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NOW THAT I\'M OLD ~ A SCOTS PERSPECTIVE !
orchidee said:

But you is not old! You is only a couple of years past 21! heehee.

April 17th, 2018 08:24

NOW THAT I\'M OLD ~ A SCOTS PERSPECTIVE !
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

\"When milk has been spilt\" wow aye bard this is so poetic and entertaining in Scottish vernacular, I understand it nicely enough coz my friend is a Scott poetess who writes quite like this way. Kudos.

Nice to read from u again, glad to say hi and Pleez do review, give your thoughts as to my newest poem too.

April 17th, 2018 07:03

NOW THAT I\'M OLD ~ A SCOTS PERSPECTIVE !
Lorna said:

Oh I do just love this! My grandfather (who I never met as he died before I could) was a Scot! Henry Fergus Traille Grant - how\'s that for the Highlands..... Anyway I grew up loving \"the ladies from Hades\" (bagpipes)...... and my mother took us to Scottish Games on the Fourth of July here in the US - in lieu of fireworks - We were watching the tossing of tabers .... Just love your work here. The video was similar to the \"Black Watch\" that came to Madison Square Garden when I was a kid .... aren\'t they thrilling! I can see going to battle with them playing!

April 17th, 2018 05:52

NOW THAT I\'M OLD ~ A SCOTS PERSPECTIVE !
orchidee said:

Ohh, a swoony verse there with the kilt! Och, a fine McPoem Brian. That\'s my extent of being Scottish - a feeble attempt! lol.

April 17th, 2018 03:49

N ATURE\'S RAINBOW ~ COLLABORATION MAXINE & BRIAN
Christina8 said:

Congrats to you both on making a wonderful collab. poem!! In the dreary snow, I was delighted to see all the colors! Great job!

April 16th, 2018 13:34

N ATURE\'S RAINBOW ~ COLLABORATION MAXINE & BRIAN
Fay Slimm. said:

Loud applause for this colourful rhyming by a wonderful duo - - congrats on achieving the tints of a rainbow in poetic balance.

April 16th, 2018 10:16

N ATURE\'S RAINBOW ~ COLLABORATION MAXINE & BRIAN
Lorna said:

This was delightful!

April 16th, 2018 06:43

N ATURE\'S RAINBOW ~ COLLABORATION MAXINE & BRIAN
Michael Edwards said:

Great joint collaboration - congrats to you both.

April 16th, 2018 02:08

N ATURE\'S RAINBOW ~ COLLABORATION MAXINE & BRIAN
orchidee said:

A fine colourful write there Brian and Maxine. That yellow glare is killing me. I\'m reading that verse with sunglasses on! lol. Coherent? Not me after a sherry or three! heehee.

April 16th, 2018 01:54

NINE FRUIT OF THE SPIRIT !
FineB said:

Thank you Friend.

A beautiful and spiritually uplifting poem.

The Holy Spirit anoints us with his love if we let his love shine inside us.

Keep writing
FineB

April 16th, 2018 00:07

NINE FRUIT OF THE SPIRIT !
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good and meaningful write Brian, love should rule the earth.

April 15th, 2018 12:31

NINE FRUIT OF THE SPIRIT !
Christina8 said:

This is an especially good write. I wish everyone could abide by these but sadly we live in a sinful world. Thanks for sharing this wonderful passage and poem! And making MPS a better poetry site with your empathy and encouragement! Hugs in the spirit to you both--Christina

April 15th, 2018 12:30

NINE FRUIT OF THE SPIRIT !
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks Maxine ~ Pleased you liked it ~ I knew it would appeal to your altruism ! When one works with People of any age these are exactly the traits and qualities you need in your Personality ! The same is true of the Nursing & Carers Professions ! Yours BRIAN

April 15th, 2018 11:14

NINE FRUIT OF THE SPIRIT !
orchidee said:

Well, it could be like that pic - a tree with all fruits on it. Maybe they were like that in Eden?!

April 15th, 2018 08:22

NINE FRUIT OF THE SPIRIT !
orchidee said:

Ohh a fine write Brian. I read a bit that it is \'fruit\' like a bunch of grapes, and not \'fruits\', not all different, as in apple, pear, banana, etc.
But neither is it \'fruity\'! Fruity, I said? - Swoon! lol.

April 15th, 2018 08:21

NINE FRUIT OF THE SPIRIT !
Michael Edwards said:

Well written and, yes, I go along with all it - ( well almost lol :) ). if only we all lived by these aphorisms but sadly....!

