Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
Nightingale and I
Cassie58 said:
Wonderfully penned dear Teddy. That opening stanza touches the heart of the reader. It sums up deep loss so well. Grief hits so hard and birdsong can magnify the emptiness ten fold.
March 28th, 2024 10:59
Cassie58 said:
Wonderfully penned dear Teddy. That opening stanza touches the heart of the reader. It sums up deep loss so well. Grief hits so hard and birdsong can magnify the emptiness ten fold.
March 28th, 2024 10:59
Nightingale and I
Bella Shepard said:
Dear Teddy, you have been inspired you to write something truly incredible. You describe beautifully the loss, the sadness, and then the gift of love to be remembered and cherished. A work of art and remembrance for one so dear.
March 28th, 2024 09:06
Bella Shepard said:
Dear Teddy, you have been inspired you to write something truly incredible. You describe beautifully the loss, the sadness, and then the gift of love to be remembered and cherished. A work of art and remembrance for one so dear.
March 28th, 2024 09:06
Nightingale and I
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive words for your friend Teddy.
Andy
March 28th, 2024 02:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive words for your friend Teddy.
Andy
March 28th, 2024 02:17
Love Letter
sorenbarrett said:
Very clever wording and idea in general/ Loved it.
March 26th, 2024 11:11
sorenbarrett said:
Very clever wording and idea in general/ Loved it.
March 26th, 2024 11:11
Love Letter
Bella Shepard said:
For me this poem harkens back to a time when love letters were written by hand, thought going into every ink stroke, then slowly folded and slipped into the waiting envelope to be licked and sealed, and the stamp licked as well. This is so simply elegant dear Teddy.
The picture a perfect compliment to this little gem!
March 22nd, 2024 16:12
Bella Shepard said:
For me this poem harkens back to a time when love letters were written by hand, thought going into every ink stroke, then slowly folded and slipped into the waiting envelope to be licked and sealed, and the stamp licked as well. This is so simply elegant dear Teddy.
The picture a perfect compliment to this little gem!
March 22nd, 2024 16:12
Love Letter
Doggerel Dave said:
Teddy - reality check - Your heart has withered and died if you go looking for it in \"An envelope a stamp paper and a pen in between the lines\".
Pleeze save your heart - get a PC, join a poetry group (try My Poetic Side) ....etc...etc...!!!!
March 22nd, 2024 05:21
Doggerel Dave said:
Teddy - reality check - Your heart has withered and died if you go looking for it in \"An envelope a stamp paper and a pen in between the lines\".
Pleeze save your heart - get a PC, join a poetry group (try My Poetic Side) ....etc...etc...!!!!
March 22nd, 2024 05:21
Slumberbashing with Imagery
Goldfinch60 said:
Keep dreaming Teddy and you may see Orchi and I doing the tango! LOL
Andy
March 22nd, 2024 02:03
Goldfinch60 said:
Keep dreaming Teddy and you may see Orchi and I doing the tango! LOL
Andy
March 22nd, 2024 02:03
Slumberbashing with Imagery
Doggerel Dave said:
This one slid by me yesterday...I was doing my own bit of Sbaing. Seems you dream in colour Teddy, you lucky lady...Very hallucinogenic.
March 22nd, 2024 02:02
Doggerel Dave said:
This one slid by me yesterday...I was doing my own bit of Sbaing. Seems you dream in colour Teddy, you lucky lady...Very hallucinogenic.
March 22nd, 2024 02:02
Love Letter
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Teddy, may your heart be filled with love.
Andy
March 22nd, 2024 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Teddy, may your heart be filled with love.
Andy
March 22nd, 2024 01:43
Slumberbashing with Imagery
Thomas W Case said:
I could see every line in my head. Tremendous imagery.
March 21st, 2024 17:41
Thomas W Case said:
I could see every line in my head. Tremendous imagery.
March 21st, 2024 17:41
Slumberbashing with Imagery
Bella Shepard said:
Wow! I\'d say \"Somewhere Over The Rainbow\" move over, you\'ve just been eclipsed. This has such a beautiful bedtime, fairy tale feel to it, I want to curl up and dream. Precious, priceless!
March 21st, 2024 14:56
Bella Shepard said:
Wow! I\'d say \"Somewhere Over The Rainbow\" move over, you\'ve just been eclipsed. This has such a beautiful bedtime, fairy tale feel to it, I want to curl up and dream. Precious, priceless!
March 21st, 2024 14:56
Slumberbashing with Imagery
Tom Dylan said:
A really trippy poem, Teddy. I love it. It reminds me of a 1960s song, Lucy in the Sky with Diamonds, or White Rabbit by Jefferson Airplane.
March 21st, 2024 06:28
Tom Dylan said:
A really trippy poem, Teddy. I love it. It reminds me of a 1960s song, Lucy in the Sky with Diamonds, or White Rabbit by Jefferson Airplane.
March 21st, 2024 06:28
Egg yolk on a comet tail
spilleronsheet said:
And suddenly those words I am living…
March 20th, 2024 13:40
spilleronsheet said:
And suddenly those words I am living…
March 20th, 2024 13:40
A Very Modern Tale
sorenbarrett said:
A great twist on an old tale. Funny how time changes things.
\"Romeo, my heart be broken\"
This story has always been a tragedy .
\"I fell upon your love\"
In the original it was he that fell of the dagger from love of her. Another twist.
\"it was you
who wanted me gone
“you bastard”\"
The major twist here.
\"alas, we are both still here
i’m not speaking to you anymore\"
Another twist it was death in the first case now life, and with it no fame. Ah the cost of fame. A fun and yet pensive write.
