Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
Senryu to Opera
Tom Dylan said:
A lovely little poem, Teddy. Happy Friday. :-)
February 9th, 2024 03:06
Tom Dylan said:
A lovely little poem, Teddy. Happy Friday. :-)
February 9th, 2024 03:06
Solitude
sorenbarrett said:
I often wonder how much of a poem is the poet. I write many that are not but most contain some part of me. The sadness in this poem rocks the core and urges me to shout out Do not give up, it is when the going is toughest that the peak of the mountain is near. It is out of struggles and pain that most good art is born. A lovely piece.
\"only she can hear the music
she stands alone to dance
writing poems and fables
in a poetry ridden trance\"
A wonderful stanza
February 8th, 2024 09:38
sorenbarrett said:
I often wonder how much of a poem is the poet. I write many that are not but most contain some part of me. The sadness in this poem rocks the core and urges me to shout out Do not give up, it is when the going is toughest that the peak of the mountain is near. It is out of struggles and pain that most good art is born. A lovely piece.
\"only she can hear the music
she stands alone to dance
writing poems and fables
in a poetry ridden trance\"
A wonderful stanza
February 8th, 2024 09:38
Butterflies are rare
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive words Teddy, may those butterflies come back to you.
Andy
February 8th, 2024 02:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive words Teddy, may those butterflies come back to you.
Andy
February 8th, 2024 02:28
Butterflies are rare
sorenbarrett said:
Not only rare but beautiful in color as they drop and raise. I find their different colors solace for the soul from the reads and yellows, whites and iridescent blues to ones that seem to try to communicate with numbers on their wings. A beautiful metaphor and poem.
February 7th, 2024 09:17
sorenbarrett said:
Not only rare but beautiful in color as they drop and raise. I find their different colors solace for the soul from the reads and yellows, whites and iridescent blues to ones that seem to try to communicate with numbers on their wings. A beautiful metaphor and poem.
February 7th, 2024 09:17
Butterflies are rare
Doggerel Dave said:
Upstairs somewhere you said you were a \'doomsday writer\', Teddy, I thought \'oh come on...\' My sense of humour must have momentarily left me.... Apologies...
A deeply romantic write.....
February 7th, 2024 07:03
Doggerel Dave said:
Upstairs somewhere you said you were a \'doomsday writer\', Teddy, I thought \'oh come on...\' My sense of humour must have momentarily left me.... Apologies...
A deeply romantic write.....
February 7th, 2024 07:03
Butterflies are rare
Neville said:
I enjoyed every single word, but as I reached the concluding line, I couldn\'t help but smile .. because I know for a fact that both butterflies and love are elusive & fragile and beautiful .. and .. ❤️
February 7th, 2024 06:16
Neville said:
I enjoyed every single word, but as I reached the concluding line, I couldn\'t help but smile .. because I know for a fact that both butterflies and love are elusive & fragile and beautiful .. and .. ❤️
February 7th, 2024 06:16
Butterflies are rare
Tom Dylan said:
A brilliant poem, just brilliant. The way it builds and builds to the last lines. Just fantastic.
February 7th, 2024 05:25
Tom Dylan said:
A brilliant poem, just brilliant. The way it builds and builds to the last lines. Just fantastic.
February 7th, 2024 05:25
The One Dreams are Made of
Goldfinch60 said:
Dream away Teddy, I am sure that Elvis would kiss you in his dreams as weill.
Andy
https://youtu.be/dsG5I3cuZmE?si=xmb3AMnsAea_Vz5r
February 7th, 2024 02:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Dream away Teddy, I am sure that Elvis would kiss you in his dreams as weill.
Andy
https://youtu.be/dsG5I3cuZmE?si=xmb3AMnsAea_Vz5r
February 7th, 2024 02:57
The One Dreams are Made of
Bella Shepard said:
Teddy, you had me \'goin here. I think I\'ll just believe it, cause it makes me smile all over. I love his ballads, and so do the ladies at the nursing home when we sing them together, we\'re of that age. Thank you for this beautiful fantasy, or was it?
February 6th, 2024 16:55
Bella Shepard said:
Teddy, you had me \'goin here. I think I\'ll just believe it, cause it makes me smile all over. I love his ballads, and so do the ladies at the nursing home when we sing them together, we\'re of that age. Thank you for this beautiful fantasy, or was it?
February 6th, 2024 16:55
The One Dreams are Made of
Thomas W Case said:
Very creative Teddy, now that would be an experience.
February 6th, 2024 12:07
Thomas W Case said:
Very creative Teddy, now that would be an experience.
February 6th, 2024 12:07
The One Dreams are Made of
Doggerel Dave said:
You tell a good yarn, Teddy. As I read with one side of my brain (never quite sure which side) the other was trying to summon dates, your age (your disclosure) and see if.. and then your very last line relieved me...and relief it woz...
February 6th, 2024 08:51
Doggerel Dave said:
You tell a good yarn, Teddy. As I read with one side of my brain (never quite sure which side) the other was trying to summon dates, your age (your disclosure) and see if.. and then your very last line relieved me...and relief it woz...
February 6th, 2024 08:51
The One Dreams are Made of
sorenbarrett said:
Dreams are wonderful things, the fuel of inspiration and drive that leads to accomplishments beyond what is otherwise possible. The are the healing salve for the soul. A wonderful imaginative write. Love Elvis songs and one that left us too soon.
