Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA
A D R E A M V A C A T I O N ! An Acrostic Sonnet
Michael Edwards said:
Been to most but not Madagasca - love the European capitals - but to chose it would be Italy for the exceptional architecture - great write Brian.
February 28th, 2017 11:41
Michael Edwards said:
Been to most but not Madagasca - love the European capitals - but to chose it would be Italy for the exceptional architecture - great write Brian.
February 28th, 2017 11:41
A D R E A M V A C A T I O N ! An Acrostic Sonnet
Christina8 said:
I\'d like to visit England and Scotland and Ireland. Italy and France would be great too! Great poem.
February 28th, 2017 11:22
Christina8 said:
I\'d like to visit England and Scotland and Ireland. Italy and France would be great too! Great poem.
February 28th, 2017 11:22
A D R E A M V A C A T I O N ! An Acrostic Sonnet
Goldfinch60 said:
I have enough problems seeing all the glory in the British Isles. Good write.
February 28th, 2017 06:04
Goldfinch60 said:
I have enough problems seeing all the glory in the British Isles. Good write.
February 28th, 2017 06:04
A D R E A M V A C A T I O N ! An Acrostic Sonnet
willyweed said:
you are quite the world traveler Brian
nice very nice.
February 28th, 2017 05:58
willyweed said:
you are quite the world traveler Brian
nice very nice.
February 28th, 2017 05:58
OCTOPUS ~ SUPOTCO ~ A Reverse Sonnet
TamzinBlythe said:
Very clever! It made me smile because it was very sweet.
I am sure the octopie are flattered.
February 27th, 2017 23:08
TamzinBlythe said:
Very clever! It made me smile because it was very sweet.
I am sure the octopie are flattered.
February 27th, 2017 23:08
OCTOPUS ~ SUPOTCO ~ A Reverse Sonnet
Краснов Аа said:
Собой прекрасен осьминог -
Восьмиконечная звезда
Как клюв от птицы его рот
И видят всё его глаза
Что толку- в щель забился краб,
Простой такой совсем сюрприз -
Сквозь щель сочится плоть и цап, -
На то она, скажу, и жизнь
Собой прекрасен осьминог -
Восьмиконечная звезда,
Как хорошо, что восемь ног
Меня не схватят никогда
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Переложил, не перевёл, на русский
February 27th, 2017 13:58
Краснов Аа said:
Собой прекрасен осьминог -
Восьмиконечная звезда
Как клюв от птицы его рот
И видят всё его глаза
Что толку- в щель забился краб,
Простой такой совсем сюрприз -
Сквозь щель сочится плоть и цап, -
На то она, скажу, и жизнь
Собой прекрасен осьминог -
Восьмиконечная звезда,
Как хорошо, что восемь ног
Меня не схватят никогда
-
Переложил, не перевёл, на русский
February 27th, 2017 13:58
OCTOPUS ~ SUPOTCO ~ A Reverse Sonnet
Christina8 said:
I think octupuses are wonderful to look at, but the poor male! Great reverse acrostic! They are beautiful when they change color to match their environment. Awesome job making it rhyme! Hugs-Christina
February 27th, 2017 09:47
Christina8 said:
I think octupuses are wonderful to look at, but the poor male! Great reverse acrostic! They are beautiful when they change color to match their environment. Awesome job making it rhyme! Hugs-Christina
February 27th, 2017 09:47
LET US ALL PRAISE GOD ~ A Sonnet
Reivax Camlost said:
I would enquire as to what exact style of sonnet you speak of. I know it\'s not a petrarchan sonnet, also known as the Italian sonnet, with a rhyme scheme A, B, B, A, A, B, B, A, followed by a sestet of 6 lines featuring their own special rhyme scheme.
February 27th, 2017 07:42
Reivax Camlost said:
I would enquire as to what exact style of sonnet you speak of. I know it\'s not a petrarchan sonnet, also known as the Italian sonnet, with a rhyme scheme A, B, B, A, A, B, B, A, followed by a sestet of 6 lines featuring their own special rhyme scheme.
