. so nicely expressed 🌸
Our higher self will always believe us to be worthy good enough and loveable
June 29th, 2023 12:29
It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun
Caring dove said:
Great writing teddy 🙂
A lot of beautiful words in this
Liked the read ))
I don’t often write about romance but maybe I should try
really like how you have mentioned a lot of nature in this .. and you have used the word ‘ thee ‘ it kind of has an old fashioned feel to this ..
Thanks for sharing 🙂
June 28th, 2023 01:32
Caring dove said:
Great writing teddy 🙂
A lot of beautiful words in this
Liked the read ))
I don’t often write about romance but maybe I should try
really like how you have mentioned a lot of nature in this .. and you have used the word ‘ thee ‘ it kind of has an old fashioned feel to this ..
Thanks for sharing 🙂
June 28th, 2023 01:32
What Of Love?
Michael Edwards said:
Jeanne and I visited Verona and saw Aida - magical memories and - yes we saw the balcony. Poetically a real fine write to be proud of.
June 27th, 2023 15:03
Michael Edwards said:
Jeanne and I visited Verona and saw Aida - magical memories and - yes we saw the balcony. Poetically a real fine write to be proud of.
June 27th, 2023 15:03
What Of Love?
Caring dove said:
A lovely writing , teddy 🙂 like the mention of nature in this
June 27th, 2023 13:58
Caring dove said:
A lovely writing , teddy 🙂 like the mention of nature in this
June 27th, 2023 13:58
What Of Love?
Neville said:
the image that heads this page reminds me of a famous balcony in Verona .. the fine words that sit beneath it .. remind me of just how much I love this art we share .. 🌹
June 27th, 2023 13:12
Neville said:
the image that heads this page reminds me of a famous balcony in Verona .. the fine words that sit beneath it .. remind me of just how much I love this art we share .. 🌹
June 27th, 2023 13:12
Summoning of a Gentle Spirit
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Teddy,
Losing our loved ones is painful.
Cherishing the beautiful memories will ease our pain.
My heart is with you.
Laura🌻
June 27th, 2023 10:17
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Teddy,
Losing our loved ones is painful.
Cherishing the beautiful memories will ease our pain.
My heart is with you.
Laura🌻
June 27th, 2023 10:17
Summoning of a Gentle Spirit
LIZ said:
The pain of loss doesn\'t really go away does it? Not completely....the memory is still there. We can forget for a second, learn to live with it, but life has a cruel way of reminding us, and taking us right back to that place. Thank you for sharing!
June 26th, 2023 12:27
LIZ said:
The pain of loss doesn\'t really go away does it? Not completely....the memory is still there. We can forget for a second, learn to live with it, but life has a cruel way of reminding us, and taking us right back to that place. Thank you for sharing!
June 26th, 2023 12:27
Summoning of a Gentle Spirit
Caring dove said:
Like the mention of the lake in this .. it’s sad tho .. when we feel so pained / grieved
June 26th, 2023 11:33
Caring dove said:
Like the mention of the lake in this .. it’s sad tho .. when we feel so pained / grieved
June 26th, 2023 11:33
Summoning of a Gentle Spirit
Neville said:
Incredible ink Teddy .. be proud of this one my friend .. I know I would be and indeed, I am for you ... Neville
June 26th, 2023 11:22
Neville said:
Incredible ink Teddy .. be proud of this one my friend .. I know I would be and indeed, I am for you ... Neville
June 26th, 2023 11:22
Summoning of a Gentle Spirit
orchidee said:
Good write T.
But you can forget about me. I\'m never gentle to KP! She reminds me to go fishing - for trouts, old ones! heehee. I\'m cruel. lol.
June 26th, 2023 10:42
orchidee said:
Good write T.
But you can forget about me. I\'m never gentle to KP! She reminds me to go fishing - for trouts, old ones! heehee. I\'m cruel. lol.
June 26th, 2023 10:42
My Gentle Soul Can Surely Rest
Caring dove said:
I think we are very lucky if we have a lot of good amazing memories .. because I know that some people can struggle / hurt a lot in life .
I like your writing )) nicely expressed
The red shoes out of the wizard of oz lol .. great film
June 26th, 2023 03:43
Caring dove said:
I think we are very lucky if we have a lot of good amazing memories .. because I know that some people can struggle / hurt a lot in life .
I like your writing )) nicely expressed
The red shoes out of the wizard of oz lol .. great film
June 26th, 2023 03:43
My Gentle Soul Can Surely Rest
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(knock on those red shoes
and let yourself glide
to a reality that\'s sure to provide
meaning and worth
for each breath and scar, cherished
sincere)
June 26th, 2023 03:40
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(knock on those red shoes
and let yourself glide
to a reality that\'s sure to provide
meaning and worth
for each breath and scar, cherished
sincere)
June 26th, 2023 03:40
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