February 6th, 2024 05:59
sorenbarrett said:
Dreams are wonderful things, the fuel of inspiration and drive that leads to accomplishments beyond what is otherwise possible. The are the healing salve for the soul. A wonderful imaginative write. Love Elvis songs and one that left us too soon.
February 6th, 2024 05:59
The One Dreams are Made of
Tom Dylan said:
Love this! Such imagination, Teddy. I do love Elvis too. :-)
February 6th, 2024 04:06
Tom Dylan said:
Love this! Such imagination, Teddy. I do love Elvis too. :-)
February 6th, 2024 04:06
Bigger Picture
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Teddy and yes we feel the seem way about being so lucky to be alive.
Andy
February 6th, 2024 02:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Teddy and yes we feel the seem way about being so lucky to be alive.
Andy
February 6th, 2024 02:32
Bigger Picture
Bella Shepard said:
Amazing, when a bus ride can conjure such incredible images. You have a gift for seeing beauty all around you, and weaving it into extraordinary verse. This poem is a genuine \"Teddy\"!!
February 5th, 2024 16:07
Bella Shepard said:
Amazing, when a bus ride can conjure such incredible images. You have a gift for seeing beauty all around you, and weaving it into extraordinary verse. This poem is a genuine \"Teddy\"!!
February 5th, 2024 16:07
Bigger Picture
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful imagery. Gratitude is so important. This is superb.
February 5th, 2024 10:20
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful imagery. Gratitude is so important. This is superb.
February 5th, 2024 10:20
Bigger Picture
Doggerel Dave said:
You tell us it was a bus, but i believe it might have been a carriage for you , Queen of that moment in time and a parade of your loyal senses....
Good stuff, Teddy.
February 5th, 2024 06:57
Doggerel Dave said:
You tell us it was a bus, but i believe it might have been a carriage for you , Queen of that moment in time and a parade of your loyal senses....
Good stuff, Teddy.
February 5th, 2024 06:57
Bigger Picture
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last line that says it so well
\"how very lucky I am just to be alive.
\"how very lucky I am just to be alive.\" like all the other beautiful things you mention, often taken for granted. A wonderful call for attention to all around us and gratitude. Very nice
February 5th, 2024 06:39
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last line that says it so well
\"how very lucky I am just to be alive.
\"how very lucky I am just to be alive.\" like all the other beautiful things you mention, often taken for granted. A wonderful call for attention to all around us and gratitude. Very nice
February 5th, 2024 06:39
Bigger Picture
Neville said:
now that\'s a mighty damned fine feeling isn\'t it .. I am sure I have passed this way before .. same route, same sky .. same Cyprus tree .. same peace of mind and very same dream .. that\'s what some poetry does for me Teddy .. thank you .. Neville
February 5th, 2024 06:22
Neville said:
now that\'s a mighty damned fine feeling isn\'t it .. I am sure I have passed this way before .. same route, same sky .. same Cyprus tree .. same peace of mind and very same dream .. that\'s what some poetry does for me Teddy .. thank you .. Neville
February 5th, 2024 06:22
Bigger Picture
peto said:
I want a ride on that bus route
Love how you view things and your gratitude for life
February 5th, 2024 06:02
peto said:
I want a ride on that bus route
Love how you view things and your gratitude for life
February 5th, 2024 06:02
Bigger Picture
Tom Dylan said:
Love this, Teddy. I could see those sunflowers. :-)
February 5th, 2024 04:25
Tom Dylan said:
Love this, Teddy. I could see those sunflowers. :-)
February 5th, 2024 04:25
Of Time and Of Love
Goldfinch60 said:
So true, that time machine can take us back to wondrous times Teddy.
Andy
February 5th, 2024 02:28
Goldfinch60 said:
So true, that time machine can take us back to wondrous times Teddy.
Andy
February 5th, 2024 02:28
Of Time and Of Love
Christina8 said:
Wonderful poem that creates a beautiful visual.
February 4th, 2024 16:04
Christina8 said:
Wonderful poem that creates a beautiful visual.
February 4th, 2024 16:04
Of Time and Of Love
Parisab said:
Creatively beautiful! Thanks for invite on the time machine! Bella Ciao!
February 4th, 2024 12:33
Parisab said:
Creatively beautiful! Thanks for invite on the time machine! Bella Ciao!
February 4th, 2024 12:33
Of Time and Of Love
Neville said:
there is more significance here than immediately meets the eye .. I got stuck in the late 19 somethings and feel like I am lost or left behind ..
a beautifully crafted poem nevatheless .. Neville
February 4th, 2024 11:10
Neville said:
there is more significance here than immediately meets the eye .. I got stuck in the late 19 somethings and feel like I am lost or left behind ..
a beautifully crafted poem nevatheless .. Neville
February 4th, 2024 11:10
Of Time and Of Love
sorenbarrett said:
Such a great idea seeing memory as a time machine. This may be more true than apparent. The movie \"somewhere in time\" brings this to mind. So beautifully stated by you in this wonderful piece.
February 4th, 2024 09:57
sorenbarrett said:
Such a great idea seeing memory as a time machine. This may be more true than apparent. The movie \"somewhere in time\" brings this to mind. So beautifully stated by you in this wonderful piece.
February 4th, 2024 09:57
senryu to Gaza
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful senryu Teddy and so meaningful in these dreadful times.
Andy
February 4th, 2024 02:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful senryu Teddy and so meaningful in these dreadful times.
Andy
February 4th, 2024 02:22
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