April 15th, 2018 04:25

A GRAND NATIONAL ~ A 1~5~8 Acrostic Rhyming Sonnet !
Goldfinch60 said:

I too do not gamble but Grand National is different and in the past I have had a flutter, win or lose it didn\'t change my life at all.
It is a great race and as Michael said it was a cliffhanger of a race at the end.

April 15th, 2018 00:32

A GRAND NATIONAL ~ A 1~5~8 Acrostic Rhyming Sonnet !
Laura🌻 said:

Mio Caro Amico BRIAN,
Buon divertimento!
Have a great time ...
even if you’re just watching it on tv! Like the Kentucky Derby...I watch it on tv! Can’t go to Kentucky every year! I enjoyed the read!
Grazie!
Un Abbraccio e Baci...
~Laura~


April 14th, 2018 12:43

A GRAND NATIONAL ~ A 1~5~8 Acrostic Rhyming Sonnet !
Michael Edwards said:

Another fine work and interesting notes to accompany it - thanks Brian.

April 14th, 2018 12:25

A GRAND NATIONAL ~ A 1~5~8 Acrostic Rhyming Sonnet !
orchidee said:

A church was a bit crafty, saying \'Erm, we\'re not raffling on a Sunday, but all donations gratefully received!\' (Of course they are. heehee).

April 14th, 2018 10:46

A GRAND NATIONAL ~ A 1~5~8 Acrostic Rhyming Sonnet !
orchidee said:

Erm, says I, just having signed an online petition to \'promote setting up of an independent group to look into welfare of horses\'. It\'s a terrible race in some ways. But I see what you mean - thrills not spills.

April 14th, 2018 10:44

A GRAND NATIONAL ~ A 1~5~8 Acrostic Rhyming Sonnet !
Christina8 said:

A great rhyming acrostic Brian! I also enjoyed the notes at the end. Glad you have the weather for it! Hope you enjoy yourself if you go--Sister Christina

April 14th, 2018 07:54

A GRAND NATIONAL ~ A 1~5~8 Acrostic Rhyming Sonnet !
FineB said:

Thank you BrianSODES.

A charming poem.

A national annual event in the UK definitely to be treasured!

Good luck with this year\'s!

Keep writing
FineB

April 14th, 2018 06:00

SAME OR DIFFERENT ? A Deconstructed (7 x 2) Sonnet !
Goldfinch60 said:

if we were all the same it would be a dull old world.

April 14th, 2018 00:57

SAME OR DIFFERENT ? A Deconstructed (7 x 2) Sonnet !
Christina8 said:

LOL cute write! I also love Cadbury chocolate, but there\'s seldom a chocolate I don\'t like!! Great one! It\'s DIFFERENT! :-) Sister Christina

April 13th, 2018 17:35

SAME OR DIFFERENT ? A Deconstructed (7 x 2) Sonnet !
Fay Slimm. said:

A yummy pleasure to have this free-verse piece to read about the value of different tastes in choccy-things - - your mind is a fount of wisdom on any subject dear Brian - and thanks for this reminder of sweetness brought to worldwide palettes by the humble cacao tree.

April 13th, 2018 12:37

SAME OR DIFFERENT ? A Deconstructed (7 x 2) Sonnet !
orchidee said:

Ohh flattery will get me everywhere lol - we wouldn\'t have you any different! heehee.
Yes, and why can\'t all chocolate be milk choc? Plain choc - bleeurgggh!

April 13th, 2018 10:26

SAME OR DIFFERENT ? A Deconstructed (7 x 2) Sonnet !
Laura🌻 said:

Mio Caro Amico BRIAN,
CIOCCOLATA...deliziosa!
Dark Chocolate is my favorite...
especially if it’s infused with coffee flavor! If you like limoncello, try a chocolate with a limoncello filled center! Delicious!
Un Abbraccio e Baci...
~Laura~

April 13th, 2018 08:45

SAME OR DIFFERENT ? A Deconstructed (7 x 2) Sonnet !
Michael Edwards said:

Interesting write but on the question of chocolate I understand that different nations have different tastes and manufacturers have different recipes for different countries. As far as UK chocolate is concerned I actually prefer Aldi\'s own brand at a fraction of the price to Cadburys and can\'t get on with Hersheys or Lindt at all. No it\'s UK chocolate for me any day.

April 13th, 2018 06:39

SAME OR DIFFERENT ? A Deconstructed (7 x 2) Sonnet !
blast219 said:

what an awesome poem

April 13th, 2018 06:12



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