Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA



JESUS ~ LOVER OF MY SOUL ~ A 4 4 4 2 Sonnet
onepauly said:

I know your not a bad man.
I seek spirit if you want to call it that. I also know we don\'t die after death. but still I don\'t believe in a custom made god. check out my comment for seeking soul. by orci.
ill get back to you.

May 6th, 2018 03:27

A RAINBOW VALLEY ~ An Acrostic Sonnet for ANGELA
Goldfinch60 said:

Rainbows are special, they re-affirm God\'s Covenant with us all.

May 6th, 2018 01:13

A RAINBOW VALLEY ~ An Acrostic Sonnet for ANGELA
elizabethshadow said:

It\'s been a while since I\'ve seen an acrostic poem and didn\'t know that a sonnet could be created in that format. I loved the creative verses you incorporated with the letters!

May 5th, 2018 17:25

A RAINBOW VALLEY ~ An Acrostic Sonnet for ANGELA
Laura🌻 said:

Mio Caro Amico BRIAN,
Una bella poesia per la tua fidanzata, Angela! Gli auguro un buon viaggio!
A beautiful acrostic for your darling Angela (e una bella canzone) and a beautiful song by Ariana Grande! I’m sure Maxine appreciates the dedication! She’s a sweet special young lady!
I enjoyed the read, the pic and the musical clip! Wish Angela a safe trip on my behalf!

~Laura~


May 5th, 2018 13:36

A RAINBOW VALLEY ~ An Acrostic Sonnet for ANGELA
Fay Slimm. said:

What a beautiful picture and appealing song - - glad I was able to pop in for a few moments and caught this sad-happy posting on an imminent parting of twelve months - - best wishes to Angela as she discovers the grandeur of New Zealand. As your sonnet makes clear dear Brian -time flows by so quickly when love\'s in the air.

May 5th, 2018 13:22


A RAINBOW VALLEY ~ An Acrostic Sonnet for ANGELA
orchidee said:

My singing is not human, so...... A fine write Brian.

May 5th, 2018 09:57

I COULD HAVE GONE ............? A Modern Poem !
Christina8 said:

A fun read-you listed it under \"fable\" but now I guess your secret is out. You got an invite? Lucky you! An interesting read. Sister Christina

May 4th, 2018 11:56

I COULD HAVE GONE ............? A Modern Poem !
Netashi said:

Very nice poem brains as always It seemed somewhat whimsical, Keep up the good work
-Theta

May 4th, 2018 11:25

I COULD HAVE GONE ............? A Modern Poem !
Michael Edwards said:

A fun read Brian - must look into the form.

May 4th, 2018 01:57

I COULD HAVE GONE ............? A Modern Poem !
Goldfinch60 said:

You are right it certainly does not have rhyme or reason but is great fun to read.


May 4th, 2018 01:54

I COULD HAVE GONE ............? A Modern Poem !
orchidee said:

You mean the Royal Wedding? You could have gone, but you turned down the invite? I\'m going! lol.

May 4th, 2018 01:32

HAPPINESS ~ An 8 6 Sonnet
FineB said:

Thank you for your poem on Happiness

Its enchanting and wonderful

Keep writing Brian.
FineB

May 3rd, 2018 13:29

NAMING OF OUR INTERNAL ORGANS ~ A Dodeca Laudatio (12 Line Eulogy)
Laura🌻 said:

Mio Caro Amico BRIAN,
Una bella scrittura del nostro corpo!
A very informative piece!
I enjoyed it very much! Your students are very lucky to have you as their teacher!
Abbracci e Baci per te ed Angela...
~Laura~

May 3rd, 2018 11:02

NAMING OF OUR INTERNAL ORGANS ~ A Dodeca Laudatio (12 Line Eulogy)
Christina8 said:

Another fine write, this is great performance poetry! Great comment at the end. Hugs--Christina

May 3rd, 2018 10:37

NAMING OF OUR INTERNAL ORGANS ~ A Dodeca Laudatio (12 Line Eulogy)
orchidee said:

A fine write Brian. I never knew some people\'s mouths were in their head, cos some talk out of their ****. heehee.

