Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA



NEW ZEALAND ~ A Blank Verse DECACROSTIC
Goldfinch60 said:

Maybe you will be able to join Angela for a few weeks while she is out in this wonderful land.

April 20th, 2018 00:34

A POET IS .............. ?
Netashi said:

That is a lot of things yet i see no dork in that list but that\'s fine i am contempt. Very nice and inspiring

April 19th, 2018 14:44

NEW ZEALAND ~ A Blank Verse DECACROSTIC
Christina8 said:

Wonderful tribute to a awe inspiring place. I know you will miss your love but absence makes the heart grow fonder, right? Thanks for bringing a little bit of New Zealand to me! Hugs to you both!

April 19th, 2018 14:09

NEW ZEALAND ~ A Blank Verse DECACROSTIC
Lorna said:

What gorgeous music! Maybe they are lucky to be so far from everyone - they might remain as they are that way.........

April 19th, 2018 06:28

NEW ZEALAND ~ A Blank Verse DECACROSTIC
Michael Edwards said:

Better get my tickets and pack those cases - nice one Brian.

April 19th, 2018 04:35

NEW ZEALAND ~ A Blank Verse DECACROSTIC
orchidee said:

A fine decacrostic Brian. I was gonna say \'When ya going?\' Oh, you are going. Well, Angela is, anyway. A year will seem like ages for you. - maybe.

April 19th, 2018 02:59

NEW ZEALAND ~ A Blank Verse DECACROSTIC
Fay Slimm. said:

Am already packing my bags after reading this colourful tribute to what must be a paradise - well we can dream eh ? - -- thanks Brian for describing both islands known as New Zealand.

April 19th, 2018 02:30

A POET IS .............. ?
AllTheRandomThings said:

Jeremiah 17:7 - 8
My.Friend.
Keep those roots nurtured, and those words pure. Stay.Blessed.

April 18th, 2018 16:08

A POET IS .............. ?
FineB said:

Excellent poem Brian.

Your poem has made me view poets in a different light.

Keep writing
FineB

April 18th, 2018 13:56

A POET IS .............. ?
Christina8 said:

Very good Brian! I like the last one, Psalm 23, a sheherd that leads us by still waters, my fave! Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece with us! Sister Christina

April 18th, 2018 12:24

A POET IS .............. ?
Michael Edwards said:

Must admit I\'m often called a clown - but great work and spot on.

April 18th, 2018 03:13

A POET IS .............. ?
Goldfinch60 said:

Yes very true true Brian.

My favourite Kipling poem though is \"When Earth\'s Last Picture id Painted\"
https://youtu.be/jub0xSqXCrU

April 18th, 2018 02:31

A POET IS .............. ?
orchidee said:

Oohh I never knew us poets - and yourself - were so many things as this! A fine write Brian.

April 18th, 2018 01:44

NOW THAT I\'M OLD ~ A SCOTS PERSPECTIVE !
Fay Slimm. said:

Ha ha - your humour excels in that penultimate stanza - - the rhyming is second to none in this dear ol\' Scott\'s Perspective on age and its probs. A great read Brian and glad I didna miss it

April 17th, 2018 16:13

NOW THAT I\'M OLD ~ A SCOTS PERSPECTIVE !
Christina8 said:

I love how you wrote this with the vernacular and all! The part about the kilt was hilarious! Great job! I like that your muse never runs out of material! Hugs to you and and A! Christina

April 17th, 2018 12:28

NOW THAT I\'M OLD ~ A SCOTS PERSPECTIVE !
Michael Edwards said:

No scots blood in my veiny bits but this is such a good work I almost imagine I have.

April 17th, 2018 10:36

NOW THAT I\'M OLD ~ A SCOTS PERSPECTIVE !
orchidee said:

But you is not old! You is only a couple of years past 21! heehee.

April 17th, 2018 08:24

NOW THAT I\'M OLD ~ A SCOTS PERSPECTIVE !
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

\"When milk has been spilt\" wow aye bard this is so poetic and entertaining in Scottish vernacular, I understand it nicely enough coz my friend is a Scott poetess who writes quite like this way. Kudos.

Nice to read from u again, glad to say hi and Pleez do review, give your thoughts as to my newest poem too.

April 17th, 2018 07:03

NOW THAT I\'M OLD ~ A SCOTS PERSPECTIVE !
Lorna said:

Oh I do just love this! My grandfather (who I never met as he died before I could) was a Scot! Henry Fergus Traille Grant - how\'s that for the Highlands..... Anyway I grew up loving \"the ladies from Hades\" (bagpipes)...... and my mother took us to Scottish Games on the Fourth of July here in the US - in lieu of fireworks - We were watching the tossing of tabers .... Just love your work here. The video was similar to the \"Black Watch\" that came to Madison Square Garden when I was a kid .... aren\'t they thrilling! I can see going to battle with them playing!

April 17th, 2018 05:52

NOW THAT I\'M OLD ~ A SCOTS PERSPECTIVE !
orchidee said:

Ohh, a swoony verse there with the kilt! Och, a fine McPoem Brian. That\'s my extent of being Scottish - a feeble attempt! lol.

April 17th, 2018 03:49

N ATURE\'S RAINBOW ~ COLLABORATION MAXINE & BRIAN
Christina8 said:

Congrats to you both on making a wonderful collab. poem!! In the dreary snow, I was delighted to see all the colors! Great job!

April 16th, 2018 13:34

N ATURE\'S RAINBOW ~ COLLABORATION MAXINE & BRIAN
Fay Slimm. said:

Loud applause for this colourful rhyming by a wonderful duo - - congrats on achieving the tints of a rainbow in poetic balance.

April 16th, 2018 10:16

N ATURE\'S RAINBOW ~ COLLABORATION MAXINE & BRIAN
Lorna said:

This was delightful!

April 16th, 2018 06:43

N ATURE\'S RAINBOW ~ COLLABORATION MAXINE & BRIAN
Michael Edwards said:

Great joint collaboration - congrats to you both.

April 16th, 2018 02:08

N ATURE\'S RAINBOW ~ COLLABORATION MAXINE & BRIAN
orchidee said:

A fine colourful write there Brian and Maxine. That yellow glare is killing me. I\'m reading that verse with sunglasses on! lol. Coherent? Not me after a sherry or three! heehee.

April 16th, 2018 01:54

NINE FRUIT OF THE SPIRIT !
FineB said:

Thank you Friend.

A beautiful and spiritually uplifting poem.

The Holy Spirit anoints us with his love if we let his love shine inside us.

Keep writing
FineB

April 16th, 2018 00:07

NINE FRUIT OF THE SPIRIT !
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good and meaningful write Brian, love should rule the earth.

April 15th, 2018 12:31

NINE FRUIT OF THE SPIRIT !
Christina8 said:

This is an especially good write. I wish everyone could abide by these but sadly we live in a sinful world. Thanks for sharing this wonderful passage and poem! And making MPS a better poetry site with your empathy and encouragement! Hugs in the spirit to you both--Christina

April 15th, 2018 12:30

NINE FRUIT OF THE SPIRIT !
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks Maxine ~ Pleased you liked it ~ I knew it would appeal to your altruism ! When one works with People of any age these are exactly the traits and qualities you need in your Personality ! The same is true of the Nursing & Carers Professions ! Yours BRIAN

April 15th, 2018 11:14

NINE FRUIT OF THE SPIRIT !
orchidee said:

Well, it could be like that pic - a tree with all fruits on it. Maybe they were like that in Eden?!

April 15th, 2018 08:22



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