Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
The Death of Love
sorenbarrett said:
\"I sleep alone
yet, I dream of you\"
A great line. In this plea for lost love, whether lost by distance or by other forces, there is a commitment that extends beyond time and space.
\"and I will wait, until
the great wrinkles in the moon
fade for the very last time
and I too am gone.\" Romantic and a commitment that few would be willing to issue in this day and age of fickle relationships. Nicely done Teddy.
April 21st, 2024 16:28
sorenbarrett said:
\"I sleep alone
yet, I dream of you\"
A great line. In this plea for lost love, whether lost by distance or by other forces, there is a commitment that extends beyond time and space.
\"and I will wait, until
the great wrinkles in the moon
fade for the very last time
and I too am gone.\" Romantic and a commitment that few would be willing to issue in this day and age of fickle relationships. Nicely done Teddy.
April 21st, 2024 16:28
visionary
sorenbarrett said:
As I read I notice that I have expectations as to the outcome of each work and tension builds as it appears that I was wrong and the unexpected is about to occur, and so is life. A wonderful expression of this in so few words again.
April 20th, 2024 08:51
sorenbarrett said:
As I read I notice that I have expectations as to the outcome of each work and tension builds as it appears that I was wrong and the unexpected is about to occur, and so is life. A wonderful expression of this in so few words again.
April 20th, 2024 08:51
Blind Date
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun words Teddy but the way I look at people is not the way they look but their attitude towards me in conversation. There hearts my be beautiful.
Andy
April 20th, 2024 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun words Teddy but the way I look at people is not the way they look but their attitude towards me in conversation. There hearts my be beautiful.
Andy
April 20th, 2024 01:27
Blind Date
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy, I love your sense of humour. I think you may have had a few large G &T’s at home before you ventured to the pub:)) Now what brand of gin was this. Asking for a friend. 😂🌹
April 19th, 2024 15:57
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy, I love your sense of humour. I think you may have had a few large G &T’s at home before you ventured to the pub:)) Now what brand of gin was this. Asking for a friend. 😂🌹
April 19th, 2024 15:57
Blind Date
Bella Shepard said:
Your imagination and creativity amaze me. This is a classic Teddy, I was smiling all the way through, such fun. So glad to know that no aliens were harmed.
April 19th, 2024 06:25
Bella Shepard said:
Your imagination and creativity amaze me. This is a classic Teddy, I was smiling all the way through, such fun. So glad to know that no aliens were harmed.
April 19th, 2024 06:25
Blind Date
Neville said:
a proper little belter .. well not so little .. this is one o them larf a line posts innit 😉🌹
April 19th, 2024 06:22
Neville said:
a proper little belter .. well not so little .. this is one o them larf a line posts innit 😉🌹
April 19th, 2024 06:22
Blind Date
Doggerel Dave said:
😅😂🤣 Take the Gin bottle, forget the T and do a bolt for home, Teddy.
(No need to thank me for being sympathetic - this is just plain commonsense advice.....)
April 19th, 2024 06:18
Doggerel Dave said:
😅😂🤣 Take the Gin bottle, forget the T and do a bolt for home, Teddy.
(No need to thank me for being sympathetic - this is just plain commonsense advice.....)
April 19th, 2024 06:18
Blind Date
sorenbarrett said:
So nice to start the morning with a smile and I am glad that no aliens were harmed. The situation many of us have been in and the excuses that we make brings fond memories. A story so well told, made me chuckle.
April 19th, 2024 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
So nice to start the morning with a smile and I am glad that no aliens were harmed. The situation many of us have been in and the excuses that we make brings fond memories. A story so well told, made me chuckle.
April 19th, 2024 03:58
Angels Encore
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that your angel will be always with you Teddy.😍
Andy
April 19th, 2024 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that your angel will be always with you Teddy.😍
Andy
April 19th, 2024 01:18
Angels Encore
sorenbarrett said:
Such a pleasant though or dream as opposed to those moments paralyzed by sleep where one feels something dreadful is approaching. A most lovely vision of the peacefulness of sleep.
\"And as I close my eyes to dream
my angels voice begins to sing \" A great line that sets the tone.
April 18th, 2024 13:57
sorenbarrett said:
Such a pleasant though or dream as opposed to those moments paralyzed by sleep where one feels something dreadful is approaching. A most lovely vision of the peacefulness of sleep.
\"And as I close my eyes to dream
my angels voice begins to sing \" A great line that sets the tone.
April 18th, 2024 13:57
Angels Encore
Neville said:
lovely .. let there always be a next time ............................. 🌹
April 18th, 2024 13:09
Neville said:
lovely .. let there always be a next time ............................. 🌹
April 18th, 2024 13:09
Angels Encore
Cassie58 said:
May you always be blessed by a visit from your Angel Teddy. I hope it is the voice of your mum that you hear. Have a glorious day.
April 18th, 2024 07:40
Cassie58 said:
May you always be blessed by a visit from your Angel Teddy. I hope it is the voice of your mum that you hear. Have a glorious day.
April 18th, 2024 07:40
Angels Encore
Doggerel Dave said:
Each for their own when it comes to bedtime, Teddy.
