Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA



JOY & STRENGTH IN GOD\'S PRESENCE ~ A Sonnet
orchidee said:

Good write. Many Psalms lend themselves to praise, song, etc. Some can be tricky - with vengeance themes, etc. Yet they have their place too - overcoming enemies, etc shown in physical terms. We should not pick and choose really, but pick out the \'nice\' ones! heehee.

March 5th, 2017 04:21

JOY & STRENGTH IN GOD\'S PRESENCE ~ A Sonnet
Goldfinch60 said:

Good Faith filled write. May The Lord be with you.

March 5th, 2017 03:57

C A T E R P I L L A R S ~ Awesome Critters !
Augustus said:

I prefer my cabbage without holes but I am willing to share. Just say a beautiful Monarch yesterday. Nice.

March 4th, 2017 16:54

C A T E R P I L L A R S ~ Awesome Critters !
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write but even some of the UK caterpillars are a bit dangerous.

March 4th, 2017 14:32

C A T E R P I L L A R S ~ Awesome Critters !
Christina8 said:

What a wonderful write. They teach the preschoolers about the lifecycle of a butterfly here. Very interesting. At any age! Hugs-Christina

March 4th, 2017 10:57

C A T E R P I L L A R S ~ Awesome Critters !
willyweed said:

I am more familiar with the heavy equipment type but this was nice Brian.

March 4th, 2017 09:04

C A T E R P I L L A R S ~ Awesome Critters !
Michael Edwards said:

Great one Brian but some caterpillars do bite and some have hairy poisonous bristles or whiskers or whatever they call them. Looking forward to seeing the first Brimstone - should be about quite soon - mid- march last year.

March 4th, 2017 06:17

A N G E L A A R B O L E S ~ A Very Lovely Lady !
Augustus said:

\"With enough Spanish to incinerate\" love it! By the way, Love is a many splendored thing. One of my favs. It\'s the April Rose that only grows in the early spring. Love is natures way of giving, a reason to be living, the golden crown that makes a man a king..... enjoyed.

March 3rd, 2017 18:04

A N G E L A A R B O L E S ~ A Very Lovely Lady !
Christina8 said:

Very lucky lady! Can tell you are quite smitten with her. And I\'m sure she feels the same for you! Wonderful acrostic on a beautiful girl-inside and out!

March 3rd, 2017 11:33

THE HOUSE OF LORDS ~ AT WORK ?
rschnei said:

Really nice poem! I like the rhythm, I like the theme! It\'s interesting to think about how difficult it\'s to have a participatory democracy. The lack of time, technical knowledge and expertise of most voters justify trusting representatives to do the job. However, if we (voters) do not show interest and the representative feels there is no accountability, then we may end up with a government that do not represent ourselves...

March 3rd, 2017 10:34

A N G E L A A R B O L E S ~ A Very Lovely Lady !
Tony36 said:

Wonderfully beautiful and expressed write

March 3rd, 2017 08:13

A N G E L A A R B O L E S ~ A Very Lovely Lady !
Fay Slimm. said:

A romantic and tender expression to a beautiful and well loved lady.

March 3rd, 2017 05:03

A N G E L A A R B O L E S ~ A Very Lovely Lady !
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful write Brian, may your love travel onto infinity and beyond.

March 3rd, 2017 03:20

FIVE FRUITS A DAY ~ HELP YOU WORK REST & PLAY !
Tony36 said:

Great write

March 2nd, 2017 19:44

FIVE FRUITS A DAY ~ HELP YOU WORK REST & PLAY !
Augustus said:

We are so fortunate today. We eat better than kings of past centuries.
Again well done.

March 2nd, 2017 12:15

FIVE FRUITS A DAY ~ HELP YOU WORK REST & PLAY !
WriteBeLight said:

Very sweet and healthy Brian.

March 2nd, 2017 12:08

FIVE FRUITS A DAY ~ HELP YOU WORK REST & PLAY !
Christina8 said:

I can\'t quite stay on top of all the five a day. Produce is very expensive. And my husband eats all the bananas. We do love apples and raspberries and strawberries and other seasonal fruits. Nice write!

March 2nd, 2017 08:01

FIVE FRUITS A DAY ~ HELP YOU WORK REST & PLAY !
Michael Edwards said:

Brilliant Brian - love the banana one

March 2nd, 2017 06:31

FIVE FRUITS A DAY ~ HELP YOU WORK REST & PLAY !
willyweed said:

what about juicy fruit gum...anything!
fruit is great for munchies

March 2nd, 2017 05:54

FIVE FRUITS A DAY ~ HELP YOU WORK REST & PLAY !
Goldfinch60 said:

My daily lunch consists of one hone made roll with some cheese and a tomato followed by:
1 banana
1 clementine
1 plum
1 pear (or apple)
1 small bunch of grapes

I have been doing that for more years than I care to remember.

So yes I am getting my 5 a day, the veg comes in the evening!

March 2nd, 2017 03:59

DOCTOR HE SAY ~ 5 VEGGIE A DAY ~ HAIKU
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, I eat any veg and fruit and meat and anything else that is put in front of me. BUT I am a great believer in everything in moderation.

March 2nd, 2017 01:17

DOCTOR HE SAY ~ 5 VEGGIE A DAY ~ HAIKU
Augustus said:

You are spot on about what the latest science has proven. A haiku of information.

March 1st, 2017 20:05

DOCTOR HE SAY ~ 5 VEGGIE A DAY ~ HAIKU
Jooles said:

This made me smile...im a vegetarian do appreciate a poem about veg 😄 good fun

March 1st, 2017 16:55

DOCTOR HE SAY ~ 5 VEGGIE A DAY ~ HAIKU
Tony36 said:

Fruit and vegetables grown fresh on the farm or at the store. I eat my share. Tasty right

March 1st, 2017 15:54

DOCTOR HE SAY ~ 5 VEGGIE A DAY ~ HAIKU
Christina8 said:

Very good write! I love fruits and veggies. I try to eat as much of them as I can. Very cute poem. I loved it!--Hugs--Christina

March 1st, 2017 15:03

DOCTOR HE SAY ~ 5 VEGGIE A DAY ~ HAIKU
willyweed said:

I love veggies quit meat last month for good and its all good!

March 1st, 2017 14:06

DOCTOR HE SAY ~ 5 VEGGIE A DAY ~ HAIKU
Michael Edwards said:

Although not a veg
I really like tomatoes
all juicy and red.

I like your five haikus too Brian - good for 5-a-day. Must add that if only I could eat 10 a day I would need a much larger stomach. But then it all depends on the size of the portions.

March 1st, 2017 13:41

O P P O R T U N I T Y ~ An Acrostic
this_girl said:

I like this. Very true.

March 1st, 2017 00:36

A D R E A M V A C A T I O N ! An Acrostic Sonnet
Augustus said:

A man well traveled. Some of our cities today in the US are like visiting foreign countries like China Town in San Francisco or the Korean section of Los Angeles. Nicely done.

February 28th, 2017 18:12

A D R E A M V A C A T I O N ! An Acrostic Sonnet
WriteBeLight said:

I often think of the places I would travel if I had the time and money. Great work Brian.

February 28th, 2017 12:37



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