February 27th, 2017 07:42
OCTOPUS ~ SUPOTCO ~ A Reverse Sonnet
WriteBeLight said:
Very clever Brian. Scary picture.
February 27th, 2017 06:37
WriteBeLight said:
Very clever Brian. Scary picture.
February 27th, 2017 06:37
OCTOPUS ~ SUPOTCO ~ A Reverse Sonnet
willyweed said:
I\'d like to be under the sea in an octopuses garden in the shade, plus I had the crabs once in Asia still can\'t figure how they got into my pants? nice poem Brian Potent mix of work! ISLU WW
February 27th, 2017 04:01
willyweed said:
I\'d like to be under the sea in an octopuses garden in the shade, plus I had the crabs once in Asia still can\'t figure how they got into my pants? nice poem Brian Potent mix of work! ISLU WW
February 27th, 2017 04:01
OCTOPUS ~ SUPOTCO ~ A Reverse Sonnet
Michael Edwards said:
If I were an octopus I\'d want to be impotent - great acrostic Brian
February 27th, 2017 03:46
Michael Edwards said:
If I were an octopus I\'d want to be impotent - great acrostic Brian
February 27th, 2017 03:46
OCTOPUS ~ SUPOTCO ~ A Reverse Sonnet
Goldfinch60 said:
Brian this is a very good acrostic and reverse acrostic. Octopuses are, as you say, fascinating creatures and although I have only seen a captive one and those on the television they never cease to amaze.
February 27th, 2017 03:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Brian this is a very good acrostic and reverse acrostic. Octopuses are, as you say, fascinating creatures and although I have only seen a captive one and those on the television they never cease to amaze.
February 27th, 2017 03:21
LET US ALL PRAISE GOD ~ A Sonnet
Augustus said:
\"From Whom all blessings flow\". Thanks.
February 26th, 2017 15:59
Augustus said:
\"From Whom all blessings flow\". Thanks.
February 26th, 2017 15:59
LET US ALL PRAISE GOD ~ A Sonnet
The lonely poet said:
I am totally un decided on whether I believe in any religion I think your poem is very well written and I like it a lot I don\'t think my not believing in a religion makes me a bad person I am an extremely loving and devoted father but my head is very messed up maybe if there is a supreme being this is my punishment for not believing I really hope I haven\'t offended any one on this site by my views as I really mean no malice towards any religion or person peace to all
February 26th, 2017 15:03
The lonely poet said:
I am totally un decided on whether I believe in any religion I think your poem is very well written and I like it a lot I don\'t think my not believing in a religion makes me a bad person I am an extremely loving and devoted father but my head is very messed up maybe if there is a supreme being this is my punishment for not believing I really hope I haven\'t offended any one on this site by my views as I really mean no malice towards any religion or person peace to all
February 26th, 2017 15:03
LET US ALL PRAISE GOD ~ A Sonnet
rrodriguez said:
Thank you Brian for your sonnet of praise. I will certain lookout the window and say, OMG, God is great!
February 26th, 2017 11:32
rrodriguez said:
Thank you Brian for your sonnet of praise. I will certain lookout the window and say, OMG, God is great!
February 26th, 2017 11:32
LET US ALL PRAISE GOD ~ A Sonnet
AtheistAngel- Daniel Mc\'leod said:
Theres a lot of heart in this piece.
February 26th, 2017 10:28
AtheistAngel- Daniel Mc\'leod said:
Theres a lot of heart in this piece.
February 26th, 2017 10:28
LET US ALL PRAISE GOD ~ A Sonnet
Christina8 said:
Wonderful poem, Brian. Thanks for another beautiful sunday poem and reminding us about Gods love. Spiritual hugs-Christina
February 26th, 2017 09:21
Christina8 said:
Wonderful poem, Brian. Thanks for another beautiful sunday poem and reminding us about Gods love. Spiritual hugs-Christina
February 26th, 2017 09:21
LET US ALL PRAISE GOD ~ A Sonnet
gelyn said:
Because it\'s Sunday, this one is worth reading....Praise God for all the beautiful things he created dedicated for the humankind. ..Thanks for sharing this lovely write...