May 3rd, 2018 03:08

NAMING OF THE EXTERNAL BODY PARTS ~ LINKED HAIKU
Christina8 said:

Great job Brian! I heard the less hair a man has on his head the more testosterone is in his bloodstream, making him more virile. True? Anyway, great linked haiku! Hugs to you and Angela

May 2nd, 2018 12:19

NAMING OF THE EXTERNAL BODY PARTS ~ LINKED HAIKU
Netashi said:

Anatomy class was today did not know i forgot my pencil and notebook, Good write jokes aside, Keep it up Brians
-Theta

May 2nd, 2018 11:27

NAMING OF THE EXTERNAL BODY PARTS ~ LINKED HAIKU
Laura🌻 said:

Mio Caro Amico BRIAN,
Grazie per la tua poesia!
Thank you for your great haiku!
I enjoyed the song! I wish I had that song to play when I taught seven year olds...quite a while ago! Looking forward to tomorrow’s posting!
Abbracci e Baci per te ed Angela...
~Laura~

May 2nd, 2018 07:04

NAMING OF THE EXTERNAL BODY PARTS ~ LINKED HAIKU
marlenawood said:

I love this as much as I love anatomy wow amazingly wrote love

May 2nd, 2018 06:25

NAMING OF THE EXTERNAL BODY PARTS ~ LINKED HAIKU
Michael Edwards said:

A great form and well written. Puts me in mind of one of my favourite poems: Today We Have Naming Of Parts

May 2nd, 2018 02:57

NAMING OF THE EXTERNAL BODY PARTS ~ LINKED HAIKU
orchidee said:

A fine write Brian, and swoony at the end! heehee.

May 2nd, 2018 02:50

NAMING OF THE EXTERNAL BODY PARTS ~ LINKED HAIKU
Cinderella_Pixie said:

Your Haiku is amazing i never did get the hang of writing those.

May 2nd, 2018 02:18

HOT AIR BALLOONS ~ An Acrostic 3 3 8 Sonnet
Azura Nightsong said:

I went to a hot air balloon festival and it was magical watching the balloons fly into the air as the sun set. Lovely poem!

May 1st, 2018 16:28

HOT AIR BALLOONS ~ An Acrostic 3 3 8 Sonnet
Christina8 said:

A great write....but I will not get into a flying basket! Sorry, Brian!! The picture gives me goosebumps! Again, great acrostic! Sister Christina

May 1st, 2018 12:11

HOT AIR BALLOONS ~ An Acrostic 3 3 8 Sonnet
Goldfinch60 said:

I have never been up in a balloon but we used to have a balloon festival each year and I have been up at dawn to take pictures of them getting top ready for their flights, great sigh5 to see.

May 1st, 2018 08:10

HOT AIR BALLOONS ~ An Acrostic 3 3 8 Sonnet
Lorna said:

Such faith hanging onto the little basket in the sky! I\'ll jump a horse but this? Don\'t know...........

May 1st, 2018 04:49

HOT AIR BALLOONS ~ An Acrostic 3 3 8 Sonnet
orchidee said:

A fine write Brian. Some spout hot air without even leaving the ground! Would it be enough to power a balloon? heehee.

May 1st, 2018 03:32

HAPPINESS ~ An 8 6 Sonnet
Netashi said:

Very nice poem Brains kinda funny that i also written a poem about happiness today but i guess great minds think alike keep spreading happiness and love dear friend
-Theta

April 30th, 2018 18:13

HAPPINESS ~ An 8 6 Sonnet
Christina8 said:

It did lift my spirit but I wish I could be happy and fulfilled all the time like you! Or maybe it\'s my perception that you are happier. Either way, it\'s a great poem, well done! Hugs to you and Angela

April 30th, 2018 16:59



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