For you, peace and tranquility.I\'m both happy and envious for/of you.
April 18th, 2024 06:24
Doggerel Dave said:
Each for their own when it comes to bedtime, Teddy.
For you, peace and tranquility.I\'m both happy and envious for/of you.
April 18th, 2024 06:24
Do-over
Neville said:
is that the white cliffs you are referring to by any chance my little chameleon .. 🌹
April 17th, 2024 09:27
Neville said:
is that the white cliffs you are referring to by any chance my little chameleon .. 🌹
April 17th, 2024 09:27
Do-over
Teddy.15 said:
Thank you my dear sorrenbarret somewhat inspired by your poem yesterday, I\'d like to say for me it\'s about reincarnation however it is reincarnation of many types which ever the reader can see as we are all individual. You humble my page as usual thank you so very much Sir. 🌹
April 17th, 2024 03:55
Teddy.15 said:
Thank you my dear sorrenbarret somewhat inspired by your poem yesterday, I\'d like to say for me it\'s about reincarnation however it is reincarnation of many types which ever the reader can see as we are all individual. You humble my page as usual thank you so very much Sir. 🌹
April 17th, 2024 03:55
Do-over
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant! Another write that is on more than one level. Do we not all come from the dark into the light different people at birth whether literal or in various situations throughout life. Even in thought and problems it is so. Knowledge brings the light and in its resolution change. Love this short but insightful piece.
April 17th, 2024 03:46
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant! Another write that is on more than one level. Do we not all come from the dark into the light different people at birth whether literal or in various situations throughout life. Even in thought and problems it is so. Knowledge brings the light and in its resolution change. Love this short but insightful piece.
April 17th, 2024 03:46
Do-over
Goldfinch60 said:
Such great words Teddy, we are new people every day we arise from our beds.
Andy
April 17th, 2024 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Such great words Teddy, we are new people every day we arise from our beds.
Andy
April 17th, 2024 01:20
Do-over
Cassie58 said:
Do-over. Like a makeover. I love the title Teddy. If you can turn darkness into light at almost the flick of a switch, then you are a miracle worker:) A thought provoking piece of brevity and I very much like your chosen artwork. Putting your best face forward when you feel like crap. That is what came to mind here Teddy. Happy Wednesday to you. 🌹
April 16th, 2024 23:49
Cassie58 said:
Do-over. Like a makeover. I love the title Teddy. If you can turn darkness into light at almost the flick of a switch, then you are a miracle worker:) A thought provoking piece of brevity and I very much like your chosen artwork. Putting your best face forward when you feel like crap. That is what came to mind here Teddy. Happy Wednesday to you. 🌹
April 16th, 2024 23:49
Do-over
Doggerel Dave said:
Be careful Teddy - you feel like a right dodgy number there...😊
April 16th, 2024 18:37
Doggerel Dave said:
Be careful Teddy - you feel like a right dodgy number there...😊
April 16th, 2024 18:37
Sleeping Beauty
sorenbarrett said:
A great saying and even greater thought and mind set. So healthy to think this way. Loved it.
April 16th, 2024 03:57
sorenbarrett said:
A great saying and even greater thought and mind set. So healthy to think this way. Loved it.
April 16th, 2024 03:57
From Shakespeare with Love
sorenbarrett said:
Funny how a person can write something so iconic that after centuries it remains an archetype across the world. The power of the written word and the human mind is amazing. Your poem catches this spirit. I loved your line \" she was the painting within each page
woven with silk into ink\" Thanks so much for renewing the bard\'s memory.
April 16th, 2024 02:44
sorenbarrett said:
Funny how a person can write something so iconic that after centuries it remains an archetype across the world. The power of the written word and the human mind is amazing. Your poem catches this spirit. I loved your line \" she was the painting within each page
woven with silk into ink\" Thanks so much for renewing the bard\'s memory.
April 16th, 2024 02:44
From Shakespeare with Love
aDarkerMind said:
beautifully written Teddy
and very touching.
even my goosbumps loved it!
April 15th, 2024 14:44
aDarkerMind said:
beautifully written Teddy
and very touching.
even my goosbumps loved it!
April 15th, 2024 14:44
From Shakespeare with Love
Doggerel Dave said:
You always manage to get \'em in with your romance, Teddy.
I\'m contemplating a write about the Shakespeare dished up to me at school, which wasn\'t R & J or Much ado, but Hamlet, Macbeth and \"my kingdom for a horse\". All blood and guts. Preparation, not for love, but war!
April 15th, 2024 08:31
Doggerel Dave said:
You always manage to get \'em in with your romance, Teddy.
I\'m contemplating a write about the Shakespeare dished up to me at school, which wasn\'t R & J or Much ado, but Hamlet, Macbeth and \"my kingdom for a horse\". All blood and guts. Preparation, not for love, but war!
April 15th, 2024 08:31
My Darling London
Neville said:
I have a thing about Florence and I aint talking magic roundabout 🌹
April 15th, 2024 07:39
Neville said:
I have a thing about Florence and I aint talking magic roundabout 🌹
April 15th, 2024 07:39
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