One Brighter Day
Goldfinch60 said:

A very profound write Kevin and your words \"(not found in church, with steeple)\" are so meaningful as organised religion is a farce, I dismissed organised religion when my wife was taken from me by dementia and eventually passed. She had been singing the christian praises all her life, I was a Chaplain at one point but once I dismissed organise religion it was as though a weight ha been lifted from me.
I still believe in god, but it is my god. I also believe that Jesus existed but look upon him as the first Hippie making love not war.

As Dave Allen always said \"May your God go with you\"

Andy

January 3rd, 2021 02:06

One Brighter Day
Fay Slimm. said:

A piece of honest and very well rhymed appeal which not only moves the heart of this reader but will inspire those who lonely need its penned advice. A fine write Kevin.

January 2nd, 2021 06:53

Happy New Year!
Poetic Dan said:

As it has always been! As simply said do it die my friend!

May we keep doing the do for as long as we can!

Much peace and respect!
Little can be grand...

January 1st, 2021 08:10

Shadowland
Jerry Reynolds said:

Very good read. Have a Happy Holiday and Stay Safe.

December 24th, 2020 16:48

Lovesick lines composed on a rainy day
Robert Southwick Richmond said:

The first poem I\'ve read on MyPoeticSide where the middle-axis line justification seems to work with the poem, which is really well-constructed metrically.

I don\'t use middle-axis myself - it can be quite a chore to get MyPoeticSide to left-justify.

\"If we\'d only knew\" is ungrammatical.

December 19th, 2020 16:22

Lovesick lines composed on a rainy day
FredPeyer said:

Well written, Kevin, one can feel the pain.

December 19th, 2020 12:19

Poet of the Peaks
L. B. Mek said:

You\'re a rare Poet, I\'ll proudly admit
as I witness each line of truth, your finger\'s bleed,
to serenade aching heart\'s, you\'ve never met
and share that solace, you\'ve mined from within...
what a wonderful melody you\'ve weaved dear Poet,
thank you for sharing, Happy Holidays

December 18th, 2020 05:35

Poet of the Peaks
Robert Southwick Richmond said:

I\'ve been on MyPoeticSide just three days. You actually know how to write a poem! And you have a real name. Let\'s follow each other.

Including how to format on this WordPress site. You can even evade the middle axis, though it takes work.

Right now I\'m playing with the format.

December 17th, 2020 20:38

Poet of the Peaks
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good read. Have a Happy Holiday

December 17th, 2020 17:38

Lines composed on a summer\'s day walk in the Manifold Valley
L. B. Mek said:

good read, like the imagery and relatability

November 30th, 2020 05:59

Lines composed on a summer\'s day walk in the Manifold Valley
RDS said:

Nice contemplations and a good read Kevin. Yes it\'s clear you spent an hour listening to a field of flowers growing as it nearly takes that long to get your ear in. It\'s a bit like night vision that takes a bit of time to tune in.
Thanks man!
J

November 29th, 2020 11:35

Home To Roost
L. B. Mek said:

purely from a poetic perspective this is a good write, unfiltered in detail but smooth in tempo and with seamless flow,
thanks for sharing

November 27th, 2020 02:53

Sorrow\'s Season
L. B. Mek said:

good read,
rare to come across conversational themed works so this was a nice change of pace,
sorry for your loss, glad you had someone to lean on

November 26th, 2020 04:24

A Special Poet Friend of Mine
orchidee said:

Oohh, you mean me?! heehee. I\'m getting too big for me boots! lol.

November 24th, 2020 02:58

November in England
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Good Evening Kevin ~ Brian here ~ Essex is about 200 miles South of Buxton so Autumn is a bit Milder & Dryer ! But we dont have many hills so the Autumn Scenary is nice (in Essex) but less picturesque than the Peak District. I like BUXTON and a few yeras ago we used to visit for the G & S Festival in the Theatre. We stayed on the other side of the Park and walked across each Evening for the Show. Its now moved to Harrogate another nice Market Town ! I lived in Leeds for a While and that could be quite Wintery in November. Lovely tribute to November in Buxton ~ Thanks for sharing. Please check our site.

Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey Cat !!!

November 22nd, 2020 14:25