Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA



NINE FRUIT OF THE SPIRIT !
orchidee said:

Ohh a fine write Brian. I read a bit that it is \'fruit\' like a bunch of grapes, and not \'fruits\', not all different, as in apple, pear, banana, etc.
But neither is it \'fruity\'! Fruity, I said? - Swoon! lol.

April 15th, 2018 08:21

NINE FRUIT OF THE SPIRIT !
Michael Edwards said:

Well written and, yes, I go along with all it - ( well almost lol :) ). if only we all lived by these aphorisms but sadly....!

April 15th, 2018 04:25

A GRAND NATIONAL ~ A 1~5~8 Acrostic Rhyming Sonnet !
Goldfinch60 said:

I too do not gamble but Grand National is different and in the past I have had a flutter, win or lose it didn\'t change my life at all.
It is a great race and as Michael said it was a cliffhanger of a race at the end.

April 15th, 2018 00:32

A GRAND NATIONAL ~ A 1~5~8 Acrostic Rhyming Sonnet !
Laura🌻 said:

Mio Caro Amico BRIAN,
Buon divertimento!
Have a great time ...
even if you’re just watching it on tv! Like the Kentucky Derby...I watch it on tv! Can’t go to Kentucky every year! I enjoyed the read!
Grazie!
Un Abbraccio e Baci...
~Laura~


April 14th, 2018 12:43

A GRAND NATIONAL ~ A 1~5~8 Acrostic Rhyming Sonnet !
Michael Edwards said:

Another fine work and interesting notes to accompany it - thanks Brian.

April 14th, 2018 12:25

A GRAND NATIONAL ~ A 1~5~8 Acrostic Rhyming Sonnet !
orchidee said:

A church was a bit crafty, saying \'Erm, we\'re not raffling on a Sunday, but all donations gratefully received!\' (Of course they are. heehee).

April 14th, 2018 10:46

A GRAND NATIONAL ~ A 1~5~8 Acrostic Rhyming Sonnet !
orchidee said:

Erm, says I, just having signed an online petition to \'promote setting up of an independent group to look into welfare of horses\'. It\'s a terrible race in some ways. But I see what you mean - thrills not spills.

April 14th, 2018 10:44

A GRAND NATIONAL ~ A 1~5~8 Acrostic Rhyming Sonnet !
Christina8 said:

A great rhyming acrostic Brian! I also enjoyed the notes at the end. Glad you have the weather for it! Hope you enjoy yourself if you go--Sister Christina

April 14th, 2018 07:54

A GRAND NATIONAL ~ A 1~5~8 Acrostic Rhyming Sonnet !
FineB said:

Thank you BrianSODES.

A charming poem.

A national annual event in the UK definitely to be treasured!

Good luck with this year\'s!

Keep writing
FineB

April 14th, 2018 06:00

SAME OR DIFFERENT ? A Deconstructed (7 x 2) Sonnet !
Goldfinch60 said:

if we were all the same it would be a dull old world.

April 14th, 2018 00:57

SAME OR DIFFERENT ? A Deconstructed (7 x 2) Sonnet !
Christina8 said:

LOL cute write! I also love Cadbury chocolate, but there\'s seldom a chocolate I don\'t like!! Great one! It\'s DIFFERENT! :-) Sister Christina

April 13th, 2018 17:35

SAME OR DIFFERENT ? A Deconstructed (7 x 2) Sonnet !
Fay Slimm. said:

A yummy pleasure to have this free-verse piece to read about the value of different tastes in choccy-things - - your mind is a fount of wisdom on any subject dear Brian - and thanks for this reminder of sweetness brought to worldwide palettes by the humble cacao tree.

April 13th, 2018 12:37

SAME OR DIFFERENT ? A Deconstructed (7 x 2) Sonnet !
orchidee said:

Ohh flattery will get me everywhere lol - we wouldn\'t have you any different! heehee.
Yes, and why can\'t all chocolate be milk choc? Plain choc - bleeurgggh!

