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LADIES\' DAY 2017 ~ A Sonnet
Goldfinch60 said:

What would we do without them? Good write.

March 7th, 2017 04:51

LADIES\' DAY 2017 ~ A Sonnet
Michael Edwards said:

Great one Brian - I just wish they wouldn\'t wear those oh so silly \'hats\' - especially the ones that serve no purpose at all and are erroneously called fascinators.

March 7th, 2017 03:12

I DO LOVE TO VISIT ~ THE US of A ~ A Villanelle
Augustus said:

Kudos to our seasoned traveler. At this point the Vilanelle is a little too challenging for me. Nicely done.

March 6th, 2017 18:00

JOY & STRENGTH IN GOD\'S PRESENCE ~ A Sonnet
Christina8 said:

Nice poem!. I know the lord knew how I felt when you wrote this. Get up and go to church! I always feel better after worship. Thanks for sharing this fine write. Hugs--Christina

March 6th, 2017 10:10

I DO LOVE TO VISIT ~ THE US of A ~ A Villanelle
Christina8 said:

This was a really clever rhyme- never heard of a villanelle! I promise they don\'t all look alike! You gotta get to some of the smaller towns to see some real beauties! Very nice poem! Hugs-Christina

March 6th, 2017 10:06

I DO LOVE TO VISIT ~ THE US of A ~ A Villanelle
WG7 said:

Yeah personally I can\'t wait to leave the US because once I turn 18 and done with highschool I\'m going to take all the money I\'ve saved and saving to travel the world. By myself because the US is filled with ass holes who are so full of themselves. Although not all places are like it. I mean Missouri isn\'t that bad, but the weather changes all the time. It could be sunny in the morning and snowing in the evening. It\'s possible and It\'s happened before. Though with Trump as president I\'m not sure I\'ll be able to travel the world. Hope you have a fun time traveling to the whole US. This is a great poem. Love it!

March 6th, 2017 09:37

I DO LOVE TO VISIT ~ THE US of A ~ A Villanelle
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, I have never been to the USA but y elder granddaughter has and she loved it, especially Oklahoma and when she has completed her Masters she intends to go to Oklahoma to do her PhD. Maybe I will be able to visit her.

March 6th, 2017 09:04

I DO LOVE TO VISIT ~ THE US of A ~ A Villanelle
Michael Edwards said:

Love the construction Brian but a bit daunting to have a go.

March 6th, 2017 08:57

I DO LOVE TO VISIT ~ THE US of A ~ A Villanelle
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed Great write

March 6th, 2017 08:50

I DO LOVE TO VISIT ~ THE US of A ~ A Villanelle
Fay Slimm. said:

Reading through this fine villanelle I am now more than ready to visit those faraway places so well described Brian. First rate write.

March 6th, 2017 08:36

I DO LOVE TO VISIT ~ THE US of A ~ A Villanelle
WriteBeLight said:

I love my country. Nice one Brian.

March 6th, 2017 06:36

I DO LOVE TO VISIT ~ THE US of A ~ A Villanelle
willyweed said:

I\'m going to visit England and Scotland and Ireland end of this 2017 summer!

March 6th, 2017 05:43

C A T E R P I L L A R S ~ Awesome Critters !
mariebonilla099 said:

This is really good I hope to see more of your writing

March 5th, 2017 10:28

JOY & STRENGTH IN GOD\'S PRESENCE ~ A Sonnet
willyweed said:

I for one will never forget him again... we are good buddies now!

March 5th, 2017 07:33

JOY & STRENGTH IN GOD\'S PRESENCE ~ A Sonnet
orchidee said:

Good write. Many Psalms lend themselves to praise, song, etc. Some can be tricky - with vengeance themes, etc. Yet they have their place too - overcoming enemies, etc shown in physical terms. We should not pick and choose really, but pick out the \'nice\' ones! heehee.

March 5th, 2017 04:21

JOY & STRENGTH IN GOD\'S PRESENCE ~ A Sonnet
Goldfinch60 said:

Good Faith filled write. May The Lord be with you.

March 5th, 2017 03:57

C A T E R P I L L A R S ~ Awesome Critters !
Augustus said:

I prefer my cabbage without holes but I am willing to share. Just say a beautiful Monarch yesterday. Nice.

March 4th, 2017 16:54

C A T E R P I L L A R S ~ Awesome Critters !
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write but even some of the UK caterpillars are a bit dangerous.

March 4th, 2017 14:32

C A T E R P I L L A R S ~ Awesome Critters !
Christina8 said:

What a wonderful write. They teach the preschoolers about the lifecycle of a butterfly here. Very interesting. At any age! Hugs-Christina

March 4th, 2017 10:57

C A T E R P I L L A R S ~ Awesome Critters !
willyweed said:

I am more familiar with the heavy equipment type but this was nice Brian.

March 4th, 2017 09:04

C A T E R P I L L A R S ~ Awesome Critters !
Michael Edwards said:

Great one Brian but some caterpillars do bite and some have hairy poisonous bristles or whiskers or whatever they call them. Looking forward to seeing the first Brimstone - should be about quite soon - mid- march last year.

March 4th, 2017 06:17

A N G E L A A R B O L E S ~ A Very Lovely Lady !
Augustus said:

\"With enough Spanish to incinerate\" love it! By the way, Love is a many splendored thing. One of my favs. It\'s the April Rose that only grows in the early spring. Love is natures way of giving, a reason to be living, the golden crown that makes a man a king..... enjoyed.

March 3rd, 2017 18:04

A N G E L A A R B O L E S ~ A Very Lovely Lady !
Christina8 said:

Very lucky lady! Can tell you are quite smitten with her. And I\'m sure she feels the same for you! Wonderful acrostic on a beautiful girl-inside and out!

March 3rd, 2017 11:33

THE HOUSE OF LORDS ~ AT WORK ?
rschnei said:

Really nice poem! I like the rhythm, I like the theme! It\'s interesting to think about how difficult it\'s to have a participatory democracy. The lack of time, technical knowledge and expertise of most voters justify trusting representatives to do the job. However, if we (voters) do not show interest and the representative feels there is no accountability, then we may end up with a government that do not represent ourselves...

March 3rd, 2017 10:34

A N G E L A A R B O L E S ~ A Very Lovely Lady !
Tony36 said:

Wonderfully beautiful and expressed write

March 3rd, 2017 08:13

A N G E L A A R B O L E S ~ A Very Lovely Lady !
Fay Slimm. said:

A romantic and tender expression to a beautiful and well loved lady.

March 3rd, 2017 05:03

A N G E L A A R B O L E S ~ A Very Lovely Lady !
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful write Brian, may your love travel onto infinity and beyond.

March 3rd, 2017 03:20

FIVE FRUITS A DAY ~ HELP YOU WORK REST & PLAY !
Tony36 said:

Great write

March 2nd, 2017 19:44

FIVE FRUITS A DAY ~ HELP YOU WORK REST & PLAY !
Augustus said:

We are so fortunate today. We eat better than kings of past centuries.
Again well done.

March 2nd, 2017 12:15

FIVE FRUITS A DAY ~ HELP YOU WORK REST & PLAY !
WriteBeLight said:

Very sweet and healthy Brian.

March 2nd, 2017 12:08



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