FIVE FRUITS A DAY ~ HELP YOU WORK REST & PLAY !
Christina8 said:

I can\'t quite stay on top of all the five a day. Produce is very expensive. And my husband eats all the bananas. We do love apples and raspberries and strawberries and other seasonal fruits. Nice write!

March 2nd, 2017 08:01

FIVE FRUITS A DAY ~ HELP YOU WORK REST & PLAY !
willyweed said:

what about juicy fruit gum...anything!
fruit is great for munchies

March 2nd, 2017 05:54

DOCTOR HE SAY ~ 5 VEGGIE A DAY ~ HAIKU
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, I eat any veg and fruit and meat and anything else that is put in front of me. BUT I am a great believer in everything in moderation.

March 2nd, 2017 01:17

DOCTOR HE SAY ~ 5 VEGGIE A DAY ~ HAIKU
Jooles said:

This made me smile...im a vegetarian do appreciate a poem about veg 😄 good fun

March 1st, 2017 16:55

DOCTOR HE SAY ~ 5 VEGGIE A DAY ~ HAIKU
Christina8 said:

Very good write! I love fruits and veggies. I try to eat as much of them as I can. Very cute poem. I loved it!--Hugs--Christina

March 1st, 2017 15:03

DOCTOR HE SAY ~ 5 VEGGIE A DAY ~ HAIKU
Michael Edwards said:

Although not a veg
I really like tomatoes
all juicy and red.

I like your five haikus too Brian - good for 5-a-day. Must add that if only I could eat 10 a day I would need a much larger stomach. But then it all depends on the size of the portions.

March 1st, 2017 13:41

A D R E A M V A C A T I O N ! An Acrostic Sonnet
Augustus said:

A man well traveled. Some of our cities today in the US are like visiting foreign countries like China Town in San Francisco or the Korean section of Los Angeles. Nicely done.

February 28th, 2017 18:12

A D R E A M V A C A T I O N ! An Acrostic Sonnet
Michael Edwards said:

Been to most but not Madagasca - love the European capitals - but to chose it would be Italy for the exceptional architecture - great write Brian.

February 28th, 2017 11:41

A D R E A M V A C A T I O N ! An Acrostic Sonnet
Tony36 said:

Great write

February 28th, 2017 09:11

A D R E A M V A C A T I O N ! An Acrostic Sonnet
willyweed said:

you are quite the world traveler Brian
nice very nice.

February 28th, 2017 05:58

OCTOPUS ~ SUPOTCO ~ A Reverse Sonnet
Краснов Аа said:

Собой прекрасен осьминог -
Восьмиконечная звезда
Как клюв от птицы его рот
И видят всё его глаза

Что толку- в щель забился краб,
Простой такой совсем сюрприз -
Сквозь щель сочится плоть и цап, -
На то она, скажу, и жизнь

Собой прекрасен осьминог -
Восьмиконечная звезда,
Как хорошо, что восемь ног
Меня не схватят никогда
-
Переложил, не перевёл, на русский

February 27th, 2017 13:58

OCTOPUS ~ SUPOTCO ~ A Reverse Sonnet
Christina8 said:

I think octupuses are wonderful to look at, but the poor male! Great reverse acrostic! They are beautiful when they change color to match their environment. Awesome job making it rhyme! Hugs-Christina

February 27th, 2017 09:47

LET US ALL PRAISE GOD ~ A Sonnet
Reivax Camlost said:

I would enquire as to what exact style of sonnet you speak of. I know it\'s not a petrarchan sonnet, also known as the Italian sonnet, with a rhyme scheme A, B, B, A, A, B, B, A, followed by a sestet of 6 lines featuring their own special rhyme scheme.

February 27th, 2017 07:42

OCTOPUS ~ SUPOTCO ~ A Reverse Sonnet
willyweed said:

I\'d like to be under the sea in an octopuses garden in the shade, plus I had the crabs once in Asia still can\'t figure how they got into my pants? nice poem Brian Potent mix of work! ISLU WW

February 27th, 2017 04:01

OCTOPUS ~ SUPOTCO ~ A Reverse Sonnet
Goldfinch60 said:

Brian this is a very good acrostic and reverse acrostic. Octopuses are, as you say, fascinating creatures and although I have only seen a captive one and those on the television they never cease to amaze.

February 27th, 2017 03:21