April 13th, 2018 10:26

SAME OR DIFFERENT ? A Deconstructed (7 x 2) Sonnet !
Laura🌻 said:

Mio Caro Amico BRIAN,
CIOCCOLATA...deliziosa!
Dark Chocolate is my favorite...
especially if it’s infused with coffee flavor! If you like limoncello, try a chocolate with a limoncello filled center! Delicious!
Un Abbraccio e Baci...
~Laura~

April 13th, 2018 08:45

SAME OR DIFFERENT ? A Deconstructed (7 x 2) Sonnet !
Michael Edwards said:

Interesting write but on the question of chocolate I understand that different nations have different tastes and manufacturers have different recipes for different countries. As far as UK chocolate is concerned I actually prefer Aldi\'s own brand at a fraction of the price to Cadburys and can\'t get on with Hersheys or Lindt at all. No it\'s UK chocolate for me any day.

April 13th, 2018 06:39

SAME OR DIFFERENT ? A Deconstructed (7 x 2) Sonnet !
blast219 said:

what an awesome poem

April 13th, 2018 06:12

MY PERFECT LOVE ~ A LINE DANCING POEM !
Goldfinch60 said:

Good love lorn write Brian. May your Perfect Love go on forever.

April 13th, 2018 00:25

MY PERFECT LOVE ~ A LINE DANCING POEM !
Christina8 said:

Very well done in a new structure I have not seen before! I hope Angela liked it! ;-) Wonderful! Hugs in the spirit to you both--Christina

April 12th, 2018 20:40

MY PERFECT LOVE ~ A LINE DANCING POEM !
myself and me said:

The perfect dance poem for the perfect love.

April 12th, 2018 10:05

MY PERFECT LOVE ~ A LINE DANCING POEM !
orchidee said:

A good dance of a poem there Brian - ahh lovely, and I did not swoon! lol.

April 12th, 2018 08:36

MY PERFECT LOVE ~ A LINE DANCING POEM !
Michael Edwards said:

as a non-line-dancer I will have to read the instructions again but nonetheless a fine write Brian.

April 12th, 2018 07:36

MUSIC OF THE SPHERES ~ A 7-7-7-7 DOUBLE SONNET !
Fay Slimm. said:

The music of nature sings to our hearts here Brian and the picture adorns your interesting sonnets - - \"atomic music\" needs more attention from dreamers like me - - am now about to try retuning my spirit to catch its beauty. An outstanding tribute to sounds from the spheres.

April 11th, 2018 16:59

MUSIC OF THE SPHERES ~ A 7-7-7-7 DOUBLE SONNET !
Christina8 said:

A beautiful sonnet Brian! Nature does provide the best music!

April 11th, 2018 11:55

MUSIC OF THE SPHERES ~ A 7-7-7-7 DOUBLE SONNET !
orchidee said:

A fine and informative write Brian.

April 11th, 2018 10:00

MUSIC OF THE SPHERES ~ A 7-7-7-7 DOUBLE SONNET !
Aislinn Wilson said:

purely MUSICAL i love this one

April 11th, 2018 08:58

MUSIC OF THE SPHERES ~ A 7-7-7-7 DOUBLE SONNET !
Michael Edwards said:

Great write about the most beautiful music

April 11th, 2018 07:40

MUSIC OF THE SPHERES ~ A 7-7-7-7 DOUBLE SONNET !
Lorna said:

While I\'m loving your Autumn theme - it\'s pushing it a little to want it yet....... the bird bath is still frozen every morning here....... of course there is always the election coming in November where we might see the horrible trump GOP get neutralized by the mid-term elections. Still, I can wait..........

April 11th, 2018 07:24

SEASONS ~ FOUR FULL TANKAS !
Lorna said:

I love your four seasons Brian - I couldn\'t live without them! No one note season for me... and you chose the perfect pictures - amazing to see the changes in the same view!

April 11th, 2018 04:53

TREEES ~ BEAUTIFUL !
Laura🌻 said:

Mio Caro Amico BRIAN,
A great poem about trees! There’s a great children’s book you and Angela should read...if you haven’t already...
THE GIVING TREE by Shel Silverstein...
Un Abbraccio e Baci...
~Laura~

April 10th, 2018 17:30

SEASONS ~ FOUR FULL TANKAS !
Christina8 said:

Well since most of my seasons are winter, I pick SUMMER as my favorite season as if you couldn\'t have guessed! Great set of tankas! Sister Christina

April 10th, 2018 16:42



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