March 19th, 2024 10:14
sorenbarrett said:
A great twist on an old tale. Funny how time changes things.
\"Romeo, my heart be broken\"
This story has always been a tragedy .
\"I fell upon your love\"
In the original it was he that fell of the dagger from love of her. Another twist.
\"it was you
who wanted me gone
“you bastard”\"
The major twist here.
\"alas, we are both still here
i’m not speaking to you anymore\"
Another twist it was death in the first case now life, and with it no fame. Ah the cost of fame. A fun and yet pensive write.
March 19th, 2024 10:14
Pedestal
Bella Shepard said:
You have the gift of words dear Teddy; finding them, arranging them in the most pleasing way, bestowing them with emotion, so that they leap from the screen in this beautiful ode to love, placed oh so gently on that pedestal.
March 17th, 2024 16:55
Bella Shepard said:
You have the gift of words dear Teddy; finding them, arranging them in the most pleasing way, bestowing them with emotion, so that they leap from the screen in this beautiful ode to love, placed oh so gently on that pedestal.
March 17th, 2024 16:55
Egg yolk on a comet tail
Kieron said:
I am comforted by the thought that the sky is beautiful even when the sun is gone. Thank you for your poem, Teddy. It succinctly portrays a surely universal moment of vulnerability--and I like the egg-yolk image :D
March 16th, 2024 09:11
Kieron said:
I am comforted by the thought that the sky is beautiful even when the sun is gone. Thank you for your poem, Teddy. It succinctly portrays a surely universal moment of vulnerability--and I like the egg-yolk image :D
March 16th, 2024 09:11
Egg yolk on a comet tail
Bella Shepard said:
Looking up at the stars in the darkness, the stillness of night, is a feeling you have found the words to describe beautifully. It calms the mind and the soul, even if just for a while, to gaze upon what seems infinite. Incredible!
March 15th, 2024 11:23
Bella Shepard said:
Looking up at the stars in the darkness, the stillness of night, is a feeling you have found the words to describe beautifully. It calms the mind and the soul, even if just for a while, to gaze upon what seems infinite. Incredible!
March 15th, 2024 11:23
Pedestal
sorenbarrett said:
Love as a word in English is such a complex word. It can mean so many things from passion to adoration. It is ambiguous and covers so many emotions. Very nicely written in first person making it so much more personal. Lovely no pun intended.
March 15th, 2024 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
Love as a word in English is such a complex word. It can mean so many things from passion to adoration. It is ambiguous and covers so many emotions. Very nicely written in first person making it so much more personal. Lovely no pun intended.
March 15th, 2024 04:40
Egg yolk on a comet tail
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful thought but I believe the the stars above are nothing more than a reflection of the stars within and thereby you yourself. As for the comet don\'t be too anxious Mark Twain was born with Haley\'s comet and died with its coming again.
March 11th, 2024 15:13
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful thought but I believe the the stars above are nothing more than a reflection of the stars within and thereby you yourself. As for the comet don\'t be too anxious Mark Twain was born with Haley\'s comet and died with its coming again.
March 11th, 2024 15:13
Egg yolk on a comet tail
Goldfinch60 said:
There certainly is something incredible about Van Gogh\'s work.
I have a jigsaw of that painting, it is not easy to do.
Fine words Teddy.
Andy
March 11th, 2024 02:19
Goldfinch60 said:
There certainly is something incredible about Van Gogh\'s work.
I have a jigsaw of that painting, it is not easy to do.
Fine words Teddy.
Andy
March 11th, 2024 02:19
Egg yolk on a comet tail
Thomas W Case said:
I agree. As I write this, I am sitting at my desk. I have an old wooden art set with Starry Night on it—tremendous work.
March 10th, 2024 13:20
Thomas W Case said:
I agree. As I write this, I am sitting at my desk. I have an old wooden art set with Starry Night on it—tremendous work.
March 10th, 2024 13:20
Egg yolk on a comet tail
Cassie58 said:
I too would like to think Van Gogh created his masterpiece after looking out on the heavens on a sleepless night. I love the texture, colour and movement of this beautiful painting. He had such a troubled mind and yet this artwork brings in some much needed light. Your words dear Teddy capture well the mental torture he had to endure. A fine tribute. Have a wonderful Sunday. 🌹
March 10th, 2024 06:39
Cassie58 said:
I too would like to think Van Gogh created his masterpiece after looking out on the heavens on a sleepless night. I love the texture, colour and movement of this beautiful painting. He had such a troubled mind and yet this artwork brings in some much needed light. Your words dear Teddy capture well the mental torture he had to endure. A fine tribute. Have a wonderful Sunday. 🌹
March 10th, 2024 06:39
Egg yolk on a comet tail
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m with you, Teddy; Vincent has something (soothing tone) very special...........
But of greater concern would be your very severe insomnia........
March 10th, 2024 05:07
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m with you, Teddy; Vincent has something (soothing tone) very special...........
But of greater concern would be your very severe insomnia........
March 10th, 2024 05:07
Pedestal
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful lovelorn words Teddy, I am sure that you have found love.
Andy
March 9th, 2024 02:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful lovelorn words Teddy, I am sure that you have found love.
Andy
March 9th, 2024 02:51
Pedestal
Parisab said:
Very Bronte in style, so romantic and mystical …happy international women’s day dear Teddy …
March 9th, 2024 01:59
Parisab said:
Very Bronte in style, so romantic and mystical …happy international women’s day dear Teddy …
March 9th, 2024 01:59
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