Gel
February 26th, 2017 08:18
gelyn said:
Because it\'s Sunday, this one is worth reading....Praise God for all the beautiful things he created dedicated for the humankind. ..Thanks for sharing this lovely write...
Gel
February 26th, 2017 08:18
LET US ALL PRAISE GOD ~ A Sonnet
willyweed said:
Amen and Bless you too Brian! ww
February 26th, 2017 07:13
willyweed said:
Amen and Bless you too Brian! ww
February 26th, 2017 07:13
LET US ALL PRAISE GOD ~ A Sonnet
WriteBeLight said:
Another great Sunday write.
February 26th, 2017 06:58
WriteBeLight said:
Another great Sunday write.
February 26th, 2017 06:58
LET US ALL PRAISE GOD ~ A Sonnet
Fay Slimm. said:
A tribute to a faith that is brimming with life - agreed wholeheartedly that the whole earth is a glory of God\'s creation. Thank you for sharing it Brian.
February 26th, 2017 06:29
Fay Slimm. said:
A tribute to a faith that is brimming with life - agreed wholeheartedly that the whole earth is a glory of God\'s creation. Thank you for sharing it Brian.
February 26th, 2017 06:29
LET US ALL PRAISE GOD ~ A Sonnet
Elbeanzio said:
Love the flow of the poem. Very enjoyable read.
Playing devils advocate (no pun intended), there\'s no question in my mind that there is an intelligent order to the universe. But for any chance of world peace, we would have have to acknowledge that maybe there\'s not just one story to the whole case of religion. If the bible (New Testament) was used as spiritual guide for all people, and was followed, the world would unquestionably be a better place. The Old Testament on the other hand, I pray (keeping with the theme) that the god in that book doesn\'t exist, as he is nothing short of a very malicious psychopath. (To anyone posting, please do not blindly criticise if you haven\'t read it)
I know I\'m going to put a lot of noses out of joint with my opinion, but accepting people\'s opinion as just their own without having to condem it, is surely a behaviour a child of god would practice. Anyway, allowing our imagination to wander is a gift from god, and it\'s rude to not accept a gift. Thinking outside the confines of religion would surely allow us to make an informed choice on believing. Keep up the good work ✌️️
February 26th, 2017 05:05
Elbeanzio said:
Love the flow of the poem. Very enjoyable read.
Playing devils advocate (no pun intended), there\'s no question in my mind that there is an intelligent order to the universe. But for any chance of world peace, we would have have to acknowledge that maybe there\'s not just one story to the whole case of religion. If the bible (New Testament) was used as spiritual guide for all people, and was followed, the world would unquestionably be a better place. The Old Testament on the other hand, I pray (keeping with the theme) that the god in that book doesn\'t exist, as he is nothing short of a very malicious psychopath. (To anyone posting, please do not blindly criticise if you haven\'t read it)
I know I\'m going to put a lot of noses out of joint with my opinion, but accepting people\'s opinion as just their own without having to condem it, is surely a behaviour a child of god would practice. Anyway, allowing our imagination to wander is a gift from god, and it\'s rude to not accept a gift. Thinking outside the confines of religion would surely allow us to make an informed choice on believing. Keep up the good work ✌️️
February 26th, 2017 05:05
LET US ALL PRAISE GOD ~ A Sonnet
orchidee said:
Great write. Humans would burn up on Mars or Venus, wouldn\'t they?!
February 26th, 2017 04:52
orchidee said:
Great write. Humans would burn up on Mars or Venus, wouldn\'t they?!
February 26th, 2017 04:52
LET US ALL PRAISE GOD ~ A Sonnet
Goldfinch60 said:
Good faith filled write Brian, it\'s a pity Homo Sapiens think they know better.
February 26th, 2017 03:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Good faith filled write Brian, it\'s a pity Homo Sapiens think they know better.
February 26th, 2017 03:34
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